Comments received on poems by peto
OP
LIZ said:
Painful to read. Hope to hear back from you soon! The way I see it, there\'s a \"glue\" holding you together! Through darkness ...a constant....that burns any fear. 💙
September 22nd, 2023 17:16
LIZ said:
Painful to read. Hope to hear back from you soon! The way I see it, there\'s a \"glue\" holding you together! Through darkness ...a constant....that burns any fear. 💙
September 22nd, 2023 17:16
OP
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, what kind of surgery?? Hopefully not to serious, you have my prayers
September 22nd, 2023 15:12
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, what kind of surgery?? Hopefully not to serious, you have my prayers
September 22nd, 2023 15:12
Bloodshot
Introverted Sage said:
The way you weave your words is so magical.
Perhaps sharing from the heart is what makes your poems so captivating..
I appreciate the emotion.
At any rate.. this one\'s another great!
Thanks for sharing!
September 16th, 2023 17:19
Introverted Sage said:
The way you weave your words is so magical.
Perhaps sharing from the heart is what makes your poems so captivating..
I appreciate the emotion.
At any rate.. this one\'s another great!
Thanks for sharing!
September 16th, 2023 17:19
Delights
lenore_inNeverland said:
Officially my favourite poem.
\"Her picture shone out from my screen
The vulnerable poetic queen \"
especially these lines- they speak wonders
September 16th, 2023 10:07
lenore_inNeverland said:
Officially my favourite poem.
\"Her picture shone out from my screen
The vulnerable poetic queen \"
especially these lines- they speak wonders
September 16th, 2023 10:07
Bloodshot
lenore_inNeverland said:
\"A thesaurus reduced
To a blank empty page
Stained by tears from my red bloodshot eye \"
I have no words to express the amount of amazing-ness that this poem beholds within itself! This is beautiful
September 16th, 2023 10:05
lenore_inNeverland said:
\"A thesaurus reduced
To a blank empty page
Stained by tears from my red bloodshot eye \"
I have no words to express the amount of amazing-ness that this poem beholds within itself! This is beautiful
September 16th, 2023 10:05
Bloodshot
Christina8 said:
Is this a new rhyme scheme? Love it! I really enjoyed the last stanza, you show so much with your amazing imagery! Thanks for improving my Saturday!!
September 16th, 2023 07:58
Christina8 said:
Is this a new rhyme scheme? Love it! I really enjoyed the last stanza, you show so much with your amazing imagery! Thanks for improving my Saturday!!
September 16th, 2023 07:58
Bloodshot
BlessedbyGod said:
Incredible piece Peto,
Absolutely incredible 👏 🙌 😍
September 16th, 2023 07:56
BlessedbyGod said:
Incredible piece Peto,
Absolutely incredible 👏 🙌 😍
September 16th, 2023 07:56
Bloodshot
Teddy.15 said:
The moon and I absolutely gorgeous dear Peto your imagery is truly breathtaking. 💖
September 16th, 2023 06:28
Teddy.15 said:
The moon and I absolutely gorgeous dear Peto your imagery is truly breathtaking. 💖
September 16th, 2023 06:28
Bloodshot
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing ) we all need that something to calm us and make us feel better .. and nature can really help how we feel
A very good writing .. which I liked reading
I especially like the first verse .. beautiful words
September 16th, 2023 05:51
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing ) we all need that something to calm us and make us feel better .. and nature can really help how we feel
A very good writing .. which I liked reading
I especially like the first verse .. beautiful words
September 16th, 2023 05:51
Missing
Niki Oz said:
I am not as great at compliments as others but I could literally break this down line for line and explain such emotion into each. As if I could tell whole heartfelt stories with each and every one. That is an accomplishment in itself. To put whole chapters at times into just a few words and it be so profound. This is an amazing job. I could literally talk about it for hours. Amazingly written.
September 15th, 2023 19:07
Niki Oz said:
I am not as great at compliments as others but I could literally break this down line for line and explain such emotion into each. As if I could tell whole heartfelt stories with each and every one. That is an accomplishment in itself. To put whole chapters at times into just a few words and it be so profound. This is an amazing job. I could literally talk about it for hours. Amazingly written.
