They Are Not You
Dan Williams said:


\'sad bone\'s piccolo\" - great

July 16th, 2024 00:05

They Are Not You
Cassie58 said:

the black rook reels me in

The mood here is heavy in this piece with perhaps thoughts of those now departed. I read several times. You create an ambience of quiet, solemn reflection. I find your poetic expression always refreshingly original Melvin. Thank you for sharing.





July 15th, 2024 14:26

Above The Water-Mark
Bella Shepard said:

Dark and sinister, you pait a picture, with wonderful imagery, of what is pervasive in our sad world. We do \"wait with baited breath\", we must. A very powerful write my friend!

July 15th, 2024 08:34

From Back To Front It Seems
Teddy.15 said:

Wow Melvin this is such a magnificent piece.
bad weather days where

sways our quantum steps

an anger from the footsteps of an ox

Love these lines dear friend. A powerful and beautiful poetic art. 🌹

July 14th, 2024 03:07

From Back To Front It Seems
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow, your poem is captivating! The free-flowing style and vivid imagery create a dreamlike quality that\'s truly engaging. I especially love the \"mushroom heart\" metaphor - it\'s so evocative. Your unique voice shines through, blending abstract concepts with concrete details beautifully. Your style is refreshingly original! Thanks for sharing!

July 13th, 2024 22:46

To Accommodate This Mind
Cassie58 said:

I especially love the wording in your final stanza Melvin. A fine piece of poetry. Much enjoyed. Have a happy weekend.

July 12th, 2024 13:38

To Accommodate This Mind
Teddy.15 said:

who knows which is brighter than a word.

let rave the dance of leprechaun and ghost

This is wonderful a profound

Hey top of the morning dearest Melvin, you know a Gentleman who is lost will always find his way in the end. You are one of my most inspiring poets Sir. 🌹

July 11th, 2024 02:31

Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Thomas W Case said:

I love your imagery and the way you pain this picture. Truly brilliant.

July 10th, 2024 14:14

Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Teddy.15 said:

So very powerful and brilliant. Beautiful last lines. 🌹

July 10th, 2024 05:32

Your Miracle, My Vinegar
Teddy.15 said:

If anyone deserves an Angel dearest Melvin, it\'s you, and I believe you have your fair share, solid ground is where you write your best poetry dearest of friends and one of my truest inspirations, always from the heart.
🌹 💙

July 9th, 2024 01:33

butterflies and budgerigar\'s 
Teddy.15 said:

Kudos on your title, and my goodness so much to chew on, imagery simply magnificent. I find myself answering in my own mind things aren\'t always in our control. Amazing how you can talk to your reader dear Melvin. 🌹

July 8th, 2024 12:20

No Ordinary Thing
Teddy.15 said:

And you my love, a superb poet. 🌹

July 7th, 2024 05:30

Boom. Boom. Boom.
Thad Wilk said:

Awesomazing write!!
Your stunning
creative poetic
talent never
will
cease to daze
and amaze! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad

July 4th, 2024 19:50

How Many Times it Turns
Teddy.15 said:

The very thought of this imagery

through the sunshine of a chair

that every day stood silent as it grieved

Sends my mind into deep deep reflection, .my mother had an arm chair that was kept as was filled with teddy bears for a very very long time. Your lines have the most powerful yet unique tone and speak to me loudly and of course your last lines marvelous powerful and full of fabulous imagery. 🌹

July 3rd, 2024 14:48

Wallflower Green
Alan R said:

he knows best when he knows less of me...this is a really beautiful line!

July 2nd, 2024 00:43