Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
My Jericho, My Fable
sorenbarrett said:
Took this as a puzzle with the key 6 and 9 reading it such gives a different meaning. A fun read none the less.
January 3rd, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Took this as a puzzle with the key 6 and 9 reading it such gives a different meaning. A fun read none the less.
January 3rd, 2025 12:40
To Where I Must Return
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps this is what we call a thing of beauty. Really enjoyed every line of it
January 3rd, 2025 12:00
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps this is what we call a thing of beauty. Really enjoyed every line of it
January 3rd, 2025 12:00
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great work, my friend.
January 1st, 2025 20:47
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great work, my friend.
January 1st, 2025 20:47
Taurean Mass
Cassie58 said:
Always wonderful poetic expression in your work.
how far from the tree will the stellar
tide
ride with the pale wet leaves of a new/born calf?
You ask a question. I have no answers. I do however wish you a very happy and healthy new year Melvin. All the best.
January 1st, 2025 15:48
Cassie58 said:
Always wonderful poetic expression in your work.
how far from the tree will the stellar
tide
ride with the pale wet leaves of a new/born calf?
You ask a question. I have no answers. I do however wish you a very happy and healthy new year Melvin. All the best.
January 1st, 2025 15:48
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Bella Shepard said:
You provoke my thoughts, you challange my mind, you keep the gears turning. Thank you dear poet!
January 1st, 2025 10:33
Bella Shepard said:
You provoke my thoughts, you challange my mind, you keep the gears turning. Thank you dear poet!
January 1st, 2025 10:33
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deeply meaningful, profoundly thought-provoking, and perfect to kick the new year off with. Wonderful write, Melvin. I hope you have a brilliant new year, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 1st, 2025 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deeply meaningful, profoundly thought-provoking, and perfect to kick the new year off with. Wonderful write, Melvin. I hope you have a brilliant new year, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 1st, 2025 09:32
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Poetic Licence said:
A deep meaningful and thought provoking write, i enjoyed reading
January 1st, 2025 08:42
Poetic Licence said:
A deep meaningful and thought provoking write, i enjoyed reading
January 1st, 2025 08:42
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Teddy.15 said:
the positivity is profoundly beautiful,
Love these lines for the meaning and the imagery
we shall offer all our hunger
walk taller than the seven trees
Every line a kudos as your poetry always is.
🌹
January 1st, 2025 08:08
Teddy.15 said:
the positivity is profoundly beautiful,
Love these lines for the meaning and the imagery
we shall offer all our hunger
walk taller than the seven trees
Every line a kudos as your poetry always is.
🌹
January 1st, 2025 08:08
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are our own god and we are always hungry let not our beliefs separate us. A deep write and good advice
January 1st, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are our own god and we are always hungry let not our beliefs separate us. A deep write and good advice
January 1st, 2025 06:51
Taurean Mass
Teddy.15 said:
I see that expectation may have gone out the window in a good way, what will be will be. A very happy New year to you marvelous Melvin, this year is going to be one to remember for all the best reasons, peace and love always 🌹
January 1st, 2025 04:32
Teddy.15 said:
I see that expectation may have gone out the window in a good way, what will be will be. A very happy New year to you marvelous Melvin, this year is going to be one to remember for all the best reasons, peace and love always 🌹
January 1st, 2025 04:32
Taurean Mass
sorenbarrett said:
Mind boggling a fun read Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
Mind boggling a fun read Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 19:07
Taurean Mass
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, Happy New Year to you and all
December 31st, 2024 16:42
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, Happy New Year to you and all
December 31st, 2024 16:42
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
NafisaSB said:
\'be strong enough to listen to your heart\' resonates with me best in the above verse
great write
December 30th, 2024 23:58
NafisaSB said:
\'be strong enough to listen to your heart\' resonates with me best in the above verse
great write
December 30th, 2024 23:58
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my friend.
December 29th, 2024 20:13
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my friend.
December 29th, 2024 20:13
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a beautiful blend of nature and spirit! Love the imagery of “Let the Northern Star bring sunshine in a cup” - as always, you are so vivid! I also love the repetition of “Let all who still believe”, almost like a mantra. Wonderful job, Melvin! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 17:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a beautiful blend of nature and spirit! Love the imagery of “Let the Northern Star bring sunshine in a cup” - as always, you are so vivid! I also love the repetition of “Let all who still believe”, almost like a mantra. Wonderful job, Melvin! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 17:05
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem Melvin. I particularly like the following line:
Be strong enough to listen to your
heart.
I found hope here and new growth. Lovely.
December 29th, 2024 13:10
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem Melvin. I particularly like the following line:
Be strong enough to listen to your
heart.
I found hope here and new growth. Lovely.
December 29th, 2024 13:10
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Bella Shepard said:
Each time I read this poem aloud, I love it even more. \"Be strong enough to listen to your heart\", this is perfection. Beautiful!!!
December 29th, 2024 12:27
Bella Shepard said:
Each time I read this poem aloud, I love it even more. \"Be strong enough to listen to your heart\", this is perfection. Beautiful!!!
December 29th, 2024 12:27
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem reminding us to be positive as new shoots of peace, youth and health will grow. Really enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 07:26
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem reminding us to be positive as new shoots of peace, youth and health will grow. Really enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 07:26
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Teddy.15 said:
I see utter beauty in this dear Melvin, tundra found In the coldest of places, warm is your poem. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 07:07
Teddy.15 said:
I see utter beauty in this dear Melvin, tundra found In the coldest of places, warm is your poem. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 07:07
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an emotionally deep and melodic poem that leaves a pleasant reading impression.
December 29th, 2024 06:18
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an emotionally deep and melodic poem that leaves a pleasant reading impression.
December 29th, 2024 06:18
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
arqios said:
Under a blanket of frost I am imagining.
December 29th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
Under a blanket of frost I am imagining.
December 29th, 2024 05:51
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
sorenbarrett said:
To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing, youthful, healthy are all words that come to mind.
December 29th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing, youthful, healthy are all words that come to mind.
December 29th, 2024 05:39
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Turn tide and swim\"...indeed! LOL! I have never been to Bognor Regis, Melvin; however, I hope should I ever visit, I would not be so \"American\" as to warrant this response! 🤣 As for the poem, wonderfully done, my friend! 👏🌹
December 28th, 2024 14:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Turn tide and swim\"...indeed! LOL! I have never been to Bognor Regis, Melvin; however, I hope should I ever visit, I would not be so \"American\" as to warrant this response! 🤣 As for the poem, wonderfully done, my friend! 👏🌹
December 28th, 2024 14:08
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious, bognor, and what a magnificent seaside town it is dear melvin, I still have a scar from the last time I was there, this is so out of your comfort zone I suspect, kudos on the fun side, like you promised a new chapter. Keep your seagulls safe my dear friend. 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:53
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious, bognor, and what a magnificent seaside town it is dear melvin, I still have a scar from the last time I was there, this is so out of your comfort zone I suspect, kudos on the fun side, like you promised a new chapter. Keep your seagulls safe my dear friend. 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:53
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
sorenbarrett said:
Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend as enigmatic as Hellen Keller in the Louver.
December 28th, 2024 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend as enigmatic as Hellen Keller in the Louver.
December 28th, 2024 12:39
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Poetic Licence said:
A solid defence of a town, i think the seagulls will have a chuckle
December 28th, 2024 12:36
Poetic Licence said:
A solid defence of a town, i think the seagulls will have a chuckle
December 28th, 2024 12:36
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