Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem reminding us to be positive as new shoots of peace, youth and health will grow. Really enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 07:26
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem reminding us to be positive as new shoots of peace, youth and health will grow. Really enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 07:26
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Teddy.15 said:
I see utter beauty in this dear Melvin, tundra found In the coldest of places, warm is your poem. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 07:07
Teddy.15 said:
I see utter beauty in this dear Melvin, tundra found In the coldest of places, warm is your poem. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 07:07
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an emotionally deep and melodic poem that leaves a pleasant reading impression.
December 29th, 2024 06:18
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an emotionally deep and melodic poem that leaves a pleasant reading impression.
December 29th, 2024 06:18
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
arqios said:
Under a blanket of frost I am imagining.
December 29th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
Under a blanket of frost I am imagining.
December 29th, 2024 05:51
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
sorenbarrett said:
To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing, youthful, healthy are all words that come to mind.
December 29th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing, youthful, healthy are all words that come to mind.
December 29th, 2024 05:39
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Turn tide and swim\"...indeed! LOL! I have never been to Bognor Regis, Melvin; however, I hope should I ever visit, I would not be so \"American\" as to warrant this response! 🤣 As for the poem, wonderfully done, my friend! 👏🌹
December 28th, 2024 14:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Turn tide and swim\"...indeed! LOL! I have never been to Bognor Regis, Melvin; however, I hope should I ever visit, I would not be so \"American\" as to warrant this response! 🤣 As for the poem, wonderfully done, my friend! 👏🌹
December 28th, 2024 14:08
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious, bognor, and what a magnificent seaside town it is dear melvin, I still have a scar from the last time I was there, this is so out of your comfort zone I suspect, kudos on the fun side, like you promised a new chapter. Keep your seagulls safe my dear friend. 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:53
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious, bognor, and what a magnificent seaside town it is dear melvin, I still have a scar from the last time I was there, this is so out of your comfort zone I suspect, kudos on the fun side, like you promised a new chapter. Keep your seagulls safe my dear friend. 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:53
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
sorenbarrett said:
Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend as enigmatic as Hellen Keller in the Louver.
December 28th, 2024 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend as enigmatic as Hellen Keller in the Louver.
December 28th, 2024 12:39
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Poetic Licence said:
A solid defence of a town, i think the seagulls will have a chuckle
December 28th, 2024 12:36
Poetic Licence said:
A solid defence of a town, i think the seagulls will have a chuckle
December 28th, 2024 12:36
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Bella Shepard said:
Do not disturb the bliss of tranquility, if you cannot savor it. Lovely!
December 28th, 2024 11:59
Bella Shepard said:
Do not disturb the bliss of tranquility, if you cannot savor it. Lovely!
December 28th, 2024 11:59
To Where I Must Return
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So profoundly beautiful my dear friend. Indeed, she\'s strong and you are showing her how strong you are as well. Letting go and moving on is, perhaps, the hardest thing we can ever do...the hardest act that true love, eventually, calls us all to make (those of us fortunate enough to have that). My dear Melvin, I am crying as I write these words, because I know such love and cannot imagine the immense abyss you have had, and still continue to have to cross my friend. This poem is a foot down on something other than the all-consuming void that loss leaves in us. A most profoundly powerful and heartfelt write! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 16:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So profoundly beautiful my dear friend. Indeed, she\'s strong and you are showing her how strong you are as well. Letting go and moving on is, perhaps, the hardest thing we can ever do...the hardest act that true love, eventually, calls us all to make (those of us fortunate enough to have that). My dear Melvin, I am crying as I write these words, because I know such love and cannot imagine the immense abyss you have had, and still continue to have to cross my friend. This poem is a foot down on something other than the all-consuming void that loss leaves in us. A most profoundly powerful and heartfelt write! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 16:42
To Where I Must Return
Cassie58 said:
These wonderful lines are a return journey from the darkest darkest place into one which offers a glimmer of light and hope while grief is still present. Final three lines are incredibly touching. Wishing you peace Melvin.
