Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



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MendedFences27 said:

You\'re here because a couple got together and co-mingled some biochemistry, then someone slapped your butt and it\'s been all downhill since. Beyond that the greater purpose is survival. This may sound off-putting but it\'s not. There is survival in the here and now and survival in the future. - Phil A.

November 29th, 2024 13:01

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Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! True story. Incredibly deep! Well done, friend. 🌹👏

November 29th, 2024 10:36

War Veterans
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Reading this felt like being hit by tons of unadorned truth. What a poem! Isn\'t too much truth injurious to health? Loved it thoroughly!

November 29th, 2024 07:10

Here
arqios said:

Oh, that will fit with the most hated phrases that Orc was on about! ‘Here for what?’ One could ask, or: ‘Where’s the rest of you?’ And as hinted in the poem, how about the ones that are physically present but not all there? And so here we are… what next?

November 29th, 2024 06:35

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sorenbarrett said:

Dave, you hit upon a sore spot. I don’t believe there is any certainty and certainly no absolute reality. And worse of all, there is no total freedom. So I enjoyed the poem, but still feel captive and uncertain.

November 29th, 2024 04:46

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orchidee said:

Oohh, branching into aphorisms! Aww, why do they to me \'You\'re here talking rubbish again - and that\'s bad enough to start with!\'. lol.

November 29th, 2024 03:28

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Goldfinch60 said:

I got up this morning so all is well.

Andy

November 29th, 2024 02:56

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Demar Desu said:

I think therefore I am! But I like we’re here cause we’re here, but then apart of me wants to find out what is here part. Ah, absolute reality… maybe I should go to bed and compare the two in the morning. Great poem big dawg

November 29th, 2024 01:05

Angels
Thad Wilk said:

I always had an angel 😇
standing by my shoulder I thought . 🤔
Believe it or not;
after reading this poem,
maybe it\'s the devil I got? 👿
Thanks for sharing 😊🙏
I take the odd chance
quite a lot¿!

Best regards ✌️ Thad

November 28th, 2024 23:42

Angels
Cassie58 said:

Nothing ventured nothing gained. All women are angels and men are from the other place, that hot house. 🙂 Good job I’m joking eh Dave. There is a distinct lack of femininity on this site. Where’s the women. Where are they. 😇 What’s all this to do with a dead poet?

It’s like a boys club round these parts. 🙂


November 28th, 2024 11:16

Angels
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful write, Dave. 🌹👏 As for Pope, maybe he would have used his own quote here, “To err is human, to forgive is divine.” If believing in angels floats someone’s boat in a good way, go for it! If you’re swinging at me with St. Michael’s sword, bugger off! Lol! As for angels themselves, any one with a message for you is such a being. Lol! Need not be any more mythological than that. All of those musings aside, a truly thought provoking poem. And I loved the Alexander Pope reference. 🙏❤️

November 28th, 2024 08:58

Angels
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

November 28th, 2024 08:24

Angels
Neville said:



I aint gonna put all my eggs into one basket and plan for as long as I\'m able to keep an open and enquiring mind .. just in case .. either way .. 😎👍

November 28th, 2024 08:21

Angels
2781 said:

Everything is upside down..
When the lights came on it all went dark.

November 28th, 2024 06:27

Angels
arqios said:

So much lore, legend, and even cult following in some parts. But logically looking at this, the word ‘angelos’ before Anglicisation simply means messenger. So the postman, the app, yourself (whilst carrying a message) would qualify. Life\'s richness often lies in the risks we take rather than the safety we cling to. While it\'s easy to play it safe, true growth and profound experiences come from stepping out of our comfort zones. Embracing uncertainty can lead to discovering our truest selves. What that has to do with angels would be in the memo I have yet to receive. Perhaps this is it! Lol 😂

November 28th, 2024 05:23

Angels
orchidee said:

In one church someone said they saw a big angel in the corner of a room once. I didn\'t see it though. You can call me \'My little cherub\' but don\'t call me \'My little pony!\' lol. Branching off into the NS again.

November 28th, 2024 03:45

Angels
Goldfinch60 said:

I seem to have had angels in my life Dave and they have brought me so much wonder.

Andy

November 28th, 2024 01:51

Roll Up
Thad Wilk said:

👍👍
A great poem, warning ⚠️
and message penned!! 🤩
I got all my shots,
no problemo my friend!!! 😯
Thanks for sharing!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad

November 27th, 2024 21:36

Community - Go Find Yours.
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Wow! How dare someone break the taboo and question affordability and urbanization?? On top of that how dare someone likens the tower of pride to phalic symbol? But the vilest act was in \"choosing parents with care\" ... too many problems indeed 😇🤐😞
A great piece loved it 💯

November 27th, 2024 09:51

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem and
information and advice!! 💯👏
Great read indeed shot
from the hip!
I\'D compliment you more but
decided to,, ZIP my lip! 🤐🤩
Best regards ✌️ 🕊️. Thad

November 26th, 2024 19:56

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
Cassie58 said:

Ha ha Dave, now I don’t have to worry about that one, being a woman. Those acronyms can be APITB. I always have to look them up. Sometimes there are several possibilities. LOL. Never seen a poem on this subject matter before. You are certainly original when it comes to poetry. All the best.

November 26th, 2024 17:41

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
MendedFences27 said:

LMFAO, DD.

November 25th, 2024 17:02

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
sorenbarrett said:

Yes, Dave I knew that one. I guess that I’ve been told it too many times already a fun read.

November 25th, 2024 13:02

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
Neville said:



neva mind them bastards, wot about us legitimate mnemonics eh\' 🦘🐧👍

November 25th, 2024 08:31

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 25th, 2024 08:30

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
arqios said:

Acronyms just mess me up, I’ll have the letters fine but what they stand for would play hide and seek. Last month I got home from my shift to see my zip undone, must have been for the whole shift. Lucky I had a work apron as PPE

November 25th, 2024 06:22

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
orchidee said:

Sir Orchi NS uses acronyms all the time, to throw people off on to sidelines, in his Non Sequitur role.

November 25th, 2024 03:25

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
Goldfinch60 said:

I did Dave and it is pulled up safely.

Andy

November 25th, 2024 03:00

Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it?
Demar Desu said:

Dave = Daring avid verified e-poet

November 25th, 2024 00:46

Death By a Thousand……
Thad Wilk said:

Haaa, kinda funny
but scary in a way .😳
Glad you didn\'t get BIT
and lived to drink, another day!! 😜🍹
Thanks for sharing
much enjoyed!! 😊
Best regards o. Thad


November 24th, 2024 17:18

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