Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Clock Change – Tonight!!
Paul Bell said:
Every bloody bit of technology known to man changes the hour. Then you pop into the car, and it just laughs at you, not moving back or forward. Mind you, the car probably knows it\'s a waste of time.
November 14th, 2021 07:25
Paul Bell said:
Every bloody bit of technology known to man changes the hour. Then you pop into the car, and it just laughs at you, not moving back or forward. Mind you, the car probably knows it\'s a waste of time.
November 14th, 2021 07:25
In Transit
Paul Bell said:
Always like stories that start in the dark. The dark in itself brings mystery and takes you on that little journey of intrigue. Routine always tells of waiting, and usually more waiting. Then it happens.
November 13th, 2021 14:23
Paul Bell said:
Always like stories that start in the dark. The dark in itself brings mystery and takes you on that little journey of intrigue. Routine always tells of waiting, and usually more waiting. Then it happens.
November 13th, 2021 14:23
Time Traveler.
Fay Slimm. said:
Longer the better for me too Dave - so glad you saw lots while you were there. Great read.
November 13th, 2021 08:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Longer the better for me too Dave - so glad you saw lots while you were there. Great read.
November 13th, 2021 08:55
Time Traveler.
Neville said:
Been there, done that, had the tee shirt nicked & wrote about it all way back .................. I simply love travelling .. Neville
November 13th, 2021 08:28
Neville said:
Been there, done that, had the tee shirt nicked & wrote about it all way back .................. I simply love travelling .. Neville
November 13th, 2021 08:28
In Transit
Neville said:
this is very bloomin good DD, very good indeed sir .......................... N
November 12th, 2021 05:08
Neville said:
this is very bloomin good DD, very good indeed sir .......................... N
November 12th, 2021 05:08
In Transit
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a tale and left in suspense too - you have such a gift for holding attention Dave -- I have been on seat-edge reading this build-up and could hardly wait for the end to discover the mystery -- your pen subjects readers to ordinary happenings with short-line tension and that my friend is the mark of a good novelist....... creative writing for sure - sequel now do you think. ?
November 11th, 2021 07:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a tale and left in suspense too - you have such a gift for holding attention Dave -- I have been on seat-edge reading this build-up and could hardly wait for the end to discover the mystery -- your pen subjects readers to ordinary happenings with short-line tension and that my friend is the mark of a good novelist....... creative writing for sure - sequel now do you think. ?
November 11th, 2021 07:35
In Transit
dusk arising said:
Very impressed with your writing skill and maturity DD. Yes if there\'s more i\'d like to read it.
If i had bought a book and this were the opening paragraphs then I would already be hooked.
Full marks to you.
November 11th, 2021 07:32
dusk arising said:
Very impressed with your writing skill and maturity DD. Yes if there\'s more i\'d like to read it.
If i had bought a book and this were the opening paragraphs then I would already be hooked.
Full marks to you.
November 11th, 2021 07:32
Time Traveler.
Lorna said:
Lucky lucky you to have done this..... I agree the longer the better so you could almost feel you belonged there.
November 8th, 2021 06:19
Lorna said:
Lucky lucky you to have done this..... I agree the longer the better so you could almost feel you belonged there.
November 8th, 2021 06:19
Time Traveler.
Paul Bell said:
One country I\'ve yet to visit.
Now, are Italians like Londoners, they see you coming towards them with a map, and they bolt.
November 8th, 2021 05:14
Paul Bell said:
One country I\'ve yet to visit.
Now, are Italians like Londoners, they see you coming towards them with a map, and they bolt.
November 8th, 2021 05:14
Time Traveler.
dusk arising said:
Intrigued by your poem i discovered my own ignorance. Never had that travel bug to wander the globe nor an appreciation of artists of that ilk. How different we humans can be, I felt my \'hum-drum-ness\' exposed.
Mind you, I\'d have loved the trains. I\'ve been a railways nut since childhood.
Enjoyed the read and where it took me.
November 8th, 2021 04:54
dusk arising said:
Intrigued by your poem i discovered my own ignorance. Never had that travel bug to wander the globe nor an appreciation of artists of that ilk. How different we humans can be, I felt my \'hum-drum-ness\' exposed.
