Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
My Jericho, My Fable
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I absolutely am a fan of how image rich and descriptive you are Melvin! A mighty fine write! ๐น๐
January 3rd, 2025 13:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! I absolutely am a fan of how image rich and descriptive you are Melvin! A mighty fine write! ๐น๐
January 3rd, 2025 13:44
My Jericho, My Fable
sorenbarrett said:
Took this as a puzzle with the key 6 and 9 reading it such gives a different meaning. A fun read none the less.
January 3rd, 2025 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
Took this as a puzzle with the key 6 and 9 reading it such gives a different meaning. A fun read none the less.
January 3rd, 2025 12:40
To Where I Must Return
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps this is what we call a thing of beauty. Really enjoyed every line of it
January 3rd, 2025 12:00
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps this is what we call a thing of beauty. Really enjoyed every line of it
January 3rd, 2025 12:00
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great work, my friend.
January 1st, 2025 20:47
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and poignant. Great work, my friend.
January 1st, 2025 20:47
Taurean Mass
Cassie58 said:
Always wonderful poetic expression in your work.
how far from the tree will the stellar
tide
ride with the pale wet leaves of a new/born calf?
You ask a question. I have no answers. I do however wish you a very happy and healthy new year Melvin. All the best.
January 1st, 2025 15:48
Cassie58 said:
Always wonderful poetic expression in your work.
how far from the tree will the stellar
tide
ride with the pale wet leaves of a new/born calf?
You ask a question. I have no answers. I do however wish you a very happy and healthy new year Melvin. All the best.
January 1st, 2025 15:48
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Bella Shepard said:
You provoke my thoughts, you challange my mind, you keep the gears turning. Thank you dear poet!
January 1st, 2025 10:33
Bella Shepard said:
You provoke my thoughts, you challange my mind, you keep the gears turning. Thank you dear poet!
January 1st, 2025 10:33
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deeply meaningful, profoundly thought-provoking, and perfect to kick the new year off with. Wonderful write, Melvin. I hope you have a brilliant new year, my friend! โค๏ธ๐
January 1st, 2025 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Deeply meaningful, profoundly thought-provoking, and perfect to kick the new year off with. Wonderful write, Melvin. I hope you have a brilliant new year, my friend! โค๏ธ๐
January 1st, 2025 09:32
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Poetic Licence said:
A deep meaningful and thought provoking write, i enjoyed reading
January 1st, 2025 08:42
Poetic Licence said:
A deep meaningful and thought provoking write, i enjoyed reading
January 1st, 2025 08:42
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
Teddy.15 said:
the positivity is profoundly beautiful,
Love these lines for the meaning and the imagery
we shall offer all our hunger
walk taller than the seven trees
Every line a kudos as your poetry always is.
๐น
January 1st, 2025 08:08
Teddy.15 said:
the positivity is profoundly beautiful,
Love these lines for the meaning and the imagery
we shall offer all our hunger
walk taller than the seven trees
Every line a kudos as your poetry always is.
๐น
January 1st, 2025 08:08
Who Hoards Upon Our Pale White Streets?
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are our own god and we are always hungry let not our beliefs separate us. A deep write and good advice
January 1st, 2025 06:51
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are our own god and we are always hungry let not our beliefs separate us. A deep write and good advice
January 1st, 2025 06:51
Taurean Mass
Teddy.15 said:
I see that expectation may have gone out the window in a good way, what will be will be. A very happy New year to you marvelous Melvin, this year is going to be one to remember for all the best reasons, peace and love always ๐น
January 1st, 2025 04:32
Teddy.15 said:
I see that expectation may have gone out the window in a good way, what will be will be. A very happy New year to you marvelous Melvin, this year is going to be one to remember for all the best reasons, peace and love always ๐น
January 1st, 2025 04:32
Taurean Mass
sorenbarrett said:
Mind boggling a fun read Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
Mind boggling a fun read Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 19:07
Taurean Mass
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, Happy New Year to you and all
December 31st, 2024 16:42
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, Happy New Year to you and all
December 31st, 2024 16:42
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
NafisaSB said:
\'be strong enough to listen to your heart\' resonates with me best in the above verse
great write
December 30th, 2024 23:58
NafisaSB said:
\'be strong enough to listen to your heart\' resonates with me best in the above verse
great write
December 30th, 2024 23:58
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my friend.
