Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
She Smiles…
arqios said:
Must have used her sense of smell and super hearing, perhaps 🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 05:37
arqios said:
Must have used her sense of smell and super hearing, perhaps 🙏🏻🕊️
February 21st, 2025 05:37
She Smiles…
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Dave. \"Smile, it confuses people!\"
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Dave. \"Smile, it confuses people!\"
Andy
February 21st, 2025 02:21
She Smiles…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is...ehem...so damn aware in a way most men are not! Bravo! I applaud this in all the ways I possibly can. And yes, a mighty and hearty laugh was had! Well done, Dave! 🌹👏🤣
February 20th, 2025 21:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is...ehem...so damn aware in a way most men are not! Bravo! I applaud this in all the ways I possibly can. And yes, a mighty and hearty laugh was had! Well done, Dave! 🌹👏🤣
February 20th, 2025 21:23
She Smiles…
sorenbarrett said:
Dave this one is marvelous especially with the final twist. Written well by itself but the ending made it. Loved it.
February 20th, 2025 18:21
sorenbarrett said:
Dave this one is marvelous especially with the final twist. Written well by itself but the ending made it. Loved it.
February 20th, 2025 18:21
She Smiles…
Poetic Licence said:
Love this, a really fun way at looking at how some men think they are gods gift and the person has to be blind to not see that, male egos, very enjoyable read
February 20th, 2025 17:44
Poetic Licence said:
Love this, a really fun way at looking at how some men think they are gods gift and the person has to be blind to not see that, male egos, very enjoyable read
February 20th, 2025 17:44
Beautiful Morning
Neville said:
Well I\'ll eat my bloomin hat squire .. me n the entire cast are proud of ya .. and wot better way to begin a brand new Doris day .. Neville .. oh\' and a dubble
👍😎👍from yours truly ..
February 18th, 2025 04:55
Neville said:
Well I\'ll eat my bloomin hat squire .. me n the entire cast are proud of ya .. and wot better way to begin a brand new Doris day .. Neville .. oh\' and a dubble
👍😎👍from yours truly ..
February 18th, 2025 04:55
Beautiful Morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Strangely I have just put this song on my poem for today Dave.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Strangely I have just put this song on my poem for today Dave.
Andy
February 18th, 2025 02:52
Beautiful Morning
MendedFences27 said:
If we hung the laundry out this morning it would be frozen solid by noon. Sometimes, we just have to use the dryer. As for Oklahoma. Haven\'t missed it. The state not the musical. Hope you\'re feeling better. - Phil A
February 17th, 2025 20:35
MendedFences27 said:
If we hung the laundry out this morning it would be frozen solid by noon. Sometimes, we just have to use the dryer. As for Oklahoma. Haven\'t missed it. The state not the musical. Hope you\'re feeling better. - Phil A
February 17th, 2025 20:35
Beautiful Morning
Cassie58 said:
Loved that musical Dave. Monday wash day. Get that washing out on the line to dry. Singing as you do your chores. Way to go. Dusting next. Got your duster ready? Happy new week.
February 17th, 2025 13:49
Cassie58 said:
Loved that musical Dave. Monday wash day. Get that washing out on the line to dry. Singing as you do your chores. Way to go. Dusting next. Got your duster ready? Happy new week.
February 17th, 2025 13:49
Beautiful Morning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Got the song reference right away. Never been to Oklahoma either and, truthfully, no reason to! LOL! That could change one day, though, who knows. 🤷♂️ Well done on this. Thoroughly enjoyed. 🌹
February 17th, 2025 08:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Got the song reference right away. Never been to Oklahoma either and, truthfully, no reason to! LOL! That could change one day, though, who knows. 🤷♂️ Well done on this. Thoroughly enjoyed. 🌹
February 17th, 2025 08:28
Beautiful Morning
Poetic Licence said:
What a great uplifting way to start the week, enjoyed the read
February 17th, 2025 07:28
Poetic Licence said:
What a great uplifting way to start the week, enjoyed the read
February 17th, 2025 07:28
Beautiful Morning
orchidee said:
It was beautiful - until I turned up! lol.
February 17th, 2025 06:21
orchidee said:
It was beautiful - until I turned up! lol.
