Comments received on poems by peto
Swinger
sorenbarrett said:
This bears the feeling of an old hanging tune that speaks of dancing the Tyburn jig
July 1st, 2026 17:31
sorenbarrett said:
This bears the feeling of an old hanging tune that speaks of dancing the Tyburn jig
July 1st, 2026 17:31
Clipped
Syd said:
Brilliant peto. I love how you\'ve managed to get a Glasgow kiss in there too.
- Syd 🍄
June 30th, 2026 11:37
Syd said:
Brilliant peto. I love how you\'ve managed to get a Glasgow kiss in there too.
- Syd 🍄
June 30th, 2026 11:37
Clipped
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the instinct for survival and the complexity of human nature, highlighting how desperation can lead to unexpected outcomes.
June 29th, 2026 15:43
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the instinct for survival and the complexity of human nature, highlighting how desperation can lead to unexpected outcomes.
June 29th, 2026 15:43
Clipped
sorenbarrett said:
A most dramatic poem of life and death. An exciting write.
June 29th, 2026 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most dramatic poem of life and death. An exciting write.
June 29th, 2026 14:57
Ta Boston
Syd said:
Brilliant write 👏👏👏
Were you there in Boston? If not then this is written very well as if you were. I love the line about the traffic cone, lying with the dog getting fleas and many more. An all around excellent write!!
- Syd 🍄
June 27th, 2026 07:23
Syd said:
Brilliant write 👏👏👏
Were you there in Boston? If not then this is written very well as if you were. I love the line about the traffic cone, lying with the dog getting fleas and many more. An all around excellent write!!
- Syd 🍄
June 27th, 2026 07:23
Ta Boston
sorenbarrett said:
This reflects well the Scot\'s supporters of their world cup team in Boston. I have seen some cuts on the news and the general fun had. A lovely tribute piece.
June 24th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
This reflects well the Scot\'s supporters of their world cup team in Boston. I have seen some cuts on the news and the general fun had. A lovely tribute piece.
June 24th, 2026 04:02
Wild child
Paul Bell said:
The great thing with recovering addicts, they go on to help others do the same.
June 9th, 2026 08:17
Paul Bell said:
The great thing with recovering addicts, they go on to help others do the same.
June 9th, 2026 08:17
Wild child
Syd said:
Addiction, demons and recovery are some of my favourite topics as I can relate to them, going back a few years ago anyway. Nothing too serious, alcohol mainly. Glad all that\'s behind me now.
Great, well written poem Peto. I\'m also a sucker for a well rhyming piece.
- Syd
June 8th, 2026 14:41
Syd said:
Addiction, demons and recovery are some of my favourite topics as I can relate to them, going back a few years ago anyway. Nothing too serious, alcohol mainly. Glad all that\'s behind me now.
Great, well written poem Peto. I\'m also a sucker for a well rhyming piece.
- Syd
June 8th, 2026 14:41
Wild child
sorenbarrett said:
Love your rhyme scheme that fits this poem so well and that you have crafted perfectly with your meter. Very nicely done a fave
June 8th, 2026 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
Love your rhyme scheme that fits this poem so well and that you have crafted perfectly with your meter. Very nicely done a fave
June 8th, 2026 12:54
Candlewitch
Syd said:
Awesome writing. I love this rhyming scheme, it\'s so tight. I\'ve used the same sequence myself a few times.
Great stuff 👏
- Syd 🍄
June 7th, 2026 07:12
Syd said:
Awesome writing. I love this rhyming scheme, it\'s so tight. I\'ve used the same sequence myself a few times.
Great stuff 👏
- Syd 🍄
June 7th, 2026 07:12
No Scotland no party
Syd said:
Hi Peto, great poem.
I love true patriotism involving your beloved national team. I\'ll be hesitant to fly the England flag myself because the flag shaggers have hijacked it and turned it into a political symbol. Good luck in the world cup.
June 7th, 2026 07:10
Syd said:
Hi Peto, great poem.
I love true patriotism involving your beloved national team. I\'ll be hesitant to fly the England flag myself because the flag shaggers have hijacked it and turned it into a political symbol. Good luck in the world cup.
June 7th, 2026 07:10
No Scotland no party
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and engaging poem of a sport I love. Well written with wit and rhyme. Love the Scots although my ancestry is Irish I think a loose Scot snuck in some where along the line. Nothing better that the bagpipes unless they are too close to the bedroom window late at night or early morning. Good write
June 6th, 2026 15:06
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and engaging poem of a sport I love. Well written with wit and rhyme. Love the Scots although my ancestry is Irish I think a loose Scot snuck in some where along the line. Nothing better that the bagpipes unless they are too close to the bedroom window late at night or early morning. Good write
June 6th, 2026 15:06
Candlewitch
Neilton said:
Such a great rhyme here but also the words you used are so in the Halloween theme.Impressed as always
November 15th, 2025 08:27
Neilton said:
Such a great rhyme here but also the words you used are so in the Halloween theme.Impressed as always
November 15th, 2025 08:27
Candlewitch
Paul Bell said:
Dead annoyed that I bought all those goodies and not one witch or warlock, zombie chapped my door.
