Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Fever
Neville said:
this is one o them that makes me feel more than just one thing at a time .. there is of course the sadness & appropriate amount of compassion and empathy that one may or may not expect in view of the fact we have not met in person but share a literary relationship .. and then conversely, there is a feeling of gladness that you are now back here at MPS and hopefully recuperating if not already fully convalesced .. Oh\' and furthermore, there is a genuine feeling of appreciation that your poetic offering today has more than adequately explained your most recent protracted and until now unexplained absence .. Oh\' and for what its worth, I can honestly say you have been missed and not only by me .. Neville
November 16th, 2023 01:31
Neville said:
this is one o them that makes me feel more than just one thing at a time .. there is of course the sadness & appropriate amount of compassion and empathy that one may or may not expect in view of the fact we have not met in person but share a literary relationship .. and then conversely, there is a feeling of gladness that you are now back here at MPS and hopefully recuperating if not already fully convalesced .. Oh\' and furthermore, there is a genuine feeling of appreciation that your poetic offering today has more than adequately explained your most recent protracted and until now unexplained absence .. Oh\' and for what its worth, I can honestly say you have been missed and not only by me .. Neville
November 16th, 2023 01:31
Espionage
tallisman said:
Brilliant Dave…. Inspired some great comments! That’s gotta be art!
October 23rd, 2023 01:00
tallisman said:
Brilliant Dave…. Inspired some great comments! That’s gotta be art!
October 23rd, 2023 01:00
Try this for size:
sorenbarrett said:
Did she do something to Fido? My dog took a piece out of me when I was cutting his nails and cut too short with a pair of wire cutters.
September 27th, 2023 20:20
sorenbarrett said:
Did she do something to Fido? My dog took a piece out of me when I was cutting his nails and cut too short with a pair of wire cutters.
September 27th, 2023 20:20
Life Changed Forever
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure what to say. It could change my life forever then I would have wished that I had said something different. Oh well throw caution to the wind, I\'ll give it a go and throw in my two bits. Loved it Dave.
September 24th, 2023 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Not sure what to say. It could change my life forever then I would have wished that I had said something different. Oh well throw caution to the wind, I\'ll give it a go and throw in my two bits. Loved it Dave.
September 24th, 2023 05:19
Manifesto or Look Beyond the Name.
sorenbarrett said:
I echo this Dave and feel myself a rebel against all conformity for conformity sake. I would be an anarchist but know it doesn\'t work. I guess I would never work out as a bee or ant.
September 22nd, 2023 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
I echo this Dave and feel myself a rebel against all conformity for conformity sake. I would be an anarchist but know it doesn\'t work. I guess I would never work out as a bee or ant.
September 22nd, 2023 06:32
Love (Poetry).
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Hope you find love and the hose! :)
September 21st, 2023 15:53
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Hope you find love and the hose! :)
September 21st, 2023 15:53
Three Palms
sorenbarrett said:
Can identify with this on Dave. What was a palm covered field between me and the beach is now a row of houses. Oh well there goes the neighborhood.
September 20th, 2023 11:25
sorenbarrett said:
Can identify with this on Dave. What was a palm covered field between me and the beach is now a row of houses. Oh well there goes the neighborhood.
September 20th, 2023 11:25
My Domestication.
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in verse Dave that I can relate to. Keeping the kitchen clean very important. Vermin are not my favorite things to live with.
September 12th, 2023 19:23
sorenbarrett said:
A great story in verse Dave that I can relate to. Keeping the kitchen clean very important. Vermin are not my favorite things to live with.
September 12th, 2023 19:23
Espionage
Goldfinch60 said:
If you read this Dave I will have to set my people on you, so don\'t repeat it. LOL
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
If you read this Dave I will have to set my people on you, so don\'t repeat it. LOL
Andy
September 10th, 2023 01:59
Espionage
Bella Shepard said:
This is fun my friend! I\'m donning my trench coat and fedora, while the theme from Mission Impossible plays in the background. Oops, almost forgot the dark glasses. Very crafty of you, loved it!
September 9th, 2023 14:39
Bella Shepard said:
This is fun my friend! I\'m donning my trench coat and fedora, while the theme from Mission Impossible plays in the background. Oops, almost forgot the dark glasses. Very crafty of you, loved it!
September 9th, 2023 14:39
Espionage
sorenbarrett said:
This one caught me by surprise Dave. This poetic encoded message leaves me full of paranoia. My poetry is self therapy and amusement, I don\'t consider it art. Art is too high a standard I hope it is not espionage but I worry that it may be used for such. I have left myself open I\'m afraid.
September 9th, 2023 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
This one caught me by surprise Dave. This poetic encoded message leaves me full of paranoia. My poetry is self therapy and amusement, I don\'t consider it art. Art is too high a standard I hope it is not espionage but I worry that it may be used for such. I have left myself open I\'m afraid.
