Comments received on poems by peto



Princess
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write, don\'t judge on appearance\'s, it can be a completely different person on the inside, enjoyed the read

August 3rd, 2025 09:02

Princess
Friendship said:

Well written, my friend, a powerful poem. Your poem explores the duality of a woman\'s experience—her fragility contrasted with her strength. It portrays her as a \"wallflower,\" suggesting she is often overlooked or underestimated, yet she possesses an inner resilience and a desire for agency. The recurring imagery of tears, battles, and transformation illustrates her journey through emotional turmoil and societal expectations.

August 3rd, 2025 07:33

Princess
Teddy.15 said:

Sounds to me like a warning ⚠️ 🤣 fabulous imagery 🌹

August 3rd, 2025 05:14

Princess
sorenbarrett said:

With vivid imagery this poem paints quite a picture and for that a fave. Well done

August 3rd, 2025 04:48

Fight
Christina8 said:

I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem, dear peto. Another great one!!

August 2nd, 2025 14:50

No
Christina8 said:

Very well written, I think he always hears our prayers but the answer isn\'t always \'yes\'. Very good and glad to see you back writing my friend!!

August 2nd, 2025 14:45

Fight
Poetic Licence said:

A strong write of mixed feelings and emotions and the struggles to find understanding themselves and to be understood by others, nicely expressed and written

August 2nd, 2025 08:47

Fight
Friendship said:

Well-written, your poem reflects on the struggle between positive and negative emotions, exploring the complexities of mental health, self-expression, and the journey toward self-acceptance. The poet grapples with their thoughts and feelings, acknowledging the presence of both joy and pain in their life.

August 2nd, 2025 07:23

Fight
sorenbarrett said:

Here I hear the questions of one that has let their thoughts be known but are not sure that they have been comprehended. Nicely written

August 2nd, 2025 06:40

Strings
Friendship said:

Your poem seems to revolve around a woman who embodies both the roles of a dancer and a juggler, suggesting a performance of life where she orchestrates relationships to fulfill her desires while dealing with her low self-esteem and the consequences of her actions.

August 1st, 2025 11:16

Strings
Tony36 said:

Really enjoyed it

August 1st, 2025 09:36

Strings
sorenbarrett said:

A well written poem with rhythm, rhyme, meter and flow it works and has a message to boot making it a fave

August 1st, 2025 05:21

Strings
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of treating most in a negative way, playing games until she caught the one she wanted, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read

August 1st, 2025 05:18

File
Paul Ramnora said:

Strong work...full of \'tortured\' images.

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Those who still deny their guilt


August 1st, 2025 03:19

Void
Paul Ramnora said:

Nice poetry, Peto. I liked reading through every single line, repeatedly, again and again...finding it to be jam packed with powerful thoughts and emotions. ;-)

August 1st, 2025 02:57

No
Justina said:

Vivid and plain narrative poetry, the themes of daily life can truly touch people\'s hearts. Love it

July 31st, 2025 23:12

No
sorenbarrett said:

If all were so wise. A good story indeed.

July 31st, 2025 21:34

No
Poetic Licence said:

Nicely crafted write, enjoyed the read

July 31st, 2025 20:23

No
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful write exploring the struggles for a family at the festive time, but also tye strength of faith even though they didn\'t get what they wanted, nicely expressed and written

July 31st, 2025 20:20

AI
Paul Ramnora said:

Good poem...yes, I agree, that AI could prove really dangerous indeed to mankind -could possibly take us all over- if ever allowed to get out of control...?!

July 31st, 2025 20:01

No
Friendship said:

Nicely written, your poem explores themes of faith, hope, and the complexities of belief, particularly in the face of disappointment. It highlights the struggles of a single mother and her daughter during the holiday season, emphasizing the child\'s unwavering faith despite their difficult circumstances.

July 31st, 2025 19:15

Fourteenth
Christina8 said:

This is an incredible read, as I\'ve come to expect more and more from you. Absolutely beautiful valentine poem!!!

February 15th, 2025 10:18

Fourteenth
sorenbarrett said:

Cute and sweet a nice valentine poem

February 14th, 2025 17:33

Fourteenth
Poetic Licence said:

A very creative way of proposing, enjoyed the read

February 14th, 2025 17:13

File
MaxSmith said:

So powerful Stevie

Being trapped, imprisoned within your own mind, without escape. \"Blade across his wrist\" something that unfortunately resonated. You have written this so beautifully, that I could truly connect with and feel each word.

A well written piece as always Stevie.



January 9th, 2025 06:57

File
Introverted Sage said:

I just love the flow of your poems!
I\'ve missed your writing :)

November 1st, 2024 22:16

Humility
Christina8 said:

Great sentiment in this poem. I quite like how you change up your format of your poems. Wonderful!

October 24th, 2024 11:41

Filtered queen
Christina8 said:

Sorry I haven\'t been on to review. Very good/great poem you have here! It\'s so relatable because we\'ve all been broken up with at some point. Looking forward to reading more!

October 24th, 2024 11:39

Filtered queen
Neilton said:

\"Under that skin she\'s multi layered\"
My favorite line in your poem !
The emotions you convey are very powerful! Excellent work


October 24th, 2024 07:29

Humility
Neilton said:

Such a beautiful poem with amazing rhyme! Excellent work once again

October 23rd, 2024 05:21

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