Comments received on poems by peto
Mistakes
MaxSmith said:
I love how this progresses from such sadness and apathy to love and life.
Beautiful from start to finish Stevie
You never fail to impress
October 9th, 2024 11:46
MaxSmith said:
I love how this progresses from such sadness and apathy to love and life.
Beautiful from start to finish Stevie
You never fail to impress
October 9th, 2024 11:46
Filtered queen
MaxSmith said:
So very sad and moving Stevie.
You have a good heart and I truly hope it heals.
Beautiful expression here and I felt every word.
October 8th, 2024 14:35
MaxSmith said:
So very sad and moving Stevie.
You have a good heart and I truly hope it heals.
Beautiful expression here and I felt every word.
October 8th, 2024 14:35
Humility
MaxSmith said:
Keep humble, I love that.
If only many follow this very sentiment.
A great read Stevie, always a pleasure.
October 8th, 2024 13:51
MaxSmith said:
Keep humble, I love that.
If only many follow this very sentiment.
A great read Stevie, always a pleasure.
October 8th, 2024 13:51
Desolation
Neilton said:
I felt your poem in my heart ! Excellent work here !
August 30th, 2024 16:18
Neilton said:
I felt your poem in my heart ! Excellent work here !
August 30th, 2024 16:18
Desolation
Christina8 said:
A very sad poem, full of heartache and woe. Your poem is full of killer rhymes and cadence I love reading it even when its so poignant and painful. Hope things have turned around...
July 8th, 2024 11:35
Christina8 said:
A very sad poem, full of heartache and woe. Your poem is full of killer rhymes and cadence I love reading it even when its so poignant and painful. Hope things have turned around...
July 8th, 2024 11:35
Desolation
Parisab said:
Song of detachment, indeed-All are strangers to each other sometimes… Good to see you here…
July 6th, 2024 09:42
Parisab said:
Song of detachment, indeed-All are strangers to each other sometimes… Good to see you here…
July 6th, 2024 09:42
Troll
Christina8 said:
Great write, Peto! Very vivid images of what looks like revenge. I\'m always impressed!
July 4th, 2024 19:06
Christina8 said:
Great write, Peto! Very vivid images of what looks like revenge. I\'m always impressed!
July 4th, 2024 19:06
Troll
Doggerel Dave said:
Evidently there\'s a lot of them about - they\'ve perfected their disguise and now could be your nest door neighbour. Futility par excellence.
How can........?
A write well writ, peto.
July 3rd, 2024 00:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Evidently there\'s a lot of them about - they\'ve perfected their disguise and now could be your nest door neighbour. Futility par excellence.
How can........?
A write well writ, peto.
July 3rd, 2024 00:23
Candlewitch you tube version
Neilton said:
Didn\'t expect that to be honest! Impressed by the way you recited the poem ! The instruments made it even better.You should try it with your other poems it would be really fun !!!
July 2nd, 2024 16:43
Neilton said:
Didn\'t expect that to be honest! Impressed by the way you recited the poem ! The instruments made it even better.You should try it with your other poems it would be really fun !!!
July 2nd, 2024 16:43
Troll
sorenbarrett said:
A troll indeed from the description. Vivid images in this poem. It evokes emotional responses. Nicely done.
July 2nd, 2024 16:07
sorenbarrett said:
A troll indeed from the description. Vivid images in this poem. It evokes emotional responses. Nicely done.
July 2nd, 2024 16:07
Be LIE ve
Neilton said:
My belief in Jesus Christ have helped me a lot during the years but there were times i had my doubts ,too .Your poem truly touched me !Amazing work peto
July 2nd, 2024 07:58
Neilton said:
My belief in Jesus Christ have helped me a lot during the years but there were times i had my doubts ,too .Your poem truly touched me !Amazing work peto
July 2nd, 2024 07:58
Be LIE ve
2781 said:
As a cage is full of birds, so are their houses full of deceit: therefore they have become great, and waxen rich.
June 30th, 2024 19:32
2781 said:
As a cage is full of birds, so are their houses full of deceit: therefore they have become great, and waxen rich.
June 30th, 2024 19:32
Be LIE ve
Christina8 said:
Your poems and messages continue to amaze...I believe, however I don\'t take the bible literally nor would I ever regurgitate my faith onto anyone. Really thoughtful write, Peto!
