Comments received on poems by peto
What if
Christina8 said:
These metaphors are incredible!! Job well done! Sorry I was out of town, didn\'t see this fabulous piece! But anyway, that\'s an interesting observation that all of the stars in the skies are souls. Just beautiful work, Peto.
March 10th, 2024 11:41
Christina8 said:
These metaphors are incredible!! Job well done! Sorry I was out of town, didn\'t see this fabulous piece! But anyway, that\'s an interesting observation that all of the stars in the skies are souls. Just beautiful work, Peto.
March 10th, 2024 11:41
Centrefold
Christina8 said:
This is incredible! It evokes so much emotion. \"without my dark your star won\'t shine\"---I feel like that is so powerful, maybe the reason why opposites attract. But a stunning but sad poem. A pleasure to read!
March 10th, 2024 11:36
Christina8 said:
This is incredible! It evokes so much emotion. \"without my dark your star won\'t shine\"---I feel like that is so powerful, maybe the reason why opposites attract. But a stunning but sad poem. A pleasure to read!
March 10th, 2024 11:36
Centrefold
courlieth_aeolis said:
Why does this poem sadden me? How interesting. I really like your poems, Peto.
March 10th, 2024 08:29
courlieth_aeolis said:
Why does this poem sadden me? How interesting. I really like your poems, Peto.
March 10th, 2024 08:29
What if
Ellen Marsell said:
I always believe that they are looking out for us. It\'s a beautiful poem!
March 10th, 2024 06:43
Ellen Marsell said:
I always believe that they are looking out for us. It\'s a beautiful poem!
March 10th, 2024 06:43
What if
Meera Mere said:
\"What if each of the stars in the sky is a soul
Sprinkling dust on the broken who feel less than whole\" My grandma always used to say the same.
Beautiful poem Peto.
\"They\'ve been knocking so long when you letting them in
Never resting as long as there\'s you\" These lines made my day.
March 10th, 2024 04:08
Meera Mere said:
\"What if each of the stars in the sky is a soul
Sprinkling dust on the broken who feel less than whole\" My grandma always used to say the same.
Beautiful poem Peto.
\"They\'ve been knocking so long when you letting them in
Never resting as long as there\'s you\" These lines made my day.
March 10th, 2024 04:08
What if
Cassie58 said:
Fabulous first stanza. Echoes my own thoughts about stars. I also have a thing about butterflies.
Beautiful words peto.
March 10th, 2024 00:06
Cassie58 said:
Fabulous first stanza. Echoes my own thoughts about stars. I also have a thing about butterflies.
Beautiful words peto.
March 10th, 2024 00:06
What if
sunshine777 said:
What if each of the stars in the sky is a soul... I have often wondered this myself. Beautiful poem. Beautifully written!
March 9th, 2024 21:22
sunshine777 said:
What if each of the stars in the sky is a soul... I have often wondered this myself. Beautiful poem. Beautifully written!
March 9th, 2024 21:22
What if
Accidental Poet said:
The Angels of Love are always with us. Beautifully penned Peto. 😇
March 9th, 2024 11:25
Accidental Poet said:
The Angels of Love are always with us. Beautifully penned Peto. 😇
March 9th, 2024 11:25
What if
JulesBurnsit said:
Love how the loved don\'t go missing in this piece, but that they still hold and give of their nature in our natural world. It\'s a comforting rhyme.
March 9th, 2024 07:14
JulesBurnsit said:
Love how the loved don\'t go missing in this piece, but that they still hold and give of their nature in our natural world. It\'s a comforting rhyme.
March 9th, 2024 07:14
What if
2781 said:
Those who are wise will shine like the brightness of the heavens, and those that lead many to righteousness, like the stars for ever and ever
March 9th, 2024 06:19
2781 said:
Those who are wise will shine like the brightness of the heavens, and those that lead many to righteousness, like the stars for ever and ever
March 9th, 2024 06:19
Afraid
Christina8 said:
Sorry I missed this incredible poem yesterday! The poem is very relatable especially in the beginning, just had to save to my faves! And the ending is so captivating!! Love the rhymes as always....Christina
March 8th, 2024 12:15
Christina8 said:
Sorry I missed this incredible poem yesterday! The poem is very relatable especially in the beginning, just had to save to my faves! And the ending is so captivating!! Love the rhymes as always....Christina
March 8th, 2024 12:15
Afraid
Introverted Sage said:
It seems like it could be a beautiful love story. Two that are afraid of love finding eachother.
But it seems to have an ominous tone at the end, as if she may hurt him because of her unhealed past hurts.
As always great flow and incredible write!
March 8th, 2024 00:15
Introverted Sage said:
It seems like it could be a beautiful love story. Two that are afraid of love finding eachother.
But it seems to have an ominous tone at the end, as if she may hurt him because of her unhealed past hurts.
As always great flow and incredible write!
March 8th, 2024 00:15
Afraid
Bella Shepard said:
Fear is at the core of life, in ways that we don\'t even realize. I love the way you have addressed it in this poem. A fine write my friend!
March 7th, 2024 15:13
Bella Shepard said:
Fear is at the core of life, in ways that we don\'t even realize. I love the way you have addressed it in this poem. A fine write my friend!
March 7th, 2024 15:13
Afraid
Cassie58 said:
Both of them afraid of how they feel. Love can bring out the best in people. Maybe they will have a happy journey of togetherness. I enjoyed my visit peto. I like happy endings.
