Comments received on poems by peto
Verges
BlessedbyGod said:
The girl on the verges in your life , is a great one and she deserves to be happy,
I get a sense that you can be the man to make her happy!
Her and the young in her nest,
Write on my dear friend, you\'re great and your messages come through loud and clear,
Don\'t give up on her,
October 15th, 2023 08:49
BlessedbyGod said:
The girl on the verges in your life , is a great one and she deserves to be happy,
I get a sense that you can be the man to make her happy!
Her and the young in her nest,
Write on my dear friend, you\'re great and your messages come through loud and clear,
Don\'t give up on her,
October 15th, 2023 08:49
Verges
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful yet all too familiar heartbreaking story! Your rhyme and cadence could not be more spot on. I look forward to these every morning, Stevie. Definitely a fave!
October 15th, 2023 06:25
Christina8 said:
This is a wonderful yet all too familiar heartbreaking story! Your rhyme and cadence could not be more spot on. I look forward to these every morning, Stevie. Definitely a fave!
October 15th, 2023 06:25
Verges
Introverted Sage said:
I\'ve come to look forward to these!
\'His assault on her senses was swift and direct
\'A flamethrower to the heart he had sworn to protect \'
Like secretly sending sparks or inspiration to help her along.
Love this!
October 15th, 2023 02:41
Introverted Sage said:
I\'ve come to look forward to these!
\'His assault on her senses was swift and direct
\'A flamethrower to the heart he had sworn to protect \'
Like secretly sending sparks or inspiration to help her along.
Love this!
October 15th, 2023 02:41
Hype
Christina8 said:
Excellent! I\'m loving this new format. Like I always say, it\'s like you are improving with each poem. Mind blown! Christina
October 14th, 2023 03:03
Christina8 said:
Excellent! I\'m loving this new format. Like I always say, it\'s like you are improving with each poem. Mind blown! Christina
October 14th, 2023 03:03
Hype
Introverted Sage said:
The mind can be our worst enemy!
and sometimes nothing even comes close to slowing the circles it takes us in.. just to make it stop..for a moment..
\'For the space
To disgrace\'
If only we could do our \'ugly\' in the dark. Most times we do, yet we feel it is seen as if painted on our faces.
This one feels like a letting go of sorts.
Great write!
October 14th, 2023 01:41
Introverted Sage said:
The mind can be our worst enemy!
and sometimes nothing even comes close to slowing the circles it takes us in.. just to make it stop..for a moment..
\'For the space
To disgrace\'
If only we could do our \'ugly\' in the dark. Most times we do, yet we feel it is seen as if painted on our faces.
This one feels like a letting go of sorts.
Great write!
October 14th, 2023 01:41
Hype
Parisab said:
Too cool to bother with ‘too much’ I presume! Yet you took your time with this one and created a colorful canvas. I always say the art needs to stand out more than the artist…
October 14th, 2023 01:40
Parisab said:
Too cool to bother with ‘too much’ I presume! Yet you took your time with this one and created a colorful canvas. I always say the art needs to stand out more than the artist…
October 14th, 2023 01:40
Hype
LIZ said:
Ummmm heyyyyy and you talk about me? 😝 Being different!! \"In a world full of colour I\'m still black and white\"--DO YOUR WORST! DAMN!!!!! I needed this, thank you!!
October 14th, 2023 01:17
LIZ said:
Ummmm heyyyyy and you talk about me? 😝 Being different!! \"In a world full of colour I\'m still black and white\"--DO YOUR WORST! DAMN!!!!! I needed this, thank you!!
October 14th, 2023 01:17
Lamb
Introverted Sage said:
Your writing makes the reader feel as if they are right there with her as well as with you as the observer. You paint both sides so well. An inspiring finish!
Great write
October 13th, 2023 23:29
Introverted Sage said:
Your writing makes the reader feel as if they are right there with her as well as with you as the observer. You paint both sides so well. An inspiring finish!
Great write
October 13th, 2023 23:29
Potential
Introverted Sage said:
So inspiring! May we all know our own true potential.
Thanks for sharing
October 13th, 2023 22:47
Introverted Sage said:
So inspiring! May we all know our own true potential.
Thanks for sharing
October 13th, 2023 22:47
Lamb
JimmyWriteOn said:
What a fantastic write about something so real and horrifying. Really great descriptions and rhyming. I could really see what you were describing
October 13th, 2023 15:25
JimmyWriteOn said:
What a fantastic write about something so real and horrifying. Really great descriptions and rhyming. I could really see what you were describing
October 13th, 2023 15:25
Lamb
Parisab said:
So much empathy in the texture of your words-and it’s not easy to craft gentle words to build this imagery of horror-
watching others suffer is hard but to wait with patience for their arrival makes it even harder-thanks Peto!
October 13th, 2023 11:00
Parisab said:
So much empathy in the texture of your words-and it’s not easy to craft gentle words to build this imagery of horror-
watching others suffer is hard but to wait with patience for their arrival makes it even harder-thanks Peto!
October 13th, 2023 11:00
Lamb
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece peto!!
Hopefully when she makes it to him, all her fears and doubts will disappear as soon as he wraps his arms around her , and let\'s her know that he is her safe place.
October 13th, 2023 09:47
BlessedbyGod said:
Great piece peto!!
Hopefully when she makes it to him, all her fears and doubts will disappear as soon as he wraps his arms around her , and let\'s her know that he is her safe place.
October 13th, 2023 09:47
Lamb
Christina8 said:
This write is amazing. I really felt the line \"Finding strength she had once buried deeper than coal\'. That\'s really powerful! And I think we all know a person like this. I think you\'ve shown us all what your capable of! Remarkable!!
