Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Taurean Mass
sorenbarrett said:
Mind boggling a fun read Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 19:07
sorenbarrett said:
Mind boggling a fun read Happy New Year to you
December 31st, 2024 19:07
Taurean Mass
TobaniNataiella said:
Really enjoyed the read, Happy New Year to you and all
December 31st, 2024 16:42
TobaniNataiella said:
Really enjoyed the read, Happy New Year to you and all
December 31st, 2024 16:42
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
NafisaSB said:
\'be strong enough to listen to your heart\' resonates with me best in the above verse
great write
December 30th, 2024 23:58
NafisaSB said:
\'be strong enough to listen to your heart\' resonates with me best in the above verse
great write
December 30th, 2024 23:58
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my friend.
December 29th, 2024 20:13
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work, my friend.
December 29th, 2024 20:13
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a beautiful blend of nature and spirit! Love the imagery of “Let the Northern Star bring sunshine in a cup” - as always, you are so vivid! I also love the repetition of “Let all who still believe”, almost like a mantra. Wonderful job, Melvin! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 17:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, what a beautiful blend of nature and spirit! Love the imagery of “Let the Northern Star bring sunshine in a cup” - as always, you are so vivid! I also love the repetition of “Let all who still believe”, almost like a mantra. Wonderful job, Melvin! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 17:05
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem Melvin. I particularly like the following line:
Be strong enough to listen to your
heart.
I found hope here and new growth. Lovely.
December 29th, 2024 13:10
Cassie58 said:
Beautiful poem Melvin. I particularly like the following line:
Be strong enough to listen to your
heart.
I found hope here and new growth. Lovely.
December 29th, 2024 13:10
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Bella Shepard said:
Each time I read this poem aloud, I love it even more. \"Be strong enough to listen to your heart\", this is perfection. Beautiful!!!
December 29th, 2024 12:27
Bella Shepard said:
Each time I read this poem aloud, I love it even more. \"Be strong enough to listen to your heart\", this is perfection. Beautiful!!!
December 29th, 2024 12:27
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautiful poem reminding us to be positive as new shoots of peace, youth and health will grow. Really enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 07:26
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautiful poem reminding us to be positive as new shoots of peace, youth and health will grow. Really enjoyed the read.
December 29th, 2024 07:26
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Teddy.15 said:
I see utter beauty in this dear Melvin, tundra found In the coldest of places, warm is your poem. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 07:07
Teddy.15 said:
I see utter beauty in this dear Melvin, tundra found In the coldest of places, warm is your poem. 🌹
December 29th, 2024 07:07
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an emotionally deep and melodic poem that leaves a pleasant reading impression.
December 29th, 2024 06:18
Ellen Marsell said:
Such an emotionally deep and melodic poem that leaves a pleasant reading impression.
December 29th, 2024 06:18
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
arqios said:
Under a blanket of frost I am imagining.
December 29th, 2024 05:51
arqios said:
Under a blanket of frost I am imagining.
December 29th, 2024 05:51
How Green The Tundra Sleeps
sorenbarrett said:
To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing, youthful, healthy are all words that come to mind.
December 29th, 2024 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
To sleep green has a nice feel to it. Fresh, new, peaceful, growing, youthful, healthy are all words that come to mind.
December 29th, 2024 05:39
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Turn tide and swim\"...indeed! LOL! I have never been to Bognor Regis, Melvin; however, I hope should I ever visit, I would not be so \"American\" as to warrant this response! 🤣 As for the poem, wonderfully done, my friend! 👏🌹
December 28th, 2024 14:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Turn tide and swim\"...indeed! LOL! I have never been to Bognor Regis, Melvin; however, I hope should I ever visit, I would not be so \"American\" as to warrant this response! 🤣 As for the poem, wonderfully done, my friend! 👏🌹
December 28th, 2024 14:08
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious, bognor, and what a magnificent seaside town it is dear melvin, I still have a scar from the last time I was there, this is so out of your comfort zone I suspect, kudos on the fun side, like you promised a new chapter. Keep your seagulls safe my dear friend. 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:53
Teddy.15 said:
lol hilarious, bognor, and what a magnificent seaside town it is dear melvin, I still have a scar from the last time I was there, this is so out of your comfort zone I suspect, kudos on the fun side, like you promised a new chapter. Keep your seagulls safe my dear friend. 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:53
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
sorenbarrett said:
Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend as enigmatic as Hellen Keller in the Louver.
December 28th, 2024 12:39
sorenbarrett said:
Does this mean I\'m being run out of Sussex? An intriguing write my friend as enigmatic as Hellen Keller in the Louver.
December 28th, 2024 12:39
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
TobaniNataiella said:
A solid defence of a town, i think the seagulls will have a chuckle
December 28th, 2024 12:36
TobaniNataiella said:
A solid defence of a town, i think the seagulls will have a chuckle
December 28th, 2024 12:36
Keep Away From Bognor Regis
Bella Shepard said:
Do not disturb the bliss of tranquility, if you cannot savor it. Lovely!
