Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
The Dog Next Door (plus bonus)
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t know if these critters are still around but it seems that we coexist with many creatures. Hope his yaping has calmed by now and hope that the mouse has not enlarged his family.
May 1st, 2023 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t know if these critters are still around but it seems that we coexist with many creatures. Hope his yaping has calmed by now and hope that the mouse has not enlarged his family.
May 1st, 2023 09:55
A Wedding.
Goldfinch60 said:
There is nothing any of us can do to prevent these politicians doing things just to please themselves and blow the public who voted for them.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
There is nothing any of us can do to prevent these politicians doing things just to please themselves and blow the public who voted for them.
Andy
April 30th, 2023 01:51
A Wedding.
Neville said:
Politicians kill more people per year than than drugs, alcohol, malaria and great white sharks .. They also tell more lies than most other so called professionals too ..
April 29th, 2023 14:31
Neville said:
Politicians kill more people per year than than drugs, alcohol, malaria and great white sharks .. They also tell more lies than most other so called professionals too ..
April 29th, 2023 14:31
A Wedding.
sorenbarrett said:
Politics, politics, money, votes, power, control, call it what you will, it is what makes the world go round. Just smile for the photo.
April 29th, 2023 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Politics, politics, money, votes, power, control, call it what you will, it is what makes the world go round. Just smile for the photo.
April 29th, 2023 06:44
It\'s over then?
sorenbarrett said:
Dave I found this ingenious and novel to present a background for the poem in dialogue. Very nicely done.
April 28th, 2023 08:49
sorenbarrett said:
Dave I found this ingenious and novel to present a background for the poem in dialogue. Very nicely done.
April 28th, 2023 08:49
Call it How You Like…..
Neville said:
I not only see where you are coming from .. I can feel it too sir Dog :)
April 27th, 2023 01:18
Neville said:
I not only see where you are coming from .. I can feel it too sir Dog :)
April 27th, 2023 01:18
Call it How You Like…..
tommytoons said:
I liked it, but leadership and commitment rarely cross paths.
April 25th, 2023 21:09
tommytoons said:
I liked it, but leadership and commitment rarely cross paths.
April 25th, 2023 21:09
Suburban Solidarity
sorenbarrett said:
There are always neighbors like this. In Salt Lake City, where my sister lives, the council has suggested that all people now do away with lawns and trees to save water since they need more revenue from the people they want to attract for more taxes. I can\'t imagine yards with green painted cement.
April 25th, 2023 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
There are always neighbors like this. In Salt Lake City, where my sister lives, the council has suggested that all people now do away with lawns and trees to save water since they need more revenue from the people they want to attract for more taxes. I can\'t imagine yards with green painted cement.
April 25th, 2023 07:53
My System
MendedFences27 said:
Well, at last the truth is known. I have to filter through the garbage to find a morsel of intellect, sometimes, now more than often. Thank you for bringing this forward. It remains that everyone is welcome here. And not everyone is an accomplished poet. Some are here to learn basics, others to hone their skills and some, apparently, to survive. I use your system and find those without any info about themselves usually write in a very immature way, not all, but most. I suspect they are just youngsters exploring the world of poetry. Others lay out a very dark profile and write like it\'s the end of the world. (Maybe it is,) Through it all I still find enough good stuff to warrant my time. Some sights have age limits, but I fear those for I may lose on the high end. Oh well I\'m rattling on. Glad you posted this. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2023 16:55
MendedFences27 said:
Well, at last the truth is known. I have to filter through the garbage to find a morsel of intellect, sometimes, now more than often. Thank you for bringing this forward. It remains that everyone is welcome here. And not everyone is an accomplished poet. Some are here to learn basics, others to hone their skills and some, apparently, to survive. I use your system and find those without any info about themselves usually write in a very immature way, not all, but most. I suspect they are just youngsters exploring the world of poetry. Others lay out a very dark profile and write like it\'s the end of the world. (Maybe it is,) Through it all I still find enough good stuff to warrant my time. Some sights have age limits, but I fear those for I may lose on the high end. Oh well I\'m rattling on. Glad you posted this. - Phil A.
April 24th, 2023 16:55
Great Expectations
sorenbarrett said:
Truth in advertising. Buyer beware is the moto. This one made me smile and was well written in that my lack of trust in advertising led me to know something was coming but not sure what, I had to wait until the last line to get the full effect. Thanks for the fun.
April 22nd, 2023 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
Truth in advertising. Buyer beware is the moto. This one made me smile and was well written in that my lack of trust in advertising led me to know something was coming but not sure what, I had to wait until the last line to get the full effect. Thanks for the fun.
April 22nd, 2023 07:19
Finale
sorenbarrett said:
I have also pondered on all these possibilities and am not religious but would say spiritual, not that I believe in spirits as such. I have been pushed into the area of panphysicism and Spinosa\'s God. I loved the poem and its dilema.
April 19th, 2023 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
I have also pondered on all these possibilities and am not religious but would say spiritual, not that I believe in spirits as such. I have been pushed into the area of panphysicism and Spinosa\'s God. I loved the poem and its dilema.
April 19th, 2023 12:08
Call it How You Like…..
MendedFences27 said:
Corrupt or \"do-nothing\" leaders keep getting elected by the people. It is time for the people to wake up and insist on action and truth. _ Phil A.
April 17th, 2023 15:43
MendedFences27 said:
Corrupt or \"do-nothing\" leaders keep getting elected by the people. It is time for the people to wake up and insist on action and truth. _ Phil A.
