Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
The power of One
Neilton said:
The power of one
Is often underestimate
In words you put what we\'ve all been doing
Avoiding to do the first step and make this world a better place!!
May 4th, 2025 07:50
Neilton said:
The power of one
Is often underestimate
In words you put what we\'ve all been doing
Avoiding to do the first step and make this world a better place!!
May 4th, 2025 07:50
The power of One
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in poetic words, well written in good rhyme and meter it speaks to me. Very nicely done
May 3rd, 2025 03:48
sorenbarrett said:
Wisdom in poetic words, well written in good rhyme and meter it speaks to me. Very nicely done
May 3rd, 2025 03:48
The power of One
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, and I say this as I am a very proud but stubborn woman, I really appreciate the depths of reasoning this can take a person like myself. Beautiful and I hear every word. 🌹
May 3rd, 2025 01:15
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, and I say this as I am a very proud but stubborn woman, I really appreciate the depths of reasoning this can take a person like myself. Beautiful and I hear every word. 🌹
May 3rd, 2025 01:15
The power of One
arqios said:
Unity isn’t the only ingredient but the moral Unity as well🙏🏻🕊️
May 3rd, 2025 00:40
arqios said:
Unity isn’t the only ingredient but the moral Unity as well🙏🏻🕊️
May 3rd, 2025 00:40
Growth
sorenbarrett said:
Observation and aspirations fill this poem with words of wisdom. Very nicely stated in poetic form
April 28th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Observation and aspirations fill this poem with words of wisdom. Very nicely stated in poetic form
April 28th, 2025 04:02
Growth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very wise and true, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very wise and true, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
April 27th, 2025 07:36
Growth
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely beautiful, an enormous amount of wisdom in this. 🌹
April 27th, 2025 06:03
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely beautiful, an enormous amount of wisdom in this. 🌹
April 27th, 2025 06:03
Release
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming. Funny, I\'ve been doing that recently, despite not having seen this beauty. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a heartening poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 24th, 2025 23:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming. Funny, I\'ve been doing that recently, despite not having seen this beauty. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a heartening poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 24th, 2025 23:55
Release
teardrop said:
I am a big fan of rhyming and you do it so well here as well as telling a great lesson. Well done!
April 24th, 2025 03:20
teardrop said:
I am a big fan of rhyming and you do it so well here as well as telling a great lesson. Well done!
April 24th, 2025 03:20
Release
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Thanks. This is just what someone needs at a dire moment. Positive poem and thoughtfully written!
April 20th, 2025 16:52
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Thanks. This is just what someone needs at a dire moment. Positive poem and thoughtfully written!
April 20th, 2025 16:52
Release
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully rendered poem that flows beautifully. Its message is a much needed one too. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏
April 20th, 2025 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully rendered poem that flows beautifully. Its message is a much needed one too. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏
April 20th, 2025 07:46
Release
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in a poem that has wonderful flow from good meter and rhyme. A very lovely read.
April 20th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in a poem that has wonderful flow from good meter and rhyme. A very lovely read.
April 20th, 2025 04:38
Release
Teddy.15 said:
I have the gift that I simply don\'t worry about the small stuff, it\'s not the case for all, I love your message it reminds us all that not only are we human we all go through things that make us unhappy, insecure and restless. Not everyone knows we all have a fabulous mechanism called courage, some like myself have to be pushed to the edge to find it. Beautiful rhyme beautiful wisdom. 🌹
April 20th, 2025 02:16
Teddy.15 said:
I have the gift that I simply don\'t worry about the small stuff, it\'s not the case for all, I love your message it reminds us all that not only are we human we all go through things that make us unhappy, insecure and restless. Not everyone knows we all have a fabulous mechanism called courage, some like myself have to be pushed to the edge to find it. Beautiful rhyme beautiful wisdom. 🌹
April 20th, 2025 02:16
Move forward
teardrop said:
Have no choice but to accept lifes fate. Can either be postitive and enjoy life or be miserable. Very thought provoking write which in my opinion makes this an excellent read. Thank you.
April 18th, 2025 05:45
teardrop said:
Have no choice but to accept lifes fate. Can either be postitive and enjoy life or be miserable. Very thought provoking write which in my opinion makes this an excellent read. Thank you.
April 18th, 2025 05:45
be brave...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And we all really do need those notes to ourselves. Wonderful job, my friend. A fave from me. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And we all really do need those notes to ourselves. Wonderful job, my friend. A fave from me. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 08:11
be brave...
arqios said:
Ah, it’s a rare occasion when rain is not happy or filled with excitement and dance but it can mute the mood as well. An excellent note to remind whenever it becomes necessary. 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:29
arqios said:
Ah, it’s a rare occasion when rain is not happy or filled with excitement and dance but it can mute the mood as well. An excellent note to remind whenever it becomes necessary. 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:29
be brave...
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is a uplifting and very positive write, and there is a kind of magical freedom that comes with dancing in the rain, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is a uplifting and very positive write, and there is a kind of magical freedom that comes with dancing in the rain, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 05:09
be brave...
sorenbarrett said:
I remember dancing in the rain when I was younger now I just walk quickly so as not to get as wet. When the temperature is good dancing in the rain is joyous. A lovely write.
April 11th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
I remember dancing in the rain when I was younger now I just walk quickly so as not to get as wet. When the temperature is good dancing in the rain is joyous. A lovely write.
April 11th, 2025 04:20
Move forward
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely. The sage perspective of maturity gently instructs youthful folly with what may, forsooth, help soften the path oft fraught with stones. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 19:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely. The sage perspective of maturity gently instructs youthful folly with what may, forsooth, help soften the path oft fraught with stones. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 19:42
ROAD
sorenbarrett said:
Here you use anthropomorphism to its best in the road telling its story. And by the end of the poem I feel that I have known that road and seen it in the past. Well done
April 6th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Here you use anthropomorphism to its best in the road telling its story. And by the end of the poem I feel that I have known that road and seen it in the past. Well done
April 6th, 2025 05:15
Water
sorenbarrett said:
I love nature and its conservation. Where I live I drink from a natural spring and also a well that have no additives and are clean and pure, no taste of chlorine. I can now taste it even in bottled water. There are trees and wild birds and animals all over this land and it is nature\'s gift to my eyes and ears. Love and protect what we have been given.
April 6th, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
I love nature and its conservation. Where I live I drink from a natural spring and also a well that have no additives and are clean and pure, no taste of chlorine. I can now taste it even in bottled water. There are trees and wild birds and animals all over this land and it is nature\'s gift to my eyes and ears. Love and protect what we have been given.
April 6th, 2025 05:11
White hair
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this poem. For me it was not the color but the falling out of hair that was the issue so I embraced it an shaved my hair short. Be what one is and do not deny oneself. Lovely poem
April 6th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this poem. For me it was not the color but the falling out of hair that was the issue so I embraced it an shaved my hair short. Be what one is and do not deny oneself. Lovely poem
April 6th, 2025 05:05
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