Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
The Hunter and the Moon
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale SC, I now understand the waxing and waning of the moon from another point of view.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 15:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale SC, I now understand the waxing and waning of the moon from another point of view.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 15:03
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Goldfinch60 said:
I got hooked on this SC, so well written - well done.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I got hooked on this SC, so well written - well done.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 01:56
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Quemis said:
This is awesome!!!
You are so talented.
March 9th, 2020 15:34
Quemis said:
This is awesome!!!
You are so talented.
March 9th, 2020 15:34
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
orchidee said:
Should I meet them?! heehee.
March 9th, 2020 11:01
orchidee said:
Should I meet them?! heehee.
March 9th, 2020 11:01
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Michael Edwards said:
A sad but enjoyable read.
March 9th, 2020 10:18
Michael Edwards said:
A sad but enjoyable read.
March 9th, 2020 10:18
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
railasunshine said:
Beautifully written!
March 9th, 2020 09:30
railasunshine said:
Beautifully written!
March 9th, 2020 09:30
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh - D.A. what a sad ending to this story of fairies and their special magic........... a lament to be read with
sighs and heartache yet thanks for sharing that sting in its tail.
March 9th, 2020 08:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh - D.A. what a sad ending to this story of fairies and their special magic........... a lament to be read with
sighs and heartache yet thanks for sharing that sting in its tail.
March 9th, 2020 08:55
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Neville said:
Hey Bro, this is soooo darn Grimm.. it reads like a grown up poetic fairy tale and would look bloomin good illustrated.. tis so much fun I\'m gonna go check it out again….
Neville
March 9th, 2020 08:36
Neville said:
Hey Bro, this is soooo darn Grimm.. it reads like a grown up poetic fairy tale and would look bloomin good illustrated.. tis so much fun I\'m gonna go check it out again….
Neville
March 9th, 2020 08:36
The Umbunkle
Clara said:
This is outstanding, truly. For a first attempt! It\'s brilliant. Into the favs it goes. It\'s a comprehensive story beautifully written. Almost in the guise of a old wives\' tale, oh it\'s fab!
March 7th, 2020 04:03
Clara said:
This is outstanding, truly. For a first attempt! It\'s brilliant. Into the favs it goes. It\'s a comprehensive story beautifully written. Almost in the guise of a old wives\' tale, oh it\'s fab!
March 7th, 2020 04:03
The Umbunkle
dusk arising said:
Here follows the defining story of Goldfinches BUMbunkle:-
Whilst lancing a nasty carbunkle
Which appeared on the arse of my uncle
I couldn\'t believe my eyes
Such a nasty surprise
Twas the bite of that horrid Umbunkle
Hey great story there Mr Sax.... will you be reading it to the grandchildren at bedtime tonite? Let me return the compliment, when you mentioned shakespear to me recently, i think it more appropriate to compare your creative skill here with the brothers Grimm.
March 7th, 2020 02:27
dusk arising said:
Here follows the defining story of Goldfinches BUMbunkle:-
Whilst lancing a nasty carbunkle
Which appeared on the arse of my uncle
I couldn\'t believe my eyes
Such a nasty surprise
Twas the bite of that horrid Umbunkle
Hey great story there Mr Sax.... will you be reading it to the grandchildren at bedtime tonite? Let me return the compliment, when you mentioned shakespear to me recently, i think it more appropriate to compare your creative skill here with the brothers Grimm.
March 7th, 2020 02:27
The Umbunkle
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write SC but be aware, the Umbunkle had a brother - don\'t go out tonight!!
Bumbunkle.
March 7th, 2020 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write SC but be aware, the Umbunkle had a brother - don\'t go out tonight!!
Bumbunkle.
March 7th, 2020 02:05
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
Neville said:
I have tried loads of things, but it’s still pissing down.. I guess writing about it helps a teensy bit, maybe... Nice one S C.....
Neville 😎
March 6th, 2020 17:29
Neville said:
I have tried loads of things, but it’s still pissing down.. I guess writing about it helps a teensy bit, maybe... Nice one S C.....
Neville 😎
March 6th, 2020 17:29
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
Clara said:
Ha! I like this! Oh how the weather can greatly impact our mood... Fab!
March 6th, 2020 17:08
Clara said:
Ha! I like this! Oh how the weather can greatly impact our mood... Fab!
March 6th, 2020 17:08
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
dusk arising said:
a - ring a - ring a - roses
poor Saxon\'s got wet toeziz
a-tishoo a- tishoo rain came down
I don\'t blame you for writing like that about the bloody awful weather if ya had to go out in it and get wet.... I\'m stayin home.
