Comments received on poems by peto
Fairest
LIZ said:
Ripped open, torn apart, unrecognizable, camouflaged! Nothing changed....but...a breath...flowing tides, all that\'s left! Really love this one!!
September 28th, 2023 02:51
LIZ said:
Ripped open, torn apart, unrecognizable, camouflaged! Nothing changed....but...a breath...flowing tides, all that\'s left! Really love this one!!
September 28th, 2023 02:51
Issues
spook300 said:
Nice work, peto. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
September 27th, 2023 20:40
spook300 said:
Nice work, peto. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
September 27th, 2023 20:40
Issues
BlessedbyGod said:
It\'s great peto!
That\'s how depression and anxiety feels, like everyone and everything are against u and nothing can break the chains,
Great piece my friend!!
September 27th, 2023 13:33
BlessedbyGod said:
It\'s great peto!
That\'s how depression and anxiety feels, like everyone and everything are against u and nothing can break the chains,
Great piece my friend!!
September 27th, 2023 13:33
Issues
Christina8 said:
So I know you said you were writing from a prompt but this is really powerful stuff! I mean bits and pieces will be relatable to a lot of people. And why is there such a stigma around mental health?? Really, great job!!
September 27th, 2023 13:07
Christina8 said:
So I know you said you were writing from a prompt but this is really powerful stuff! I mean bits and pieces will be relatable to a lot of people. And why is there such a stigma around mental health?? Really, great job!!
September 27th, 2023 13:07
Fiery
Introverted Sage said:
Strikes a chord.
She sounds like a beast!
\'Body language that\'s speaking in tongues as a guide\'
Sounds like spot on interpretations.
Nice write!
September 27th, 2023 01:57
Introverted Sage said:
Strikes a chord.
She sounds like a beast!
\'Body language that\'s speaking in tongues as a guide\'
Sounds like spot on interpretations.
Nice write!
September 27th, 2023 01:57
Fiery
LIZ said:
My Lord! This is incredible! After enduring all that suffering....pain, anger, tears......being processed, still, there\'s that undeniable fire! There\'s so much rawness and depth here! I take off my hat to you!! Wow!!
September 26th, 2023 12:25
LIZ said:
My Lord! This is incredible! After enduring all that suffering....pain, anger, tears......being processed, still, there\'s that undeniable fire! There\'s so much rawness and depth here! I take off my hat to you!! Wow!!
September 26th, 2023 12:25
Fiery
Christina8 said:
Oh my God. This is exquisite poetry!! This is so deep but so true for so many people...\"welcomed into the world with a slap on the ass\" actually made me smile....\"Brutalized by beatings she\'s taken in stride...been there. You have really done a fabulous job on the cadence and rhyme but beyond that, the meaning is so deep! Thanks Stevie!
September 26th, 2023 12:14
Christina8 said:
Oh my God. This is exquisite poetry!! This is so deep but so true for so many people...\"welcomed into the world with a slap on the ass\" actually made me smile....\"Brutalized by beatings she\'s taken in stride...been there. You have really done a fabulous job on the cadence and rhyme but beyond that, the meaning is so deep! Thanks Stevie!
September 26th, 2023 12:14
Funeral
LIZ said:
Goth at its finest!! \"Lust pins me with her six inch heels\" being my favorite line!! No surprise there!! Ummm inner demons...some that live with us...some from the past. But they all tend to peak their big head from the corners of our minds. And many times reflect like a mirror into our bodies. Ohhhh and test us...harshly! But hell, welcome! Burn 🔥 🔥 Put them all on display!! A fucking blood fest!! We must savor them...painfully...hoping for release at the end of their fete. Hoping for....a little peace!! MORTALITY at its peak! ⚰️ ⚰️ ⚰️
September 26th, 2023 00:58
LIZ said:
Goth at its finest!! \"Lust pins me with her six inch heels\" being my favorite line!! No surprise there!! Ummm inner demons...some that live with us...some from the past. But they all tend to peak their big head from the corners of our minds. And many times reflect like a mirror into our bodies. Ohhhh and test us...harshly! But hell, welcome! Burn 🔥 🔥 Put them all on display!! A fucking blood fest!! We must savor them...painfully...hoping for release at the end of their fete. Hoping for....a little peace!! MORTALITY at its peak! ⚰️ ⚰️ ⚰️
September 26th, 2023 00:58
Funeral
Introverted Sage said:
Seeing our true reflection can bring out visceral reactions.
