Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
As If By Chance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem and love the repetition, albeit varied, in the “what” question, which almost bookends the poem. Very effective! Well done!
November 24th, 2024 15:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem and love the repetition, albeit varied, in the “what” question, which almost bookends the poem. Very effective! Well done!
November 24th, 2024 15:56
As If By Chance
Teddy.15 said:
Repeating the moment exquisite poetry as always lovely dearest Melvin 🌹
November 24th, 2024 10:21
Teddy.15 said:
Repeating the moment exquisite poetry as always lovely dearest Melvin 🌹
November 24th, 2024 10:21
As If By Chance
sorenbarrett said:
I really like this poem. It has that haunting phrase that comes back and repeats. Very nicely written.
November 24th, 2024 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
I really like this poem. It has that haunting phrase that comes back and repeats. Very nicely written.
November 24th, 2024 07:17
Where No Light Breaks
sorenbarrett said:
Melvin this has the field of Bob Dylan on LSD. Most interesting combination of the images Debbie Vokes, a Bosch like picture.
November 11th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Melvin this has the field of Bob Dylan on LSD. Most interesting combination of the images Debbie Vokes, a Bosch like picture.
November 11th, 2024 04:35
Where No Light Breaks
jarcher54 said:
I must say I was carried along by the force of your images... I don\'t understand them all, but I feel them, and that\'s more interesting.
November 11th, 2024 01:57
jarcher54 said:
I must say I was carried along by the force of your images... I don\'t understand them all, but I feel them, and that\'s more interesting.
November 11th, 2024 01:57
Where No Light Breaks
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Melvin, those lines really stick out for me intrigued to say the least, your imagery as it always is, its simply a masterpiece
somewhere above the trees
now laughs the many skulls in deep retreat
🌹
November 10th, 2024 16:41
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Melvin, those lines really stick out for me intrigued to say the least, your imagery as it always is, its simply a masterpiece
somewhere above the trees
now laughs the many skulls in deep retreat
🌹
November 10th, 2024 16:41
By Night\'s Secluded Light
Teddy.15 said:
Sinking into the hollow or drowning comes to mind, so very powerful and your imagery well, always so original. Wonderful poetry dear Melvin. 🌹
October 24th, 2024 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
Sinking into the hollow or drowning comes to mind, so very powerful and your imagery well, always so original. Wonderful poetry dear Melvin. 🌹
October 24th, 2024 03:01
By Night\'s Secluded Light
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Chilling imagery.
October 23rd, 2024 14:43
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Chilling imagery.
October 23rd, 2024 14:43
By Night\'s Secluded Light
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting collection of disjointed thoughts that often occur in my own mind. Many of these appear to have deeper meaning. A lovely write that give many ideas
October 23rd, 2024 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting collection of disjointed thoughts that often occur in my own mind. Many of these appear to have deeper meaning. A lovely write that give many ideas
October 23rd, 2024 12:43
So Red The Nose
Teddy.15 said:
I felt every last word and it left me somewhat drunk fabulous dearest Melvin. 🌹
October 21st, 2024 14:35
Teddy.15 said:
I felt every last word and it left me somewhat drunk fabulous dearest Melvin. 🌹
October 21st, 2024 14:35
So Red The Nose
sorenbarrett said:
Well Melvin more conundrums to unravel. Nicely written and composed.
October 21st, 2024 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
Well Melvin more conundrums to unravel. Nicely written and composed.
October 21st, 2024 13:24
So Red The Nose
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am honored to be the first to reply to this, unless one beats me as I am typing! This is a mind-blowingly 🤯 great poem! The stream-of-consciousness style really made me feel as if I was drifting off into an absinthe-doused dream of these profound thoughts.This is one of my more fave poems ever, let alone a fave on here. Existential as hell! I find a home in this! Great write. I could feel every single word! 🖤❤️🖤
October 21st, 2024 13:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am honored to be the first to reply to this, unless one beats me as I am typing! This is a mind-blowingly 🤯 great poem! The stream-of-consciousness style really made me feel as if I was drifting off into an absinthe-doused dream of these profound thoughts.This is one of my more fave poems ever, let alone a fave on here. Existential as hell! I find a home in this! Great write. I could feel every single word! 🖤❤️🖤
October 21st, 2024 13:19
I Have Turned Around Now, Twice
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😯
A deep, dark and
captivating write!! ✍️
Great read, 💯
the imagery
is out of sight! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 19th, 2024 10:38
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😯
A deep, dark and
captivating write!! ✍️
Great read, 💯
the imagery
is out of sight! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
October 19th, 2024 10:38
I Have Turned Around Now, Twice
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark poem from the prince of darkness. One line after another of the unthinkable and like from a nightmare comes the incubus who calmly sits on a chair beside the bed awaiting the awakening. Great lines and images
October 18th, 2024 15:09
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark poem from the prince of darkness. One line after another of the unthinkable and like from a nightmare comes the incubus who calmly sits on a chair beside the bed awaiting the awakening. Great lines and images
October 18th, 2024 15:09
I Have Turned Around Now, Twice
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful dear Melvin
it is here I am more hollow than my Eliot suggests.
a smell of beer. a smell as yet I have yet to comprehend.
there is no-one here but all that never ends.
Love these lines, and a great ending as you always do. Kudos 🌹
October 18th, 2024 13:00
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful dear Melvin
it is here I am more hollow than my Eliot suggests.
a smell of beer. a smell as yet I have yet to comprehend.
there is no-one here but all that never ends.
Love these lines, and a great ending as you always do. Kudos 🌹
October 18th, 2024 13:00
what came first?
sorenbarrett said:
Duality and the questioning of where one ends and the other begins. A fun read that turns into a mental exercise and leaves ones crainial muscle sore.
