Comments received on poems by peto
Genius
Christina8 said:
\"\"Talent hits all the target that no one else can Genius hit those that no one else sees\" I think your poems are genius! This one was a thinker! As always, fantastic job, Stevie!
October 2nd, 2023 08:53
Christina8 said:
\"\"Talent hits all the target that no one else can Genius hit those that no one else sees\" I think your poems are genius! This one was a thinker! As always, fantastic job, Stevie!
October 2nd, 2023 08:53
Genius
LIZ said:
I love this quote \"Talent hits a target no one else can hit. Genius hits a target no one else can see.\"--you can have talent and do well...and achieve things others may not be able to; but being genius/intelligent helps us reach for things within our imagination others can\'t even see. Had me thinking hard this morning! Thank you!
October 2nd, 2023 02:17
LIZ said:
I love this quote \"Talent hits a target no one else can hit. Genius hits a target no one else can see.\"--you can have talent and do well...and achieve things others may not be able to; but being genius/intelligent helps us reach for things within our imagination others can\'t even see. Had me thinking hard this morning! Thank you!
October 2nd, 2023 02:17
First
Introverted Sage said:
You certainly have a way with words and your writing is so captivating! Seems like the charming and wooing of a vampire on unsuspecting prey.
The variety in your writing is so refreshing.
Great write!
October 1st, 2023 21:29
Introverted Sage said:
You certainly have a way with words and your writing is so captivating! Seems like the charming and wooing of a vampire on unsuspecting prey.
The variety in your writing is so refreshing.
Great write!
October 1st, 2023 21:29
First
Bella Shepard said:
Such an intriguing poem, I toyed with the question of who really ends up being victim or prey. Throwing open the curtains, is she revealing something that was concealed? Her abundance snatched at by his unnatural greed, her innocence? A romantic mystery of the first order.
September 30th, 2023 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
Such an intriguing poem, I toyed with the question of who really ends up being victim or prey. Throwing open the curtains, is she revealing something that was concealed? Her abundance snatched at by his unnatural greed, her innocence? A romantic mystery of the first order.
September 30th, 2023 14:11
First
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend, I hope that this day comes true for you both!!
September 30th, 2023 12:00
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend, I hope that this day comes true for you both!!
September 30th, 2023 12:00
First
peto said:
You give me too much credit Christina
I never know where I\'m going when I start
extremely grateful as always
Many thanks
September 30th, 2023 08:53
peto said:
You give me too much credit Christina
I never know where I\'m going when I start
extremely grateful as always
Many thanks
September 30th, 2023 08:53
First
Christina8 said:
OMG you continue to surprise me with your words and rhyme and story twists! I thought it was gonna be happily ever after and it ends with \"victim and prey\" i mean, this is so good, it got me! Your talent knows no bounds, sir!
September 30th, 2023 08:33
Christina8 said:
OMG you continue to surprise me with your words and rhyme and story twists! I thought it was gonna be happily ever after and it ends with \"victim and prey\" i mean, this is so good, it got me! Your talent knows no bounds, sir!
September 30th, 2023 08:33
Shadows
Christina8 said:
This is so detailed and outright splendid!! The horrors just in time for Halloween! Your first line just explodes and the rest follows suit. I just think your writing keeps getting better and better!!
September 29th, 2023 06:55
Christina8 said:
This is so detailed and outright splendid!! The horrors just in time for Halloween! Your first line just explodes and the rest follows suit. I just think your writing keeps getting better and better!!
September 29th, 2023 06:55
Fairest
Introverted Sage said:
When all hope is lost.. a kiss of life to thaw your frost.
Last stanza.. choice phrasing!
Great write!
September 28th, 2023 23:36
Introverted Sage said:
When all hope is lost.. a kiss of life to thaw your frost.
Last stanza.. choice phrasing!
Great write!
September 28th, 2023 23:36
Magic
Laylemon said:
WOW! This one of the most visual poems I\'ve ever read. Hit straight to my heart. Amazing work!
