Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



First and ever, Fiercest
Fay Slimm. said:

This has to be one of your best L.B. - a bouquet of imagery to sigh for and the last stanza shines with romantic assurance that love is forever. One for my list of favourites for sure.

February 19th, 2021 16:52

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Munro said:

Like your poem ,,liked lines ,,
Staring match within a glass
Taut white fingerpips grip
No ice left to delve between
Swiftly swigged severance


February 19th, 2021 06:02

atoms, to Atoms
AlitaOpal said:

I wake up every morning and my thoughts are the first things to greet me, but yet I have this profound sense that each new day I\'ve been reborn. Therefore I stay in the moment and before I go to sleep l let go and hold on to nothing, for the cycle shall continue when I awaken again.. Beautiful scribble L. B

February 18th, 2021 19:42

atoms, to Atoms
Neville said:

Let\'s not mess about, let\'s cut to the chase and get straight to the point ..
Yes, to the very heart of the matter and then to look beyond our own personal double helix and into the infinitely brighter backdrop of beyond ....
Yes there, where the real answers and truths do lie, just waiting to be found ............................You have such a way with words L.B .. this pilgrim can be lost, yet find himself somewhere deep within them .........
Neville

February 18th, 2021 04:58

atoms, to Atoms
Goldfinch60 said:

Those atoms make us up into the person we have become and they will still exist when we have left this world.
Good words Mek.

Andy

February 16th, 2021 01:18

atoms, to Atoms
FredPeyer said:

Wonderfully written, L.B.
The question is if we can reduce ourselves to the infinite, to go back to the \'big bang\'?

February 15th, 2021 21:43

atoms, to Atoms
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Wow this is epic and impressive, you say it in a brill way indeed. It was wordy in a fab way. Kudos!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

February 15th, 2021 12:33

atoms, to Atoms
John Prophet said:

Tried to wrap my head around this but failed. Yet it’s flow kept me reading as it was a well structured write.
Enjoyed!

February 15th, 2021 10:05

atoms, to Atoms
dusk arising said:

There is something here for anyone who has, through meditation reached that altered mental state and touched the energy aura of the spiritual reality which eludes our day to day.

Such experience is life changing and the birth of \'faith\'. A faith held personal, unnecessary to share, deeply reassuring.

February 15th, 2021 04:28

Hegemony in Romance
FredPeyer said:

A very witty and accurate take on Valentine\'s Day. I enjoyed the read.

February 12th, 2021 11:46

Hegemony in Romance
Jerry Reynolds said:

Happy Valentines Day L.B

February 12th, 2021 10:38

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
AlitaOpal said:

I\'m in awe, I hope one day my husband and and I can have a moment so precious like this.. my children are now teenagers almost young adults.. blessings to you and the special lady. 🌹

February 11th, 2021 21:49

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
nicolibellamont said:

I like \"to youths distant golden hue\" as I get older I find that hue fading to a distance farther each day. Kind of numbing. Very good. Thank you for sharing

February 11th, 2021 09:05

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Neville said:



what a remarkably good reminisce my friend ..
my glass is both lifted and poised ready to drink to your health and in anticipation of a further sip and savoured swallow ....

Make mine a double single malt if you please ........................



February 9th, 2021 05:08

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Goldfinch60 said:

The toughs within us can lead to such places Mek.

Andy

February 9th, 2021 01:17

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Jerry Reynolds said:

Reflective L.B. I surely can relate to those ponderings over whisky.

February 8th, 2021 09:46

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
dusk arising said:

Is it the drink you are missing or that long lost feeling something somewhere once overpowered your senses with and left a tease of memory just beyond grasp.

February 8th, 2021 08:10

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Fay Slimm. said:

Top marks for this metaphoric inventiveness which asks how the furnace of love becomes all too soon ash......... a remarkable and very relatable read my friend.

February 8th, 2021 06:24

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
Goldfinch60 said:

That explanation is unnecessary your Queen will always be with you - as mine is.

Andy

February 6th, 2021 01:32

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
dusk arising said:

Straight to the heartstrings with that punch line L B M.

\'Only the lonely, know the way I feel tonight\'

February 5th, 2021 10:14

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
Jerry Reynolds said:

A really fine poem L.B.

February 5th, 2021 09:33

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
Robert Haigh said:

A warm and tender poem. Very nicely articulated!

February 5th, 2021 04:53

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
Dove said:

Quite profound, if I allow the rules to guide me, then be it so, but I never let it distract me from the pleasure of rhymes and rhythm, in poetry as well as life

February 4th, 2021 14:39

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
SureshG said:

It\'s so important to differentiate oneself, specially when it comes to poetry, as you have so eloquently done here.

February 3rd, 2021 13:16

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
Goldfinch60 said:

Clever write Mek, it is a shame that their awareness does not come to help the poor souls of whom they are aware.

Andy

February 2nd, 2021 01:43

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
FredPeyer said:

Great choice of words, L.B., but like d a I do have difficulties understanding.

February 1st, 2021 21:05

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
Jerry Reynolds said:

Like the read L,B. very challenging.

February 1st, 2021 17:21

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
dusk arising said:

Read it twice - I\'m confused by it.

Now look where honesty got me!

February 1st, 2021 10:08

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
Neville said:


poetic license is often referred to but just as oft completely misunderstood ...

tis infinitely possible of course to get hooked pon those deceivingly soft n gentle thorns that also double as a lovers lips or fingertips .. or even poetry itself methinks ....

I may be a million miles off centre, but I know what I both mean and like ... and I mean, I like this page my friend ....

Neville



February 1st, 2021 08:47

BOXED
Suresh said:

We are creatures that constrain ourselves in false limitations

A good write indeed

January 31st, 2021 09:08



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