September 9th, 2023 08:17
Unprecedented
peto said:
Great rhyme with even better content
The last 2 lines particularly impressed
As for your notes
100% with you
1st I\'ve read from you Dave
Won\'t be the last
September 6th, 2023 09:08
peto said:
Great rhyme with even better content
The last 2 lines particularly impressed
As for your notes
100% with you
1st I\'ve read from you Dave
Won\'t be the last
September 6th, 2023 09:08
Unprecedented
sorenbarrett said:
Does it really matter what\'s causing it? I\'m with you, when there is a fire in a theater, I\'m not asking what caused it, I\'m looking for an exit. Great write Dave
September 4th, 2023 06:14
sorenbarrett said:
Does it really matter what\'s causing it? I\'m with you, when there is a fire in a theater, I\'m not asking what caused it, I\'m looking for an exit. Great write Dave
September 4th, 2023 06:14
Unprecedented
2781 said:
What\'s that saying? \"Out of the frying pan into the fire.\"
Prophetic one might think.
September 2nd, 2023 09:33
2781 said:
What\'s that saying? \"Out of the frying pan into the fire.\"
Prophetic one might think.
September 2nd, 2023 09:33
Unprecedented
Neville said:
My oh\' my, this would appear to be a fine example of an acrostic poem for the following grossly misunderstood and likewise, underused word
UFTFNAAIOMDAAI .. and I agree with the underlying principles that inspired it .. Neville
September 2nd, 2023 03:25
Neville said:
My oh\' my, this would appear to be a fine example of an acrostic poem for the following grossly misunderstood and likewise, underused word
UFTFNAAIOMDAAI .. and I agree with the underlying principles that inspired it .. Neville
September 2nd, 2023 03:25
Unprecedented
orchidee said:
Ohhh, is a such a good poem as this unprecedented - no precedent, nothing going before to equal or better it?!
I\'m flattering now, just cos I wanted to use that long word, so I\'ll say it again: \'unprecedented\'. lol.
September 2nd, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
Ohhh, is a such a good poem as this unprecedented - no precedent, nothing going before to equal or better it?!
I\'m flattering now, just cos I wanted to use that long word, so I\'ll say it again: \'unprecedented\'. lol.
September 2nd, 2023 02:03
Unprecedented
Goldfinch60 said:
Good questions Dave, those in the know and in power knew all about this but if they did anything about it they would not get there pennies.
Andy
September 2nd, 2023 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Good questions Dave, those in the know and in power knew all about this but if they did anything about it they would not get there pennies.
Andy
September 2nd, 2023 01:12
Love (Poetry).
sorenbarrett said:
Roses are red violets are blue... I used to write stuff like that but it\'s been too many years and I guess my testosterone has fallen. Now it\'s just laments about growing old, pain and loss.
August 31st, 2023 22:39
sorenbarrett said:
Roses are red violets are blue... I used to write stuff like that but it\'s been too many years and I guess my testosterone has fallen. Now it\'s just laments about growing old, pain and loss.
August 31st, 2023 22:39
Love (Poetry).
Doggerel Dave said:
Bella, this is no laughing matter, I’ll have you know!!!!!!!!!
Not to worry, I know where what and how…. And occasionally you can bump into a bloke like Seamus Heaney who knows what he is talking about….
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Thanks for a call I value very much.
August 31st, 2023 19:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Bella, this is no laughing matter, I’ll have you know!!!!!!!!!
Not to worry, I know where what and how…. And occasionally you can bump into a bloke like Seamus Heaney who knows what he is talking about….
https://0a2498fc719f2ab431fa-6504a77d78f45c257c610f1aba0e7950.ssl.cf3.rackcdn.com/pdf/1579_20191125165520.pdf
Thanks for a call I value very much.
August 31st, 2023 19:29
Love (Poetry).
Bella Shepard said:
Only four lines long, but it gave me the laugh of the day. I kept rereading and laughed every time. I think, dear Dave, you should say what you really mean, lol. I get where you\'re coming from, and I just love you my friend. Priceless!
August 31st, 2023 15:03
Bella Shepard said:
Only four lines long, but it gave me the laugh of the day. I kept rereading and laughed every time. I think, dear Dave, you should say what you really mean, lol. I get where you\'re coming from, and I just love you my friend. Priceless!
August 31st, 2023 15:03
\"Oh no - not your operation!\"
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m glad that this is now in your past. Operations are nothing to look forward to. A great story though all set in rhyme.
August 27th, 2023 05:33
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m glad that this is now in your past. Operations are nothing to look forward to. A great story though all set in rhyme.
August 27th, 2023 05:33
The Passenger
sorenbarrett said:
Twice as old as her dad... then that\'s like grand dad, right? We can only dream my friend.
August 24th, 2023 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
Twice as old as her dad... then that\'s like grand dad, right? We can only dream my friend.
August 24th, 2023 07:34
The Passenger
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dave , it may bring back sweet memories.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dave , it may bring back sweet memories.
Andy
August 24th, 2023 00:53
The Passenger
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, beauty or appreciation is in the eye of the beholder no matter what age. I went to the gym this AM to carry on with my Physical Therapy exercises, and there I saw the young and robust, with physical prowess on display. Talk about feeling like a fossil. My only solace is that one day, they will be the fossils. Take care dear friend!
August 23rd, 2023 12:09
Bella Shepard said:
Ah, beauty or appreciation is in the eye of the beholder no matter what age. I went to the gym this AM to carry on with my Physical Therapy exercises, and there I saw the young and robust, with physical prowess on display. Talk about feeling like a fossil. My only solace is that one day, they will be the fossils. Take care dear friend!
August 23rd, 2023 12:09
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