Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Crouched in Black
Thomas W Case said:
So much power in your write. You shine a light on a dark subject.
October 29th, 2023 00:37
Thomas W Case said:
So much power in your write. You shine a light on a dark subject.
October 29th, 2023 00:37
From Burlesque to Mediocre
Thomas W Case said:
BRIILIANT. i DON\'T USE THOSE WORDS LIGHTLY.
October 27th, 2023 17:29
Thomas W Case said:
BRIILIANT. i DON\'T USE THOSE WORDS LIGHTLY.
October 27th, 2023 17:29
From Burlesque to Mediocre
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing poetry. And what company you do keep my dear friend. Not bad at all. ❤️
October 27th, 2023 16:28
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing poetry. And what company you do keep my dear friend. Not bad at all. ❤️
October 27th, 2023 16:28
A Comedy Divine
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language. You really know how to paint a scene.
October 25th, 2023 17:39
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language. You really know how to paint a scene.
October 25th, 2023 17:39
Be Strong Disheveled Entity
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language and theme to pain the poem.
October 25th, 2023 11:31
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language and theme to pain the poem.
October 25th, 2023 11:31
one on one
Teddy.15 said:
I could name a thousand reasons for your insanity lol, and a million for your genius, love this poem, it creeps out at the reader like 3D art 🎨
October 23rd, 2023 14:36
Teddy.15 said:
I could name a thousand reasons for your insanity lol, and a million for your genius, love this poem, it creeps out at the reader like 3D art 🎨
October 23rd, 2023 14:36
pyramids of albatross
Thomas W Case said:
Superb imagery and fantastic flow.
October 22nd, 2023 13:08
Thomas W Case said:
Superb imagery and fantastic flow.
October 22nd, 2023 13:08
Crouched in Black
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, sad as it is this terrible dimentia you bring truth of its calamity and I hope some healing to yourself. ❤️
October 22nd, 2023 12:32
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, sad as it is this terrible dimentia you bring truth of its calamity and I hope some healing to yourself. ❤️
October 22nd, 2023 12:32
Too Long Gone
Teddy.15 said:
Superb and your last stanza is probably one of your most powerful that I\'ve ever read, and you know me I also had a chuckle at your imagery lol fabuuuulous ❤️
October 21st, 2023 15:56
Teddy.15 said:
Superb and your last stanza is probably one of your most powerful that I\'ve ever read, and you know me I also had a chuckle at your imagery lol fabuuuulous ❤️
October 21st, 2023 15:56
Too Long Gone
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. I like the way you use abstract images to form concrete themes.
October 21st, 2023 14:38
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. I like the way you use abstract images to form concrete themes.
October 21st, 2023 14:38
A Better Man
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. I love your use of language and imagery.
October 21st, 2023 14:31
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. I love your use of language and imagery.
October 21st, 2023 14:31
make real one ending day
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language and imagery my friend. Perfect.
October 20th, 2023 16:36
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language and imagery my friend. Perfect.
October 20th, 2023 16:36
make real one ending day
Teddy.15 said:
Loved every line especially the last stanza
But this really stands out
where melts the stars
where touches fingers white as viognier
dripping from the sinus of a sin.
no strings attached
death only is as death; or so it seems.
And then the electric music superb. I can feel it ❤️
October 20th, 2023 14:04
Teddy.15 said:
Loved every line especially the last stanza
But this really stands out
where melts the stars
where touches fingers white as viognier
dripping from the sinus of a sin.
no strings attached
death only is as death; or so it seems.
And then the electric music superb. I can feel it ❤️
October 20th, 2023 14:04
Hindsight
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant my friend. Excellent use of language.
October 20th, 2023 00:35
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant my friend. Excellent use of language.
October 20th, 2023 00:35
Hindsight
Teddy.15 said:
I suspect we\'d all like to go back and change something dearest Melvin. I know I would. ❤️ stunning imagery uniquely yours. If you had a book it would certainly stand well ❤️
October 20th, 2023 00:29
Teddy.15 said:
I suspect we\'d all like to go back and change something dearest Melvin. I know I would. ❤️ stunning imagery uniquely yours. If you had a book it would certainly stand well ❤️
October 20th, 2023 00:29
the smile that couldn\'t see
Thomas W Case said:
Well crafted. The flow is fantastic, and as always, great use of language.
October 19th, 2023 11:32
Thomas W Case said:
Well crafted. The flow is fantastic, and as always, great use of language.
October 19th, 2023 11:32
the smile that couldn\'t see
aDarkerMind said:
yes it is Maxine.
a little jumbled here and there tho.
thank you.
October 18th, 2023 15:06
aDarkerMind said:
yes it is Maxine.
a little jumbled here and there tho.
thank you.
October 18th, 2023 15:06
Hanging Lines
Thomas W Case said:
You paint the picture so well with your word choice and imagery.
October 17th, 2023 16:08
Thomas W Case said:
You paint the picture so well with your word choice and imagery.
October 17th, 2023 16:08
Hanging Lines
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like a plea to the dark side to give you some peace and quiet. you paint your very own masterpiece every time. ❤️
October 17th, 2023 15:28
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds like a plea to the dark side to give you some peace and quiet. you paint your very own masterpiece every time. ❤️
October 17th, 2023 15:28
The Figure 8
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language to paint flash scenes great job.
October 17th, 2023 13:15
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language to paint flash scenes great job.
October 17th, 2023 13:15
one trip to moon and back
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful I love your use of language.
October 15th, 2023 12:17
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful I love your use of language.
October 15th, 2023 12:17
one trip to moon and back
Teddy.15 said:
No matter how far we come there is always something holding us back. ❤️ a fabulous rendition of a darker side. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 09:31
Teddy.15 said:
No matter how far we come there is always something holding us back. ❤️ a fabulous rendition of a darker side. ❤️
October 15th, 2023 09:31
I Have Never Seen a Ghost So White
Thomas W Case said:
You have painted a grim scene with your keen use of language and imagery. Fantastic work.
October 15th, 2023 01:11
Thomas W Case said:
You have painted a grim scene with your keen use of language and imagery. Fantastic work.
October 15th, 2023 01:11
To a Face We Cannot See
Thomas W Case said:
You use language well to pint the scene you desire. Nice work.
October 15th, 2023 01:07
Thomas W Case said:
You use language well to pint the scene you desire. Nice work.
October 15th, 2023 01:07
I Cannot Sleep
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language to paint your scene.
October 14th, 2023 01:14
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language to paint your scene.
October 14th, 2023 01:14
Should Silence Sing
Thomas W Case said:
Great poem. I love your use of language and poetic technique in this one. Great flow.
October 13th, 2023 20:02
Thomas W Case said:
Great poem. I love your use of language and poetic technique in this one. Great flow.
October 13th, 2023 20:02
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