Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Amendment
sorenbarrett said:
I sometimes think it would be better if there were a king but not the one that thinks he is one. It would give the public something to look forward to beheadings at weekly football games, that would sell a lot of products especially if it were restricted to kings that were not popular. As for cars you are fortunate I guess but that means living around a lot of people to get public transportation.
March 30th, 2026 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
I sometimes think it would be better if there were a king but not the one that thinks he is one. It would give the public something to look forward to beheadings at weekly football games, that would sell a lot of products especially if it were restricted to kings that were not popular. As for cars you are fortunate I guess but that means living around a lot of people to get public transportation.
March 30th, 2026 15:10
Amendment
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, that turn into “No Mad Kings”…that’s the line that really lands. It flips the frame and gives the whole piece its edge. Strong piece, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, that turn into “No Mad Kings”…that’s the line that really lands. It flips the frame and gives the whole piece its edge. Strong piece, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 30th, 2026 10:07
Amendment
Michael Edwards said:
If only no Kings - will he wear a crown when the real King visits?
March 30th, 2026 09:36
Michael Edwards said:
If only no Kings - will he wear a crown when the real King visits?
March 30th, 2026 09:36
Amendment
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dave. Timely, the protests are on.
March 30th, 2026 08:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Dave. Timely, the protests are on.
March 30th, 2026 08:32
New Poet?
Doggerel Dave said:
Please note: Michael here has blocked me for reasons best known to himself, so I am unable to respond directly. This I do not intend to do here as It may never reach him.
March 29th, 2026 04:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Please note: Michael here has blocked me for reasons best known to himself, so I am unable to respond directly. This I do not intend to do here as It may never reach him.
March 29th, 2026 04:56
New Poet?
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m guilty as of late - I am busy with my art pursuits and dont find time to read all thats posted and commentt and even evene less time to write hence my current offerings are all short pieces and usually of the humerous and nonsense genres..
March 29th, 2026 02:42
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m guilty as of late - I am busy with my art pursuits and dont find time to read all thats posted and commentt and even evene less time to write hence my current offerings are all short pieces and usually of the humerous and nonsense genres..
March 29th, 2026 02:42
New Poet?
Allie561 said:
We must have interaction if we wish to be interacted with. Nobody likes talking to a wall. Nicely said Dave.
March 26th, 2026 22:53
Allie561 said:
We must have interaction if we wish to be interacted with. Nobody likes talking to a wall. Nicely said Dave.
March 26th, 2026 22:53
New Poet?
Neville said:
Have I missed summat or someone perchance? .. am asking for a friend you understand, but I do kinda get your drift .. Neville
March 26th, 2026 08:07
Neville said:
Have I missed summat or someone perchance? .. am asking for a friend you understand, but I do kinda get your drift .. Neville
March 26th, 2026 08:07
New Poet?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a clean, honest call back to community…not demanding attention, but inviting presence. You name the gap without accusing, and that makes the message land stronger. It is a nudge in the right direction. Couldn\'t agree more. Presence and engagement...community...are what make poetry sites tick. Support and be supported. It\'s a win/win. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is a clean, honest call back to community…not demanding attention, but inviting presence. You name the gap without accusing, and that makes the message land stronger. It is a nudge in the right direction. Couldn\'t agree more. Presence and engagement...community...are what make poetry sites tick. Support and be supported. It\'s a win/win. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:35
New Poet?
arqios said:
The interchange isn’t always equitable but there we go. I do understand the point and it often comes back to bother me. People are people 🕊️🙏🏻
March 25th, 2026 06:38
arqios said:
The interchange isn’t always equitable but there we go. I do understand the point and it often comes back to bother me. People are people 🕊️🙏🏻
March 25th, 2026 06:38
New Poet?
sorenbarrett said:
Here here Dave I am behind you all the way on this one. I have been remiss at times acknowledging their new standing but try to respond to their posts. All could do a little more in this regard. Very nicely stated Dave
March 25th, 2026 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
Here here Dave I am behind you all the way on this one. I have been remiss at times acknowledging their new standing but try to respond to their posts. All could do a little more in this regard. Very nicely stated Dave
March 25th, 2026 03:20
New Poet?
Goldfinch60 said:
It does happen Dave, when I first started on this sight it was the done thing to welcome new users onto the sight.
Andy
March 25th, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
It does happen Dave, when I first started on this sight it was the done thing to welcome new users onto the sight.
Andy
March 25th, 2026 02:50
The Ballad Of Karen the Chook
Neville said:
How extraordinarily enlightening, this is absolutely brill and I know that I\'ve said it before but I aint talking fish .. Neville
March 24th, 2026 01:36
Neville said:
How extraordinarily enlightening, this is absolutely brill and I know that I\'ve said it before but I aint talking fish .. Neville
March 24th, 2026 01:36
\'At
NafisaSB said:
no comments - as you have yourself described what you are - a cool cat, and gentleman about town...and the cane goes well with it - i think the hat competes the picture very well - but don\'t let all these stop you from commenting frankly - let your \'north and south\' have complete freedom...
bless you
March 23rd, 2026 23:29
NafisaSB said:
no comments - as you have yourself described what you are - a cool cat, and gentleman about town...and the cane goes well with it - i think the hat competes the picture very well - but don\'t let all these stop you from commenting frankly - let your \'north and south\' have complete freedom...
bless you
March 23rd, 2026 23:29
\'At
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dave, I came from Kent and now live in the midlands but some still think that I have a cockney accent. Would you adam and eve it.
