Comments received on poems by peto
Crunched
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, so creepy I loved it!!
Perfect for the Halloween season!!
October 26th, 2023 06:44
BlessedbyGod said:
Oh wow, so creepy I loved it!!
Perfect for the Halloween season!!
October 26th, 2023 06:44
Crunched
Neville said:
how extraordinarily timely & apt .. versed so verily well sir P .. N
October 26th, 2023 06:35
Neville said:
how extraordinarily timely & apt .. versed so verily well sir P .. N
October 26th, 2023 06:35
Feeling
Thomas W Case said:
Great job. It seems sad but hopeful. Well crafted.
October 24th, 2023 15:38
Thomas W Case said:
Great job. It seems sad but hopeful. Well crafted.
October 24th, 2023 15:38
Feeling
BlessedbyGod said:
I wish u both the best!!
Beautiful piece my friend!!
October 24th, 2023 14:54
BlessedbyGod said:
I wish u both the best!!
Beautiful piece my friend!!
October 24th, 2023 14:54
Feeling
LIZ said:
And there\'s that drop of......hope. In the midst of discovering all the dark layers....of the one.....who makes our heart skip a beat....🫣
October 24th, 2023 12:18
LIZ said:
And there\'s that drop of......hope. In the midst of discovering all the dark layers....of the one.....who makes our heart skip a beat....🫣
October 24th, 2023 12:18
Feeling
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad yet beautiful writing )) like your way with words 🙂
October 24th, 2023 10:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad yet beautiful writing )) like your way with words 🙂
October 24th, 2023 10:47
Feeling
Christina8 said:
Oh my gosh, Stevie! What a sad one! Or is it rife with hope that you\'ll find love?
\"I\'ll once again dance on a floor that\'s not littered with tears\" Hopeful, yet, pulls on the heart strings. This is perfect. A favorite for me!
October 24th, 2023 07:35
Christina8 said:
Oh my gosh, Stevie! What a sad one! Or is it rife with hope that you\'ll find love?
\"I\'ll once again dance on a floor that\'s not littered with tears\" Hopeful, yet, pulls on the heart strings. This is perfect. A favorite for me!
October 24th, 2023 07:35
My poetic side
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written tribute here peto, and I totally agree, MyPoeticSide is a warm and talented community, where words are shared and friendships are made. So, likewise in your second stanza, I would also like to thank the kind sir who planted the seed.
Like you, I look forward to sharing more, and like many others, I look forward to reading more of theirs and of course, yours.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 23rd, 2023 11:34
AuburnScribbler said:
A wonderfully written tribute here peto, and I totally agree, MyPoeticSide is a warm and talented community, where words are shared and friendships are made. So, likewise in your second stanza, I would also like to thank the kind sir who planted the seed.
Like you, I look forward to sharing more, and like many others, I look forward to reading more of theirs and of course, yours.
Bravo and I hope that all is well.
October 23rd, 2023 11:34
Mission
peto said:
Thank you Christina
Thought it a bit gory for comments
Ta for braving it
A wee star
October 23rd, 2023 08:56
peto said:
Thank you Christina
Thought it a bit gory for comments
Ta for braving it
A wee star
October 23rd, 2023 08:56
Mission
Christina8 said:
That\'s quite the story, oh gosh, just in time for Halloween! Such a detailed poem. Great rhymes! I can\'t say enough about this poem!
October 23rd, 2023 08:53
Christina8 said:
That\'s quite the story, oh gosh, just in time for Halloween! Such a detailed poem. Great rhymes! I can\'t say enough about this poem!