October 13th, 2023 07:46
Christina8 said:
This write is amazing. I really felt the line \"Finding strength she had once buried deeper than coal\'. That\'s really powerful! And I think we all know a person like this. I think you\'ve shown us all what your capable of! Remarkable!!
October 13th, 2023 07:46
Lamb
Pop64 said:
This is a complete story with clear details and what appears to he a self resurrection, a happy hopeful ending. If only all were so lucky or strong enough to push through.
October 13th, 2023 07:17
Pop64 said:
This is a complete story with clear details and what appears to he a self resurrection, a happy hopeful ending. If only all were so lucky or strong enough to push through.
October 13th, 2023 07:17
Lamb
LIZ said:
Wow!!! You must be talking to someone...just saying. Anyone who\'s been in this hell, will feel every single emotion you\'ve so well emitted here! It\'s extremely difficult to get out of a situation like this! My respect!! 🙌
October 13th, 2023 06:14
LIZ said:
Wow!!! You must be talking to someone...just saying. Anyone who\'s been in this hell, will feel every single emotion you\'ve so well emitted here! It\'s extremely difficult to get out of a situation like this! My respect!! 🙌
October 13th, 2023 06:14
Potential
Teddy.15 said:
Potential to reach ones goals is all the importance of ones soul. ❤️
October 12th, 2023 15:21
Teddy.15 said:
Potential to reach ones goals is all the importance of ones soul. ❤️
October 12th, 2023 15:21
Potential
LIZ said:
Now....what are WE going to do with all this potential? Because if it just sits with us, there\'s no point!! Great write! You keep surprising me!! Loved it!! 💫
October 12th, 2023 12:04
LIZ said:
Now....what are WE going to do with all this potential? Because if it just sits with us, there\'s no point!! Great write! You keep surprising me!! Loved it!! 💫
October 12th, 2023 12:04
Potential
Christina8 said:
I really like this one! The potential is there for all of us....why don\'t we take advantage of it?? Love the flowing lines and content....Christina
October 12th, 2023 11:03
Christina8 said:
I really like this one! The potential is there for all of us....why don\'t we take advantage of it?? Love the flowing lines and content....Christina
October 12th, 2023 11:03
Teen nightmare
Bobby O said:
Way to present strong phrase that attempts to diminish the shameful glorification of brutality. Thanks for this piece. Great job.
October 11th, 2023 12:31
Bobby O said:
Way to present strong phrase that attempts to diminish the shameful glorification of brutality. Thanks for this piece. Great job.
October 11th, 2023 12:31
Teen nightmare
LIZ said:
This one\'s very different from your usual, and I love it. Made me think of a young person with dreams, who ends up facing the realities of life. Can\'t hide, and even when fighting, gets hit hard. So…..say what you mean, and mean what you say….NOW. Because eventually, death is at our doorstep, and then, there\'s no point. Just thinking out loud!! Welcome back!!!
October 11th, 2023 08:09
LIZ said:
This one\'s very different from your usual, and I love it. Made me think of a young person with dreams, who ends up facing the realities of life. Can\'t hide, and even when fighting, gets hit hard. So…..say what you mean, and mean what you say….NOW. Because eventually, death is at our doorstep, and then, there\'s no point. Just thinking out loud!! Welcome back!!!
October 11th, 2023 08:09
Teen nightmare
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, so very powerful peto,
I can relate to this piece with certain people in my life, Brought tears to my eyes,
October 11th, 2023 06:24
BlessedbyGod said:
Wow, so very powerful peto,
I can relate to this piece with certain people in my life, Brought tears to my eyes,
October 11th, 2023 06:24
Teen nightmare
Christina8 said:
really great poem/story you have here. (btw I\'m so happy you are back!) Did you shake things up a bit with your rhyme scheme? I like it a lot! You have a way with words and this is written really well. Great job!
October 11th, 2023 06:15
Christina8 said:
really great poem/story you have here. (btw I\'m so happy you are back!) Did you shake things up a bit with your rhyme scheme? I like it a lot! You have a way with words and this is written really well. Great job!
October 11th, 2023 06:15
Genius
lenore_inNeverland said:
We can see a Genius penning the words for the other geniuses of the world!
Amazing peto!
October 5th, 2023 09:31
lenore_inNeverland said:
We can see a Genius penning the words for the other geniuses of the world!
Amazing peto!
October 5th, 2023 09:31
Genius
Introverted Sage said:
This is such a Genius write!
And the etymology of the word.. with a reference to an inborn, tutelary or guardian spirit.. \'that no one else sees\' . Like a bird\'s eye view... So many ways this takes my mind! Thanks for sharing
October 3rd, 2023 01:47
Introverted Sage said:
This is such a Genius write!
And the etymology of the word.. with a reference to an inborn, tutelary or guardian spirit.. \'that no one else sees\' . Like a bird\'s eye view... So many ways this takes my mind! Thanks for sharing
October 3rd, 2023 01:47
Colour
anji x said:
Peto.
I really felt this writing.
Thank you for sharing.
anji
October 2nd, 2023 22:03
anji x said:
Peto.
I really felt this writing.
Thank you for sharing.
anji
October 2nd, 2023 22:03
Fairest
Carly said:
The rhythm you have with such metres is truly something and your message as well, it’s something to be admired, love 💕
October 2nd, 2023 13:57
Carly said:
The rhythm you have with such metres is truly something and your message as well, it’s something to be admired, love 💕
October 2nd, 2023 13:57
Shadows
Carly said:
I love the rhyming scheme in this, something I would love to try; thank you for inspiring me, also for such an intriguing story
October 2nd, 2023 12:15
Carly said:
I love the rhyming scheme in this, something I would love to try; thank you for inspiring me, also for such an intriguing story
October 2nd, 2023 12:15
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