Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Blackout – Subsequent Moments.
Goldfinch60 said:
I sincerely hope that all is well with you Dave.
Andy
June 24th, 2026 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I sincerely hope that all is well with you Dave.
Andy
June 24th, 2026 02:26
Blackout – Subsequent Moments.
orchidee said:
Yes, good wishes to you.
Nope, nothing much has changed - Sir Orchi still as NS as ever! lol.
June 24th, 2026 01:12
orchidee said:
Yes, good wishes to you.
Nope, nothing much has changed - Sir Orchi still as NS as ever! lol.
June 24th, 2026 01:12
Blackout – Subsequent Moments.
arqios said:
Glad to have you back. Hope there aren’t any debilitating after effects🕊️🤧
June 23rd, 2026 22:38
arqios said:
Glad to have you back. Hope there aren’t any debilitating after effects🕊️🤧
June 23rd, 2026 22:38
Blackout – Subsequent Moments.
sorenbarrett said:
Good to hear from you my friend but it seems that you survived the hospital. Don\'t worry china dolls break too easy.
June 23rd, 2026 20:36
sorenbarrett said:
Good to hear from you my friend but it seems that you survived the hospital. Don\'t worry china dolls break too easy.
June 23rd, 2026 20:36
Special Announcement
NafisaSB said:
no need to apologize on what was written straight from the heart in one of your candid [weaker ??]moments... goodwill always welcome
June 19th, 2026 07:19
NafisaSB said:
no need to apologize on what was written straight from the heart in one of your candid [weaker ??]moments... goodwill always welcome
June 19th, 2026 07:19
Post-It Note
NafisaSB said:
I agree with you - would rather use my own feelings and words than resort to AI - not a fan of it..
long time since we heard from you - hope all well
June 19th, 2026 07:17
NafisaSB said:
I agree with you - would rather use my own feelings and words than resort to AI - not a fan of it..
long time since we heard from you - hope all well
June 19th, 2026 07:17
Post-It Note
Syd said:
Hi Dave, AI writing is so easy to spot in my opinion. Morse code poetry I call it. So many of these dashes - but the longer ones. I believe in the American language they are used instead of commas but I could be wrong. Also, look for perfect meter and rhyme, all filler no substance. Human written verses tend to be clunky with an uneven syllable count. I use AI to create music for what I\'ve written but it\'s so easy to be labelled an arsonist if you play with fire. It\'s a tightrope.
I hope you\'re keeping well - Syd
May 27th, 2026 17:14
Syd said:
Hi Dave, AI writing is so easy to spot in my opinion. Morse code poetry I call it. So many of these dashes - but the longer ones. I believe in the American language they are used instead of commas but I could be wrong. Also, look for perfect meter and rhyme, all filler no substance. Human written verses tend to be clunky with an uneven syllable count. I use AI to create music for what I\'ve written but it\'s so easy to be labelled an arsonist if you play with fire. It\'s a tightrope.
I hope you\'re keeping well - Syd
May 27th, 2026 17:14
Amendment Twenty Five
Neville said:
Lousy poetry is in the eye of the beholder .. however, I quite understand where you are coming from my Antipodean friend .. nuff said, I hear he\'s shitting himself since that 25th can\'t be that far off 🍊💩👍
May 21st, 2026 02:30
Neville said:
Lousy poetry is in the eye of the beholder .. however, I quite understand where you are coming from my Antipodean friend .. nuff said, I hear he\'s shitting himself since that 25th can\'t be that far off 🍊💩👍
May 21st, 2026 02:30
Post-It Note
NafisaSB said:
agree with you on this - i do not subscribe to AI and if my verse is not the best - it is at least straight from my mind and heart to my poems...not AI generated thankfully
wishing you more power to your pen and thoughts ...take care
May 20th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
agree with you on this - i do not subscribe to AI and if my verse is not the best - it is at least straight from my mind and heart to my poems...not AI generated thankfully
wishing you more power to your pen and thoughts ...take care
May 20th, 2026 00:54
Post-It Note
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I spy AI everywhere too but i can never be 100% sure someone used it. I never use AI as my poems are already long written long before AI was invented.
Your poem is a fantastic jab at AI. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:59
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I spy AI everywhere too but i can never be 100% sure someone used it. I never use AI as my poems are already long written long before AI was invented.
Your poem is a fantastic jab at AI. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
May 19th, 2026 12:59
Post-It Note
Thomas W Case said:
A sharp little mirror this one—turned just enough to make the reader question where meaning actually sits.
There’s grit in the humour, too: like intelligence and irony sharing the same cigarette under a streetlight.
May 19th, 2026 09:10
Thomas W Case said:
A sharp little mirror this one—turned just enough to make the reader question where meaning actually sits.
There’s grit in the humour, too: like intelligence and irony sharing the same cigarette under a streetlight.
May 19th, 2026 09:10
Post-It Note
Neville said:
I truly believe there is a place for everything .. except for that fake tanned B over tother side of the Pond and AI in poetry .. or any of the arts for that matter .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 02:58
Neville said:
I truly believe there is a place for everything .. except for that fake tanned B over tother side of the Pond and AI in poetry .. or any of the arts for that matter .. Neville
May 16th, 2026 02:58
Post-It Note
Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is that : Are you a Human\'? or \'How many Cars in this Grid\'?
May 13th, 2026 20:39
Kevin Hulme said:
What gets me is that : Are you a Human\'? or \'How many Cars in this Grid\'?