September 28th, 2023 08:42
Laylemon said:
WOW! This one of the most visual poems I\'ve ever read. Hit straight to my heart. Amazing work!
September 28th, 2023 08:42
Fairest
Christina8 said:
You could put this to song! Oh my goodness, this is great! I really enjoyed \"Nothing left but your breath bringing warmth to my frost\". It just speaks volumes in and of itself, so descriptive. Another great one!!
September 28th, 2023 07:43
Christina8 said:
You could put this to song! Oh my goodness, this is great! I really enjoyed \"Nothing left but your breath bringing warmth to my frost\". It just speaks volumes in and of itself, so descriptive. Another great one!!
September 28th, 2023 07:43
Fairest
BlessedbyGod said:
Maxine and Liz are right, I totally agree,
And the right lady will put retire the disguise and repair the broken mirror, making u feel like the great and talented man that u are!!! Hold on to her when she make her way to u!!!!she\'s a keeper!!!
Especially if she fixes what feels broken, like my husband did for me, the disguises are gone the mirrors are fixed , in whole, IM FIXED
September 28th, 2023 06:10
BlessedbyGod said:
Maxine and Liz are right, I totally agree,
And the right lady will put retire the disguise and repair the broken mirror, making u feel like the great and talented man that u are!!! Hold on to her when she make her way to u!!!!she\'s a keeper!!!
Especially if she fixes what feels broken, like my husband did for me, the disguises are gone the mirrors are fixed , in whole, IM FIXED
September 28th, 2023 06:10
Fairest
LIZ said:
Ripped open, torn apart, unrecognizable, camouflaged! Nothing changed....but...a breath...flowing tides, all that\'s left! Really love this one!!
September 28th, 2023 02:51
LIZ said:
Ripped open, torn apart, unrecognizable, camouflaged! Nothing changed....but...a breath...flowing tides, all that\'s left! Really love this one!!
September 28th, 2023 02:51
Issues
spook300 said:
Nice work, peto. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
September 27th, 2023 20:40
spook300 said:
Nice work, peto. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
September 27th, 2023 20:40
Issues
BlessedbyGod said:
It\'s great peto!
That\'s how depression and anxiety feels, like everyone and everything are against u and nothing can break the chains,
Great piece my friend!!
September 27th, 2023 13:33
BlessedbyGod said:
It\'s great peto!
That\'s how depression and anxiety feels, like everyone and everything are against u and nothing can break the chains,
Great piece my friend!!
September 27th, 2023 13:33
Issues
Christina8 said:
So I know you said you were writing from a prompt but this is really powerful stuff! I mean bits and pieces will be relatable to a lot of people. And why is there such a stigma around mental health?? Really, great job!!
September 27th, 2023 13:07
Christina8 said:
So I know you said you were writing from a prompt but this is really powerful stuff! I mean bits and pieces will be relatable to a lot of people. And why is there such a stigma around mental health?? Really, great job!!
September 27th, 2023 13:07
Fiery
Introverted Sage said:
Strikes a chord.
She sounds like a beast!
\'Body language that\'s speaking in tongues as a guide\'
Sounds like spot on interpretations.
Nice write!
September 27th, 2023 01:57
Introverted Sage said:
Strikes a chord.
She sounds like a beast!
\'Body language that\'s speaking in tongues as a guide\'
Sounds like spot on interpretations.
Nice write!
September 27th, 2023 01:57
Fiery
LIZ said:
My Lord! This is incredible! After enduring all that suffering....pain, anger, tears......being processed, still, there\'s that undeniable fire! There\'s so much rawness and depth here! I take off my hat to you!! Wow!!
September 26th, 2023 12:25
LIZ said:
My Lord! This is incredible! After enduring all that suffering....pain, anger, tears......being processed, still, there\'s that undeniable fire! There\'s so much rawness and depth here! I take off my hat to you!! Wow!!
