Comments received on poems by peto
Candlewitch
Paul Bell said:
Dead annoyed that I bought all those goodies and not one witch or warlock, zombie chapped my door.
Was thinking of going out and grabbing some, then I realised you get arrested for that.
Be stuffing myself for the next week now.
November 1st, 2025 04:10
Paul Bell said:
Dead annoyed that I bought all those goodies and not one witch or warlock, zombie chapped my door.
Was thinking of going out and grabbing some, then I realised you get arrested for that.
Be stuffing myself for the next week now.
November 1st, 2025 04:10
Candlewitch
sorenbarrett said:
A fun Halloween read that has a most creative rhyme pattern. Nicely done and in style for the season with great images
October 31st, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
A fun Halloween read that has a most creative rhyme pattern. Nicely done and in style for the season with great images
October 31st, 2025 10:07
You dancing?
Christina8 said:
A very heartfelt read. Dating is so scary in this world isn\'t it? A poem worth the read. Love your writes!!!
October 31st, 2025 08:42
Christina8 said:
A very heartfelt read. Dating is so scary in this world isn\'t it? A poem worth the read. Love your writes!!!
October 31st, 2025 08:42
Bad blood
Christina8 said:
Bravo! Sorry I haven\'t been around to comment, I was so happy to see that you had written a poem for today when I went to this site. What a positively great poem for Halloween!! So descriptive and your rhyming is impeccable, a joy to read!!
October 30th, 2025 15:57
Christina8 said:
Bravo! Sorry I haven\'t been around to comment, I was so happy to see that you had written a poem for today when I went to this site. What a positively great poem for Halloween!! So descriptive and your rhyming is impeccable, a joy to read!!
October 30th, 2025 15:57
Bad blood
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes that sign can save your life, I\'m as bad as you.
That means they can go and eat lesser mortals, or lesser morsels.
October 30th, 2025 05:19
Paul Bell said:
Sometimes that sign can save your life, I\'m as bad as you.
That means they can go and eat lesser mortals, or lesser morsels.
October 30th, 2025 05:19
Bad blood
sorenbarrett said:
I like the wording and tone of this poem. Not only appropriate for the season but filled with a philosophical message that the evil has no interest in their own kind. Nicely crafted it reads well.
October 30th, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
I like the wording and tone of this poem. Not only appropriate for the season but filled with a philosophical message that the evil has no interest in their own kind. Nicely crafted it reads well.
October 30th, 2025 05:07
Lunar
sorenbarrett said:
A great write for the Halloween season. This poem calls out of darkness with a howl. Lovely
October 29th, 2025 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
A great write for the Halloween season. This poem calls out of darkness with a howl. Lovely
October 29th, 2025 10:21
Goddess
NafisaSB said:
it does fit the week, and the month very well - a truly haunting poem -can almost visualize the night Goddess stalking around...
October 29th, 2025 07:29
NafisaSB said:
it does fit the week, and the month very well - a truly haunting poem -can almost visualize the night Goddess stalking around...
October 29th, 2025 07:29
Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem decorated with wonderful rhyme where the rhyme scheme is a delight. It tells its story well and entertains as well as fits the season
October 28th, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
A fun poem decorated with wonderful rhyme where the rhyme scheme is a delight. It tells its story well and entertains as well as fits the season
October 28th, 2025 05:40
Beth
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Halloween poem that I love the rhyme scheme in. It flows along and I\'m not sure it that last kiss is one of seduction or horror. Lovely my friend
October 27th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful Halloween poem that I love the rhyme scheme in. It flows along and I\'m not sure it that last kiss is one of seduction or horror. Lovely my friend
October 27th, 2025 03:41
Goddess
rhmn_7 said:
What a beautifully written piece, but the last stanza did scare me a bit :)
October 26th, 2025 15:31
rhmn_7 said:
What a beautifully written piece, but the last stanza did scare me a bit :)
October 26th, 2025 15:31
Crunch
Friendship said:
Well done, my friend, your poem revolves around themes of fate, horror, and the consequences of confronting dark forces. The protagonist faces a dire and gruesome fate at the hands of a witch and demonic entities, ultimately leading to his demise.
October 26th, 2025 07:35
Friendship said:
Well done, my friend, your poem revolves around themes of fate, horror, and the consequences of confronting dark forces. The protagonist faces a dire and gruesome fate at the hands of a witch and demonic entities, ultimately leading to his demise.
October 26th, 2025 07:35
Crunch
Paul Bell said:
This is why I stay away from graveyards at this time of year.
Bad enough the dead walking about, but the devil with that big fork eating people, just not on.
October 26th, 2025 05:33
Paul Bell said:
This is why I stay away from graveyards at this time of year.
Bad enough the dead walking about, but the devil with that big fork eating people, just not on.
