Comments received on poems by peto
Freefall
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s a grim ride, peto. The dark confection you have baked for us to consume, seasoned with illicit chemicals got me in.
June 11th, 2024 01:29
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s a grim ride, peto. The dark confection you have baked for us to consume, seasoned with illicit chemicals got me in.
June 11th, 2024 01:29
Freefall
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work, Peto!
Water of Life
Smash the strife
June 10th, 2024 19:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great work, Peto!
Water of Life
Smash the strife
June 10th, 2024 19:01
Freefall
Cassie58 said:
An excellent narrative here peto. A much enjoyed story poem. Action packed and descriptive. Have a good day.
June 10th, 2024 05:42
Cassie58 said:
An excellent narrative here peto. A much enjoyed story poem. Action packed and descriptive. Have a good day.
June 10th, 2024 05:42
Vows
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that teeters on the edge of emotion the reference to the razor edge and window ledge give an edginess to the poem. The tension is dissipated in the last stanza. Well done
June 9th, 2024 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that teeters on the edge of emotion the reference to the razor edge and window ledge give an edginess to the poem. The tension is dissipated in the last stanza. Well done
June 9th, 2024 08:42
You do it to yourself
Doggerel Dave said:
The kind of poetry I like - Excellent, peto.
I refuse to comment further on the grounds that it may incriminate me.......
June 7th, 2024 23:26
Doggerel Dave said:
The kind of poetry I like - Excellent, peto.
I refuse to comment further on the grounds that it may incriminate me.......
June 7th, 2024 23:26
You do it to yourself
Cassie58 said:
Such well penned stanzas peto. This poem reads so well aloud and the flow is first rate. Well done.
June 7th, 2024 12:19
Cassie58 said:
Such well penned stanzas peto. This poem reads so well aloud and the flow is first rate. Well done.
June 7th, 2024 12:19
You do it to yourself
O. Ella said:
This is extremely beautiful!
I think the reason we judge others is because we are afraid of being judged ourselves
June 7th, 2024 10:20
O. Ella said:
This is extremely beautiful!
I think the reason we judge others is because we are afraid of being judged ourselves
June 7th, 2024 10:20
You do it to yourself
Christina8 said:
OMG I love the rhyme scheme of this poem and it\'s oh so true, especially at the end. I really like this one!! Just love the rhymes, like I said. Perfection!
June 7th, 2024 09:26
Christina8 said:
OMG I love the rhyme scheme of this poem and it\'s oh so true, especially at the end. I really like this one!! Just love the rhymes, like I said. Perfection!
June 7th, 2024 09:26
You do it to yourself
Introverted Sage said:
So true! The hardest thing seems to be letting it all go.
Deep self reflection is so needed.
Brilliant write
June 7th, 2024 02:07
Introverted Sage said:
So true! The hardest thing seems to be letting it all go.
Deep self reflection is so needed.
Brilliant write
June 7th, 2024 02:07
You do it to yourself
2781 said:
If we were to judge ourselves we wouldn\'t be judged.
June 7th, 2024 01:24
2781 said:
If we were to judge ourselves we wouldn\'t be judged.
June 7th, 2024 01:24
AI
Introverted Sage said:
Great write!
I think a lot of this technology depends on the hands behind it. As humans what guides us, shapes us. I feel AI could be a benefit to humanity, if it is guided to be that. It can also bring about more troubles than many are ready for, if created to do so.
Thanks for sharing!
June 6th, 2024 14:26
Introverted Sage said:
Great write!
I think a lot of this technology depends on the hands behind it. As humans what guides us, shapes us. I feel AI could be a benefit to humanity, if it is guided to be that. It can also bring about more troubles than many are ready for, if created to do so.
Thanks for sharing!
June 6th, 2024 14:26
AI
hzugman said:
Keep in mind that it\'s not so much the technology but rather the application. If we can\'t apply love to it, the outcome will likely not be very pretty. Control of fire which has been so useful to humankind was also used to burn down entire cities in WW2.
June 6th, 2024 10:53
hzugman said:
Keep in mind that it\'s not so much the technology but rather the application. If we can\'t apply love to it, the outcome will likely not be very pretty. Control of fire which has been so useful to humankind was also used to burn down entire cities in WW2.
June 6th, 2024 10:53
AI
Thomas W Case said:
This is poignant. Great writing and a serious subject. AI freaks me out a bit.
June 6th, 2024 07:26
Thomas W Case said:
This is poignant. Great writing and a serious subject. AI freaks me out a bit.
June 6th, 2024 07:26
AI
Cassie58 said:
You write words of wisdom here peto. We need to wake up to what could be in store. At one time it was material for film makers,, now it is becoming reality. Pleased I was born when I was. The future is scary. Enjoyed my visit.
June 6th, 2024 00:30
Cassie58 said:
You write words of wisdom here peto. We need to wake up to what could be in store. At one time it was material for film makers,, now it is becoming reality. Pleased I was born when I was. The future is scary. Enjoyed my visit.
June 6th, 2024 00:30
AI
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, we are certainly missing the human touch, in the banks here in Italy we now use I pads to sign our signature. I\'m with you but I know we are the same age, so very brilliant and I\'m with you 100% I wish o was back in the 70\'s 🤣
June 5th, 2024 10:42
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, we are certainly missing the human touch, in the banks here in Italy we now use I pads to sign our signature. I\'m with you but I know we are the same age, so very brilliant and I\'m with you 100% I wish o was back in the 70\'s 🤣
June 5th, 2024 10:42
AI
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m with you peto, I fear the future of AI is a demon of our own design. Once artificial intelligence acquires the ability to think for itself, it will follow the same footsteps that it\'s human maker has in the past thousands of years, to conquer and rule. What a fate for the human spirit.
June 5th, 2024 08:08
Accidental Poet said:
I\'m with you peto, I fear the future of AI is a demon of our own design. Once artificial intelligence acquires the ability to think for itself, it will follow the same footsteps that it\'s human maker has in the past thousands of years, to conquer and rule. What a fate for the human spirit.
June 5th, 2024 08:08
AI
Doggerel Dave said:
A piece I enjoyed which echoes my feelings of trepidation Peto, but I can only go forward aware and see how it all pans out....
June 5th, 2024 08:02
Doggerel Dave said:
A piece I enjoyed which echoes my feelings of trepidation Peto, but I can only go forward aware and see how it all pans out....
June 5th, 2024 08:02
AI
Christina8 said:
I think this is an excellent poem to keep in mind a most horrific problem that faces us today.A really good poem, Peto! Good to see you!
June 5th, 2024 07:27
Christina8 said:
I think this is an excellent poem to keep in mind a most horrific problem that faces us today.A really good poem, Peto! Good to see you!
June 5th, 2024 07:27
Void
Cassie58 said:
A powerful poem. Strong emotion conveyed here and a dynamite ending. What a void was left. A great read peto.
June 5th, 2024 06:30
Cassie58 said:
A powerful poem. Strong emotion conveyed here and a dynamite ending. What a void was left. A great read peto.
June 5th, 2024 06:30
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