Was thinking of going out and grabbing some, then I realised you get arrested for that.
Be stuffing myself for the next week now.
November 1st, 2025 04:10
Paul Bell said:
Dead annoyed that I bought all those goodies and not one witch or warlock, zombie chapped my door.
Was thinking of going out and grabbing some, then I realised you get arrested for that.
Be stuffing myself for the next week now.
November 1st, 2025 04:10
Candlewitch
sorenbarrett said:
A fun Halloween read that has a most creative rhyme pattern. Nicely done and in style for the season with great images
October 31st, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
A fun Halloween read that has a most creative rhyme pattern. Nicely done and in style for the season with great images
October 31st, 2025 10:07
You dancing?
Christina8 said:
A very heartfelt read. Dating is so scary in this world isn\'t it? A poem worth the read. Love your writes!!!
October 31st, 2025 08:42
Christina8 said:
A very heartfelt read. Dating is so scary in this world isn\'t it? A poem worth the read. Love your writes!!!
October 31st, 2025 08:42
Bad blood
Christina8 said:
Bravo! Sorry I haven\'t been around to comment, I was so happy to see that you had written a poem for today when I went to this site. What a positively great poem for Halloween!! So descriptive and your rhyming is impeccable, a joy to read!!
October 30th, 2025 15:57
Christina8 said:
Bravo! Sorry I haven\'t been around to comment, I was so happy to see that you had written a poem for today when I went to this site. What a positively great poem for Halloween!! So descriptive and your rhyming is impeccable, a joy to read!!
October 30th, 2025 15:57
Bad blood
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes that sign can save your life, I\'m as bad as you.
That means they can go and eat lesser mortals, or lesser morsels.
October 30th, 2025 05:19
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes that sign can save your life, I\'m as bad as you.
That means they can go and eat lesser mortals, or lesser morsels.
October 30th, 2025 05:19
Bad blood
sorenbarrett said:
I like the wording and tone of this poem. Not only appropriate for the season but filled with a philosophical message that the evil has no interest in their own kind. Nicely crafted it reads well.
October 30th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
I like the wording and tone of this poem. Not only appropriate for the season but filled with a philosophical message that the evil has no interest in their own kind. Nicely crafted it reads well.
October 30th, 2025 05:07
Lunar
sorenbarrett said:
A great write for the Halloween season. This poem calls out of darkness with a howl. Lovely
October 29th, 2025 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great write for the Halloween season. This poem calls out of darkness with a howl. Lovely
October 29th, 2025 10:21
Goddess
NafisaSB said:
it does fit the week, and the month very well - a truly haunting poem -can almost visualize the night Goddess stalking around...
October 29th, 2025 07:29
NafisaSB said:
it does fit the week, and the month very well - a truly haunting poem -can almost visualize the night Goddess stalking around...
October 29th, 2025 07:29
Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem decorated with wonderful rhyme where the rhyme scheme is a delight. It tells its story well and entertains as well as fits the season
October 28th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem decorated with wonderful rhyme where the rhyme scheme is a delight. It tells its story well and entertains as well as fits the season
October 28th, 2025 05:40
Beth
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Halloween poem that I love the rhyme scheme in. It flows along and I\'m not sure it that last kiss is one of seduction or horror. Lovely my friend
October 27th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Halloween poem that I love the rhyme scheme in. It flows along and I\'m not sure it that last kiss is one of seduction or horror. Lovely my friend
October 27th, 2025 03:41
Goddess
rhmn_7 said:
What a beautifully written piece, but the last stanza did scare me a bit :)
October 26th, 2025 15:31
rhmn_7 said:
What a beautifully written piece, but the last stanza did scare me a bit :)
October 26th, 2025 15:31
Crunch
Friendship said:
Well done, my friend, your poem revolves around themes of fate, horror, and the consequences of confronting dark forces. The protagonist faces a dire and gruesome fate at the hands of a witch and demonic entities, ultimately leading to his demise.
October 26th, 2025 07:35
Friendship said:
Well done, my friend, your poem revolves around themes of fate, horror, and the consequences of confronting dark forces. The protagonist faces a dire and gruesome fate at the hands of a witch and demonic entities, ultimately leading to his demise.
October 26th, 2025 07:35
Crunch
Paul Bell said:
This is why I stay away from graveyards at this time of year.
Bad enough the dead walking about, but the devil with that big fork eating people, just not on.
October 26th, 2025 05:33
Paul Bell said:
This is why I stay away from graveyards at this time of year.
Bad enough the dead walking about, but the devil with that big fork eating people, just not on.
October 26th, 2025 05:33
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