October 26th, 2025 05:33
Crunch
sorenbarrett said:
We share cannibalistic Halloween poems today my friend. We must be on the same track. A most enjoyable read very well crafted with just enough element of dark humor to season it well. Loved it
October 26th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
We share cannibalistic Halloween poems today my friend. We must be on the same track. A most enjoyable read very well crafted with just enough element of dark humor to season it well. Loved it
October 26th, 2025 04:27
Goddess
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Goddess\" explores the duality of a powerful female figure who embodies both nurturing and destructive qualities. The \"goddess of the night\" symbolizes mystery, allure, and danger, portraying themes of femininity, power, and the complexities of human emotions. The goddess captivates and enchants those around her, yet her coldness and the potential for harm suggest a darker side to her charm.
October 25th, 2025 07:17
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Goddess\" explores the duality of a powerful female figure who embodies both nurturing and destructive qualities. The \"goddess of the night\" symbolizes mystery, allure, and danger, portraying themes of femininity, power, and the complexities of human emotions. The goddess captivates and enchants those around her, yet her coldness and the potential for harm suggest a darker side to her charm.
October 25th, 2025 07:17
Goddess
Paul Bell said:
Beware the goddess of the night, there\'s no delight.
She\'ll take your soul into the night, then she\'s out of sight.
October 25th, 2025 06:36
Paul Bell said:
Beware the goddess of the night, there\'s no delight.
She\'ll take your soul into the night, then she\'s out of sight.
October 25th, 2025 06:36
Goddess
sorenbarrett said:
This rhyme scheme together with the recurring refrain was captivating and charming and resounded with me. I truly love this one it\'s a fave
October 25th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
This rhyme scheme together with the recurring refrain was captivating and charming and resounded with me. I truly love this one it\'s a fave
October 25th, 2025 04:16
Flying fox
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem presents a vivid and dark exploration of fear, isolation, and the supernatural. It suggests a confrontation with death and the unknown, embodied by various mythical creatures and the haunting atmosphere of a graveyard. The speaker\'s sense of dread and the presence of these creatures create a tension between life and death, as well as a struggle for survival.
October 24th, 2025 13:48
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem presents a vivid and dark exploration of fear, isolation, and the supernatural. It suggests a confrontation with death and the unknown, embodied by various mythical creatures and the haunting atmosphere of a graveyard. The speaker\'s sense of dread and the presence of these creatures create a tension between life and death, as well as a struggle for survival.
October 24th, 2025 13:48
Flying fox
Paul Bell said:
Graveyards are always shortcuts to somewhere, but at this time of the year you tend to go the long way just in case.
Why do graveyards have big creaky gates, and would I fit in a cauldron. Maybe stay in today.
October 24th, 2025 05:07
Paul Bell said:
Graveyards are always shortcuts to somewhere, but at this time of the year you tend to go the long way just in case.
Why do graveyards have big creaky gates, and would I fit in a cauldron. Maybe stay in today.
October 24th, 2025 05:07
Flying fox
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects a fun depiction of the season with all the monstrous figures getting ready for the marked day or rather night. Well done in rhyme as well.
October 24th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects a fun depiction of the season with all the monstrous figures getting ready for the marked day or rather night. Well done in rhyme as well.
October 24th, 2025 05:02
You dancing?
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the complexities and challenges of modern dating, particularly through online platforms. It captures the feelings of disillusionment, insecurity, and the often deceptive nature of online personas.
October 20th, 2025 17:25
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the complexities and challenges of modern dating, particularly through online platforms. It captures the feelings of disillusionment, insecurity, and the often deceptive nature of online personas.
October 20th, 2025 17:25
You dancing?
sorenbarrett said:
From how it sounds you were left dancing. A fun read.
October 19th, 2025 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
From how it sounds you were left dancing. A fun read.
October 19th, 2025 19:23
Done
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll give you a fave for the structure of this poem and its rhyme scheme that tickles the tongue as it rolls off it. Well done
October 18th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll give you a fave for the structure of this poem and its rhyme scheme that tickles the tongue as it rolls off it. Well done
October 18th, 2025 08:46
Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Warm and cute this poem tells of a budding romance. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings of spring and growth.
September 3rd, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Warm and cute this poem tells of a budding romance. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings of spring and growth.
September 3rd, 2025 07:53
Princess
NafisaSB said:
oh wow - what a strong lady - hope she inspires all the young girls to be a bit more intrepid - though the generation these days does not need much help in that department
August 20th, 2025 23:40
NafisaSB said:
oh wow - what a strong lady - hope she inspires all the young girls to be a bit more intrepid - though the generation these days does not need much help in that department
August 20th, 2025 23:40
Murder
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Peto,
A crime most foul afoot in a perfectly composed passage of poetry. Rhymed to sublimity in flawless meter and poetically superb. Very well done, my friend.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 13:33
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Peto,
A crime most foul afoot in a perfectly composed passage of poetry. Rhymed to sublimity in flawless meter and poetically superb. Very well done, my friend.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 13:33
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