Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Obsession
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this balances irony and honesty well. The voice disarms, then admits the weight underneath, ending with a shrug that says more than it pretends to. Clever, human, and quietly pointed. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this balances irony and honesty well. The voice disarms, then admits the weight underneath, ending with a shrug that says more than it pretends to. Clever, human, and quietly pointed. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 9th, 2026 10:35
Obsession
Paul Bell said:
Breasts should be on the national health, medicinal, mind you.
I must admit, I never noticed girls faces growing up, my eyes didn\'t look that far up.
Actually, not a lot has changed.
January 9th, 2026 04:30
Paul Bell said:
Breasts should be on the national health, medicinal, mind you.
I must admit, I never noticed girls faces growing up, my eyes didn\'t look that far up.
Actually, not a lot has changed.
January 9th, 2026 04:30
Obsession
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Dave we men are full of excuses to get a peek or tweak. I think old Freud himself invented the Oedipal complex for this very reason. Maybe that is why so many women are hung up on mothering their men. Good write my friend
January 9th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Clever Dave we men are full of excuses to get a peek or tweak. I think old Freud himself invented the Oedipal complex for this very reason. Maybe that is why so many women are hung up on mothering their men. Good write my friend
January 9th, 2026 04:14
Stardust
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this reads like wonder paired with acceptance. Stardust, awareness, and impermanence all circle each other without needing closure. It’s reflective, sincere, and quietly moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 8th, 2026 09:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this reads like wonder paired with acceptance. Stardust, awareness, and impermanence all circle each other without needing closure. It’s reflective, sincere, and quietly moving. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 8th, 2026 09:36
Stardust
Paul Bell said:
Life, the gift we sometimes forget, must come to an end at some point but hopefully never now.
That\'s why everyday is another day to play.
January 8th, 2026 04:51
Paul Bell said:
Life, the gift we sometimes forget, must come to an end at some point but hopefully never now.
That\'s why everyday is another day to play.
January 8th, 2026 04:51
Stardust
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical this poem expresses a subject that no one can agree upon due to varying definitions of what constitutes consciousness, whether death is the end of it and what it was made out of. Do other animals or even plants possess it is it a spectrum as in Spinoza\'s view and that of panphysicism or is it dichotomous either present or not restricted to only higher life forms. Quite the question Dave and above all that is it a blessing or a curse? Good write my friend
January 8th, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Philosophical this poem expresses a subject that no one can agree upon due to varying definitions of what constitutes consciousness, whether death is the end of it and what it was made out of. Do other animals or even plants possess it is it a spectrum as in Spinoza\'s view and that of panphysicism or is it dichotomous either present or not restricted to only higher life forms. Quite the question Dave and above all that is it a blessing or a curse? Good write my friend
January 8th, 2026 04:12
Stardust
orchidee said:
When will Sir Orchi NS be no more? He\'s a load of dust really! lol.
January 8th, 2026 03:24
orchidee said:
When will Sir Orchi NS be no more? He\'s a load of dust really! lol.
January 8th, 2026 03:24
Stardust
Goldfinch60 said:
You always will be Dave as we all will be but in different formats in eternity,
Andy
January 8th, 2026 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
You always will be Dave as we all will be but in different formats in eternity,
Andy
January 8th, 2026 02:46
Name It!
Thomas W Case said:
Dave, there’s something powerful in how restrained this is. Long love, earned trust, and no fireworks needed. That last line lands softly but stays with you. Honest and true.
January 6th, 2026 07:53
Thomas W Case said:
Dave, there’s something powerful in how restrained this is. Long love, earned trust, and no fireworks needed. That last line lands softly but stays with you. Honest and true.
January 6th, 2026 07:53
Name It!
Paul Bell said:
How can we love our football team openly but struggle with the girl.
A girl that shares tranquillity is a definite stayer.
January 6th, 2026 04:55
Paul Bell said:
How can we love our football team openly but struggle with the girl.