December 29th, 2024 20:13
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my friend.
December 29th, 2024 20:13
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a beautiful blend of nature and spirit! Love the imagery of โLet the Northern Star bring sunshine in a cupโ - as always, you are so vivid! I also love the repetition of โLet all who still believeโ, almost like a mantra. Wonderful job, Melvin! ๐น๐
December 29th, 2024 17:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a beautiful blend of nature and spirit! Love the imagery of โLet the Northern Star bring sunshine in a cupโ - as always, you are so vivid! I also love the repetition of โLet all who still believeโ, almost like a mantra. Wonderful job, Melvin! ๐น๐
December 29th, 2024 17:05
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem Melvin. I particularly like the following line:
Be strong enough to listen to your
heart.
I found hope here and new growth. Lovely.
December 29th, 2024 13:10
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem Melvin. I particularly like the following line:
Be strong enough to listen to your
heart.
I found hope here and new growth. Lovely.
December 29th, 2024 13:10
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Bella Shepard said:
Each time I read this poem aloud, I love it even more. \"Be strong enough to listen to your heart\", this is perfection. Beautiful!!!
December 29th, 2024 12:27
Bella Shepard said:
Each time I read this poem aloud, I love it even more. \"Be strong enough to listen to your heart\", this is perfection. Beautiful!!!
December 29th, 2024 12:27
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem reminding us to be positive as new shoots of peace, youth and health will grow. Really enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 07:26
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful poem reminding us to be positive as new shoots of peace, youth and health will grow. Really enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 07:26
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Teddy.15 said:
I see utter beauty in this dear Melvin, tundra found In the coldest of places, warm is your poem. ๐น
December 29th, 2024 07:07
Teddy.15 said:
I see utter beauty in this dear Melvin, tundra found In the coldest of places, warm is your poem. ๐น
December 29th, 2024 07:07
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an emotionally deep and melodic poem that leaves a pleasant reading impression.
December 29th, 2024 06:18
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an emotionally deep and melodic poem that leaves a pleasant reading impression.
December 29th, 2024 06:18
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
arqios said:
Under a blanket of frost I am imagining.
December 29th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
Under a blanket of frost I am imagining.
December 29th, 2024 05:51
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
sorenbarrett said:
To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing, youthful, healthy are all words that come to mind.
December 29th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing, youthful, healthy are all words that come to mind.
December 29th, 2024 05:39
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Turn tide and swim\"...indeed! LOL! I have never been to Bognor Regis, Melvin; however, I hope should I ever visit, I would not be so \"American\" as to warrant this response! ๐คฃ As for the poem, wonderfully done, my friend! ๐๐น
December 28th, 2024 14:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Turn tide and swim\"...indeed! LOL! I have never been to Bognor Regis, Melvin; however, I hope should I ever visit, I would not be so \"American\" as to warrant this response! ๐คฃ As for the poem, wonderfully done, my friend! ๐๐น
December 28th, 2024 14:08
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious, bognor, and what a magnificent seaside town it is dear melvin, I still have a scar from the last time I was there, this is so out of your comfort zone I suspect, kudos on the fun side, like you promised a new chapter. Keep your seagulls safe my dear friend. ๐น
December 28th, 2024 13:53
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious, bognor, and what a magnificent seaside town it is dear melvin, I still have a scar from the last time I was there, this is so out of your comfort zone I suspect, kudos on the fun side, like you promised a new chapter. Keep your seagulls safe my dear friend. ๐น
December 28th, 2024 13:53
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
sorenbarrett said:
Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend as enigmatic as Hellen Keller in the Louver.
December 28th, 2024 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend as enigmatic as Hellen Keller in the Louver.
December 28th, 2024 12:39
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