\' Mortality for he who wins\'
The heart always knows.
Great write!
September 26th, 2023 00:29
Introverted Sage said:
Seeing our true reflection can bring out visceral reactions.
\' Mortality for he who wins\'
The heart always knows.
Great write!
September 26th, 2023 00:29
Funeral
Christina8 said:
Almost got all of the seven deadly sins! This is a stellar poem, love the rhyme scheme! So glad you are feeling better..
September 25th, 2023 16:29
Christina8 said:
Almost got all of the seven deadly sins! This is a stellar poem, love the rhyme scheme! So glad you are feeling better..
September 25th, 2023 16:29
OP
Christina8 said:
Quite the story of fear and more obviously, surgery. If so, just know for whatever reason you\'ve been gone, you have been terribly missed!
September 23rd, 2023 18:14
Christina8 said:
Quite the story of fear and more obviously, surgery. If so, just know for whatever reason you\'ve been gone, you have been terribly missed!
September 23rd, 2023 18:14
OP
Parisab said:
Your gentle heart is beating strong I hope-whomever the angel was, the surgeon or a loved one, it is good that she made a connection with care and concern-We hope that all is well Peto…
September 23rd, 2023 02:10
Parisab said:
Your gentle heart is beating strong I hope-whomever the angel was, the surgeon or a loved one, it is good that she made a connection with care and concern-We hope that all is well Peto…
September 23rd, 2023 02:10
OP
Teddy.15 said:
Braveheart literally, I hope it\'s all over now, rebuilding of a new and stronger heart to go with your poetic soul. ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 01:25
Teddy.15 said:
Braveheart literally, I hope it\'s all over now, rebuilding of a new and stronger heart to go with your poetic soul. ❤️
September 23rd, 2023 01:25
OP
Bobby O said:
The whole piece was great and many lines are worthy of quote but that last line , and how cool is it the have the very last really nail it, wraps up perfectly.
Too cool
September 22nd, 2023 21:23
Bobby O said:
The whole piece was great and many lines are worthy of quote but that last line , and how cool is it the have the very last really nail it, wraps up perfectly.
Too cool
September 22nd, 2023 21:23
OP
LIZ said:
Painful to read. Hope to hear back from you soon! The way I see it, there\'s a \"glue\" holding you together! Through darkness ...a constant....that burns any fear. 💙
September 22nd, 2023 17:16
LIZ said:
Painful to read. Hope to hear back from you soon! The way I see it, there\'s a \"glue\" holding you together! Through darkness ...a constant....that burns any fear. 💙
September 22nd, 2023 17:16
OP
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, what kind of surgery?? Hopefully not to serious, you have my prayers
September 22nd, 2023 15:12
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, what kind of surgery?? Hopefully not to serious, you have my prayers
September 22nd, 2023 15:12
Bloodshot
Introverted Sage said:
The way you weave your words is so magical.
Perhaps sharing from the heart is what makes your poems so captivating..
I appreciate the emotion.
At any rate.. this one\'s another great!
Thanks for sharing!
September 16th, 2023 17:19
Introverted Sage said:
The way you weave your words is so magical.
Perhaps sharing from the heart is what makes your poems so captivating..
I appreciate the emotion.
At any rate.. this one\'s another great!
Thanks for sharing!
September 16th, 2023 17:19
Delights
lenore_inNeverland said:
Officially my favourite poem.
\"Her picture shone out from my screen
The vulnerable poetic queen \"
especially these lines- they speak wonders
September 16th, 2023 10:07
lenore_inNeverland said:
Officially my favourite poem.
\"Her picture shone out from my screen
The vulnerable poetic queen \"
especially these lines- they speak wonders
September 16th, 2023 10:07
Bloodshot
lenore_inNeverland said:
\"A thesaurus reduced
To a blank empty page
Stained by tears from my red bloodshot eye \"
I have no words to express the amount of amazing-ness that this poem beholds within itself! This is beautiful
September 16th, 2023 10:05
lenore_inNeverland said:
\"A thesaurus reduced
To a blank empty page
Stained by tears from my red bloodshot eye \"
I have no words to express the amount of amazing-ness that this poem beholds within itself! This is beautiful
September 16th, 2023 10:05
Bloodshot
Christina8 said:
Is this a new rhyme scheme? Love it! I really enjoyed the last stanza, you show so much with your amazing imagery! Thanks for improving my Saturday!!
