Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
It\'s over then?
Teddy.15 said:
Dave, what brilliant dialog so very clear and understandable to read. Life is exactly like this, love is exactly like this every one has their very own experience and has to go with the very way it just is. I love this so much, and your poem, wow I just wasn\'t expecting the last stanza. Brilliant and now I feel I know you better. 🌹
April 16th, 2024 00:36
Teddy.15 said:
Dave, what brilliant dialog so very clear and understandable to read. Life is exactly like this, love is exactly like this every one has their very own experience and has to go with the very way it just is. I love this so much, and your poem, wow I just wasn\'t expecting the last stanza. Brilliant and now I feel I know you better. 🌹
April 16th, 2024 00:36
Confession.
Neville said:
aint they just made to be broken, bent twisted and bruised .. or summat :)
April 15th, 2024 02:48
Neville said:
aint they just made to be broken, bent twisted and bruised .. or summat :)
April 15th, 2024 02:48
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
Neville said:
You wove it well Dave ..
Very well indeed .. and so very, very true ..
April 15th, 2024 02:44
Neville said:
You wove it well Dave ..
Very well indeed .. and so very, very true ..
April 15th, 2024 02:44
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
sorenbarrett said:
I guess I need to get out some of my old poems and rework them. A merry story set in the style of old. Liked this one Dave.
April 14th, 2024 02:21
sorenbarrett said:
I guess I need to get out some of my old poems and rework them. A merry story set in the style of old. Liked this one Dave.
April 14th, 2024 02:21
A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say…..
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always send nine ten year old birthday cards.
Andy
April 3rd, 2024 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
You could always send nine ten year old birthday cards.
Andy
April 3rd, 2024 01:04
A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say…..
sorenbarrett said:
A great message. When one reaches a certain age years and count are no longer important, or maybe they are as a tribute to how old the person is, Loved the humor in this write but more than this I love the humor in me living as long as I have, it seems a cosmic joke.
April 2nd, 2024 18:44
sorenbarrett said:
A great message. When one reaches a certain age years and count are no longer important, or maybe they are as a tribute to how old the person is, Loved the humor in this write but more than this I love the humor in me living as long as I have, it seems a cosmic joke.
April 2nd, 2024 18:44
A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say…..
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t worry about the card just plant the kisses on her dear forehead for each year she has celebrated her birthdays 🌹 so very humbling. ❤️
April 2nd, 2024 09:16
Teddy.15 said:
Don\'t worry about the card just plant the kisses on her dear forehead for each year she has celebrated her birthdays 🌹 so very humbling. ❤️
April 2nd, 2024 09:16
A Happy Birthday party, you MIGHT say…..
orchidee said:
Will you send Goldfinch and I a 10 millionth birthday card? - our ages! lol.
April 2nd, 2024 01:52
orchidee said:
Will you send Goldfinch and I a 10 millionth birthday card? - our ages! lol.
April 2nd, 2024 01:52
Confession.
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Dave, a dot means a lot when poised in the right hand and you sir, well let\'s just say that the hand that writes delights...........!
March 31st, 2024 12:22
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Dave, a dot means a lot when poised in the right hand and you sir, well let\'s just say that the hand that writes delights...........!
March 31st, 2024 12:22
Full Employment.
Bella Shepard said:
You get across a very important point, with wonderful rhyme & reason. I couldn\'t agree more. Such a good write!
March 28th, 2024 08:43
Bella Shepard said:
You get across a very important point, with wonderful rhyme & reason. I couldn\'t agree more. Such a good write!
March 28th, 2024 08:43
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
Bella Shepard said:
Well my friend, inspiration was upon you. I just had to YouTube Foggy, Foggy Dew which I had never heard before. Your purple parody (love the alliteration) is superb. Naughty, but oh so nice. I can almost see the wry smile on your face as you wrote it, I know I was smiling as I read it. Kudos, great work!
March 28th, 2024 08:40
Bella Shepard said:
Well my friend, inspiration was upon you. I just had to YouTube Foggy, Foggy Dew which I had never heard before. Your purple parody (love the alliteration) is superb. Naughty, but oh so nice. I can almost see the wry smile on your face as you wrote it, I know I was smiling as I read it. Kudos, great work!
March 28th, 2024 08:40
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
orchidee said:
I say \'I\'ve not got the foggiest idea\' - geddit?! lol.
March 27th, 2024 10:58
orchidee said:
I say \'I\'ve not got the foggiest idea\' - geddit?! lol.
March 27th, 2024 10:58
A BAWDY Foggy Foggy Purple Parody
Goldfinch60 said:
Good interpretation Dave.
Andy
https://youtu.be/aEQXOYrukVI?si=cFOw9rm94sRbQ9xC
March 27th, 2024 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good interpretation Dave.
Andy
https://youtu.be/aEQXOYrukVI?si=cFOw9rm94sRbQ9xC
March 27th, 2024 02:56
Full Employment.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Dave, being retired has its thankfulness.
Andy
March 23rd, 2024 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Dave, being retired has its thankfulness.
Andy
March 23rd, 2024 02:21
Full Employment.
