Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave
“Heigh-ho, Heigh-ho it’s Off to Work We Go…”
Mark_2011 said:
I enjoyed this and like the villanelle form. It is a worry with people being exposed to dangers at work. That shouldn\'t be happening.
October 8th, 2020 06:31
Mark_2011 said:
I enjoyed this and like the villanelle form. It is a worry with people being exposed to dangers at work. That shouldn\'t be happening.
October 8th, 2020 06:31
Three Palms
L. B. Mek said:
your last two stanzas are deceptively brilliant,
really like the tone and natural story telling rhythm you maintained throughout your write, you have a unique style to add to the multifaceted buffet that is MPS, just needs refining, which will inevitable come with practice and time,
wonderful write
October 8th, 2020 03:53
L. B. Mek said:
your last two stanzas are deceptively brilliant,
really like the tone and natural story telling rhythm you maintained throughout your write, you have a unique style to add to the multifaceted buffet that is MPS, just needs refining, which will inevitable come with practice and time,
wonderful write
October 8th, 2020 03:53
The Night Male
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad you found a lionhearted solution to your problem Dave.
Andy
October 8th, 2020 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Glad you found a lionhearted solution to your problem Dave.
Andy
October 8th, 2020 00:15
Three Palms
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the welcome - Now I know I\'ve done something right with respect to the technology. Easy for some... Glad you, I think , appreciated this effort. One of my better ones. but from now on it\'s all down hill...
October 7th, 2020 05:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for the welcome - Now I know I\'ve done something right with respect to the technology. Easy for some... Glad you, I think , appreciated this effort. One of my better ones. but from now on it\'s all down hill...
October 7th, 2020 05:36
Three Palms
Goldfinch60 said:
People change the views so often but you have the memories and you are right in saying the sky is still there, it may change but will never go away.
Welcome to MPS.
October 7th, 2020 04:53
Goldfinch60 said:
People change the views so often but you have the memories and you are right in saying the sky is still there, it may change but will never go away.
Welcome to MPS.
October 7th, 2020 04:53
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