Comments received on poems by peto
Qualities
Bella Shepard said:
I love the title of this poem,. How often do we look for qualities in another person, vs the superficiality we seem to embrace in the world today. The wonderful rhyming pattern gives this poem a flow, from stating the premise at the beginning, to realization at the end. Loved it!
February 2nd, 2024 16:28
Bella Shepard said:
I love the title of this poem,. How often do we look for qualities in another person, vs the superficiality we seem to embrace in the world today. The wonderful rhyming pattern gives this poem a flow, from stating the premise at the beginning, to realization at the end. Loved it!
February 2nd, 2024 16:28
Qualities
Introverted Sage said:
I love how you write.
Your poetry always speaks volumes..so much within the words you weave.
Thanks for sharing 🪶
February 2nd, 2024 14:35
Introverted Sage said:
I love how you write.
Your poetry always speaks volumes..so much within the words you weave.
Thanks for sharing 🪶
February 2nd, 2024 14:35
The key
Accidental Poet said:
Have to pay tribute to your Mum. Great write peto. 😊👍
February 2nd, 2024 11:26
Accidental Poet said:
Have to pay tribute to your Mum. Great write peto. 😊👍
February 2nd, 2024 11:26
The key
Christina8 said:
OMg Stevie, what a \'legendary\' poem! I\'m sure this tribute to your mom would make her so proud! \'\'\'She gave me life and holds the key\'\'\' is an impressive line. i hope you keep writing!!
February 2nd, 2024 03:56
Christina8 said:
OMg Stevie, what a \'legendary\' poem! I\'m sure this tribute to your mom would make her so proud! \'\'\'She gave me life and holds the key\'\'\' is an impressive line. i hope you keep writing!!
February 2nd, 2024 03:56
The key
Dayena said:
Your Mum relates to the godly woman in proverbs. 31(Bible).. beautiful poem
February 1st, 2024 22:46
Dayena said:
Your Mum relates to the godly woman in proverbs. 31(Bible).. beautiful poem
February 1st, 2024 22:46
The key
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful tribute, to a mother who was exceptional in every way. Beautiful in verse and written with the tender words of love. This stole my heart!
February 1st, 2024 15:45
Bella Shepard said:
A wonderful tribute, to a mother who was exceptional in every way. Beautiful in verse and written with the tender words of love. This stole my heart!
February 1st, 2024 15:45
Neanderthal
Christina8 said:
Oh,talk about a masterpiece! All your poems are so good! So caring for this person and such description! You know I love the rhyme you do. Thanks for posting it!
November 29th, 2023 03:08
Christina8 said:
Oh,talk about a masterpiece! All your poems are so good! So caring for this person and such description! You know I love the rhyme you do. Thanks for posting it!
November 29th, 2023 03:08
The dream
BlessedbyGod said:
If only that dream had a chance to become reality, but fear of the unknown can be a scary thing, but sometimes we have to take that chance and leap blindly into the beautiful flames, and become vulnerable and give that special someone that you can\'t get out of your mind a chance, give her a call let her convey all the emotions she holds inside so sacred and afraid to let loose, because of the pain of her past,
Think about it, you know who I\'m talking about
November 27th, 2023 15:24
BlessedbyGod said:
If only that dream had a chance to become reality, but fear of the unknown can be a scary thing, but sometimes we have to take that chance and leap blindly into the beautiful flames, and become vulnerable and give that special someone that you can\'t get out of your mind a chance, give her a call let her convey all the emotions she holds inside so sacred and afraid to let loose, because of the pain of her past,
Think about it, you know who I\'m talking about
November 27th, 2023 15:24
The dream
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend your poem plunges into the depths of the human psyche, and all it\'s vulnerabilities, the last stanza putting it beautifully into perspective. Loved it!
November 27th, 2023 10:21
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend your poem plunges into the depths of the human psyche, and all it\'s vulnerabilities, the last stanza putting it beautifully into perspective. Loved it!
November 27th, 2023 10:21
The dream
lunarchloedip said:
this felt so honestly written and vulnerable. love it!
November 27th, 2023 09:20
lunarchloedip said:
this felt so honestly written and vulnerable. love it!
November 27th, 2023 09:20
Some
Christina8 said:
\'Some\" is a truly good poem and everybody can relate to these words. Very well said.
November 27th, 2023 01:05
Christina8 said:
\'Some\" is a truly good poem and everybody can relate to these words. Very well said.
November 27th, 2023 01:05
The dream
Christina8 said:
Yes I think I\'ve given up on the dream. This is such a brilliant poem! I like the line, \"Dipped back into the defects you thought you\'d outgrown\" I mean every stanza has something I can relate to. I really like that last one.....thanks for taking me on a journey, Stevie! Christina
November 27th, 2023 01:00
Christina8 said:
Yes I think I\'ve given up on the dream. This is such a brilliant poem! I like the line, \"Dipped back into the defects you thought you\'d outgrown\" I mean every stanza has something I can relate to. I really like that last one.....thanks for taking me on a journey, Stevie! Christina
November 27th, 2023 01:00
Some
Doggerel Dave said:
Well put. This is why there should be no generalised use of the word \'we\' to signify everybody.
November 26th, 2023 23:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Well put. This is why there should be no generalised use of the word \'we\' to signify everybody.
November 26th, 2023 23:16
Sailing
Bella Shepard said:
The rhyming pattern of this poem adds such an element of fun as read aloud. Sweet sentiment builds with each stanza, culminating in that beautiful \"take a chance\". Loved every syllable!
November 4th, 2023 14:32
Bella Shepard said:
The rhyming pattern of this poem adds such an element of fun as read aloud. Sweet sentiment builds with each stanza, culminating in that beautiful \"take a chance\". Loved every syllable!
November 4th, 2023 14:32
Candlewitch you tube version
Bobby O said:
How much fun was that? That fiddle is an acquired taste I guess.
October 31st, 2023 10:10
Bobby O said:
How much fun was that? That fiddle is an acquired taste I guess.
October 31st, 2023 10:10
Candlewitch you tube version
Christina8 said:
A rap--Very good! There are many of your poems that would go good with a rap. Nice to hear that accent!!
October 31st, 2023 08:42
Christina8 said:
A rap--Very good! There are many of your poems that would go good with a rap. Nice to hear that accent!!
October 31st, 2023 08:42
Sailing
Introverted Sage said:
Who wouldn\'t want to take that chance!
And top notch flow to match.
Love it
October 28th, 2023 01:37
Introverted Sage said:
Who wouldn\'t want to take that chance!
And top notch flow to match.
Love it
October 28th, 2023 01:37
Sailing
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it cares not for coming back... An elope of note sir! Well written Peto. 👌🏼
October 27th, 2023 14:04
Garth Rakumakoe said:
These words whisk my mind away in so carefree a way my friend, that it cares not for coming back... An elope of note sir! Well written Peto. 👌🏼
October 27th, 2023 14:04
My poetic side
Eileen Clark said:
Oh this is lovely, you took my thoughts and put them down on paper so much better then I could have done, thank you. :)
October 27th, 2023 10:50
Eileen Clark said:
Oh this is lovely, you took my thoughts and put them down on paper so much better then I could have done, thank you. :)
October 27th, 2023 10:50
Sailing
LIZ said:
Ummmm \'Don\'t be shy Let\'s get high\' sounds about right!! 🤭
October 27th, 2023 04:27
LIZ said:
Ummmm \'Don\'t be shy Let\'s get high\' sounds about right!! 🤭
October 27th, 2023 04:27
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