Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Disillusioned
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Buyer\'s shock or remorse should not be a thing after reading this poem. Warning issued! Truth, my friend. A very wise and clever poem indeed. A fave! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 25th, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Buyer\'s shock or remorse should not be a thing after reading this poem. Warning issued! Truth, my friend. A very wise and clever poem indeed. A fave! πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
August 25th, 2025 07:36
Disillusioned
arqios said:
Dear Safina, this poem carries with it the precision of a fable: short, clear images that work like stepping stones toward a quiet but stinging truth. Itβs spare, but it lingers, the kind of poem where the spaces between the lines feel as loaded as the words themselves.
August 25th, 2025 05:34
arqios said:
Dear Safina, this poem carries with it the precision of a fable: short, clear images that work like stepping stones toward a quiet but stinging truth. Itβs spare, but it lingers, the kind of poem where the spaces between the lines feel as loaded as the words themselves.
August 25th, 2025 05:34
Disillusioned
sorenbarrett said:
Buyer beware they always used to say. A clever poem of advice that anyone with any sense will listen to. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Buyer beware they always used to say. A clever poem of advice that anyone with any sense will listen to. Nicely done
August 25th, 2025 04:02
Innocent victims
NinjaGirl said:
Hopeless is often wrapped in distractions...
August 24th, 2025 01:32
NinjaGirl said:
Hopeless is often wrapped in distractions...
August 24th, 2025 01:32
Impact
NinjaGirl said:
You\'ll never know...maybe the person you walk by every morning likes seeing your face, or a little girl thought your hair was cool. There are so many little things that people love, and that make people so loveable
August 24th, 2025 01:30
NinjaGirl said:
You\'ll never know...maybe the person you walk by every morning likes seeing your face, or a little girl thought your hair was cool. There are so many little things that people love, and that make people so loveable
August 24th, 2025 01:30
Today
Teddy.15 said:
What a bright and cheerful way of spreading joy and kindness. Right back at you dearest NafisaSB πΉ
August 21st, 2025 02:11
Teddy.15 said:
What a bright and cheerful way of spreading joy and kindness. Right back at you dearest NafisaSB πΉ
August 21st, 2025 02:11
Today
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely and quite charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heartening, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely and quite charming. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heartening, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 11:39
Today
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poetess, today of all days I found your beautiful poem, a day when I needed your wonderful optimism and good wishes, it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for the kindness in your soul!
August 20th, 2025 07:45
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poetess, today of all days I found your beautiful poem, a day when I needed your wonderful optimism and good wishes, it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for the kindness in your soul!
August 20th, 2025 07:45
Today
Neville said:
Bless you dear poet .. & the very same to you .. albeit belatedly .. Neville ππ
August 20th, 2025 05:47
Neville said:
Bless you dear poet .. & the very same to you .. albeit belatedly .. Neville ππ
August 20th, 2025 05:47
Today
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Nafisa,
What a beautiful, kind and sincere dedication to all your fellow poets in a poem to delight the heart. May you know nothing but happiness now and into the future.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 12th, 2025 05:58
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Nafisa,
What a beautiful, kind and sincere dedication to all your fellow poets in a poem to delight the heart. May you know nothing but happiness now and into the future.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 12th, 2025 05:58
Today
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is warm and overflowing with care. Each wish feels like a gentle hand on the shoulder, guiding toward light and away from pain. Youβve wrapped hope in every line, and it shines through beautifully. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
August 11th, 2025 19:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is warm and overflowing with care. Each wish feels like a gentle hand on the shoulder, guiding toward light and away from pain. Youβve wrapped hope in every line, and it shines through beautifully. πΉπ€ππ―οΈ
August 11th, 2025 19:38
Today
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s made my day,what a wonderful, kind, caring write, and I hope those wishes are delivered to you as well, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:15
Poetic Licence said:
Now that\'s made my day,what a wonderful, kind, caring write, and I hope those wishes are delivered to you as well, enjoyed the read
August 11th, 2025 08:15
Today
sorenbarrett said:
Such pleasant wishes expressed in this poem. Very upbeat and optimistic it brings a smile. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
Such pleasant wishes expressed in this poem. Very upbeat and optimistic it brings a smile. Nicely done
August 11th, 2025 06:49
Today
Priya Tomar said:
Very nice, a priceless piece full of good wishes.....
August 11th, 2025 06:34
Priya Tomar said:
Very nice, a priceless piece full of good wishes.....
August 11th, 2025 06:34
Innocent victims
Friendship said:
The poem serves as a call to action, urging readers to recognize and confront the systemic issues that lead to suffering and corruption, and to inspire a sense of responsibility towards societal improvement.
August 2nd, 2025 16:20
Friendship said:
The poem serves as a call to action, urging readers to recognize and confront the systemic issues that lead to suffering and corruption, and to inspire a sense of responsibility towards societal improvement.
August 2nd, 2025 16:20
Innocent victims
Doggerel Dave said:
Nearly missed this one, N. I don\'t visit as often as I once did, and then sometimes cursorily. So thanks for the back up; where I live the issues are plain to see.
