Make Light Of What You Will
NafisaSB said:

will we ever see salvation? question rises in my mind when i see what\'s going around us
great write

December 11th, 2024 07:11

Who\'s Keeping This Alive?
Jerry Reynolds said:

Mysterious but enchanting write, DM.

December 10th, 2024 14:16

Who\'s Keeping This Alive?
sorenbarrett said:

A kaleidioscopic view that changes with each read. Rearranging patterns that melt into each other forming new patterns.

December 10th, 2024 13:08

Make Light Of What You Will
Cassie58 said:

festive be thy name now kingdoms come

Dear Melvin, this poem fills me with foreboding about the future

make light of what you will

It speaks to me of darkness. The final two lines fill me with apprehension. The days we live in are troubling.

Always look for that glint of light, never give up on hope. That is how I read you.



December 8th, 2024 16:37

Make Light Of What You Will
Poetic Licence said:

I really enjoyed the read and forgive me if i have read it wrong, but makes me think we are all going to hell rather quickly. really enjoyable and thought provoking, Thank you

December 8th, 2024 10:45

Make Light Of What You Will
sorenbarrett said:

I particularly love the last lines
the burning wood of heritage
will one day burn as quick as we can run;
These enigmatic lines push the envelope of thought.

December 8th, 2024 09:10

Make Light Of What You Will
Teddy.15 said:

Following ones heart and being true to ones soul is the most enlightening and most achieved goals one can ever have. A true peace can come from just being who we are and also to know that it doesn\'t matter whom will accept us because indeed we except ourselves. Come Christmas or indeed any other season. Sometimes of course when there are those around us that we see going down the wrong roads we can also choose to be ourselves not accepting them because they choose happily to be the way they are. Following a good example in my opinion makes the world a sweeter place. 🌹

December 8th, 2024 08:43

Parasites and Photographs
Poetic Licence said:

Thank you for another enjoyable read

December 7th, 2024 15:36

There Is No Place To Return To
Cassie58 said:

Such vivid imagery here, so rich in content and also some wonderful lines

a pheasant with no heart,
white china flown with lullabies
buttered limbs and a pinch of cyanide

these lines tell an unhappy story.

I miss John Lennon too and his iconic Imagine, is a true legacy to his genius. I also listened to Dream as I read through.
At this time more than ever we can hope and pray for peace on earth. Kudos to you Melvin and Teddy. You are both inspirational poets. Thank you so much.





December 7th, 2024 12:00

There Is No Place To Return To
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

December 5th, 2024 14:51

There Is No Place To Return To
Teddy.15 said:

I think this is an epic of magnificence, your imagery pure to see and to feel in its emotion, your poetry is the reason I can write you inspire me with the passion behind the ink and I am truly grateful that we are friends dear Melvin, your one of my all time favourite poets, you are a true gentleman and we have shared our stories and we understand so much from beyond what we write. A huge kudos as I always say, creative imagery which is truly on a level of distinction, original and one of a kind. Honoured to know you Sir, the end of your poem I\'m sure I heard the voice of John in all his somber. So very true of today. Let\'s hope there are better times ahead. 🌹 🌹 🌹

December 5th, 2024 13:57

There Is No Place To Return To
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. I miss John and his dream.

December 5th, 2024 13:00

What Way This Sea I Crave?
Poetic Licence said:

Beautifully written , very enjoyable read

December 3rd, 2024 21:41

What Way This Sea I Crave?
sorenbarrett said:

Here I felt a series of poetic lines fall as leaves from trees. They swirled about me and blew in the wind. I could hear their rustle and feel their dryness as they crackled and crunched under foot. They spoke in whispers and with the whistle of the breeze. I knew that they were once part of trees. A lovely write.

December 3rd, 2024 20:04

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
NafisaSB said:

darker sentiments throwing light on some unspoken things - wow..

December 3rd, 2024 01:01