Comments received on poems by peto
Anyone
Christina8 said:
Just a phenomenal write, Stevie! I love how you can keep the last line in each stanza to rhyme with the next. Once again, you have presented us with a sad poem but it\'s lovely how you show it to us. \"When juggling my heart of glass; you dropped it on the floor\" So descriptive.....I\'ve had that happen a time or two. A very relatable and fantastic poem......once again!!
March 5th, 2024 13:49
Christina8 said:
Just a phenomenal write, Stevie! I love how you can keep the last line in each stanza to rhyme with the next. Once again, you have presented us with a sad poem but it\'s lovely how you show it to us. \"When juggling my heart of glass; you dropped it on the floor\" So descriptive.....I\'ve had that happen a time or two. A very relatable and fantastic poem......once again!!
March 5th, 2024 13:49
Anyone
Meera Mere said:
Well penned peto......
\"You took it all and left me there
To stand alone without a care
The weight became too much to bare
My soul is what you tore\"
Loved it thoroughly...
March 5th, 2024 12:34
Meera Mere said:
Well penned peto......
\"You took it all and left me there
To stand alone without a care
The weight became too much to bare
My soul is what you tore\"
Loved it thoroughly...
March 5th, 2024 12:34
Halloween
Neilton said:
wow! I\'m really impressed ! I had fun reading your poem!!
March 5th, 2024 10:48
Neilton said:
wow! I\'m really impressed ! I had fun reading your poem!!
March 5th, 2024 10:48
Halloween
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the fun and excitement of Halloween night, with its costumes and festive spirit. It\'s a lively celebration of tradition and imagination. Well done!
March 4th, 2024 12:57
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the fun and excitement of Halloween night, with its costumes and festive spirit. It\'s a lively celebration of tradition and imagination. Well done!
March 4th, 2024 12:57
Halloween
Christina8 said:
I\'ve loved this poem before and I love it again. You must repost this for Halloween! I am more of a Christmas kind of gal (LOL!) but this poem was a great start to what has been quite the literary journey! Great job!
March 4th, 2024 04:52
Christina8 said:
I\'ve loved this poem before and I love it again. You must repost this for Halloween! I am more of a Christmas kind of gal (LOL!) but this poem was a great start to what has been quite the literary journey! Great job!
March 4th, 2024 04:52
Halloween
peto said:
Hi Dave
I\'m from Glasgow in Scotland
My little sister was born on Halloween
I think that\'s why it holds a special meaning for me
Thank you very much for reading and commenting
March 3rd, 2024 16:40
peto said:
Hi Dave
I\'m from Glasgow in Scotland
My little sister was born on Halloween
I think that\'s why it holds a special meaning for me
Thank you very much for reading and commenting
March 3rd, 2024 16:40
Halloween
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure where you live ,Peto, since there\'s a dearth of information on your homepage, but feel it is probably America as they (you?) seem to take Halloween very ?seriously? than where I live. More power to your elbow if you enjoy it, but personally I would lock myself in a safe room until it was all over 😉
March 3rd, 2024 16:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure where you live ,Peto, since there\'s a dearth of information on your homepage, but feel it is probably America as they (you?) seem to take Halloween very ?seriously? than where I live. More power to your elbow if you enjoy it, but personally I would lock myself in a safe room until it was all over 😉
March 3rd, 2024 16:32
Go
Accidental Poet said:
Emotionally strained, poetically rained. Very well penned Peto. 😊👍
March 3rd, 2024 11:22
Accidental Poet said:
Emotionally strained, poetically rained. Very well penned Peto. 😊👍
March 3rd, 2024 11:22
Go
rhmn_7 said:
Internal tears we don\'t show and don\'t easily extinguish, nice words!
March 3rd, 2024 07:59
rhmn_7 said:
Internal tears we don\'t show and don\'t easily extinguish, nice words!
March 3rd, 2024 07:59
Go
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful expression in this poignant write Peto. I heard song lyrics too. Final stanza sums up the whole sad story of broken romance.
March 3rd, 2024 00:27
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful expression in this poignant write Peto. I heard song lyrics too. Final stanza sums up the whole sad story of broken romance.
March 3rd, 2024 00:27
More
Meera Mere said:
The emotional depth in the poem is palpable. Your choice of words is just remarkable.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
\"The prayers offered up in church
Had burst the dam and washed away her fear\"
March 2nd, 2024 21:28
Meera Mere said:
The emotional depth in the poem is palpable. Your choice of words is just remarkable.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
\"The prayers offered up in church
Had burst the dam and washed away her fear\"
March 2nd, 2024 21:28
Go
Christina8 said:
Very sad poem, a beautiful write! That has to be so bad, to have to feel those feelings. Wonderful rhymes!!! Christina
March 2nd, 2024 19:23
Christina8 said:
Very sad poem, a beautiful write! That has to be so bad, to have to feel those feelings. Wonderful rhymes!!! Christina
March 2nd, 2024 19:23
Dreaming
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully contrasts fantasy with reality and explores themes of escapism and unity. The imagery is vivid, and the call for empathy and compassion is powerful. Great work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:50
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully contrasts fantasy with reality and explores themes of escapism and unity. The imagery is vivid, and the call for empathy and compassion is powerful. Great work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:50
Go
Meera Mere said:
That\'s the worst feeling ever. When you give it all but for a wrong person. Beautifully expressed Peto.
