Comments received on poems by peto
Fresh
Syd said:
Hi peto,
There\'s a lot to unpack in this piece and it\'s expertly crafted by the way. Childhood abuse can certainly ruin a person. I hope the narrator finds a way to her heart.
Top notch poetry - Syd 🍄
September 3rd, 2026 12:18
Syd said:
Hi peto,
There\'s a lot to unpack in this piece and it\'s expertly crafted by the way. Childhood abuse can certainly ruin a person. I hope the narrator finds a way to her heart.
Top notch poetry - Syd 🍄
September 3rd, 2026 12:18
Fresh
Friendship said:
A powerful write. Your poem centers on self-harm, psychological struggles, and the impact of past abuse. You highlight the protagonist\'s fight against her demons and the journey toward reclaiming her identity and emotional health.
August 31st, 2026 11:58
Friendship said:
A powerful write. Your poem centers on self-harm, psychological struggles, and the impact of past abuse. You highlight the protagonist\'s fight against her demons and the journey toward reclaiming her identity and emotional health.
August 31st, 2026 11:58
Fresh
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the rhyme scheme that is unusual but growing more common. The message was touching and the meter was good. Nicely done my friend a fave
August 31st, 2026 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
I loved the rhyme scheme that is unusual but growing more common. The message was touching and the meter was good. Nicely done my friend a fave
August 31st, 2026 11:29
Bone dry
Syd said:
Hi peto,
There\'s plenty of heartbreak running through this piece but with some wonderfully strange lines along the way. Great rhyming sequence as always.
- Syd 🍄
August 30th, 2026 10:39
Syd said:
Hi peto,
There\'s plenty of heartbreak running through this piece but with some wonderfully strange lines along the way. Great rhyming sequence as always.
- Syd 🍄
August 30th, 2026 10:39
Bone dry
Friendship said:
Lovely written.. The imagery you painted of a genie and a nuclear plant, to me, suggests a sense of lost potential and the destructive nature of love. Your poem seems to reflect on the complexities of love, the pain of heartbreak, and the hope for healing and lasting companionship.
August 29th, 2026 11:56
Friendship said:
Lovely written.. The imagery you painted of a genie and a nuclear plant, to me, suggests a sense of lost potential and the destructive nature of love. Your poem seems to reflect on the complexities of love, the pain of heartbreak, and the hope for healing and lasting companionship.
August 29th, 2026 11:56
Bone dry
sorenbarrett said:
A love that took all and left only a shell. Nicely written Peto a sad write
August 29th, 2026 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
A love that took all and left only a shell. Nicely written Peto a sad write
August 29th, 2026 11:25
Who she is
Syd said:
Hi peto
This is a lovely tribute write with plenty of warmth in it. I like how it\'s not just about physical beauty but kindness and compassion also. Great layout and rhyme too.
- Syd 🍄
August 29th, 2026 08:55
Syd said:
Hi peto
This is a lovely tribute write with plenty of warmth in it. I like how it\'s not just about physical beauty but kindness and compassion also. Great layout and rhyme too.
- Syd 🍄
August 29th, 2026 08:55
Who she is
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition of value and gratitude in a romance. Nicely written it reads well with rhyme and good flow. Nicely done my friend
August 28th, 2026 16:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of recognition of value and gratitude in a romance. Nicely written it reads well with rhyme and good flow. Nicely done my friend
August 28th, 2026 16:46
Judged
Syd said:
The first stanza really pulled me in. Brilliantly written with excellent rhyme as always peto.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 06:29
Syd said:
The first stanza really pulled me in. Brilliantly written with excellent rhyme as always peto.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 06:29
Judged
sorenbarrett said:
A type of dystopia emerges in this poem that seems 1984 or Brave New World. Well done
August 7th, 2026 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
A type of dystopia emerges in this poem that seems 1984 or Brave New World. Well done
August 7th, 2026 11:46
Mummy
Syd said:
A brilliant poem peto 👏
My mother had her own struggles but mainly alcohol, not valium. Quite a relatable read. My favourite stanza beow.
\"The kids are not sure what to do
As mummy necks another blue
Her defects heading up the queue
To surf upon her sigh\"
- Syd 🍄
August 7th, 2026 05:48
Syd said:
A brilliant poem peto 👏
My mother had her own struggles but mainly alcohol, not valium. Quite a relatable read. My favourite stanza beow.
\"The kids are not sure what to do
As mummy necks another blue
Her defects heading up the queue
To surf upon her sigh\"
- Syd 🍄
August 7th, 2026 05:48
Perfect stranger
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of a relationship brief though it might be. Well written
August 5th, 2026 09:57
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of a relationship brief though it might be. Well written
August 5th, 2026 09:57
Perfect stranger
Syd said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this peto. An excellent write with excellent rhyme as always.
- Syd 🍄
August 5th, 2026 09:38
Syd said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this peto. An excellent write with excellent rhyme as always.
- Syd 🍄
August 5th, 2026 09:38
Mummy
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, but how many kids bring up adults out there, more than you think.
