Comments received on poems by peto



You do it to yourself
O. Ella said:

This is extremely beautiful!
I think the reason we judge others is because we are afraid of being judged ourselves

June 7th, 2024 10:20

You do it to yourself
Christina8 said:

OMG I love the rhyme scheme of this poem and it\'s oh so true, especially at the end. I really like this one!! Just love the rhymes, like I said. Perfection!

June 7th, 2024 09:26

You do it to yourself
Introverted Sage said:

So true! The hardest thing seems to be letting it all go.
Deep self reflection is so needed.
Brilliant write


June 7th, 2024 02:07

You do it to yourself
2781 said:

If we were to judge ourselves we wouldn\'t be judged.

June 7th, 2024 01:24

You do it to yourself
Mutley Ravishes said:

Ain\'t that so!

June 7th, 2024 00:54

AI
Introverted Sage said:

Great write!
I think a lot of this technology depends on the hands behind it. As humans what guides us, shapes us. I feel AI could be a benefit to humanity, if it is guided to be that. It can also bring about more troubles than many are ready for, if created to do so.
Thanks for sharing!

June 6th, 2024 14:26

AI
hzugman said:

Keep in mind that it\'s not so much the technology but rather the application. If we can\'t apply love to it, the outcome will likely not be very pretty. Control of fire which has been so useful to humankind was also used to burn down entire cities in WW2.

June 6th, 2024 10:53

AI
Thomas W Case said:

This is poignant. Great writing and a serious subject. AI freaks me out a bit.

June 6th, 2024 07:26

AI
Cassie58 said:

You write words of wisdom here peto. We need to wake up to what could be in store. At one time it was material for film makers,, now it is becoming reality. Pleased I was born when I was. The future is scary. Enjoyed my visit.

June 6th, 2024 00:30

AI
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, we are certainly missing the human touch, in the banks here in Italy we now use I pads to sign our signature. I\'m with you but I know we are the same age, so very brilliant and I\'m with you 100% I wish o was back in the 70\'s 🤣

June 5th, 2024 10:42

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Accidental Poet said:

I\'m with you peto, I fear the future of AI is a demon of our own design. Once artificial intelligence acquires the ability to think for itself, it will follow the same footsteps that it\'s human maker has in the past thousands of years, to conquer and rule. What a fate for the human spirit.

June 5th, 2024 08:08

AI
Doggerel Dave said:

A piece I enjoyed which echoes my feelings of trepidation Peto, but I can only go forward aware and see how it all pans out....

June 5th, 2024 08:02

AI
Christina8 said:

I think this is an excellent poem to keep in mind a most horrific problem that faces us today.A really good poem, Peto! Good to see you!

June 5th, 2024 07:27

Void
Cassie58 said:

A powerful poem. Strong emotion conveyed here and a dynamite ending. What a void was left. A great read peto.

June 5th, 2024 06:30

Void
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah wow what an imaginative creative poem describing her and everything in a stellar way! Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

May 14th, 2024 13:20

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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah wow what an imaginative creative poem describing her and everything in a stellar way! Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

May 14th, 2024 13:19

Folding
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work.

May 6th, 2024 14:48

Hearts
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

May 5th, 2024 13:51

Void
Christina8 said:

\"Brought heavens gift into his hell\"--very thoughtful but deliberate wordplay that I love so much!! A great poem to start a great day. You are so talented!

April 30th, 2024 09:52

Void
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work.

April 29th, 2024 10:47

Pouting
Christina8 said:

\"an amateur at fitting in\"--that is me. This poem about addiction is incredible and stands out. Just awesome. I hope you continue to thrill me with your poetry!!!

April 29th, 2024 09:25

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Christina8 said:

sorry I was away, almost missed this beauty of a poem! Hot, hot stuff in that last stanza, whew!!! A great read and good to see you back too!

April 29th, 2024 09:08

Pouting
Introverted Sage said:

This reminds me of a quote from the song \'Arsonist\'s Lullabye\' by Hozier.
\"All you have is your fire
And the place you need to reach
Don\'t you ever tame your demons
But always keep them on a leash\"

And the quote, \"self control is self mastery\'
Learning to dance with, heal and control what haunts us can be such a daunting yet rewarding process.
Great write!

April 28th, 2024 13:13

Pouting
Bella Shepard said:

Incredible description of the pain of addiction. To live for the high is to slowly die, and never have truly known life. Stunning my friend, sad and oh so very true. Kudos many times over.

April 28th, 2024 12:20

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sunshine777 said:

Absolutely beautiful write!! Keep em coming :)

April 27th, 2024 14:19

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Introverted Sage said:

This is so beautiful!
I\'ve missed your writing

April 26th, 2024 12:26

Hearts
2781 said:

I could sing along to that one.

April 26th, 2024 07:02

Folding
sunshine777 said:

Beautiful write! :)

April 13th, 2024 15:12

Folding
Christina8 said:

You did NOT fall out of the ugly tree but I like your poetic license. So happy to see a new poem from you! You and I both have a heart of gold. ;-) This is a great poem, lucky girl you speak of. Great rhyming as always!

April 4th, 2024 13:39

Centrefold
Cassie58 said:

Definitely a case of opposite attracts. Dark/light. When she left the balance was gone. An emotive piece, superbly conveyed and much enjoyed peto.

March 10th, 2024 14:36

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