Comments received on poems by peto
Crunch
sorenbarrett said:
We share cannibalistic Halloween poems today my friend. We must be on the same track. A most enjoyable read very well crafted with just enough element of dark humor to season it well. Loved it
October 26th, 2025 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
We share cannibalistic Halloween poems today my friend. We must be on the same track. A most enjoyable read very well crafted with just enough element of dark humor to season it well. Loved it
October 26th, 2025 04:27
Goddess
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Goddess\" explores the duality of a powerful female figure who embodies both nurturing and destructive qualities. The \"goddess of the night\" symbolizes mystery, allure, and danger, portraying themes of femininity, power, and the complexities of human emotions. The goddess captivates and enchants those around her, yet her coldness and the potential for harm suggest a darker side to her charm.
October 25th, 2025 07:17
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Goddess\" explores the duality of a powerful female figure who embodies both nurturing and destructive qualities. The \"goddess of the night\" symbolizes mystery, allure, and danger, portraying themes of femininity, power, and the complexities of human emotions. The goddess captivates and enchants those around her, yet her coldness and the potential for harm suggest a darker side to her charm.
October 25th, 2025 07:17
Goddess
Paul Bell said:
Beware the goddess of the night, there\'s no delight.
She\'ll take your soul into the night, then she\'s out of sight.
October 25th, 2025 06:36
Paul Bell said:
Beware the goddess of the night, there\'s no delight.
She\'ll take your soul into the night, then she\'s out of sight.
October 25th, 2025 06:36
Goddess
sorenbarrett said:
This rhyme scheme together with the recurring refrain was captivating and charming and resounded with me. I truly love this one it\'s a fave
October 25th, 2025 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
This rhyme scheme together with the recurring refrain was captivating and charming and resounded with me. I truly love this one it\'s a fave
October 25th, 2025 04:16
Flying fox
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem presents a vivid and dark exploration of fear, isolation, and the supernatural. It suggests a confrontation with death and the unknown, embodied by various mythical creatures and the haunting atmosphere of a graveyard. The speaker\'s sense of dread and the presence of these creatures create a tension between life and death, as well as a struggle for survival.
October 24th, 2025 13:48
Friendship said:
Well done, your poem presents a vivid and dark exploration of fear, isolation, and the supernatural. It suggests a confrontation with death and the unknown, embodied by various mythical creatures and the haunting atmosphere of a graveyard. The speaker\'s sense of dread and the presence of these creatures create a tension between life and death, as well as a struggle for survival.
October 24th, 2025 13:48
Flying fox
Paul Bell said:
Graveyards are always shortcuts to somewhere, but at this time of the year you tend to go the long way just in case.
Why do graveyards have big creaky gates, and would I fit in a cauldron. Maybe stay in today.
October 24th, 2025 05:07
Paul Bell said:
Graveyards are always shortcuts to somewhere, but at this time of the year you tend to go the long way just in case.
Why do graveyards have big creaky gates, and would I fit in a cauldron. Maybe stay in today.
October 24th, 2025 05:07
Flying fox
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects a fun depiction of the season with all the monstrous figures getting ready for the marked day or rather night. Well done in rhyme as well.
October 24th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
This poem reflects a fun depiction of the season with all the monstrous figures getting ready for the marked day or rather night. Well done in rhyme as well.
October 24th, 2025 05:02
You dancing?
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the complexities and challenges of modern dating, particularly through online platforms. It captures the feelings of disillusionment, insecurity, and the often deceptive nature of online personas.
October 20th, 2025 17:25
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the complexities and challenges of modern dating, particularly through online platforms. It captures the feelings of disillusionment, insecurity, and the often deceptive nature of online personas.
October 20th, 2025 17:25
You dancing?
sorenbarrett said:
From how it sounds you were left dancing. A fun read.
October 19th, 2025 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
From how it sounds you were left dancing. A fun read.
October 19th, 2025 19:23
Done
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll give you a fave for the structure of this poem and its rhyme scheme that tickles the tongue as it rolls off it. Well done
October 18th, 2025 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll give you a fave for the structure of this poem and its rhyme scheme that tickles the tongue as it rolls off it. Well done
October 18th, 2025 08:46
Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Warm and cute this poem tells of a budding romance. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings of spring and growth.
September 3rd, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Warm and cute this poem tells of a budding romance. Nicely written with rhyme and good flow it sings of spring and growth.
September 3rd, 2025 07:53
Princess
NafisaSB said:
oh wow - what a strong lady - hope she inspires all the young girls to be a bit more intrepid - though the generation these days does not need much help in that department
August 20th, 2025 23:40
NafisaSB said:
oh wow - what a strong lady - hope she inspires all the young girls to be a bit more intrepid - though the generation these days does not need much help in that department
August 20th, 2025 23:40
Murder
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Peto,
A crime most foul afoot in a perfectly composed passage of poetry. Rhymed to sublimity in flawless meter and poetically superb. Very well done, my friend.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 13:33
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Peto,
A crime most foul afoot in a perfectly composed passage of poetry. Rhymed to sublimity in flawless meter and poetically superb. Very well done, my friend.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 13:33
Murder
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of vengeance, loss, and the psychological turmoil that accompanies grief and the desire for retribution. The poet expresses a deep emotional struggle as they grapple with the murder of a friend, leading them to seek justice through violent means.
