Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Rhyme Not Mine.
Dan Williams said:
OK, you win the cleverness prize this round. Bravo.
October 12th, 2024 23:40
Dan Williams said:
OK, you win the cleverness prize this round. Bravo.
October 12th, 2024 23:40
Rhyme Not Mine.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Dave. I hope you are feeling better.
Andy
October 12th, 2024 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun words Dave. I hope you are feeling better.
Andy
October 12th, 2024 01:59
Rhyme Not Mine.
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh Dave leave it to you to bring a smile to this old man\'s face. This is a jewel. Looks like there is a lotof digging to do.
October 11th, 2024 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
Ahh Dave leave it to you to bring a smile to this old man\'s face. This is a jewel. Looks like there is a lotof digging to do.
October 11th, 2024 07:59
Rhyme Not Mine.
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun! My, my, my but I can\'t help dearly loving this charming little beauty! Delightfully rendered with an excellent sense of humor and rollicking imagery until who could resist it, not to mention a subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 11th, 2024 07:55
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun! My, my, my but I can\'t help dearly loving this charming little beauty! Delightfully rendered with an excellent sense of humor and rollicking imagery until who could resist it, not to mention a subtle poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 11th, 2024 07:55
Oh Dear!
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy15\'s view:
Notice of absence from Teddy.15
I\'ve decided to go into semi-retirement for a while, I wish nothing but happy writing to all. I\'ll see you soon. 💙
October 10th, 2024 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Teddy15\'s view:
Notice of absence from Teddy.15
I\'ve decided to go into semi-retirement for a while, I wish nothing but happy writing to all. I\'ll see you soon. 💙
October 10th, 2024 17:33
Oh Dear!
Doggerel Dave said:
So the \'final word\' from me:
Let’s ignore the first half of T.15’s tirade above except to maybe look in your spare time at the way the term ‘love’ is used frequently on this site, but particularly by the complainant.
The issue in the ‘last note’ second half is worth a remark to the unbiased: The unvarying phrase I use when responding to poetry relating to war, but particularly those on the topic of the 9/11tragedy is “Innocent people die in war”. How could I ever suggest that was OK? What no ‘poet’ who has seen fit to respond negatively to that phrase has ever asked is ‘what war? If they had, then possibly a conversation might ensue…..
October 9th, 2024 17:45
Doggerel Dave said:
So the \'final word\' from me:
Let’s ignore the first half of T.15’s tirade above except to maybe look in your spare time at the way the term ‘love’ is used frequently on this site, but particularly by the complainant.
The issue in the ‘last note’ second half is worth a remark to the unbiased: The unvarying phrase I use when responding to poetry relating to war, but particularly those on the topic of the 9/11tragedy is “Innocent people die in war”. How could I ever suggest that was OK? What no ‘poet’ who has seen fit to respond negatively to that phrase has ever asked is ‘what war? If they had, then possibly a conversation might ensue…..
October 9th, 2024 17:45
Covid Visit
Neville said:
Blimey, I take it you survived .. the buggar is clearly on the rise again .. Keep pushing the fluids & scrub any infected bits with a stiff brush 😎👍
October 9th, 2024 07:35
Neville said:
Blimey, I take it you survived .. the buggar is clearly on the rise again .. Keep pushing the fluids & scrub any infected bits with a stiff brush 😎👍
October 9th, 2024 07:35
Oh Dear!
Neville said:
It really is a shame, but on a platform such as this with maybe thousands of folk queuing to get on board .. it\'s gonna happen every now and then, write .. I am a great believer in freedom of expression and know only too well that we can please a lot of folk some of the time, but not everyone, nor even most, all of the time .. it is also sad that sometimes, some folk inadvertently get the wrong end of the stick and go off on one, when a quick dubble check, or pm might resolve an issue before it develops and gets out of hand or too hot to handle .. I rarely read the comments of my reviewing predecessors, but I felt compelled to on this occasion .. and it is encouraging that so far, as far as I am concerned, only mature, sensible and rational contributions have been submitted .. and I kind of agree with all of em ..
P.S.
Having been a good friend of DA Dusk Arising, I reckon he wouldn\'t have been adverse to proposing a kiss n make up (strictly on the quiet tho) and I shall raise my glass to him tonight ..
