Comments received on poems by peto
Murder
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of vengeance, loss, and the psychological turmoil that accompanies grief and the desire for retribution. The poet expresses a deep emotional struggle as they grapple with the murder of a friend, leading them to seek justice through violent means.
August 9th, 2025 15:58
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of vengeance, loss, and the psychological turmoil that accompanies grief and the desire for retribution. The poet expresses a deep emotional struggle as they grapple with the murder of a friend, leading them to seek justice through violent means.
August 9th, 2025 15:58
Murder
Poetic Licence said:
A well written with controlled anger detailing the reasons why vengeance will be delivered, a little cold and haunting in its feel, it gets its message across, nicely done
August 8th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
A well written with controlled anger detailing the reasons why vengeance will be delivered, a little cold and haunting in its feel, it gets its message across, nicely done
August 8th, 2025 06:01
Murder
sorenbarrett said:
A controlled but angry, threatening poem of vengeance and reprisal. It speaks powerfully and coldly. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A controlled but angry, threatening poem of vengeance and reprisal. It speaks powerfully and coldly. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 04:29
Searching
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write of their reflection on their life so far and there behaviour in the past. Appreciating life more and that they are still a free person, enjoyed the read
August 7th, 2025 05:46
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write of their reflection on their life so far and there behaviour in the past. Appreciating life more and that they are still a free person, enjoyed the read
August 7th, 2025 05:46
Searching
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely flow and rhyme scheme to this poem that takes one on a journey with a beat. Very nicely done
August 7th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely flow and rhyme scheme to this poem that takes one on a journey with a beat. Very nicely done
August 7th, 2025 04:42
Barbed
Bella Shepard said:
The trials and tribulations of life take their toll, \"barbed wire rips the skies\", repeated to great effect. In the end you bear the scars, as evidence that you have lived this life, and done the best you could \"your talents should be on display\" and so, purified. I love the message, and I love your talent.
August 6th, 2025 11:01
Bella Shepard said:
The trials and tribulations of life take their toll, \"barbed wire rips the skies\", repeated to great effect. In the end you bear the scars, as evidence that you have lived this life, and done the best you could \"your talents should be on display\" and so, purified. I love the message, and I love your talent.
August 6th, 2025 11:01
Barbed
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely crafted write, some wonderful lines and a twist at the end, enjoyed today\'s read
August 6th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely crafted write, some wonderful lines and a twist at the end, enjoyed today\'s read
August 6th, 2025 06:20
Barbed
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording and a lovely meter with rhyme scheme that intrigues and the predictability of the final line broken in the end with a twist I was expecting sacred fire that purifies but no another surprise. A fave
August 6th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording and a lovely meter with rhyme scheme that intrigues and the predictability of the final line broken in the end with a twist I was expecting sacred fire that purifies but no another surprise. A fave
August 6th, 2025 04:20
6th aug 1945
Damaso said:
How sad and painful everything this beautiful text describes. Excellent writing, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Deep down, I\'d like to think it\'s the escape of a mind fused with the poetic metaphysics of fictional literature, not the cruel reality. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
August 5th, 2025 12:04
Damaso said:
How sad and painful everything this beautiful text describes. Excellent writing, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Deep down, I\'d like to think it\'s the escape of a mind fused with the poetic metaphysics of fictional literature, not the cruel reality. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
August 5th, 2025 12:04
6th aug 1945
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the horrors and moral complexities of war, specifically the use of atomic bombs during World War II. It critiques the glorification of warfare and the devastating consequences it has on humanity, as illustrated by the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The poet emphasizes the futility of fighting and the immense loss of life that results from the pursuit of power and destruction.
August 5th, 2025 09:53
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the horrors and moral complexities of war, specifically the use of atomic bombs during World War II. It critiques the glorification of warfare and the devastating consequences it has on humanity, as illustrated by the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The poet emphasizes the futility of fighting and the immense loss of life that results from the pursuit of power and destruction.
August 5th, 2025 09:53
6th aug 1945
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Peto,
The horror of these two bombs is unimaginable and beyond comprehension. What\'s even more harrowing, after they were dropped, every major power wanted one. This is a beautiful genre of poetry and you apply it with deft authority and a flair for the poetics. Excellent.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 5th, 2025 07:22
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Peto,
The horror of these two bombs is unimaginable and beyond comprehension. What\'s even more harrowing, after they were dropped, every major power wanted one. This is a beautiful genre of poetry and you apply it with deft authority and a flair for the poetics. Excellent.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 5th, 2025 07:22
6th aug 1945
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting reminder of the horrific event of the past but also that war is hell for all, the history books will name a winner but in reality there are never any winners, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 06:26
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting reminder of the horrific event of the past but also that war is hell for all, the history books will name a winner but in reality there are never any winners, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 06:26
6th aug 1945
sorenbarrett said:
In these tercets with a caping rhyme to form a quatrain you tell the story of the A-bomb and the horror that took so many lives. History is always written by the winner. War is hell and despite what they tell you there are no rules if you want to win. It is never a war crime the first time. A fine write with wonderful creative rhyme.