First is of course shelter, the cost of a home impossible, particularly for the young who wish to have kids. This issue has many societal deleterious effects - prevents women\'s escape from domestic violence, youngsters escaping from dysfunctional families, and so on... Child care is mostly in the hands of profit making enterprises, which it would seem do not worry about the provision of professional properly organized staff to form a culture and systems where this kind of transgression would be virtually impossible.
So government has no interest in really sorting the housing issue or providing proper resources for child care. What is to be done?
August 1st, 2025 21:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Nearly missed this one, N. I don\'t visit as often as I once did, and then sometimes cursorily. So thanks for the back up; where I live the issues are plain to see.
First is of course shelter, the cost of a home impossible, particularly for the young who wish to have kids. This issue has many societal deleterious effects - prevents women\'s escape from domestic violence, youngsters escaping from dysfunctional families, and so on... Child care is mostly in the hands of profit making enterprises, which it would seem do not worry about the provision of professional properly organized staff to form a culture and systems where this kind of transgression would be virtually impossible.
So government has no interest in really sorting the housing issue or providing proper resources for child care. What is to be done?
August 1st, 2025 21:17
Innocent victims
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Nafisa,
Where now the ones of mercy, the ones of compassion, even one single humanitarian politician. One can feel the anger in your poem and angry you should be. My heart goes out to these innocent victims and pray someday they find happiness in the joys of life that they truly deserve. Your poem highlights the corruption and those who suffer because of it in a powerful and heartfelt way. Thank you very much for sharing this.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 1st, 2025 05:58
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Nafisa,
Where now the ones of mercy, the ones of compassion, even one single humanitarian politician. One can feel the anger in your poem and angry you should be. My heart goes out to these innocent victims and pray someday they find happiness in the joys of life that they truly deserve. Your poem highlights the corruption and those who suffer because of it in a powerful and heartfelt way. Thank you very much for sharing this.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 1st, 2025 05:58
Innocent victims
Poetic Licence said:
We can hope that somewhere in all the darkness there is still some light for them, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
We can hope that somewhere in all the darkness there is still some light for them, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:25
Innocent victims
sorenbarrett said:
The world seems to have a shortage on compassion. Nicely worded this poem calls this point out.
August 1st, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
The world seems to have a shortage on compassion. Nicely worded this poem calls this point out.
August 1st, 2025 04:31
The bubble has burst..
Neville said:
This happens so often .. Oh\' how the mighty fall .. It\'s just a shame its not that Orange one .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 01:37
Neville said:
This happens so often .. Oh\' how the mighty fall .. It\'s just a shame its not that Orange one .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 01:37
The bubble has burst..
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
How the great orators and the weight of advertising can fool the masses to elect and then regret succumbing to the big lie and the litany of broken promises. An exposition of heartless leaders and their effects on the common folk in a down to earth narrative makes this poem compulsory reading for those of us seeking change and a better way of life. Excellent, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 04:29
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
How the great orators and the weight of advertising can fool the masses to elect and then regret succumbing to the big lie and the litany of broken promises. An exposition of heartless leaders and their effects on the common folk in a down to earth narrative makes this poem compulsory reading for those of us seeking change and a better way of life. Excellent, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 04:29
The bubble has burst..
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a sobering and sharply delivered poem. The rhythm fits the disillusionment well, and that final line really drove it home for me. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. A fave. π€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 25th, 2025 11:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a sobering and sharply delivered poem. The rhythm fits the disillusionment well, and that final line really drove it home for me. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. A fave. π€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
July 25th, 2025 11:47
The bubble has burst..
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for putting into words the great deception that has been perpetrated on so many, who knew so little. Buyers remorse is a terrible thing. How we will recover is anybody\'s guess. Thank you for speaking out!
July 25th, 2025 09:12
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for putting into words the great deception that has been perpetrated on so many, who knew so little. Buyers remorse is a terrible thing. How we will recover is anybody\'s guess. Thank you for speaking out!
July 25th, 2025 09:12
The bubble has burst..
arqios said:
The rhymes are so delightful. What an enjoyable read. ποΈππ»
July 25th, 2025 07:13
arqios said:
The rhymes are so delightful. What an enjoyable read. ποΈππ»
July 25th, 2025 07:13
The bubble has burst..
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem you have expressed the sentiments of many. Does one have to amputate the leg to save the life or will the person die of shock and hemorrhage? Time will tell but for present there is certainly much pain and a lot of morphine may be needed.
July 25th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem you have expressed the sentiments of many. Does one have to amputate the leg to save the life or will the person die of shock and hemorrhage? Time will tell but for present there is certainly much pain and a lot of morphine may be needed.
July 25th, 2025 04:34
The bubble has burst..
Poetic Licence said:
The realization they made a mistake, the hen has come home to roost, as they say , enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 03:04
Poetic Licence said:
The realization they made a mistake, the hen has come home to roost, as they say , enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 03:04
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