Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
Free at last..........
dusk arising said:
My life is ennui these days mate. Can\'t even take a trip around the supermarket aisles. Shielding they call it, now i know how sardines feel.
November 26th, 2021 11:23
dusk arising said:
My life is ennui these days mate. Can\'t even take a trip around the supermarket aisles. Shielding they call it, now i know how sardines feel.
November 26th, 2021 11:23
Free at last..........
Neville said:
how can this not be liked, maybe just a little bit ... bless ... cabin fever awaits ......................................... N
November 26th, 2021 11:02
Neville said:
how can this not be liked, maybe just a little bit ... bless ... cabin fever awaits ......................................... N
November 26th, 2021 11:02
Free at last..........
spilleronsheet said:
Crapped in for so long
Wonder how I should wander around when it’s all normal out
November 26th, 2021 04:37
spilleronsheet said:
Crapped in for so long
Wonder how I should wander around when it’s all normal out
November 26th, 2021 04:37
Free at last..........
Fay Slimm. said:
Must have been written through too much indoorness dear Dave - - hope that aching listlessness went into the bin and yes - - \"free at last\" needs yet another quick shortie methinks.
November 26th, 2021 04:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Must have been written through too much indoorness dear Dave - - hope that aching listlessness went into the bin and yes - - \"free at last\" needs yet another quick shortie methinks.
November 26th, 2021 04:21
The Earworm…..
dusk arising said:
Cor Blimey cobbah. I agree with your sentiments. Jazz is a worthy alternative to most radio babble.
November 22nd, 2021 06:32
dusk arising said:
Cor Blimey cobbah. I agree with your sentiments. Jazz is a worthy alternative to most radio babble.
November 22nd, 2021 06:32
The Earworm…..
Jay-Lee Jane said:
\"Please find a better way, or it’s too late.\" Truth within the melody of your poetry.
November 22nd, 2021 05:57
Jay-Lee Jane said:
\"Please find a better way, or it’s too late.\" Truth within the melody of your poetry.
November 22nd, 2021 05:57
The Earworm…..
Neville said:
I know precisely what you mean Old Bean ...................................... love the fire & hammer bit very muchly indeed .. my word it made me smile wide ...................... N
November 22nd, 2021 02:47
Neville said:
I know precisely what you mean Old Bean ...................................... love the fire & hammer bit very muchly indeed .. my word it made me smile wide ...................... N
November 22nd, 2021 02:47
The Earworm…..
Fay Slimm. said:
Gud day and thanks for tacklin\' this subject Dave - - am with you all the way - Give me jazz over pollies any day and I have always felt the same - -- am about to tackle my toast-an-tea brecka now while hopin\' your own day\'s been great.
November 22nd, 2021 00:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Gud day and thanks for tacklin\' this subject Dave - - am with you all the way - Give me jazz over pollies any day and I have always felt the same - -- am about to tackle my toast-an-tea brecka now while hopin\' your own day\'s been great.
November 22nd, 2021 00:44
What a Way to Go….
Coyote said:
LOL...I love the Darwin Awards and I really love this hilarious poem Dave. Nice work.
November 20th, 2021 10:15
Coyote said:
LOL...I love the Darwin Awards and I really love this hilarious poem Dave. Nice work.
November 20th, 2021 10:15
What a Way to Go….
SureshG said:
What does one do about those that are positively not intelligent but just a shade above absolutely stupid and are thus still around. OOPPP!!! I just realized we were not to speak about ourselves
November 20th, 2021 09:33
SureshG said:
What does one do about those that are positively not intelligent but just a shade above absolutely stupid and are thus still around. OOPPP!!! I just realized we were not to speak about ourselves
November 20th, 2021 09:33
What a Way to Go….
Neville said:
This is one o them educational poems innit .. the kind they recite part way through the intro phase of a clinical risk management workshop .. I reckon I got the gist but am off to Google any old how ... N is :) here
November 17th, 2021 08:33
Neville said:
This is one o them educational poems innit .. the kind they recite part way through the intro phase of a clinical risk management workshop .. I reckon I got the gist but am off to Google any old how ... N is :) here
November 17th, 2021 08:33
What a Way to Go….
dusk arising said:
Am I reading, between the lines, what you found so attractive to staying down under. Drowning in the gene pool?
November 17th, 2021 04:13
dusk arising said:
Am I reading, between the lines, what you found so attractive to staying down under. Drowning in the gene pool?
November 17th, 2021 04:13
What a Way to Go….
orchidee said:
Doh! It happened to me. I tested out the guns for Russian Roulette. The first one was the live one!
November 17th, 2021 03:21
orchidee said:
Doh! It happened to me. I tested out the guns for Russian Roulette. The first one was the live one!
November 17th, 2021 03:21
Blathering On re Loss of Inspiration
Neville said:
We have all been there mate ... in fact, I\'m there now ..
Great sense of humour displayed throughout .. ever thought of using ya dick ta phone tho\' .. it saves on laundry bills........................ Neville :)
November 16th, 2021 03:51
Neville said:
We have all been there mate ... in fact, I\'m there now ..
Great sense of humour displayed throughout .. ever thought of using ya dick ta phone tho\' .. it saves on laundry bills........................ Neville :)
November 16th, 2021 03:51
Lost Central Park - NYC
Paul Bell said:
Going for a run around Central Park, another tick box exercise. Must admit, there is a lot of Police in New York, which is never a bad thing.
November 14th, 2021 07:32
Paul Bell said:
Going for a run around Central Park, another tick box exercise. Must admit, there is a lot of Police in New York, which is never a bad thing.