December 26th, 2024 12:47
Cassie58 said:
These wonderful lines are a return journey from the darkest darkest place into one which offers a glimmer of light and hope while grief is still present. Final three lines are incredibly touching. Wishing you peace Melvin.
December 26th, 2024 12:47
To Where I Must Return
Poetic Licence said:
A tender , emotional and beautiful personal piece of writing
December 26th, 2024 12:04
Poetic Licence said:
A tender , emotional and beautiful personal piece of writing
December 26th, 2024 12:04
To Where I Must Return
Teddy.15 said:
Profoundly beautiful, tells the story of two soulmates one lost and the other after much mourning and grieving has finally found the peace back in his heart to move onto the next tomorrow. 🌹 My heart is aching reading this, as I know what your beloved wife meant and still means to you dear Melvin. Courage to accept and move forward simply never comes to all those who have lost a soulmate, you are one of a few. Total respect and wishes for the new year my dear friend. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 11:21
Teddy.15 said:
Profoundly beautiful, tells the story of two soulmates one lost and the other after much mourning and grieving has finally found the peace back in his heart to move onto the next tomorrow. 🌹 My heart is aching reading this, as I know what your beloved wife meant and still means to you dear Melvin. Courage to accept and move forward simply never comes to all those who have lost a soulmate, you are one of a few. Total respect and wishes for the new year my dear friend. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 11:21
Plethora Blue
Teddy.15 said:
I feel a coming back from the dead theme here, that\'s just my visions I see within this, imagery so very unique but so very easy to see. Kudos my dear friend Melvin. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 04:18
Teddy.15 said:
I feel a coming back from the dead theme here, that\'s just my visions I see within this, imagery so very unique but so very easy to see. Kudos my dear friend Melvin. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 04:18
Plethora Blue
sorenbarrett said:
A Kaleidoscope of images that change with each rotation. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2024 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
A Kaleidoscope of images that change with each rotation. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2024 03:20
Plethora Blue
sorenbarrett said:
A Kaleidoscope of images that change with each rotation. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2024 03:16
sorenbarrett said:
A Kaleidoscope of images that change with each rotation. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2024 03:16
Plethora Blue
2781 said:
Because of the savor of thy good ointments thy name is as an ointment poured forth, therefore do thee virgin\'s love thee.
December 24th, 2024 21:10
2781 said:
Because of the savor of thy good ointments thy name is as an ointment poured forth, therefore do thee virgin\'s love thee.
December 24th, 2024 21:10
What Is This I See?
Cassie58 said:
will it float my soul to heaven
or dare me grieve as satan stares me down?
What a contrast here. I felt a soul in distress. There is pain. There are thorns and there is much darkness here.
Dear Melvin, wishing you softer and kinder dreams and light to shine your pathway ahead 🌹
Wonderful poetry, so deep.
December 22nd, 2024 23:56
Cassie58 said:
will it float my soul to heaven
or dare me grieve as satan stares me down?
What a contrast here. I felt a soul in distress. There is pain. There are thorns and there is much darkness here.
Dear Melvin, wishing you softer and kinder dreams and light to shine your pathway ahead 🌹
Wonderful poetry, so deep.
December 22nd, 2024 23:56
What Is This I See?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh…dear Melvin! I can feel the pain, grief and loss in every word! Well done on the poem. 🌹👏 Sending you ❤️ and 🤗 as askl!
December 22nd, 2024 17:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh…dear Melvin! I can feel the pain, grief and loss in every word! Well done on the poem. 🌹👏 Sending you ❤️ and 🤗 as askl!
December 22nd, 2024 17:47
What Is This I See?