Andy
March 19th, 2026 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Dave, I came from Kent and now live in the midlands but some still think that I have a cockney accent. Would you adam and eve it.
Andy
March 19th, 2026 02:22
\'At
Kevin Hulme said:
Dick Van Dyke in Mary Poppins\'. Worst Cockney Accent of all time.
March 18th, 2026 19:33
Kevin Hulme said:
Dick Van Dyke in Mary Poppins\'. Worst Cockney Accent of all time.
March 18th, 2026 19:33
\'At
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this has such a fun swagger to it…that polished image built up line by line, then undone with “north and south” in a way that’s both sharp and funny. It’s playful, but grounded in something real. Great piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this has such a fun swagger to it…that polished image built up line by line, then undone with “north and south” in a way that’s both sharp and funny. It’s playful, but grounded in something real. Great piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 18th, 2026 09:31
\'At
2781 said:
I am assuming you\'re overdressed but your cockney charm wins anyway.
March 18th, 2026 06:24
2781 said:
I am assuming you\'re overdressed but your cockney charm wins anyway.
March 18th, 2026 06:24
\'At
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording Dave and yes I have heard that term used before of north and south, I always wondered why not east and west but I guess that is because tradition assumes that we are always headed east into the rising sun or west into the setting sun, but what do I know. A short write my friend but one that sets the mind to wonder. Do cloths make the man with that hat and cane. Enjoyed it and its rhyming \"At\'s\"
March 18th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Clever wording Dave and yes I have heard that term used before of north and south, I always wondered why not east and west but I guess that is because tradition assumes that we are always headed east into the rising sun or west into the setting sun, but what do I know. A short write my friend but one that sets the mind to wonder. Do cloths make the man with that hat and cane. Enjoyed it and its rhyming \"At\'s\"
March 18th, 2026 04:34
\'At
Tom Dylan said:
This made me smile, mate. I read that in a Cockney accent. Nicely done.
March 18th, 2026 03:55
Tom Dylan said:
This made me smile, mate. I read that in a Cockney accent. Nicely done.
March 18th, 2026 03:55
\'At
Neville said:
I get this Dave I got a lot of it from me old courting days around the East End of the smoke .. actually I got a lot of things (before then) but that\'s another story .. Oh\' did you know (not in a Michael Cain accent) that it can take just a few weeks or up to about a year to make a Panama hat by hand .. I saw them being made in Panama last year .. Not a lotta people know that .. (Michael Cain accent in ya head optional) .. I bet you wear it well .. R Stewart .. Neville 😎👍
March 18th, 2026 03:02
Neville said:
I get this Dave I got a lot of it from me old courting days around the East End of the smoke .. actually I got a lot of things (before then) but that\'s another story .. Oh\' did you know (not in a Michael Cain accent) that it can take just a few weeks or up to about a year to make a Panama hat by hand .. I saw them being made in Panama last year .. Not a lotta people know that .. (Michael Cain accent in ya head optional) .. I bet you wear it well .. R Stewart .. Neville 😎👍
March 18th, 2026 03:02
No More Visitors
NafisaSB said:
It’s good that they make only one visit and then disappear- you are lucky bcos in India both are thriving for sure.
Enjoy the respite whether climate change caused it or they found other victims to bother🤔😱🤐
March 16th, 2026 23:53
NafisaSB said:
It’s good that they make only one visit and then disappear- you are lucky bcos in India both are thriving for sure.
Enjoy the respite whether climate change caused it or they found other victims to bother🤔😱🤐
March 16th, 2026 23:53
Trumped
Thomas W Case said:
Short and sharp—like a truth muttered over cheap whiskey while the rich keep dealing the cards.
You’ve got the grit to say what most folks know but are too polite to spit out loud.
March 16th, 2026 10:10
Thomas W Case said:
Short and sharp—like a truth muttered over cheap whiskey while the rich keep dealing the cards.
You’ve got the grit to say what most folks know but are too polite to spit out loud.
March 16th, 2026 10:10
No More Visitors
2781 said:
I am happy for you. I did noticed Bunnings have shelves with rows of poison for killing everything.
Climate change, or whatever.. be thankful for today, would be my 2 cents worth.
March 15th, 2026 08:26
2781 said:
I am happy for you. I did noticed Bunnings have shelves with rows of poison for killing everything.
Climate change, or whatever.. be thankful for today, would be my 2 cents worth.
March 15th, 2026 08:26
No More Visitors
Thomas W Case said:
Man versus the bugs—twenty years in the trenches and still swatting like a stubborn survivor.
Funny, gritty, and honest; sometimes the whole war of life really does come down to what’s crawling across the floor.
March 15th, 2026 07:58
Thomas W Case said:
Man versus the bugs—twenty years in the trenches and still swatting like a stubborn survivor.
Funny, gritty, and honest; sometimes the whole war of life really does come down to what’s crawling across the floor.
March 15th, 2026 07:58
No More Visitors
Neville said:
Interesting ................. very, I would like to know what others think .. so will be back n forth like a fiddlers elbow .. most probably .. 😎👍🦟🦟🦟🦟🪳🪳🪰🪰👍
March 14th, 2026 09:40
Neville said:
Interesting ................. very, I would like to know what others think .. so will be back n forth like a fiddlers elbow .. most probably .. 😎👍🦟🦟🦟🦟🪳🪳🪰🪰👍
March 14th, 2026 09:40
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