Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



To what end?
Neville said:



I am evidently on your side sir ...

March 3rd, 2022 08:08

To what end?
Thekkinkkattil said:

Fully endorse your thoughts.Let us pray it will end soon

March 2nd, 2022 23:56

A Heavy Load
Goldfinch60 said:

Thoes bovine fans used to watch Joyce and I as we walked the Dales.

Andy

February 25th, 2022 01:36

A Heavy Load
Rozina said:

I can imagine the audience. What did they say, I mean moo? Good fun to read this.

February 24th, 2022 22:18

A Heavy Load
Fay Slimm. said:

Love the rhyme and the pace of this trundle down memory lane - as I take it this is Dave - --- those were the days when under heaps of mud we listened to rock but could not move our feet - - great read dearling friend.......... keep that ink flowing.

February 24th, 2022 08:59

A Heavy Load
Neville said:


.. curious critters aint they .. cows, I mean ... and mean cows in particular .. no bull :)

February 24th, 2022 06:18

A Heavy Load
dusk arising said:

Somehow I\'m reminded of the attention i got from some right cows in my history.

Nice story. I have a few stories to tell about those scaffold erected concert stages when a sudden change in weather made them death traps.

February 24th, 2022 05:01

Fried Mouse.
Neville said:



I thought I could smell a rat .. but then remembered that word is so un PC ..

I am a bit of a Luddite Dave, but understood precisely where you were coming from sir ... Enjoyed no end ................................ Neville


February 23rd, 2022 03:31

Know Your Place – and Stay There!
Neville said:



is there really any viable counter argument .. nah\' I dont fink so .. I am in your corner sir ............. Neville


February 21st, 2022 03:11

Know Your Place – and Stay There!
Lorna said:

Help Dave! Politicians swill in their own vortex..... I wonder which evolutionary process in the chemical soup thought them up.....

February 8th, 2022 15:14

Know Your Place – and Stay There!
Rozina said:

Politicians are the same the world over -exceptions are a few women leaders (of course!). Including politicians in power in my country; those in opposition behave similarly once in power.

February 8th, 2022 04:56

Know Your Place – and Stay There!
Rozina said:

Same here!

February 7th, 2022 22:04

Know Your Place – and Stay There!
dusk arising said:

Ah the fate of society within a capitalist state of mind. Vote?...so many deny they voted yet are voiceiferous about the state of things, largely the economy or that damned pandemic.
Bring back hanging... nay bring back transporatation to.... hang on their borders wont allow the unvaccinated.
Anyone for tennis?

February 7th, 2022 04:52

Oh Summer – Tra La La
MendedFences27 said:

\"Oh Summer\" - How I miss her. Sub-zero temps, \"feets\" of snow, and high winds here. Welcome to Groundhog Day. Your whinging gave my soul some relief, a momentary sense of sweltering heat and humidity. Thanks for making my day just a little bit more sane. - Phil A.

February 2nd, 2022 20:00

Oh Summer – Tra La La
Neville said:


Blimey & we were hoping to pop over later this year or early next ........... :)

February 2nd, 2022 02:27

Oh Summer – Tra La La
Goldfinch60 said:

That \'damp version of hell\' can be so very intolerable Dave, may the sun soon dry up your hell.

Andy

February 2nd, 2022 01:51

Oh Summer – Tra La La
Rozina said:

I\'ll join you in whingeing (whinging?)! It\'s almost always hot, wet and humid in Penang, Malaysia. I sympathise as our temperatures are probably not as high.

February 1st, 2022 22:54

Oh Summer – Tra La La
Doggerel Dave said:

Thanks Fay - all contributions gratefully received by this puddle of humanity unfortunately situated on the underside of Earth.

February 1st, 2022 18:44

Oh Summer – Tra La La
Fay Slimm. said:

I love your whinges and this piece of rhymed sweating through extra heat describes more than perfectly how vexing that damping can be. A cooling breeze waft over the waves from Cornwall and me to your woeful brow dear suff\'rin\' Dave.

February 1st, 2022 16:07

Who’s for Tennis?
Neville said:


There\'s a whole gang of em ... Miss Take, Miss. Took .. Miss Spent, Miss Informed .. Miss Isle .. Miss Appropriate & Miss Placed to name just a few of the ring leaders ... but having drawn your attention to the obvious ... I just wanna say this .. I think you\'ve got something here sir

...... Neville

January 26th, 2022 03:19

Who’s for Tennis?
dusk arising said:

Lets throw a party and have a game of tennis for honest people.

January 17th, 2022 08:50

Who’s for Tennis?
Rozina said:

Same kind of thing here and elsewhere. So true.

January 17th, 2022 05:11

Who’s for Tennis?
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - so clever this poetic rhyming of reasons for gripe - - we certainly know that Miss Direction here in the U.K. and that General too !! Great read Dave and no Goodbye I hope from your relevant postings.

January 17th, 2022 04:10

Who’s for Tennis?
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Dave and so right.

Andy

January 17th, 2022 03:34

Take Care, Stay Safe.
Saxon Crow said:

Take care buddy and see you soon

January 13th, 2022 03:51

Take Care, Stay Safe.
Goldfinch60 said:

Sorry to hear this Dave, hope to see you on here again soon.

Andy

January 13th, 2022 02:42

Take Care, Stay Safe.
jarcher54 said:

I am with Dusk... there\'s a collective weariness, but you have always made me smile and even think! Plus, you have the best nickname.

January 13th, 2022 01:03

Take Care, Stay Safe.
Rozina said:

Do take care. Hope to see you back soon on MPS. All the very best to you.

January 12th, 2022 23:14

Take Care, Stay Safe.
dusk arising said:

I think a lot of inspiration has been zapped by the alteration to our lives which the pandemic has brought. Suddenly poets are running out of steam and patience, myself included.

It would be a shame to see you disappear completely so just sit back and let some time pass till you feel like scratching out some more words for us. Plenty seem to be on hold at the moment... join the club..... come back when you can mate...... stay safe.

January 12th, 2022 20:20

Take Care, Stay Safe.
Laura🌻 said:

Dear Dave,

So sorry to see you go.
I do appreciate your
message telling us why
you\'re leaving MPS. There
have been a few occasions
where poets have left
without telling fellow
poets...of course, it is their
prerogative to do so; however, it\'s a
bit disheartening and
disappointing when
certain relationships build up and suddenly we’re left in the lurch.
There are others who are no
longer on MPS because
they\'re no longer on this
earth. That’s a totally different situation, of course. May they RIP.

Don’t stay away for too long.
You’ll be missed.

Stay safe and be well.

Laura🌻

January 12th, 2022 18:57



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