June 30th, 2024 13:44
Christina8 said:
Your poems and messages continue to amaze...I believe, however I don\'t take the bible literally nor would I ever regurgitate my faith onto anyone. Really thoughtful write, Peto!
June 30th, 2024 13:44
Be LIE ve
Mutley Ravishes said:
Does the guy be-lie-ve that the Bible is to be read and understood literally?!
June 30th, 2024 00:14
Mutley Ravishes said:
Does the guy be-lie-ve that the Bible is to be read and understood literally?!
June 30th, 2024 00:14
Be LIE ve
Doggerel Dave said:
No obligation to believe in anything relating to what cannot be seen or felt, peto. If you want to believe and it makes you feel better, then do so.
For me I don\'t worry about it, because anything I may theorise about an afterlife will be gazumped by reality all in good time.
June 29th, 2024 17:40
Doggerel Dave said:
No obligation to believe in anything relating to what cannot be seen or felt, peto. If you want to believe and it makes you feel better, then do so.
For me I don\'t worry about it, because anything I may theorise about an afterlife will be gazumped by reality all in good time.
June 29th, 2024 17:40
Be LIE ve
Cassie58 said:
I am of the opinion it is better to believe in something rather than nothing. The problem is, finding something worth believing in. Religion has not worked for me. I do believe in Mother Nature. There are many lessons there. Enjoyed reading you peto.
June 29th, 2024 15:29
Cassie58 said:
I am of the opinion it is better to believe in something rather than nothing. The problem is, finding something worth believing in. Religion has not worked for me. I do believe in Mother Nature. There are many lessons there. Enjoyed reading you peto.
June 29th, 2024 15:29
Clown
Christina8 said:
Love the rhymes! I get a crystal clear image of your muse...great job!
June 27th, 2024 17:41
Christina8 said:
Love the rhymes! I get a crystal clear image of your muse...great job!
June 27th, 2024 17:41
Clown
TS22 said:
Very interesting. The short lines in the verses give it a unique feel
June 27th, 2024 14:37
TS22 said:
Very interesting. The short lines in the verses give it a unique feel
June 27th, 2024 14:37
Reaping
Christina8 said:
regret is an awful thing, \"Hanging onto this life by a thread\". I will surely have to follow you more often because your poems leave me at the edge of my seat!! Great job by the way!!
June 26th, 2024 08:49
Christina8 said:
regret is an awful thing, \"Hanging onto this life by a thread\". I will surely have to follow you more often because your poems leave me at the edge of my seat!! Great job by the way!!
June 26th, 2024 08:49
Smile
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem. All the things you would do to see her smile return. As always love the rhymes and cadence, they are spot on and spectacular!!!
June 26th, 2024 08:44
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem. All the things you would do to see her smile return. As always love the rhymes and cadence, they are spot on and spectacular!!!
June 26th, 2024 08:44
Mistakes
Christina8 said:
I think this poem is really great with the repetition, \" His hopes and dreams have died\" and finally at the end she emails him and his hopes lift again, Your poems never disappoint!!
June 26th, 2024 08:40
Christina8 said:
I think this poem is really great with the repetition, \" His hopes and dreams have died\" and finally at the end she emails him and his hopes lift again, Your poems never disappoint!!
June 26th, 2024 08:40
Highs
Christina8 said:
This really hits a high note....the work is just spot on with peoples everyday lives...the betrayal and so forth. The poem really hits home, what spectacular work!!
June 26th, 2024 08:36
Christina8 said:
This really hits a high note....the work is just spot on with peoples everyday lives...the betrayal and so forth. The poem really hits home, what spectacular work!!
June 26th, 2024 08:36
Highs
Neilton said:
Impressive work here! The way your words rhyme and the message you convey is pure talent! I also love the rhyme between the stanzas \"He\'s not big on goodbyes\"
\"Inside it all just dies\" ...
June 26th, 2024 07:20
Neilton said:
Impressive work here! The way your words rhyme and the message you convey is pure talent! I also love the rhyme between the stanzas \"He\'s not big on goodbyes\"
\"Inside it all just dies\" ...
June 26th, 2024 07:20
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