Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
From Back To Front It Seems
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Melvin this is such a magnificent piece.
bad weather days where
sways our quantum steps
an anger from the footsteps of an ox
Love these lines dear friend. A powerful and beautiful poetic art. š¹
July 14th, 2024 03:07
Teddy.15 said:
Wow Melvin this is such a magnificent piece.
bad weather days where
sways our quantum steps
an anger from the footsteps of an ox
Love these lines dear friend. A powerful and beautiful poetic art. š¹
July 14th, 2024 03:07
Above The Water-Mark
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dear Melvin, last lines always so powerful. š¹
July 14th, 2024 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful dear Melvin, last lines always so powerful. š¹
July 14th, 2024 03:01
From Back To Front It Seems
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, your poem is captivating! The free-flowing style and vivid imagery create a dreamlike quality that\'s truly engaging. I especially love the \"mushroom heart\" metaphor - it\'s so evocative. Your unique voice shines through, blending abstract concepts with concrete details beautifully. Your style is refreshingly original! Thanks for sharing!
July 13th, 2024 22:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, your poem is captivating! The free-flowing style and vivid imagery create a dreamlike quality that\'s truly engaging. I especially love the \"mushroom heart\" metaphor - it\'s so evocative. Your unique voice shines through, blending abstract concepts with concrete details beautifully. Your style is refreshingly original! Thanks for sharing!
July 13th, 2024 22:46
To Accommodate This Mind
Cassie58 said:
I especially love the wording in your final stanza Melvin. A fine piece of poetry. Much enjoyed. Have a happy weekend.
July 12th, 2024 13:38
Cassie58 said:
I especially love the wording in your final stanza Melvin. A fine piece of poetry. Much enjoyed. Have a happy weekend.
July 12th, 2024 13:38
To Accommodate This Mind
Thomas W Case said:
As good as it gets. Superb work, my friend.
July 11th, 2024 22:59
Thomas W Case said:
As good as it gets. Superb work, my friend.
July 11th, 2024 22:59
To Accommodate This Mind
Teddy.15 said:
who knows which is brighter than a word.
let rave the dance of leprechaun and ghost
This is wonderful a profound
Hey top of the morning dearest Melvin, you know a Gentleman who is lost will always find his way in the end. You are one of my most inspiring poets Sir. š¹
July 11th, 2024 02:31
Teddy.15 said:
who knows which is brighter than a word.
let rave the dance of leprechaun and ghost
This is wonderful a profound
Hey top of the morning dearest Melvin, you know a Gentleman who is lost will always find his way in the end. You are one of my most inspiring poets Sir. š¹
July 11th, 2024 02:31
Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
another beauty that
showcases your
amazing poetic talents!
Thank you for sharing
with us,, much enjoyed!!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 10th, 2024 15:37
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic poem,
another beauty that
showcases your
amazing poetic talents!
Thank you for sharing
with us,, much enjoyed!!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 10th, 2024 15:37
Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Thomas W Case said:
I love your imagery and the way you pain this picture. Truly brilliant.
July 10th, 2024 14:14
Thomas W Case said:
I love your imagery and the way you pain this picture. Truly brilliant.
July 10th, 2024 14:14
Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Neville said:
a most impressive poem and with such great depth, it resonates .. furthermore, I have an issue with geese every year both when they are arriving in magnificent skeins and on their noisy departure .. they blitzkrieg our old house with all manner of regurgitated fruit and vegetables .. tis terribly dangerous and otherwise disconcerting my friend .. Neville
July 10th, 2024 09:19
Neville said:
a most impressive poem and with such great depth, it resonates .. furthermore, I have an issue with geese every year both when they are arriving in magnificent skeins and on their noisy departure .. they blitzkrieg our old house with all manner of regurgitated fruit and vegetables .. tis terribly dangerous and otherwise disconcerting my friend .. Neville
July 10th, 2024 09:19
Better Now The Geese Are Gone
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful and brilliant. Beautiful last lines. š¹
July 10th, 2024 05:32
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful and brilliant. Beautiful last lines. š¹
July 10th, 2024 05:32
Your Miracle, My Vinegar
orchidee said:
Good write M.
I thought it was gonna be about vinegar as some miracle cleaner, getting stains out, etc! lol.
July 9th, 2024 04:53
orchidee said:
Good write M.
I thought it was gonna be about vinegar as some miracle cleaner, getting stains out, etc! lol.
July 9th, 2024 04:53
Your Miracle, My Vinegar
Teddy.15 said:
If anyone deserves an Angel dearest Melvin, it\'s you, and I believe you have your fair share, solid ground is where you write your best poetry dearest of friends and one of my truest inspirations, always from the heart.
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July 9th, 2024 01:33
Teddy.15 said:
If anyone deserves an Angel dearest Melvin, it\'s you, and I believe you have your fair share, solid ground is where you write your best poetry dearest of friends and one of my truest inspirations, always from the heart.
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July 9th, 2024 01:33
butterflies and budgerigar\'sĀ
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I love the style of this.
July 8th, 2024 19:02
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. I love the style of this.
July 8th, 2024 19:02
butterflies and budgerigar\'sĀ
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos on your title, and my goodness so much to chew on, imagery simply magnificent. I find myself answering in my own mind things aren\'t always in our control. Amazing how you can talk to your reader dear Melvin. š¹
July 8th, 2024 12:20
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos on your title, and my goodness so much to chew on, imagery simply magnificent. I find myself answering in my own mind things aren\'t always in our control. Amazing how you can talk to your reader dear Melvin. š¹
July 8th, 2024 12:20
Boom. Boom. Boom.
