Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
I Will Have To Ask My Mother First
Teddy.15 said:
Awe my dear Melvin what a wonderful poem, your last line kudos. Filled with emotion. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 02:44
Teddy.15 said:
Awe my dear Melvin what a wonderful poem, your last line kudos. Filled with emotion. 🌹
July 29th, 2024 02:44
I Will Have To Ask My Mother First
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
my friend!!
Very evocative!
Love the song you picked,
a captivating poem
from beginning to end! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 28th, 2024 22:34
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
my friend!!
Very evocative!
Love the song you picked,
a captivating poem
from beginning to end! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 28th, 2024 22:34
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
sorenbarrett said:
So many songs drift in free association, bits and pieces of memories. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
So many songs drift in free association, bits and pieces of memories. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 04:57
Hello, My Brother Gemini
sorenbarrett said:
Great images paint this piece and hanging metaphors surround the reader. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 06:02
sorenbarrett said:
Great images paint this piece and hanging metaphors surround the reader. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 06:02
Just One Piece, And Not One Penny More.
Teddy.15 said:
Wow there is a game of chess in this one. How very poetic love the last stanza it\'s so powerful. 🌹
July 26th, 2024 02:45
Teddy.15 said:
Wow there is a game of chess in this one. How very poetic love the last stanza it\'s so powerful. 🌹
July 26th, 2024 02:45
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Dan Williams said:
\"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice work.
July 25th, 2024 00:14
Dan Williams said:
\"stranger on the streets of bone and prayer\" ...what a great line. Nice work.
July 25th, 2024 00:14
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. You paint this scene so well.
July 24th, 2024 21:33
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. You paint this scene so well.
July 24th, 2024 21:33
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought a tear to me with this one my dear friend, solemnly beautiful, if there is only ever to be one thing left then let it be these memories that can take you back to a time where you remember who you once were. 🌹
July 24th, 2024 15:43
Teddy.15 said:
You just brought a tear to me with this one my dear friend, solemnly beautiful, if there is only ever to be one thing left then let it be these memories that can take you back to a time where you remember who you once were. 🌹
July 24th, 2024 15:43
An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound-
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness and longing of this beautiful elegy cannot help but touch the heart of those who read it, I know it had a very powerful effect on me.
July 24th, 2024 12:33
Bella Shepard said:
The sadness and longing of this beautiful elegy cannot help but touch the heart of those who read it, I know it had a very powerful effect on me.
July 24th, 2024 12:33
One Quarter Of A Half
sorenbarrett said:
Each line provocative and enigmatic I think I could spend a quarter to a half of my life decoding it. But then I\'m a bit thick and slow. Loved it
July 24th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Each line provocative and enigmatic I think I could spend a quarter to a half of my life decoding it. But then I\'m a bit thick and slow. Loved it
July 24th, 2024 07:03
One Quarter Of A Half
orchidee said:
And now my poem - not pinching your words - \'A Quarter\'. i.e. A quarter of a half! lol.
July 24th, 2024 01:51
orchidee said:
And now my poem - not pinching your words - \'A Quarter\'. i.e. A quarter of a half! lol.
July 24th, 2024 01:51
One Quarter Of A Half
Teddy.15 said:
Your titles are always key to your poetry, all I see are ashes, but that may just be because I know your work. Tomorrow for soulmates is already here because one can never move on. There is no one better nor more rewarding. 🌹 Love your work my dear Melvin ❤️
July 23rd, 2024 15:45
Teddy.15 said:
Your titles are always key to your poetry, all I see are ashes, but that may just be because I know your work. Tomorrow for soulmates is already here because one can never move on. There is no one better nor more rewarding. 🌹 Love your work my dear Melvin ❤️
July 23rd, 2024 15:45
To Where The Seven Horses Run
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful imagery.
July 22nd, 2024 17:58
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Powerful imagery.