March 2nd, 2024 10:43
Meera Mere said:
That\'s the worst feeling ever. When you give it all but for a wrong person. Beautifully expressed Peto.
March 2nd, 2024 10:43
Dreaming
Meera Mere said:
\"I\'m living in a dream\"
This line brought me back to reality lol.
Amazing poem Peto. Would love to read more from you.
March 2nd, 2024 02:09
Meera Mere said:
\"I\'m living in a dream\"
This line brought me back to reality lol.
Amazing poem Peto. Would love to read more from you.
March 2nd, 2024 02:09
Dreaming
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Peto, I see the beauty in this, and if you didn\'t know I love dreams and indeed daydreaming some days it\'s the best thing to do. 🌹
March 1st, 2024 14:30
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Peto, I see the beauty in this, and if you didn\'t know I love dreams and indeed daydreaming some days it\'s the best thing to do. 🌹
March 1st, 2024 14:30
Dreaming
Christina8 said:
Oh I don\'t know where to begin on this one! Every line is so descriptive and brings a feeling with it. It\'s really a beautiful poem! Love the way you set this one up. Looking forward to tomorrow, Stevie! Christina
March 1st, 2024 14:05
Christina8 said:
Oh I don\'t know where to begin on this one! Every line is so descriptive and brings a feeling with it. It\'s really a beautiful poem! Love the way you set this one up. Looking forward to tomorrow, Stevie! Christina
March 1st, 2024 14:05
Dreaming
Parisab said:
And that’s quiet a dream, more like a bash, Peto! Glad to see this energized poem here…
March 1st, 2024 11:16
Parisab said:
And that’s quiet a dream, more like a bash, Peto! Glad to see this energized poem here…
March 1st, 2024 11:16
Flying
Bobby O said:
You write well. Seems like this one had another chapter. ?
February 29th, 2024 21:50
Bobby O said:
You write well. Seems like this one had another chapter. ?
February 29th, 2024 21:50
Flying
Christina8 said:
What can I say, this is AMAZING!! You know I always love your rhyme and meter but the content in this one is simply magnificent! You describe flying, as falling in love feels as such but overlooking her flaws to a tragic end. It was sad, true, but I hope you\'ll share your talents with us some more.---Christina
February 29th, 2024 19:53
Christina8 said:
What can I say, this is AMAZING!! You know I always love your rhyme and meter but the content in this one is simply magnificent! You describe flying, as falling in love feels as such but overlooking her flaws to a tragic end. It was sad, true, but I hope you\'ll share your talents with us some more.---Christina
February 29th, 2024 19:53
Brief resurrection
Christina8 said:
Oh my gosh, where has your genius been?? Flows and rhymes on a grand scale and tells the story as old as time: Love and loss. This is a beautiful poem and I hope you continue to write!!
February 29th, 2024 02:52
Christina8 said:
Oh my gosh, where has your genius been?? Flows and rhymes on a grand scale and tells the story as old as time: Love and loss. This is a beautiful poem and I hope you continue to write!!
February 29th, 2024 02:52
Brief resurrection
Accidental Poet said:
You win some, you lose some. But well penned Peto. 😉👍
February 28th, 2024 23:01
Accidental Poet said:
You win some, you lose some. But well penned Peto. 😉👍
February 28th, 2024 23:01
Brief resurrection
Bella Shepard said:
Such a wonderful rhyming pattern, just flows so smoothly like a babbling brook. This romantic tale of hope, and then loss is so eloquently told. Kudos my friend, great write!
February 28th, 2024 15:51
Bella Shepard said:
Such a wonderful rhyming pattern, just flows so smoothly like a babbling brook. This romantic tale of hope, and then loss is so eloquently told. Kudos my friend, great write!
February 28th, 2024 15:51
Without
Niki Oz said:
I cannot say enough about this! I love the way I can instantly see pictures in my mind like a sideshow of everything you describe. It\'s beautifully yet simply put. Not too over explained (I tend to do that but I\'m working on it). But yet I can still feel the power behind the sentiment. Love this!
February 13th, 2024 16:06
Niki Oz said:
I cannot say enough about this! I love the way I can instantly see pictures in my mind like a sideshow of everything you describe. It\'s beautifully yet simply put. Not too over explained (I tend to do that but I\'m working on it). But yet I can still feel the power behind the sentiment. Love this!
February 13th, 2024 16:06
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