Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
And….
Neville said:
I read this earlier and thought I would return and pen something witty .. I did return but I didn\'t if you get wot I mean .. enjoyed both times tho & there you are .. wot else is a meta for eh\' .. Neville
September 7th, 2025 03:10
Neville said:
I read this earlier and thought I would return and pen something witty .. I did return but I didn\'t if you get wot I mean .. enjoyed both times tho & there you are .. wot else is a meta for eh\' .. Neville
September 7th, 2025 03:10
And….
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I love metaphorical bashing of metaphors. Those obtuse passages demand too much processing power of my outdated CPU. Energy consumption should be reduced for sustainable living...so less metaphorical excursion into the blackhole of artistic indulgence. Loved the poem.
September 7th, 2025 02:41
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I love metaphorical bashing of metaphors. Those obtuse passages demand too much processing power of my outdated CPU. Energy consumption should be reduced for sustainable living...so less metaphorical excursion into the blackhole of artistic indulgence. Loved the poem.
September 7th, 2025 02:41
And….
orchidee said:
Is this a metaphorical poem, or a literal one? (If \'literal\' and \'metaphorical\' are opposites?). What is Orchi on about now?!
All I know about metaphors is when someone asked me: \'Why did you meet her for?\' Corny joke there! lol.
September 7th, 2025 02:11
orchidee said:
Is this a metaphorical poem, or a literal one? (If \'literal\' and \'metaphorical\' are opposites?). What is Orchi on about now?!
All I know about metaphors is when someone asked me: \'Why did you meet her for?\' Corny joke there! lol.
September 7th, 2025 02:11
And….
Goldfinch60 said:
Those challenges are always there in our life Dave and when we face them and overcome them our life becomes stronger.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Those challenges are always there in our life Dave and when we face them and overcome them our life becomes stronger.
Andy
September 7th, 2025 01:20
Metaphor Master
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Succinctly put...madness of metaphors..or is it metaphocal madness do we suffer from?
September 5th, 2025 09:54
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Succinctly put...madness of metaphors..or is it metaphocal madness do we suffer from?
September 5th, 2025 09:54
Metaphor Master
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember a girl who used to buy me drinks.
It\'s just one of the reasons I Metaphor.
September 5th, 2025 08:45
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember a girl who used to buy me drinks.
It\'s just one of the reasons I Metaphor.
September 5th, 2025 08:45
Metaphor Master
orchidee said:
I\'m struggling with understanding some metaphors, and also iambic pentameters - if I knew what they are, that is! lol.
September 5th, 2025 02:40
orchidee said:
I\'m struggling with understanding some metaphors, and also iambic pentameters - if I knew what they are, that is! lol.
September 5th, 2025 02:40
Metaphor Master
Goldfinch60 said:
Reality is always in my life Dave and all is wonderful.
Andy
September 5th, 2025 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Reality is always in my life Dave and all is wonderful.
Andy
September 5th, 2025 01:08
Metaphor Master
arqios said:
Not very well, I suspect. Like many gamers and their real offline lives. Much conjecturing on my part though.
September 4th, 2025 19:01
arqios said:
Not very well, I suspect. Like many gamers and their real offline lives. Much conjecturing on my part though.
September 4th, 2025 19:01
I Spy With My Big Eye……
Kevin Hulme said:
Read one of you previous poems and you mentioned \'copilot\'. Had to look it up.
Thought it might be that blow-up thing from \'Airplane\' . Now I know. Prefer to use my Brain.
\'You can\'t call me AI\' as Paul Simon wouldn\'t say.
September 4th, 2025 08:42
Kevin Hulme said:
Read one of you previous poems and you mentioned \'copilot\'. Had to look it up.
Thought it might be that blow-up thing from \'Airplane\' . Now I know. Prefer to use my Brain.
\'You can\'t call me AI\' as Paul Simon wouldn\'t say.
September 4th, 2025 08:42
I Spy With My Big Eye……
sorenbarrett said:
Now Dave I think you may be mistaken in who you think this is. Regardless although I know your bark to be worse than your bite others might not. Let me pet that loveable old head of yours and tell you everything is all right.
September 4th, 2025 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
Now Dave I think you may be mistaken in who you think this is. Regardless although I know your bark to be worse than your bite others might not. Let me pet that loveable old head of yours and tell you everything is all right.
September 4th, 2025 04:30
I Spy With My Big Eye……
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Terse is right. How to say? Left me chewing my nails (something I never did) for quite a while.
September 4th, 2025 03:30
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Terse is right. How to say? Left me chewing my nails (something I never did) for quite a while.
September 4th, 2025 03:30
Sovereign Citizen
Kevin Hulme said:
\' I\'m not a Number; I\'m a free man\'.
You keep kicking against the System.
September 3rd, 2025 13:11
Kevin Hulme said:
\' I\'m not a Number; I\'m a free man\'.
