Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Sovereign Citizen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits sharp. “Capitalism doesn’t make you free”...that line cut straight through, simple and undeniable. You call out the necrosis without apology, and the quiet path you name speaks volumes. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done and a fave...erm...Dave. 😅🤣
September 3rd, 2025 10:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this hits sharp. “Capitalism doesn’t make you free”...that line cut straight through, simple and undeniable. You call out the necrosis without apology, and the quiet path you name speaks volumes. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Very well done and a fave...erm...Dave. 😅🤣
September 3rd, 2025 10:57
Sovereign Citizen
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so much better to think outside the box Dave, the mind then thinks of proper ways in life.
Andy
September 3rd, 2025 02:48
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so much better to think outside the box Dave, the mind then thinks of proper ways in life.
Andy
September 3rd, 2025 02:48
Sovereign Citizen
orchidee said:
How\'s that winter going? About the same as March in the UK. One of us is upside down! lol.
September 3rd, 2025 02:25
orchidee said:
How\'s that winter going? About the same as March in the UK. One of us is upside down! lol.
September 3rd, 2025 02:25
Sovereign Citizen
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Welcome Soren. Note the effort and the edginess of your response. Or as a coconspirator of yours might post - 🤣
September 2nd, 2025 22:00
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Welcome Soren. Note the effort and the edginess of your response. Or as a coconspirator of yours might post - 🤣
September 2nd, 2025 22:00
Sovereign Citizen
sorenbarrett said:
There you go Dave I knew you were not a system man. Good show old man, I\'m with you
September 2nd, 2025 20:59
sorenbarrett said:
There you go Dave I knew you were not a system man. Good show old man, I\'m with you
September 2nd, 2025 20:59
Repost – Roll Up (2022)
Neville said:
Makes perfect sense .. don\'t be a prick go get ya self jabbed ..
September 1st, 2025 11:29
Neville said:
Makes perfect sense .. don\'t be a prick go get ya self jabbed ..
September 1st, 2025 11:29
Repost – Roll Up (2022)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That callback to polio really struck me, Dave. It grounds the urgency in lived history…making the plea now impossible to ignore. Well delivered, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 09:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That callback to polio really struck me, Dave. It grounds the urgency in lived history…making the plea now impossible to ignore. Well delivered, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 30th, 2025 09:07
Repost – Roll Up (2022)
sorenbarrett said:
Another wave of illness noted a poem of warning to take preparation, always wise to protect oneself without causing a stampede. Nicely stated Dave
August 30th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Another wave of illness noted a poem of warning to take preparation, always wise to protect oneself without causing a stampede. Nicely stated Dave
August 30th, 2025 04:04
Friendly Response….
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your vacation Dave and see you soon.
Andy
August 30th, 2025 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your vacation Dave and see you soon.
Andy
August 30th, 2025 01:51
Friendly Response….
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Blocked Again\'? More fibre in your diet I think.
August 29th, 2025 20:41
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Blocked Again\'? More fibre in your diet I think.
August 29th, 2025 20:41
Friendly Response….
arqios said:
There are many games and far too many players... the world is in our loungeroom and for some in the boudoir. Hope you are doing well.
August 29th, 2025 19:11
arqios said:
There are many games and far too many players... the world is in our loungeroom and for some in the boudoir. Hope you are doing well.
August 29th, 2025 19:11
Friendly Response….
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Dave you got my private message then, you knew I was missing you. I must of sent it mistakenly under a false name. I really do miss you when you are not around, this place is just not the same.
August 29th, 2025 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Dave you got my private message then, you knew I was missing you. I must of sent it mistakenly under a false name. I really do miss you when you are not around, this place is just not the same.
August 29th, 2025 13:43
Friendly Response….
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but ahem, caveat first: my extreme lack of sleep painfully eliminates my ability to think clearly, even when filling the pot for tea an hour or so ago. That said, you blocked her?! She\'s actually nice. I still tag after the poets/poetess who blocked me nearly a year ago now. It\'s the \"happy\" reality of this medium. Excellently rendered with a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2025 09:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, but ahem, caveat first: my extreme lack of sleep painfully eliminates my ability to think clearly, even when filling the pot for tea an hour or so ago. That said, you blocked her?! She\'s actually nice. I still tag after the poets/poetess who blocked me nearly a year ago now. It\'s the \"happy\" reality of this medium. Excellently rendered with a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2025 09:12
Once More With Feeling…
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Why does it bring to mind that iconic line - species has amused itself to death
August 29th, 2025 01:17
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Why does it bring to mind that iconic line - species has amused itself to death
August 29th, 2025 01:17
Once More With Feeling…
Paul Bell said:
I quite like the idea of a robot writing for me while I\'m down the pub.
August 27th, 2025 13:33
Paul Bell said:
I quite like the idea of a robot writing for me while I\'m down the pub.
August 27th, 2025 13:33
Heard it on the Radio....
Neville said:
Verily clever squire .. enjoyed muchly but for a micro moment ..
August 24th, 2025 03:07
Neville said:
Verily clever squire .. enjoyed muchly but for a micro moment ..
August 24th, 2025 03:07
Fraternity
Neville said:
AI Cap\'n Dog .. was that a typo up there? I thought pawtistic fitted rather well ... Oh\' well ... Neville
August 17th, 2025 00:37
Neville said:
AI Cap\'n Dog .. was that a typo up there? I thought pawtistic fitted rather well ... Oh\' well ... Neville
August 17th, 2025 00:37
Excremental
Neville said:
If you don\'t say it like it is .. then whose gonna say it like it is .. keep sayin it .. I\'m just sayin on behalf of a ..