May 13th, 2026 20:39
Post-It Note
sorenbarrett said:
Call it fraud or plagiarism what ever you like it is a deception and a lie I would have to side with you on this one Dave
May 13th, 2026 16:15
sorenbarrett said:
Call it fraud or plagiarism what ever you like it is a deception and a lie I would have to side with you on this one Dave
May 13th, 2026 16:15
Post-It Note
orchidee said:
Notice my witticism - I wrote a post-it note, then posted it - so I forgot what I wrote on it. Doh!
May 13th, 2026 02:41
orchidee said:
Notice my witticism - I wrote a post-it note, then posted it - so I forgot what I wrote on it. Doh!
May 13th, 2026 02:41
Post-It Note
orchidee said:
Aye, ai, Captain! But yes, why you still talking to Goldfinch and me? We\'re of non-human intelligence! Since when was Sir Orchi NS human?
Days were when AI only meant summat artificial to do with cows and bulls.
Oh also, Ai is a Biblical town of old - it got destroyed. Doh!
May 13th, 2026 02:40
orchidee said:
Aye, ai, Captain! But yes, why you still talking to Goldfinch and me? We\'re of non-human intelligence! Since when was Sir Orchi NS human?
Days were when AI only meant summat artificial to do with cows and bulls.
Oh also, Ai is a Biblical town of old - it got destroyed. Doh!
May 13th, 2026 02:40
Not To Worry…
Paul Bell said:
I always knew at some point in my life I would be hitting the supermarket wearing a fallout suit guarded by a robot.
Man is a self destructing bastard, so we were always going to anilate each other.
I\'m actualy giving the guy with the sign, \'\'The world is nigh\'\' a bit more respect now.
May 12th, 2026 14:07
Paul Bell said:
I always knew at some point in my life I would be hitting the supermarket wearing a fallout suit guarded by a robot.
Man is a self destructing bastard, so we were always going to anilate each other.
I\'m actualy giving the guy with the sign, \'\'The world is nigh\'\' a bit more respect now.
May 12th, 2026 14:07
Not To Worry…
Thomas W Case said:
Dave, this lands well. It feels like a quiet warning wrapped in rhythm—cool, controlled, and edged with unease.
There’s a sharp intelligence in it, like the world tipping between ancient catastrophe and something we’re still learning we can cause ourselves.
May 12th, 2026 08:38
Thomas W Case said:
Dave, this lands well. It feels like a quiet warning wrapped in rhythm—cool, controlled, and edged with unease.
There’s a sharp intelligence in it, like the world tipping between ancient catastrophe and something we’re still learning we can cause ourselves.
May 12th, 2026 08:38
Not To Worry…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this has bite, my friend. The turn from external catastrophe to internal self-destruction lands hard…and uncomfortably so. You know I am going to love that! 🤣 Sharp work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, this has bite, my friend. The turn from external catastrophe to internal self-destruction lands hard…and uncomfortably so. You know I am going to love that! 🤣 Sharp work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 11th, 2026 19:19
Not To Worry…
orchidee said:
I thought it\'s gonna be about the 6th extinction. We\'ve had 5 already, or summat like that. I got bored in an over-long read about it. Sir Orchi NS is never extinct - he\'s a dinosaur - also used to refer to people who won\'t use e-mail. lol.
May 11th, 2026 02:22
orchidee said:
I thought it\'s gonna be about the 6th extinction. We\'ve had 5 already, or summat like that. I got bored in an over-long read about it. Sir Orchi NS is never extinct - he\'s a dinosaur - also used to refer to people who won\'t use e-mail. lol.
May 11th, 2026 02:22
Not To Worry…
Neville said:
Love the title mate .. but I sincerely fear it\'s too late for that .. stable geniuses & smart bums have seen to that .. Neville
May 11th, 2026 02:11
Neville said:
Love the title mate .. but I sincerely fear it\'s too late for that .. stable geniuses & smart bums have seen to that .. Neville
May 11th, 2026 02:11
Not To Worry…
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dave but I sincerely hope it does not happen.
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Dave but I sincerely hope it does not happen.
Andy
May 11th, 2026 01:18
Not To Worry…
arqios said:
Our nature is the one to beat. Had we considered that more closely we would last a bit longer, perhaps 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 22:16
arqios said:
Our nature is the one to beat. Had we considered that more closely we would last a bit longer, perhaps 🕊️🙏
May 10th, 2026 22:16
Not To Worry…
sorenbarrett said:
So true Dave and the dinosaurs had a little help from outside forces we seem to be able to do it all on our own. Call it karma, justice or what ever you like.
May 10th, 2026 21:15
sorenbarrett said:
So true Dave and the dinosaurs had a little help from outside forces we seem to be able to do it all on our own. Call it karma, justice or what ever you like.
May 10th, 2026 21:15
Happy End.
Neville said:
I was quite taken aback with my thoughts of you stuck out in the outback .. indeed, you made me smile & I quite like it .. No shit .. Neville 😎👍
May 10th, 2026 02:25
Neville said:
I was quite taken aback with my thoughts of you stuck out in the outback .. indeed, you made me smile & I quite like it .. No shit .. Neville 😎👍
May 10th, 2026 02:25
Happy End.
Goldfinch60 said:
I always sit in comfort until satisfaction occurs Dave. LOL
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
I always sit in comfort until satisfaction occurs Dave. LOL
Andy
May 10th, 2026 01:26
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