Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Wear and tear
Teddy.15 said:
A letter to myself so to speak, this is amazing, a poem written to share with one\'s own self keeping the very vision and prospective that it will all be ok, I did the same sort of thing when I went to have my baby. I was terrified but had my special note to remind me it would all be ok. Most beautiful and soothing, I too need a new right Knee but I\'m too young for now, and I am also very much a chicken. A most pleasurable read my dear NafisaSB 🌹
February 28th, 2026 01:28
Teddy.15 said:
A letter to myself so to speak, this is amazing, a poem written to share with one\'s own self keeping the very vision and prospective that it will all be ok, I did the same sort of thing when I went to have my baby. I was terrified but had my special note to remind me it would all be ok. Most beautiful and soothing, I too need a new right Knee but I\'m too young for now, and I am also very much a chicken. A most pleasurable read my dear NafisaSB 🌹
February 28th, 2026 01:28
Build
HerTime said:
“ Let’s make 2026 a very special year,
Let us choose peace and not undue fear”
Beautiful writing. I love your style. As someone experiencing this in my own country this speaks to me a lot.
February 26th, 2026 17:35
HerTime said:
“ Let’s make 2026 a very special year,
Let us choose peace and not undue fear”
Beautiful writing. I love your style. As someone experiencing this in my own country this speaks to me a lot.
February 26th, 2026 17:35
Predator
Neville said:
How absolutely write you are .. sometimes I need to be reminded why I resent and despise my own species so much .. its that seemingly insatiable hunger, greed & appetite that does it .. bang on ma\'am I like the sound of your drum .. unless I am gravely mistaken and it is something else being beaten out of me .. 😎👍
February 26th, 2026 03:26
Neville said:
How absolutely write you are .. sometimes I need to be reminded why I resent and despise my own species so much .. its that seemingly insatiable hunger, greed & appetite that does it .. bang on ma\'am I like the sound of your drum .. unless I am gravely mistaken and it is something else being beaten out of me .. 😎👍
February 26th, 2026 03:26
Nobel peace prize
HerTime said:
I found this very timely. Just visited the Nobel peace museum in Norway. I found this equally infuriating as someone of the nation, being led by a monster.
February 25th, 2026 16:25
HerTime said:
I found this very timely. Just visited the Nobel peace museum in Norway. I found this equally infuriating as someone of the nation, being led by a monster.
February 25th, 2026 16:25
Divide and rule
Thomas W Case said:
Bitter truths carved in rhyme, like knives in velvet—your anger is righteous and unflinching.
The world’s folly wears a familiar mask, and you name it without mercy.
February 24th, 2026 08:34
Thomas W Case said:
Bitter truths carved in rhyme, like knives in velvet—your anger is righteous and unflinching.
The world’s folly wears a familiar mask, and you name it without mercy.
February 24th, 2026 08:34
Divide and rule
Neville said:
This is absolutely true .. I too have noticed the downward but increasing trend you so skilfully outline .. Write on & always .. Neville 😎🌻👍
February 24th, 2026 04:55
Neville said:
This is absolutely true .. I too have noticed the downward but increasing trend you so skilfully outline .. Write on & always .. Neville 😎🌻👍
February 24th, 2026 04:55
Divide and rule
Mutley Ravishes said:
Same old same old. When are we going to quit falling for this nonsense?
February 22nd, 2026 02:09
Mutley Ravishes said:
Same old same old. When are we going to quit falling for this nonsense?
