Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime.
Bella Shepard said:
I feel somehow this poem hints of an evolution yet incomplete, just the feeling it gives me, I may be way off. But I love the thought provoking essence of it. A mind bender of the first magnitude.
August 4th, 2024 12:34
Bella Shepard said:
I feel somehow this poem hints of an evolution yet incomplete, just the feeling it gives me, I may be way off. But I love the thought provoking essence of it. A mind bender of the first magnitude.
August 4th, 2024 12:34
How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime.
sorenbarrett said:
A gratifying but enigmatic word combination requiring a key to unlock the puzzle. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
A gratifying but enigmatic word combination requiring a key to unlock the puzzle. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:23
Just One Piece, And Not One Penny More.
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language.
August 2nd, 2024 17:33
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language.
August 2nd, 2024 17:33
While The Good Shepherds Grieve
Sydney Zane said:
This is really good. :)
The spiritual themes are very impactful.
July 31st, 2024 19:30
Sydney Zane said:
This is really good. :)
The spiritual themes are very impactful.
July 31st, 2024 19:30
While The Good Shepherds Grieve
Bella Shepard said:
I like the play of opposites here, a strong underpinning for this poem that for me supports the folly of our beliefs. Good write my friend!
July 31st, 2024 13:43
Bella Shepard said:
I like the play of opposites here, a strong underpinning for this poem that for me supports the folly of our beliefs. Good write my friend!
July 31st, 2024 13:43
While The Good Shepherds Grieve
sorenbarrett said:
A delicious display of images like pieces from a puzzle
July 31st, 2024 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A delicious display of images like pieces from a puzzle
July 31st, 2024 11:57
I Will Have To Ask My Mother First
Cassie58 said:
There is love for your mother in these lines, laden with beautiful imagery. I have an affinity with trees. My mother baked a great apple pie too. Crisp pastry and cloves in the layers of apple. A fine read.Melvin. Most enjoyed.
July 29th, 2024 21:37
Cassie58 said:
There is love for your mother in these lines, laden with beautiful imagery. I have an affinity with trees. My mother baked a great apple pie too. Crisp pastry and cloves in the layers of apple. A fine read.Melvin. Most enjoyed.
July 29th, 2024 21:37
From Where It Came
Teddy.15 said:
I see love and compassion but that\'s just me. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 16:33
Teddy.15 said:
I see love and compassion but that\'s just me. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 16:33
From Where It Came
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic full of imagery that hides and holds the keys to meaning. A great read
July 29th, 2024 13:24
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic full of imagery that hides and holds the keys to meaning. A great read
July 29th, 2024 13:24
I Will Have To Ask My Mother First
Teddy.15 said:
Awe my dear Melvin what a wonderful poem, your last line kudos. Filled with emotion. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 02:44
Teddy.15 said:
Awe my dear Melvin what a wonderful poem, your last line kudos. Filled with emotion. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 02:44
I Will Have To Ask My Mother First
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
my friend!!
Very evocative!
Love the song you picked,
a captivating poem
from beginning to end! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 28th, 2024 22:34
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
my friend!!
Very evocative!
Love the song you picked,
a captivating poem
from beginning to end! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 28th, 2024 22:34
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
sorenbarrett said:
So many songs drift in free association, bits and pieces of memories. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
So many songs drift in free association, bits and pieces of memories. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 04:57
Hello, My Brother Gemini
sorenbarrett said:
Great images paint this piece and hanging metaphors surround the reader. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
Great images paint this piece and hanging metaphors surround the reader. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 06:02
Just One Piece, And Not One Penny More.
Teddy.15 said:
Wow there is a game of chess in this one. How very poetic love the last stanza it\'s so powerful. 🌹
July 26th, 2024 02:45
Teddy.15 said:
Wow there is a game of chess in this one. How very poetic love the last stanza it\'s so powerful. 🌹
July 26th, 2024 02:45
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Dan Williams said:
\"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice work.
July 25th, 2024 00:14
Dan Williams said:
\"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice work.
July 25th, 2024 00:14
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. You paint this scene so well.
July 24th, 2024 21:33
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. You paint this scene so well.
July 24th, 2024 21:33
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought a tear to me with this one my dear friend, solemnly beautiful, if there is only ever to be one thing left then let it be these memories that can take you back to a time where you remember who you once were. 🌹
July 24th, 2024 15:43
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought a tear to me with this one my dear friend, solemnly beautiful, if there is only ever to be one thing left then let it be these memories that can take you back to a time where you remember who you once were. 🌹
July 24th, 2024 15:43
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness and longing of this beautiful elegy cannot help but touch the heart of those who read it, I know it had a very powerful effect on me.
July 24th, 2024 12:33
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness and longing of this beautiful elegy cannot help but touch the heart of those who read it, I know it had a very powerful effect on me.
July 24th, 2024 12:33
One Quarter Of A Half
sorenbarrett said:
Each line provocative and enigmatic I think I could spend a quarter to a half of my life decoding it. But then I\'m a bit thick and slow. Loved it
July 24th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Each line provocative and enigmatic I think I could spend a quarter to a half of my life decoding it. But then I\'m a bit thick and slow. Loved it
July 24th, 2024 07:03
One Quarter Of A Half
orchidee said:
And now my poem - not pinching your words - \'A Quarter\'. i.e. A quarter of a half! lol.
July 24th, 2024 01:51
orchidee said:
And now my poem - not pinching your words - \'A Quarter\'. i.e. A quarter of a half! lol.
July 24th, 2024 01:51
One Quarter Of A Half
Teddy.15 said:
Your titles are always key to your poetry, all I see are ashes, but that may just be because I know your work. Tomorrow for soulmates is already here because one can never move on. There is no one better nor more rewarding. 🌹 Love your work my dear Melvin ❤️
July 23rd, 2024 15:45
Teddy.15 said:
Your titles are always key to your poetry, all I see are ashes, but that may just be because I know your work. Tomorrow for soulmates is already here because one can never move on. There is no one better nor more rewarding. 🌹 Love your work my dear Melvin ❤️
July 23rd, 2024 15:45
To Where The Seven Horses Run
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful imagery.
July 22nd, 2024 17:58
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful imagery.
July 22nd, 2024 17:58
To Where The Seven Horses Run
Teddy.15 said:
lol just brilliantly executed, I cannot help but think of the number of the devil, but your title is phenominal and yes wild horses also relatable in my life. Melvin, I\'m at the sea I\'m really well but every time I read a line of Sylvia it simply sends my muse I to overdrive. Thank you. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 13:46
Teddy.15 said:
lol just brilliantly executed, I cannot help but think of the number of the devil, but your title is phenominal and yes wild horses also relatable in my life. Melvin, I\'m at the sea I\'m really well but every time I read a line of Sylvia it simply sends my muse I to overdrive. Thank you. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 13:46
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