Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Three Palms Revisited
Doggerel Dave said:

No message beyond what is there, Teddy. \'All is change\' would probably cover it really.
A small (compared with world problems) deterioration in the quality of my life. But certainly I\'ve had, at various times (not always) housing problems - with the sole exception of where I am now.

June 1st, 2021 06:58

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
Neville said:



.................... shit happens .. dunnit

never heard before but as sure as hell, I aint gonna forget what is essentially a universal truth ...

Neville

May 28th, 2021 02:19

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
Fay Slimm. said:

Never heard this dicky- tale before Dave so I must not be ancient !!! - -but grinning I give applause for the wisdom in those three final lines.

May 27th, 2021 05:52

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
Doggerel Dave said:

\"Did you mean poohy or phooey, there, Bill? 😊

May 27th, 2021 03:53

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
Goldfinch60 said:

Such very true words Dave.

Andy

May 27th, 2021 00:37

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
Accidental Poet said:

My first thought was Oh no, Orchi\'s gonna start singing with the little bird. But how did the fan get in this story?

May 26th, 2021 18:51

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
orchidee said:

What I want to know is: \'Why does the s**t always hit the fan?!\' I dunno.

May 26th, 2021 10:46

Final Funny – (not funny at all - a Cautionary Tale…)
Doggerel Dave said:

Thanks Teddy - you aren\'t singing my praises by any chance, are you?
Watch for them big cats, they could be more dangerous than dragons......

May 26th, 2021 06:59

Three Palms
Neville said:


... I thought I might pop back for another viewing ... and yes .. it was worth it ..

Cheers, Neville


May 26th, 2021 03:16

Notice of absence
Dove said:

Cute, see you next fall 👀

May 20th, 2021 09:07

Notice of absence
Neville said:


After nine days away with the penguins sir, I\'m surprised you came back at all ..

I really enjoyed this little offering DD



May 20th, 2021 03:26

Notice of absence
Goldfinch60 said:

You may have to go back in silence and maybe they will come out for you.

Andy

May 20th, 2021 00:19

CRISIS AT THE ‘CROSS
Neville said:


.. in truth, one really ought not to mess with bears ...
Very funny nevertheless ... Bbb barely time to draw breath between giggles ..

May 12th, 2021 03:05

Not Here – better elsewhere.
Goldfinch60 said:

Very powerful four lines Dave.

Andy

May 11th, 2021 00:15

Not Here – better elsewhere.
Neville said:


Tis true even the most timely of warnings may not be wholly heeded until its too late ...

Yes indeed, very clever & very much enjoyed ...

Neville
...

May 10th, 2021 12:34

Not Here – better elsewhere.
Trenz Pruca said:

Good one.

May 10th, 2021 12:12

Not Here – better elsewhere.
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh Dave this rhyme is CLEVER - - - four lines of warning and so very telling.

May 10th, 2021 11:11

Not Here – better elsewhere.
AuburnScribbler said:

A superb stanza here Doggerel Dave, and I totally agree with your sentiment.

Bravo, and I hope all is well.

May 10th, 2021 10:09

Not Here – better elsewhere.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Nicely done, Dave.

May 10th, 2021 09:03

CRISIS AT THE ‘CROSS
Goldfinch60 said:

Super fun write Dave.

May 9th, 2021 15:10

CRISIS AT THE ‘CROSS
Jerry Reynolds said:

Very funny, Dave.

May 9th, 2021 11:11

A Relationship
Neville said:


that\'s cats for ya innit ... and just a few of the many reasons I\'m gonna stick with dogs sir thank you very much................ Neville

May 7th, 2021 08:25

The Joys of Apartment Living.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Woah oh my, door banging and any neighbour noises can get on my hibby\'s nerves so i understand your lamenting super fantastic rhyming poem wow! Towards the end she learnt her lesson, how crafty a way to teach her. Kudos!!

May 6th, 2021 14:35

Great Expectations
Andy Hunter said:

Kept me on the edge of my seat. Great rhyme, really enjoyed it.

May 6th, 2021 14:26

The Joys of Apartment Living.
Andy Hunter said:

That\'s the way to do it 😂

May 6th, 2021 14:21

The Toilet Seat
Andy Hunter said:

Love this!

May 6th, 2021 14:17

The Joys of Apartment Living.
Fay Slimm. said:

Good to hear the prob. with door-slams is being sorted Dave - - - - your telling title got me ready for reading more on apartment living and will send you a medal for your patient solution - - extra thanks too
for the story of how to handle close neighbours who can tend to be thoughtless .Hope that bit of late night action will do the trick - -
\"There\'s nowt so thick as folk\" as they say around here.

May 5th, 2021 16:42

Time Just Disappears When Having Fun
Neville said:


The marriage between prose & poem work extremely well here .. no illusion .. just a matter of fact and my own perception .......................... Neville

May 5th, 2021 15:03

The Joys of Apartment Living.
Neville said:


I had no neighbours for eight years .. having just moved, I now have two sets of them .. both pairs are quite lovely ........ I enjoyed todays offering Dave .. .. very muchly

.. Neville


May 4th, 2021 01:48

The Joys of Apartment Living.
Goldfinch60 said:

Sometime neighbours can be so annoying, in my time I have come across them but the ones I have at present are wonderful.

Andy

May 3rd, 2021 00:08



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