Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
As Time Goes By
Cassie58 said:
all men will gather one by one
and dare remember you:
Looking back over time, there appear to be many memories in this poem, and perhaps ones that aren’t always endearing and positive. That is the feeling I am picking up. The poetic expression is excellent and the imagery is strong.
Another wonderful poem, rich in unique description about mothers . A lovely read Melvin.
February 9th, 2025 13:45
Cassie58 said:
all men will gather one by one
and dare remember you:
Looking back over time, there appear to be many memories in this poem, and perhaps ones that aren’t always endearing and positive. That is the feeling I am picking up. The poetic expression is excellent and the imagery is strong.
Another wonderful poem, rich in unique description about mothers . A lovely read Melvin.
February 9th, 2025 13:45
As Time Goes By
Cheeky Missy said:
The elusive recipient, just beyond view, haunts like a ghost mists veil as choice imagery tricks out a sober tale whose essence calls unto the hearkening soul of yonder. Mystique likewise in tow, this is fascinating and curiously rendered with exceptional imagery, its haunting poignancy refusing to let go of my sleeve. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 12:36
Cheeky Missy said:
The elusive recipient, just beyond view, haunts like a ghost mists veil as choice imagery tricks out a sober tale whose essence calls unto the hearkening soul of yonder. Mystique likewise in tow, this is fascinating and curiously rendered with exceptional imagery, its haunting poignancy refusing to let go of my sleeve. Thank you for sharing.
February 9th, 2025 12:36
As Time Goes By
sorenbarrett said:
Here I get the sense of good and evil in that apocalyptical battle where it seems that bad has the upper hand and all that may be left is the memory of good. May be off on this one but was the feeling it evoked
February 9th, 2025 12:29
sorenbarrett said:
Here I get the sense of good and evil in that apocalyptical battle where it seems that bad has the upper hand and all that may be left is the memory of good. May be off on this one but was the feeling it evoked
February 9th, 2025 12:29
As Time Goes By
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m getting Sylvia Plath vibes with this, I may be totally wrong. Oh Melvin, such poetry you are a strong as an ox with the muse riding your pen hand my friend, such utter beauty in every line. Simply stunning as your heart glows it is felt within your poem. 🌹
February 9th, 2025 08:45
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m getting Sylvia Plath vibes with this, I may be totally wrong. Oh Melvin, such poetry you are a strong as an ox with the muse riding your pen hand my friend, such utter beauty in every line. Simply stunning as your heart glows it is felt within your poem. 🌹
February 9th, 2025 08:45
As Quiet As A Tree
arqios said:
Image rich poetry, quite thoroughly enjoyed! …and liked 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:37
arqios said:
Image rich poetry, quite thoroughly enjoyed! …and liked 🙏🏻🕊
February 9th, 2025 04:37
Seven Blades Of Grass
Cheeky Missy said:
As I forget whom said it, \"how droll--\" and there must stop, left chewing on the vast imagery rendering a familiar landscape to effect so beautifully, yet likewise so very curiously, I\'m contentedly mixed up. How fascinating. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 8th, 2025 14:11
Cheeky Missy said:
As I forget whom said it, \"how droll--\" and there must stop, left chewing on the vast imagery rendering a familiar landscape to effect so beautifully, yet likewise so very curiously, I\'m contentedly mixed up. How fascinating. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 8th, 2025 14:11
Seven Blades Of Grass
Teddy.15 said:
equinox.
of equal length both starmer
and the pitted stones of drought.
self doubt itself no ordinary thing
when sings our Cinderella through the comfort of a chair.
all we as hunched as coal
between the master and the corpse,
each line rehearsed yet never understood.
Well I tried to choose one line but this is just magnificent in full right to the very end in which too is absolutely wonderful. Melvin your equinox is simply exquisite. 🌹
February 8th, 2025 13:17
Teddy.15 said:
equinox.
of equal length both starmer
and the pitted stones of drought.
self doubt itself no ordinary thing
when sings our Cinderella through the comfort of a chair.
all we as hunched as coal
between the master and the corpse,
each line rehearsed yet never understood.
Well I tried to choose one line but this is just magnificent in full right to the very end in which too is absolutely wonderful. Melvin your equinox is simply exquisite. 🌹
February 8th, 2025 13:17
Seven Blades Of Grass
sorenbarrett said:
Melvin your poems require a different type of reading one must let go of the mind and relax in the emotion. It is the overall feel that one is left with that guages the poem not the understanding of the thought. This is pure poetry at its best. A most lovely poem
February 8th, 2025 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Melvin your poems require a different type of reading one must let go of the mind and relax in the emotion. It is the overall feel that one is left with that guages the poem not the understanding of the thought. This is pure poetry at its best. A most lovely poem
February 8th, 2025 06:11
A Solitude So Grand
Dan Williams said:
\"nostalgia runs it\'s fingers through a breath of metaphors\" is a fine metaphor on it\'s own. very nice.
February 8th, 2025 00:44
Dan Williams said:
\"nostalgia runs it\'s fingers through a breath of metaphors\" is a fine metaphor on it\'s own. very nice.
February 8th, 2025 00:44
When Truth Becomes A Lie
Cassie58 said:
and you my love, that shapes my heart
I will make a world of you already made
how I long to move away
but too afraid
So many beautiful lines here Melvin. Speaks to me about the fear of change. Needs a bucket load of courage at times.
Fab poetry. You always produce the goods.
