Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
We Meet Again...
hzugman said:
It\'s deja vu all over again. Thanx for the comment.
March 1st, 2026 11:59
hzugman said:
It\'s deja vu all over again. Thanx for the comment.
March 1st, 2026 11:59
We Meet Again...
orchidee said:
It\'s started off my so-called singing - \'We\'ll meet again, dunno where, dunno when....\' Just call me Vera (Lynn), or Sir Orchi Vera NS, spouting rubbish! lol.
March 1st, 2026 11:34
orchidee said:
It\'s started off my so-called singing - \'We\'ll meet again, dunno where, dunno when....\' Just call me Vera (Lynn), or Sir Orchi Vera NS, spouting rubbish! lol.
March 1st, 2026 11:34
We Meet Again...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this is tight and deliberate. The clipped lines give it urgency, and “We just shot” alongside “Waste of time, a bore” feels like impatience turned into poetry. It’s a focused zeroing in on your stance, and it carries conviction. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this is tight and deliberate. The clipped lines give it urgency, and “We just shot” alongside “Waste of time, a bore” feels like impatience turned into poetry. It’s a focused zeroing in on your stance, and it carries conviction. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:13
Forget Four Letter Words.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this hit me hard…especially the shift from four-letter words to “We.” That turn carries real bite. “Each other with a long drawn out collective groan. 🙂” lands like a quiet indictment. It feels sharp, clear, and unapologetic. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this hit me hard…especially the shift from four-letter words to “We.” That turn carries real bite. “Each other with a long drawn out collective groan. 🙂” lands like a quiet indictment. It feels sharp, clear, and unapologetic. Strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 1st, 2026 08:11
We Meet Again...
sorenbarrett said:
Some would deem poetry a waste of time and boring, others find it therapeutic and cleansing, some look for beauty in images while others are struck by metaphor. I love its diversity in the musicality of its structure, the cleverness of its word play, the intricacy or its rhyme scheme or just the narrative itself. But then it seems that today many are interested only in action films, video games, how much money can be made or how to change the world. Beauty is what we choose to take from something, I don\'t believe there is a universal measuring stick. Likewise wasting time depends upon who is counting it. A most thought provoking write Dave
March 1st, 2026 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Some would deem poetry a waste of time and boring, others find it therapeutic and cleansing, some look for beauty in images while others are struck by metaphor. I love its diversity in the musicality of its structure, the cleverness of its word play, the intricacy or its rhyme scheme or just the narrative itself. But then it seems that today many are interested only in action films, video games, how much money can be made or how to change the world. Beauty is what we choose to take from something, I don\'t believe there is a universal measuring stick. Likewise wasting time depends upon who is counting it. A most thought provoking write Dave
March 1st, 2026 04:48
We Meet Again...
Goldfinch60 said:
We can be very romantic with the one you love Dave.
Andy
March 1st, 2026 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
We can be very romantic with the one you love Dave.
Andy
March 1st, 2026 02:21
We Meet Again...
arqios said:
Things do tend to come back around, cycling all around us and within us. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 1st, 2026 01:12
arqios said:
Things do tend to come back around, cycling all around us and within us. 🙏🏻🕊️
March 1st, 2026 01:12
This was when
Paul Bell said:
Has war been declared here. Is AI at work, what going on.
February 27th, 2026 05:04
Paul Bell said:
Has war been declared here. Is AI at work, what going on.
February 27th, 2026 05:04
This was when
Neville said:
I fear I am gotten somewhat seriously lost somewhere along the line .. 🐧👍
February 26th, 2026 02:52
Neville said:
I fear I am gotten somewhat seriously lost somewhere along the line .. 🐧👍
February 26th, 2026 02:52
This was when
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp and brief, like a bullet through fog—truth cuts cleaner than worry ever could.
You capture that spark of courage in a world that’s always leaning toward doubt.
February 24th, 2026 08:30
Thomas W Case said:
Sharp and brief, like a bullet through fog—truth cuts cleaner than worry ever could.
You capture that spark of courage in a world that’s always leaning toward doubt.