A girl that shares tranquillity is a definite stayer.
January 6th, 2026 04:55
Name It!
orchidee said:
Good write D. You can name me Sir Orchi NS, Esq, VC, MBE, OBE, KC, BBC, ITV, etc. An old \'Carry on\' joke, that is!
January 6th, 2026 03:18
orchidee said:
Good write D. You can name me Sir Orchi NS, Esq, VC, MBE, OBE, KC, BBC, ITV, etc. An old \'Carry on\' joke, that is!
January 6th, 2026 03:18
Name It!
Goldfinch60 said:
Love reigns in all relationships Dave, just tell her as I do every day to my Mary.
Andy
January 6th, 2026 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Love reigns in all relationships Dave, just tell her as I do every day to my Mary.
Andy
January 6th, 2026 02:11
Name It!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this poem understands that love doesn’t always announce itself. It grows in time, in truth, in tranquility, until one day the word finally fits. A gentle, sincere piece that lands just right. Happy New Year, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 22:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this poem understands that love doesn’t always announce itself. It grows in time, in truth, in tranquility, until one day the word finally fits. A gentle, sincere piece that lands just right. Happy New Year, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 5th, 2026 22:57
Name It!
Cheeky Missy said:
You most definitely should, you rascal! La, this is a beauty. Now I\'m excited for you two. Thank you for sharing!
January 5th, 2026 21:46
Cheeky Missy said:
You most definitely should, you rascal! La, this is a beauty. Now I\'m excited for you two. Thank you for sharing!
January 5th, 2026 21:46
Name It!
sorenbarrett said:
Life as usual in a normal relationship that lasts that long. Good write my friend
January 5th, 2026 21:15
sorenbarrett said:
Life as usual in a normal relationship that lasts that long. Good write my friend
January 5th, 2026 21:15
Metaphor Master
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet bite to this. Simple lines, but they ask something real.
January 4th, 2026 09:36
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a quiet bite to this. Simple lines, but they ask something real.
January 4th, 2026 09:36
Message For Orchidee
NafisaSB said:
Seems to me you know what unsettled orchidee and how to solve the issue and settle those nerves. Wow
December 21st, 2025 22:46
NafisaSB said:
Seems to me you know what unsettled orchidee and how to solve the issue and settle those nerves. Wow
December 21st, 2025 22:46
Land of Opportunity
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Dave, so sad. Why do they do it!!!
Andy
December 16th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes Dave, so sad. Why do they do it!!!
Andy
December 16th, 2025 02:15
Land of Opportunity
Kevin Hulme said:
Absolutely Terrible. Even more so when Children involved.
December 15th, 2025 20:04
Kevin Hulme said:
Absolutely Terrible. Even more so when Children involved.
December 15th, 2025 20:04
Land of Opportunity
arqios said:
Something’s afoot like it was in ‘63, among other dates of note.
December 15th, 2025 19:34
arqios said:
Something’s afoot like it was in ‘63, among other dates of note.
December 15th, 2025 19:34
Land of Opportunity
Thomas W Case said:
Very interesting with the dark humor.
December 15th, 2025 09:25
Thomas W Case said:
Very interesting with the dark humor.
December 15th, 2025 09:25
Land of Opportunity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Message delivers strong as ever my friend. Sounds like the USA…except with guns we be snorting Angel Dust over here! 💯 Well done on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 15th, 2025 08:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Message delivers strong as ever my friend. Sounds like the USA…except with guns we be snorting Angel Dust over here! 💯 Well done on this, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 15th, 2025 08:35
Land of Opportunity
Paul Bell said:
Imagine being on the list, but in the gun club.
It sort of beggars belief.
Western countries give too many rights to individuals, this being one of them.
Lunatics running the asylum.
December 15th, 2025 06:35
Paul Bell said:
Imagine being on the list, but in the gun club.
It sort of beggars belief.
Western countries give too many rights to individuals, this being one of them.
Lunatics running the asylum.
December 15th, 2025 06:35
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