April 17th, 2023 15:43
My System
Bella Shepard said:
Besides your poetry, your forthrightness is one of the things that I love most. You are a provocatuer in the very best sense of the word, and when I see your moniker attached to verse I know I\'m in for something unique and stimulating.
April 17th, 2023 08:40
Bella Shepard said:
Besides your poetry, your forthrightness is one of the things that I love most. You are a provocatuer in the very best sense of the word, and when I see your moniker attached to verse I know I\'m in for something unique and stimulating.
April 17th, 2023 08:40
Nature - got to be a winner!?
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor Dave. It always seems that I\'m stepping in it. It\'s the clean up that gets me.
April 10th, 2023 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor Dave. It always seems that I\'m stepping in it. It\'s the clean up that gets me.
April 10th, 2023 12:29
Call it How You Like…..
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, you say it so well! United we stand, but it\'s the uniting part we seem to have the most trouble with. We who vote should have the power, and that power comes when we take the responsibility to be informed and to demand accountability. Will ever the twain meet? Great Write dear friend!
April 8th, 2023 12:25
Bella Shepard said:
Dear friend, you say it so well! United we stand, but it\'s the uniting part we seem to have the most trouble with. We who vote should have the power, and that power comes when we take the responsibility to be informed and to demand accountability. Will ever the twain meet? Great Write dear friend!
April 8th, 2023 12:25
The Kimono (Madam Butterfly not here).
Lorna said:
I\'m not sure if it was supposed to but the ending made me laugh out loud.... thanks for that!
April 3rd, 2023 17:21
Lorna said:
I\'m not sure if it was supposed to but the ending made me laugh out loud.... thanks for that!
April 3rd, 2023 17:21
Call it How You Like…..
Lorna said:
I\'m ever hopeful...... Biden is at least trying to be FDR....... cheer up Down Under.... don\'t let the turkeys get you down.
April 3rd, 2023 17:19
Lorna said:
I\'m ever hopeful...... Biden is at least trying to be FDR....... cheer up Down Under.... don\'t let the turkeys get you down.
April 3rd, 2023 17:19
Call it How You Like…..
sorenbarrett said:
Until the system of polotics changes this will always be true. Polititions are elected by pleasing the greatest number of constituents so no action is often safer than any action. I\'ve read Plato, Marx, Jefferson and many others, none of them have the answer. Enjoyed the read.
April 3rd, 2023 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
Until the system of polotics changes this will always be true. Polititions are elected by pleasing the greatest number of constituents so no action is often safer than any action. I\'ve read Plato, Marx, Jefferson and many others, none of them have the answer. Enjoyed the read.
April 3rd, 2023 06:34
Call it How You Like…..
Poetic Dan said:
Until the love for power becomes the power of love we will be stuck in the cycle of enough is enough....
Good artists borrow, great artists still lol
Keep up the write my friend
April 1st, 2023 11:19
Poetic Dan said:
Until the love for power becomes the power of love we will be stuck in the cycle of enough is enough....
Good artists borrow, great artists still lol
Keep up the write my friend
April 1st, 2023 11:19
Call it How You Like…..
Neville said:
it is indeed, a most sorry state of affairs sir dog ..
April 1st, 2023 04:49
Neville said:
it is indeed, a most sorry state of affairs sir dog ..
April 1st, 2023 04:49
A Relationship
tallisman said:
The only difference between a cat and the devil is that you can sell your soul to the devil. The cat just takes it and batts it into submission…
April 1st, 2023 03:17
tallisman said:
The only difference between a cat and the devil is that you can sell your soul to the devil. The cat just takes it and batts it into submission…
April 1st, 2023 03:17
Call it How You Like…..
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dave, the leaders of our countries are only in it to get what they want and blow the others.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Dave, the leaders of our countries are only in it to get what they want and blow the others.
Andy
April 1st, 2023 01:25
Call it How You Like…..
NafisaSB said:
i agree. this is something that needs urgent attention and commitment from those in power
well done..
April 1st, 2023 01:15
NafisaSB said:
i agree. this is something that needs urgent attention and commitment from those in power
well done..
April 1st, 2023 01:15
My System
sorenbarrett said:
My oh my! Is it paranoia or am I not spending enough time reading? I always make up excuses. I think my ratio is down. Oh yes, I have been asked for more information about myself. I guess it is not paranoia after all. A very good poem and well put. I have to get to work.
March 31st, 2023 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
My oh my! Is it paranoia or am I not spending enough time reading? I always make up excuses. I think my ratio is down. Oh yes, I have been asked for more information about myself. I guess it is not paranoia after all. A very good poem and well put. I have to get to work.
March 31st, 2023 06:28
My System
Goldfinch60 said:
It is always interesting to read about others on this site as I have been for many years now.
Andy
March 31st, 2023 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
It is always interesting to read about others on this site as I have been for many years now.
Andy
March 31st, 2023 01:46
My System
Fay Slimm. said:
Snap for me too Dave - - pays to look at contributions and ;comments on reads.
March 30th, 2023 12:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Snap for me too Dave - - pays to look at contributions and ;comments on reads.
March 30th, 2023 12:21
My System
orchidee said:
What did you find out about Fido - what info? As he writes 99% of my poems, you know! lol.
March 30th, 2023 10:06
orchidee said:
What did you find out about Fido - what info? As he writes 99% of my poems, you know! lol.
March 30th, 2023 10:06
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