Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
There Is No Place To Return To
sorenbarrett said:
I feel drunk after reading this poem. That is not a bad thing but one of disorientation and disequalibrium. Full of juxtopposed contradictions and vivid images.
December 5th, 2024 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
I feel drunk after reading this poem. That is not a bad thing but one of disorientation and disequalibrium. Full of juxtopposed contradictions and vivid images.
December 5th, 2024 13:16
There Is No Place To Return To
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I miss John and his dream.
December 5th, 2024 13:00
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous. I miss John and his dream.
December 5th, 2024 13:00
What Way This Sea I Crave?
Cassie58 said:
The lines are incredibly creative and bring stark imagery to the reader. There is an atmosphere here of decay and a sadness. I see the tree missing its leaves. Mournful. Wonderful poetry Melvin.
December 4th, 2024 03:59
Cassie58 said:
The lines are incredibly creative and bring stark imagery to the reader. There is an atmosphere here of decay and a sadness. I see the tree missing its leaves. Mournful. Wonderful poetry Melvin.
December 4th, 2024 03:59
What Way This Sea I Crave?
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautifully written , very enjoyable read
December 3rd, 2024 21:41
TobaniNataiella said:
Beautifully written , very enjoyable read
December 3rd, 2024 21:41
What Way This Sea I Crave?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, dear Melvin! Beautiful and heartbreaking. A truly wonderful write, my friend! πΉπβ€οΈβπ©Ή
December 3rd, 2024 21:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, dear Melvin! Beautiful and heartbreaking. A truly wonderful write, my friend! πΉπβ€οΈβπ©Ή
December 3rd, 2024 21:39
What Way This Sea I Crave?
sorenbarrett said:
Here I felt a series of poetic lines fall as leaves from trees. They swirled about me and blew in the wind. I could hear their rustle and feel their dryness as they crackled and crunched under foot. They spoke in whispers and with the whistle of the breeze. I knew that they were once part of trees. A lovely write.
December 3rd, 2024 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
Here I felt a series of poetic lines fall as leaves from trees. They swirled about me and blew in the wind. I could hear their rustle and feel their dryness as they crackled and crunched under foot. They spoke in whispers and with the whistle of the breeze. I knew that they were once part of trees. A lovely write.
December 3rd, 2024 20:04
What Way This Sea I Crave?
Teddy.15 said:
There is one thing I am absolutely certain of dear Melvin, and it\'s this, your beloved wife was a very lucky lady to have you by her side. Nothing else to say dear friend. πΉ
December 3rd, 2024 14:16
Teddy.15 said:
There is one thing I am absolutely certain of dear Melvin, and it\'s this, your beloved wife was a very lucky lady to have you by her side. Nothing else to say dear friend. πΉ
December 3rd, 2024 14:16
Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
NafisaSB said:
darker sentiments throwing light on some unspoken things - wow..
December 3rd, 2024 01:01
NafisaSB said:
darker sentiments throwing light on some unspoken things - wow..
December 3rd, 2024 01:01
Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
TobaniNataiella said:
Cleverly written and enjoyable read
December 2nd, 2024 21:00
TobaniNataiella said:
Cleverly written and enjoyable read
December 2nd, 2024 21:00
Where No Light Breaks
TobaniNataiella said:
A very interesting read, thank you
December 2nd, 2024 20:58
TobaniNataiella said:
A very interesting read, thank you
December 2nd, 2024 20:58
Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Dan Williams said:
First class. I also \'\"spied with but a single eye\" all to regularly. Nice work.
November 27th, 2024 00:53
Dan Williams said:
First class. I also \'\"spied with but a single eye\" all to regularly. Nice work.
November 27th, 2024 00:53
Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
sorenbarrett said:
Fun read, full of twisted metaphors a maze like poem of symbolic, blind alleys, false turns and mind-boggling images.
November 26th, 2024 20:15
sorenbarrett said:
Fun read, full of twisted metaphors a maze like poem of symbolic, blind alleys, false turns and mind-boggling images.
