Comments received on poems by peto
Numb
Dan Williams said:
Touching and sincere, \"She navigates the seas by raft\" says chapters by itself. Very nice.
August 5th, 2025 02:05
Dan Williams said:
Touching and sincere, \"She navigates the seas by raft\" says chapters by itself. Very nice.
August 5th, 2025 02:05
Numb
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of pain and hurt at the loss of love, until she hears the voice again, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:16
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of pain and hurt at the loss of love, until she hears the voice again, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:16
Numb
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of pain and numbness, exploring how emotional detachment can serve as a coping mechanism in the face of heartache and disappointment. The poet delves into themes of love, loss, and resilience, illustrating the narrator\'s journey through emotional turmoil and the search for solace.
August 4th, 2025 07:32
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of pain and numbness, exploring how emotional detachment can serve as a coping mechanism in the face of heartache and disappointment. The poet delves into themes of love, loss, and resilience, illustrating the narrator\'s journey through emotional turmoil and the search for solace.
August 4th, 2025 07:32
Princess
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, peto,
A warrior in a wallflower dress, beware the facade in this splendid composition. Great poetry, rhyme, rhythm and theme; in all without a doubt. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:32
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, peto,
A warrior in a wallflower dress, beware the facade in this splendid composition. Great poetry, rhyme, rhythm and theme; in all without a doubt. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:32
Numb
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter and rhyme structure of this poem that sounds like a church bell ringing. Very nicely done
August 4th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter and rhyme structure of this poem that sounds like a church bell ringing. Very nicely done
August 4th, 2025 05:05
Princess
Bella Shepard said:
This feme fatale hides behind the guise of a wallflower to lure her prey? How alluringly deceptive. You paint a picture with words that is quite stunning. Great Write!
August 3rd, 2025 14:27
Bella Shepard said:
This feme fatale hides behind the guise of a wallflower to lure her prey? How alluringly deceptive. You paint a picture with words that is quite stunning. Great Write!
August 3rd, 2025 14:27
Princess
hzugman said:
Look but no touch doesn\'t get you much. Rev the engine then let out the clutch. Not sure what that means but I enjoyed your poem.
August 3rd, 2025 10:44
hzugman said:
Look but no touch doesn\'t get you much. Rev the engine then let out the clutch. Not sure what that means but I enjoyed your poem.
August 3rd, 2025 10:44
Princess
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, don\'t judge on appearance\'s, it can be a completely different person on the inside, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 09:02
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, don\'t judge on appearance\'s, it can be a completely different person on the inside, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 09:02
Princess
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, a powerful poem. Your poem explores the duality of a woman\'s experience—her fragility contrasted with her strength. It portrays her as a \"wallflower,\" suggesting she is often overlooked or underestimated, yet she possesses an inner resilience and a desire for agency. The recurring imagery of tears, battles, and transformation illustrates her journey through emotional turmoil and societal expectations.
August 3rd, 2025 07:33
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, a powerful poem. Your poem explores the duality of a woman\'s experience—her fragility contrasted with her strength. It portrays her as a \"wallflower,\" suggesting she is often overlooked or underestimated, yet she possesses an inner resilience and a desire for agency. The recurring imagery of tears, battles, and transformation illustrates her journey through emotional turmoil and societal expectations.
August 3rd, 2025 07:33
Princess
sorenbarrett said:
With vivid imagery this poem paints quite a picture and for that a fave. Well done
August 3rd, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
With vivid imagery this poem paints quite a picture and for that a fave. Well done
August 3rd, 2025 04:48
Fight
Christina8 said:
I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem, dear peto. Another great one!!
August 2nd, 2025 14:50
Christina8 said:
I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem, dear peto. Another great one!!
August 2nd, 2025 14:50
No
Christina8 said:
Very well written, I think he always hears our prayers but the answer isn\'t always \'yes\'. Very good and glad to see you back writing my friend!!