February 7th, 2025 12:42
Cassie58 said:
and you my love, that shapes my heart
I will make a world of you already made
how I long to move away
but too afraid
So many beautiful lines here Melvin. Speaks to me about the fear of change. Needs a bucket load of courage at times.
Fab poetry. You always produce the goods.
February 7th, 2025 12:42
A Solitude So Grand
Cassie58 said:
You are so right, there is never a good time to die. Taken by your wonderful poetic expression and fine lines laden with imagery. Love the alliteration in the first stanza. This poem reads so well out loud. Fab poetry Melvin. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:22
Cassie58 said:
You are so right, there is never a good time to die. Taken by your wonderful poetic expression and fine lines laden with imagery. Love the alliteration in the first stanza. This poem reads so well out loud. Fab poetry Melvin. Have a good weekend.
February 7th, 2025 12:22
A Solitude So Grand
sorenbarrett said:
Strangely this one made sense to me. A kaleidoscope of metaphors that if turned in the right way make a beautiful and meaningful design
February 7th, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
Strangely this one made sense to me. A kaleidoscope of metaphors that if turned in the right way make a beautiful and meaningful design
February 7th, 2025 10:13
A Solitude So Grand
Teddy.15 said:
A magnificent very beautifully penned price of poetry my dear friend. Loved every line down to the last kudos. 🌹
February 7th, 2025 09:13
Teddy.15 said:
A magnificent very beautifully penned price of poetry my dear friend. Loved every line down to the last kudos. 🌹
February 7th, 2025 09:13
When Truth Becomes A Lie
Teddy.15 said:
Your very title tells so much here, it\'s like a message to your reader and that is what I love most about your poetry it speaks. 🌹
February 6th, 2025 14:44
Teddy.15 said:
Your very title tells so much here, it\'s like a message to your reader and that is what I love most about your poetry it speaks. 🌹
February 6th, 2025 14:44
When Truth Becomes A Lie
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the first line particularly because truth does become a lie at times and lies can be true too. All in all it is in the eye of the beholder and so many metaphors that each can be taken in their own ways. Lovely Melvin
February 6th, 2025 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the first line particularly because truth does become a lie at times and lies can be true too. All in all it is in the eye of the beholder and so many metaphors that each can be taken in their own ways. Lovely Melvin
February 6th, 2025 13:45
As Quiet As A Tree
Poetic Licence said:
Another wonderful write that was a real pleasure to read.
February 4th, 2025 14:53
Poetic Licence said:
Another wonderful write that was a real pleasure to read.
February 4th, 2025 14:53
As Quiet As A Tree
Teddy.15 said:
I just love what sorrenbarret has said, kudos on yet another truly talented pen moment. 🌹
February 4th, 2025 14:49
Teddy.15 said:
I just love what sorrenbarret has said, kudos on yet another truly talented pen moment. 🌹
February 4th, 2025 14:49
As Quiet As A Tree
sorenbarrett said:
Darker I think I\'m going to dub you the Salvador dali of poets. Enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
Darker I think I\'m going to dub you the Salvador dali of poets. Enjoyed the read
February 4th, 2025 13:11
How I Burn For Something New
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Melvin, Outstanding lines outstanding imagery, always a genuine pleasure reading your lines, and your poetry has taken the reader to a new phase of your poetic journey. Superb my dear friend. 🌹
January 25th, 2025 02:57
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Melvin, Outstanding lines outstanding imagery, always a genuine pleasure reading your lines, and your poetry has taken the reader to a new phase of your poetic journey. Superb my dear friend. 🌹
January 25th, 2025 02:57
How I Burn For Something New
Poetic Licence said:
I cannot say honestly i have worked this one out, but i do enjoy reading your poetry as it always makes me think, and it always good to read a few times over, Great piece
January 24th, 2025 17:38
Poetic Licence said:
I cannot say honestly i have worked this one out, but i do enjoy reading your poetry as it always makes me think, and it always good to read a few times over, Great piece
January 24th, 2025 17:38
How I Burn For Something New
sorenbarrett said:
Qustions without answers enigmas and paradoxes that a questioning of truth. Very nice
January 24th, 2025 15:48
sorenbarrett said:
Qustions without answers enigmas and paradoxes that a questioning of truth. Very nice
January 24th, 2025 15:48
What Colour Hat?
Poetic Licence said:
A great piece of poetry, i have read a few times now and interpreting different things each time and there are many stand out lines, really enjoyed reading this.
January 23rd, 2025 17:11
Poetic Licence said:
A great piece of poetry, i have read a few times now and interpreting different things each time and there are many stand out lines, really enjoyed reading this.
January 23rd, 2025 17:11
What Colour Hat?
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m pretty sure you will have imagined i would choose these lines
how brave emanel settles on a secondary skin?
in red high heels
no nightingale have I,
to navigate my cinderella\'s tail
Wow and wow loving your title and every line, my hat would have to be blue. 🌹 Extraordinary poetry as ever from you dearest Melvin. 🌹
January 23rd, 2025 13:00
Teddy.15 said:
I\'m pretty sure you will have imagined i would choose these lines
how brave emanel settles on a secondary skin?
in red high heels
no nightingale have I,
to navigate my cinderella\'s tail
Wow and wow loving your title and every line, my hat would have to be blue. 🌹 Extraordinary poetry as ever from you dearest Melvin. 🌹
January 23rd, 2025 13:00
What Colour Hat?
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic words fill this poem and when I got to the top I found I didn\'t have a key. A lot of great lines and images
January 23rd, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Cryptic words fill this poem and when I got to the top I found I didn\'t have a key. A lot of great lines and images
January 23rd, 2025 12:34
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