November 26th, 2024 20:15
Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Thad Wilk said:
A fantastic poem
I must say!! π π
The imagery and
metaphor just blew me away!!π
A great read indeed
thank you for sharing!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
November 26th, 2024 19:46
Thad Wilk said:
A fantastic poem
I must say!! π π
The imagery and
metaphor just blew me away!!π
A great read indeed
thank you for sharing!! π
Best regards βοΈ Thad
November 26th, 2024 19:46
Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Pure brilliance! The ghastly smell, whatever it is...death perhaps?...certainly had its way at the end! An amazingly brilliant, olfactory ending to what was already a brilliant, sensory-rich, experience. I also loved the reference to Dylan and Cohen! Wonderfully done, Melvin! Wonderfully done! πΉπβ€οΈ
November 26th, 2024 16:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Pure brilliance! The ghastly smell, whatever it is...death perhaps?...certainly had its way at the end! An amazingly brilliant, olfactory ending to what was already a brilliant, sensory-rich, experience. I also loved the reference to Dylan and Cohen! Wonderfully done, Melvin! Wonderfully done! πΉπβ€οΈ
November 26th, 2024 16:51
Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Teddy.15 said:
The smell of death itself perhaps, superbly done dear Melvin, not a line I didn\'t love. Kudos and then some πΉ
November 26th, 2024 15:11
Teddy.15 said:
The smell of death itself perhaps, superbly done dear Melvin, not a line I didn\'t love. Kudos and then some πΉ
November 26th, 2024 15:11
As If By Chance
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful to find a write from you Melvin. Always rich in poetic expression. Much enjoyed poet.
November 24th, 2024 17:10
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful to find a write from you Melvin. Always rich in poetic expression. Much enjoyed poet.
November 24th, 2024 17:10
As If By Chance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem and love the repetition, albeit varied, in the βwhatβ question, which almost bookends the poem. Very effective! Well done!
November 24th, 2024 15:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful poem and love the repetition, albeit varied, in the βwhatβ question, which almost bookends the poem. Very effective! Well done!
November 24th, 2024 15:56
As If By Chance
Teddy.15 said:
Repeating the moment exquisite poetry as always lovely dearest Melvin πΉ
November 24th, 2024 10:21
Teddy.15 said:
Repeating the moment exquisite poetry as always lovely dearest Melvin πΉ
November 24th, 2024 10:21
As If By Chance
sorenbarrett said:
I really like this poem. It has that haunting phrase that comes back and repeats. Very nicely written.
November 24th, 2024 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
I really like this poem. It has that haunting phrase that comes back and repeats. Very nicely written.
November 24th, 2024 07:17
Where No Light Breaks
sorenbarrett said:
Melvin this has the field of Bob Dylan on LSD. Most interesting combination of the images Debbie Vokes, a Bosch like picture.
November 11th, 2024 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Melvin this has the field of Bob Dylan on LSD. Most interesting combination of the images Debbie Vokes, a Bosch like picture.
November 11th, 2024 04:35
Where No Light Breaks
jarcher54 said:
I must say I was carried along by the force of your images... I don\'t understand them all, but I feel them, and that\'s more interesting.
November 11th, 2024 01:57
jarcher54 said:
I must say I was carried along by the force of your images... I don\'t understand them all, but I feel them, and that\'s more interesting.
November 11th, 2024 01:57
Where No Light Breaks
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Melvin, those lines really stick out for me intrigued to say the least, your imagery as it always is, its simply a masterpiece
somewhere above the trees
now laughs the many skulls in deep retreat
πΉ
November 10th, 2024 16:41
Teddy.15 said:
Hello dear Melvin, those lines really stick out for me intrigued to say the least, your imagery as it always is, its simply a masterpiece
somewhere above the trees
now laughs the many skulls in deep retreat
πΉ
November 10th, 2024 16:41
By Night\'s Secluded Light
Teddy.15 said:
Sinking into the hollow or drowning comes to mind, so very powerful and your imagery well, always so original. Wonderful poetry dear Melvin. πΉ
October 24th, 2024 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
Sinking into the hollow or drowning comes to mind, so very powerful and your imagery well, always so original. Wonderful poetry dear Melvin. πΉ
October 24th, 2024 03:01
By Night\'s Secluded Light
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Chilling imagery.
October 23rd, 2024 14:43
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. Chilling imagery.
October 23rd, 2024 14:43
By Night\'s Secluded Light
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting collection of disjointed thoughts that often occur in my own mind. Many of these appear to have deeper meaning. A lovely write that give many ideas
October 23rd, 2024 12:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting collection of disjointed thoughts that often occur in my own mind. Many of these appear to have deeper meaning. A lovely write that give many ideas
October 23rd, 2024 12:43
So Red The Nose
Teddy.15 said:
I felt every last word and it left me somewhat drunk fabulous dearest Melvin. πΉ
October 21st, 2024 14:35
Teddy.15 said:
I felt every last word and it left me somewhat drunk fabulous dearest Melvin. πΉ
October 21st, 2024 14:35
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