Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Trees - or Something.
Neville said:



wonderfully whimsical sir
if push came to a shove I think I would rather be a tree :)

July 26th, 2021 06:37

Trees - or Something.
orchidee said:

A fine write Dave.
I felt sorry for a tree on a cold night, so brought it indoors. Not a bonzai mini-tree, but an oak. Not much room in the house now! lol.

July 26th, 2021 01:48

Trees - or Something.
Goldfinch60 said:

Talking with Nature is always wonderful.

Thanks for putting up Chet Baker and Bill Evans.

Andy

July 26th, 2021 00:59

Trees - or Something.
Saxon Crow said:

Talking to trees makes for a wooden conversation! You should branch out and try flowers Dave.
BTW Bill Evans is awesome

July 26th, 2021 00:19

Trees - or Something.
flyingfish said:

Love the Ents in Lord of the Rings. Cheers

July 25th, 2021 19:58

The land of Anon.
SureshG said:

The Land of Anon, of course I know it
At the round-a-about, turn left, I think I’m right,
OH! Why don’t you just show it

July 15th, 2021 10:19

The land of Anon.
Neville said:


Make no Miss Take .. I believe your every single word

July 14th, 2021 06:58

The land of Anon.
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Dave, we can hope that one day it will be led by I Will Care and Help For All, people who care for others.

Andy

July 13th, 2021 23:42

The land of Anon.
flyingfish said:

Too True! Cheers

July 13th, 2021 21:49

A Triolet Ahead of The Pack
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant

July 10th, 2021 06:41

Covid 19
Poetic Dan said:

I\'m glad you are fine and enjoyed the rhyme, as for unspoken word. I am free to have my own mind, as are the rest.

Always with much peace and respect

July 10th, 2021 06:38

A Triolet Ahead of The Pack
SureshG said:

A very enjoyable read indeed

July 9th, 2021 12:20

A Triolet Ahead of The Pack
Neville said:


uncaninely precise you old dog
who said ya couldn\'t learn new trix ..
............................ :)

July 9th, 2021 11:37

A Triolet Ahead of The Pack
Fay Slimm. said:

Good to read you having your say with a powerful triolet Dave..

July 9th, 2021 01:23

A Triolet Ahead of The Pack
Goldfinch60 said:

You have beaten the rush with a fine triolet Dave.

Andy

July 9th, 2021 01:07

Covid 19
SureshG said:

The precautions are there for us to take,
If we discount the experts, our peril and mistake

Glad you are safe and should ride out any other wave


July 7th, 2021 12:44

Covid 19
Goldfinch60 said:

Glad all was OK Dave. I too have had both my jabs and have felt fine. I know people who have had it and it is not a nice thing to have, luckily they have overcome the disease.

Keep well.

Andy

July 6th, 2021 01:01

Covid 19
Eugene S. said:

Glad it was only economy sized! I know its wrath.

July 5th, 2021 17:18

Covid 19
flyingfish said:

jab-shy

bashful woodpecker
was too shy to take the jab
its wooden heart throbs

July 5th, 2021 14:45

Covid 19
Neville said:


Am glad you put us all in the picture DD ..
I hope the situation in Oz improves quickly and the casualties are few ..

July 5th, 2021 07:55

Covid 19
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Dave.
Avoided it all together got my shots ASAP. Had to be so very careful as Linda had COPD, heart conditions, and other complications. It would have killed her.
Stay safe.

July 5th, 2021 07:51

My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again….
SureshG said:

Neutered, we have all been, willingly, as sheep to the slaughter, falsely believing, it is for our benefit.
Loved the poem

June 30th, 2021 14:34

My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again….
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good and clever words Dave, and so true.
Shakespeare will be worried that one day you may write Letham. LOL

Andy

June 29th, 2021 00:09

My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again….
Neville said:



I was going to try and pen something humorous .. however, I understand where you are coming from sir and it aint funny, is it ...

I guess it could come under either or both satire and sonnet .. whatever the case, point made ... :)


June 28th, 2021 13:07

My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again….
Saxon Crow said:

Pretty much nailed it there my friend. We are but sheep ruled by wolves

June 28th, 2021 06:43

My Sod it…sorry, Sonnet…but then again….
Fay Slimm. said:

Neutered indeed and an apt word to choose Dave - your sonnet has such a powerful message which I second wholeheartedly. - I too could never love hoodwinking ties.

June 28th, 2021 05:10

Humane Relations.
Neville said:


Ooh er sir ..

this is better than Breaking Bad .. its also more dangerous ... maybe :)

June 26th, 2021 03:08

Humane Relations.
Neville said:


what ever one may or may not think .. and regardless of preferences or persuasion .. Not one of them could legitimately argue that todays feast was neither original or otherwise quite brilliant ...
Neville


June 24th, 2021 02:45

Humane Relations.
Goldfinch60 said:

In my long life I have treated everybody equal and respect all their ways as long as respect is always to the fore. I used to work as deputy administrator in one job where my boss was a lady and all the other staff were ladies, there were never any problems or arguments between any of us.

Andy

June 24th, 2021 00:45

Humane Relations.
SureshG said:

For a long time I have been composing a poem on the disastrous follies of the patriarchal control, and maybe I’ll finish it someday.
Meanwhile, thanks for putting yourself out there

June 23rd, 2021 13:16



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