Comments received on poems by peto
Smile
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem. All the things you would do to see her smile return. As always love the rhymes and cadence, they are spot on and spectacular!!!
June 26th, 2024 08:44
Christina8 said:
What a beautiful poem. All the things you would do to see her smile return. As always love the rhymes and cadence, they are spot on and spectacular!!!
June 26th, 2024 08:44
Mistakes
Christina8 said:
I think this poem is really great with the repetition, \" His hopes and dreams have died\" and finally at the end she emails him and his hopes lift again, Your poems never disappoint!!
June 26th, 2024 08:40
Christina8 said:
I think this poem is really great with the repetition, \" His hopes and dreams have died\" and finally at the end she emails him and his hopes lift again, Your poems never disappoint!!
June 26th, 2024 08:40
Highs
Christina8 said:
This really hits a high note....the work is just spot on with peoples everyday lives...the betrayal and so forth. The poem really hits home, what spectacular work!!
June 26th, 2024 08:36
Christina8 said:
This really hits a high note....the work is just spot on with peoples everyday lives...the betrayal and so forth. The poem really hits home, what spectacular work!!
June 26th, 2024 08:36
Highs
Neilton said:
Impressive work here! The way your words rhyme and the message you convey is pure talent! I also love the rhyme between the stanzas \"He\'s not big on goodbyes\"
\"Inside it all just dies\" ...
June 26th, 2024 07:20
Neilton said:
Impressive work here! The way your words rhyme and the message you convey is pure talent! I also love the rhyme between the stanzas \"He\'s not big on goodbyes\"
\"Inside it all just dies\" ...
June 26th, 2024 07:20
Reaping
Neilton said:
What a beautiful poem ! All the words you put together creating the perfect combination!
June 25th, 2024 07:46
Neilton said:
What a beautiful poem ! All the words you put together creating the perfect combination!
June 25th, 2024 07:46
Smile
Neilton said:
Amazing work! A moving and sad poem but truly worth reading it .
June 25th, 2024 07:43
Neilton said:
Amazing work! A moving and sad poem but truly worth reading it .
June 25th, 2024 07:43
Smile
TS22 said:
Very good poem, really like the constant rhymes, and the repeating last line. With every repetition it makes me relate to it more and more.
June 24th, 2024 16:09
TS22 said:
Very good poem, really like the constant rhymes, and the repeating last line. With every repetition it makes me relate to it more and more.
June 24th, 2024 16:09
Reaping
Doggerel Dave said:
A real and complete account of a passage through life in strong poetic form, peto. Great stuff.
June 23rd, 2024 19:16
Doggerel Dave said:
A real and complete account of a passage through life in strong poetic form, peto. Great stuff.
June 23rd, 2024 19:16
Reaping
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... its little your sitting at the end of my hospital bed.
Thanks for sharing! I ain\'t letting go of that thread
June 23rd, 2024 12:35
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... its little your sitting at the end of my hospital bed.
Thanks for sharing! I ain\'t letting go of that thread
June 23rd, 2024 12:35
Muse
Christina8 said:
I know I\'m not your muse but such words touch the heart, so sorry I wasn\'t online for this one too. \"the gift removed the magic gone\"---never! You have such a gift and I, as always, look forward to more poems...
June 21st, 2024 10:11
Christina8 said:
I know I\'m not your muse but such words touch the heart, so sorry I wasn\'t online for this one too. \"the gift removed the magic gone\"---never! You have such a gift and I, as always, look forward to more poems...
June 21st, 2024 10:11
Freefall
Christina8 said:
This is such remarkable work Stevie, shame I missed it!! Your poetic mind wove an interesting tapestry of desire, betrayal and woe. Awesome rhymes! You are fantastic!
June 21st, 2024 10:07
Christina8 said:
This is such remarkable work Stevie, shame I missed it!! Your poetic mind wove an interesting tapestry of desire, betrayal and woe. Awesome rhymes! You are fantastic!
June 21st, 2024 10:07
Muse
O. Ella said:
This is something I can very well relate to, such a beautiful read.
June 11th, 2024 05:51
O. Ella said:
This is something I can very well relate to, such a beautiful read.
June 11th, 2024 05:51
Freefall
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s a grim ride, peto. The dark confection you have baked for us to consume, seasoned with illicit chemicals got me in.
June 11th, 2024 01:29
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s a grim ride, peto. The dark confection you have baked for us to consume, seasoned with illicit chemicals got me in.
June 11th, 2024 01:29
Freefall
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work, Peto!
Water of Life
Smash the strife
June 10th, 2024 19:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work, Peto!
Water of Life
Smash the strife
June 10th, 2024 19:01
Freefall
Cassie58 said:
An excellent narrative here peto. A much enjoyed story poem. Action packed and descriptive. Have a good day.
June 10th, 2024 05:42
Cassie58 said:
An excellent narrative here peto. A much enjoyed story poem. Action packed and descriptive. Have a good day.
June 10th, 2024 05:42
Vows
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that teeters on the edge of emotion the reference to the razor edge and window ledge give an edginess to the poem. The tension is dissipated in the last stanza. Well done
June 9th, 2024 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that teeters on the edge of emotion the reference to the razor edge and window ledge give an edginess to the poem. The tension is dissipated in the last stanza. Well done
June 9th, 2024 08:42
You do it to yourself
Doggerel Dave said:
The kind of poetry I like - Excellent, peto.
I refuse to comment further on the grounds that it may incriminate me.......
June 7th, 2024 23:26
Doggerel Dave said:
The kind of poetry I like - Excellent, peto.
I refuse to comment further on the grounds that it may incriminate me.......
June 7th, 2024 23:26
You do it to yourself
Cassie58 said:
Such well penned stanzas peto. This poem reads so well aloud and the flow is first rate. Well done.
June 7th, 2024 12:19
Cassie58 said:
Such well penned stanzas peto. This poem reads so well aloud and the flow is first rate. Well done.
June 7th, 2024 12:19
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