October 23rd, 2023 08:53
My poetic side
Parisab said:
Your poems have a regal tone to them. It’s been truly special to be connected through this platform. Your words have so much more to offer and they “take away the numb” poet friend…
October 23rd, 2023 00:01
Parisab said:
Your poems have a regal tone to them. It’s been truly special to be connected through this platform. Your words have so much more to offer and they “take away the numb” poet friend…
October 23rd, 2023 00:01
My poetic side
BlessedbyGod said:
Ditto my friend, you are also a blessing , your work is great and inciteful,
Your words are intriguing and healing as well, thank you dear friend for writing this piece, wr appreciate you as well
October 22nd, 2023 17:50
BlessedbyGod said:
Ditto my friend, you are also a blessing , your work is great and inciteful,
Your words are intriguing and healing as well, thank you dear friend for writing this piece, wr appreciate you as well
October 22nd, 2023 17:50
My poetic side
Bobby O said:
I stately declare the honor is here and I imagine many that follow feel much the same. You are a monster of touch.
October 22nd, 2023 17:33
Bobby O said:
I stately declare the honor is here and I imagine many that follow feel much the same. You are a monster of touch.
October 22nd, 2023 17:33
My poetic side
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written! You talk about those who chose to be your friend, trust me we feel the same about you! I think your writing goes both ways, it takes away your numb, and it brings us joy. I hope you have many poems left. I need to get my pen....
October 22nd, 2023 16:31
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully written! You talk about those who chose to be your friend, trust me we feel the same about you! I think your writing goes both ways, it takes away your numb, and it brings us joy. I hope you have many poems left. I need to get my pen....
October 22nd, 2023 16:31
My poetic side
hzugman said:
Another beautiful poem. Taking away a numb is a gift.
October 22nd, 2023 12:19
hzugman said:
Another beautiful poem. Taking away a numb is a gift.
October 22nd, 2023 12:19
My poetic side
LIZ said:
This is beautiful! You already know....your writing helps so much. Even the ones you think don\'t, are a faucet of untolds! \"A few more still to come\".....a number of unknowns. Reading between the lines, I get it more than you know! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
October 22nd, 2023 10:51
LIZ said:
This is beautiful! You already know....your writing helps so much. Even the ones you think don\'t, are a faucet of untolds! \"A few more still to come\".....a number of unknowns. Reading between the lines, I get it more than you know! 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
October 22nd, 2023 10:51
Vic n tim
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece peto!!
I agree with all these,
Especially with Maxine,
It\'s sad , but intriguing and the two halves should be as one,
Communication is the only way that they can become whole , voicing their concerns and thoughts to one another!
If only Timothy wouldn\'t give up, because I\'m sure she is reaching to him as well, recognizing him as her other half!
October 16th, 2023 06:34
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece peto!!
I agree with all these,
Especially with Maxine,
It\'s sad , but intriguing and the two halves should be as one,
Communication is the only way that they can become whole , voicing their concerns and thoughts to one another!
If only Timothy wouldn\'t give up, because I\'m sure she is reaching to him as well, recognizing him as her other half!
October 16th, 2023 06:34
Vic n tim
LIZ said:
Makes me think of hidden love desires...where you just get a glimpse...even though you\'d like to have it all...but there\'s too much pain involved. All fun and games...until reality hits! We can\'t truly grasp it, when we let darkness win!! Bravo!!!!!
October 16th, 2023 03:57
LIZ said:
Makes me think of hidden love desires...where you just get a glimpse...even though you\'d like to have it all...but there\'s too much pain involved. All fun and games...until reality hits! We can\'t truly grasp it, when we let darkness win!! Bravo!!!!!
October 16th, 2023 03:57
Vic n tim
Introverted Sage said:
Mysterious and enticing.
Temptation is tricky.
The last line poses as if in a stand-off.. will she succumb to the darkness or not..
Clearly I\'m over here on the edge of my seat. haha\'
October 16th, 2023 01:56
Introverted Sage said:
Mysterious and enticing.
Temptation is tricky.
The last line poses as if in a stand-off.. will she succumb to the darkness or not..