September 15th, 2023 19:07
Delights
Introverted Sage said:
The flow, rhyme and style of this is so intricate and exquisite!
Your words seem so in-tune with.. like a behind the scenes look at your muses life.
Great write!
September 15th, 2023 16:01
Introverted Sage said:
The flow, rhyme and style of this is so intricate and exquisite!
Your words seem so in-tune with.. like a behind the scenes look at your muses life.
Great write!
September 15th, 2023 16:01
Delights
Parisab said:
So many classic movie icons and even a modern Angelina Jolie who is multidimensional and interesting, as a woman and actress -but Peto’s poems have the sophistication of finding multiplicity in any woman …
September 15th, 2023 15:49
Parisab said:
So many classic movie icons and even a modern Angelina Jolie who is multidimensional and interesting, as a woman and actress -but Peto’s poems have the sophistication of finding multiplicity in any woman …
September 15th, 2023 15:49
Magic
Introverted Sage said:
\'A walk in my sleep joins a run in my dream\'
like a fated remembrance almost turned fatal remembrance or wounded by remembrance of past selves and ended in a bit of bliss.
mystical write!
September 15th, 2023 14:32
Introverted Sage said:
\'A walk in my sleep joins a run in my dream\'
like a fated remembrance almost turned fatal remembrance or wounded by remembrance of past selves and ended in a bit of bliss.
mystical write!
September 15th, 2023 14:32
Delights
Teddy.15 said:
Peto why thank you lol 🤣 on a serious note I\'m getting to know you and I\'m guessing you are not such a fan of free verse but I am a huge fan of rhyming rhythm and this is wonderful. Biggest of hugs this Friday evening my dear Peto. Who ever she be I reckon she is your muse! 💖
September 15th, 2023 11:10
Teddy.15 said:
Peto why thank you lol 🤣 on a serious note I\'m getting to know you and I\'m guessing you are not such a fan of free verse but I am a huge fan of rhyming rhythm and this is wonderful. Biggest of hugs this Friday evening my dear Peto. Who ever she be I reckon she is your muse! 💖
September 15th, 2023 11:10
Delights
Christina8 said:
Who\'s the lucky lady that has tickled your fancy? lol OMG this is INCREDIBLE!! When you write about such things it\'s like your pen must dance off the page. So interesting to be able to read your rhymes. I really can\'t tell you what I loved most! To your poetic queen! x
September 15th, 2023 08:37
Christina8 said:
Who\'s the lucky lady that has tickled your fancy? lol OMG this is INCREDIBLE!! When you write about such things it\'s like your pen must dance off the page. So interesting to be able to read your rhymes. I really can\'t tell you what I loved most! To your poetic queen! x
September 15th, 2023 08:37
Delights
LIZ said:
I see you\'re getting all romantic on me! Honestly, this is beautiful! You\'re obviously able to see past the picture on the screen!!! This is more my drift!!! Loved it!!!!
September 15th, 2023 06:32
LIZ said:
I see you\'re getting all romantic on me! Honestly, this is beautiful! You\'re obviously able to see past the picture on the screen!!! This is more my drift!!! Loved it!!!!
September 15th, 2023 06:32
Delights
Bobby O said:
If she is worth that fanciful dance then that Horace Greeley quote applies with fanfare. Do we have a role model to bring her into our arena? I’d say Marylyn as her charisma despite still united in attention quest but Ms. Monroe was without child, perhaps Mariah but she doesn’t time slumming, Jackie O fits many aisles but her magnetism didn’t display enough for public touch, so I offer Kim Badunger as those who knew to stay away stil didn’t ?
September 15th, 2023 06:23
Bobby O said:
If she is worth that fanciful dance then that Horace Greeley quote applies with fanfare. Do we have a role model to bring her into our arena? I’d say Marylyn as her charisma despite still united in attention quest but Ms. Monroe was without child, perhaps Mariah but she doesn’t time slumming, Jackie O fits many aisles but her magnetism didn’t display enough for public touch, so I offer Kim Badunger as those who knew to stay away stil didn’t ?