February 17th, 2025 06:21
Beautiful Morning
arqios said:
Hey Dave! It’s been a while, good to see you around. Just ended a shift and I’m at the keys 📱 while waiting for my ride home. Our washing machine was out of balance today and traveled halfway across the laundry area😂
February 17th, 2025 05:21
arqios said:
Hey Dave! It’s been a while, good to see you around. Just ended a shift and I’m at the keys 📱 while waiting for my ride home. Our washing machine was out of balance today and traveled halfway across the laundry area😂
February 17th, 2025 05:21
Beautiful Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Lived in Oklahoma once for a few years and you haven\'t missed much. As for the rain I have had it as well and for us that don\'t get into the modern technology of a dryer it means piles of dirty cloths. Remember that tune as well and glad that your heart and pen are singing again, it seemed like a long dry spell between the rain storms. So glad to read it Dave.
February 17th, 2025 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
Lived in Oklahoma once for a few years and you haven\'t missed much. As for the rain I have had it as well and for us that don\'t get into the modern technology of a dryer it means piles of dirty cloths. Remember that tune as well and glad that your heart and pen are singing again, it seemed like a long dry spell between the rain storms. So glad to read it Dave.
February 17th, 2025 04:25
Beautiful Morning
Doggerel Dave said:
Original lyrics may be perused here:
https://rodgersandhammerstein.com/song/oklahoma/oh-what-a-beautiful-mornin/
February 17th, 2025 03:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Original lyrics may be perused here:
https://rodgersandhammerstein.com/song/oklahoma/oh-what-a-beautiful-mornin/
February 17th, 2025 03:47
Chair Repair
Neville said:
You gotta stand up for what you believe in Dave .. a chair should be for life not just for sitting in .. 😎🐶👍
February 14th, 2025 04:08
Neville said:
You gotta stand up for what you believe in Dave .. a chair should be for life not just for sitting in .. 😎🐶👍
February 14th, 2025 04:08
Love (Poetry).
Cheeky Missy said:
Jane Austen poked fun more or less at it in her novels, and never tied the knot. I\'ll still dearly love Shakespeare, and write sonnets, and you\'ll please forgive me? Or else you\'re reminding me of my inimitible late mother. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 05:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Jane Austen poked fun more or less at it in her novels, and never tied the knot. I\'ll still dearly love Shakespeare, and write sonnets, and you\'ll please forgive me? Or else you\'re reminding me of my inimitible late mother. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 11th, 2025 05:26
Chair Repair
Goldfinch60 said:
Back in the day we repaired everything we could Dave, nowadays they are replaced.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Back in the day we repaired everything we could Dave, nowadays they are replaced.
Andy
February 11th, 2025 02:28
Chair Repair
Cassie58 said:
Hello Dave, nothing wrong in repairing and making new items much loved, certainly saves money and the environment. Sadly we live in a throw away society. Times have really changed since my grandparents day. Clothes were recycled throughout the family, cut and made into something for another family member. Anyway, I can see metaphors here. Can’t help regarding the format of your poem though. Will leave that to the experts.
February 10th, 2025 13:23
Cassie58 said:
Hello Dave, nothing wrong in repairing and making new items much loved, certainly saves money and the environment. Sadly we live in a throw away society. Times have really changed since my grandparents day. Clothes were recycled throughout the family, cut and made into something for another family member. Anyway, I can see metaphors here. Can’t help regarding the format of your poem though. Will leave that to the experts.
February 10th, 2025 13:23
Chair Repair
orchidee said:
Adding syllables - could that be iambic pentameters (i.p.\'s)? I doubt it. What are i\'p.\'s when they are \'at home\'. I digress into classic NS mode! lol.
February 10th, 2025 11:31
orchidee said:
Adding syllables - could that be iambic pentameters (i.p.\'s)? I doubt it. What are i\'p.\'s when they are \'at home\'. I digress into classic NS mode! lol.
February 10th, 2025 11:31
Chair Repair
Distant View said:
I\'ve just seen your note/question. A poet called Etheree devised a poem format of ten lines, progressing from one syllable to ten, and that\'s what an \"Etheree\" poem became.
