Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
No Beneficial Light
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful is your poem, rain on fire and just the thought of such a slumber. Isn\'t it funny how our semi-conscious can also affect us with pleasure or with sinister. Personally when I dream it\'s like I\'m in another world. Love your title dear Melvin a wonderful read and most inspiring. 🌹
June 22nd, 2024 03:47
Teddy.15 said:
How truly wonderful is your poem, rain on fire and just the thought of such a slumber. Isn\'t it funny how our semi-conscious can also affect us with pleasure or with sinister. Personally when I dream it\'s like I\'m in another world. Love your title dear Melvin a wonderful read and most inspiring. 🌹
June 22nd, 2024 03:47
It Is Monday, And The Dead Are Still Awake
Cassie58 said:
I found myself in a graveyard. The feelings were deep and sorrowful. Your poetic expression extraordinary.
June 21st, 2024 02:37
Cassie58 said:
I found myself in a graveyard. The feelings were deep and sorrowful. Your poetic expression extraordinary.
June 21st, 2024 02:37
It Is Monday, And The Dead Are Still Awake
Teddy.15 said:
It seems unfair that some get all the tragedies of life yet others are unscathed, June is my hardest month along with January, but in the end each passing day week month year seems to bring me to that bit closer to solace. Loved every line dear Melvin. 🌹
June 20th, 2024 17:21
Teddy.15 said:
It seems unfair that some get all the tragedies of life yet others are unscathed, June is my hardest month along with January, but in the end each passing day week month year seems to bring me to that bit closer to solace. Loved every line dear Melvin. 🌹
June 20th, 2024 17:21
It Is Monday, And The Dead Are Still Awake
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous abstraction.
June 20th, 2024 12:09
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous abstraction.
June 20th, 2024 12:09
A Buttercup in a Crowded House
Teddy.15 said:
Most inspiring read dearest Melvin, as you are aware a subject close to my own heart
a buttercup in a crowded room.
for those who choke on anger
more discreet than distance dared to glow
Magnificent Lines
And your last so powerful. 🌹
June 19th, 2024 12:18
Teddy.15 said:
Most inspiring read dearest Melvin, as you are aware a subject close to my own heart
a buttercup in a crowded room.
for those who choke on anger
more discreet than distance dared to glow
Magnificent Lines
And your last so powerful. 🌹
June 19th, 2024 12:18
My Avacado Heart
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is bursting with incredible imagery and contemplation. The beautiful, final stanza ties it all together with a golden bow.
June 19th, 2024 08:55
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is bursting with incredible imagery and contemplation. The beautiful, final stanza ties it all together with a golden bow.
June 19th, 2024 08:55
My Avacado Heart
antra.sharma_ said:
Inspiring!!!!! Amazing words and vocabulary used!! Nicely penned
June 18th, 2024 13:12
antra.sharma_ said:
Inspiring!!!!! Amazing words and vocabulary used!! Nicely penned
June 18th, 2024 13:12
In My Sunday Morning Mews
Teddy.15 said:
The very essence of the bitter sweet in life. Beautifully done my dear Melvin. 🌹
June 18th, 2024 02:35
Teddy.15 said:
The very essence of the bitter sweet in life. Beautifully done my dear Melvin. 🌹
June 18th, 2024 02:35
All Thimbles And Thumbs
Teddy.15 said:
That sounds like a hell of a party to me dear Melvin, bring it on, wonderful. 🌹
June 18th, 2024 00:10
Teddy.15 said:
That sounds like a hell of a party to me dear Melvin, bring it on, wonderful. 🌹
June 18th, 2024 00:10
All Thimbles And Thumbs
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!
Powerful penning indeed!
Poetic perfection
just flows through
each wonderfully
woven line!! 👍
Best regards, peace Thad
June 17th, 2024 16:13
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!
Powerful penning indeed!
Poetic perfection
just flows through
each wonderfully
woven line!! 👍
Best regards, peace Thad
June 17th, 2024 16:13
All Thimbles And Thumbs
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Great images. Fresh and origiginal.
June 17th, 2024 10:10
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Great images. Fresh and origiginal.
June 17th, 2024 10:10
In My Sunday Morning Mews
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!!
Powerful penning
poet, strong
feelings and
thoughts eloquently
expressed, poetic
perfection throughout
each line!!
Have a grrrr8
Sunday!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
June 16th, 2024 14:21
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!!
Powerful penning
poet, strong
feelings and
thoughts eloquently
expressed, poetic
perfection throughout
each line!!
Have a grrrr8
Sunday!
Best regards ✌️. Thad
June 16th, 2024 14:21
In My Sunday Morning Mews
Cassie58 said:
Some incredible lines here. Every line a poetic treat. Lovely.
June 16th, 2024 04:52
Cassie58 said:
Some incredible lines here. Every line a poetic treat. Lovely.