November 14th, 2021 07:32
Clock Change – Tonight!!
Paul Bell said:
Every bloody bit of technology known to man changes the hour. Then you pop into the car, and it just laughs at you, not moving back or forward. Mind you, the car probably knows it\'s a waste of time.
November 14th, 2021 07:25
Paul Bell said:
Every bloody bit of technology known to man changes the hour. Then you pop into the car, and it just laughs at you, not moving back or forward. Mind you, the car probably knows it\'s a waste of time.
November 14th, 2021 07:25
In Transit
Paul Bell said:
Always like stories that start in the dark. The dark in itself brings mystery and takes you on that little journey of intrigue. Routine always tells of waiting, and usually more waiting. Then it happens.
November 13th, 2021 14:23
Paul Bell said:
Always like stories that start in the dark. The dark in itself brings mystery and takes you on that little journey of intrigue. Routine always tells of waiting, and usually more waiting. Then it happens.
November 13th, 2021 14:23
Time Traveler.
Fay Slimm. said:
Longer the better for me too Dave - so glad you saw lots while you were there. Great read.
November 13th, 2021 08:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Longer the better for me too Dave - so glad you saw lots while you were there. Great read.
November 13th, 2021 08:55
Time Traveler.
Neville said:
Been there, done that, had the tee shirt nicked & wrote about it all way back .................. I simply love travelling .. Neville
November 13th, 2021 08:28
Neville said:
Been there, done that, had the tee shirt nicked & wrote about it all way back .................. I simply love travelling .. Neville
November 13th, 2021 08:28
In Transit
Neville said:
this is very bloomin good DD, very good indeed sir .......................... N
November 12th, 2021 05:08
Neville said:
this is very bloomin good DD, very good indeed sir .......................... N
November 12th, 2021 05:08
In Transit
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a tale and left in suspense too - you have such a gift for holding attention Dave -- I have been on seat-edge reading this build-up and could hardly wait for the end to discover the mystery -- your pen subjects readers to ordinary happenings with short-line tension and that my friend is the mark of a good novelist....... creative writing for sure - sequel now do you think. ?
November 11th, 2021 07:35
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - what a tale and left in suspense too - you have such a gift for holding attention Dave -- I have been on seat-edge reading this build-up and could hardly wait for the end to discover the mystery -- your pen subjects readers to ordinary happenings with short-line tension and that my friend is the mark of a good novelist....... creative writing for sure - sequel now do you think. ?
November 11th, 2021 07:35
In Transit
dusk arising said:
Very impressed with your writing skill and maturity DD. Yes if there\'s more i\'d like to read it.
If i had bought a book and this were the opening paragraphs then I would already be hooked.
Full marks to you.
November 11th, 2021 07:32
dusk arising said:
Very impressed with your writing skill and maturity DD. Yes if there\'s more i\'d like to read it.
If i had bought a book and this were the opening paragraphs then I would already be hooked.
Full marks to you.
November 11th, 2021 07:32
Time Traveler.
Lorna said:
Lucky lucky you to have done this..... I agree the longer the better so you could almost feel you belonged there.
November 8th, 2021 06:19
Lorna said:
Lucky lucky you to have done this..... I agree the longer the better so you could almost feel you belonged there.
November 8th, 2021 06:19
Time Traveler.
Paul Bell said:
One country I\'ve yet to visit.
Now, are Italians like Londoners, they see you coming towards them with a map, and they bolt.
November 8th, 2021 05:14
Paul Bell said:
One country I\'ve yet to visit.
Now, are Italians like Londoners, they see you coming towards them with a map, and they bolt.
November 8th, 2021 05:14
Time Traveler.
dusk arising said:
Intrigued by your poem i discovered my own ignorance. Never had that travel bug to wander the globe nor an appreciation of artists of that ilk. How different we humans can be, I felt my \'hum-drum-ness\' exposed.
Mind you, I\'d have loved the trains. I\'ve been a railways nut since childhood.
Enjoyed the read and where it took me.
November 8th, 2021 04:54
dusk arising said:
Intrigued by your poem i discovered my own ignorance. Never had that travel bug to wander the globe nor an appreciation of artists of that ilk. How different we humans can be, I felt my \'hum-drum-ness\' exposed.
Mind you, I\'d have loved the trains. I\'ve been a railways nut since childhood.
Enjoyed the read and where it took me.
November 8th, 2021 04:54
Time Traveler.
Goldfinch60 said:
May that illusion become reality Dave and may Caneletto fill your life with beauty.
Andy
November 8th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May that illusion become reality Dave and may Caneletto fill your life with beauty.
Andy
November 8th, 2021 01:48
Lost Central Park - NYC
Neville said:
it seems we had a similar experience DD .. mine not in Central Park though but Klyde Warren Park Texas .. and I most certainly and absolutely will not be tempted to write about it .... N :)
November 4th, 2021 12:35
Neville said:
it seems we had a similar experience DD .. mine not in Central Park though but Klyde Warren Park Texas .. and I most certainly and absolutely will not be tempted to write about it .... N :)
November 4th, 2021 12:35
Clock Change – Tonight!!
Neville said:
I just love mnemonics .. but then I\'m just an old fashioned fella into words .. I always get it wrong this clock changing thing & end up feeling jet lagged climbing the stairs already ............................. N :)
November 1st, 2021 17:41
Neville said:
I just love mnemonics .. but then I\'m just an old fashioned fella into words .. I always get it wrong this clock changing thing & end up feeling jet lagged climbing the stairs already ............................. N :)
November 1st, 2021 17:41
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