February 22nd, 2026 02:09
Divide and rule
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is a pointed critique framed in steady rhyme. You balance political frustration with a broader warning about national consequence. It’s straightforward, impassioned, and designed to provoke reflection. Strong, assertive work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is a pointed critique framed in steady rhyme. You balance political frustration with a broader warning about national consequence. It’s straightforward, impassioned, and designed to provoke reflection. Strong, assertive work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 21st, 2026 10:38
Divide and rule
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'s a good write, NafisaSB/Safina. I get irritated that I cannot address you correctly, but since your heart appears to be in the right place, am prepared to forgive you...☺️
February 21st, 2026 05:16
Doggerel Dave said:
Now that\'s a good write, NafisaSB/Safina. I get irritated that I cannot address you correctly, but since your heart appears to be in the right place, am prepared to forgive you...☺️
February 21st, 2026 05:16
Divide and rule
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in good rhyme a message that the public needs to wake up. Yet I am not so sure that they are asleep I believe they are blind. A sad state of affairs. Nicely written
February 21st, 2026 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in good rhyme a message that the public needs to wake up. Yet I am not so sure that they are asleep I believe they are blind. A sad state of affairs. Nicely written
February 21st, 2026 03:51
Divide and rule
Soman Ragavan said:
Violence and injustice bring their own retribution. No injustice lasts for ever. Thus, even those who enjoy power at its highest are bound to face the backlash at some point.
February 21st, 2026 03:26
Soman Ragavan said:
Violence and injustice bring their own retribution. No injustice lasts for ever. Thus, even those who enjoy power at its highest are bound to face the backlash at some point.
February 21st, 2026 03:26
Build
Thomas W Case said:
this one hums with grit and hope—your words strike like a call to arms for kindness, tender but unflinching.
You plant bridges where walls once stood; the verse carries both warning and warmth, like a streetlamp in a darkened alley.
February 17th, 2026 07:32
Thomas W Case said:
this one hums with grit and hope—your words strike like a call to arms for kindness, tender but unflinching.
You plant bridges where walls once stood; the verse carries both warning and warmth, like a streetlamp in a darkened alley.
February 17th, 2026 07:32
Build
Neville said:
I truly share each and every one of those thoughts Nafisa .. lovely words indeed .. Neville 🌻
February 17th, 2026 03:36
Neville said:
I truly share each and every one of those thoughts Nafisa .. lovely words indeed .. Neville 🌻
February 17th, 2026 03:36
Build
cellinic said:
A very well-versed, sincere and truthful write! Best wishes,
February 15th, 2026 01:58
cellinic said:
A very well-versed, sincere and truthful write! Best wishes,
February 15th, 2026 01:58
Build
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, “form a human Link / and from the cup of friendship, drink”…that’s the image that lingers. It’s simple, but it’s vivid and communal. It turns big global ideas into something human and tangible. That warmth gives the poem its heart. Wonderful job, here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, “form a human Link / and from the cup of friendship, drink”…that’s the image that lingers. It’s simple, but it’s vivid and communal. It turns big global ideas into something human and tangible. That warmth gives the poem its heart. Wonderful job, here. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 14th, 2026 10:25
Build
Teddy.15 said:
And may your thoughts become a reality dearest NafisaSB 🌹 a super heartfelt write. 🌹
February 14th, 2026 08:39
Teddy.15 said:
And may your thoughts become a reality dearest NafisaSB 🌹 a super heartfelt write. 🌹
February 14th, 2026 08:39
Build
sorenbarrett said:
A new years pledge and tribute in a poem. Nicely said
February 14th, 2026 04:27
sorenbarrett said:
A new years pledge and tribute in a poem. Nicely said
February 14th, 2026 04:27
Build
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice poetry pointing us in the right direction.
Look after yourself first, and take care.
February 14th, 2026 03:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Nice poetry pointing us in the right direction.
Look after yourself first, and take care.
February 14th, 2026 03:54
Predator
Joseph M Marion said:
Absolutely love this very well written One of my favorites
February 12th, 2026 11:01
Joseph M Marion said:
Absolutely love this very well written One of my favorites
February 12th, 2026 11:01
Why does the moon..?
Thomas W Case said:
Haunting and tender — you make the moon ache with lonely grace.
I can feel her wandering through your lines, pale but alive.
February 10th, 2026 07:18
Thomas W Case said:
Haunting and tender — you make the moon ache with lonely grace.
I can feel her wandering through your lines, pale but alive.
February 10th, 2026 07:18
Predator
Paul Bell said:
Humans, should come with a health warning.