P.P.S
Talking about old friends, if anyone would like my spare copy of \'Just a Poet, Just a Poem\' by the late great Kevin Browne please feel free to message me, I bought two in the hope his family might benefit .. I am happy to pay postage within the UK ..first come first served .. Neville
October 7th, 2024 03:21
Neville said:
It really is a shame, but on a platform such as this with maybe thousands of folk queuing to get on board .. it\'s gonna happen every now and then, write .. I am a great believer in freedom of expression and know only too well that we can please a lot of folk some of the time, but not everyone, nor even most, all of the time .. it is also sad that sometimes, some folk inadvertently get the wrong end of the stick and go off on one, when a quick dubble check, or pm might resolve an issue before it develops and gets out of hand or too hot to handle .. I rarely read the comments of my reviewing predecessors, but I felt compelled to on this occasion .. and it is encouraging that so far, as far as I am concerned, only mature, sensible and rational contributions have been submitted .. and I kind of agree with all of em ..
P.S.
Having been a good friend of DA Dusk Arising, I reckon he wouldn\'t have been adverse to proposing a kiss n make up (strictly on the quiet tho) and I shall raise my glass to him tonight ..
P.P.S
Talking about old friends, if anyone would like my spare copy of \'Just a Poet, Just a Poem\' by the late great Kevin Browne please feel free to message me, I bought two in the hope his family might benefit .. I am happy to pay postage within the UK ..first come first served .. Neville
October 7th, 2024 03:21
Oh Dear!
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'m still insufficiently awake, despite having enjoyed my Barry\'s cuppas by now. That aside, is this truly a poem per se? We thanks thee for airing thy complaints, and now, for another? You\'re not supposed to make me smirk and smile with such posts as this, yet alas, you\'ve got me now. Why are you men forever so amusing? Oh to die laughing! If only we could.
October 6th, 2024 08:47
Cheeky Missy said:
I\'m still insufficiently awake, despite having enjoyed my Barry\'s cuppas by now. That aside, is this truly a poem per se? We thanks thee for airing thy complaints, and now, for another? You\'re not supposed to make me smirk and smile with such posts as this, yet alas, you\'ve got me now. Why are you men forever so amusing? Oh to die laughing! If only we could.
October 6th, 2024 08:47
Oh Dear!
sorenbarrett said:
What do you do when you\'ve got two friends fighting?
October 6th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
What do you do when you\'ve got two friends fighting?
October 6th, 2024 05:44
Oh Dear!
jarcher54 said:
I feel a little like an eavesdropper here... I recall a similar tiff between a couple regulars on here a few years ago... I think one of the participants (the religious one) has quit posting, and the other (the nonbeliever) has passed on to whatever lies beyond this life. I try to stay out of it, but dang it DD, you\'ve always seemed a right civil poetaster, and I am totally confused. But whatever happens, keep entertaining me!
October 6th, 2024 02:12
jarcher54 said:
I feel a little like an eavesdropper here... I recall a similar tiff between a couple regulars on here a few years ago... I think one of the participants (the religious one) has quit posting, and the other (the nonbeliever) has passed on to whatever lies beyond this life. I try to stay out of it, but dang it DD, you\'ve always seemed a right civil poetaster, and I am totally confused. But whatever happens, keep entertaining me!
October 6th, 2024 02:12
Epitaph for a PC
Thad Wilk said:
Omg! 😱
You are not alone guy,!! 😔
It happens to everyone
by and by!! 😢
Now,
I GOT a backup laptop
In case one does fry!! 🤣🤣
Awesome read!! 👍🏅
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 2nd, 2024 17:31
Thad Wilk said:
Omg! 😱
You are not alone guy,!! 😔
It happens to everyone
by and by!! 😢
Now,
I GOT a backup laptop
In case one does fry!! 🤣🤣
Awesome read!! 👍🏅
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 2nd, 2024 17:31
Covid Visit
sorenbarrett said:
Dave this is the first poem I\'ve seen as notice of illness and well done too. Hope you return soon. Get well
October 2nd, 2024 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Dave this is the first poem I\'ve seen as notice of illness and well done too. Hope you return soon. Get well
October 2nd, 2024 04:36
Covid Visit
Goldfinch60 said:
Covid is a right pain in the proverbial Dave. Hope all is alright soon.
Andy
October 2nd, 2024 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Covid is a right pain in the proverbial Dave. Hope all is alright soon.
Andy
October 2nd, 2024 01:23
Fried Mouse.
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
Very entertaining
and humorous
I have to say!! 😳
Last two lines
just blew me away!!, , 👍⭐⭐
I always keep my
\'spare\' mouse
close by me everyday! 🐭
You\'re right! 👍
Never know, they could
break down any day..¿
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 30th, 2024 20:56
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
Very entertaining
and humorous
I have to say!! 😳
Last two lines
just blew me away!!, , 👍⭐⭐
I always keep my
\'spare\' mouse
close by me everyday! 🐭
You\'re right! 👍
Never know, they could
break down any day..¿
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 30th, 2024 20:56
Autumn it Is Not
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Dave. Love that last line. It\'s grey wet and miserable here. But in Manchester that\'s also the summer. :-)
September 30th, 2024 05:07
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Dave. Love that last line. It\'s grey wet and miserable here. But in Manchester that\'s also the summer. :-)
September 30th, 2024 05:07
Autumn it Is Not
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m wiith you Dave same hemisphere. Love the alliteration and am glad to see more of your poems.
