Comments received on poems by peto
My poetic side
BlessedbyGod said:
Ditto my friend, you are also a blessing , your work is great and inciteful,
Your words are intriguing and healing as well, thank you dear friend for writing this piece, wr appreciate you as well
October 22nd, 2023 17:50
BlessedbyGod said:
Ditto my friend, you are also a blessing , your work is great and inciteful,
Your words are intriguing and healing as well, thank you dear friend for writing this piece, wr appreciate you as well
October 22nd, 2023 17:50
My poetic side
Bobby O said:
I stately declare the honor is here and I imagine many that follow feel much the same. You are a monster of touch.
October 22nd, 2023 17:33
Bobby O said:
I stately declare the honor is here and I imagine many that follow feel much the same. You are a monster of touch.
October 22nd, 2023 17:33
My poetic side
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written! You talk about those who chose to be your friend, trust me we feel the same about you! I think your writing goes both ways, it takes away your numb, and it brings us joy. I hope you have many poems left. I need to get my pen....
October 22nd, 2023 16:31
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written! You talk about those who chose to be your friend, trust me we feel the same about you! I think your writing goes both ways, it takes away your numb, and it brings us joy. I hope you have many poems left. I need to get my pen....
October 22nd, 2023 16:31
My poetic side
hzugman said:
Another beautiful poem. Taking away a numb is a gift.
October 22nd, 2023 12:19
hzugman said:
Another beautiful poem. Taking away a numb is a gift.
October 22nd, 2023 12:19
My poetic side
LIZ said:
This is beautiful! You already know....your writing helps so much. Even the ones you think don\'t, are a faucet of untolds! \"A few more still to come\".....a number of unknowns. Reading between the lines, I get it more than you know! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
October 22nd, 2023 10:51
LIZ said:
This is beautiful! You already know....your writing helps so much. Even the ones you think don\'t, are a faucet of untolds! \"A few more still to come\".....a number of unknowns. Reading between the lines, I get it more than you know! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
October 22nd, 2023 10:51
Vic n tim
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece peto!!
I agree with all these,
Especially with Maxine,
It\'s sad , but intriguing and the two halves should be as one,
Communication is the only way that they can become whole , voicing their concerns and thoughts to one another!
If only Timothy wouldn\'t give up, because I\'m sure she is reaching to him as well, recognizing him as her other half!
October 16th, 2023 06:34
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece peto!!
I agree with all these,
Especially with Maxine,
It\'s sad , but intriguing and the two halves should be as one,
Communication is the only way that they can become whole , voicing their concerns and thoughts to one another!
If only Timothy wouldn\'t give up, because I\'m sure she is reaching to him as well, recognizing him as her other half!
October 16th, 2023 06:34
Vic n tim
LIZ said:
Makes me think of hidden love desires...where you just get a glimpse...even though you\'d like to have it all...but there\'s too much pain involved. All fun and games...until reality hits! We can\'t truly grasp it, when we let darkness win!! Bravo!!!!!
October 16th, 2023 03:57
LIZ said:
Makes me think of hidden love desires...where you just get a glimpse...even though you\'d like to have it all...but there\'s too much pain involved. All fun and games...until reality hits! We can\'t truly grasp it, when we let darkness win!! Bravo!!!!!
October 16th, 2023 03:57
Vic n tim
Introverted Sage said:
Mysterious and enticing.
Temptation is tricky.
The last line poses as if in a stand-off.. will she succumb to the darkness or not..
Clearly I\'m over here on the edge of my seat. haha\'
October 16th, 2023 01:56
Introverted Sage said:
Mysterious and enticing.
Temptation is tricky.
The last line poses as if in a stand-off.. will she succumb to the darkness or not..
Clearly I\'m over here on the edge of my seat. haha\'
October 16th, 2023 01:56
Vic n tim
Parisab said:
Great word play-some seek dare instead of truth and that is not meant to end well-at the same time there are some wardrobe mentions to lighten the mood of the poem-
October 16th, 2023 01:40
Parisab said:
Great word play-some seek dare instead of truth and that is not meant to end well-at the same time there are some wardrobe mentions to lighten the mood of the poem-
October 16th, 2023 01:40
Vic n tim
Christina8 said:
OMG what an excellent play on words...I was wondering how \"Vic N Tim\' would work, splendid as Victoria\'s Secret and Timothy. Also, who is the victim in that mess? You sir, are a wordsmith, Stevie! I really enjoyed reading this!
