Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
A Saucer Full Of Cabriolet
Teddy.15 said:
I find much nostalgia in this one dearest Melvin, as always a wonderful read. 🌹
August 6th, 2024 01:26
Teddy.15 said:
I find much nostalgia in this one dearest Melvin, as always a wonderful read. 🌹
August 6th, 2024 01:26
A Saucer Full Of Cabriolet
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of language. I sound like a broken record. Lol. Great work.
August 5th, 2024 18:39
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of language. I sound like a broken record. Lol. Great work.
August 5th, 2024 18:39
A Saucer Full Of Cabriolet
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic this one requires several readings and a key to unlock its secrets. Most interesting imagery
August 5th, 2024 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic this one requires several readings and a key to unlock its secrets. Most interesting imagery
August 5th, 2024 16:16
How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime.
Dan Williams said:
So many good lines to pick from, like \"the seventh earl of constant shade and myth still spreads his wings of thyme and hyacinth\". Very well done.
August 4th, 2024 23:46
Dan Williams said:
So many good lines to pick from, like \"the seventh earl of constant shade and myth still spreads his wings of thyme and hyacinth\". Very well done.
August 4th, 2024 23:46
How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime.
Teddy.15 said:
We all see what we want to see but all is never as it seems, no one can ever truly see the soul of another all the triumphs and all the disappointments and all the pain. A magnificent piece of poetry. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 16:48
Teddy.15 said:
We all see what we want to see but all is never as it seems, no one can ever truly see the soul of another all the triumphs and all the disappointments and all the pain. A magnificent piece of poetry. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 16:48
How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime.
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. Powerful work.
August 4th, 2024 13:28
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. Powerful work.
August 4th, 2024 13:28
How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime.
Bella Shepard said:
I feel somehow this poem hints of an evolution yet incomplete, just the feeling it gives me, I may be way off. But I love the thought provoking essence of it. A mind bender of the first magnitude.
August 4th, 2024 12:34
Bella Shepard said:
I feel somehow this poem hints of an evolution yet incomplete, just the feeling it gives me, I may be way off. But I love the thought provoking essence of it. A mind bender of the first magnitude.
August 4th, 2024 12:34
How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime.
sorenbarrett said:
A gratifying but enigmatic word combination requiring a key to unlock the puzzle. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
A gratifying but enigmatic word combination requiring a key to unlock the puzzle. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:23
Just One Piece, And Not One Penny More.
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language.
August 2nd, 2024 17:33
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language.
August 2nd, 2024 17:33
While The Good Shepherds Grieve
Sydney Zane said:
This is really good. :)
The spiritual themes are very impactful.
July 31st, 2024 19:30
Sydney Zane said:
This is really good. :)
The spiritual themes are very impactful.
July 31st, 2024 19:30
While The Good Shepherds Grieve
Bella Shepard said:
I like the play of opposites here, a strong underpinning for this poem that for me supports the folly of our beliefs. Good write my friend!
July 31st, 2024 13:43
Bella Shepard said:
I like the play of opposites here, a strong underpinning for this poem that for me supports the folly of our beliefs. Good write my friend!
July 31st, 2024 13:43
While The Good Shepherds Grieve
sorenbarrett said:
A delicious display of images like pieces from a puzzle
July 31st, 2024 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A delicious display of images like pieces from a puzzle
July 31st, 2024 11:57
I Will Have To Ask My Mother First
Cassie58 said:
There is love for your mother in these lines, laden with beautiful imagery. I have an affinity with trees. My mother baked a great apple pie too. Crisp pastry and cloves in the layers of apple. A fine read.Melvin. Most enjoyed.
July 29th, 2024 21:37
Cassie58 said:
There is love for your mother in these lines, laden with beautiful imagery. I have an affinity with trees. My mother baked a great apple pie too. Crisp pastry and cloves in the layers of apple. A fine read.Melvin. Most enjoyed.
July 29th, 2024 21:37
From Where It Came
Teddy.15 said:
I see love and compassion but that\'s just me. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 16:33
Teddy.15 said:
I see love and compassion but that\'s just me. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 16:33
From Where It Came
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic full of imagery that hides and holds the keys to meaning. A great read
July 29th, 2024 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic full of imagery that hides and holds the keys to meaning. A great read
July 29th, 2024 13:24
I Will Have To Ask My Mother First
Teddy.15 said:
Awe my dear Melvin what a wonderful poem, your last line kudos. Filled with emotion. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 02:44
Teddy.15 said:
Awe my dear Melvin what a wonderful poem, your last line kudos. Filled with emotion. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 02:44
I Will Have To Ask My Mother First
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
my friend!!
Very evocative!
Love the song you picked,
a captivating poem
from beginning to end! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 28th, 2024 22:34
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
my friend!!
Very evocative!
Love the song you picked,
a captivating poem
from beginning to end! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 28th, 2024 22:34
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
sorenbarrett said:
So many songs drift in free association, bits and pieces of memories. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
So many songs drift in free association, bits and pieces of memories. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 04:57
Hello, My Brother Gemini
sorenbarrett said:
Great images paint this piece and hanging metaphors surround the reader. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
Great images paint this piece and hanging metaphors surround the reader. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 06:02
Just One Piece, And Not One Penny More.
Teddy.15 said:
Wow there is a game of chess in this one. How very poetic love the last stanza it\'s so powerful. 🌹
July 26th, 2024 02:45
Teddy.15 said:
Wow there is a game of chess in this one. How very poetic love the last stanza it\'s so powerful. 🌹
July 26th, 2024 02:45
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Dan Williams said:
\"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice work.
July 25th, 2024 00:14
Dan Williams said:
\"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice work.
July 25th, 2024 00:14
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. You paint this scene so well.
July 24th, 2024 21:33
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. You paint this scene so well.
July 24th, 2024 21:33
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought a tear to me with this one my dear friend, solemnly beautiful, if there is only ever to be one thing left then let it be these memories that can take you back to a time where you remember who you once were. 🌹
July 24th, 2024 15:43
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought a tear to me with this one my dear friend, solemnly beautiful, if there is only ever to be one thing left then let it be these memories that can take you back to a time where you remember who you once were. 🌹
July 24th, 2024 15:43
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness and longing of this beautiful elegy cannot help but touch the heart of those who read it, I know it had a very powerful effect on me.
July 24th, 2024 12:33
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness and longing of this beautiful elegy cannot help but touch the heart of those who read it, I know it had a very powerful effect on me.
July 24th, 2024 12:33
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