February 10th, 2025 09:32
Distant View said:
I\'ve just seen your note/question. A poet called Etheree devised a poem format of ten lines, progressing from one syllable to ten, and that\'s what an \"Etheree\" poem became.
February 10th, 2025 09:32
Chair Repair
Distant View said:
Nothing wrong with \"make do and mend!\" If the item in question does have some personal significance to us, all the better. A comfy chair is like a friend lol!
February 10th, 2025 09:27
Distant View said:
Nothing wrong with \"make do and mend!\" If the item in question does have some personal significance to us, all the better. A comfy chair is like a friend lol!
February 10th, 2025 09:27
Chair Repair
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting experiment gives a certain appeal to the appearance of the poem. It also affects the meter and thereby the flow. The concept of fixing useful things is one I adhere to and most heartily approve. In metaphor this may well apply to the emotional as well in fixing relationships gone bad and one\'s own errors. Loved it Dave
February 10th, 2025 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting experiment gives a certain appeal to the appearance of the poem. It also affects the meter and thereby the flow. The concept of fixing useful things is one I adhere to and most heartily approve. In metaphor this may well apply to the emotional as well in fixing relationships gone bad and one\'s own errors. Loved it Dave
February 10th, 2025 07:35
Chair Repair
arqios said:
It has a name, I don’t remember what. But one day it shall come to me… and if not we’ll name it after you! 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:21
arqios said:
It has a name, I don’t remember what. But one day it shall come to me… and if not we’ll name it after you! 🙏🏻🕊
February 10th, 2025 07:21
Another Small Tussle…
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'m still on the fence regarding whether or not tis safe to burst into loud laughter as your brief yet characteristic pretty little number half subtly invites me to do. Alas, \"another one bites the dust--\" and grievances are stowed until eternity. So, guess you and I have a few things in common, users blocking me, which in a cooler frame of mind is relegated to \"water off a duck\'s back.\" Charmingly rendered in fitting brevity with a striking yet winsome poignancy.
February 9th, 2025 09:43
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'m still on the fence regarding whether or not tis safe to burst into loud laughter as your brief yet characteristic pretty little number half subtly invites me to do. Alas, \"another one bites the dust--\" and grievances are stowed until eternity. So, guess you and I have a few things in common, users blocking me, which in a cooler frame of mind is relegated to \"water off a duck\'s back.\" Charmingly rendered in fitting brevity with a striking yet winsome poignancy.
February 9th, 2025 09:43
Life in a…
Neville said:
any poem or bit of literature that mentions cheese is bound to be a BIG hit with me and makes me smile .. you just can\'t beat a bit of blue mould .. 🧀💙
February 1st, 2025 12:28
Neville said:
any poem or bit of literature that mentions cheese is bound to be a BIG hit with me and makes me smile .. you just can\'t beat a bit of blue mould .. 🧀💙
February 1st, 2025 12:28
Here
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee! Charmingly rhymed to effect until this rather lilts, and your note clarifying whence it was derived, that\'s fitting since it brooks no argument. Fascinating and instructive, it\'s so beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 08:08
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee! Charmingly rhymed to effect until this rather lilts, and your note clarifying whence it was derived, that\'s fitting since it brooks no argument. Fascinating and instructive, it\'s so beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 08:08
Life in a…
Cheeky Missy said:
Cheese never did have ears, last I checked, else it might have also a voice which I don\'t think I\'d tolerate for all the grating and melting and slicing I do in the name of meal preparations for our indulgence. After that, yes, I catch your drift. It won\'t be long now, I rather think. And since you\'ve chosen that simile, it\'ll be melted to nothing, last I knew. Excellently, nay, superbly rendered to effect with exquisite imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 02:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Cheese never did have ears, last I checked, else it might have also a voice which I don\'t think I\'d tolerate for all the grating and melting and slicing I do in the name of meal preparations for our indulgence. After that, yes, I catch your drift. It won\'t be long now, I rather think. And since you\'ve chosen that simile, it\'ll be melted to nothing, last I knew. Excellently, nay, superbly rendered to effect with exquisite imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 02:34
Life in a…
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fantastic poem, politics is cheesy while your poem was super cool to read. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 06:22
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fantastic poem, politics is cheesy while your poem was super cool to read. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
January 25th, 2025 06:22
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