September 15th, 2023 06:23
Delights
Pop64 said:
A lovely tribute, it seems, to a another poet, wordsmith, someone who shares of herself through experiences and words. Beautiful.
September 15th, 2023 06:21
Pop64 said:
A lovely tribute, it seems, to a another poet, wordsmith, someone who shares of herself through experiences and words. Beautiful.
September 15th, 2023 06:21
Magic
Bella Shepard said:
The spell that your dream weaves is both frightening and rhetorically beautiful. Saved by the magic, there\'s definitely magic here!
September 14th, 2023 15:30
Bella Shepard said:
The spell that your dream weaves is both frightening and rhetorically beautiful. Saved by the magic, there\'s definitely magic here!
September 14th, 2023 15:30
Magic
Bobby O said:
A walk turns to run a pebble removed
I said, damned not Coyle or deceived, saved by a magic weave, and that’s just picking just excellent words that screw together 1 million times stronger than I could ever say in a short bursts of clever. You got it going on!
September 14th, 2023 13:39
Bobby O said:
A walk turns to run a pebble removed
I said, damned not Coyle or deceived, saved by a magic weave, and that’s just picking just excellent words that screw together 1 million times stronger than I could ever say in a short bursts of clever. You got it going on!
September 14th, 2023 13:39
Magic
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Peto, I cannot help but say this reminds me of Braveheart. Imagery is truly brilliant. 💖
September 14th, 2023 10:58
Teddy.15 said:
My dear Peto, I cannot help but say this reminds me of Braveheart. Imagery is truly brilliant. 💖
September 14th, 2023 10:58
Magic
peto said:
Many thanks Christina
Always a pleasure to see you here
And always so grateful for your kind words x
September 14th, 2023 08:12
peto said:
Many thanks Christina
Always a pleasure to see you here
And always so grateful for your kind words x
September 14th, 2023 08:12
Spel
Christina8 said:
Well put together, you! There is a hint of sadness but as always love finds her way to you in the end. love the cadence and rhyme in this one a lot! Awesome!
September 14th, 2023 07:00
Christina8 said:
Well put together, you! There is a hint of sadness but as always love finds her way to you in the end. love the cadence and rhyme in this one a lot! Awesome!
September 14th, 2023 07:00
Magic
Christina8 said:
\"To wake up in your arms was the ultimate prize\"...so sweet! I really enjoyed the whole poem! Its really quite beautiful, Stevie, to see the way it all works out. x
September 14th, 2023 06:56
Christina8 said:
\"To wake up in your arms was the ultimate prize\"...so sweet! I really enjoyed the whole poem! Its really quite beautiful, Stevie, to see the way it all works out. x
September 14th, 2023 06:56
Spel
Introverted Sage said:
Nice rhyme and flow!
Sounds like an intense electromagnetic connection you have there.
Intriguing write!
September 14th, 2023 01:15
Introverted Sage said:
Nice rhyme and flow!
Sounds like an intense electromagnetic connection you have there.
Intriguing write!
September 14th, 2023 01:15
Spel
Teddy.15 said:
play 2 🤣 however a shockingly good write, full of irony anger and disappointment which in fact is what love can be. Super my dear Peto. May the sky explode into confetti of love someday 💖
September 13th, 2023 11:23
Teddy.15 said:
play 2 🤣 however a shockingly good write, full of irony anger and disappointment which in fact is what love can be. Super my dear Peto. May the sky explode into confetti of love someday 💖
September 13th, 2023 11:23
Spel
LIZ said:
Damn!!!! Pain! I love this! BUT, this line: \"Please don\'t answer my heartbeat now sounds like the crack, Of the whip used to peel all the skin from my back\" is GOLD! It lets me know exactly where you\'re going. Deception is a horrible crime!! I totally enjoyed it! Oh and I love the title!!!
September 13th, 2023 08:21
LIZ said:
Damn!!!! Pain! I love this! BUT, this line: \"Please don\'t answer my heartbeat now sounds like the crack, Of the whip used to peel all the skin from my back\" is GOLD! It lets me know exactly where you\'re going. Deception is a horrible crime!! I totally enjoyed it! Oh and I love the title!!!
September 13th, 2023 08:21
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