Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Once More With Feeling…
Cheeky Missy said:
I badly need sleep and fully intended to be in bed by this quasi late hour of 2100, however, you\'ve confused me. I detest the rather devilish AI, nor but fight with the ones that beset me, and yes, it\'s the trendiest topic, but I\'m still confused. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2025 21:00
Cheeky Missy said:
I badly need sleep and fully intended to be in bed by this quasi late hour of 2100, however, you\'ve confused me. I detest the rather devilish AI, nor but fight with the ones that beset me, and yes, it\'s the trendiest topic, but I\'m still confused. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2025 21:00
Oracle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orry’s got sass! I had thought I commented on this and realized I never did. My bad! Chalk it up to the spotty internet I had this past weekend. This feels like a cheeky employee review of the office AI, but beneath the charm is something more… uncanny. You’ve captured the strange intimacy we’ve developed with our digital assistants...half helper, half ghost in the shell. A playful and pointed piece, Dave. You made me grin and squirm. 🌹👏
July 15th, 2025 19:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orry’s got sass! I had thought I commented on this and realized I never did. My bad! Chalk it up to the spotty internet I had this past weekend. This feels like a cheeky employee review of the office AI, but beneath the charm is something more… uncanny. You’ve captured the strange intimacy we’ve developed with our digital assistants...half helper, half ghost in the shell. A playful and pointed piece, Dave. You made me grin and squirm. 🌹👏
July 15th, 2025 19:03
Once More With Feeling…
Goldfinch60 said:
I still think outside the box Dave and AI cannot find me there.
Andy
July 15th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I still think outside the box Dave and AI cannot find me there.
Andy
July 15th, 2025 01:26
Once More With Feeling…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rock on, Dave! The call to sharpen the ol’ critical faculties is for friggin’ real. AI beware: the Doggrel Dave lens is watching. 😄 Great job, my friend. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 21:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rock on, Dave! The call to sharpen the ol’ critical faculties is for friggin’ real. AI beware: the Doggrel Dave lens is watching. 😄 Great job, my friend. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 21:07
Once More With Feeling…
Bella Shepard said:
Not being a techy I googled Copilot, very interesting. I see your point. I feel the same way about AI, as with all technology it posesses the capacity for good or bad. I\'ve seen the wonders of AI in medicine and for people with disabilities, as well as fears for it\'s use to misinform and control. Even leading figures in AI, and academics warn of the potential for misuse. This will require vigilence and a healthy dose of skepticism. We should all be on gard and hope that good judgement will prevail. Good write my friend!
July 14th, 2025 10:12
Bella Shepard said:
Not being a techy I googled Copilot, very interesting. I see your point. I feel the same way about AI, as with all technology it posesses the capacity for good or bad. I\'ve seen the wonders of AI in medicine and for people with disabilities, as well as fears for it\'s use to misinform and control. Even leading figures in AI, and academics warn of the potential for misuse. This will require vigilence and a healthy dose of skepticism. We should all be on gard and hope that good judgement will prevail. Good write my friend!
July 14th, 2025 10:12
Once More With Feeling…
orchidee said:
I\'m not human anyway, so I dunno how I get on here. lol.
July 14th, 2025 09:55
orchidee said:
I\'m not human anyway, so I dunno how I get on here. lol.
July 14th, 2025 09:55
Once More With Feeling…
sorenbarrett said:
Dave you and I are fighting a tidal wave of technology and are about to be swept out to sea and ground up in the debris. I got your point Ted Kaczynski was ahead of his time when in his manifesto said the technology would be the end of the human race. His tactics were a bit radical as the Unabomber.
July 14th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Dave you and I are fighting a tidal wave of technology and are about to be swept out to sea and ground up in the debris. I got your point Ted Kaczynski was ahead of his time when in his manifesto said the technology would be the end of the human race. His tactics were a bit radical as the Unabomber.
July 14th, 2025 04:29
Oracle
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the integration of artificial intelligence (AI) in creative processes, particularly in writing and poetry. The poem personifies technology, specifically a virtual assistant named \"Orry\" (or Copilot), and explores the relationship between human creativity and AI support. It raises questions about the role of technology in art and the extent to which it can enhance or replace human expression.OMG, Dave, three weeks ago, Copilot would not let me log in to my laptop, so I had to uninstall it!
July 13th, 2025 14:02
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the integration of artificial intelligence (AI) in creative processes, particularly in writing and poetry. The poem personifies technology, specifically a virtual assistant named \"Orry\" (or Copilot), and explores the relationship between human creativity and AI support. It raises questions about the role of technology in art and the extent to which it can enhance or replace human expression.OMG, Dave, three weeks ago, Copilot would not let me log in to my laptop, so I had to uninstall it!
July 13th, 2025 14:02
Oracle
orchidee said:
I\'m not a lot of use with making detailed comments.