December 28th, 2024 11:59
Bella Shepard said:
Do not disturb the bliss of tranquility, if you cannot savor it. Lovely!
December 28th, 2024 11:59
To Where I Must Return
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So profoundly beautiful my dear friend. Indeed, she\'s strong and you are showing her how strong you are as well. Letting go and moving on is, perhaps, the hardest thing we can ever do...the hardest act that true love, eventually, calls us all to make (those of us fortunate enough to have that). My dear Melvin, I am crying as I write these words, because I know such love and cannot imagine the immense abyss you have had, and still continue to have to cross my friend. This poem is a foot down on something other than the all-consuming void that loss leaves in us. A most profoundly powerful and heartfelt write! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 16:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
So profoundly beautiful my dear friend. Indeed, she\'s strong and you are showing her how strong you are as well. Letting go and moving on is, perhaps, the hardest thing we can ever do...the hardest act that true love, eventually, calls us all to make (those of us fortunate enough to have that). My dear Melvin, I am crying as I write these words, because I know such love and cannot imagine the immense abyss you have had, and still continue to have to cross my friend. This poem is a foot down on something other than the all-consuming void that loss leaves in us. A most profoundly powerful and heartfelt write! 🌹👏
December 26th, 2024 16:42
To Where I Must Return
Cassie58 said:
These wonderful lines are a return journey from the darkest darkest place into one which offers a glimmer of light and hope while grief is still present. Final three lines are incredibly touching. Wishing you peace Melvin.
December 26th, 2024 12:47
Cassie58 said:
These wonderful lines are a return journey from the darkest darkest place into one which offers a glimmer of light and hope while grief is still present. Final three lines are incredibly touching. Wishing you peace Melvin.
December 26th, 2024 12:47
To Where I Must Return
TobaniNataiella said:
A tender , emotional and beautiful personal piece of writing
December 26th, 2024 12:04
TobaniNataiella said:
A tender , emotional and beautiful personal piece of writing
December 26th, 2024 12:04
To Where I Must Return
Teddy.15 said:
Profoundly beautiful, tells the story of two soulmates one lost and the other after much mourning and grieving has finally found the peace back in his heart to move onto the next tomorrow. 🌹 My heart is aching reading this, as I know what your beloved wife meant and still means to you dear Melvin. Courage to accept and move forward simply never comes to all those who have lost a soulmate, you are one of a few. Total respect and wishes for the new year my dear friend. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 11:21
Teddy.15 said:
Profoundly beautiful, tells the story of two soulmates one lost and the other after much mourning and grieving has finally found the peace back in his heart to move onto the next tomorrow. 🌹 My heart is aching reading this, as I know what your beloved wife meant and still means to you dear Melvin. Courage to accept and move forward simply never comes to all those who have lost a soulmate, you are one of a few. Total respect and wishes for the new year my dear friend. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 11:21
Plethora Blue
Teddy.15 said:
I feel a coming back from the dead theme here, that\'s just my visions I see within this, imagery so very unique but so very easy to see. Kudos my dear friend Melvin. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 04:18
Teddy.15 said:
I feel a coming back from the dead theme here, that\'s just my visions I see within this, imagery so very unique but so very easy to see. Kudos my dear friend Melvin. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 04:18
Plethora Blue
sorenbarrett said:
A Kaleidoscope of images that change with each rotation. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2024 03:20
sorenbarrett said:
A Kaleidoscope of images that change with each rotation. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2024 03:20
Plethora Blue
sorenbarrett said:
A Kaleidoscope of images that change with each rotation. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2024 03:16
sorenbarrett said:
A Kaleidoscope of images that change with each rotation. Nicely written.
December 25th, 2024 03:16
Plethora Blue
2781 said:
Because of the savor of thy good ointments thy name is as an ointment poured forth, therefore do thee virgin\'s love thee.
December 24th, 2024 21:10
2781 said:
Because of the savor of thy good ointments thy name is as an ointment poured forth, therefore do thee virgin\'s love thee.
December 24th, 2024 21:10
What Is This I See?
Cassie58 said:
will it float my soul to heaven
or dare me grieve as satan stares me down?
What a contrast here. I felt a soul in distress. There is pain. There are thorns and there is much darkness here.
Dear Melvin, wishing you softer and kinder dreams and light to shine your pathway ahead 🌹
Wonderful poetry, so deep.
December 22nd, 2024 23:56
Cassie58 said:
will it float my soul to heaven
or dare me grieve as satan stares me down?
What a contrast here. I felt a soul in distress. There is pain. There are thorns and there is much darkness here.
Dear Melvin, wishing you softer and kinder dreams and light to shine your pathway ahead 🌹
Wonderful poetry, so deep.
December 22nd, 2024 23:56
What Is This I See?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh…dear Melvin! I can feel the pain, grief and loss in every word! Well done on the poem. 🌹👏 Sending you ❤️ and 🤗 as askl!
December 22nd, 2024 17:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh…dear Melvin! I can feel the pain, grief and loss in every word! Well done on the poem. 🌹👏 Sending you ❤️ and 🤗 as askl!
December 22nd, 2024 17:47
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