October 16th, 2023 00:43
Christina8 said:
OMG what an excellent play on words...I was wondering how \"Vic N Tim\' would work, splendid as Victoria\'s Secret and Timothy. Also, who is the victim in that mess? You sir, are a wordsmith, Stevie! I really enjoyed reading this!
October 16th, 2023 00:43
Vic n tim
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. you do a great job at creating intrigue. Nice use of rhyme.
October 16th, 2023 00:24
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. you do a great job at creating intrigue. Nice use of rhyme.
October 16th, 2023 00:24
Shadows
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of what Dante once said paradise for the beauty and hell for the company. I\'d also choose hell, such an interesting thought. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 14:20
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of what Dante once said paradise for the beauty and hell for the company. I\'d also choose hell, such an interesting thought. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 14:20
Verges
Niki Oz said:
I feel like you see all her struggles and pain but can also see her determination and strength. You see the beauty in all of the ugliness she faces.
\"Since relinquishing undeserved portions of blame
Says she don\'t feel herself looks exactly the same \"
\"Took the world on her shoulder and held down the fort\"
\"His assault on her senses was swift and direct
A flamethrower to the heart he had sworn to protect\"
\"Can\'t connect to admirers with young in the nest\"
\"When she offered an inch I had snatched at the mile\"
Beautifully written and undeniably, brutally relatable.
Most times we are not looking for someone to swoop in and save us. To fix us. We are looking for someone capable of acknowledging everything you have captured in this poem and loving us enough to fix themselves so they stop doing this to us. Not just a magical fix all.
So beautifully written and truly capturing the depth of situations without too many words. Wonderfully done.
Half of the battle and usually the hardest part is finally facing yourself and recognizing you are the problem and loving yourself and the other enough to take the steps to fix it.
October 15th, 2023 13:34
Niki Oz said:
I feel like you see all her struggles and pain but can also see her determination and strength. You see the beauty in all of the ugliness she faces.
\"Since relinquishing undeserved portions of blame
Says she don\'t feel herself looks exactly the same \"
\"Took the world on her shoulder and held down the fort\"
\"His assault on her senses was swift and direct
A flamethrower to the heart he had sworn to protect\"
\"Can\'t connect to admirers with young in the nest\"
\"When she offered an inch I had snatched at the mile\"
Beautifully written and undeniably, brutally relatable.
Most times we are not looking for someone to swoop in and save us. To fix us. We are looking for someone capable of acknowledging everything you have captured in this poem and loving us enough to fix themselves so they stop doing this to us. Not just a magical fix all.
So beautifully written and truly capturing the depth of situations without too many words. Wonderfully done.
Half of the battle and usually the hardest part is finally facing yourself and recognizing you are the problem and loving yourself and the other enough to take the steps to fix it.
October 15th, 2023 13:34
Verges
LIZ said:
This is so beautifully passionate. Seems to me you\'re SEEING all of her struggles but also the beauty it all brings!! 💫💫💫💫💫
October 15th, 2023 09:48
LIZ said:
This is so beautifully passionate. Seems to me you\'re SEEING all of her struggles but also the beauty it all brings!! 💫💫💫💫💫
October 15th, 2023 09:48
Verges
BlessedbyGod said:
The girl on the verges in your life , is a great one and she deserves to be happy,
I get a sense that you can be the man to make her happy!
Her and the young in her nest,
Write on my dear friend, you\'re great and your messages come through loud and clear,
Don\'t give up on her,
October 15th, 2023 08:49
BlessedbyGod said:
The girl on the verges in your life , is a great one and she deserves to be happy,
I get a sense that you can be the man to make her happy!
Her and the young in her nest,
Write on my dear friend, you\'re great and your messages come through loud and clear,
Don\'t give up on her,
October 15th, 2023 08:49
Verges
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful yet all too familiar heartbreaking story! Your rhyme and cadence could not be more spot on. I look forward to these every morning, Stevie. Definitely a fave!
October 15th, 2023 06:25
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful yet all too familiar heartbreaking story! Your rhyme and cadence could not be more spot on. I look forward to these every morning, Stevie. Definitely a fave!
October 15th, 2023 06:25
Verges
Introverted Sage said:
I\'ve come to look forward to these!
