Comments received on poems by peto
Potential
Christina8 said:
I really like this one! The potential is there for all of us....why don\'t we take advantage of it?? Love the flowing lines and content....Christina
October 12th, 2023 11:03
Christina8 said:
I really like this one! The potential is there for all of us....why don\'t we take advantage of it?? Love the flowing lines and content....Christina
October 12th, 2023 11:03
Teen nightmare
Bobby O said:
Way to present strong phrase that attempts to diminish the shameful glorification of brutality. Thanks for this piece. Great job.
October 11th, 2023 12:31
Bobby O said:
Way to present strong phrase that attempts to diminish the shameful glorification of brutality. Thanks for this piece. Great job.
October 11th, 2023 12:31
Teen nightmare
LIZ said:
This one\'s very different from your usual, and I love it. Made me think of a young person with dreams, who ends up facing the realities of life. Can\'t hide, and even when fighting, gets hit hard. So…..say what you mean, and mean what you say….NOW. Because eventually, death is at our doorstep, and then, there\'s no point. Just thinking out loud!! Welcome back!!!
October 11th, 2023 08:09
LIZ said:
This one\'s very different from your usual, and I love it. Made me think of a young person with dreams, who ends up facing the realities of life. Can\'t hide, and even when fighting, gets hit hard. So…..say what you mean, and mean what you say….NOW. Because eventually, death is at our doorstep, and then, there\'s no point. Just thinking out loud!! Welcome back!!!
October 11th, 2023 08:09
Teen nightmare
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, so very powerful peto,
I can relate to this piece with certain people in my life, Brought tears to my eyes,
October 11th, 2023 06:24
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, so very powerful peto,
I can relate to this piece with certain people in my life, Brought tears to my eyes,
October 11th, 2023 06:24
Teen nightmare
Christina8 said:
really great poem/story you have here. (btw I\'m so happy you are back!) Did you shake things up a bit with your rhyme scheme? I like it a lot! You have a way with words and this is written really well. Great job!
October 11th, 2023 06:15
Christina8 said:
really great poem/story you have here. (btw I\'m so happy you are back!) Did you shake things up a bit with your rhyme scheme? I like it a lot! You have a way with words and this is written really well. Great job!
October 11th, 2023 06:15
Genius
lenore_inNeverland said:
We can see a Genius penning the words for the other geniuses of the world!
Amazing peto!
October 5th, 2023 09:31
lenore_inNeverland said:
We can see a Genius penning the words for the other geniuses of the world!
Amazing peto!
October 5th, 2023 09:31
Genius
Introverted Sage said:
This is such a Genius write!
And the etymology of the word.. with a reference to an inborn, tutelary or guardian spirit.. \'that no one else sees\' . Like a bird\'s eye view... So many ways this takes my mind! Thanks for sharing
October 3rd, 2023 01:47
Introverted Sage said:
This is such a Genius write!
And the etymology of the word.. with a reference to an inborn, tutelary or guardian spirit.. \'that no one else sees\' . Like a bird\'s eye view... So many ways this takes my mind! Thanks for sharing
October 3rd, 2023 01:47
Colour
anji x said:
Peto.
I really felt this writing.
Thank you for sharing.
anji
October 2nd, 2023 22:03
anji x said:
Peto.
I really felt this writing.
Thank you for sharing.
anji
October 2nd, 2023 22:03
Fairest
Carly said:
The rhythm you have with such metres is truly something and your message as well, it’s something to be admired, love 💕
October 2nd, 2023 13:57
Carly said:
The rhythm you have with such metres is truly something and your message as well, it’s something to be admired, love 💕
October 2nd, 2023 13:57
Shadows
Carly said:
I love the rhyming scheme in this, something I would love to try; thank you for inspiring me, also for such an intriguing story
October 2nd, 2023 12:15
Carly said:
I love the rhyming scheme in this, something I would love to try; thank you for inspiring me, also for such an intriguing story
October 2nd, 2023 12:15
Genius
Christina8 said:
\"\"Talent hits all the target that no one else can Genius hit those that no one else sees\" I think your poems are genius! This one was a thinker! As always, fantastic job, Stevie!
October 2nd, 2023 08:53
Christina8 said:
\"\"Talent hits all the target that no one else can Genius hit those that no one else sees\" I think your poems are genius! This one was a thinker! As always, fantastic job, Stevie!
October 2nd, 2023 08:53
Genius
LIZ said:
I love this quote \"Talent hits a target no one else can hit. Genius hits a target no one else can see.\"--you can have talent and do well...and achieve things others may not be able to; but being genius/intelligent helps us reach for things within our imagination others can\'t even see. Had me thinking hard this morning! Thank you!
October 2nd, 2023 02:17
LIZ said:
I love this quote \"Talent hits a target no one else can hit. Genius hits a target no one else can see.\"--you can have talent and do well...and achieve things others may not be able to; but being genius/intelligent helps us reach for things within our imagination others can\'t even see. Had me thinking hard this morning! Thank you!
October 2nd, 2023 02:17
First
Introverted Sage said:
You certainly have a way with words and your writing is so captivating! Seems like the charming and wooing of a vampire on unsuspecting prey.
The variety in your writing is so refreshing.
Great write!
October 1st, 2023 21:29
Introverted Sage said:
You certainly have a way with words and your writing is so captivating! Seems like the charming and wooing of a vampire on unsuspecting prey.
The variety in your writing is so refreshing.