September 30th, 2024 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m wiith you Dave same hemisphere. Love the alliteration and am glad to see more of your poems.
September 30th, 2024 05:04
Autumn it Is Not
Goldfinch60 said:
We we had to live with a very wet summer Dave.
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
We we had to live with a very wet summer Dave.
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:26
Autumn it Is Not
Neville said:
this is not a classic, is it sir ..
I am increasingly of the mind there is summat in this global warming .. innit
September 30th, 2024 02:20
Neville said:
this is not a classic, is it sir ..
I am increasingly of the mind there is summat in this global warming .. innit
September 30th, 2024 02:20
Autumn it Is Not
orchidee said:
Is your Autum like our Spring in the UK - with one of us (or both) being \'upside down\'?!
Sir Orchi NS says: Australia? That\'s just round the corner; 5 minutes on the No.7 bus from the UK. lol.
September 30th, 2024 02:00
orchidee said:
Is your Autum like our Spring in the UK - with one of us (or both) being \'upside down\'?!
Sir Orchi NS says: Australia? That\'s just round the corner; 5 minutes on the No.7 bus from the UK. lol.
September 30th, 2024 02:00
Just Asking
Thad Wilk said:
Hii Dave! 🐶🐕 👋
A grrrrr8 rant and brevity!! 👍
A hundred percent 💯
with you I agree!!! 😉
Great read my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 29th, 2024 23:22
Thad Wilk said:
Hii Dave! 🐶🐕 👋
A grrrrr8 rant and brevity!! 👍
A hundred percent 💯
with you I agree!!! 😉
Great read my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
September 29th, 2024 23:22
Modern Life
Thad Wilk said:
👍 👍
Awesome poem
emotions and
thoughts penned!! 🤔
Though acquiring a
new wife won\'t
help this situation
my friend!?¿¿ , 🤣
BEST REGARDS ✌️ 😁 Thad
September 29th, 2024 09:13
Thad Wilk said:
👍 👍
Awesome poem
emotions and
thoughts penned!! 🤔
Though acquiring a
new wife won\'t
help this situation
my friend!?¿¿ , 🤣
BEST REGARDS ✌️ 😁 Thad
September 29th, 2024 09:13
Modern Life
Neville said:
It does my head in too mate .. Indeed, I empathise .. there are few essentials in my life .. my mobile, my pc and my wife .. (I added wife because it made this whole rectangle seem more poetic) .. Only kiddin .. Neville
September 29th, 2024 01:42
Neville said:
It does my head in too mate .. Indeed, I empathise .. there are few essentials in my life .. my mobile, my pc and my wife .. (I added wife because it made this whole rectangle seem more poetic) .. Only kiddin .. Neville
September 29th, 2024 01:42
Modern Life
Dan Williams said:
The obsession with \"security\' only seems to make my life miserable. I am quite convinced than any bush league hacker can get to my information easier than I can. Good job.
September 28th, 2024 23:58
Dan Williams said:
The obsession with \"security\' only seems to make my life miserable. I am quite convinced than any bush league hacker can get to my information easier than I can. Good job.
September 28th, 2024 23:58
Modern Life
Cheeky Missy said:
At least your relic of bygone days still works nicely where mine kicked the bucket almost three months ago, leaving me stranded with only these handheld devils called cellphones. And that, in a day where some very necessary functions can still only be accomplished on a computer.
Lovely tribute to modern insanity with a teasing poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
September 28th, 2024 13:11
Cheeky Missy said:
At least your relic of bygone days still works nicely where mine kicked the bucket almost three months ago, leaving me stranded with only these handheld devils called cellphones. And that, in a day where some very necessary functions can still only be accomplished on a computer.
Lovely tribute to modern insanity with a teasing poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
September 28th, 2024 13:11
Modern Life
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dave. They can be frustrating.
September 28th, 2024 09:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Dave. They can be frustrating.
September 28th, 2024 09:39
Modern Life
sorenbarrett said:
This very problem friends of mine have had. If you don\'t own a smart phone your dead. As technology advances I have to retreat into my cave and survive off of poached meat cooked over a permitless fire. Good write Dave
September 28th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
This very problem friends of mine have had. If you don\'t own a smart phone your dead. As technology advances I have to retreat into my cave and survive off of poached meat cooked over a permitless fire. Good write Dave
September 28th, 2024 05:07
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