Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind



There Is No Place To Return To
sorenbarrett said:

I feel drunk after reading this poem. That is not a bad thing but one of disorientation and disequalibrium. Full of juxtopposed contradictions and vivid images.

December 5th, 2024 13:16

There Is No Place To Return To
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. I miss John and his dream.

December 5th, 2024 13:00

What Way This Sea I Crave?
Cassie58 said:

The lines are incredibly creative and bring stark imagery to the reader. There is an atmosphere here of decay and a sadness. I see the tree missing its leaves. Mournful. Wonderful poetry Melvin.

December 4th, 2024 03:59

What Way This Sea I Crave?
TobaniNataiella said:

Beautifully written , very enjoyable read

December 3rd, 2024 21:41

What Way This Sea I Crave?
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh, dear Melvin! Beautiful and heartbreaking. A truly wonderful write, my friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘β€οΈβ€πŸ©Ή

December 3rd, 2024 21:39

What Way This Sea I Crave?
sorenbarrett said:

Here I felt a series of poetic lines fall as leaves from trees. They swirled about me and blew in the wind. I could hear their rustle and feel their dryness as they crackled and crunched under foot. They spoke in whispers and with the whistle of the breeze. I knew that they were once part of trees. A lovely write.

December 3rd, 2024 20:04

What Way This Sea I Crave?
Teddy.15 said:

There is one thing I am absolutely certain of dear Melvin, and it\'s this, your beloved wife was a very lucky lady to have you by her side. Nothing else to say dear friend. 🌹

December 3rd, 2024 14:16

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
NafisaSB said:

darker sentiments throwing light on some unspoken things - wow..

December 3rd, 2024 01:01

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
TobaniNataiella said:

Cleverly written and enjoyable read

December 2nd, 2024 21:00

Where No Light Breaks
TobaniNataiella said:

A very interesting read, thank you

December 2nd, 2024 20:58

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Dan Williams said:

First class. I also \'\"spied with but a single eye\" all to regularly. Nice work.

November 27th, 2024 00:53

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
sorenbarrett said:

Fun read, full of twisted metaphors a maze like poem of symbolic, blind alleys, false turns and mind-boggling images.

November 26th, 2024 20:15

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Thad Wilk said:

A fantastic poem
I must say!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘
The imagery and
metaphor just blew me away!!πŸ‘
A great read indeed
thank you for sharing!! 😊
Best regards ✌️ Thad

November 26th, 2024 19:46

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Pure brilliance! The ghastly smell, whatever it is...death perhaps?...certainly had its way at the end! An amazingly brilliant, olfactory ending to what was already a brilliant, sensory-rich, experience. I also loved the reference to Dylan and Cohen! Wonderfully done, Melvin! Wonderfully done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘β€οΈ

November 26th, 2024 16:51

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant.

November 26th, 2024 15:59

Then Can I Sleep? Perhaps.
Teddy.15 said:

The smell of death itself perhaps, superbly done dear Melvin, not a line I didn\'t love. Kudos and then some 🌹


November 26th, 2024 15:11

As If By Chance
NafisaSB said:

a thoughtful and beautiful write. well done

November 26th, 2024 00:43

As If By Chance
Cassie58 said:

Wonderful to find a write from you Melvin. Always rich in poetic expression. Much enjoyed poet.

November 24th, 2024 17:10

As If By Chance
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful poem and love the repetition, albeit varied, in the β€œwhat” question, which almost bookends the poem. Very effective! Well done!

November 24th, 2024 15:56

As If By Chance
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, DM.

November 24th, 2024 14:54

As If By Chance
Teddy.15 said:

Repeating the moment exquisite poetry as always lovely dearest Melvin 🌹

November 24th, 2024 10:21

As If By Chance
sorenbarrett said:

I really like this poem. It has that haunting phrase that comes back and repeats. Very nicely written.

November 24th, 2024 07:17

Where No Light Breaks
sorenbarrett said:

Melvin this has the field of Bob Dylan on LSD. Most interesting combination of the images Debbie Vokes, a Bosch like picture.

November 11th, 2024 04:35

Where No Light Breaks
jarcher54 said:

I must say I was carried along by the force of your images... I don\'t understand them all, but I feel them, and that\'s more interesting.

November 11th, 2024 01:57

Where No Light Breaks
Teddy.15 said:

Hello dear Melvin, those lines really stick out for me intrigued to say the least, your imagery as it always is, its simply a masterpiece

somewhere above the trees

now laughs the many skulls in deep retreat

🌹


November 10th, 2024 16:41

By Night\'s Secluded Light
Teddy.15 said:

Sinking into the hollow or drowning comes to mind, so very powerful and your imagery well, always so original. Wonderful poetry dear Melvin. 🌹

October 24th, 2024 03:01

By Night\'s Secluded Light
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Chilling imagery.

October 23rd, 2024 14:43

By Night\'s Secluded Light
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting collection of disjointed thoughts that often occur in my own mind. Many of these appear to have deeper meaning. A lovely write that give many ideas

October 23rd, 2024 12:43

So Red The Nose
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work.

October 22nd, 2024 14:52

So Red The Nose
Teddy.15 said:

I felt every last word and it left me somewhat drunk fabulous dearest Melvin. 🌹

October 21st, 2024 14:35

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