Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Post-It Note
Syd said:
Hi Dave, AI writing is so easy to spot in my opinion. Morse code poetry I call it. So many of these dashes - but the longer ones. I believe in the American language they are used instead of commas but I could be wrong. Also, look for perfect meter and rhyme, all filler no substance. Human written verses tend to be clunky with an uneven syllable count. I use AI to create music for what I\'ve written but it\'s so easy to be labelled an arsonist if you play with fire. It\'s a tightrope.
I hope you\'re keeping well - Syd
May 27th, 2026 17:14
Syd said:
Hi Dave, AI writing is so easy to spot in my opinion. Morse code poetry I call it. So many of these dashes - but the longer ones. I believe in the American language they are used instead of commas but I could be wrong. Also, look for perfect meter and rhyme, all filler no substance. Human written verses tend to be clunky with an uneven syllable count. I use AI to create music for what I\'ve written but it\'s so easy to be labelled an arsonist if you play with fire. It\'s a tightrope.
I hope you\'re keeping well - Syd
May 27th, 2026 17:14
Amendment Twenty Five
Neville said:
Lousy poetry is in the eye of the beholder .. however, I quite understand where you are coming from my Antipodean friend .. nuff said, I hear he\'s shitting himself since that 25th can\'t be that far off 🍊💩👍
May 21st, 2026 02:30
Neville said:
Lousy poetry is in the eye of the beholder .. however, I quite understand where you are coming from my Antipodean friend .. nuff said, I hear he\'s shitting himself since that 25th can\'t be that far off 🍊💩👍
May 21st, 2026 02:30
Post-It Note
NafisaSB said:
agree with you on this - i do not subscribe to AI and if my verse is not the best - it is at least straight from my mind and heart to my poems...not AI generated thankfully
wishing you more power to your pen and thoughts ...take care
May 20th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
agree with you on this - i do not subscribe to AI and if my verse is not the best - it is at least straight from my mind and heart to my poems...not AI generated thankfully
wishing you more power to your pen and thoughts ...take care
May 20th, 2026 00:54
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🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I spy AI everywhere too but i can never be 100% sure someone used it. I never use AI as my poems are already long written long before AI was invented.
Your poem is a fantastic jab at AI. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I spy AI everywhere too but i can never be 100% sure someone used it. I never use AI as my poems are already long written long before AI was invented.
Your poem is a fantastic jab at AI. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:59
Post-It Note
Thomas W Case said:
A sharp little mirror this one—turned just enough to make the reader question where meaning actually sits.
There’s grit in the humour, too: like intelligence and irony sharing the same cigarette under a streetlight.
May 19th, 2026 09:10
Thomas W Case said:
A sharp little mirror this one—turned just enough to make the reader question where meaning actually sits.
There’s grit in the humour, too: like intelligence and irony sharing the same cigarette under a streetlight.
May 19th, 2026 09:10
Post-It Note
Neville said:
I truly believe there is a place for everything .. except for that fake tanned B over tother side of the Pond and AI in poetry .. or any of the arts for that matter .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 02:58
Neville said:
I truly believe there is a place for everything .. except for that fake tanned B over tother side of the Pond and AI in poetry .. or any of the arts for that matter .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 02:58
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Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is that : Are you a Human\'? or \'How many Cars in this Grid\'?
May 13th, 2026 20:39
Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is that : Are you a Human\'? or \'How many Cars in this Grid\'?
May 13th, 2026 20:39
Post-It Note
sorenbarrett said:
Call it fraud or plagiarism what ever you like it is a deception and a lie I would have to side with you on this one Dave
May 13th, 2026 16:15
sorenbarrett said:
Call it fraud or plagiarism what ever you like it is a deception and a lie I would have to side with you on this one Dave
May 13th, 2026 16:15
Post-It Note
orchidee said:
Notice my witticism - I wrote a post-it note, then posted it - so I forgot what I wrote on it. Doh!
May 13th, 2026 02:41
orchidee said:
Notice my witticism - I wrote a post-it note, then posted it - so I forgot what I wrote on it. Doh!
May 13th, 2026 02:41
Post-It Note
orchidee said:
Aye, ai, Captain! But yes, why you still talking to Goldfinch and me? We\'re of non-human intelligence! Since when was Sir Orchi NS human?
Days were when AI only meant summat artificial to do with cows and bulls.
Oh also, Ai is a Biblical town of old - it got destroyed. Doh!
May 13th, 2026 02:40
orchidee said:
Aye, ai, Captain! But yes, why you still talking to Goldfinch and me? We\'re of non-human intelligence! Since when was Sir Orchi NS human?
Days were when AI only meant summat artificial to do with cows and bulls.
Oh also, Ai is a Biblical town of old - it got destroyed. Doh!
May 13th, 2026 02:40
Not To Worry…
Paul Bell said:
I always knew at some point in my life I would be hitting the supermarket wearing a fallout suit guarded by a robot.
Man is a self destructing bastard, so we were always going to anilate each other.
I\'m actualy giving the guy with the sign, \'\'The world is nigh\'\' a bit more respect now.
May 12th, 2026 14:07
Paul Bell said:
I always knew at some point in my life I would be hitting the supermarket wearing a fallout suit guarded by a robot.
Man is a self destructing bastard, so we were always going to anilate each other.
