Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



We, truth Scribbler’s: few
dusk arising said:

Do we have a choice. Our voices haunt us needing redemption of the page. The pains of expressing deep held emotion, frustration of conversion to the written word.... relief that the words have formed before us though tainted that someplace along the way they were traded for a convenience of another thought or more....

Being poetic, a mixed blessing of bliss and frustration.

January 14th, 2022 05:34

We, truth Scribbler’s: few
woundedheart said:

Love the depth within such brevity ☺

January 14th, 2022 05:15

Instinctively
kivous said:

I think with carefully and beautifully chosen words, you have put across a very deep thought. Loved it! Thank you

January 13th, 2022 17:04

Instinctively
Rozina said:

I don\'t know the answers. I don\'t think I ever will! But I\'ll be thinking of this now....Great piece.

January 12th, 2022 04:58

Instinctively
Paul Bell said:

I like how we start life all optimistic, roses and love. Then love\'s off with Joe, and suddenly the world has come to an end. Fear will get you to the river, sheer fear will get you across it.

January 11th, 2022 12:11

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AuburnScribbler said:

A great couple of stanzas here L. B. Mek, you\'ve certain hit the nail on the head regards to the meandering river of life, that can frustrate and distort what we plan, but it\'s important on how we jump over the hurdles.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well!

January 11th, 2022 08:47

Instinctively
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Mek but that grin will always outweigh the fear.

Andy

January 11th, 2022 01:40

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Buzz Bray said:

Powerful imagery. That inner child, so wounded by life. Nicely done!

January 10th, 2022 21:03

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FallenAngel1🕊 said:

Yup,..with my big five O less than a month away,(they say it\'s a milestone you know? Lol) this really got me thinking🤔 Well done🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟. Mission accomplished. Your work here is done. Now take a bow and shine bright🌟 😀✌️🕊

January 10th, 2022 14:56

Instinctively
spilleronsheet said:

Deep insight with great life experience paints a beautiful scenery on the canvas called life
Maybe with poetry and passing of years the lines mean a lot to me
True is the wisdom in the instincts that is a very special visitor of mine

January 10th, 2022 11:55

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dusk arising said:

Ah yes, the gift of trusting in our instincts or do you refer to our final breath. The gift of faith will paint that moment.

January 10th, 2022 11:36

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woundedheart said:

When we realise we really aren\'t immortal as we thought as teenagers, very insightful ☺

January 10th, 2022 11:06

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Teddy.15 said:

LOL 🤣 I love your imagery I can see you smiling from ear to.ear until the ball drops
It happens almost on a daily basis to me. Very relateble dear Mek. 💖

January 10th, 2022 06:39

Instinctively
kitty the naughty poet said:

A thought provoking piece.
Nice share

January 10th, 2022 05:23

Watermelons in Winter
A.D. Small said:

Watermelon does sound really amazing right now lol. I love the naturalness of this. Very well written. I really enjoy your work

January 10th, 2022 03:06

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
kitty the naughty poet said:

in my mind’s dimensioning corridors
a resoundingly stale coldness, awakens
voicing life’s, inescapable: bitter truth
it has to be me, to yield
love’s cancerous mirages, to survive.

Wow I love that. Really great share dear friend

January 9th, 2022 07:41

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Garth Rakumakoe said:

A hurricane of the sharpest darts of descript. I could aliken this to those commercial vessel fishing nets. You really hauled out the ocean my friend. Particularly I must point out, even your presentation stands out by virtue of artistic posture, i.e font, shape, spacing, punctuation. It presents you and your uniqueness with little care for being \"pretty\". As a writer, I identify with that. \"Stoppering\".... An excavation right there my friend. I could go on ... An authentic masterpiece L.B. - Hat off to you sir!🔥

January 8th, 2022 00:05

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Michael Edwards said:

Great read - it flows - the mark of an accomplished write.

January 7th, 2022 14:44

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Paul Bell said:

I will survive.
In reality, should really be the bywords to life.
Some will say you need to get knocked down to get up, and maybe they\'re right, still hurts mind you.

January 7th, 2022 12:50

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
spilleronsheet said:

A fantastic imagery
Where every scene played
Played in front of my eyes
I could see the actor in play
Love struck and heartbroken
Clinging on tenterhooks to hold it or let go
The mobile’s dimlight and life holding as if the last line for the lovers to connect
Some connections hold on
Causing us in dilemma whether to continue or not
What if we never get the chance again
Every word conveyed the pain
Heart wrenching were the lines
The title spoke of a cold hearted
Why did it seem so overwhelming
The pledge of not being in same situation again
But alas the Cupid isn’t in our control
We could be only actors
Not the one writing the play afar

January 7th, 2022 12:03

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Poetic Dan said:

Holly **** what just happened, this was not expected but yet how could I not.

Such expressions of the soul

\"Not these morbid thoughts again\"

Hit me like an arrow at the end, holding on from the start as if there was something in your words I wanted so much but yet still can\'t let go!

I\'ll never know every step you have taken but to have a vibration like yours, must mean it\'s been no vacation.

Thank you for sharing my friend!

January 7th, 2022 11:49

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Saxon Crow said:

\'there won’t - ever

be another: again!\'

Right there says it all my friend.

Brilliant piece of poetry Mek. I was there with you all the way

January 7th, 2022 10:42

They label you: ‘Cold hearted’
Teddy.15 said:

LoL damn love dear Mek, one of my all time favourite dance and karaoke songs that I have sung many times with a passion. Beautifully executed a poem that tells not all is perfect but we will move along and maybe we will or won\'t find that one that could be perfect. Fab, although hoping it\'s just fiction. 💖

January 7th, 2022 07:05

Windows, as mirrors
John Prophet said:

Dear poet you have a gift.
Wonderful write!

January 6th, 2022 19:30

Windows, as mirrors
melellendixon said:

Excellent as always.

January 6th, 2022 01:08

Windows, as mirrors
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Mek, may this year bring more wonder to your life.

Andy

January 5th, 2022 01:28

Watermelons in Winter
GardenDelights said:

Very enjoyable! You present much worth pondering here. You sculpt with ink in many highly descriptive phrases. Some of note for myself: \'There’s, not enough poetry in the world /and far too much of it, simultaneously\' \'creatures, who thrive best/ draped, in starlit blankets/
of kindness and love\' and your final verse.

January 5th, 2022 01:06

Windows, as mirrors
Gyakkou said:

Your poems evoke a kind of sad emptiness in me. They\'re so flowery and remind me of how I used to write poetry during some of my darkest times I try to eclipse when I was seventeen. They\'re darker poems than what I\'ve chosen to publish here. I grouped 40 together and named them Poems to Read Aloud When I\'m Gone. Life never gets any easier, but my style of writing has changed greatly into an almost lyrical direction, and when I\'m composing now I listen to my favourite music. Before I could only write in silence, and I\'d recite them. Great piece. I especially love: \"lava dedication
as eyes squirm\".

January 4th, 2022 20:19

Windows, as mirrors
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, L.B.
Happy New Year

January 4th, 2022 18:33

Windows, as mirrors
dusk arising said:

Like your moth my mind took flight across instinct and will. Whatever drives Mr Moth undermines his species survival, for one day, just as humanity cannot cease to be led into commercial, environment bending, self destruction, he too and his ilk will die away..... whilst other life forms casually take his place and reform our planet.

January 4th, 2022 14:58



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