Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Message For Orchidee
Neville said:
am I to assume I may have missed something since I have been away .. tut tut I can\'t leave you alone for three weeks canine .. Neville
December 12th, 2025 09:24
Neville said:
am I to assume I may have missed something since I have been away .. tut tut I can\'t leave you alone for three weeks canine .. Neville
December 12th, 2025 09:24
I Did.....!
NafisaSB said:
verse 1 - seems a tad bit that non conformity is your style of facing the world heads on -
agree with the second verse
the third - well says it as it is
Let the ego run riot as long as its not hurting anyone - you can call it self confidence....
December 12th, 2025 01:27
NafisaSB said:
verse 1 - seems a tad bit that non conformity is your style of facing the world heads on -
agree with the second verse
the third - well says it as it is
Let the ego run riot as long as its not hurting anyone - you can call it self confidence....
December 12th, 2025 01:27
Message For Orchidee
orchidee said:
Cooeee! I\'m not going nowhere either. Which means I\'m going somewhere. I won\'t go. I\'ll hang around like a .........bad smell?! lol.
They might take me away though, men in white coats. I\'ve seen too much of \'Neighbours\'. lol.
December 11th, 2025 06:36
orchidee said:
Cooeee! I\'m not going nowhere either. Which means I\'m going somewhere. I won\'t go. I\'ll hang around like a .........bad smell?! lol.
They might take me away though, men in white coats. I\'ve seen too much of \'Neighbours\'. lol.
December 11th, 2025 06:36
Message For Orchidee
NinjaGirl said:
Clever allusion, did you watch the show much? Or is there another soap opera you\'re referencing...
December 10th, 2025 21:28
NinjaGirl said:
Clever allusion, did you watch the show much? Or is there another soap opera you\'re referencing...
December 10th, 2025 21:28
Message For Orchidee
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait, is this a goodbye message, in the form of a \"take care of KP better\" letter to Orchi? I hope not...I do enjoy our interactions, my friend.
December 10th, 2025 19:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wait, is this a goodbye message, in the form of a \"take care of KP better\" letter to Orchi? I hope not...I do enjoy our interactions, my friend.
December 10th, 2025 19:15
Message For Orchidee
sorenbarrett said:
Oh no! The show must go on. At least that is the line. KP could use a little care though. Way to go Dave treat the ladies right.
December 10th, 2025 17:27
sorenbarrett said:
Oh no! The show must go on. At least that is the line. KP could use a little care though. Way to go Dave treat the ladies right.
December 10th, 2025 17:27
I Did.....!
Paul Bell said:
Bet you Frank\'s bank balance did it his way.
I myself will not be using it at my own flushing down the pan ceremony, mainly because it\'s on speed dial at all funerals now.
Got a feeling they\'ll be checking my coffin just to make sure I\'m in it.
December 10th, 2025 13:11
Paul Bell said:
Bet you Frank\'s bank balance did it his way.
I myself will not be using it at my own flushing down the pan ceremony, mainly because it\'s on speed dial at all funerals now.
Got a feeling they\'ll be checking my coffin just to make sure I\'m in it.
December 10th, 2025 13:11
I Did.....!
Friendship said:
Well said. The poem addresses themes of individuality, conformity, cooperation, and the irony of celebrating personal freedom while also acknowledging the inevitability of social connections and communal experiences, particularly in the context of life\'s final moments, such as funerals.
December 10th, 2025 08:52
Friendship said:
Well said. The poem addresses themes of individuality, conformity, cooperation, and the irony of celebrating personal freedom while also acknowledging the inevitability of social connections and communal experiences, particularly in the context of life\'s final moments, such as funerals.
December 10th, 2025 08:52
I Did.....!
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, depending on one\'s age and attainments, were one a singer, that\'d be the future, should one outlive his friends. But I\'m too sorely lacking sleep to be useful. Prettily rendered with a hint of imagery and a curious poignancy.
December 9th, 2025 11:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, depending on one\'s age and attainments, were one a singer, that\'d be the future, should one outlive his friends. But I\'m too sorely lacking sleep to be useful. Prettily rendered with a hint of imagery and a curious poignancy.
December 9th, 2025 11:35
I Did.....!
orchidee said:
Ohh, I hate that song for funerals - so selfish, arrogant, etc. Not that I\'ve been to a funeral where it\'s been sung thankfully. Sir Orchi NS - VC, OBE, MBE, FRS, BBC, ITV signing off. Got that last bit from a Carry On film.
December 9th, 2025 03:53
orchidee said:
Ohh, I hate that song for funerals - so selfish, arrogant, etc. Not that I\'ve been to a funeral where it\'s been sung thankfully. Sir Orchi NS - VC, OBE, MBE, FRS, BBC, ITV signing off. Got that last bit from a Carry On film.
