Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



A Triolet Ahead of The Pack
sorenbarrett said:

Late to the party but feeling pretty much the same way and yes three is the magic number having said it three times it must be true and evokes not only attention but a sense of reality.

February 12th, 2024 07:27

Labels
Thomas W Case said:

Labels belong on leftovers in the fridge, so I know what\'s what. Great write.

February 8th, 2024 19:29

The Toilet Seat
sorenbarrett said:

A limerick like poem common problem for those that live with the opposite sex.
I had an idea the other day
to make toilets pay.
Making a toilet as a head,
of each politician so what they said
could be put back inside
one push and open wide


February 7th, 2024 09:39

Labels
sorenbarrett said:

I hate labels, I think that it takes all the individuality out of people, lumping them into a group. None the less it seems helpful at times to generalize and group things. As for becoming more of a formalist as I grow older, I don\'t think so more conservative maybe. Oh there I go labeling things again. Thought provoking Dave.

February 7th, 2024 04:23

Labels
Goldfinch60 said:

As I say to people as part of my philosophy of life \"This is me, if you do not like what you see it\'s not my problem it\'s yours!\"

Andy

February 7th, 2024 03:31

Labels
orchidee said:

You very old then, if there ain\'t nothing new about yer?! As old as Goldfinch and I - millions of years old? lol.

February 7th, 2024 03:06

Labels
Neville said:



I am, and almost for as long as I can remember, have been anti label .. I find that only very rarely are they necessary .. like poison on a bottle containing poison .. unfortunately, labels are far too often derogatory and dehumanizing .. but then that\'s me you old dog ..

I reckon I get ya point tho .. Neville

February 7th, 2024 02:13

The Afterlife – A Case Study
sorenbarrett said:

Fun from beginning to end or rather from heaven to hell. Given the choice I to have picked hell in that I never wanted to play the harp and although I like listening to it, an eternity of it would drive me nuts. It all sounds rather boring up there.

February 6th, 2024 09:28

Michael Jordan’s Boots
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous rhyme.

February 5th, 2024 10:22

Michael Jordan’s Boots
sorenbarrett said:

I don\'t know who would buy them in that they are large boots to fill and after all who wants used boots? I prefer new ones for less price. Fame will get you everything, including what you don\'t want.

February 5th, 2024 06:44

Michael Jordan’s Boots
Doggerel Dave said:

Tool:
\"An often disliked person who screws people over instead of using common sense to deal with situations. Likes to command people to compensate for his small penis\". - Urban dictionary.
You gotta get yourself together and find this bloke - he\'ll shower you with Nikes and you won\'t have to worry anymore...................

February 4th, 2024 17:28

Michael Jordan’s Boots
Teddy.15 said:

LoL did you mean but the millionaire is a bit tall? 🤣 An incredible gigantic gentleman from what I\'ve read, but yes I\'m totally unworthy of knowledge of how much Nike cost here in Italy they can fetch up to 700 euros new, gosh I could never buy a pair even if I was swimming in dollars.

February 4th, 2024 13:24

Michael Jordan’s Boots
Neville said:


I had to go Google

1) Michael Jordan
2) Motser

and can only guess as to why you think him a bit of a tool .. are you able to enlighten me sir .. Neville


February 4th, 2024 03:47

Michael Jordan’s Boots
Doggerel Dave said:

I do - but are you travelling incognito in order to evade detection during this exercise?

February 4th, 2024 03:40

Michael Jordan’s Boots
orchidee said:

Has Sir ONS any boots for sale?! lol. You knows him.

February 4th, 2024 03:10

Time Just Disappears When Having Fun
sorenbarrett said:

I loved this piece Dave. Somehow I have overlooked it in the past but it is a marvelous work of blending the prose of the introduction with the verse that leave the reader in ahh and bemused. Loved it

February 3rd, 2024 05:31

Not Yet….Perhaps… How Then?
sorenbarrett said:

When young I thought I had the answers to this religious thing, then that changed, then changed and now changed again. In the changes I don\'t know anything so how could I tell anyone else what is right or wrong. We all evolve let each go at their own speed in their own direction.

January 31st, 2024 04:27

Love (Poetry).
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

January 27th, 2024 22:05

Mr Roberts
sorenbarrett said:

Pirates were the most democratic groups of the era. Captains were elected and could be removed by vote. That\'s probably why they were so diligently hunted. A great tale

January 27th, 2024 18:53

Art’s Value
2781 said:

I heard a story yesterday about A1 being the next big threat to artists!
Forgery for the masses,
I wonder how they\'ll divide the spoils?

January 25th, 2024 15:45

Not Here – better elsewhere.
sorenbarrett said:

I thought I\'d been sweating a bit more than usual lately. I thought it was just old age.

January 24th, 2024 19:02

Reality becomes you.
Neville said:



its not what you say, it\'s the way that you say it ..
by jove I think the blighters got it ..


January 22nd, 2024 08:45

Reality becomes you.
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Dave, I also find that apathy is a good weapon.

Andy

January 22nd, 2024 02:26

Reality becomes you.
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

January 21st, 2024 22:58

The Joys of Apartment Living.
sorenbarrett said:

It seems a universal truth that we all have such a neighbor, thus the saying \"fences make for good neighbors.\" An enjoyable poem entertaining to the end possibly because of the empathy created by such neighbors I have had in the past.

January 20th, 2024 17:48

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
sorenbarrett said:

I think it has less to do with getting into shit and more with catting around. lol Great story Dave.

January 18th, 2024 17:19

Art’s Value
MendedFences27 said:

Don\'t know much about the art market, but I know this - For every million-dollar painting, there are a million other painting sitting on people\'s walls, decorating their refrigerators, or cast aside in their workspace. For every artwork of renown there are a million cherished drawings loved by but a few, A well spoken poem. - Phil A.

January 16th, 2024 11:25

Art’s Value
Neville said:



I am indeed honoured Sir Dog ..

and shall sign off as Sir Prised of Somerset .. 😎👍

January 10th, 2024 11:33

The Koel Calls
sorenbarrett said:

I empathize, I have someone I know that has wild roosters around his house. The county told him they can not be eliminated in that after being free they are deemed wildlife.

January 10th, 2024 06:35

Art’s Value
orchidee said:

Now I must paint a picture of Fido. It will fetch millions! lol.

January 9th, 2024 03:00



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