February 24th, 2026 08:30
Sweet Nothings
NafisaSB said:
a nice and bitter sweet reminiscence...enjoyed the read
February 24th, 2026 00:27
NafisaSB said:
a nice and bitter sweet reminiscence...enjoyed the read
February 24th, 2026 00:27
This was when
Doggerel Dave said:
If interested, there is also at February 23rd, 8:13 - When is enough really enough?, by \'Friendship\' to consider.....
February 23rd, 2026 08:42
Doggerel Dave said:
If interested, there is also at February 23rd, 8:13 - When is enough really enough?, by \'Friendship\' to consider.....
February 23rd, 2026 08:42
This was when
Doggerel Dave said:
Friendship\'s tirade has been removed.... not so fast... returned here as a record and to contextualise the above:
Friendship
February 22nd, 2026 19:14
What is your problem with me? I can\'t take you anymore. I don\'t interact with you, but 2 years ago, when I was on the site, you and I were getting along so great. Out of the blue, I woke up one day, and my computer was hacked, my poetry site was down, and I had to restart it. And yes, I\'m still on this site under the name \'friendship\'; I never change, but you associate me with someone else. I live in the United States, so I don\'t know who you think I am. You don\'t let up; what is your purpose, to torment me? Do you feel it\'s necessary to always go after females or call people out on things? Who are you? Back off now; you need to stop this nonsense. It\'s not normal and should not be allowed on the site. Why is it necessary for you to constantly come after me I am not that person you think I am I know who you think I was I wasn\'t even her I am me Just because used to had an argument and she blocked you and you blocked her don\'t come after me anymore stop assuming I\'m her I am me I live where I live You\'re abused has to stop If it doesn\'t stop I will report this this is not a normal behavior from a grown man! You need to stop now! I\'m sorry you have a problem with my writing. I\'m sorry I took literature in college. I\'m sorry that I\'m able to write in some and you\'re not. I\'m sorry, I am who I am. You need to stop your vicious attacks. You need to cease now.
February 23rd, 2026 08:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Friendship\'s tirade has been removed.... not so fast... returned here as a record and to contextualise the above:
Friendship
February 22nd, 2026 19:14
What is your problem with me? I can\'t take you anymore. I don\'t interact with you, but 2 years ago, when I was on the site, you and I were getting along so great. Out of the blue, I woke up one day, and my computer was hacked, my poetry site was down, and I had to restart it. And yes, I\'m still on this site under the name \'friendship\'; I never change, but you associate me with someone else. I live in the United States, so I don\'t know who you think I am. You don\'t let up; what is your purpose, to torment me? Do you feel it\'s necessary to always go after females or call people out on things? Who are you? Back off now; you need to stop this nonsense. It\'s not normal and should not be allowed on the site. Why is it necessary for you to constantly come after me I am not that person you think I am I know who you think I was I wasn\'t even her I am me Just because used to had an argument and she blocked you and you blocked her don\'t come after me anymore stop assuming I\'m her I am me I live where I live You\'re abused has to stop If it doesn\'t stop I will report this this is not a normal behavior from a grown man! You need to stop now! I\'m sorry you have a problem with my writing. I\'m sorry I took literature in college. I\'m sorry that I\'m able to write in some and you\'re not. I\'m sorry, I am who I am. You need to stop your vicious attacks. You need to cease now.
February 23rd, 2026 08:35
This was when
Doggerel Dave said:
This relates to Friendship\'s tirade above (I cannot reply directly as she has me blocked).
The truth of this post is not negated by your lengthy load of twaddle. By all means report me.
February 22nd, 2026 19:29
Doggerel Dave said:
This relates to Friendship\'s tirade above (I cannot reply directly as she has me blocked).
The truth of this post is not negated by your lengthy load of twaddle. By all means report me.