December 9th, 2025 03:53
I Did.....!
arqios said:
Boomer anthem much… along with self-made man, bootstrap pulling and I’m still standing 😜🙏🏻🕊️
December 9th, 2025 00:34
arqios said:
Boomer anthem much… along with self-made man, bootstrap pulling and I’m still standing 😜🙏🏻🕊️
December 9th, 2025 00:34
I Did.....!
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, witty as always…you take a classic anthem of self-will and tilt it just enough to show the irony underneath. Short, sharp, and spot on. Loved i! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, witty as always…you take a classic anthem of self-will and tilt it just enough to show the irony underneath. Short, sharp, and spot on. Loved i! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
December 8th, 2025 21:16
I Did.....!
sorenbarrett said:
Well that sounds about right for the recipe with a dash of sarcasm to give it flavor. Good one Dave.
December 8th, 2025 20:31
sorenbarrett said:
Well that sounds about right for the recipe with a dash of sarcasm to give it flavor. Good one Dave.
December 8th, 2025 20:31
A Nature Poem…
Kevin Hulme said:
Tree\'s a bit bare here now .
A good Write.
November 28th, 2025 20:32
Kevin Hulme said:
Tree\'s a bit bare here now .
A good Write.
November 28th, 2025 20:32
Housing Crisis
Aman 12 said:
mechanics of power and policies..help for poor is always a facade
November 28th, 2025 06:51
Aman 12 said:
mechanics of power and policies..help for poor is always a facade
November 28th, 2025 06:51
A Nature Poem…
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fabulous poem with fine nature imagery wow! Kudos!!
November 26th, 2025 01:04
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A fabulous poem with fine nature imagery wow! Kudos!!
November 26th, 2025 01:04
The Games Some People Play…
Megan Blaney said:
Uh oh! I love video games. But I do more than just play.
November 20th, 2025 18:33
Megan Blaney said:
Uh oh! I love video games. But I do more than just play.
November 20th, 2025 18:33
O Aspiring Poet - Time for a Redux
Megan Blaney said:
I will try not to let this be about me!
November 20th, 2025 18:32
Megan Blaney said:
I will try not to let this be about me!
November 20th, 2025 18:32
A Nature Poem…
Thomas W Case said:
I knew you were human. Lol. Great work Dave. Beautiful and real. You nailed it.
November 17th, 2025 09:48
Thomas W Case said:
I knew you were human. Lol. Great work Dave. Beautiful and real. You nailed it.
November 17th, 2025 09:48
A Nature Poem…
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A contradiction. While you would like to leave nature poetry to others in future, you show mastery in it! A fave.
November 15th, 2025 02:36
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A contradiction. While you would like to leave nature poetry to others in future, you show mastery in it! A fave.
November 15th, 2025 02:36
A Nature Poem…
NafisaSB said:
I can visualize the lovely scene and wish I could see it personally- you seem to be lucky to be staying there so though no need to write anymore about it if you so wish , do enjoy the beauty while it lasts.
November 10th, 2025 12:10
NafisaSB said:
I can visualize the lovely scene and wish I could see it personally- you seem to be lucky to be staying there so though no need to write anymore about it if you so wish , do enjoy the beauty while it lasts.
November 10th, 2025 12:10
A Nature Poem…
Paul Bell said:
You were going through a purple patch there, and the picture was great.
Good to see you snapped out of it though. lol
November 10th, 2025 06:19
Paul Bell said:
You were going through a purple patch there, and the picture was great.
Good to see you snapped out of it though. lol
November 10th, 2025 06:19
A Nature Poem…
Neville said:
Your versatility becomes you you old dog .. who say\'s new tricks can\'t be learnt .. 😎👍
November 10th, 2025 04:42
Neville said:
Your versatility becomes you you old dog .. who say\'s new tricks can\'t be learnt .. 😎👍
November 10th, 2025 04:42
A Nature Poem…
orchidee said:
Are ya a dog barking there? Not seen a lot of jacarandas around \'ere in UK. And how\'s that Spring going there?
November 10th, 2025 03:04
orchidee said:
Are ya a dog barking there? Not seen a lot of jacarandas around \'ere in UK. And how\'s that Spring going there?
November 10th, 2025 03:04
A Nature Poem…
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, you turned serenity into satire in four short stanzas. Beauty, humor, and bite...no one mixes them quite like you, my friend and I love that! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2025 22:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dave, you turned serenity into satire in four short stanzas. Beauty, humor, and bite...no one mixes them quite like you, my friend and I love that! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 9th, 2025 22:54
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