Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Saviour.. (September 21st, 2025)
Paul Bell said:

Remember, \'\'boo\'\' in some countries is a marriage contract.
This is why I don\'t travel.

October 29th, 2025 04:27

Saviour.. (September 21st, 2025)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Surely, Shirley will know! As for me, I surely don\'t know Shirley...or do I? πŸ€” All the same, fun poem Dave! πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 25th, 2025 10:24

Saviour.. (September 21st, 2025)
sorenbarrett said:

This seems a most timely piece with it being the time of the year that it is. That boo comes as a ghostly whisper. Love puzzle poems Dave but I come to their solution slowly much to the frustration of those around me. Surely Shirly will understand.

October 25th, 2025 03:47

Saviour.. (September 21st, 2025)
orchidee said:

I doubt I can work out the \'boo\'. Well, I only got 3 brain cells to work with! lol.

October 25th, 2025 02:28

Saviour.. (September 21st, 2025)
Goldfinch60 said:

Boo!

October 25th, 2025 01:55

Servitude
rebellion_in_sanity said:

No debate- fave

October 24th, 2025 09:34

Nine Eleven
Neville said:


I think we should all give peace a chance .. there\'s always been far too much of the other .. πŸ’œ

October 23rd, 2025 03:36

Servitude
Thomas W Case said:

Poignant and powerful.

October 19th, 2025 18:47

Oracle
Paul Bell said:

AI is going to rule the world and eventually kill the world.
Most of my time now is moaning to AI chat boxes and getting that answer, glad we could help, not.

October 19th, 2025 06:33

Servitude
Neville said:



Blimey .. spot on, nuff said .. well done .. I\'m off .. Neville πŸ‘πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘β­β­β­β­β­

October 18th, 2025 03:12

Servitude
Paul Bell said:

Let\'s face it, if employers think they can get away with paying peanuts, that\'s what they\'ll do.
Getting out of Europe helped the British worker, they\'re appreciated more and definitely paid more.
Bike delivery guys in the dark, no lights, grrrrrr


October 17th, 2025 06:36

Servitude
Friendship said:

Well-written, your poem aims to raise awareness about the continued existence of exploitative labor practices and to challenge the complacency of those who believe such issues are relics of the past. The speaker aims to provoke thought and encourage critical examination of modern economic realities.

October 15th, 2025 10:08

Servitude
orchidee said:

I\'m Fido\'s slave/servant, and that\'s a fact! lol.

October 15th, 2025 01:56

Phones Roam
NafisaSB said:

go to any tourist spot , and unfortunately, you will be relieved not just of your mobile, but other personal items, for sure, if you are not careful and alert.
a telling tale of today, for sure - thanks for sharing

October 14th, 2025 23:43

Servitude
sorenbarrett said:

Dave I can\'t disagree that there are many poor folks working for wages less than what it takes to survive in any level of comfort. I have seen these people group up and pool money to rent a place and buy food. Some have children to support and leave latch key kids with young ones having to take care of even younger ones while they are working. Unfortunately in a capitalistic world there is little concern for them and they are seen as expendable and in fact much of the work they do is becoming obsolete, mechanized and computerized. This group that is marginalized is growing and society has no good solutions for their plight. Your poem brings this to a level of consciousness. Well done Dave

October 14th, 2025 19:41

Servitude
Doggerel Dave said:

Broaden the argument: Why import skilled workers from overseas? Get the trapped off the roads; train them; the β€˜rich’ off their thrones and out, (without their mobile phones!).



October 14th, 2025 18:52

Phones Roam
Neville said:



It\'s been like that here (not only in London) for a few years mate .. My son had a narrow escape recently when three youths targeted him on those silly e-bike scooter things apparently circling him for quite some time before they found out the hard way he had been British champion TKD for three consecutive years back in the day and is now pretty damned good at MMA .. You make a very good valid and current point sir .. Neville



October 14th, 2025 02:42

Phones Roam
rebellion_in_sanity said:

My humble homage to a satarical bomb

October 12th, 2025 06:44

Phones Roam
Paul Bell said:

How many times have you seen someone on a phone just walk onto the road, oblivious to their surroundings.
They deserve to be relieved of them. Didn\'t realise they were going to China, mind you.
The amount of data people have on their phones, shocking.


October 12th, 2025 05:54

Phones Roam
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Dave, you’ve done it again...wit, rhythm, and that sly glint of truth. A public service poem if ever there was one…liberating the β€œzombies” one stanza at a time. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

October 11th, 2025 08:21

Phones Roam
orchidee said:

How\'s that - Spring? there!?

October 11th, 2025 01:56

Phones Roam
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes it is happening Dave but maybe it will mean that people will talk to each other face to face once more.

Andy

October 11th, 2025 01:53

Phones Roam
Poetic Licence said:

It is not a spate it is an epidemic, especially in cities like longing and it\'s been going on for a few years. They trawl on scooters and mountain bikes and just snatch them as they pass and there off. Then you have the professionals who go out in teams around pubs, restaurants, bars, clubs clearing any phone visible. All shipped abroad to places like China and Africa, but you won\'t see it in the tourist information sheets!!, hope you well

October 10th, 2025 20:46

The Games Some People Play…
Neville said:



That gilded bird down there got in first as far as I am concerned .. I had to put it that way because if I had said/writ Goldfinch took the words write out of my mouth, I imagine his claw woulda got stuck in my craw or summat .. perhaps .. Bravo .. I\'m all for truth you old dog .. Neville πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘

October 10th, 2025 06:19

O Aspiring Poet - Time for a Redux
NafisaSB said:

ouch...i do read what i comment on - or hold my peace..what you say though holds more than a grain of truth

October 7th, 2025 03:06

Housing Crisis
Neville said:



I\'m betting its pretty much the same everywhere mate .. πŸ‘πŸ‘

October 6th, 2025 10:53

O Aspiring Poet - Time for a Redux
Neville said:



I kinda get this Dave .. & with respect, I reckon good old SB deserves a good pat on the back .. neville with a small N πŸ˜ŽπŸ‘πŸ‘

October 5th, 2025 11:15

Housing Crisis
Poetic Licence said:

I would imagine this is an issue all over the world, if you are young now it\'s practically impossible to be able to buy your first property, but it is even more expensive renting, we have more people still living at home in their adulthood than ever before. We hav a property shortage on all levels, but especially what they call affordable housing , which in my are starts at 350,000 pounds, how is that affordable, will leave it there. Valid write should be said about this

October 4th, 2025 08:38

O Aspiring Poet - Time for a Redux
Friendship said:

You are so spot on in what you said but I notice an accent on your post by by the person you wrote about I was kind of surprised cause he writes on everyone\'s post so I\'m kind of curious did the post that you put out here has anything to do with the post that he put out today I believe he\'s reaching out and saying it was a big misunderstanding and I\'m not a genius but makes sense and what he wrote today

October 4th, 2025 08:21

Housing Crisis
Paul Bell said:

Supply and demand.
Cull the population, no housing demand.
Developers sitting on prime sites, governments complicit in allowing it.
Second homes in seaside towns. You can see why you can\'t get a house.

October 4th, 2025 04:42

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