March 6th, 2020 10:05
dusk arising said:
a - ring a - ring a - roses
poor Saxon\'s got wet toeziz
a-tishoo a- tishoo rain came down
I don\'t blame you for writing like that about the bloody awful weather if ya had to go out in it and get wet.... I\'m stayin home.
March 6th, 2020 10:05
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
orchidee said:
Ahhh, yes, may start sunny, then it may turn. I know what you mean - I was in the rainy area too. I had coat and gloves on, and some others were in shirt-sleeves!
March 6th, 2020 02:39
orchidee said:
Ahhh, yes, may start sunny, then it may turn. I know what you mean - I was in the rainy area too. I had coat and gloves on, and some others were in shirt-sleeves!
March 6th, 2020 02:39
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
Michael Edwards said:
A lesson to be learnt - never wear trainers to work - I feel your annoyance and - yes - it was dry here too.
March 6th, 2020 02:22
Michael Edwards said:
A lesson to be learnt - never wear trainers to work - I feel your annoyance and - yes - it was dry here too.
March 6th, 2020 02:22
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
Goldfinch60 said:
You appear to be not best pleased SC.
It was dry in my part of the country.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
You appear to be not best pleased SC.
It was dry in my part of the country.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 02:15
The Wind and Me
Goldfinch60 said:
The freedom of life when the wind shows you nature\'s way portrayed in wonderful words SC.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
The freedom of life when the wind shows you nature\'s way portrayed in wonderful words SC.
Andy
March 6th, 2020 01:21
The Wind and Me
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Saxon. I was running right beside you.
March 5th, 2020 12:45
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Saxon. I was running right beside you.
March 5th, 2020 12:45
The Wind and Me
Michael Edwards said:
Great poem but I did have trouble reading it with the coloured background.
March 5th, 2020 12:34
Michael Edwards said:
Great poem but I did have trouble reading it with the coloured background.
March 5th, 2020 12:34
The Wind and Me
orchidee said:
A fine write Crow. Ahh, I thought this was gonna be about you eating too many baked beans or sprouts! lol.
March 5th, 2020 11:09
orchidee said:
A fine write Crow. Ahh, I thought this was gonna be about you eating too many baked beans or sprouts! lol.
March 5th, 2020 11:09
The Wind and Me
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for your brilliant portrayal of what happens when we yield to the invite and run with the wind. A delightful flow to this read my friend.
March 5th, 2020 07:24
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for your brilliant portrayal of what happens when we yield to the invite and run with the wind. A delightful flow to this read my friend.
March 5th, 2020 07:24
The Wind and Me
Saxon Crow said:
Ahh the dreaded cold chill wind!!! There\'s a poem waiting to happen!
March 5th, 2020 05:57
Saxon Crow said:
Ahh the dreaded cold chill wind!!! There\'s a poem waiting to happen!
March 5th, 2020 05:57
The Wind and Me
dusk arising said:
Reading your words today brought back a feeling of childhood freedom... \"racing with the wind and the feeling that i\'m free\" (Steppenwolf - Born to be wild).
Yep, the way you wrote this i was with you feeling the wind rattling my shirt sleeves as i ran through the long grass chafing my bare legs (short trousers).
But as i got older that wind became a lazy wind. Too lazy to go around me, it went straight through me.
March 5th, 2020 05:37
dusk arising said:
Reading your words today brought back a feeling of childhood freedom... \"racing with the wind and the feeling that i\'m free\" (Steppenwolf - Born to be wild).
Yep, the way you wrote this i was with you feeling the wind rattling my shirt sleeves as i ran through the long grass chafing my bare legs (short trousers).
But as i got older that wind became a lazy wind. Too lazy to go around me, it went straight through me.
March 5th, 2020 05:37
It Could Have Been Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute to you friend SC, I hope it will never be you.
Andy
March 5th, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tribute to you friend SC, I hope it will never be you.
Andy
March 5th, 2020 01:25
It Could Have Been Me
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Saxon! I am sorry for your loss.
March 4th, 2020 17:57
FredPeyer said:
So well written, Saxon! I am sorry for your loss.
March 4th, 2020 17:57
It Could Have Been Me
dusk arising said:
This is a very very moving tribute to Jamie. Certainly brought tears to my eyes.
A lot of your soul went into this and it shows. Excelent. Into my fav\'s
March 4th, 2020 17:18
dusk arising said:
This is a very very moving tribute to Jamie. Certainly brought tears to my eyes.
A lot of your soul went into this and it shows. Excelent. Into my fav\'s
March 4th, 2020 17:18
It Could Have Been Me
TWENTY3 said:
quite stunning especially for me who is learning more and more about poerty so this one is a good example to help me along my way. thank you
March 4th, 2020 13:59
TWENTY3 said:
quite stunning especially for me who is learning more and more about poerty so this one is a good example to help me along my way. thank you
March 4th, 2020 13:59
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