October 2nd, 2024 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
Duality and the questioning of where one ends and the other begins. A fun read that turns into a mental exercise and leaves ones crainial muscle sore.
October 2nd, 2024 05:01
A little Less Panache
sorenbarrett said:
I felt like I had seen the union of union of Hieronymus Bosch with Salvador Dali and a pinch of Pablo Picasso. A wild ride over rough roads providing amusement park fun.
October 1st, 2024 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
I felt like I had seen the union of union of Hieronymus Bosch with Salvador Dali and a pinch of Pablo Picasso. A wild ride over rough roads providing amusement park fun.
October 1st, 2024 04:05
A More Obvious Art
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. You are a tremendous talent.
September 24th, 2024 14:10
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. You are a tremendous talent.
September 24th, 2024 14:10
A More Obvious Art
Teddy.15 said:
A masterpiece love the thought of heaven owning the landscape wouldn\'t it be so much more beautiful than what we see here. If you haven\'t already published a book dearest Melvin it\'s time to think about it, your work is truly worth gold. I absolutely love all the imagery here, and your last lines which bring it all full circle 🌹
September 24th, 2024 12:58
Teddy.15 said:
A masterpiece love the thought of heaven owning the landscape wouldn\'t it be so much more beautiful than what we see here. If you haven\'t already published a book dearest Melvin it\'s time to think about it, your work is truly worth gold. I absolutely love all the imagery here, and your last lines which bring it all full circle 🌹
September 24th, 2024 12:58
A More Obvious Art
sorenbarrett said:
I have a picture of sucking a thousand apples from the belly of a cave. Mental pictures that occure on occasion and phrases that occur as well. Most iteresting a verbal Rorschach.
September 24th, 2024 12:55
sorenbarrett said:
I have a picture of sucking a thousand apples from the belly of a cave. Mental pictures that occure on occasion and phrases that occur as well. Most iteresting a verbal Rorschach.
September 24th, 2024 12:55
Today
Dan Williams said:
So much so well done. \"a face with a thousand land mines on it\'s chin\" or \"a beating heart in a flame-grilled silhouette.\", just excellent.
September 23rd, 2024 00:19
Dan Williams said:
So much so well done. \"a face with a thousand land mines on it\'s chin\" or \"a beating heart in a flame-grilled silhouette.\", just excellent.
September 23rd, 2024 00:19
Today
sorenbarrett said:
Here the message seems clear in the beginning but fades into the fog of the distance. A meta metaphor in that today seems clear but fades into tomorrow\'s fog. Yet today is the tomorrow of yesterday and all are one in time. Lovely Melvin
September 22nd, 2024 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Here the message seems clear in the beginning but fades into the fog of the distance. A meta metaphor in that today seems clear but fades into tomorrow\'s fog. Yet today is the tomorrow of yesterday and all are one in time. Lovely Melvin
September 22nd, 2024 05:48
Today
Teddy.15 said:
I know exactly who this one is for, oh so stunning, flawless imagery and oh my, a very special Sunday trip I suspect most Sundays to taken, soulmates forever. I love every line because you bring every last piece to life but these I love today, probably as I\'m a fan of stilton and very rarely find it here unless I go to look for it.
walking to the grave
with his stilton cheese
and a lovebite on his neck.
Even when a love bite is no longer visible sometimes on those very rare occasions it stays forever. 🌹 Happy Sunday my dear Melvin. Truly magnificent poetry my friend. 🌹
September 22nd, 2024 04:13
Teddy.15 said:
I know exactly who this one is for, oh so stunning, flawless imagery and oh my, a very special Sunday trip I suspect most Sundays to taken, soulmates forever. I love every line because you bring every last piece to life but these I love today, probably as I\'m a fan of stilton and very rarely find it here unless I go to look for it.
walking to the grave
with his stilton cheese
and a lovebite on his neck.
Even when a love bite is no longer visible sometimes on those very rare occasions it stays forever. 🌹 Happy Sunday my dear Melvin. Truly magnificent poetry my friend. 🌹
September 22nd, 2024 04:13
At Home On The Farm
Dan Williams said:
\"she is here again\" is the heart of this; then \"it is only when I spark I dare to dream\" nails it. Nice.
September 21st, 2024 00:19
Dan Williams said:
\"she is here again\" is the heart of this; then \"it is only when I spark I dare to dream\" nails it. Nice.
September 21st, 2024 00:19
From Kingdom Come
sorenbarrett said:
In obscure lines I felt clarity, in confusion understanding. This poem struck to the core of the outer limits of emotion. I loved the word play in (fucia\'s never read). The metaphor for age in (now the frost has capped my ears) is wonderful. I think my favorite line is (I am two miles shy of where I can not be) not only have I been there I think I am still there. A most wonderful poem and a Fav
September 20th, 2024 18:25
sorenbarrett said:
In obscure lines I felt clarity, in confusion understanding. This poem struck to the core of the outer limits of emotion. I loved the word play in (fucia\'s never read). The metaphor for age in (now the frost has capped my ears) is wonderful. I think my favorite line is (I am two miles shy of where I can not be) not only have I been there I think I am still there. A most wonderful poem and a Fav
September 20th, 2024 18:25
At Home On The Farm
Teddy.15 said:
Are you making sorrenbarret work? 🤣 Hey I\'m just going to say what came to mind the pensioners who have been left in the cold by the new government, but that may be the most potty analysis you have ever had, it just speaks to me. Absolutely beautiful in any case. 🌹
September 20th, 2024 07:32
Teddy.15 said:
Are you making sorrenbarret work? 🤣 Hey I\'m just going to say what came to mind the pensioners who have been left in the cold by the new government, but that may be the most potty analysis you have ever had, it just speaks to me. Absolutely beautiful in any case. 🌹
September 20th, 2024 07:32
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