We can all say, unfit mother, but that\'s never the real story.
Some just can\'t catch a break in this life, and that\'s the real truth.
August 5th, 2026 05:29
Paul Bell said:
It is strange, but how many kids bring up adults out there, more than you think.
We can all say, unfit mother, but that\'s never the real story.
Some just can\'t catch a break in this life, and that\'s the real truth.
August 5th, 2026 05:29
Mummy
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend. Your poem explores the struggles of a mother dealing with emotional pain and loneliness while trying to maintain hope for a better future for her child. You highlight the internal battles faced by individuals in distress and the importance of love and connection as a means of overcoming hardship.
August 4th, 2026 09:13
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend. Your poem explores the struggles of a mother dealing with emotional pain and loneliness while trying to maintain hope for a better future for her child. You highlight the internal battles faced by individuals in distress and the importance of love and connection as a means of overcoming hardship.
August 4th, 2026 09:13
Have you
MaxSmith said:
Beautiful read Stevie, it flowed effortlessly.
\"To place where the sun kisses toes in the sand\"
Such a stunning visual for a finish.
August 3rd, 2026 12:00
MaxSmith said:
Beautiful read Stevie, it flowed effortlessly.
\"To place where the sun kisses toes in the sand\"
Such a stunning visual for a finish.
August 3rd, 2026 12:00
No Scotland no party
maydanae said:
And thanks for coming to the great state of MA we all love you guys! Sorry Boston didn\'t have more beer...
August 2nd, 2026 18:56
maydanae said:
And thanks for coming to the great state of MA we all love you guys! Sorry Boston didn\'t have more beer...
August 2nd, 2026 18:56
Have you
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this poem peto. Excellent rhyme as always. I loved the part about the matching cushion to the electric chair.
Great stuff 👏
- Syd 🍄
August 2nd, 2026 03:28
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this poem peto. Excellent rhyme as always. I loved the part about the matching cushion to the electric chair.
Great stuff 👏
- Syd 🍄
August 2nd, 2026 03:28
Have you
Paul Bell said:
Being human, we tend to push the bounderies, and that usually brings its own problems.
Mind you, sometimes being in the wrong place can change your life for the good.
Usually you just get shot though.
August 1st, 2026 04:16
Paul Bell said:
Being human, we tend to push the bounderies, and that usually brings its own problems.
Mind you, sometimes being in the wrong place can change your life for the good.
Usually you just get shot though.
August 1st, 2026 04:16
Have you
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve been in the right place and the right time. Nicely done
July 31st, 2026 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve been in the right place and the right time. Nicely done
July 31st, 2026 12:03
Queenie
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. My friend, your poem delves into themes of heartache, the emotional toll of love lost, and the transformative power of hope. It personifies love as a “queen” who can both cause pain and ultimately lead to healing.
July 29th, 2026 13:58
Friendship said:
Beautifully written. My friend, your poem delves into themes of heartache, the emotional toll of love lost, and the transformative power of hope. It personifies love as a “queen” who can both cause pain and ultimately lead to healing.
July 29th, 2026 13:58
Queenie
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that well could be a song. Nicely written
July 29th, 2026 13:26
sorenbarrett said:
A great write that well could be a song. Nicely written
July 29th, 2026 13:26
Joe cool
Poetic Dan said:
Well that was a fresh morning read and the reason my 3rd and 4th children are homeschool. There\'s plenty of time to deal with the rest of our kind to find out the most kindness of you was lucky was in the nest. Keep up the write my friend
July 29th, 2026 03:31
Poetic Dan said:
Well that was a fresh morning read and the reason my 3rd and 4th children are homeschool. There\'s plenty of time to deal with the rest of our kind to find out the most kindness of you was lucky was in the nest. Keep up the write my friend
July 29th, 2026 03:31
Joe cool
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this peto. I love the tight rhyme sequence too. Quite a brutal write.
- Syd 🍄
July 19th, 2026 16:00
Syd said:
I really enjoyed this peto. I love the tight rhyme sequence too. Quite a brutal write.
- Syd 🍄
July 19th, 2026 16:00
Joe cool
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem delves into street life, personal conflict, and the impact of violence on both the perpetrator and the victim. You paint a vivid picture of a confrontation that escalates into lethal violence, highlighting themes of aggression, mortality, and the psychological scars that accompany such experiences.
July 19th, 2026 13:30
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem delves into street life, personal conflict, and the impact of violence on both the perpetrator and the victim. You paint a vivid picture of a confrontation that escalates into lethal violence, highlighting themes of aggression, mortality, and the psychological scars that accompany such experiences.
July 19th, 2026 13:30
Joe cool
sorenbarrett said:
At first this poem reminded me of my hippy era but then it turned more angry and violent. Well written
July 19th, 2026 13:29
sorenbarrett said:
At first this poem reminded me of my hippy era but then it turned more angry and violent. Well written
July 19th, 2026 13:29
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