September 16th, 2023 07:58
Christina8 said:
Is this a new rhyme scheme? Love it! I really enjoyed the last stanza, you show so much with your amazing imagery! Thanks for improving my Saturday!!
September 16th, 2023 07:58
Bloodshot
BlessedbyGod said:
Incredible piece Peto,
Absolutely incredible 👏 🙌 😍
September 16th, 2023 07:56
BlessedbyGod said:
Incredible piece Peto,
Absolutely incredible 👏 🙌 😍
September 16th, 2023 07:56
Bloodshot
Teddy.15 said:
The moon and I absolutely gorgeous dear Peto your imagery is truly breathtaking. 💖
September 16th, 2023 06:28
Teddy.15 said:
The moon and I absolutely gorgeous dear Peto your imagery is truly breathtaking. 💖
September 16th, 2023 06:28
Bloodshot
Caring dove said:
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing ) we all need that something to calm us and make us feel better .. and nature can really help how we feel
A very good writing .. which I liked reading
I especially like the first verse .. beautiful words
September 16th, 2023 05:51
Caring dove said:
An engaging interesting and nicely expressed writing ) we all need that something to calm us and make us feel better .. and nature can really help how we feel
A very good writing .. which I liked reading
I especially like the first verse .. beautiful words
September 16th, 2023 05:51
Missing
Niki Oz said:
I am not as great at compliments as others but I could literally break this down line for line and explain such emotion into each. As if I could tell whole heartfelt stories with each and every one. That is an accomplishment in itself. To put whole chapters at times into just a few words and it be so profound. This is an amazing job. I could literally talk about it for hours. Amazingly written.
September 15th, 2023 19:07
Niki Oz said:
I am not as great at compliments as others but I could literally break this down line for line and explain such emotion into each. As if I could tell whole heartfelt stories with each and every one. That is an accomplishment in itself. To put whole chapters at times into just a few words and it be so profound. This is an amazing job. I could literally talk about it for hours. Amazingly written.
September 15th, 2023 19:07
Delights
Introverted Sage said:
The flow, rhyme and style of this is so intricate and exquisite!
Your words seem so in-tune with.. like a behind the scenes look at your muses life.
Great write!
September 15th, 2023 16:01
Introverted Sage said:
The flow, rhyme and style of this is so intricate and exquisite!
Your words seem so in-tune with.. like a behind the scenes look at your muses life.
Great write!
September 15th, 2023 16:01
Delights
Parisab said:
So many classic movie icons and even a modern Angelina Jolie who is multidimensional and interesting, as a woman and actress -but Peto’s poems have the sophistication of finding multiplicity in any woman …
September 15th, 2023 15:49
Parisab said:
So many classic movie icons and even a modern Angelina Jolie who is multidimensional and interesting, as a woman and actress -but Peto’s poems have the sophistication of finding multiplicity in any woman …
September 15th, 2023 15:49
Magic
Introverted Sage said:
\'A walk in my sleep joins a run in my dream\'
like a fated remembrance almost turned fatal remembrance or wounded by remembrance of past selves and ended in a bit of bliss.
mystical write!
September 15th, 2023 14:32
Introverted Sage said:
\'A walk in my sleep joins a run in my dream\'
like a fated remembrance almost turned fatal remembrance or wounded by remembrance of past selves and ended in a bit of bliss.
mystical write!
September 15th, 2023 14:32
Delights
Teddy.15 said:
Peto why thank you lol 🤣 on a serious note I\'m getting to know you and I\'m guessing you are not such a fan of free verse but I am a huge fan of rhyming rhythm and this is wonderful. Biggest of hugs this Friday evening my dear Peto. Who ever she be I reckon she is your muse! 💖
September 15th, 2023 11:10
Teddy.15 said:
Peto why thank you lol 🤣 on a serious note I\'m getting to know you and I\'m guessing you are not such a fan of free verse but I am a huge fan of rhyming rhythm and this is wonderful. Biggest of hugs this Friday evening my dear Peto. Who ever she be I reckon she is your muse! 💖
September 15th, 2023 11:10
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