Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Confession.
Teddy.15 said:

Dot away my friend, creative idea\'s are fun maybe you could make a poem using only dots I\'ve seen it done but I wouldn\'t have the patience myself. 🌹

March 22nd, 2024 02:07

Vuitton Clerihew
sorenbarrett said:

It was my oldest daughter that was fixed on name brands. Great write.

March 18th, 2024 16:29

Confession.
sorenbarrett said:

Whether music or grammar breaking rules is a method of individual expression. Well said Dave

March 12th, 2024 07:53

Confession.
Saxon Crow said:

Must not break the rules! Conform! Conform to meter and rhythm man! Ha. Great point Dave. Poetry should be Avant Garde or not. It\'s just poetry.

March 12th, 2024 05:25

Confession.
Tom C Dylan said:

Fantastic, Dave. Glad I\'m not the only one. When I send emails, they usually have a fair few dots... Good on ya. :-)
Cheers.. Tom..

March 12th, 2024 03:54

Confession.
orchidee said:

Some people only use two dots for an ellipsis. Can\'t have that - it\'s a matter of major importance that it must be three dots!
Well, using two dots saves half a gallon of ink, I suppose, if used for a third dot.

March 12th, 2024 03:01

Confession.
Goldfinch60 said:

We can always break the rule Dave as long as it does not hurt anyone.

Andy

March 12th, 2024 02:49

Confession.
Cassie58 said:

There’s alot of dots at the end of this write Dave :) I break rules too. Well let me clarify. I do when it comes to poetry:)

March 11th, 2024 23:36

Vuitton Clerihew
MendedFences27 said:

Staying within my criminal bent, I have to say that the sellers of brand-named goods are criminal also. I once bought a shirt priced at $150. Went back 3 months later and got it for $30. I venture to say it could have sold for $5 and they still would have made a profit. Clothing is the biggest rip off business there is. Enjoyed your Vuitton Clerihew.

March 7th, 2024 16:34

Vuitton Clerihew
Cassie58 said:

So much money being lost to those who make fakes of expensive labelled goods. Never been one to go for labels. I just can’t part with huge amounts of cash for a fancy handbag. Not a problem I worry about, but I guess if you have parted with mega cash and find out you have fake goods, you wouldn’t be a happy bunny. Neither would the manufacturer be happy :) I’m not a designer type of gal:) I enjoyed reading your three part slice of current day life Dave. All the best.



March 7th, 2024 14:25

Exposé
sorenbarrett said:

I guess that you Gold and Orchi are also know as the three wise men. Good write Dave a proper tribute.

March 6th, 2024 06:32

Exposé
Neville said:



Dont mention the P word .. Solomon will swoon .. Hairy nuff .. or should that be furry nuff .. Neville 😎👍

March 6th, 2024 06:07

Vuitton Clerihew
Teddy.15 said:

It\'s probably down to education and keeping up with the Jones\'s, something I would never do myself, one of those bags cost more than an international holiday. 🌹

March 6th, 2024 05:30

Exposé
Goldfinch60 said:

Sorry Dave but Orchi and I are much older than that, we we were sitting by Solomon when he said those words and Fido kept on barking at every rude bit so nobody heard it. LOL

Andy

March 6th, 2024 02:18

Vuitton Clerihew
Doggerel Dave said:

Neville, it will take me months if not years to match your word score in responding to yours; the burden is crippling. I\'ll do my best,........ \'so \"If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,\" I\'ll do my very best - unless you are perfectly happy with the status quo.(the \'get out of jail free\' card).😊

March 2nd, 2024 05:47

Vuitton Clerihew
Neville said:


I congratulate you on this whole page .. I love the layout and way you have introduced the topic at hand .. (a poem in its own write) and the middle portion .. perfectly and obviously justified .. a very clever touch .. and the final coup de grace, delivered with a kidney punch that takes the readers breath away coz it landed on his funny bone .. which as we all know aint funny .. but on this occasion it bloomin well is ..

Anyway, I cant remember whether I have actually congratulated you proper yet so if not ..

Here goes, tis damned fine sir Dog ..

Neville

March 2nd, 2024 04:31

Vuitton Clerihew
Goldfinch60 said:

Back in the 1960s when jeans became a \'fashion item\' the price rocketed, I have never ever bought jeans since than! LOL

Andy

March 2nd, 2024 02:07

Vuitton Clerihew
Parisab said:

That always annoys me (as a tourist.) And the fakes make the fair pricing of the authentic high fashion, go too far… Cool read…

March 1st, 2024 11:29

Vuitton Clerihew
2781 said:

Seems to be a hot topic, at the moment.
Who\'s to blame? All is vanity.

March 1st, 2024 08:12

Vuitton Clerihew
David Wakeling said:

I don\'t have any labelled clothes and I somehow survived. Interesting poem.

March 1st, 2024 05:33

Identity
rhmn_7 said:

What you do in & with life is the only part that matters! Nice poetry!

February 25th, 2024 09:18

An Informal Visit.
sorenbarrett said:

Couplets my friend. Well when Taylor came down here a girl dropped dead. They had to postpone the concert and people were upset. I know the name and have heard some of her songs but they are not my cup of tea. Loved this write Dave.

February 25th, 2024 05:34

An Informal Visit.
Thomas W Case said:

Great imagery and use of the senses.

February 24th, 2024 21:41

An Informal Visit.
Goldfinch60 said:

Two good fun couplets Dave.

Andy

February 24th, 2024 02:24

An Informal Visit.
Bella Shepard said:

Love the rhyme, and love the reason. I don\'t quite understand the hoopla, but then I had the Beatles, which my parents couldn\'t understand. Such a fun write my friend!

February 23rd, 2024 16:05

An Informal Visit.
Neville said:



dang your authors note stole my thunder .. and that\'s a hard act to swallow .. but quite understandable ..

February 23rd, 2024 11:24

An Informal Visit.
David Wakeling said:

Who is Taylor Swift? I couldn\'t tell you one song she sings

February 23rd, 2024 04:42

An Informal Visit.
orchidee said:

And an unwelcome visit from Sir Orchi ONS. lol.

February 23rd, 2024 03:17

An Informal Visit.
Teddy.15 said:

I\'ve never tried couplet myself looks really fun. What I see is loads of imagery and great rhyme. We have a bad windy storm here too today. Most enjoyed Dave. 🌹

February 23rd, 2024 03:07

Aliens
Doggerel Dave said:

Not funny - ridiculous.
Thanks for the call.

February 21st, 2024 18:21

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