Comments received on poems by peto
Afraid
Bella Shepard said:
Fear is at the core of life, in ways that we don\'t even realize. I love the way you have addressed it in this poem. A fine write my friend!
March 7th, 2024 15:13
Bella Shepard said:
Fear is at the core of life, in ways that we don\'t even realize. I love the way you have addressed it in this poem. A fine write my friend!
March 7th, 2024 15:13
Afraid
Cassie58 said:
Both of them afraid of how they feel. Love can bring out the best in people. Maybe they will have a happy journey of togetherness. I enjoyed my visit peto. I like happy endings.
March 7th, 2024 13:17
Cassie58 said:
Both of them afraid of how they feel. Love can bring out the best in people. Maybe they will have a happy journey of togetherness. I enjoyed my visit peto. I like happy endings.
March 7th, 2024 13:17
Afraid
Parisab said:
To see her full story, even the ‘epic’s only torn page’ is a pure act of love! ‘He’s fallen under her command’ One doesn’t know of her faith, but his is a difficult path-sensitive and interesting concept and write…
March 7th, 2024 11:12
Parisab said:
To see her full story, even the ‘epic’s only torn page’ is a pure act of love! ‘He’s fallen under her command’ One doesn’t know of her faith, but his is a difficult path-sensitive and interesting concept and write…
March 7th, 2024 11:12
Afraid
Bobby O said:
Allegorical w the meaning true to real events as naïveté and Disney endings shall not rest in the land once splayed by Georgie Best.
March 7th, 2024 11:01
Bobby O said:
Allegorical w the meaning true to real events as naïveté and Disney endings shall not rest in the land once splayed by Georgie Best.
March 7th, 2024 11:01
Afraid
JulesBurnsit said:
I got the aural chills and nearly teared up. Love the repetition and meter.
March 7th, 2024 08:41
JulesBurnsit said:
I got the aural chills and nearly teared up. Love the repetition and meter.
March 7th, 2024 08:41
Anyone
Cloie said:
Your poem really packs a punch! With vivid imagery, it\'s like a whirlwind of emotions. It\'s a piece filled with raw and intense emotions that leaves a lasting impact. Great job!
March 6th, 2024 12:27
Cloie said:
Your poem really packs a punch! With vivid imagery, it\'s like a whirlwind of emotions. It\'s a piece filled with raw and intense emotions that leaves a lasting impact. Great job!
March 6th, 2024 12:27
Anyone
Introverted Sage said:
It\'s hard to trust people when so many seem to have ulterior motives.
A quote by Goethe I have to remind myself of daily:
\'As soon as you trust yourself, you will know how to live.\'
And you described just that perfectly... Because had we simply trusted our first instincts...
Highly relatable write with a perfect flow
March 5th, 2024 21:59
Introverted Sage said:
It\'s hard to trust people when so many seem to have ulterior motives.
A quote by Goethe I have to remind myself of daily:
\'As soon as you trust yourself, you will know how to live.\'
And you described just that perfectly... Because had we simply trusted our first instincts...
Highly relatable write with a perfect flow
March 5th, 2024 21:59
Vic n tim
sunshine777 said:
beautiful light and dark
she retreats to the safety of comfortable hell
amazing use of words
March 5th, 2024 21:01
sunshine777 said:
beautiful light and dark
she retreats to the safety of comfortable hell
amazing use of words
March 5th, 2024 21:01
Anyone
Bobby O said:
Extra descriptive. Evokes a pathos in the reader a sortof a reluctant kinship
March 5th, 2024 19:32
Bobby O said:
Extra descriptive. Evokes a pathos in the reader a sortof a reluctant kinship
March 5th, 2024 19:32
Anyone
GiftedT17 said:
What a great write I definitely can relate,job well done🙂
March 5th, 2024 18:00
GiftedT17 said:
What a great write I definitely can relate,job well done🙂
March 5th, 2024 18:00
Anyone
Bella Shepard said:
Beware the fickle lover, they dress themselves in sincerity, but in reality they are disengenuous to a fault. Exquisitely captured in this verse my friend.
March 5th, 2024 17:14
Bella Shepard said:
Beware the fickle lover, they dress themselves in sincerity, but in reality they are disengenuous to a fault. Exquisitely captured in this verse my friend.
March 5th, 2024 17:14
Anyone
Accidental Poet said:
It takes a long time to trust someone Peto. And your poem here exemplifies that perfectly. Well done my friend. 👍
March 5th, 2024 16:04
Accidental Poet said:
It takes a long time to trust someone Peto. And your poem here exemplifies that perfectly. Well done my friend. 👍
March 5th, 2024 16:04
Anyone
Christina8 said:
Just a phenomenal write, Stevie! I love how you can keep the last line in each stanza to rhyme with the next. Once again, you have presented us with a sad poem but it\'s lovely how you show it to us. \"When juggling my heart of glass; you dropped it on the floor\" So descriptive.....I\'ve had that happen a time or two. A very relatable and fantastic poem......once again!!
