Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Fatality Trap
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a true write SC. The cynic in me has been wondering now that Corona virus is all the news what is being hidden form us that the government are doing with other laws in our lives.
I will not get it as I drank bottles of the antidote when I was a child.
March 13th, 2020 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a true write SC. The cynic in me has been wondering now that Corona virus is all the news what is being hidden form us that the government are doing with other laws in our lives.
I will not get it as I drank bottles of the antidote when I was a child.
March 13th, 2020 01:56
Fatality Trap
Fay Slimm. said:
Fear spreads like wild-fire and whilly agree with your final words on this issue of a Finality Trap.
March 12th, 2020 17:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Fear spreads like wild-fire and whilly agree with your final words on this issue of a Finality Trap.
March 12th, 2020 17:08
Fatality Trap
anonymousblue said:
Let\'s just hope this virus goes away as soon as possible and that our governments don\'t fall into totalitarian madness in the process. Sharp, clever poem.
March 12th, 2020 14:12
anonymousblue said:
Let\'s just hope this virus goes away as soon as possible and that our governments don\'t fall into totalitarian madness in the process. Sharp, clever poem.
March 12th, 2020 14:12
Fatality Trap
orchidee said:
I know - I worry about large brown and green things that might fall out of the tree and kill me - snooker tables I mean!
An old joke there. Meanwhile - do ya see me and a firend up the tree playing snooker?!
March 12th, 2020 10:20
orchidee said:
I know - I worry about large brown and green things that might fall out of the tree and kill me - snooker tables I mean!
An old joke there. Meanwhile - do ya see me and a firend up the tree playing snooker?!
March 12th, 2020 10:20
Fatality Trap
Neville said:
This is poetry.. not contentious.. methinks we might just have to see how things yet develop..
Stay well my friend..
March 12th, 2020 09:16
Neville said:
This is poetry.. not contentious.. methinks we might just have to see how things yet develop..
Stay well my friend..
March 12th, 2020 09:16
Fatality Trap
dusk arising said:
she washed her hands in water quite hot
for she\'d heard on the news what to do and what not
confidently then in the parking lot
a car drove by and she was fatally shot
There are so many things can kill us out there as we innocently go about our daily business.
March 12th, 2020 07:58
dusk arising said:
she washed her hands in water quite hot
for she\'d heard on the news what to do and what not
confidently then in the parking lot
a car drove by and she was fatally shot
There are so many things can kill us out there as we innocently go about our daily business.
March 12th, 2020 07:58
It\'s When...
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write SC those times are so precious. When my son was a babe we had that fun all day, he never stopped but as soon as his head hit the pillow he went straight to sleep and even now forty plus years later he still does the same.
Andy
March 11th, 2020 16:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write SC those times are so precious. When my son was a babe we had that fun all day, he never stopped but as soon as his head hit the pillow he went straight to sleep and even now forty plus years later he still does the same.
Andy
March 11th, 2020 16:41
It\'s When...
dusk arising said:
Quite beautiful saxon. Gone out of my life are those times and i thank you for your words today which brought the feelings back to me.
Now I have two granddaughters and don\'t have a hope of sharing their magic moments, for the one who was once the babe i put to bed is their dad and he gets those moments.
March 11th, 2020 12:44
dusk arising said:
Quite beautiful saxon. Gone out of my life are those times and i thank you for your words today which brought the feelings back to me.
Now I have two granddaughters and don\'t have a hope of sharing their magic moments, for the one who was once the babe i put to bed is their dad and he gets those moments.
March 11th, 2020 12:44
It\'s When...
dusk arising said:
Quite beautiful saxon. Gone out of my life are those times and i thank you for your words today which brought the feelings back to me.
Now I have two granddaughters and don\'t have a hope of sharing their magic moments, for the one who was once the babe i put to bed is their dad and he gets those moments.
March 11th, 2020 12:16
dusk arising said:
Quite beautiful saxon. Gone out of my life are those times and i thank you for your words today which brought the feelings back to me.
Now I have two granddaughters and don\'t have a hope of sharing their magic moments, for the one who was once the babe i put to bed is their dad and he gets those moments.
March 11th, 2020 12:16
It\'s When...
Fay Slimm. said:
A picture of loving care filled with scenes I remember when mine was small -- those bedtimes were the highlight of every day - books and snuggles - great read.
March 11th, 2020 11:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A picture of loving care filled with scenes I remember when mine was small -- those bedtimes were the highlight of every day - books and snuggles - great read.
March 11th, 2020 11:52
The Hunter and the Moon
orchidee said:
A fine write Crow. Did he do anything different on Leap Year Day - 29 days? Did that throw out the whole schedule for him? lol.
March 11th, 2020 02:57
orchidee said:
A fine write Crow. Did he do anything different on Leap Year Day - 29 days? Did that throw out the whole schedule for him? lol.
March 11th, 2020 02:57
The Hunter and the Moon
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale SC, I now understand the waxing and waning of the moon from another point of view.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 15:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale SC, I now understand the waxing and waning of the moon from another point of view.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 15:03
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Goldfinch60 said:
I got hooked on this SC, so well written - well done.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I got hooked on this SC, so well written - well done.
