Comments received on poems by peto
Sailing
Bella Shepard said:
The rhyming pattern of this poem adds such an element of fun as read aloud. Sweet sentiment builds with each stanza, culminating in that beautiful \"take a chance\". Loved every syllable!
November 4th, 2023 14:32
Bella Shepard said:
The rhyming pattern of this poem adds such an element of fun as read aloud. Sweet sentiment builds with each stanza, culminating in that beautiful \"take a chance\". Loved every syllable!
November 4th, 2023 14:32
Candlewitch you tube version
Bobby O said:
How much fun was that? That fiddle is an acquired taste I guess.
October 31st, 2023 10:10
Bobby O said:
How much fun was that? That fiddle is an acquired taste I guess.
October 31st, 2023 10:10
Candlewitch you tube version
Christina8 said:
A rap--Very good! There are many of your poems that would go good with a rap. Nice to hear that accent!!
October 31st, 2023 08:42
Christina8 said:
A rap--Very good! There are many of your poems that would go good with a rap. Nice to hear that accent!!
October 31st, 2023 08:42
Sailing
Introverted Sage said:
Who wouldn\'t want to take that chance!
And top notch flow to match.
Love it
October 28th, 2023 01:37
Introverted Sage said:
Who wouldn\'t want to take that chance!
And top notch flow to match.
Love it
October 28th, 2023 01:37
Sailing
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it cares not for coming back... An elope of note sir! Well written Peto. 👌🏼
October 27th, 2023 14:04
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it cares not for coming back... An elope of note sir! Well written Peto. 👌🏼
October 27th, 2023 14:04
My poetic side
Eileen Clark said:
Oh this is lovely, you took my thoughts and put them down on paper so much better then I could have done, thank you. :)
October 27th, 2023 10:50
Eileen Clark said:
Oh this is lovely, you took my thoughts and put them down on paper so much better then I could have done, thank you. :)
October 27th, 2023 10:50
Sailing
LIZ said:
Ummmm \'Don\'t be shy Let\'s get high\' sounds about right!! 🤭
October 27th, 2023 04:27
LIZ said:
Ummmm \'Don\'t be shy Let\'s get high\' sounds about right!! 🤭
October 27th, 2023 04:27
Sailing
Christina8 said:
I really like this style of your poetry! Oh to lay in the sand and answer life\'s questions.....\"Call my name/burn the flame\" Leaves wonderful imagery for the mind to play out.
October 27th, 2023 02:29
Christina8 said:
I really like this style of your poetry! Oh to lay in the sand and answer life\'s questions.....\"Call my name/burn the flame\" Leaves wonderful imagery for the mind to play out.
October 27th, 2023 02:29
Crunched
Introverted Sage said:
A fine write!
Just in time for spooky season.
At awe with your way with words!
October 26th, 2023 11:02
Introverted Sage said:
A fine write!
Just in time for spooky season.
At awe with your way with words!
October 26th, 2023 11:02
Crunched
Christina8 said:
Your rhyme is fantastic...such a scary poem for halloween! I don\'t know which stanza i like best but the last one sure is scary on this dark stormy morning!
October 26th, 2023 07:59
Christina8 said:
Your rhyme is fantastic...such a scary poem for halloween! I don\'t know which stanza i like best but the last one sure is scary on this dark stormy morning!
October 26th, 2023 07:59
Crunched
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, so creepy I loved it!!
Perfect for the Halloween season!!
October 26th, 2023 06:44
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, so creepy I loved it!!
Perfect for the Halloween season!!
October 26th, 2023 06:44
Crunched
Neville said:
how extraordinarily timely & apt .. versed so verily well sir P .. N
October 26th, 2023 06:35
Neville said:
how extraordinarily timely & apt .. versed so verily well sir P .. N
October 26th, 2023 06:35
Feeling
Thomas W Case said:
Great job. It seems sad but hopeful. Well crafted.
October 24th, 2023 15:38
Thomas W Case said:
Great job. It seems sad but hopeful. Well crafted.
October 24th, 2023 15:38
Feeling
BlessedbyGod said:
I wish u both the best!!
Beautiful piece my friend!!
October 24th, 2023 14:54
BlessedbyGod said:
I wish u both the best!!
Beautiful piece my friend!!
October 24th, 2023 14:54
Feeling
LIZ said:
And there\'s that drop of......hope. In the midst of discovering all the dark layers....of the one.....who makes our heart skip a beat....🫣
October 24th, 2023 12:18
LIZ said:
And there\'s that drop of......hope. In the midst of discovering all the dark layers....of the one.....who makes our heart skip a beat....🫣
October 24th, 2023 12:18
Feeling
Caring dove said:
Sad yet beautiful writing )) like your way with words 🙂
October 24th, 2023 10:47
Caring dove said:
Sad yet beautiful writing )) like your way with words 🙂
October 24th, 2023 10:47
Feeling
Christina8 said:
Oh my gosh, Stevie! What a sad one! Or is it rife with hope that you\'ll find love?
\"I\'ll once again dance on a floor that\'s not littered with tears\" Hopeful, yet, pulls on the heart strings. This is perfect. A favorite for me!
October 24th, 2023 07:35
Christina8 said:
Oh my gosh, Stevie! What a sad one! Or is it rife with hope that you\'ll find love?
\"I\'ll once again dance on a floor that\'s not littered with tears\" Hopeful, yet, pulls on the heart strings. This is perfect. A favorite for me!
October 24th, 2023 07:35
My poetic side
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written tribute here peto, and I totally agree, MyPoeticSide is a warm and talented community, where words are shared and friendships are made. So, likewise in your second stanza, I would also like to thank the kind sir who planted the seed.
Like you, I look forward to sharing more, and like many others, I look forward to reading more of theirs and of course, yours.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 23rd, 2023 11:34
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written tribute here peto, and I totally agree, MyPoeticSide is a warm and talented community, where words are shared and friendships are made. So, likewise in your second stanza, I would also like to thank the kind sir who planted the seed.
Like you, I look forward to sharing more, and like many others, I look forward to reading more of theirs and of course, yours.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 23rd, 2023 11:34
Mission
peto said:
Thank you Christina
Thought it a bit gory for comments
Ta for braving it
A wee star
October 23rd, 2023 08:56
peto said:
Thank you Christina
Thought it a bit gory for comments
Ta for braving it
A wee star
October 23rd, 2023 08:56
Mission
Christina8 said:
That\'s quite the story, oh gosh, just in time for Halloween! Such a detailed poem. Great rhymes! I can\'t say enough about this poem!
October 23rd, 2023 08:53
Christina8 said:
That\'s quite the story, oh gosh, just in time for Halloween! Such a detailed poem. Great rhymes! I can\'t say enough about this poem!
October 23rd, 2023 08:53
My poetic side
Parisab said:
Your poems have a regal tone to them. It’s been truly special to be connected through this platform. Your words have so much more to offer and they “take away the numb” poet friend…
October 23rd, 2023 00:01
Parisab said:
Your poems have a regal tone to them. It’s been truly special to be connected through this platform. Your words have so much more to offer and they “take away the numb” poet friend…
October 23rd, 2023 00:01
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