Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Art’s Value
sorenbarrett said:

Now here is a topic I have never seen in a poem, a true first. It takes an artist to fake an artist. I wonder if anyone out there is forging your poems? Good write Dave

January 8th, 2024 17:48

Harry
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting presentation, presented in a surprising manner.. It wasn\'t until close to the end that I figured that Harry may not be a person. I enjoyed this approach Dave

January 6th, 2024 20:52

Wisdom of old (1)
Neville said:



we all have a certain sapiential responsibility to look out for those who have not yet reached a certain point in their life .. but I am sure that not everyone will see it my way .. Neville

December 15th, 2023 14:43

Wisdom of old (1)
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic work. Cheers.

December 13th, 2023 21:21

Wisdom of old (1)
sorenbarrett said:

I didn’t think anyone retired anymore. I did but keep working so what does that mean? Loved the poem made me smile.

December 3rd, 2023 07:50

Wisdom of old (1)
Goldfinch60 said:

Being retired can bring such wonderful things to our lives Dave.

Andy

December 2nd, 2023 02:11

Wisdom of old (1)
Parisab said:

Well said and complete…
Retirement=no more foolish plans I am bound
One should be so lucky

December 1st, 2023 11:18

Wisdom of old (1)
orchidee said:

I was gonna be wise. As Goldfinch and I are millions of years old, I thought we would be OK, until I read \'Wisdom is not always found with the aged\'. Doh!

December 1st, 2023 08:19

Wisdom of old (1)
2781 said:

We can live on little.
Being content is more difficult.

December 1st, 2023 06:28

Fever
Syd said:

Nice write Dave.

I\'m glad you\'re on the mend.

- Syd

November 25th, 2023 05:42

Fever
sorenbarrett said:

So glad that there will be an encore. A scary story indeed but adressed with a bit of humor. Well done.

November 21st, 2023 12:32

Goldilocks and the….
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent.

November 20th, 2023 14:24

Fever
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

November 16th, 2023 09:16

Fever
arqios said:

So good to have you back and blessed with a word of your plight of late and of your recovery!

November 16th, 2023 03:36

Fever
2781 said:

I wondered how you were, good to hear you\'re still here!

November 16th, 2023 03:13

Fever
orchidee said:

Fido knew what it was, of course, as he knows 99% of everything! Best wishes.

November 16th, 2023 03:08

Fever
Goldfinch60 said:

I ma so glad you have recovered, you have been missed Dave. Please keep well.

Andy

November 16th, 2023 02:29

Fever
Neville said:


this is one o them that makes me feel more than just one thing at a time .. there is of course the sadness & appropriate amount of compassion and empathy that one may or may not expect in view of the fact we have not met in person but share a literary relationship .. and then conversely, there is a feeling of gladness that you are now back here at MPS and hopefully recuperating if not already fully convalesced .. Oh\' and furthermore, there is a genuine feeling of appreciation that your poetic offering today has more than adequately explained your most recent protracted and until now unexplained absence .. Oh\' and for what its worth, I can honestly say you have been missed and not only by me .. Neville


November 16th, 2023 01:31

Espionage
tallisman said:

Brilliant Dave…. Inspired some great comments! That’s gotta be art!

October 23rd, 2023 01:00

Try this for size:
sorenbarrett said:

Did she do something to Fido? My dog took a piece out of me when I was cutting his nails and cut too short with a pair of wire cutters.

September 27th, 2023 20:20

Life Changed Forever
sorenbarrett said:

Not sure what to say. It could change my life forever then I would have wished that I had said something different. Oh well throw caution to the wind, I\'ll give it a go and throw in my two bits. Loved it Dave.

September 24th, 2023 05:19

Manifesto or Look Beyond the Name.
sorenbarrett said:

I echo this Dave and feel myself a rebel against all conformity for conformity sake. I would be an anarchist but know it doesn\'t work. I guess I would never work out as a bee or ant.

September 22nd, 2023 06:32

Love (Poetry).
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Hope you find love and the hose! :)

September 21st, 2023 15:53

Three Palms
sorenbarrett said:

Can identify with this on Dave. What was a palm covered field between me and the beach is now a row of houses. Oh well there goes the neighborhood.

September 20th, 2023 11:25

Simple Equation….
NafisaSB said:

i agree with your views..

September 17th, 2023 02:24

My Domestication.
sorenbarrett said:

A great story in verse Dave that I can relate to. Keeping the kitchen clean very important. Vermin are not my favorite things to live with.

September 12th, 2023 19:23

Espionage
Goldfinch60 said:

If you read this Dave I will have to set my people on you, so don\'t repeat it. LOL

Andy

September 10th, 2023 01:59

Espionage
Bella Shepard said:

This is fun my friend! I\'m donning my trench coat and fedora, while the theme from Mission Impossible plays in the background. Oops, almost forgot the dark glasses. Very crafty of you, loved it!

September 9th, 2023 14:39

Espionage
Neville said:



evidently, there are no spies on you 🕶️😎🕶️

September 9th, 2023 09:25

Espionage
orchidee said:

Fido\'s very artistic! lol.

September 9th, 2023 09:07



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