Teddy.15 said:
I feel a soul that simply cannot rest, and it\'s yours, I see on the right side of your bed that true love, both of you stuck in limbo from two sides of this. I find this incredibly romantic and also excruciating because I feel that pain that you would do anything to be with her, it\'s Christmas it\'s hard. You are loved my dear Melvin, you are always loved. 🌹
December 22nd, 2024 14:47
Teddy.15 said:
I feel a soul that simply cannot rest, and it\'s yours, I see on the right side of your bed that true love, both of you stuck in limbo from two sides of this. I find this incredibly romantic and also excruciating because I feel that pain that you would do anything to be with her, it\'s Christmas it\'s hard. You are loved my dear Melvin, you are always loved. 🌹
December 22nd, 2024 14:47
What Is This I See?
Poetic Licence said:
I read this as being plagued by a recurring nightmare at times offering a little hope to escape it, but then that hope quickly fading and back to the nightmare. I am probably wrong as it`s intended meaning, but have really enjoyed reading it as it has made think, thank you
December 22nd, 2024 13:41
Poetic Licence said:
I read this as being plagued by a recurring nightmare at times offering a little hope to escape it, but then that hope quickly fading and back to the nightmare. I am probably wrong as it`s intended meaning, but have really enjoyed reading it as it has made think, thank you
December 22nd, 2024 13:41
What Is This I See?
Bella Shepard said:
I feel in your words the clash of emotions that bombard us continuously. Can we ever trust what we see? Enigmatic at best, self fullfilling at worst. You stir the pot of self doubt with a dolop of hope to create this delectable dish. Kudos!
December 22nd, 2024 13:13
Bella Shepard said:
I feel in your words the clash of emotions that bombard us continuously. Can we ever trust what we see? Enigmatic at best, self fullfilling at worst. You stir the pot of self doubt with a dolop of hope to create this delectable dish. Kudos!
December 22nd, 2024 13:13
What Is This I See?
sorenbarrett said:
A dark dream or visions of a nightmare it calls out with haunting images
December 22nd, 2024 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
A dark dream or visions of a nightmare it calls out with haunting images
December 22nd, 2024 12:31
No Taller Than A Tulip
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal feel to this poem dark and a bit angry it shows disdane and cynacism. Some really good lines of incompatable images that create tension. Lovely
December 15th, 2024 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
A seasonal feel to this poem dark and a bit angry it shows disdane and cynacism. Some really good lines of incompatable images that create tension. Lovely
December 15th, 2024 07:49
No Taller Than A Tulip
Teddy.15 said:
Poetry from the soul of a true poet, I can\'t choose a favourite line each line pulls the reader into a state of extraordinary imagery I feel the palpitations of a soul trying to burst through the gates of darkness into the spirit of the season, so very clever indeed dearest Melvin. 🌹 Exquisite poetry as always.
December 13th, 2024 01:08
Teddy.15 said:
Poetry from the soul of a true poet, I can\'t choose a favourite line each line pulls the reader into a state of extraordinary imagery I feel the palpitations of a soul trying to burst through the gates of darkness into the spirit of the season, so very clever indeed dearest Melvin. 🌹 Exquisite poetry as always.
December 13th, 2024 01:08
No Taller Than A Tulip
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I just love the dark imagery in your poems Melvin. For instance, \"speaking German in a gas mask\", immediately draws up images of the holocaust and \"we dead are sound asleep\". That and the stream-of-consciousness style makes this, dear friend, a poem that invites and rewards multiple reads. Well done! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 19:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I just love the dark imagery in your poems Melvin. For instance, \"speaking German in a gas mask\", immediately draws up images of the holocaust and \"we dead are sound asleep\". That and the stream-of-consciousness style makes this, dear friend, a poem that invites and rewards multiple reads. Well done! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 19:34
No Taller Than A Tulip
sorenbarrett said:
So many great images and lines I concoct surreal hypotheses only to be shot down.
December 12th, 2024 17:10
sorenbarrett said:
So many great images and lines I concoct surreal hypotheses only to be shot down.
December 12th, 2024 17:10
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