August 13th, 2025 02:22
Neville said:
If you don\'t say it like it is .. then whose gonna say it like it is .. keep sayin it .. I\'m just sayin on behalf of a ..
August 13th, 2025 02:22
Oracle
Neville said:
Whilst I fully appreciate the need for advancement in virtually all things .. AI does kind of put the wind up me a bit .. as I fear the whole thing is open to abuse and can see it doing potentially more harm than good .. I hope I\'m wrong but just watch this space .. Thanks for the adrenaline rush Dave and for making me think .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 07:33
Neville said:
Whilst I fully appreciate the need for advancement in virtually all things .. AI does kind of put the wind up me a bit .. as I fear the whole thing is open to abuse and can see it doing potentially more harm than good .. I hope I\'m wrong but just watch this space .. Thanks for the adrenaline rush Dave and for making me think .. Neville
July 30th, 2025 07:33
Once More With Feeling…
Neville said:
Damn n dubble damnation .. tis like the proverbial sword of Damocles hanging over our heads just waiting for the nod .. I used to be for it but now I\'m not so sure .. its hard to believe anything these days .. but sure as hell I get ya drift & to the hilt squire ..
July 28th, 2025 10:53
Neville said:
Damn n dubble damnation .. tis like the proverbial sword of Damocles hanging over our heads just waiting for the nod .. I used to be for it but now I\'m not so sure .. its hard to believe anything these days .. but sure as hell I get ya drift & to the hilt squire ..
July 28th, 2025 10:53
Once More With Feeling…
Cheeky Missy said:
I badly need sleep and fully intended to be in bed by this quasi late hour of 2100, however, you\'ve confused me. I detest the rather devilish AI, nor but fight with the ones that beset me, and yes, it\'s the trendiest topic, but I\'m still confused. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2025 21:00
Cheeky Missy said:
I badly need sleep and fully intended to be in bed by this quasi late hour of 2100, however, you\'ve confused me. I detest the rather devilish AI, nor but fight with the ones that beset me, and yes, it\'s the trendiest topic, but I\'m still confused. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2025 21:00
Oracle
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orry’s got sass! I had thought I commented on this and realized I never did. My bad! Chalk it up to the spotty internet I had this past weekend. This feels like a cheeky employee review of the office AI, but beneath the charm is something more… uncanny. You’ve captured the strange intimacy we’ve developed with our digital assistants...half helper, half ghost in the shell. A playful and pointed piece, Dave. You made me grin and squirm. 🌹👏
July 15th, 2025 19:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Orry’s got sass! I had thought I commented on this and realized I never did. My bad! Chalk it up to the spotty internet I had this past weekend. This feels like a cheeky employee review of the office AI, but beneath the charm is something more… uncanny. You’ve captured the strange intimacy we’ve developed with our digital assistants...half helper, half ghost in the shell. A playful and pointed piece, Dave. You made me grin and squirm. 🌹👏
July 15th, 2025 19:03
Once More With Feeling…
Goldfinch60 said:
I still think outside the box Dave and AI cannot find me there.
Andy
July 15th, 2025 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I still think outside the box Dave and AI cannot find me there.
Andy
July 15th, 2025 01:26
Once More With Feeling…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rock on, Dave! The call to sharpen the ol’ critical faculties is for friggin’ real. AI beware: the Doggrel Dave lens is watching. 😄 Great job, my friend. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 21:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rock on, Dave! The call to sharpen the ol’ critical faculties is for friggin’ real. AI beware: the Doggrel Dave lens is watching. 😄 Great job, my friend. 🌹👏
July 14th, 2025 21:07
Once More With Feeling…
Bella Shepard said:
Not being a techy I googled Copilot, very interesting. I see your point. I feel the same way about AI, as with all technology it posesses the capacity for good or bad. I\'ve seen the wonders of AI in medicine and for people with disabilities, as well as fears for it\'s use to misinform and control. Even leading figures in AI, and academics warn of the potential for misuse. This will require vigilence and a healthy dose of skepticism. We should all be on gard and hope that good judgement will prevail. Good write my friend!
July 14th, 2025 10:12
Bella Shepard said:
Not being a techy I googled Copilot, very interesting. I see your point. I feel the same way about AI, as with all technology it posesses the capacity for good or bad. I\'ve seen the wonders of AI in medicine and for people with disabilities, as well as fears for it\'s use to misinform and control. Even leading figures in AI, and academics warn of the potential for misuse. This will require vigilence and a healthy dose of skepticism. We should all be on gard and hope that good judgement will prevail. Good write my friend!
July 14th, 2025 10:12
Once More With Feeling…
orchidee said:
I\'m not human anyway, so I dunno how I get on here. lol.
July 14th, 2025 09:55
orchidee said:
I\'m not human anyway, so I dunno how I get on here. lol.
July 14th, 2025 09:55
Once More With Feeling…
sorenbarrett said:
Dave you and I are fighting a tidal wave of technology and are about to be swept out to sea and ground up in the debris. I got your point Ted Kaczynski was ahead of his time when in his manifesto said the technology would be the end of the human race. His tactics were a bit radical as the Unabomber.
July 14th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Dave you and I are fighting a tidal wave of technology and are about to be swept out to sea and ground up in the debris. I got your point Ted Kaczynski was ahead of his time when in his manifesto said the technology would be the end of the human race. His tactics were a bit radical as the Unabomber.
July 14th, 2025 04:29
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