July 22nd, 2024 17:58
To Where The Seven Horses Run
Teddy.15 said:
lol just brilliantly executed, I cannot help but think of the number of the devil, but your title is phenominal and yes wild horses also relatable in my life. Melvin, I\'m at the sea I\'m really well but every time I read a line of Sylvia it simply sends my muse I to overdrive. Thank you. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 13:46
Teddy.15 said:
lol just brilliantly executed, I cannot help but think of the number of the devil, but your title is phenominal and yes wild horses also relatable in my life. Melvin, I\'m at the sea I\'m really well but every time I read a line of Sylvia it simply sends my muse I to overdrive. Thank you. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 13:46
Another Cut This Love
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible sense of deep loss and sorrow, you surely know how to inspire your reader dear Melvin, in the most wonderful times and the most deeply tragic. Kudos my dear friend. I absolutely love your first stanza it has emotion and imagery that cuts like a knife. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 04:46
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible sense of deep loss and sorrow, you surely know how to inspire your reader dear Melvin, in the most wonderful times and the most deeply tragic. Kudos my dear friend. I absolutely love your first stanza it has emotion and imagery that cuts like a knife. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 04:46
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
Dan Williams said:
Great imagery. And \"fallen trees more opium than bark\" is graceful observation. Nice work.
July 21st, 2024 23:59
Dan Williams said:
Great imagery. And \"fallen trees more opium than bark\" is graceful observation. Nice work.
July 21st, 2024 23:59
Another Cut This Love
Dan Williams said:
Rhyme seems to have fallen out of fashion so kudos the different rhyme scene . Good work
July 21st, 2024 23:55
Dan Williams said:
Rhyme seems to have fallen out of fashion so kudos the different rhyme scene . Good work
July 21st, 2024 23:55
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
Bella Shepard said:
\"In the window-box where my goldfinch came to rest singing honey through the fingers of her heart\", beautiful and gentle, standing in contrast to what seems to me conflict, then resolution in the last four exquisite lines. Beautifully versed my friend!
July 21st, 2024 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
\"In the window-box where my goldfinch came to rest singing honey through the fingers of her heart\", beautiful and gentle, standing in contrast to what seems to me conflict, then resolution in the last four exquisite lines. Beautifully versed my friend!
July 21st, 2024 16:05
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
aDarkerMind said:
thank you for reading, and for a most kind comment.
very much appreciated.
July 21st, 2024 09:36
aDarkerMind said:
thank you for reading, and for a most kind comment.
very much appreciated.
July 21st, 2024 09:36
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good wite, DM.
Sad and soulful. I like the uplift at the end.
July 21st, 2024 07:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good wite, DM.
Sad and soulful. I like the uplift at the end.
July 21st, 2024 07:43
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and intriguing images presented with most interesting and compelling internal rhyme from time to time. Metaphoric is an understatement.
July 21st, 2024 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and intriguing images presented with most interesting and compelling internal rhyme from time to time. Metaphoric is an understatement.
July 21st, 2024 07:40
Another Cut This Love
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
poignant 😢 and
heart touching and
wonderfully woven
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 20th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
poignant 😢 and
heart touching and
wonderfully woven
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 20th, 2024 21:38
Another Cut This Love
Cassie58 said:
Living with the ache of loss cuts deep. You can not escape it. If you don’t dream it, it will surely grip you on waking and it will choose when it will drown you. Deeply felt words.
July 20th, 2024 11:54
Cassie58 said:
Living with the ache of loss cuts deep. You can not escape it. If you don’t dream it, it will surely grip you on waking and it will choose when it will drown you. Deeply felt words.
July 20th, 2024 11:54
No Flesh My Iron Lung
Cassie58 said:
Captivating stanzas Melvin.
Drawn to the lines
my plastic is your primrose
my seed no lesser soul
too many sad goodbyes
The lines are heavy and the imagery most
unusual. The mood is melancholic. Thank you for sharing.
July 19th, 2024 16:15
Cassie58 said:
Captivating stanzas Melvin.
Drawn to the lines
my plastic is your primrose
my seed no lesser soul
too many sad goodbyes
The lines are heavy and the imagery most
unusual. The mood is melancholic. Thank you for sharing.
July 19th, 2024 16:15
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