\'His assault on her senses was swift and direct
\'A flamethrower to the heart he had sworn to protect \'
Like secretly sending sparks or inspiration to help her along.
Love this!
October 15th, 2023 02:41
Introverted Sage said:
I\'ve come to look forward to these!
\'His assault on her senses was swift and direct
\'A flamethrower to the heart he had sworn to protect \'
Like secretly sending sparks or inspiration to help her along.
Love this!
October 15th, 2023 02:41
Hype
Christina8 said:
Excellent! I\'m loving this new format. Like I always say, it\'s like you are improving with each poem. Mind blown! Christina
October 14th, 2023 03:03
Christina8 said:
Excellent! I\'m loving this new format. Like I always say, it\'s like you are improving with each poem. Mind blown! Christina
October 14th, 2023 03:03
Hype
Introverted Sage said:
The mind can be our worst enemy!
and sometimes nothing even comes close to slowing the circles it takes us in.. just to make it stop..for a moment..
\'For the space
To disgrace\'
If only we could do our \'ugly\' in the dark. Most times we do, yet we feel it is seen as if painted on our faces.
This one feels like a letting go of sorts.
Great write!
October 14th, 2023 01:41
Introverted Sage said:
The mind can be our worst enemy!
and sometimes nothing even comes close to slowing the circles it takes us in.. just to make it stop..for a moment..
\'For the space
To disgrace\'
If only we could do our \'ugly\' in the dark. Most times we do, yet we feel it is seen as if painted on our faces.
This one feels like a letting go of sorts.
Great write!
October 14th, 2023 01:41
Hype
Parisab said:
Too cool to bother with ‘too much’ I presume! Yet you took your time with this one and created a colorful canvas. I always say the art needs to stand out more than the artist…
October 14th, 2023 01:40
Parisab said:
Too cool to bother with ‘too much’ I presume! Yet you took your time with this one and created a colorful canvas. I always say the art needs to stand out more than the artist…
October 14th, 2023 01:40
Hype
LIZ said:
Ummmm heyyyyy and you talk about me? 😝 Being different!! \"In a world full of colour I\'m still black and white\"--DO YOUR WORST! DAMN!!!!! I needed this, thank you!!
October 14th, 2023 01:17
LIZ said:
Ummmm heyyyyy and you talk about me? 😝 Being different!! \"In a world full of colour I\'m still black and white\"--DO YOUR WORST! DAMN!!!!! I needed this, thank you!!
October 14th, 2023 01:17
Lamb
Introverted Sage said:
Your writing makes the reader feel as if they are right there with her as well as with you as the observer. You paint both sides so well. An inspiring finish!
Great write
October 13th, 2023 23:29
Introverted Sage said:
Your writing makes the reader feel as if they are right there with her as well as with you as the observer. You paint both sides so well. An inspiring finish!
Great write
October 13th, 2023 23:29
Potential
Introverted Sage said:
So inspiring! May we all know our own true potential.
Thanks for sharing
October 13th, 2023 22:47
Introverted Sage said:
So inspiring! May we all know our own true potential.
Thanks for sharing
October 13th, 2023 22:47
Lamb
JimmyWriteOn said:
What a fantastic write about something so real and horrifying. Really great descriptions and rhyming. I could really see what you were describing
October 13th, 2023 15:25
JimmyWriteOn said:
What a fantastic write about something so real and horrifying. Really great descriptions and rhyming. I could really see what you were describing
October 13th, 2023 15:25
Lamb
Parisab said:
So much empathy in the texture of your words-and it’s not easy to craft gentle words to build this imagery of horror-
watching others suffer is hard but to wait with patience for their arrival makes it even harder-thanks Peto!
October 13th, 2023 11:00
Parisab said:
So much empathy in the texture of your words-and it’s not easy to craft gentle words to build this imagery of horror-
watching others suffer is hard but to wait with patience for their arrival makes it even harder-thanks Peto!
October 13th, 2023 11:00
Lamb
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece peto!!
Hopefully when she makes it to him, all her fears and doubts will disappear as soon as he wraps his arms around her , and let\'s her know that he is her safe place.
October 13th, 2023 09:47
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece peto!!
Hopefully when she makes it to him, all her fears and doubts will disappear as soon as he wraps his arms around her , and let\'s her know that he is her safe place.
October 13th, 2023 09:47
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