Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
From Dave with “Love”
orchidee said:
Good write D. Now about that Fido limerick.........
January 30th, 2026 03:44
orchidee said:
Good write D. Now about that Fido limerick.........
January 30th, 2026 03:44
From Dave with “Love”
sorenbarrett said:
Always was partial to limericks Dave this one is no exception. Have a good day my friend
January 30th, 2026 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
Always was partial to limericks Dave this one is no exception. Have a good day my friend
January 30th, 2026 03:42
From Dave with “Love”
Goldfinch60 said:
Save that reality Dave, it will always be there.
Andy
January 30th, 2026 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Save that reality Dave, it will always be there.
Andy
January 30th, 2026 02:24
Oh Why am I Left Out of the Party?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Every one loves a good laughing limerick, no? 🤣
Let\'s see if this one reaches the top too,
Though it might be better read in the loo.
In there, I\'m sure, no one will mind
If you make them all laugh in kind,
And it causes them to shit out their poo.
🤣🤮🤣
Rock on, sir Dave! Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 10:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Every one loves a good laughing limerick, no? 🤣
Let\'s see if this one reaches the top too,
Though it might be better read in the loo.
In there, I\'m sure, no one will mind
If you make them all laugh in kind,
And it causes them to shit out their poo.
🤣🤮🤣
Rock on, sir Dave! Loved it, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 29th, 2026 10:44
Oh Why am I Left Out of the Party?
Cheeky Missy said:
Hardy, har, har! [More on this later, I intend].
January 29th, 2026 10:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Hardy, har, har! [More on this later, I intend].
January 29th, 2026 10:02
Oh Why am I Left Out of the Party?
rebellion_in_sanity said:
🤣😇👏 only you can write \"As coherence is such a sin\" - pure gold.
January 29th, 2026 06:22
rebellion_in_sanity said:
🤣😇👏 only you can write \"As coherence is such a sin\" - pure gold.
January 29th, 2026 06:22
Oh Why am I Left Out of the Party?
orchidee said:
And now my limerick starting - There was a wise talking dog named Fido..... That\'s as far as I\'ve got! lol.
January 29th, 2026 03:35
orchidee said:
And now my limerick starting - There was a wise talking dog named Fido..... That\'s as far as I\'ve got! lol.
January 29th, 2026 03:35
Oh Why am I Left Out of the Party?
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Dave.
Andy
January 29th, 2026 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Dave.
Andy
January 29th, 2026 02:53
Flatulence
NafisaSB said:
message has significance for me as i am undergoing neurotherapy for acidity, and the therapist insists i burp or fart as much as possible...lol...
January 28th, 2026 23:34
NafisaSB said:
message has significance for me as i am undergoing neurotherapy for acidity, and the therapist insists i burp or fart as much as possible...lol...
January 28th, 2026 23:34
Oh Why am I Left Out of the Party?
sorenbarrett said:
Now I knew that I loved limericks now where did the paper go? Good read Dave
January 28th, 2026 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
Now I knew that I loved limericks now where did the paper go? Good read Dave
January 28th, 2026 19:05
Poetry Poems
NafisaSB said:
am sometimes guilty as charged- of writing for the sake of it, even when there\'s nothing to talk about or no message to convey...so will try to be more careful in future for sure..thanks for the timely reminder..lol..
January 28th, 2026 01:56
NafisaSB said:
am sometimes guilty as charged- of writing for the sake of it, even when there\'s nothing to talk about or no message to convey...so will try to be more careful in future for sure..thanks for the timely reminder..lol..
January 28th, 2026 01:56
Poetry Poems
Thomas W Case said:
Plain-spoken and sharp—this cuts through the incense and gets to the blood of it.
You’re staking a claim for honesty over ornament, and it lands with a clean, hard thud...Powerful work, Dave.
January 27th, 2026 09:04
Thomas W Case said:
Plain-spoken and sharp—this cuts through the incense and gets to the blood of it.
You’re staking a claim for honesty over ornament, and it lands with a clean, hard thud...Powerful work, Dave.
January 27th, 2026 09:04
Poetry Poems
Paul Bell said:
So basically, black is black and you would like it that way.
You don\'t want black masquerading as yellow in blue.
Just became orchi there, I concur.
January 26th, 2026 04:56
Paul Bell said:
So basically, black is black and you would like it that way.
You don\'t want black masquerading as yellow in blue.
Just became orchi there, I concur.
January 26th, 2026 04:56
Poetry Poems
Goldfinch60 said:
Those messages can be obscure in some words Dave but I can generally find a hook to get into each poem as I can in modern classical music and modern art.
Andy
January 26th, 2026 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Those messages can be obscure in some words Dave but I can generally find a hook to get into each poem as I can in modern classical music and modern art.
Andy
January 26th, 2026 02:54
Poetry Poems
arqios said:
Clear as mud the way 21st century journalism is; that\'s the way of poetics. 🕊️🙏
January 25th, 2026 20:14
arqios said:
Clear as mud the way 21st century journalism is; that\'s the way of poetics. 🕊️🙏
January 25th, 2026 20:14
Poetry Poems
sorenbarrett said:
A clearly stated opinion Dave staying true to the message you are sending. Well and emphatically stated.
January 25th, 2026 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
A clearly stated opinion Dave staying true to the message you are sending. Well and emphatically stated.
January 25th, 2026 19:03
Poetry Poems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, I feel this tension between clarity and obscurity deeply. The insistence that poetry still has something to say, not just something to signal, resonates more than you might expect. Having studied Marshall McLuhan in another life, I truly appreciate this, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 25th, 2026 18:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, I feel this tension between clarity and obscurity deeply. The insistence that poetry still has something to say, not just something to signal, resonates more than you might expect. Having studied Marshall McLuhan in another life, I truly appreciate this, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
January 25th, 2026 18:27
Flatulence
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Beans, beans,/The musical fruit/ The more you eat/ The more you toot!