Great write!
October 1st, 2023 21:29
First
Bella Shepard said:
Such an intriguing poem, I toyed with the question of who really ends up being victim or prey. Throwing open the curtains, is she revealing something that was concealed? Her abundance snatched at by his unnatural greed, her innocence? A romantic mystery of the first order.
September 30th, 2023 14:11
Bella Shepard said:
Such an intriguing poem, I toyed with the question of who really ends up being victim or prey. Throwing open the curtains, is she revealing something that was concealed? Her abundance snatched at by his unnatural greed, her innocence? A romantic mystery of the first order.
September 30th, 2023 14:11
First
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend, I hope that this day comes true for you both!!
September 30th, 2023 12:00
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece my friend, I hope that this day comes true for you both!!
September 30th, 2023 12:00
First
peto said:
You give me too much credit Christina
I never know where I\'m going when I start
extremely grateful as always
Many thanks
September 30th, 2023 08:53
peto said:
You give me too much credit Christina
I never know where I\'m going when I start
extremely grateful as always
Many thanks
September 30th, 2023 08:53
First
Christina8 said:
OMG you continue to surprise me with your words and rhyme and story twists! I thought it was gonna be happily ever after and it ends with \"victim and prey\" i mean, this is so good, it got me! Your talent knows no bounds, sir!
September 30th, 2023 08:33
Christina8 said:
OMG you continue to surprise me with your words and rhyme and story twists! I thought it was gonna be happily ever after and it ends with \"victim and prey\" i mean, this is so good, it got me! Your talent knows no bounds, sir!
September 30th, 2023 08:33
Shadows
Christina8 said:
This is so detailed and outright splendid!! The horrors just in time for Halloween! Your first line just explodes and the rest follows suit. I just think your writing keeps getting better and better!!
September 29th, 2023 06:55
Christina8 said:
This is so detailed and outright splendid!! The horrors just in time for Halloween! Your first line just explodes and the rest follows suit. I just think your writing keeps getting better and better!!
September 29th, 2023 06:55
Fairest
Introverted Sage said:
When all hope is lost.. a kiss of life to thaw your frost.
Last stanza.. choice phrasing!
Great write!
September 28th, 2023 23:36
Introverted Sage said:
When all hope is lost.. a kiss of life to thaw your frost.
Last stanza.. choice phrasing!
Great write!
September 28th, 2023 23:36
Magic
Laylemon said:
WOW! This one of the most visual poems I\'ve ever read. Hit straight to my heart. Amazing work!
September 28th, 2023 08:42
Laylemon said:
WOW! This one of the most visual poems I\'ve ever read. Hit straight to my heart. Amazing work!
September 28th, 2023 08:42
Fairest
Christina8 said:
You could put this to song! Oh my goodness, this is great! I really enjoyed \"Nothing left but your breath bringing warmth to my frost\". It just speaks volumes in and of itself, so descriptive. Another great one!!
September 28th, 2023 07:43
Christina8 said:
You could put this to song! Oh my goodness, this is great! I really enjoyed \"Nothing left but your breath bringing warmth to my frost\". It just speaks volumes in and of itself, so descriptive. Another great one!!
September 28th, 2023 07:43
Fairest
BlessedbyGod said:
Maxine and Liz are right, I totally agree,
And the right lady will put retire the disguise and repair the broken mirror, making u feel like the great and talented man that u are!!! Hold on to her when she make her way to u!!!!she\'s a keeper!!!
Especially if she fixes what feels broken, like my husband did for me, the disguises are gone the mirrors are fixed , in whole, IM FIXED
September 28th, 2023 06:10
BlessedbyGod said:
Maxine and Liz are right, I totally agree,
And the right lady will put retire the disguise and repair the broken mirror, making u feel like the great and talented man that u are!!! Hold on to her when she make her way to u!!!!she\'s a keeper!!!
Especially if she fixes what feels broken, like my husband did for me, the disguises are gone the mirrors are fixed , in whole, IM FIXED
September 28th, 2023 06:10
Fairest
LIZ said:
Ripped open, torn apart, unrecognizable, camouflaged! Nothing changed....but...a breath...flowing tides, all that\'s left! Really love this one!!
September 28th, 2023 02:51
LIZ said:
Ripped open, torn apart, unrecognizable, camouflaged! Nothing changed....but...a breath...flowing tides, all that\'s left! Really love this one!!
September 28th, 2023 02:51
Issues
spook300 said:
Nice work, peto. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
September 27th, 2023 20:40
spook300 said:
Nice work, peto. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
September 27th, 2023 20:40
Issues
BlessedbyGod said:
It\'s great peto!
That\'s how depression and anxiety feels, like everyone and everything are against u and nothing can break the chains,
Great piece my friend!!
September 27th, 2023 13:33
BlessedbyGod said:
It\'s great peto!
That\'s how depression and anxiety feels, like everyone and everything are against u and nothing can break the chains,
Great piece my friend!!
September 27th, 2023 13:33
Issues
Christina8 said:
So I know you said you were writing from a prompt but this is really powerful stuff! I mean bits and pieces will be relatable to a lot of people. And why is there such a stigma around mental health?? Really, great job!!
September 27th, 2023 13:07
Christina8 said:
So I know you said you were writing from a prompt but this is really powerful stuff! I mean bits and pieces will be relatable to a lot of people. And why is there such a stigma around mental health?? Really, great job!!
September 27th, 2023 13:07
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