Sadly it seems, space is running out for wild animals, from land to the sea we\'ve managed to kill them both.
February 10th, 2026 06:51
Paul Bell said:
Humans, should come with a health warning.
Sadly it seems, space is running out for wild animals, from land to the sea we\'ve managed to kill them both.
February 10th, 2026 06:51
Predator
Teddy.15 said:
You have certainly brought the Forrest to life. This could be metaphor for politics of the world in which with live. Kudos on your imagery and emotion, we should all look up and see it. 🌹 Superb poem. 💜
February 9th, 2026 04:12
Teddy.15 said:
You have certainly brought the Forrest to life. This could be metaphor for politics of the world in which with live. Kudos on your imagery and emotion, we should all look up and see it. 🌹 Superb poem. 💜
February 9th, 2026 04:12
Predator
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a fable sharpened by experience—nature watching itself, until humanity steps in and breaks the spell.
Clean lines, clear teeth: the turn to man-as-predator lands hard and honest, without preaching.
February 8th, 2026 07:17
Thomas W Case said:
This feels like a fable sharpened by experience—nature watching itself, until humanity steps in and breaks the spell.
Clean lines, clear teeth: the turn to man-as-predator lands hard and honest, without preaching.
February 8th, 2026 07:17
Predator
Doggerel Dave said:
The personification of the forest works well here and ties in nicely with something I read not long ago about communication between trees. Although much reduced, logging of old growth forests can still be an issue parts of Oz..
February 8th, 2026 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
The personification of the forest works well here and ties in nicely with something I read not long ago about communication between trees. Although much reduced, logging of old growth forests can still be an issue parts of Oz..
February 8th, 2026 07:06
Predator
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, is there a hidden meaning behind the predator-prey axis?
February 8th, 2026 04:12
Mutley Ravishes said:
I sometimes wonder, is there a hidden meaning behind the predator-prey axis?
February 8th, 2026 04:12
Predator
sorenbarrett said:
Man is the deadliest preditor and most wide spread. We kill for sport not just food. Nicely written
February 8th, 2026 03:25
sorenbarrett said:
Man is the deadliest preditor and most wide spread. We kill for sport not just food. Nicely written
February 8th, 2026 03:25
Predator
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is thoughtfully constructed. The movement from predator and prey to the quiet terror of human presence carries real moral weight. It reads like a warning spoken calmly…which makes it hit harder. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 00:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this is thoughtfully constructed. The movement from predator and prey to the quiet terror of human presence carries real moral weight. It reads like a warning spoken calmly…which makes it hit harder. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 8th, 2026 00:23
Fly high
Thomas W Case said:
This carries a gentle, lived-in wisdom—cages, wings, and human hesitation blended with care.
The encouragement lands soft but firm; you can feel the patience behind each lifted note.
February 1st, 2026 07:43
Thomas W Case said:
This carries a gentle, lived-in wisdom—cages, wings, and human hesitation blended with care.
The encouragement lands soft but firm; you can feel the patience behind each lifted note.
February 1st, 2026 07:43
Fly high
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this poem balances empathy and exhortation beautifully. You honor the fear that keeps us caged while still reminding us that flight is possible. The closing turn toward courage feels earned, not forced. A hopeful and thoughtful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 30th, 2026 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Safina, this poem balances empathy and exhortation beautifully. You honor the fear that keeps us caged while still reminding us that flight is possible. The closing turn toward courage feels earned, not forced. A hopeful and thoughtful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
January 30th, 2026 09:55
Fly high
Doggerel Dave said:
With you there . take the chance - may not be golden, but chance = change and life can offer a vast variety.... and now for the downer: today opportunities are so much mor curtailed than, within my lifetime, they once were...
January 30th, 2026 05:28
Doggerel Dave said:
With you there . take the chance - may not be golden, but chance = change and life can offer a vast variety.... and now for the downer: today opportunities are so much mor curtailed than, within my lifetime, they once were...
January 30th, 2026 05:28
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