Peanut butter and jelly/Makes them smelly/Clam chowder/makes them louder.\" Good old flatulence, ahem. One of my brothers informed me years ago that if you\'re righteous your flatulence has no odor. I have particularly noxious flatulence, ergo, I\'ll not subscribe to his doctrine.
Lovely little quatrain to the rousing topic, beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 24th, 2026 18:23
Cheeky Missy said:
\"Beans, beans,/The musical fruit/ The more you eat/ The more you toot!
Peanut butter and jelly/Makes them smelly/Clam chowder/makes them louder.\" Good old flatulence, ahem. One of my brothers informed me years ago that if you\'re righteous your flatulence has no odor. I have particularly noxious flatulence, ergo, I\'ll not subscribe to his doctrine.
Lovely little quatrain to the rousing topic, beautifully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
January 24th, 2026 18:23
Flatulence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this cracked me up. The mock-formal tone paired with the subject is exactly what makes it land. Deadpan silliness done right. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 23rd, 2026 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this cracked me up. The mock-formal tone paired with the subject is exactly what makes it land. Deadpan silliness done right. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 23rd, 2026 09:40
Flatulence
arqios said:
Sometime a long time ago I witnessed a tooting of the alphabet song 🤣🙏🏻🕊️
January 23rd, 2026 07:14
arqios said:
Sometime a long time ago I witnessed a tooting of the alphabet song 🤣🙏🏻🕊️
January 23rd, 2026 07:14
Flatulence
sorenbarrett said:
On your last topic being an old fart that wears flannel in the winter and sheds it in the summer I was latter shocked to find what I had been doing now with equivalent ignorance I stand baffled about political correctness, I never was much for political correctness anyway people are people I make no distinction.
To me flatulence is the speech of politicians.
January 23rd, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
On your last topic being an old fart that wears flannel in the winter and sheds it in the summer I was latter shocked to find what I had been doing now with equivalent ignorance I stand baffled about political correctness, I never was much for political correctness anyway people are people I make no distinction.
To me flatulence is the speech of politicians.
January 23rd, 2026 04:04
Flannel
Paul Bell said:
I see flannel, and right away Trump comes to mind, maybe a preempted strike on Iceland, blast wrong country, hate when that happens.
Can\'t believe I took out Greenlandic citizenship to get my hundred grand, and now it ain\'t going to happen, that\'s the real flannel.
Actually, there is another flannel. The one my mum used to take the skin off my face with in the pursuit of cleanliness.
January 22nd, 2026 05:23
Paul Bell said:
I see flannel, and right away Trump comes to mind, maybe a preempted strike on Iceland, blast wrong country, hate when that happens.
Can\'t believe I took out Greenlandic citizenship to get my hundred grand, and now it ain\'t going to happen, that\'s the real flannel.
Actually, there is another flannel. The one my mum used to take the skin off my face with in the pursuit of cleanliness.
January 22nd, 2026 05:23
Flannel
orchidee said:
I\'ll give ya the old flannel, the waffle, the flattery. Oh yes, flattery will get us everywhere! (to reverse: Flattery will get us nowhere).
Why yes, it\'s Sir Orchi NS - someone who talks a lot without saying anything meaningful.
And - did I seem absent? I of course was here all the time, hanging around like a bad smell! lol.
January 22nd, 2026 03:12
orchidee said:
I\'ll give ya the old flannel, the waffle, the flattery. Oh yes, flattery will get us everywhere! (to reverse: Flattery will get us nowhere).
Why yes, it\'s Sir Orchi NS - someone who talks a lot without saying anything meaningful.
And - did I seem absent? I of course was here all the time, hanging around like a bad smell! lol.
January 22nd, 2026 03:12
Flannel
Goldfinch60 said:
It is a word that was used more many years ago Dave, meaning to hide or dismiss something that others did wrong.
Andy
January 22nd, 2026 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
It is a word that was used more many years ago Dave, meaning to hide or dismiss something that others did wrong.
Andy
January 22nd, 2026 02:24
Flannel
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this is sharp and economical. You make a case for honesty without sermon or sprawl, and the humor keeps it human. Poetry and commentary held to the same standard…clear, fair, and necessary, imho. Now, let me slip into some flannel sheets. It\'s frigid outside! 🥶 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this is sharp and economical. You make a case for honesty without sermon or sprawl, and the humor keeps it human. Poetry and commentary held to the same standard…clear, fair, and necessary, imho. Now, let me slip into some flannel sheets. It\'s frigid outside! 🥶 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 21st, 2026 19:58
Flannel
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic license? or outright lies? or are they both the same? This is a topic I have not seen on this or other sites a point for originality Dave. This one has my mind going in several directions which is one thing that a good write can do. I have to ask myself is not emotion an abuse of facts? Emotion is one criteria I find as a marker of poetry. Metaphor too is far from the facts stretching it into a comparison by using something analogous. Wow Dave you\'ve got me thinking. Most mind provoking.
January 21st, 2026 19:20
sorenbarrett said:
Poetic license? or outright lies? or are they both the same? This is a topic I have not seen on this or other sites a point for originality Dave. This one has my mind going in several directions which is one thing that a good write can do. I have to ask myself is not emotion an abuse of facts? Emotion is one criteria I find as a marker of poetry. Metaphor too is far from the facts stretching it into a comparison by using something analogous. Wow Dave you\'ve got me thinking. Most mind provoking.
January 21st, 2026 19:20
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