Teddy.15 said:
I found myself chuckling dear Melvin, loved every bit of imagery š¹
July 5th, 2024 04:01
Teddy.15 said:
I found myself chuckling dear Melvin, loved every bit of imagery š¹
July 5th, 2024 04:01
Boom. Boom. Boom.
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing write!!
Your stunning
creative poetic
talent never
will
cease to daze
and amaze! š
Best regards āļø. Thad
July 4th, 2024 19:50
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing write!!
Your stunning
creative poetic
talent never
will
cease to daze
and amaze! š
Best regards āļø. Thad
July 4th, 2024 19:50
Boom. Boom. Boom.
Thomas W Case said:
This is a different style with the rhyme. I like it, my friend.
July 4th, 2024 18:31
Thomas W Case said:
This is a different style with the rhyme. I like it, my friend.
July 4th, 2024 18:31
How Many Times it Turns
Teddy.15 said:
The very thought of this imagery
through the sunshine of a chair
that every day stood silent as it grieved
Sends my mind into deep deep reflection, .my mother had an arm chair that was kept as was filled with teddy bears for a very very long time. Your lines have the most powerful yet unique tone and speak to me loudly and of course your last lines marvelous powerful and full of fabulous imagery. š¹
July 3rd, 2024 14:48
Teddy.15 said:
The very thought of this imagery
through the sunshine of a chair
that every day stood silent as it grieved
Sends my mind into deep deep reflection, .my mother had an arm chair that was kept as was filled with teddy bears for a very very long time. Your lines have the most powerful yet unique tone and speak to me loudly and of course your last lines marvelous powerful and full of fabulous imagery. š¹
July 3rd, 2024 14:48
How Many Times it Turns
Thad Wilk said:
Yeaaa! š š
An outstanding and
most captivating write! āļø
Blood chilling imagery,
great use of metaphor,
AND my pleasure to recite!
Thanks for sharing my friend! āļø
Thad
July 3rd, 2024 14:47
Thad Wilk said:
Yeaaa! š š
An outstanding and
most captivating write! āļø
Blood chilling imagery,
great use of metaphor,
AND my pleasure to recite!
Thanks for sharing my friend! āļø
Thad
July 3rd, 2024 14:47
Wallflower Green
Alan R said:
he knows best when he knows less of me...this is a really beautiful line!
July 2nd, 2024 00:43
Alan R said:
he knows best when he knows less of me...this is a really beautiful line!
July 2nd, 2024 00:43
Wallflower Green
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I love your use of language.
July 1st, 2024 19:51
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I love your use of language.
July 1st, 2024 19:51
Wallflower Green
Teddy.15 said:
How very true the show must go on. Beautiful and most profound dearest Melvin. š¹
July 1st, 2024 15:25
Teddy.15 said:
How very true the show must go on. Beautiful and most profound dearest Melvin. š¹
July 1st, 2024 15:25
Where The Smaller People Go
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing poetry,
poetic perfection
just flows
through each
articulately
penned line!
Much enjoyed
my friend!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 1st, 2024 09:25
Thad Wilk said:
Awesomazing poetry,
poetic perfection
just flows
through each
articulately
penned line!
Much enjoyed
my friend!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 1st, 2024 09:25
Where The Smaller People Go
Dan Williams said:
Esoteric. Nice. Makes me wonder just who are the smaller people.
June 30th, 2024 23:36
Dan Williams said:
Esoteric. Nice. Makes me wonder just who are the smaller people.
June 30th, 2024 23:36
Where The Smaller People Go
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Powerful work.
June 30th, 2024 12:29
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of language. Powerful work.
June 30th, 2024 12:29
Where The Smaller People Go
Teddy.15 said:
Like a cat that has nine lives we only get our fair share of chances, Dear Melvin, this is extraordinary and speaks so loudly to me especially today, having battled shingles for more than 16 months you certainly hit my nerves, kudos,
I particularly love these lines
nine times each we have slain loves stocks and shares.
our kingdom was our own, it was lush
it was a blood-rush high of cortisone.
our muscles lost in the day-to-day
our bones repellant sprays on a nervous twitch
Oh kudos my friend. š¹
June 30th, 2024 04:21
Teddy.15 said:
Like a cat that has nine lives we only get our fair share of chances, Dear Melvin, this is extraordinary and speaks so loudly to me especially today, having battled shingles for more than 16 months you certainly hit my nerves, kudos,
I particularly love these lines
nine times each we have slain loves stocks and shares.
our kingdom was our own, it was lush
it was a blood-rush high of cortisone.
our muscles lost in the day-to-day
our bones repellant sprays on a nervous twitch
Oh kudos my friend. š¹
June 30th, 2024 04:21
It Stands But Doesn\'t Move
Teddy.15 said:
If only we could choose to make a monent stand still a moment in time and forever keep it there, but such is life we are not such magicians. Your words are truly felt and even wanting so desperately to turn a clock back even for a mere moment we know that we cannot, therefore we wait for the next fase. Your work is stunning dear Melvin, as original as it gets and I\'m truly humbled to read it Sir. š¹
June 29th, 2024 03:25
Teddy.15 said:
If only we could choose to make a monent stand still a moment in time and forever keep it there, but such is life we are not such magicians. Your words are truly felt and even wanting so desperately to turn a clock back even for a mere moment we know that we cannot, therefore we wait for the next fase. Your work is stunning dear Melvin, as original as it gets and I\'m truly humbled to read it Sir. š¹
June 29th, 2024 03:25
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