Comments received on poems by Cali Kittana
Dreams About You
L. B. Mek said:
\'From your soft eyes to your warm smile
And the way you refused to leave my side that night
You kept me warm from the breeze outside
During the fire alarm that evacuated us\'..
if you continue to write, in the future
try to maintain this poetic voice
this simple tenacity, you imbue
with your fierce veracity;
it is a treasure, few
can reproduce
and even fewer, can word it all
so enticingly, accessible..
thanks for sharing
a great read
November 29th, 2021 06:03
L. B. Mek said:
\'From your soft eyes to your warm smile
And the way you refused to leave my side that night
You kept me warm from the breeze outside
During the fire alarm that evacuated us\'..
if you continue to write, in the future
try to maintain this poetic voice
this simple tenacity, you imbue
with your fierce veracity;
it is a treasure, few
can reproduce
and even fewer, can word it all
so enticingly, accessible..
thanks for sharing
a great read
November 29th, 2021 06:03
But He Wasn\'t Real
L. B. Mek said:
such a detailed and stark accounting of a seemingly monumental, betrayal
imbued with passion..
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 04:33
L. B. Mek said:
such a detailed and stark accounting of a seemingly monumental, betrayal
imbued with passion..
thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 04:33
Life Updates
dusk arising said:
That was one very enjoyable read. I really like the complete turn around you presented. So relateable.
The inner story of so many of our lives today and very well written.
January 16th, 2021 05:36
dusk arising said:
That was one very enjoyable read. I really like the complete turn around you presented. So relateable.
The inner story of so many of our lives today and very well written.
January 16th, 2021 05:36
Cold Showers
dusk arising said:
The two extremes both needing water. Lovely choice of metaphor. Stay out of the water and you won\'t get ........
July 21st, 2020 11:57
dusk arising said:
The two extremes both needing water. Lovely choice of metaphor. Stay out of the water and you won\'t get ........
July 21st, 2020 11:57
Cold Showers
ForeverJesus6 said:
There is something about this piece. I am not sure, but I like it. I am happy that you found the desire to write again.
Jesus heals.
Persistence is key
July 21st, 2020 03:28
ForeverJesus6 said:
There is something about this piece. I am not sure, but I like it. I am happy that you found the desire to write again.
Jesus heals.
Persistence is key
July 21st, 2020 03:28
Cold Showers
Michael Edwards said:
i can read a lot into this - great write Cali
July 21st, 2020 02:33
Michael Edwards said:
i can read a lot into this - great write Cali
July 21st, 2020 02:33
Cold Showers
L. B. Mek said:
\'My expression blank, My mind full\'
wonderful depth of self-awareness and insight
hope you find the \'warm\' paths of life soon
July 21st, 2020 02:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'My expression blank, My mind full\'
wonderful depth of self-awareness and insight
hope you find the \'warm\' paths of life soon
July 21st, 2020 02:27
Just Because
elmina said:
you are very authentic in your writing, keep going! you have so much talent!! much love, always here if needed!
March 5th, 2019 01:47
elmina said:
you are very authentic in your writing, keep going! you have so much talent!! much love, always here if needed!
March 5th, 2019 01:47
Paper Airplanes in Chemistry
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This is a BEAUTIFUL POEM CALI ~ Something we can all empathise with. You have a BOY who taught you to make Paper Aeroplanes in Chemistry (What would Marie Curie think of that ?). You have always loved this BOY and always will ! Alas your LOVE may never be consummated ! My experience was with a GIRL (from our Sister School) who taught me to DANCE when I was 15. I learned to dance (which is a great asset in finding a Girl Friend !) but I also fell in LOVE with SADIE ~ but alas it was never reciprocated ! I love her still 20 years later ! BUT She is married and a MUM and I am engaged to ANGELA ~ who does reciprocate my LOVE. She shares my site ~ Please read our Poems. I copied your Poem so I could explore it more fully. I am a Chemistry Teacher in an 18+ College. Because of that your poem intrigued me and I now look out for Students on the BACK ROW making Paper Aeroplanes ! Angela is in NEW ZEALAND until SEPTEMBER 2019 on a work exchange ! MPS works by reading and commenting on each others POEMS. You can also build up a cohort of MPS FRIENDS : Every Blessing : BRIAN (UK).
November 8th, 2018 16:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
This is a BEAUTIFUL POEM CALI ~ Something we can all empathise with. You have a BOY who taught you to make Paper Aeroplanes in Chemistry (What would Marie Curie think of that ?). You have always loved this BOY and always will ! Alas your LOVE may never be consummated ! My experience was with a GIRL (from our Sister School) who taught me to DANCE when I was 15. I learned to dance (which is a great asset in finding a Girl Friend !) but I also fell in LOVE with SADIE ~ but alas it was never reciprocated ! I love her still 20 years later ! BUT She is married and a MUM and I am engaged to ANGELA ~ who does reciprocate my LOVE. She shares my site ~ Please read our Poems. I copied your Poem so I could explore it more fully. I am a Chemistry Teacher in an 18+ College. Because of that your poem intrigued me and I now look out for Students on the BACK ROW making Paper Aeroplanes ! Angela is in NEW ZEALAND until SEPTEMBER 2019 on a work exchange ! MPS works by reading and commenting on each others POEMS. You can also build up a cohort of MPS FRIENDS : Every Blessing : BRIAN (UK).
November 8th, 2018 16:52
Escape
fuche_bu said:
Ah, yes, it is great to escape back home again. nice poem.
October 26th, 2018 19:59
fuche_bu said:
Ah, yes, it is great to escape back home again. nice poem.
October 26th, 2018 19:59
Purple Shirt
Not said:
This really captures how triggering and anxiety inducing something can be. Even though there\'s a lot of colors and sensory words being used every line, the repeating of \"purple shirt\" gives it all an anchor. Its like the feeling of being taken all over the place while really only being shown one thing or standing still. Lots of force here.
September 7th, 2018 23:42
Not said:
This really captures how triggering and anxiety inducing something can be. Even though there\'s a lot of colors and sensory words being used every line, the repeating of \"purple shirt\" gives it all an anchor. Its like the feeling of being taken all over the place while really only being shown one thing or standing still. Lots of force here.
September 7th, 2018 23:42
Living for the Dreaming
Crystal Hope said:
Quite a fantastic poem. Well done work
September 3rd, 2018 22:42
Crystal Hope said:
Quite a fantastic poem. Well done work
September 3rd, 2018 22:42
Purple Shirt
Crystal Hope said:
I love the color purple and your poem was absolutely beautiful and quite moving
September 3rd, 2018 22:41
Crystal Hope said:
I love the color purple and your poem was absolutely beautiful and quite moving
September 3rd, 2018 22:41
If~
Jalso said:
Very nice, beautiful, sad. i love it. keep it up. this is great.
July 22nd, 2013 00:46
Jalso said:
Very nice, beautiful, sad. i love it. keep it up. this is great.
July 22nd, 2013 00:46