September 26th, 2023 12:25
Fiery
Christina8 said:
Oh my God. This is exquisite poetry!! This is so deep but so true for so many people...\"welcomed into the world with a slap on the ass\" actually made me smile....\"Brutalized by beatings she\'s taken in stride...been there. You have really done a fabulous job on the cadence and rhyme but beyond that, the meaning is so deep! Thanks Stevie!
September 26th, 2023 12:14
Christina8 said:
Oh my God. This is exquisite poetry!! This is so deep but so true for so many people...\"welcomed into the world with a slap on the ass\" actually made me smile....\"Brutalized by beatings she\'s taken in stride...been there. You have really done a fabulous job on the cadence and rhyme but beyond that, the meaning is so deep! Thanks Stevie!
September 26th, 2023 12:14
Funeral
LIZ said:
Goth at its finest!! \"Lust pins me with her six inch heels\" being my favorite line!! No surprise there!! Ummm inner demons...some that live with us...some from the past. But they all tend to peak their big head from the corners of our minds. And many times reflect like a mirror into our bodies. Ohhhh and test us...harshly! But hell, welcome! Burn 🔥 🔥 Put them all on display!! A fucking blood fest!! We must savor them...painfully...hoping for release at the end of their fete. Hoping for....a little peace!! MORTALITY at its peak! ⚰️ ⚰️ ⚰️
September 26th, 2023 00:58
LIZ said:
Goth at its finest!! \"Lust pins me with her six inch heels\" being my favorite line!! No surprise there!! Ummm inner demons...some that live with us...some from the past. But they all tend to peak their big head from the corners of our minds. And many times reflect like a mirror into our bodies. Ohhhh and test us...harshly! But hell, welcome! Burn 🔥 🔥 Put them all on display!! A fucking blood fest!! We must savor them...painfully...hoping for release at the end of their fete. Hoping for....a little peace!! MORTALITY at its peak! ⚰️ ⚰️ ⚰️
September 26th, 2023 00:58
Funeral
Introverted Sage said:
Seeing our true reflection can bring out visceral reactions.
\' Mortality for he who wins\'
The heart always knows.
Great write!
September 26th, 2023 00:29
Introverted Sage said:
Seeing our true reflection can bring out visceral reactions.
\' Mortality for he who wins\'
The heart always knows.
Great write!
September 26th, 2023 00:29
Funeral
Christina8 said:
Almost got all of the seven deadly sins! This is a stellar poem, love the rhyme scheme! So glad you are feeling better..
September 25th, 2023 16:29
Christina8 said:
Almost got all of the seven deadly sins! This is a stellar poem, love the rhyme scheme! So glad you are feeling better..
September 25th, 2023 16:29
OP
Christina8 said:
Quite the story of fear and more obviously, surgery. If so, just know for whatever reason you\'ve been gone, you have been terribly missed!
September 23rd, 2023 18:14
Christina8 said:
Quite the story of fear and more obviously, surgery. If so, just know for whatever reason you\'ve been gone, you have been terribly missed!
September 23rd, 2023 18:14
OP
Parisab said:
Your gentle heart is beating strong I hope-whomever the angel was, the surgeon or a loved one, it is good that she made a connection with care and concern-We hope that all is well Peto…
September 23rd, 2023 02:10
Parisab said:
Your gentle heart is beating strong I hope-whomever the angel was, the surgeon or a loved one, it is good that she made a connection with care and concern-We hope that all is well Peto…
September 23rd, 2023 02:10
OP
Teddy.15 said:
Braveheart literally, I hope it\'s all over now, rebuilding of a new and stronger heart to go with your poetic soul. ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 01:25
Teddy.15 said:
Braveheart literally, I hope it\'s all over now, rebuilding of a new and stronger heart to go with your poetic soul. ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 01:25
OP
Bobby O said:
The whole piece was great and many lines are worthy of quote but that last line , and how cool is it the have the very last really nail it, wraps up perfectly.
Too cool
September 22nd, 2023 21:23
Bobby O said:
The whole piece was great and many lines are worthy of quote but that last line , and how cool is it the have the very last really nail it, wraps up perfectly.
Too cool
September 22nd, 2023 21:23
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