March 7th, 2024 13:17
Cassie58 said:
Both of them afraid of how they feel. Love can bring out the best in people. Maybe they will have a happy journey of togetherness. I enjoyed my visit peto. I like happy endings.
March 7th, 2024 13:17
Afraid
Parisab said:
To see her full story, even the ‘epic’s only torn page’ is a pure act of love! ‘He’s fallen under her command’ One doesn’t know of her faith, but his is a difficult path-sensitive and interesting concept and write…
March 7th, 2024 11:12
Parisab said:
To see her full story, even the ‘epic’s only torn page’ is a pure act of love! ‘He’s fallen under her command’ One doesn’t know of her faith, but his is a difficult path-sensitive and interesting concept and write…
March 7th, 2024 11:12
Afraid
Bobby O said:
Allegorical w the meaning true to real events as naïveté and Disney endings shall not rest in the land once splayed by Georgie Best.
March 7th, 2024 11:01
Bobby O said:
Allegorical w the meaning true to real events as naïveté and Disney endings shall not rest in the land once splayed by Georgie Best.
March 7th, 2024 11:01
Afraid
JulesBurnsit said:
I got the aural chills and nearly teared up. Love the repetition and meter.
March 7th, 2024 08:41
JulesBurnsit said:
I got the aural chills and nearly teared up. Love the repetition and meter.
March 7th, 2024 08:41
Anyone
Cloie said:
Your poem really packs a punch! With vivid imagery, it\'s like a whirlwind of emotions. It\'s a piece filled with raw and intense emotions that leaves a lasting impact. Great job!
March 6th, 2024 12:27
Cloie said:
Your poem really packs a punch! With vivid imagery, it\'s like a whirlwind of emotions. It\'s a piece filled with raw and intense emotions that leaves a lasting impact. Great job!
March 6th, 2024 12:27
Anyone
Introverted Sage said:
It\'s hard to trust people when so many seem to have ulterior motives.
A quote by Goethe I have to remind myself of daily:
\'As soon as you trust yourself, you will know how to live.\'
And you described just that perfectly... Because had we simply trusted our first instincts...
Highly relatable write with a perfect flow
March 5th, 2024 21:59
Introverted Sage said:
It\'s hard to trust people when so many seem to have ulterior motives.
A quote by Goethe I have to remind myself of daily:
\'As soon as you trust yourself, you will know how to live.\'
And you described just that perfectly... Because had we simply trusted our first instincts...
Highly relatable write with a perfect flow
March 5th, 2024 21:59
Vic n tim
sunshine777 said:
beautiful light and dark
she retreats to the safety of comfortable hell
amazing use of words
March 5th, 2024 21:01
sunshine777 said:
beautiful light and dark
she retreats to the safety of comfortable hell
amazing use of words
March 5th, 2024 21:01
Anyone
Bobby O said:
Extra descriptive. Evokes a pathos in the reader a sortof a reluctant kinship
March 5th, 2024 19:32
Bobby O said:
Extra descriptive. Evokes a pathos in the reader a sortof a reluctant kinship
March 5th, 2024 19:32
Anyone
GiftedT17 said:
What a great write I definitely can relate,job well done🙂
March 5th, 2024 18:00
GiftedT17 said:
What a great write I definitely can relate,job well done🙂
March 5th, 2024 18:00
Anyone
Bella Shepard said:
Beware the fickle lover, they dress themselves in sincerity, but in reality they are disengenuous to a fault. Exquisitely captured in this verse my friend.
March 5th, 2024 17:14
Bella Shepard said:
Beware the fickle lover, they dress themselves in sincerity, but in reality they are disengenuous to a fault. Exquisitely captured in this verse my friend.
March 5th, 2024 17:14
Anyone
Accidental Poet said:
It takes a long time to trust someone Peto. And your poem here exemplifies that perfectly. Well done my friend. 👍
March 5th, 2024 16:04
Accidental Poet said:
It takes a long time to trust someone Peto. And your poem here exemplifies that perfectly. Well done my friend. 👍
March 5th, 2024 16:04
Anyone
Christina8 said:
Just a phenomenal write, Stevie! I love how you can keep the last line in each stanza to rhyme with the next. Once again, you have presented us with a sad poem but it\'s lovely how you show it to us. \"When juggling my heart of glass; you dropped it on the floor\" So descriptive.....I\'ve had that happen a time or two. A very relatable and fantastic poem......once again!!
March 5th, 2024 13:49
Christina8 said:
Just a phenomenal write, Stevie! I love how you can keep the last line in each stanza to rhyme with the next. Once again, you have presented us with a sad poem but it\'s lovely how you show it to us. \"When juggling my heart of glass; you dropped it on the floor\" So descriptive.....I\'ve had that happen a time or two. A very relatable and fantastic poem......once again!!
March 5th, 2024 13:49
Anyone
Meera Mere said:
Well penned peto......
\"You took it all and left me there
To stand alone without a care
The weight became too much to bare
My soul is what you tore\"
Loved it thoroughly...
March 5th, 2024 12:34
Meera Mere said:
Well penned peto......
\"You took it all and left me there
To stand alone without a care
The weight became too much to bare
My soul is what you tore\"
Loved it thoroughly...
March 5th, 2024 12:34
Halloween
Neilton said:
wow! I\'m really impressed ! I had fun reading your poem!!
March 5th, 2024 10:48
Neilton said:
wow! I\'m really impressed ! I had fun reading your poem!!
March 5th, 2024 10:48
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