Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Reality becomes you.
Neville said:



its not what you say, it\'s the way that you say it ..
by jove I think the blighters got it ..


January 22nd, 2024 08:45

Reality becomes you.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Dave, I also find that apathy is a good weapon.

Andy

January 22nd, 2024 02:26

Reality becomes you.
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

January 21st, 2024 22:58

The Joys of Apartment Living.
sorenbarrett said:

It seems a universal truth that we all have such a neighbor, thus the saying \"fences make for good neighbors.\" An enjoyable poem entertaining to the end possibly because of the empathy created by such neighbors I have had in the past.

January 20th, 2024 17:48

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
sorenbarrett said:

I think it has less to do with getting into shit and more with catting around. lol Great story Dave.

January 18th, 2024 17:19

Art’s Value
MendedFences27 said:

Don\'t know much about the art market, but I know this - For every million-dollar painting, there are a million other painting sitting on people\'s walls, decorating their refrigerators, or cast aside in their workspace. For every artwork of renown there are a million cherished drawings loved by but a few, A well spoken poem. - Phil A.

January 16th, 2024 11:25

Art’s Value
Neville said:



I am indeed honoured Sir Dog ..

and shall sign off as Sir Prised of Somerset .. 😎👍

January 10th, 2024 11:33

The Koel Calls
sorenbarrett said:

I empathize, I have someone I know that has wild roosters around his house. The county told him they can not be eliminated in that after being free they are deemed wildlife.

January 10th, 2024 06:35

Art’s Value
orchidee said:

Now I must paint a picture of Fido. It will fetch millions! lol.

January 9th, 2024 03:00

Art’s Value
Goldfinch60 said:

Those forgers are brilliant artists in their own right but don\'t get any money for their own works Dave.

Andy

January 9th, 2024 02:16

Art’s Value
Parisab said:

Your vivid words share my frustration about the art “market”. ART is the one luxury, good taste can only afford, in my opinion.

January 8th, 2024 23:47

Art’s Value
Thomas W Case said:

Good stuff.

January 8th, 2024 22:15

Art’s Value
sorenbarrett said:

Now here is a topic I have never seen in a poem, a true first. It takes an artist to fake an artist. I wonder if anyone out there is forging your poems? Good write Dave

January 8th, 2024 17:48

Harry
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting presentation, presented in a surprising manner.. It wasn\'t until close to the end that I figured that Harry may not be a person. I enjoyed this approach Dave

January 6th, 2024 20:52

Wisdom of old (1)
Neville said:



we all have a certain sapiential responsibility to look out for those who have not yet reached a certain point in their life .. but I am sure that not everyone will see it my way .. Neville

December 15th, 2023 14:43

Wisdom of old (1)
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. Cheers.

December 13th, 2023 21:21

Wisdom of old (1)
sorenbarrett said:

I didn’t think anyone retired anymore. I did but keep working so what does that mean? Loved the poem made me smile.

December 3rd, 2023 07:50

Wisdom of old (1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Being retired can bring such wonderful things to our lives Dave.

Andy

December 2nd, 2023 02:11

Wisdom of old (1)
Parisab said:

Well said and complete…
Retirement=no more foolish plans I am bound
One should be so lucky

December 1st, 2023 11:18

Wisdom of old (1)
orchidee said:

I was gonna be wise. As Goldfinch and I are millions of years old, I thought we would be OK, until I read \'Wisdom is not always found with the aged\'. Doh!

December 1st, 2023 08:19

Wisdom of old (1)
2781 said:

We can live on little.
Being content is more difficult.

December 1st, 2023 06:28

Fever
Syd said:

Nice write Dave.

I\'m glad you\'re on the mend.

- Syd

November 25th, 2023 05:42

Fever
sorenbarrett said:

So glad that there will be an encore. A scary story indeed but adressed with a bit of humor. Well done.

November 21st, 2023 12:32

Goldilocks and the….
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

November 20th, 2023 14:24

Fever
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

November 16th, 2023 09:16

Fever
arqios said:

So good to have you back and blessed with a word of your plight of late and of your recovery!

November 16th, 2023 03:36

Fever
2781 said:

I wondered how you were, good to hear you\'re still here!

November 16th, 2023 03:13

Fever
orchidee said:

Fido knew what it was, of course, as he knows 99% of everything! Best wishes.

November 16th, 2023 03:08

Fever
Goldfinch60 said:

I ma so glad you have recovered, you have been missed Dave. Please keep well.

Andy

November 16th, 2023 02:29

Fever
Neville said:


this is one o them that makes me feel more than just one thing at a time .. there is of course the sadness & appropriate amount of compassion and empathy that one may or may not expect in view of the fact we have not met in person but share a literary relationship .. and then conversely, there is a feeling of gladness that you are now back here at MPS and hopefully recuperating if not already fully convalesced .. Oh\' and furthermore, there is a genuine feeling of appreciation that your poetic offering today has more than adequately explained your most recent protracted and until now unexplained absence .. Oh\' and for what its worth, I can honestly say you have been missed and not only by me .. Neville


November 16th, 2023 01:31



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