2781 said:
It\'s in a slide. Community replaced by government, government replaced by corporations. I wonder what comes next?
March 22nd, 2024 22:59
2781 said:
It\'s in a slide. Community replaced by government, government replaced by corporations. I wonder what comes next?
March 22nd, 2024 22:59
Confession.
Teddy.15 said:
Dot away my friend, creative idea\'s are fun maybe you could make a poem using only dots I\'ve seen it done but I wouldn\'t have the patience myself. 🌹
March 22nd, 2024 02:07
Teddy.15 said:
Dot away my friend, creative idea\'s are fun maybe you could make a poem using only dots I\'ve seen it done but I wouldn\'t have the patience myself. 🌹
March 22nd, 2024 02:07
Vuitton Clerihew
sorenbarrett said:
It was my oldest daughter that was fixed on name brands. Great write.
March 18th, 2024 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
It was my oldest daughter that was fixed on name brands. Great write.
March 18th, 2024 16:29
Confession.
sorenbarrett said:
Whether music or grammar breaking rules is a method of individual expression. Well said Dave
March 12th, 2024 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
Whether music or grammar breaking rules is a method of individual expression. Well said Dave
March 12th, 2024 07:53
Confession.
Saxon Crow said:
Must not break the rules! Conform! Conform to meter and rhythm man! Ha. Great point Dave. Poetry should be Avant Garde or not. It\'s just poetry.
March 12th, 2024 05:25
Saxon Crow said:
Must not break the rules! Conform! Conform to meter and rhythm man! Ha. Great point Dave. Poetry should be Avant Garde or not. It\'s just poetry.
March 12th, 2024 05:25
Confession.
Tom Dylan said:
Fantastic, Dave. Glad I\'m not the only one. When I send emails, they usually have a fair few dots... Good on ya. :-)
Cheers.. Tom..
March 12th, 2024 03:54
Tom Dylan said:
Fantastic, Dave. Glad I\'m not the only one. When I send emails, they usually have a fair few dots... Good on ya. :-)
Cheers.. Tom..
March 12th, 2024 03:54
Confession.
orchidee said:
Some people only use two dots for an ellipsis. Can\'t have that - it\'s a matter of major importance that it must be three dots!
Well, using two dots saves half a gallon of ink, I suppose, if used for a third dot.
March 12th, 2024 03:01
orchidee said:
Some people only use two dots for an ellipsis. Can\'t have that - it\'s a matter of major importance that it must be three dots!
Well, using two dots saves half a gallon of ink, I suppose, if used for a third dot.
March 12th, 2024 03:01
Confession.
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always break the rule Dave as long as it does not hurt anyone.
Andy
March 12th, 2024 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
We can always break the rule Dave as long as it does not hurt anyone.
Andy
March 12th, 2024 02:49
Confession.
Cassie58 said:
There’s alot of dots at the end of this write Dave :) I break rules too. Well let me clarify. I do when it comes to poetry:)
March 11th, 2024 23:36
Cassie58 said:
There’s alot of dots at the end of this write Dave :) I break rules too. Well let me clarify. I do when it comes to poetry:)
March 11th, 2024 23:36
Vuitton Clerihew
MendedFences27 said:
Staying within my criminal bent, I have to say that the sellers of brand-named goods are criminal also. I once bought a shirt priced at $150. Went back 3 months later and got it for $30. I venture to say it could have sold for $5 and they still would have made a profit. Clothing is the biggest rip off business there is. Enjoyed your Vuitton Clerihew.
March 7th, 2024 16:34
MendedFences27 said:
Staying within my criminal bent, I have to say that the sellers of brand-named goods are criminal also. I once bought a shirt priced at $150. Went back 3 months later and got it for $30. I venture to say it could have sold for $5 and they still would have made a profit. Clothing is the biggest rip off business there is. Enjoyed your Vuitton Clerihew.
March 7th, 2024 16:34
Vuitton Clerihew
Cassie58 said:
So much money being lost to those who make fakes of expensive labelled goods. Never been one to go for labels. I just can’t part with huge amounts of cash for a fancy handbag. Not a problem I worry about, but I guess if you have parted with mega cash and find out you have fake goods, you wouldn’t be a happy bunny. Neither would the manufacturer be happy :) I’m not a designer type of gal:) I enjoyed reading your three part slice of current day life Dave. All the best.
March 7th, 2024 14:25
Cassie58 said:
So much money being lost to those who make fakes of expensive labelled goods. Never been one to go for labels. I just can’t part with huge amounts of cash for a fancy handbag. Not a problem I worry about, but I guess if you have parted with mega cash and find out you have fake goods, you wouldn’t be a happy bunny. Neither would the manufacturer be happy :) I’m not a designer type of gal:) I enjoyed reading your three part slice of current day life Dave. All the best.
March 7th, 2024 14:25
Exposé
sorenbarrett said:
I guess that you Gold and Orchi are also know as the three wise men. Good write Dave a proper tribute.
March 6th, 2024 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
I guess that you Gold and Orchi are also know as the three wise men. Good write Dave a proper tribute.
March 6th, 2024 06:32
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