March 5th, 2024 13:49
Christina8 said:
Just a phenomenal write, Stevie! I love how you can keep the last line in each stanza to rhyme with the next. Once again, you have presented us with a sad poem but it\'s lovely how you show it to us. \"When juggling my heart of glass; you dropped it on the floor\" So descriptive.....I\'ve had that happen a time or two. A very relatable and fantastic poem......once again!!
March 5th, 2024 13:49
Anyone
Meera Mere said:
Well penned peto......
\"You took it all and left me there
To stand alone without a care
The weight became too much to bare
My soul is what you tore\"
Loved it thoroughly...
March 5th, 2024 12:34
Meera Mere said:
Well penned peto......
\"You took it all and left me there
To stand alone without a care
The weight became too much to bare
My soul is what you tore\"
Loved it thoroughly...
March 5th, 2024 12:34
Halloween
Neilton said:
wow! I\'m really impressed ! I had fun reading your poem!!
March 5th, 2024 10:48
Neilton said:
wow! I\'m really impressed ! I had fun reading your poem!!
March 5th, 2024 10:48
Halloween
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the fun and excitement of Halloween night, with its costumes and festive spirit. It\'s a lively celebration of tradition and imagination. Well done!
March 4th, 2024 12:57
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully captures the fun and excitement of Halloween night, with its costumes and festive spirit. It\'s a lively celebration of tradition and imagination. Well done!
March 4th, 2024 12:57
Halloween
Christina8 said:
I\'ve loved this poem before and I love it again. You must repost this for Halloween! I am more of a Christmas kind of gal (LOL!) but this poem was a great start to what has been quite the literary journey! Great job!
March 4th, 2024 04:52
Christina8 said:
I\'ve loved this poem before and I love it again. You must repost this for Halloween! I am more of a Christmas kind of gal (LOL!) but this poem was a great start to what has been quite the literary journey! Great job!
March 4th, 2024 04:52
Halloween
peto said:
Hi Dave
I\'m from Glasgow in Scotland
My little sister was born on Halloween
I think that\'s why it holds a special meaning for me
Thank you very much for reading and commenting
March 3rd, 2024 16:40
peto said:
Hi Dave
I\'m from Glasgow in Scotland
My little sister was born on Halloween
I think that\'s why it holds a special meaning for me
Thank you very much for reading and commenting
March 3rd, 2024 16:40
Halloween
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure where you live ,Peto, since there\'s a dearth of information on your homepage, but feel it is probably America as they (you?) seem to take Halloween very ?seriously? than where I live. More power to your elbow if you enjoy it, but personally I would lock myself in a safe room until it was all over 😉
March 3rd, 2024 16:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Not quite sure where you live ,Peto, since there\'s a dearth of information on your homepage, but feel it is probably America as they (you?) seem to take Halloween very ?seriously? than where I live. More power to your elbow if you enjoy it, but personally I would lock myself in a safe room until it was all over 😉
March 3rd, 2024 16:32
Go
Accidental Poet said:
Emotionally strained, poetically rained. Very well penned Peto. 😊👍
March 3rd, 2024 11:22
Accidental Poet said:
Emotionally strained, poetically rained. Very well penned Peto. 😊👍
March 3rd, 2024 11:22
Go
rhmn_7 said:
Internal tears we don\'t show and don\'t easily extinguish, nice words!
March 3rd, 2024 07:59
rhmn_7 said:
Internal tears we don\'t show and don\'t easily extinguish, nice words!
March 3rd, 2024 07:59
Go
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful expression in this poignant write Peto. I heard song lyrics too. Final stanza sums up the whole sad story of broken romance.
March 3rd, 2024 00:27
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful expression in this poignant write Peto. I heard song lyrics too. Final stanza sums up the whole sad story of broken romance.
March 3rd, 2024 00:27
More
Meera Mere said:
The emotional depth in the poem is palpable. Your choice of words is just remarkable.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
\"The prayers offered up in church
Had burst the dam and washed away her fear\"
March 2nd, 2024 21:28
Meera Mere said:
The emotional depth in the poem is palpable. Your choice of words is just remarkable.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
\"The prayers offered up in church
Had burst the dam and washed away her fear\"
March 2nd, 2024 21:28
Go
Christina8 said:
Very sad poem, a beautiful write! That has to be so bad, to have to feel those feelings. Wonderful rhymes!!! Christina
March 2nd, 2024 19:23
Christina8 said:
Very sad poem, a beautiful write! That has to be so bad, to have to feel those feelings. Wonderful rhymes!!! Christina
March 2nd, 2024 19:23
Dreaming
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully contrasts fantasy with reality and explores themes of escapism and unity. The imagery is vivid, and the call for empathy and compassion is powerful. Great work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:50
Cloie said:
Your poem beautifully contrasts fantasy with reality and explores themes of escapism and unity. The imagery is vivid, and the call for empathy and compassion is powerful. Great work!
March 2nd, 2024 10:50
Go
Meera Mere said:
That\'s the worst feeling ever. When you give it all but for a wrong person. Beautifully expressed Peto.
March 2nd, 2024 10:43
Meera Mere said:
That\'s the worst feeling ever. When you give it all but for a wrong person. Beautifully expressed Peto.
March 2nd, 2024 10:43
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