Comments received on poems by peto
The dream
lunarchloedip said:
this felt so honestly written and vulnerable. love it!
November 27th, 2023 09:20
lunarchloedip said:
this felt so honestly written and vulnerable. love it!
November 27th, 2023 09:20
Some
Christina8 said:
\'Some\" is a truly good poem and everybody can relate to these words. Very well said.
November 27th, 2023 01:05
Christina8 said:
\'Some\" is a truly good poem and everybody can relate to these words. Very well said.
November 27th, 2023 01:05
The dream
Christina8 said:
Yes I think I\'ve given up on the dream. This is such a brilliant poem! I like the line, \"Dipped back into the defects you thought you\'d outgrown\" I mean every stanza has something I can relate to. I really like that last one.....thanks for taking me on a journey, Stevie! Christina
November 27th, 2023 01:00
Christina8 said:
Yes I think I\'ve given up on the dream. This is such a brilliant poem! I like the line, \"Dipped back into the defects you thought you\'d outgrown\" I mean every stanza has something I can relate to. I really like that last one.....thanks for taking me on a journey, Stevie! Christina
November 27th, 2023 01:00
Some
Doggerel Dave said:
Well put. This is why there should be no generalised use of the word \'we\' to signify everybody.
November 26th, 2023 23:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Well put. This is why there should be no generalised use of the word \'we\' to signify everybody.
November 26th, 2023 23:16
Sailing
Bella Shepard said:
The rhyming pattern of this poem adds such an element of fun as read aloud. Sweet sentiment builds with each stanza, culminating in that beautiful \"take a chance\". Loved every syllable!
November 4th, 2023 14:32
Bella Shepard said:
The rhyming pattern of this poem adds such an element of fun as read aloud. Sweet sentiment builds with each stanza, culminating in that beautiful \"take a chance\". Loved every syllable!
November 4th, 2023 14:32
Candlewitch you tube version
Bobby O said:
How much fun was that? That fiddle is an acquired taste I guess.
October 31st, 2023 10:10
Bobby O said:
How much fun was that? That fiddle is an acquired taste I guess.
October 31st, 2023 10:10
Candlewitch you tube version
Christina8 said:
A rap--Very good! There are many of your poems that would go good with a rap. Nice to hear that accent!!
October 31st, 2023 08:42
Christina8 said:
A rap--Very good! There are many of your poems that would go good with a rap. Nice to hear that accent!!
October 31st, 2023 08:42
Sailing
Introverted Sage said:
Who wouldn\'t want to take that chance!
And top notch flow to match.
Love it
October 28th, 2023 01:37
Introverted Sage said:
Who wouldn\'t want to take that chance!
And top notch flow to match.
Love it
October 28th, 2023 01:37
Sailing
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it cares not for coming back... An elope of note sir! Well written Peto. 👌🏼
October 27th, 2023 14:04
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it cares not for coming back... An elope of note sir! Well written Peto. 👌🏼
October 27th, 2023 14:04
My poetic side
Eileen Clark said:
Oh this is lovely, you took my thoughts and put them down on paper so much better then I could have done, thank you. :)
October 27th, 2023 10:50
Eileen Clark said:
Oh this is lovely, you took my thoughts and put them down on paper so much better then I could have done, thank you. :)
October 27th, 2023 10:50
Sailing
LIZ said:
Ummmm \'Don\'t be shy Let\'s get high\' sounds about right!! 🤭
October 27th, 2023 04:27
LIZ said:
Ummmm \'Don\'t be shy Let\'s get high\' sounds about right!! 🤭
October 27th, 2023 04:27
Sailing
Christina8 said:
I really like this style of your poetry! Oh to lay in the sand and answer life\'s questions.....\"Call my name/burn the flame\" Leaves wonderful imagery for the mind to play out.
October 27th, 2023 02:29
Christina8 said:
I really like this style of your poetry! Oh to lay in the sand and answer life\'s questions.....\"Call my name/burn the flame\" Leaves wonderful imagery for the mind to play out.
October 27th, 2023 02:29
Crunched
Introverted Sage said:
A fine write!
Just in time for spooky season.
At awe with your way with words!
October 26th, 2023 11:02
Introverted Sage said:
A fine write!
Just in time for spooky season.
At awe with your way with words!
October 26th, 2023 11:02
Crunched
Christina8 said:
Your rhyme is fantastic...such a scary poem for halloween! I don\'t know which stanza i like best but the last one sure is scary on this dark stormy morning!
October 26th, 2023 07:59
Christina8 said:
Your rhyme is fantastic...such a scary poem for halloween! I don\'t know which stanza i like best but the last one sure is scary on this dark stormy morning!
October 26th, 2023 07:59
Crunched
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, so creepy I loved it!!
Perfect for the Halloween season!!
October 26th, 2023 06:44
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, so creepy I loved it!!
Perfect for the Halloween season!!
October 26th, 2023 06:44
Crunched
Neville said:
how extraordinarily timely & apt .. versed so verily well sir P .. N
October 26th, 2023 06:35
Neville said:
how extraordinarily timely & apt .. versed so verily well sir P .. N
October 26th, 2023 06:35
Feeling
Thomas W Case said:
Great job. It seems sad but hopeful. Well crafted.
October 24th, 2023 15:38
Thomas W Case said:
Great job. It seems sad but hopeful. Well crafted.
October 24th, 2023 15:38
Feeling
BlessedbyGod said:
I wish u both the best!!
Beautiful piece my friend!!
October 24th, 2023 14:54
BlessedbyGod said:
I wish u both the best!!
Beautiful piece my friend!!
October 24th, 2023 14:54
Feeling
LIZ said:
And there\'s that drop of......hope. In the midst of discovering all the dark layers....of the one.....who makes our heart skip a beat....🫣
October 24th, 2023 12:18
LIZ said:
And there\'s that drop of......hope. In the midst of discovering all the dark layers....of the one.....who makes our heart skip a beat....🫣
October 24th, 2023 12:18
Feeling
Caring dove said:
Sad yet beautiful writing )) like your way with words 🙂
October 24th, 2023 10:47
Caring dove said:
Sad yet beautiful writing )) like your way with words 🙂
October 24th, 2023 10:47
Feeling
Christina8 said:
Oh my gosh, Stevie! What a sad one! Or is it rife with hope that you\'ll find love?
\"I\'ll once again dance on a floor that\'s not littered with tears\" Hopeful, yet, pulls on the heart strings. This is perfect. A favorite for me!
October 24th, 2023 07:35
Christina8 said:
Oh my gosh, Stevie! What a sad one! Or is it rife with hope that you\'ll find love?
\"I\'ll once again dance on a floor that\'s not littered with tears\" Hopeful, yet, pulls on the heart strings. This is perfect. A favorite for me!
October 24th, 2023 07:35
My poetic side
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written tribute here peto, and I totally agree, MyPoeticSide is a warm and talented community, where words are shared and friendships are made. So, likewise in your second stanza, I would also like to thank the kind sir who planted the seed.
Like you, I look forward to sharing more, and like many others, I look forward to reading more of theirs and of course, yours.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 23rd, 2023 11:34
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written tribute here peto, and I totally agree, MyPoeticSide is a warm and talented community, where words are shared and friendships are made. So, likewise in your second stanza, I would also like to thank the kind sir who planted the seed.
Like you, I look forward to sharing more, and like many others, I look forward to reading more of theirs and of course, yours.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 23rd, 2023 11:34
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