You keep kicking against the System.
September 3rd, 2025 13:11
Sovereign Citizen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits sharp. “Capitalism doesn’t make you free”...that line cut straight through, simple and undeniable. You call out the necrosis without apology, and the quiet path you name speaks volumes. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done and a fave...erm...Dave. 😅🤣
September 3rd, 2025 10:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits sharp. “Capitalism doesn’t make you free”...that line cut straight through, simple and undeniable. You call out the necrosis without apology, and the quiet path you name speaks volumes. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done and a fave...erm...Dave. 😅🤣
September 3rd, 2025 10:57
Sovereign Citizen
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so much better to think outside the box Dave, the mind then thinks of proper ways in life.
Andy
September 3rd, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so much better to think outside the box Dave, the mind then thinks of proper ways in life.
Andy
September 3rd, 2025 02:48
Sovereign Citizen
orchidee said:
How\'s that winter going? About the same as March in the UK. One of us is upside down! lol.
September 3rd, 2025 02:25
orchidee said:
How\'s that winter going? About the same as March in the UK. One of us is upside down! lol.
September 3rd, 2025 02:25
Sovereign Citizen
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Welcome Soren. Note the effort and the edginess of your response. Or as a coconspirator of yours might post - 🤣
September 2nd, 2025 22:00
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Welcome Soren. Note the effort and the edginess of your response. Or as a coconspirator of yours might post - 🤣
September 2nd, 2025 22:00
Sovereign Citizen
sorenbarrett said:
There you go Dave I knew you were not a system man. Good show old man, I\'m with you
September 2nd, 2025 20:59
sorenbarrett said:
There you go Dave I knew you were not a system man. Good show old man, I\'m with you
September 2nd, 2025 20:59
Repost – Roll Up (2022)
Neville said:
Makes perfect sense .. don\'t be a prick go get ya self jabbed ..
September 1st, 2025 11:29
Neville said:
Makes perfect sense .. don\'t be a prick go get ya self jabbed ..
September 1st, 2025 11:29
Repost – Roll Up (2022)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That callback to polio really struck me, Dave. It grounds the urgency in lived history…making the plea now impossible to ignore. Well delivered, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That callback to polio really struck me, Dave. It grounds the urgency in lived history…making the plea now impossible to ignore. Well delivered, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 09:07
Repost – Roll Up (2022)
sorenbarrett said:
Another wave of illness noted a poem of warning to take preparation, always wise to protect oneself without causing a stampede. Nicely stated Dave
August 30th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Another wave of illness noted a poem of warning to take preparation, always wise to protect oneself without causing a stampede. Nicely stated Dave
August 30th, 2025 04:04
Friendly Response….
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your vacation Dave and see you soon.
Andy
August 30th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your vacation Dave and see you soon.
Andy
August 30th, 2025 01:51
Friendly Response….
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Blocked Again\'? More fibre in your diet I think.
August 29th, 2025 20:41
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Blocked Again\'? More fibre in your diet I think.
August 29th, 2025 20:41
Friendly Response….
arqios said:
There are many games and far too many players... the world is in our loungeroom and for some in the boudoir. Hope you are doing well.
August 29th, 2025 19:11
arqios said:
There are many games and far too many players... the world is in our loungeroom and for some in the boudoir. Hope you are doing well.
August 29th, 2025 19:11
Friendly Response….
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Dave you got my private message then, you knew I was missing you. I must of sent it mistakenly under a false name. I really do miss you when you are not around, this place is just not the same.
August 29th, 2025 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Dave you got my private message then, you knew I was missing you. I must of sent it mistakenly under a false name. I really do miss you when you are not around, this place is just not the same.
August 29th, 2025 13:43
Friendly Response….
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but ahem, caveat first: my extreme lack of sleep painfully eliminates my ability to think clearly, even when filling the pot for tea an hour or so ago. That said, you blocked her?! She\'s actually nice. I still tag after the poets/poetess who blocked me nearly a year ago now. It\'s the \"happy\" reality of this medium. Excellently rendered with a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2025 09:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but ahem, caveat first: my extreme lack of sleep painfully eliminates my ability to think clearly, even when filling the pot for tea an hour or so ago. That said, you blocked her?! She\'s actually nice. I still tag after the poets/poetess who blocked me nearly a year ago now. It\'s the \"happy\" reality of this medium. Excellently rendered with a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2025 09:12
Once More With Feeling…
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Why does it bring to mind that iconic line - species has amused itself to death
August 29th, 2025 01:17
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Why does it bring to mind that iconic line - species has amused itself to death
August 29th, 2025 01:17
Once More With Feeling…
Paul Bell said:
I quite like the idea of a robot writing for me while I\'m down the pub.
August 27th, 2025 13:33
Paul Bell said:
I quite like the idea of a robot writing for me while I\'m down the pub.
August 27th, 2025 13:33
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