Comments received on poems by NafisaSB



What I love..
Sheryffat said:

Lovely!

December 30th, 2023 01:28

Truth sets you free
2781 said:

The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom.

December 29th, 2023 09:28

Truth sets you free
sorenbarrett said:

True. It is \"a tangled web we weave when frist we practice to deceive\" Good write

December 29th, 2023 05:30

Mute Generation
sorenbarrett said:

A call to be human and a great message to all of us. Well written

December 28th, 2023 09:05

Season\'s greetings
2781 said:

Better to bless than curse.

December 27th, 2023 08:07

Season\'s greetings
Lorenz said:

Darker future and disasters .

December 27th, 2023 04:52

Gaza in tears
Doggerel Dave said:

And so it goes with all wars.... of which there appear to be a never ending succession.

November 16th, 2023 01:21

never leave the hand..
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A great message poem didactic and expressed in superb rhyming. Kudos!!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

October 4th, 2023 06:03

never leave the hand..
LIZ said:

Yes yes yes!!! Staying present!!! Loving your people! Life is too precious and short!! Loved it!! 💚

September 23rd, 2023 03:14

never leave the hand..
2781 said:

Correct.

September 23rd, 2023 01:45

never leave the hand..
Serhat Doğan said:

I liked rhyme in this one

September 23rd, 2023 01:43

I am human
Doggerel Dave said:

Never knew you are puny - don\'t believe it anyway.
Now then, you may have taught me a good lesson. I tend to get impatient with what I\'ve termed \'misery poets\' here....... Maybe those contributions do help the writers - and are a hell of a lot cheaper than professional counselling.....

September 17th, 2023 22:34

i am just me
Doggerel Dave said:

Please know I haven\'t ignored your poem, but do find your comment particularly pertinent.....

September 16th, 2023 17:01

I am human
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t scare me off, will you...... Feel like I\'m walking on eggshells.....😂................................................. Satisfying write, actually.



September 16th, 2023 16:46

I am human
BlessedbyGod said:

I know how you feel, I have days like this,and sometimes the only way to express myself is by writing, like when I told my husband how I felt for the first time after we met, we were friends and I was scared how he would take it, I had to write him a letter

September 16th, 2023 08:14

I am human
jarcher54 said:

Just when you think everything that can be said has been said! I suspect you are a very passionate person, and while I\'ll be careful I also like the idea of some unbridled emotion! Yes, it is a mysterious world... no better way to explain it!

September 16th, 2023 01:30

Living the way i want..
Introverted Sage said:

This is great!
Second stanza is powerful!
Nice write!

September 10th, 2023 12:24

Living the way i want..
Doggerel Dave said:

You are in the right position, Nafisa. Go lady, go.

September 10th, 2023 06:40

Living the way i want..
LIZ said:

Hell yeah!!! This is powerful!! RESPECT!!

September 10th, 2023 01:11

Keep moving
Pop64 said:

This speaks well of the need, not for speed, but for momentum, advancement and growing. We all travel at different speeds, but we all can get to the same destination so long as we move.

September 8th, 2023 07:52

Keep moving
LIZ said:

Nice!!!!! Let people be! We all process things at different speeds! 🙏

September 8th, 2023 04:46

Do what is right
LIZ said:

Yes, because consequences will come. Good or bad! Might as well choose right! Very nice!!!

September 4th, 2023 02:27

Beware
Doggerel Dave said:

Well you\'ve not left me with much room for manoeuvre, have you?..........😜

August 30th, 2023 06:29

Breathes there a flower...
Doggerel Dave said:

Apologise to whomever you like - I had a good laugh!

August 29th, 2023 08:20

International Senior\'s Day
Doggerel Dave said:

I get your message and, to a certain extent applaud its intent.
However, Nafisa I\'d just like to point out that seniors aren\'t a special class and as a group should not be accorded special reverence. They are just the usual mix of humanity - good bad and indifferent, who have been around polluting the earth for longer than their unfortunately shorter lived co conspirators.........

August 22nd, 2023 18:54

I am strong
Nicole Kay said:

Very well written and moving, Thank you for sharing!

August 12th, 2023 12:36

I am strong
Parisab said:

Now everyone knows! My tolerance is my strength and My patience is my key-Your strength comes through your words…

August 11th, 2023 15:37

I am strong
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A strong and nicely expressed writing .. I especially like this line

I build castles from the bricks

Yes sometimes people hurt us but sometimes we have to find strength

August 11th, 2023 01:43

Autumn leaves
2781 said:

He has made everything beautiful in its time.

August 10th, 2023 01:05

Last September
peto said:

Great rhyme and flow
Does leave me wondering what did compel you to stay
Pleasure to read

August 9th, 2023 10:42

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