August 5th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
In these tercets with a caping rhyme to form a quatrain you tell the story of the A-bomb and the horror that took so many lives. History is always written by the winner. War is hell and despite what they tell you there are no rules if you want to win. It is never a war crime the first time. A fine write with wonderful creative rhyme.
August 5th, 2025 04:42
Numb
Dan Williams said:
Touching and sincere, \"She navigates the seas by raft\" says chapters by itself. Very nice.
August 5th, 2025 02:05
Dan Williams said:
Touching and sincere, \"She navigates the seas by raft\" says chapters by itself. Very nice.
August 5th, 2025 02:05
Numb
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of pain and hurt at the loss of love, until she hears the voice again, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:16
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of pain and hurt at the loss of love, until she hears the voice again, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
August 4th, 2025 09:16
Numb
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of pain and numbness, exploring how emotional detachment can serve as a coping mechanism in the face of heartache and disappointment. The poet delves into themes of love, loss, and resilience, illustrating the narrator\'s journey through emotional turmoil and the search for solace.
August 4th, 2025 07:32
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the juxtaposition of pain and numbness, exploring how emotional detachment can serve as a coping mechanism in the face of heartache and disappointment. The poet delves into themes of love, loss, and resilience, illustrating the narrator\'s journey through emotional turmoil and the search for solace.
August 4th, 2025 07:32
Princess
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, peto,
A warrior in a wallflower dress, beware the facade in this splendid composition. Great poetry, rhyme, rhythm and theme; in all without a doubt. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:32
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, peto,
A warrior in a wallflower dress, beware the facade in this splendid composition. Great poetry, rhyme, rhythm and theme; in all without a doubt. Well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:32
Numb
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter and rhyme structure of this poem that sounds like a church bell ringing. Very nicely done
August 4th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
I love the meter and rhyme structure of this poem that sounds like a church bell ringing. Very nicely done
August 4th, 2025 05:05
Princess
Bella Shepard said:
This feme fatale hides behind the guise of a wallflower to lure her prey? How alluringly deceptive. You paint a picture with words that is quite stunning. Great Write!
August 3rd, 2025 14:27
Bella Shepard said:
This feme fatale hides behind the guise of a wallflower to lure her prey? How alluringly deceptive. You paint a picture with words that is quite stunning. Great Write!
August 3rd, 2025 14:27
Princess
hzugman said:
Look but no touch doesn\'t get you much. Rev the engine then let out the clutch. Not sure what that means but I enjoyed your poem.
August 3rd, 2025 10:44
hzugman said:
Look but no touch doesn\'t get you much. Rev the engine then let out the clutch. Not sure what that means but I enjoyed your poem.
August 3rd, 2025 10:44
Princess
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, don\'t judge on appearance\'s, it can be a completely different person on the inside, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 09:02
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write, don\'t judge on appearance\'s, it can be a completely different person on the inside, enjoyed the read
August 3rd, 2025 09:02
Princess
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, a powerful poem. Your poem explores the duality of a woman\'s experience—her fragility contrasted with her strength. It portrays her as a \"wallflower,\" suggesting she is often overlooked or underestimated, yet she possesses an inner resilience and a desire for agency. The recurring imagery of tears, battles, and transformation illustrates her journey through emotional turmoil and societal expectations.
August 3rd, 2025 07:33
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend, a powerful poem. Your poem explores the duality of a woman\'s experience—her fragility contrasted with her strength. It portrays her as a \"wallflower,\" suggesting she is often overlooked or underestimated, yet she possesses an inner resilience and a desire for agency. The recurring imagery of tears, battles, and transformation illustrates her journey through emotional turmoil and societal expectations.
August 3rd, 2025 07:33
Princess
sorenbarrett said:
With vivid imagery this poem paints quite a picture and for that a fave. Well done
August 3rd, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
With vivid imagery this poem paints quite a picture and for that a fave. Well done
August 3rd, 2025 04:48
Fight
Christina8 said:
I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem, dear peto. Another great one!!
August 2nd, 2025 14:50
Christina8 said:
I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem, dear peto. Another great one!!
August 2nd, 2025 14:50
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