Bu what I want to know is - did I see ya at The Oracle in town in my part of the UK? lol.
July 13th, 2025 11:05
orchidee said:
I\'m not a lot of use with making detailed comments.
Bu what I want to know is - did I see ya at The Oracle in town in my part of the UK? lol.
July 13th, 2025 11:05
Oracle
Cheeky Missy said:
Google informed my Gmail they were generously giving me free use of their AI; that innocent offer was an insidious notice I\'d thereafter be plagued until my mind offered to vanish. Trying to be rid of the faceless devil was as all attempts at exorcism--a failure and not allowed. It\'s been chancy ever since. You\'ve apparently pulled off your usual despite all the feigned assistance. Charming and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 10:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Google informed my Gmail they were generously giving me free use of their AI; that innocent offer was an insidious notice I\'d thereafter be plagued until my mind offered to vanish. Trying to be rid of the faceless devil was as all attempts at exorcism--a failure and not allowed. It\'s been chancy ever since. You\'ve apparently pulled off your usual despite all the feigned assistance. Charming and excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 13th, 2025 10:11
Fraternity
Doggerel Dave said:
This theme can continue - on to my next, \'Oracle\'.
July 13th, 2025 08:44
Doggerel Dave said:
This theme can continue - on to my next, \'Oracle\'.
July 13th, 2025 08:44
Oracle
arqios said:
It\'s a very human longing, and an important one. Knowing who\'s one the other end of a conversation gives depth to response\'s meaning and emotional texture to exchange; especially in poetry where so much is personal and could be intricately layered. To be a person in its core essence and engagement brings meaning to attention, curiosity and care. A human listening deeply, responding with thoughtfulness and sincerity- every word crafted coming from the depths of where poems issue from and inhabit, in nuance, mood and intention. A human with a living heartbeat and a messy backstory, a longing we hold on to. That should guarantee connection, a chance at understanding and genuine engagement, an authentic space worth cohabiting between \"like\" individuals. I guess we pick and choose at what\'s available and presented to us. Will go to \"Fraternity\" now and deep dive.
July 13th, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
It\'s a very human longing, and an important one. Knowing who\'s one the other end of a conversation gives depth to response\'s meaning and emotional texture to exchange; especially in poetry where so much is personal and could be intricately layered. To be a person in its core essence and engagement brings meaning to attention, curiosity and care. A human listening deeply, responding with thoughtfulness and sincerity- every word crafted coming from the depths of where poems issue from and inhabit, in nuance, mood and intention. A human with a living heartbeat and a messy backstory, a longing we hold on to. That should guarantee connection, a chance at understanding and genuine engagement, an authentic space worth cohabiting between \"like\" individuals. I guess we pick and choose at what\'s available and presented to us. Will go to \"Fraternity\" now and deep dive.
July 13th, 2025 05:39
Oracle
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a shopping centre locally here in UK - The Oracle. Do ya know it?! lol.
July 13th, 2025 01:49
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about a shopping centre locally here in UK - The Oracle. Do ya know it?! lol.
July 13th, 2025 01:49
Oracle
Poetic Licence said:
I think its a certainty they are already here, personally don\'t understand the point of using AI to write a poem, I write what I feel and think and thats what I enjoy, how does AI do that, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 23:21
Poetic Licence said:
I think its a certainty they are already here, personally don\'t understand the point of using AI to write a poem, I write what I feel and think and thats what I enjoy, how does AI do that, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 23:21
Oracle
sorenbarrett said:
Yes Dave it is hard to tell who is real and who is not, what poem is written by a human and what is artificial written by AI. Don\'t have to worry about my poems though they are not good enough to be AI.
July 12th, 2025 20:21
sorenbarrett said:
Yes Dave it is hard to tell who is real and who is not, what poem is written by a human and what is artificial written by AI. Don\'t have to worry about my poems though they are not good enough to be AI.
July 12th, 2025 20:21
Fraternity
Doggerel Dave said:
Please also note \"I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!\" by Friendship. I\'m doing this to be fair to all concerned, although I will still need some convincing.....
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-206894
July 11th, 2025 20:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Please also note \"I was always here, but now I\'m gone today!\" by Friendship. I\'m doing this to be fair to all concerned, although I will still need some convincing.....