August 9th, 2025 15:58
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of vengeance, loss, and the psychological turmoil that accompanies grief and the desire for retribution. The poet expresses a deep emotional struggle as they grapple with the murder of a friend, leading them to seek justice through violent means.
August 9th, 2025 15:58
Murder
Poetic Licence said:
A well written with controlled anger detailing the reasons why vengeance will be delivered, a little cold and haunting in its feel, it gets its message across, nicely done
August 8th, 2025 06:01
Poetic Licence said:
A well written with controlled anger detailing the reasons why vengeance will be delivered, a little cold and haunting in its feel, it gets its message across, nicely done
August 8th, 2025 06:01
Murder
sorenbarrett said:
A controlled but angry, threatening poem of vengeance and reprisal. It speaks powerfully and coldly. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
A controlled but angry, threatening poem of vengeance and reprisal. It speaks powerfully and coldly. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 04:29
Searching
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write of their reflection on their life so far and there behaviour in the past. Appreciating life more and that they are still a free person, enjoyed the read
August 7th, 2025 05:46
Poetic Licence said:
A nicely written write of their reflection on their life so far and there behaviour in the past. Appreciating life more and that they are still a free person, enjoyed the read
August 7th, 2025 05:46
Searching
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely flow and rhyme scheme to this poem that takes one on a journey with a beat. Very nicely done
August 7th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely flow and rhyme scheme to this poem that takes one on a journey with a beat. Very nicely done
August 7th, 2025 04:42
Barbed
Bella Shepard said:
The trials and tribulations of life take their toll, \"barbed wire rips the skies\", repeated to great effect. In the end you bear the scars, as evidence that you have lived this life, and done the best you could \"your talents should be on display\" and so, purified. I love the message, and I love your talent.
August 6th, 2025 11:01
Bella Shepard said:
The trials and tribulations of life take their toll, \"barbed wire rips the skies\", repeated to great effect. In the end you bear the scars, as evidence that you have lived this life, and done the best you could \"your talents should be on display\" and so, purified. I love the message, and I love your talent.
August 6th, 2025 11:01
Barbed
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely crafted write, some wonderful lines and a twist at the end, enjoyed today\'s read
August 6th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely crafted write, some wonderful lines and a twist at the end, enjoyed today\'s read
August 6th, 2025 06:20
Barbed
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording and a lovely meter with rhyme scheme that intrigues and the predictability of the final line broken in the end with a twist I was expecting sacred fire that purifies but no another surprise. A fave
August 6th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever wording and a lovely meter with rhyme scheme that intrigues and the predictability of the final line broken in the end with a twist I was expecting sacred fire that purifies but no another surprise. A fave
August 6th, 2025 04:20
6th aug 1945
Damaso said:
How sad and painful everything this beautiful text describes. Excellent writing, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Deep down, I\'d like to think it\'s the escape of a mind fused with the poetic metaphysics of fictional literature, not the cruel reality. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
August 5th, 2025 12:04
Damaso said:
How sad and painful everything this beautiful text describes. Excellent writing, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Deep down, I\'d like to think it\'s the escape of a mind fused with the poetic metaphysics of fictional literature, not the cruel reality. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
August 5th, 2025 12:04
6th aug 1945
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the horrors and moral complexities of war, specifically the use of atomic bombs during World War II. It critiques the glorification of warfare and the devastating consequences it has on humanity, as illustrated by the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The poet emphasizes the futility of fighting and the immense loss of life that results from the pursuit of power and destruction.
August 5th, 2025 09:53
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the horrors and moral complexities of war, specifically the use of atomic bombs during World War II. It critiques the glorification of warfare and the devastating consequences it has on humanity, as illustrated by the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. The poet emphasizes the futility of fighting and the immense loss of life that results from the pursuit of power and destruction.
August 5th, 2025 09:53
6th aug 1945
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Peto,
The horror of these two bombs is unimaginable and beyond comprehension. What\'s even more harrowing, after they were dropped, every major power wanted one. This is a beautiful genre of poetry and you apply it with deft authority and a flair for the poetics. Excellent.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 5th, 2025 07:22
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Peto,
The horror of these two bombs is unimaginable and beyond comprehension. What\'s even more harrowing, after they were dropped, every major power wanted one. This is a beautiful genre of poetry and you apply it with deft authority and a flair for the poetics. Excellent.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 5th, 2025 07:22
6th aug 1945
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting reminder of the horrific event of the past but also that war is hell for all, the history books will name a winner but in reality there are never any winners, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 06:26
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting reminder of the horrific event of the past but also that war is hell for all, the history books will name a winner but in reality there are never any winners, nicely expressed and written
August 5th, 2025 06:26
6th aug 1945
sorenbarrett said:
In these tercets with a caping rhyme to form a quatrain you tell the story of the A-bomb and the horror that took so many lives. History is always written by the winner. War is hell and despite what they tell you there are no rules if you want to win. It is never a war crime the first time. A fine write with wonderful creative rhyme.
August 5th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
In these tercets with a caping rhyme to form a quatrain you tell the story of the A-bomb and the horror that took so many lives. History is always written by the winner. War is hell and despite what they tell you there are no rules if you want to win. It is never a war crime the first time. A fine write with wonderful creative rhyme.
August 5th, 2025 04:42
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