Andy
March 10th, 2020 01:56
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Quemis said:
This is awesome!!!
You are so talented.
March 9th, 2020 15:34
Quemis said:
This is awesome!!!
You are so talented.
March 9th, 2020 15:34
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
orchidee said:
Should I meet them?! heehee.
March 9th, 2020 11:01
orchidee said:
Should I meet them?! heehee.
March 9th, 2020 11:01
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Michael Edwards said:
A sad but enjoyable read.
March 9th, 2020 10:18
Michael Edwards said:
A sad but enjoyable read.
March 9th, 2020 10:18
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
railasunshine said:
Beautifully written!
March 9th, 2020 09:30
railasunshine said:
Beautifully written!
March 9th, 2020 09:30
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh - D.A. what a sad ending to this story of fairies and their special magic........... a lament to be read with
sighs and heartache yet thanks for sharing that sting in its tail.
March 9th, 2020 08:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Ooooh - D.A. what a sad ending to this story of fairies and their special magic........... a lament to be read with
sighs and heartache yet thanks for sharing that sting in its tail.
March 9th, 2020 08:55
The Lament of Jenny Mack and Finn Murphy
Neville said:
Hey Bro, this is soooo darn Grimm.. it reads like a grown up poetic fairy tale and would look bloomin good illustrated.. tis so much fun I\'m gonna go check it out again….
Neville
March 9th, 2020 08:36
Neville said:
Hey Bro, this is soooo darn Grimm.. it reads like a grown up poetic fairy tale and would look bloomin good illustrated.. tis so much fun I\'m gonna go check it out again….
Neville
March 9th, 2020 08:36
The Umbunkle
Clara said:
This is outstanding, truly. For a first attempt! It\'s brilliant. Into the favs it goes. It\'s a comprehensive story beautifully written. Almost in the guise of a old wives\' tale, oh it\'s fab!
March 7th, 2020 04:03
Clara said:
This is outstanding, truly. For a first attempt! It\'s brilliant. Into the favs it goes. It\'s a comprehensive story beautifully written. Almost in the guise of a old wives\' tale, oh it\'s fab!
March 7th, 2020 04:03
The Umbunkle
dusk arising said:
Here follows the defining story of Goldfinches BUMbunkle:-
Whilst lancing a nasty carbunkle
Which appeared on the arse of my uncle
I couldn\'t believe my eyes
Such a nasty surprise
Twas the bite of that horrid Umbunkle
Hey great story there Mr Sax.... will you be reading it to the grandchildren at bedtime tonite? Let me return the compliment, when you mentioned shakespear to me recently, i think it more appropriate to compare your creative skill here with the brothers Grimm.
March 7th, 2020 02:27
dusk arising said:
Here follows the defining story of Goldfinches BUMbunkle:-
Whilst lancing a nasty carbunkle
Which appeared on the arse of my uncle
I couldn\'t believe my eyes
Such a nasty surprise
Twas the bite of that horrid Umbunkle
Hey great story there Mr Sax.... will you be reading it to the grandchildren at bedtime tonite? Let me return the compliment, when you mentioned shakespear to me recently, i think it more appropriate to compare your creative skill here with the brothers Grimm.
March 7th, 2020 02:27
The Umbunkle
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write SC but be aware, the Umbunkle had a brother - don\'t go out tonight!!
Bumbunkle.
March 7th, 2020 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write SC but be aware, the Umbunkle had a brother - don\'t go out tonight!!
Bumbunkle.
March 7th, 2020 02:05
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
Neville said:
I have tried loads of things, but it’s still pissing down.. I guess writing about it helps a teensy bit, maybe... Nice one S C.....
Neville 😎
March 6th, 2020 17:29
Neville said:
I have tried loads of things, but it’s still pissing down.. I guess writing about it helps a teensy bit, maybe... Nice one S C.....
Neville 😎
March 6th, 2020 17:29
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
Clara said:
Ha! I like this! Oh how the weather can greatly impact our mood... Fab!
March 6th, 2020 17:08
Clara said:
Ha! I like this! Oh how the weather can greatly impact our mood... Fab!
March 6th, 2020 17:08
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
dusk arising said:
a - ring a - ring a - roses
poor Saxon\'s got wet toeziz
a-tishoo a- tishoo rain came down
I don\'t blame you for writing like that about the bloody awful weather if ya had to go out in it and get wet.... I\'m stayin home.
March 6th, 2020 10:05
dusk arising said:
a - ring a - ring a - roses
poor Saxon\'s got wet toeziz
a-tishoo a- tishoo rain came down
I don\'t blame you for writing like that about the bloody awful weather if ya had to go out in it and get wet.... I\'m stayin home.
March 6th, 2020 10:05
An Old Wives Charm to Dispel Bad Weather
orchidee said:
Ahhh, yes, may start sunny, then it may turn. I know what you mean - I was in the rainy area too. I had coat and gloves on, and some others were in shirt-sleeves!
March 6th, 2020 02:39
orchidee said:
Ahhh, yes, may start sunny, then it may turn. I know what you mean - I was in the rainy area too. I had coat and gloves on, and some others were in shirt-sleeves!
March 6th, 2020 02:39
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