Clearly I\'m over here on the edge of my seat. haha\'
October 16th, 2023 01:56
Vic n tim
Parisab said:
Great word play-some seek dare instead of truth and that is not meant to end well-at the same time there are some wardrobe mentions to lighten the mood of the poem-
October 16th, 2023 01:40
Parisab said:
Great word play-some seek dare instead of truth and that is not meant to end well-at the same time there are some wardrobe mentions to lighten the mood of the poem-
October 16th, 2023 01:40
Vic n tim
Christina8 said:
OMG what an excellent play on words...I was wondering how \"Vic N Tim\' would work, splendid as Victoria\'s Secret and Timothy. Also, who is the victim in that mess? You sir, are a wordsmith, Stevie! I really enjoyed reading this!
October 16th, 2023 00:43
Christina8 said:
OMG what an excellent play on words...I was wondering how \"Vic N Tim\' would work, splendid as Victoria\'s Secret and Timothy. Also, who is the victim in that mess? You sir, are a wordsmith, Stevie! I really enjoyed reading this!
October 16th, 2023 00:43
Vic n tim
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. you do a great job at creating intrigue. Nice use of rhyme.
October 16th, 2023 00:24
Thomas W Case said:
Excellent. you do a great job at creating intrigue. Nice use of rhyme.
October 16th, 2023 00:24
Shadows
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of what Dante once said paradise for the beauty and hell for the company. I\'d also choose hell, such an interesting thought. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 14:20
Teddy.15 said:
Reminds me of what Dante once said paradise for the beauty and hell for the company. I\'d also choose hell, such an interesting thought. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 14:20
Verges
Niki Oz said:
I feel like you see all her struggles and pain but can also see her determination and strength. You see the beauty in all of the ugliness she faces.
\"Since relinquishing undeserved portions of blame
Says she don\'t feel herself looks exactly the same \"
\"Took the world on her shoulder and held down the fort\"
\"His assault on her senses was swift and direct
A flamethrower to the heart he had sworn to protect\"
\"Can\'t connect to admirers with young in the nest\"
\"When she offered an inch I had snatched at the mile\"
Beautifully written and undeniably, brutally relatable.
Most times we are not looking for someone to swoop in and save us. To fix us. We are looking for someone capable of acknowledging everything you have captured in this poem and loving us enough to fix themselves so they stop doing this to us. Not just a magical fix all.
So beautifully written and truly capturing the depth of situations without too many words. Wonderfully done.
Half of the battle and usually the hardest part is finally facing yourself and recognizing you are the problem and loving yourself and the other enough to take the steps to fix it.
October 15th, 2023 13:34
Niki Oz said:
I feel like you see all her struggles and pain but can also see her determination and strength. You see the beauty in all of the ugliness she faces.
\"Since relinquishing undeserved portions of blame
Says she don\'t feel herself looks exactly the same \"
\"Took the world on her shoulder and held down the fort\"
\"His assault on her senses was swift and direct
A flamethrower to the heart he had sworn to protect\"
\"Can\'t connect to admirers with young in the nest\"
\"When she offered an inch I had snatched at the mile\"
Beautifully written and undeniably, brutally relatable.
Most times we are not looking for someone to swoop in and save us. To fix us. We are looking for someone capable of acknowledging everything you have captured in this poem and loving us enough to fix themselves so they stop doing this to us. Not just a magical fix all.
So beautifully written and truly capturing the depth of situations without too many words. Wonderfully done.
Half of the battle and usually the hardest part is finally facing yourself and recognizing you are the problem and loving yourself and the other enough to take the steps to fix it.
October 15th, 2023 13:34
Verges
LIZ said:
This is so beautifully passionate. Seems to me you\'re SEEING all of her struggles but also the beauty it all brings!! 💫💫💫💫💫
October 15th, 2023 09:48
LIZ said:
This is so beautifully passionate. Seems to me you\'re SEEING all of her struggles but also the beauty it all brings!! 💫💫💫💫💫
October 15th, 2023 09:48
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