I\'m actualy giving the guy with the sign, \'\'The world is nigh\'\' a bit more respect now.
May 12th, 2026 14:07
Not To Worry…
Thomas W Case said:
Dave, this lands well. It feels like a quiet warning wrapped in rhythm—cool, controlled, and edged with unease.
There’s a sharp intelligence in it, like the world tipping between ancient catastrophe and something we’re still learning we can cause ourselves.
May 12th, 2026 08:38
Thomas W Case said:
Dave, this lands well. It feels like a quiet warning wrapped in rhythm—cool, controlled, and edged with unease.
There’s a sharp intelligence in it, like the world tipping between ancient catastrophe and something we’re still learning we can cause ourselves.
May 12th, 2026 08:38
Not To Worry…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this has bite, my friend. The turn from external catastrophe to internal self-destruction lands hard…and uncomfortably so. You know I am going to love that! 🤣 Sharp work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this has bite, my friend. The turn from external catastrophe to internal self-destruction lands hard…and uncomfortably so. You know I am going to love that! 🤣 Sharp work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:19
Not To Worry…
orchidee said:
I thought it\'s gonna be about the 6th extinction. We\'ve had 5 already, or summat like that. I got bored in an over-long read about it. Sir Orchi NS is never extinct - he\'s a dinosaur - also used to refer to people who won\'t use e-mail. lol.
May 11th, 2026 02:22
orchidee said:
I thought it\'s gonna be about the 6th extinction. We\'ve had 5 already, or summat like that. I got bored in an over-long read about it. Sir Orchi NS is never extinct - he\'s a dinosaur - also used to refer to people who won\'t use e-mail. lol.
May 11th, 2026 02:22
Not To Worry…
Neville said:
Love the title mate .. but I sincerely fear it\'s too late for that .. stable geniuses & smart bums have seen to that .. Neville
May 11th, 2026 02:11
Neville said:
Love the title mate .. but I sincerely fear it\'s too late for that .. stable geniuses & smart bums have seen to that .. Neville
May 11th, 2026 02:11
Not To Worry…
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dave but I sincerely hope it does not happen.
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dave but I sincerely hope it does not happen.
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:18
Not To Worry…
arqios said:
Our nature is the one to beat. Had we considered that more closely we would last a bit longer, perhaps 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 22:16
arqios said:
Our nature is the one to beat. Had we considered that more closely we would last a bit longer, perhaps 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 22:16
Not To Worry…
sorenbarrett said:
So true Dave and the dinosaurs had a little help from outside forces we seem to be able to do it all on our own. Call it karma, justice or what ever you like.
May 10th, 2026 21:15
sorenbarrett said:
So true Dave and the dinosaurs had a little help from outside forces we seem to be able to do it all on our own. Call it karma, justice or what ever you like.
May 10th, 2026 21:15
Happy End.
Neville said:
I was quite taken aback with my thoughts of you stuck out in the outback .. indeed, you made me smile & I quite like it .. No shit .. Neville 😎👍
May 10th, 2026 02:25
Neville said:
I was quite taken aback with my thoughts of you stuck out in the outback .. indeed, you made me smile & I quite like it .. No shit .. Neville 😎👍
May 10th, 2026 02:25
Happy End.
Goldfinch60 said:
I always sit in comfort until satisfaction occurs Dave. LOL
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I always sit in comfort until satisfaction occurs Dave. LOL
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:26
Happy End.
Paul Bell said:
And she said, I want a toilet seat that goes down itself.
Three hours later, it did go down itself, sraight out the feckin window.
Chinese instructions, brutal. Hope your seat is comfy.
May 9th, 2026 05:29
Paul Bell said:
And she said, I want a toilet seat that goes down itself.
Three hours later, it did go down itself, sraight out the feckin window.
Chinese instructions, brutal. Hope your seat is comfy.
May 9th, 2026 05:29
Happy End.
Salvia.S said:
Thought it was love. Thought it was philosophy. It was bakelite. Supreme comfort indeed. Clearly written.
May 8th, 2026 21:05
Salvia.S said:
Thought it was love. Thought it was philosophy. It was bakelite. Supreme comfort indeed. Clearly written.
May 8th, 2026 21:05
Happy End.
Kevin Hulme said:
You must be Flushed after all that . Is there a Foot STOOL near by? I\'m on a ROLL with this ...
A good Write.
May 8th, 2026 20:48
Kevin Hulme said:
You must be Flushed after all that . Is there a Foot STOOL near by? I\'m on a ROLL with this ...
A good Write.
May 8th, 2026 20:48
Happy End.
sorenbarrett said:
So many to choose from elongated, standard, padded, enameled, painted wood, heated. As for me I prefer a hole in a board in the outhouse. Good write Dave made me smile.
May 8th, 2026 20:40
sorenbarrett said:
So many to choose from elongated, standard, padded, enameled, painted wood, heated. As for me I prefer a hole in a board in the outhouse. Good write Dave made me smile.
May 8th, 2026 20:40
Quietly
Paul Bell said:
If you can read a haika backwards and it\'s still powerful, you have done your job.
You have done your job.
May 7th, 2026 10:06
Paul Bell said:
If you can read a haika backwards and it\'s still powerful, you have done your job.
You have done your job.
May 7th, 2026 10:06
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