Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



A sonnet - in Name
Goldfinch60 said:

That greatness can be seen within your words Mek, we all have great poems inside us it just takes time to find the right one but it is there.
Good sonnet.

Andy

April 20th, 2021 00:16

A sonnet - in Name
Neville said:


This is simply awesome ..

I have never knowingly dared attempt such a feat of poetry ..

and most likely now ... never shall

Write on my friend ..

Neville


April 19th, 2021 13:32

A sonnet - in Name
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful.

April 19th, 2021 09:05

A sonnet - in Name
dusk arising said:

Knowing there are highly respected great poets of today and yesteryear has never inspired me to read or emulate them. True i am aware of bits of poetry here and there but largely ignorant.

For me my writing is about self expression, a very personal need. Yes I would like to create a collection of my words in the vain hope my son and grandchildren may one day appreciate there was a bit more going on cereberally than met the eye.

So, in the round, you hit the nail on the head for me. There is after all ego lurking in the corner of my eye.

April 19th, 2021 07:09

of modern Poetic’s: mirroring Politics, a hopeful - Fool’s, lament
John Prophet said:

The push me pull you of humanity.
The struggle of conflicting views ultimately form the results. Great write!

April 17th, 2021 07:59

of modern Poetic’s: mirroring Politics, a hopeful - Fool’s, lament
Fay Slimm. said:

An admirably worded exposure of traits which end in forwarding marginalisation L.B. - agreed too that only empathy and humility will affect humanity\'s dire need for healing.

April 16th, 2021 15:58

of modern Poetic’s: mirroring Politics, a hopeful - Fool’s, lament
Teddy.15 said:

Excellent, I like realism and honesty within what I read.

April 16th, 2021 13:59

of modern Poetic’s: mirroring Politics, a hopeful - Fool’s, lament
dusk arising said:

I admire your writing style but fell at an early post failing to comprehend the complexity of narritive. My failing. I am a simple poet and bow to your visible prowess with the written word. I could not pass by without leaving a respectful comment.

April 16th, 2021 12:53

of modern Poetic’s: mirroring Politics, a hopeful - Fool’s, lament
PrEm Ji said:

Friend,
The world will remain capitalistic forever... Unfortunately, its a Universal truth...

April 16th, 2021 12:27

Gynaika: our Most, beloved
PrEm Ji said:

Dear Mek,
Outstanding write!
She is beyond every explanation....

April 16th, 2021 07:36

Lover’s manual
SureshG said:

Maybe I can them love as succinctly as you have so poetically defined.

April 13th, 2021 22:06

Gynaika: our Most, beloved
Ifeanyichukwu said:

Dear Mek,
What you have here is a powerful vote and rich voice to gender equality. Poetry has a way of elevating the voice in a dignified presentation. And this you have captured here.
You have my vote!

April 13th, 2021 04:15

Lover’s manual
Goldfinch60 said:

Love is so special and we show our love in our own unique ways to the ones we love.

Andy

April 13th, 2021 00:15

“We”
Teddy.15 said:

\"we\" I like this play on words very much.

April 12th, 2021 11:46

Lover’s manual
dusk arising said:

Hmm difficult. I would not choose to dictate to another how they should love me. For in loving them i would be welcoming their own ways of loving me.
I\'m reminded of Goldfinch\'s poem today..... is this where my truth gets me into troubles?

April 12th, 2021 04:05

Lover’s manual
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful words 🙂🙂 and that song is lovely

April 12th, 2021 03:20

inherent Truth
ron parrish aka wordman said:

and i agree 100%

April 10th, 2021 17:10

Gynaika: our Most, beloved
Michael Edwards said:

there is such a powerful message within these fine words. I find it harder and harder to understand how so many form biased opinions based on only one viewpoint without sitting back and considering everything. Closed minds create divisions.

April 9th, 2021 14:28

Gynaika: our Most, beloved
Neville said:


....... You post here what should be an anthem to honour and indeed revere each and every one of them

... Respect my friend .. stay safe and write on ....... Neville

April 9th, 2021 04:04

Gynaika: our Most, beloved
Goldfinch60 said:

I treat everyone with equal respect and total equality.

Andy

April 9th, 2021 00:37

Promise, of a budding Tithonus
Goldfinch60 said:

That daffodil will live forever in your words Mek.

Andy

April 6th, 2021 00:32

Promise, of a budding Tithonus
Jerry Reynolds said:

A tough little beauty, that Daffodil.
Good write L.B.

April 5th, 2021 08:37

Promise, of a budding Tithonus
Makoto Maruyama said:

Mythical image, very good.

April 5th, 2021 04:52

inherent Truth
SureshG said:

is inherently so, as truth should not need to be repeated

nicely done

April 4th, 2021 06:33

“We”
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... would love to know if you had a beat in your head while writing this or just that silence in a tone that wrote this pure magic!

April 4th, 2021 02:05

inherent Truth
Eugene S. said:

Awesome!! You\'ve summed up my daily routine!😁

April 3rd, 2021 17:39

inherent Truth
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... boom.. love it! And love it again my friend. That\'s a beautiful view, don\'t forget it or maybe let it help you find the place to rest and sleep..

April 3rd, 2021 16:01

inherent Truth
jarcher54 said:

Could you repeat that?

April 3rd, 2021 02:57

inherent Truth
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Mek but if you can perceive it correctly all will be as it should.

Andy

April 3rd, 2021 00:26

inherent Truth
MendedFences27 said:

\"Repetition\" can be a useful poetic tool or it can ruin a poem. Here the partial repetition if your line endings adds to the poems value, It demonstrates for the reader exactly what the poem is trying to convey. Interesting read. - Phil A.

April 2nd, 2021 19:17



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