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-206894
July 11th, 2025 20:35
Fraternity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! Dave, this hits home more than you know. I genuinely laughed at your closing question—perfect twist there, my friend. Friendship as currency is an intriguing idea, too, and I definitely feel the push-pull of connection and misunderstanding here. Clever, playful, and thoughtful as always. Thanks for sharing! 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 08:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ha! Dave, this hits home more than you know. I genuinely laughed at your closing question—perfect twist there, my friend. Friendship as currency is an intriguing idea, too, and I definitely feel the push-pull of connection and misunderstanding here. Clever, playful, and thoughtful as always. Thanks for sharing! 🌹👏
July 11th, 2025 08:59
Fraternity
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems I\'ve lost a fave and a contribution here. Where did you go, my petal? \'Parting is such sweet sorrow.....\'
\'Bye Ms Friendship.........🙃
July 11th, 2025 08:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems I\'ve lost a fave and a contribution here. Where did you go, my petal? \'Parting is such sweet sorrow.....\'
\'Bye Ms Friendship.........🙃
July 11th, 2025 08:23
Fraternity
Doggerel Dave said:
So at the end of the day (my day!) no one has at this point asked me: if my hypothesis/accusation is correct; who is behind her (discovered female at very bottom of About Me on the profile page)?
I would have suspicions around a couple of regular contributors here, but also, back to the Profile Page:
At this moment (and this could change rapidly) she has, ‘5 Poems that trended’ but at the same time ‘Hasn\'t published any poems’.
In view of that you could also ask, I suppose, what value or relevance the Trending Now column and the statistics have, if they can be so easily and blatantly rigged but are becoming an increasing feature of this site.
A mystery all round - I am forced to ask Management to resolve it, I think.
July 11th, 2025 02:21
Doggerel Dave said:
So at the end of the day (my day!) no one has at this point asked me: if my hypothesis/accusation is correct; who is behind her (discovered female at very bottom of About Me on the profile page)?
I would have suspicions around a couple of regular contributors here, but also, back to the Profile Page:
At this moment (and this could change rapidly) she has, ‘5 Poems that trended’ but at the same time ‘Hasn\'t published any poems’.
In view of that you could also ask, I suppose, what value or relevance the Trending Now column and the statistics have, if they can be so easily and blatantly rigged but are becoming an increasing feature of this site.
A mystery all round - I am forced to ask Management to resolve it, I think.
July 11th, 2025 02:21
Fraternity
Goldfinch60 said:
I am not and AI Dave, they would accept my CV. LOL
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
I am not and AI Dave, they would accept my CV. LOL
Andy
July 11th, 2025 01:46
Fraternity
MendedFences27 said:
\"Fraternity,\" can be many things to many people, from just an acquaintance to a life-long friend. Here, they run closer to the former, just someone to share words with. Your poem has spurred many to think about what friendship means, and as such, it has a beauty and a power. I for one enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 14:04
MendedFences27 said:
\"Fraternity,\" can be many things to many people, from just an acquaintance to a life-long friend. Here, they run closer to the former, just someone to share words with. Your poem has spurred many to think about what friendship means, and as such, it has a beauty and a power. I for one enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 10th, 2025 14:04
Fraternity
orchidee said:
I\'m not human, of course, but I still get on here! lol.
July 10th, 2025 12:55
orchidee said:
I\'m not human, of course, but I still get on here! lol.
July 10th, 2025 12:55
Fraternity
Cheeky Missy said:
Having only recently discovered what this user claims to be and how empty its page is, your post is all the more timely. Curiosity killed the cat, but it had nine lives, whence I\'ll just \"meow?\" And leave the issue at that. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy.
July 10th, 2025 11:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Having only recently discovered what this user claims to be and how empty its page is, your post is all the more timely. Curiosity killed the cat, but it had nine lives, whence I\'ll just \"meow?\" And leave the issue at that. Beautifully rendered with a haunting poignancy.
July 10th, 2025 11:35
Fraternity
Poetic Licence said:
I am sure interested to know what the question mark represents, I have an idea, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:44
Poetic Licence said:
I am sure interested to know what the question mark represents, I have an idea, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:44
Fraternity
sorenbarrett said:
In my attention deficit I missed the preamble, my Asperger\'s prevented feeling its social impact, my bipolar gave me mixed feelings but my hysteria loved it. Does AI stand for autistic individual? Machines do tend to have those autistic tendencies haven\'t had one yet be empathetic. A thought provoking piece Dave you\'ve got my mind rambling. All in good fun though. Loved it.
July 10th, 2025 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
In my attention deficit I missed the preamble, my Asperger\'s prevented feeling its social impact, my bipolar gave me mixed feelings but my hysteria loved it. Does AI stand for autistic individual? Machines do tend to have those autistic tendencies haven\'t had one yet be empathetic. A thought provoking piece Dave you\'ve got my mind rambling. All in good fun though. Loved it.
July 10th, 2025 09:40
The Influencer
Neville said:
Money for old rope I say .. I also say, give em enough and they do tend to hang themselves .. I got a real thing about octopussies too squire .. just play along and we could be squids in ..
July 10th, 2025 00:58
Neville said:
Money for old rope I say .. I also say, give em enough and they do tend to hang themselves .. I got a real thing about octopussies too squire .. just play along and we could be squids in ..
July 10th, 2025 00:58
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