June 16th, 2024 04:52
A Photograph Of Lemon-Grass
Thomas W Case said:
Reminds me so much of Cormac McCarthy. I love it.
June 14th, 2024 11:20
Thomas W Case said:
Reminds me so much of Cormac McCarthy. I love it.
June 14th, 2024 11:20
A Photograph Of Lemon-Grass
2781 said:
Wow, you are hard to interpret I like, better now am new.
June 14th, 2024 10:21
2781 said:
Wow, you are hard to interpret I like, better now am new.
June 14th, 2024 10:21
If You Touch Me, I Will Move
Teddy.15 said:
The third side of the coin, wow dear Melvin, such imagery has to be read over and over, something tells me of aches and pains for sure in metaphor at the least. Superb 🌹
June 13th, 2024 17:13
Teddy.15 said:
The third side of the coin, wow dear Melvin, such imagery has to be read over and over, something tells me of aches and pains for sure in metaphor at the least. Superb 🌹
June 13th, 2024 17:13
If You Touch Me, I Will Move
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid imagery this poem demands attention to the incongruous and juxtaposed metaphors that cover it like corpses on a battlefield. It talks more to the heart than head and leaves one dizzy with a fever. Nicely done.
June 13th, 2024 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid imagery this poem demands attention to the incongruous and juxtaposed metaphors that cover it like corpses on a battlefield. It talks more to the heart than head and leaves one dizzy with a fever. Nicely done.
June 13th, 2024 16:31
If You Touch Me, I Will Move
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and vivid. Tremendous work.
June 13th, 2024 11:20
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and vivid. Tremendous work.
June 13th, 2024 11:20
Out Walking With An X
Thad Wilk said:
Wow, what an
awesomazing write! 👍
Captivating and
eloquently penned
AND a treat to recite!!
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards, peace. ✌️
Thad
June 12th, 2024 12:43
Thad Wilk said:
Wow, what an
awesomazing write! 👍
Captivating and
eloquently penned
AND a treat to recite!!
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards, peace. ✌️
Thad
June 12th, 2024 12:43
Bury Me In Silver
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautiful, I\'d have to bury you in gold though. 🌹
June 12th, 2024 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautiful, I\'d have to bury you in gold though. 🌹
June 12th, 2024 11:13
Neither Of Us Mad
Cassie58 said:
Amazing lines. The imagery is so unique. Quite an experience reading you.
June 11th, 2024 14:27
Cassie58 said:
Amazing lines. The imagery is so unique. Quite an experience reading you.
June 11th, 2024 14:27
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!
Powerful penning,
really pulls on the
heartstrings. 🎻
Really captivating and
awesome use of
metaphor!
Much enjoyed!!
Best regards poet!
Peace ✌️ Thad
June 10th, 2024 23:07
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!
Powerful penning,
really pulls on the
heartstrings. 🎻
Really captivating and
awesome use of
metaphor!
Much enjoyed!!
Best regards poet!
Peace ✌️ Thad
June 10th, 2024 23:07
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey there, Melvin. What are you up to? The \'Send Comment\' box has suddenly and mysteriously reappeared here for me after a very long absence. \'Like to clarify your position or retreat back to safety?🤣...... Not that I can recall ever engaging with you anyway!!
June 9th, 2024 20:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey there, Melvin. What are you up to? The \'Send Comment\' box has suddenly and mysteriously reappeared here for me after a very long absence. \'Like to clarify your position or retreat back to safety?🤣...... Not that I can recall ever engaging with you anyway!!
June 9th, 2024 20:30
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Thomas W Case said:
Your mind and creativity are amazing. Powerful work.
June 9th, 2024 14:38
Thomas W Case said:
Your mind and creativity are amazing. Powerful work.
June 9th, 2024 14:38
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
orchidee said:
So was I, with my mobile, but - as people do - I wasn\'t looking where I was going and fell off the end of the pier! lol.
Am I telling porkies?
June 9th, 2024 13:10
orchidee said:
So was I, with my mobile, but - as people do - I wasn\'t looking where I was going and fell off the end of the pier! lol.
Am I telling porkies?
June 9th, 2024 13:10
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Neilton said:
I truly enjoyed your poem! Although sad and melancholic I was amazed by your talent!
June 9th, 2024 12:31
Neilton said:
I truly enjoyed your poem! Although sad and melancholic I was amazed by your talent!
June 9th, 2024 12:31
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
peto said:
You have an excellent way with words
Can\'t help but get a deep reflection/self inventory vibe
1st I\'ve read from you
Won\'t be the last
June 9th, 2024 12:18
peto said:
You have an excellent way with words
Can\'t help but get a deep reflection/self inventory vibe
1st I\'ve read from you
Won\'t be the last
June 9th, 2024 12:18
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