Mind you, I\'d have loved the trains. I\'ve been a railways nut since childhood.
Enjoyed the read and where it took me.
November 8th, 2021 04:54
Time Traveler.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that illusion become reality Dave and may Caneletto fill your life with beauty.
Andy
November 8th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May that illusion become reality Dave and may Caneletto fill your life with beauty.
Andy
November 8th, 2021 01:48
Lost Central Park - NYC
Neville said:
it seems we had a similar experience DD .. mine not in Central Park though but Klyde Warren Park Texas .. and I most certainly and absolutely will not be tempted to write about it .... N :)
November 4th, 2021 12:35
Neville said:
it seems we had a similar experience DD .. mine not in Central Park though but Klyde Warren Park Texas .. and I most certainly and absolutely will not be tempted to write about it .... N :)
November 4th, 2021 12:35
Clock Change – Tonight!!
Neville said:
I just love mnemonics .. but then I\'m just an old fashioned fella into words .. I always get it wrong this clock changing thing & end up feeling jet lagged climbing the stairs already ............................. N :)
November 1st, 2021 17:41
Neville said:
I just love mnemonics .. but then I\'m just an old fashioned fella into words .. I always get it wrong this clock changing thing & end up feeling jet lagged climbing the stairs already ............................. N :)
November 1st, 2021 17:41
Nostradamus
James Michael said:
A fine read if ever there was one. Chin up buddy.
October 17th, 2021 22:31
James Michael said:
A fine read if ever there was one. Chin up buddy.
October 17th, 2021 22:31
Clock Change – Tonight!!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww admiring your word play and pun on the seasons, i like to fo that in poems too. Kudos for this awesome poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
October 12th, 2021 23:32
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww admiring your word play and pun on the seasons, i like to fo that in poems too. Kudos for this awesome poem!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
October 12th, 2021 23:32
Clock Change – Tonight!!
HannahElisabeth said:
Spring forward and Fall back is the only way I remembered the order correctly; I found this to be absolutely hilarious. I needed a good laugh today, thank you
October 3rd, 2021 20:49
HannahElisabeth said:
Spring forward and Fall back is the only way I remembered the order correctly; I found this to be absolutely hilarious. I needed a good laugh today, thank you
October 3rd, 2021 20:49
Wind Powered Submarines.
MendedFences27 said:
Wind powered subs - Well hoist the mainsail Matey! Oh yeah they do have sails. This tech sounds fascinating and if it eliminates the nuclear aspects it would be a hell of a lot safer. Nice one DD. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2021 18:00
MendedFences27 said:
Wind powered subs - Well hoist the mainsail Matey! Oh yeah they do have sails. This tech sounds fascinating and if it eliminates the nuclear aspects it would be a hell of a lot safer. Nice one DD. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2021 18:00
Clock Change – Tonight!!
Fay Slimm. said:
With you all the way Dave in detesting changes in time - I never remember and wake to find I am too late or early.......... hoping your winter behaves itself for you my faraway friend.
October 2nd, 2021 05:47
Fay Slimm. said:
With you all the way Dave in detesting changes in time - I never remember and wake to find I am too late or early.......... hoping your winter behaves itself for you my faraway friend.
October 2nd, 2021 05:47
Clock Change – Tonight!!
Goldfinch60 said:
Fall back and spring forward are the ways I sort out the clocks, I the UK this year it coincides with Halloween so the witches on their broomsticks may be confused - I will have to tell some of my friends.
Andy
October 2nd, 2021 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Fall back and spring forward are the ways I sort out the clocks, I the UK this year it coincides with Halloween so the witches on their broomsticks may be confused - I will have to tell some of my friends.
Andy
October 2nd, 2021 02:44
Clock Change – Tonight!!
orchidee said:
We have another month or so in UK, before clocks go back.
Last year it was early (Oct 24th). This year we get another whole week before the change (Oct 30th this year).
October 2nd, 2021 02:21
orchidee said:
We have another month or so in UK, before clocks go back.
Last year it was early (Oct 24th). This year we get another whole week before the change (Oct 30th this year).