February 22nd, 2026 19:29
This was when
Doggerel Dave said:
And behold: GONE! You need some added detail –
Friendship’s post consisted of the picture from the link above plus a lengthy poem which covered much the same ground as her commentary. This I copied and here paste for your information:
Comment from author about the poem: I created this masterpiece for my parents in 3rd grade at Catholic school and it\'s rooted in a memorable experience where I faced challenges from the nuns and discipline from my folks. During art class, I unleashed my creativity by taking off my shoes and socks, pouring paint on paper, and stepping into it to craft a unique piece. Little did I know the aftermath of my artistic expression until my socks squished in my shoes with paint still on my toes. Miraculously, a year later, my parents showcased our picture in a beautiful mat, and it became a celebrated display on our wall of fame, symbolizing resilience and creativity.
February 22nd, 2026 18:06
Doggerel Dave said:
And behold: GONE! You need some added detail –
Friendship’s post consisted of the picture from the link above plus a lengthy poem which covered much the same ground as her commentary. This I copied and here paste for your information:
Comment from author about the poem: I created this masterpiece for my parents in 3rd grade at Catholic school and it\'s rooted in a memorable experience where I faced challenges from the nuns and discipline from my folks. During art class, I unleashed my creativity by taking off my shoes and socks, pouring paint on paper, and stepping into it to craft a unique piece. Little did I know the aftermath of my artistic expression until my socks squished in my shoes with paint still on my toes. Miraculously, a year later, my parents showcased our picture in a beautiful mat, and it became a celebrated display on our wall of fame, symbolizing resilience and creativity.
February 22nd, 2026 18:06
Sweet Nothings
Thomas W Case said:
Dry as gin and twice as sharp—you’ve wrapped heartbreak in wit and let it wink.
That little legal bow at the end only makes the sting land cleaner.
February 22nd, 2026 08:56
Thomas W Case said:
Dry as gin and twice as sharp—you’ve wrapped heartbreak in wit and let it wink.
That little legal bow at the end only makes the sting land cleaner.
February 22nd, 2026 08:56
BLOCKED
Neville said:
I have had the very same problem too so can seriously empathise ..
February 20th, 2026 00:56
Neville said:
I have had the very same problem too so can seriously empathise ..
February 20th, 2026 00:56
Sweet Nothings
Neville said:
Me having just given the red heart shaped like button a prod say\'s more than enough .. The fact this, is the first and likely to be the only time ever I leave my mark on more than just one of my peers works in the same 24 hours, quite possibly says a hole lot more .. Neville😎👍
February 19th, 2026 03:58
Neville said:
Me having just given the red heart shaped like button a prod say\'s more than enough .. The fact this, is the first and likely to be the only time ever I leave my mark on more than just one of my peers works in the same 24 hours, quite possibly says a hole lot more .. Neville😎👍
February 19th, 2026 03:58
Sweet Nothings
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Debatable- can something meant for consumption be truly loved? Who knows!
February 18th, 2026 08:59
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Debatable- can something meant for consumption be truly loved? Who knows!
February 18th, 2026 08:59
Sweet Nothings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this is tight and mischievous. The couplet delivers a clean metaphor, and the mock-formal note underneath turns the whole thing into meta-humor. It’s not about the mint…it’s about the hole in the middle. Smart, restrained, and funny. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this is tight and mischievous. The couplet delivers a clean metaphor, and the mock-formal note underneath turns the whole thing into meta-humor. It’s not about the mint…it’s about the hole in the middle. Smart, restrained, and funny. Love it, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:46
Sweet Nothings
arqios said:
Ah young love indeed! I remember the days when Polo was the sexy, “in” thing.🕊️🙏🏻
February 17th, 2026 08:45
arqios said:
Ah young love indeed! I remember the days when Polo was the sexy, “in” thing.🕊️🙏🏻
February 17th, 2026 08:45
Sweet Nothings
Paul Bell said:
The mint with the hole.
I just called mine, flakey, she was always raging about something.
February 17th, 2026 07:35
Paul Bell said:
The mint with the hole.
I just called mine, flakey, she was always raging about something.
February 17th, 2026 07:35
Sweet Nothings
sorenbarrett said:
A back door approach is often warranted when the front door is locked. Well done Dave
February 17th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
A back door approach is often warranted when the front door is locked. Well done Dave
February 17th, 2026 05:01
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