Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Modern Life
Neville said:


It does my head in too mate .. Indeed, I empathise .. there are few essentials in my life .. my mobile, my pc and my wife .. (I added wife because it made this whole rectangle seem more poetic) .. Only kiddin .. Neville

September 29th, 2024 01:42

Modern Life
Dan Williams said:

The obsession with \"security\' only seems to make my life miserable. I am quite convinced than any bush league hacker can get to my information easier than I can. Good job.

September 28th, 2024 23:58

Modern Life
Cheeky Missy said:

At least your relic of bygone days still works nicely where mine kicked the bucket almost three months ago, leaving me stranded with only these handheld devils called cellphones. And that, in a day where some very necessary functions can still only be accomplished on a computer.
Lovely tribute to modern insanity with a teasing poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.

September 28th, 2024 13:11

Modern Life
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Dave. They can be frustrating.

September 28th, 2024 09:39

Modern Life
sorenbarrett said:

This very problem friends of mine have had. If you don\'t own a smart phone your dead. As technology advances I have to retreat into my cave and survive off of poached meat cooked over a permitless fire. Good write Dave

September 28th, 2024 05:07

Modern Life
Goldfinch60 said:

Modern life can be so unknown now due to technology, I prefer to deal with real people face to face.

Andy

September 28th, 2024 01:30

Muse alertโ€ฆ.. Sorry โ€“ My Mistake
Thad Wilk said:

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Two thumbs up!!
Great brevity!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ
Your meds ๐Ÿ’Š
seem to be working
most splendidly!!
Have a grrrrr8 weekend!!
Best regards Dave!! ๐Ÿ˜„ โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 27th, 2024 20:20

Chewing Gum Doggerel
Thad Wilk said:

๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Awesome poem! ๐Ÿ˜€
Great fun read indeed!
Love that song, ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ๐ŸŽถ
My gum Neva loses its
flavor, even after I take
it off the bedpost overnight! ๐Ÿคฃ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 25th, 2024 21:16

Oh Just Get On With It.
Thad Wilk said:

๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Two thumbs up!
A great haiku!! ๐Ÿ˜€
Wonderfully crafted
much enjoyed thank you! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 24th, 2024 19:44

A Heavy Load
Thad Wilk said:

๐Ÿ‘
I hope those dang cows ๐Ÿ„๐Ÿฎ
enjoyed that rock concert too?ยฟ ๐ŸŽต ๐ŸŽถ ๐ŸŽถ
Y\'all have a great day!!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 23rd, 2024 21:49

Rampant Vegetation.
Thad Wilk said:

I agree with Neville
he\'s pretty slick!! ๐Ÿ˜€
Napalm should
surely do the trick!! ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿ™ƒ๐ŸŒฟ๐Ÿƒ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ ๐Ÿ•๐Ÿถ Thad

September 22nd, 2024 21:07

The Earwormโ€ฆ..
Thad Wilk said:

Yup nothing you
can do. ๐Ÿค
Give me Jazz ๐ŸŽต๐ŸŽถ
over politician\'s and
a large mug of tea too!โ˜•๐Ÿ˜
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 20th, 2024 21:17

To Tyro Poets in Need of Advice:
Thad Wilk said:

Awesome poem
nice advice indeed!! ๐Ÿ‘
That\'s why I always
come to your page
for A great read!!, ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿถ
Grrrr8 share Dave!!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad


September 20th, 2024 14:17

All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
Dan Williams said:

Given the sorry state of the First Amendment I don\'t think free speech arguments can be repeated often enough. Keep at it.

September 19th, 2024 00:58

All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
Thad Wilk said:

Hi ya Dave!! ๐Ÿ‘‹ ๐Ÿถ
Great read! ๐Ÿ‘
Tomorrow I\'m gonna
write a poem full of
metaphor,, ๐Ÿ˜€
so I hope you
don\'t \"prune\" me ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ญ
It\'s still summer ๐ŸŒž here
it\'s not fall yet? ๐Ÿ‚ ๐Ÿ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 18th, 2024 22:39

All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
Thomas W Case said:

I\'m glad I made the cut. Excellent work, Dave.

September 18th, 2024 20:45

All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
Cassie58 said:

Please donโ€™t prune me.( well if you must a couple of inches off the hips wouldnโ€™t be missed) If I upset anyone inadvertently I would want to know about it Dave. Am I in the dawg house?

September 18th, 2024 12:10

All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
Neville said:

I would Neva block or besmirch anyone lightly .. If I felt it warranted such an extreme measure I would make one helluva rumpus .. (Note to self go check and see if you\'ve ever used the word rumpus in a review note before) .. Now then, where woz I .. Oh\' yes, I see no problem blocking or time-outing someone if I considered it appropriate .. It can hurt I know full well, particularly if the one on the receiving end is not sure why .. That has happened to me a few times and therefore, maybe a gentle nudge, explanation or warning shot across the bows is worth considering ..

When I am ever, or eventually pruned I will try to man up and hope I get over it .. All hail .. Neville

September 18th, 2024 09:52

All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
sorenbarrett said:

Cut me off eh? And after all these years. Its okay Dave as long as you don\'t block me. Fun read my friend

September 18th, 2024 04:49

All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
orchidee said:

Sir Orchi NS can become a bore at times. Would pruning hurt him?! heehee.
I don\'t like to press the panic buttons of \'block\' or \'ignore\' either.

September 18th, 2024 02:30

All Hail to the Restโ€ฆ.
Goldfinch60 said:

I hope I don\'t get pruned Dave.

Andy

September 18th, 2024 02:04

My System
Thad Wilk said:

Hi Dave!! ๐Ÿถ
Great poem and system
you came up with here! ๐Ÿ˜
You\'re right on target ๐ŸŽฏ
once again l fear!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ YES!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ ๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ Thad

September 17th, 2024 09:39

Screw Top.
Doggerel Dave said:

But do they know when to laugh and to laugh appropriately without name calling? I don\'t particularly wish this to degenerate into a feud, so let\'s cease this now.๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ ?

September 17th, 2024 02:28

Screw Top.
Teddy.15 said:

The title above tells you the story, if this is the case why did you bother to write the rest? LoL ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ
Keep calm and Carry on dearest David, I\'m only screwing with you. ๐Ÿ‡ฎ๐Ÿ‡น๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐Ÿ‡ฎ๐Ÿ‡น๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐Ÿ‡ฎ๐Ÿ‡น๐Ÿด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿค—

September 16th, 2024 11:06

Patriotism
Thad Wilk said:

A deep, evocative
and thought
provoking write! ๐Ÿค”
I\'ll have to
sleep ๐Ÿ˜ด on this
one tonight! ๐ŸŒ—
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

September 15th, 2024 19:12

Patriotism
Neville said:


and would probably result in time out .. or worse .. okay let\'s say it was hermit crab .. neither of your folks were tho were they .. Got\'cha .. N

September 14th, 2024 08:41

Patriotism
Goldfinch60 said:

You have found your own way in life Dave and that is all life needs.

Andy

September 14th, 2024 01:16

Patriotism
Dan Williams said:

Heavy. Makes one wonder what does make a patriot? Nice work.

September 14th, 2024 00:26

Patriotism
MendedFences27 said:

OK, Dave, no fealty to anything? I agree that patriotism should only be used in terms of survival, but one can still love one\'s country. It\'s OK to enjoy the freedom one has. Stirring the pot again, hey? - Phil A.

September 13th, 2024 10:05

Patriotism
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

September 13th, 2024 09:52



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