October 2nd, 2021 02:21
Lost Central Park - NYC
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dave, another of your life\'s experiences put into words.
Andy
September 30th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dave, another of your life\'s experiences put into words.
Andy
September 30th, 2021 00:34
Blathering On re Loss of Inspiration
Gary Edward Geraci said:
We’ll done. Much good that little green pocket bedside notebook is if the pen is all the way across the room on the dresser. Those two must never divorce. Entertaining and I can almost smell the alcohol on your breath 😂😂😂.
September 29th, 2021 19:36
Gary Edward Geraci said:
We’ll done. Much good that little green pocket bedside notebook is if the pen is all the way across the room on the dresser. Those two must never divorce. Entertaining and I can almost smell the alcohol on your breath 😂😂😂.
September 29th, 2021 19:36
Lost Central Park - NYC
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Ah, a nice piece of Americana, Dave. I enjoy this writing as it conjures up a countless multitude of unmasked, yes unmasked (sorry NYC) individuals and I love seeing unmasked faces. My wife is sometimes in disbelief as to why I enjoy going to the grocery store with her - I reply that I love seeing unmasked faces - all people - and I challenge my self to truly love each one of them as the living Christ must. Great write my friend!
September 29th, 2021 19:33
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Ah, a nice piece of Americana, Dave. I enjoy this writing as it conjures up a countless multitude of unmasked, yes unmasked (sorry NYC) individuals and I love seeing unmasked faces. My wife is sometimes in disbelief as to why I enjoy going to the grocery store with her - I reply that I love seeing unmasked faces - all people - and I challenge my self to truly love each one of them as the living Christ must. Great write my friend!
September 29th, 2021 19:33
Blathering On re Loss of Inspiration
Laura🌻 said:
D.D.,
Your wonderfully written poem is very relatable. A very humorous and engaging read which I enjoyed very much.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 25th, 2021 20:34
Laura🌻 said:
D.D.,
Your wonderfully written poem is very relatable. A very humorous and engaging read which I enjoyed very much.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 25th, 2021 20:34
Blathering On re Loss of Inspiration
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very well done, Dave.
Oh, how many poems have drifted by in that spot just between asleep and awake.
September 25th, 2021 10:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Very well done, Dave.
Oh, how many poems have drifted by in that spot just between asleep and awake.
September 25th, 2021 10:03
Blathering On re Loss of Inspiration
Fay Slimm. said:
And after a read of this enjoyable rhyming a bard you certainly were and are Dave - -- I know the feeling of night-inspiration when words float by sleepily and are forgotten the moment you sit up to record them - - - your natural wit gave me my first weekend chuckle for which I send many thanks. More of this please ?
September 25th, 2021 03:09
Fay Slimm. said:
And after a read of this enjoyable rhyming a bard you certainly were and are Dave - -- I know the feeling of night-inspiration when words float by sleepily and are forgotten the moment you sit up to record them - - - your natural wit gave me my first weekend chuckle for which I send many thanks. More of this please ?
September 25th, 2021 03:09
Wind Powered Submarines.
Thekkinkkattil said:
A nice update of technology. Conveyed technology in nutshell. Informative and enjoyable. Thank you D
September 19th, 2021 22:40
Thekkinkkattil said:
A nice update of technology. Conveyed technology in nutshell. Informative and enjoyable. Thank you D
September 19th, 2021 22:40
Wind Powered Submarines.
HannahElisabeth said:
\"tiny bubbles in well timed farts.\"
I love that this just made its way into a poem... Would it be \"punny\" to say I\'m huge fan of this piece...
September 19th, 2021 15:05
HannahElisabeth said:
\"tiny bubbles in well timed farts.\"
I love that this just made its way into a poem... Would it be \"punny\" to say I\'m huge fan of this piece...
September 19th, 2021 15:05
Wind Powered Submarines.
Neville said:
Have you applied for the patent yet ..
this is so cool ...... but then so is nuclear fusion I believe ......................... N :)
September 19th, 2021 12:11
Neville said:
Have you applied for the patent yet ..
this is so cool ...... but then so is nuclear fusion I believe ......................... N :)
September 19th, 2021 12:11
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