Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow



The Greenman
Goldfinch60 said:

Those old ways were always right and we may, hopefully, one day return to them. Walking with nature can save us from the world.
As many know on this site I put very few poems into my favourites but this will be another one.
Great write SC.

Andy

February 25th, 2020 02:07

The Greenman
dusk arising said:

This recounts the feelings some of us can begin to experience in meditation among the forest trees or the barren wilderness where the wind levels all.
Encourages to step away from and outside of what we have become and return to the natural beast of this earth which we really are.

Got to go into my favourites.

February 24th, 2020 16:05

The Greenman
orchidee said:

Good write Crow. Ain\'t no tears need to be shed, except if hearing me sing! lol.

February 24th, 2020 11:53

The Greenman
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the flow of this tribute to old ways - - your pen evokes nature\'s acceptance of mans\' arrogance yet warns with that \"blindness will grow\" - and the appeal of your final lines brought me near tears -- so this poem is going to my faves. for sure.

February 24th, 2020 11:25

My Dad Moves On
Goldfinch60 said:

In all our lives life must go on perhaps your Dad realises this and and has moved into a new life.
We must all move on in life in spite of any sorrows in our life.
Great last line - smiles all around.

Andy

February 22nd, 2020 01:10

My Dad Moves On
ron parrish aka wordman said:

well maybe he meant till the rest of his days

February 21st, 2020 14:27

My Dad Moves On
orchidee said:

Why yes, a relative, an \'aunt\', married two months before her 80th birthday, for the first time!

February 21st, 2020 11:40

My Dad Moves On
Michael Edwards said:

No never too old. I have a friend who was widowed in her early eighties and has now found a new partner through an online agency. They are so suitable for each other and so happy - he has moved in with her whilst keeping his own property where his daughter now lives. That\'s the only problem - ensuring proper wills are in place to protect the families inheritances. Fine write.

February 21st, 2020 04:47

My Dad Moves On
Poetic Dan said:

Lol, great ending and I\'m sure many will agree! We\'re all here for the moment!

Thanks for sharing

February 21st, 2020 04:18

Dead End
Goldfinch60 said:

May that care be shared with us all as you write your words SC.

Andy

February 21st, 2020 02:05

Dead End
myself and me said:

A feeling so familiar. Well done.

February 20th, 2020 20:14

Dead End
orchidee said:

A fine write Crow.

February 20th, 2020 14:46

Circles not spirals
Goldfinch60 said:

If you stop trudging around your world and stop for a moment clarity will come to you and your life ahead will be there for you to enjoy.

Andy

February 20th, 2020 01:59

Circles not spirals
orchidee said:

A fine write as a poem Crow.

February 19th, 2020 11:08

Pensieve moment
Vacancy said:

Love the poem! The music i listen to reflects my mood tremendously. Excited for the next poem. :)

February 18th, 2020 23:07

Pensieve moment
orchidee said:

I don\'t mind, if you don\'t mind Crow - pensive or pensieve!

February 18th, 2020 15:49

Pensieve moment
dusk arising said:

Nice picture you painted here and you painted it well.

On the premise that \'less is more\' do you think you could paint an equally pensive picture in your readers mind in just five or six lines?

February 18th, 2020 04:09

Pensieve moment
orchidee said:

Good write Crow. Pensive or Pensieve? \'Pensieve\' exists. I know now I looked it up! lol.

February 18th, 2020 03:42

Pensieve moment
Goldfinch60 said:

Sitting with music can bring every emotion to you but when the music changes into its own glory and wonder that glory and wonder will be within you and never fail.

Great write SC.

Andy

February 18th, 2020 03:32

A Poets Lot
Vacancy said:

Loved it! Flows really well. Always excited to read your poems!

February 17th, 2020 12:23

A Poets Lot
Laura🌻 said:

Saxon Crow,

I enjoyed the read.

I especially liked the lines...
β€œA poet writes what they feel at that time. Using words in a way that reflects their own mind.”

A great write!
Thank you for sharing.

~Laura~🌻

February 17th, 2020 03:53

A Poets Lot
orchidee said:

A fine write. You know that famous poet, er, Joe Bloggs?! lol

February 17th, 2020 03:52

A Poets Lot
Goldfinch60 said:

Greta write SC but you will have to get in the queue to become the Laureate there are many of us in that queue.
\"To Rhyme or not to rhyme
that is the question
whether it is nobler in the.....\"

Andy

February 17th, 2020 03:40

A Poets Lot
dusk arising said:

Just do what you do to let it all flow out of you in any way you feel is right at the time.
I leap from style to style without any style at all.

February 17th, 2020 03:39

A Poets Lot
Poetic Dan said:

What a fantastic flow, I didn\'t where it should go! As so brilliantly written, this is what energy poet does!

Really enjoyed this with the sigh at the end, thanks for sharing.
Keep up the pen!!

February 17th, 2020 03:32

Walking in the woods
Vacancy said:

Reminds me of the hikes with my dad :) lovely poem very happy memories

February 16th, 2020 23:48

Walking in the woods
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write SC showing what the youngsters can show us in the search for wisdom in the natural world. If you keep walking with nature and with her the rewards will be astounding to you both.

Andy

February 16th, 2020 16:13

Walking in the woods
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD AFTERNOON SC - Thnaks for a very beautiful account of a 2-year old daughter - walking with her Dad in the Woods. We have several 2-year old in our Church (Boys & Girls) and they are most delightful & inquistive & trusting ! We cant wait to be parents and pehaps by 2023 / 2024 we will have a 2-year old of our very own. Thanks for a delightful glimpse of the future - AMEN !

Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 16th, 2020 11:03

Walking in the woods
Laura🌻 said:

Saxon Crow,

I enjoyed the walk with you and your daughter!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful write!

~Laura~🌻

February 16th, 2020 08:39

Walking in the woods
orchidee said:

A fine write Crow.

February 16th, 2020 08:15



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