August 2nd, 2025 14:45
Christina8 said:
Very well written, I think he always hears our prayers but the answer isn\'t always \'yes\'. Very good and glad to see you back writing my friend!!
August 2nd, 2025 14:45
Fight
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write of mixed feelings and emotions and the struggles to find understanding themselves and to be understood by others, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 08:47
Poetic Licence said:
A strong write of mixed feelings and emotions and the struggles to find understanding themselves and to be understood by others, nicely expressed and written
August 2nd, 2025 08:47
Fight
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem reflects on the struggle between positive and negative emotions, exploring the complexities of mental health, self-expression, and the journey toward self-acceptance. The poet grapples with their thoughts and feelings, acknowledging the presence of both joy and pain in their life.
August 2nd, 2025 07:23
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem reflects on the struggle between positive and negative emotions, exploring the complexities of mental health, self-expression, and the journey toward self-acceptance. The poet grapples with their thoughts and feelings, acknowledging the presence of both joy and pain in their life.
August 2nd, 2025 07:23
Fight
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the questions of one that has let their thoughts be known but are not sure that they have been comprehended. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2025 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
Here I hear the questions of one that has let their thoughts be known but are not sure that they have been comprehended. Nicely written
August 2nd, 2025 06:40
Strings
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to revolve around a woman who embodies both the roles of a dancer and a juggler, suggesting a performance of life where she orchestrates relationships to fulfill her desires while dealing with her low self-esteem and the consequences of her actions.
August 1st, 2025 11:16
Friendship said:
Your poem seems to revolve around a woman who embodies both the roles of a dancer and a juggler, suggesting a performance of life where she orchestrates relationships to fulfill her desires while dealing with her low self-esteem and the consequences of her actions.
August 1st, 2025 11:16
Strings
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem with rhythm, rhyme, meter and flow it works and has a message to boot making it a fave
August 1st, 2025 05:21
sorenbarrett said:
A well written poem with rhythm, rhyme, meter and flow it works and has a message to boot making it a fave
August 1st, 2025 05:21
Strings
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of treating most in a negative way, playing games until she caught the one she wanted, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 05:18
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of treating most in a negative way, playing games until she caught the one she wanted, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 05:18
File
Paul Ramnora said:
Strong work...full of \'tortured\' images.
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Those who still deny their guilt
August 1st, 2025 03:19
Paul Ramnora said:
Strong work...full of \'tortured\' images.
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Those who still deny their guilt
August 1st, 2025 03:19
Void
Paul Ramnora said:
Nice poetry, Peto. I liked reading through every single line, repeatedly, again and again...finding it to be jam packed with powerful thoughts and emotions. ;-)
August 1st, 2025 02:57
Paul Ramnora said:
Nice poetry, Peto. I liked reading through every single line, repeatedly, again and again...finding it to be jam packed with powerful thoughts and emotions. ;-)
August 1st, 2025 02:57
No
Justina said:
Vivid and plain narrative poetry, the themes of daily life can truly touch people\'s hearts. Love it
July 31st, 2025 23:12
Justina said:
Vivid and plain narrative poetry, the themes of daily life can truly touch people\'s hearts. Love it
July 31st, 2025 23:12
No
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write exploring the struggles for a family at the festive time, but also tye strength of faith even though they didn\'t get what they wanted, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 20:20
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write exploring the struggles for a family at the festive time, but also tye strength of faith even though they didn\'t get what they wanted, nicely expressed and written
July 31st, 2025 20:20
AI
Paul Ramnora said:
Good poem...yes, I agree, that AI could prove really dangerous indeed to mankind -could possibly take us all over- if ever allowed to get out of control...?!
July 31st, 2025 20:01
Paul Ramnora said:
Good poem...yes, I agree, that AI could prove really dangerous indeed to mankind -could possibly take us all over- if ever allowed to get out of control...?!
July 31st, 2025 20:01
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