Comments received on poems by Doggerel Dave



Disaster Trumps Competition.
Goldfinch60 said:

Competition is always in our lives Dave but so many take it to extremes and do not worry about the cost to others in our world.

Andy

December 21st, 2022 02:24

Disaster Trumps Competition.
sorenbarrett said:

I\'m glad you didn\'t end it \"humanity rotten to the core\" , although this may be true. It speaks truth anyway you look at it. Good write.

December 20th, 2022 19:40

Disaster Trumps Competition.
Doggerel Dave said:

Thanks mate. And I\'m not getting at Andy here - but I really would like to see more attempts at answers on these pages - easy to wax poetical about problems ........

December 20th, 2022 06:10

Disaster Trumps Competition.
Neville said:



ink well spilt in my opinion :)

December 20th, 2022 06:03

Free Exchange
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Such talent, like your writing! Great thought and presentation with your write - DD!

December 19th, 2022 18:48

Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
Neville said:



Its a dogs life innit .. but I get your point sir .. :)

December 19th, 2022 04:23

Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
Fay Slimm. said:

Your write so cleverly composed on the subject of matings is full of poetic rhyming that leaves me with a wry smile - - thanks Dave - - I love the dry wit in this tale of \"unloosed copulation\" - - great read.

December 18th, 2022 03:27

Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
orchidee said:

A \'C\' word I must mention only in December is \'Christmas\', or else Gold/Andy will shoot me! lol.

December 18th, 2022 03:06

Concerning Some ‘C’ Words.
Goldfinch60 said:

It can be that way Dave.

Andy

December 18th, 2022 02:59

War Veterans
sorenbarrett said:

You make a good point. You would think that we would have reached a point where killing our fellow men for the good of money makers or power minded would no longer be tolerated.

December 16th, 2022 17:55

Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud
sorenbarrett said:

I remember her she put a damper on my spirits until we got a separation. Fun write Dave.

December 16th, 2022 07:25

Serious Questions
sorenbarrett said:

Senior moments are becoming a regular expectation for me. Loved the forgotten rhyme. I find myself digging back through some of your older poems. What worries me is when I find in my poems of years ago speaking of my senior moments.

December 14th, 2022 20:46

The Chair.
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

I have one of those! Mine came the same way and needed the same effort to assemble. But, I like mine! Great fun to read DD!

December 12th, 2022 18:20

Rampant Vegetation.
Neville said:



I hear that napalm works wonders

December 9th, 2022 01:48

Rampant Vegetation.
sorenbarrett said:

Dave I loved where this went. I too go to the bathroom when I have beans but for other purposes. This one seemed to grow out of control. Hope you find a pot of gold up there. Great piece.

December 8th, 2022 18:49

Rampant Vegetation.
arqios said:

At some stage you\'ll need a machete to navigate that room!

December 7th, 2022 03:54

Rampant Vegetation.
orchidee said:

Good write Dave.

December 7th, 2022 03:04

Rampant Vegetation.
Goldfinch60 said:

You can get hooked by the cheese plant and taken out of that window Dave.

Andy

December 7th, 2022 02:48

Balance.
Goldfinch60 said:

They only think of what they themselves want and don\'t care about anybody else.
As I have said many times: \"How do you know when a politician is lying?\" \"There lips move!\"

Andy

December 7th, 2022 02:26

Balance.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Dave.
I fear the fulcrum is up their bums.

December 6th, 2022 16:11

Balance.
Saxon Crow said:

Just walk away from it all mate. Don\'t even give them your time and energy. Let them play their little games.They are insignificant.

December 6th, 2022 05:29

Balance.
orchidee said:

Yep, we have Bozo, Coco, Thicko, etc..... as some newspapers call them.
One is in cuckoo land in a celebrity show on telly at the moment.

December 6th, 2022 05:04

Balance.
arqios said:

That\'s a good one for the soapbox in the public square. If only people would listen and act accordingly.

December 6th, 2022 04:31

The Chair.
Paul Bell said:

Flat pack is like a jail sentence.
Though there\'s bound to be someone in jail that can put it together.

December 4th, 2022 06:56

The Chair.
Goldfinch60 said:

I know where you are coming from Dave and written instructions are becoming rare nowadays.

Andy

December 3rd, 2022 02:43

The Chair.
Bella Shepard said:

I commiserate with your rant. Now in the good old days, I mean really old, instructions were very comprehensive, and parts neatly marked. What have we come to? A frustrating experience for you, but a fun read for me, couldn\'t help chuckling.

December 2nd, 2022 15:26

The Chair.
sorenbarrett said:

I\'ve always had problems with these put together yourself items, the instructions are more misleading that helpful and sometimes the diagrams assume you have a forth dimensional view.

December 2nd, 2022 12:25

The Chair.
arqios said:

Horrible when the shower chair disassembled itself mid-shower! But a very useful device to prevent bathroom falls.

December 2nd, 2022 06:05

The Chair.
orchidee said:

Or - you could do the \'empty chair therapy. Neville knows all about it.

December 2nd, 2022 05:26

The Chair.
orchidee said:

A missing screw?
My picnic (me) is missing a sandwich. I\'m a sandwich short of a picnic! lol.

December 2nd, 2022 05:25



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