Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Emancipation
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of optimism all should encompass despite the dark times present right now..
Thanks for the read.
October 17th, 2024 08:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of optimism all should encompass despite the dark times present right now..
Thanks for the read.
October 17th, 2024 08:19
Fascinating colors
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and the messages are well thought out
October 17th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and the messages are well thought out
October 17th, 2024 06:48
Emancipation
sorenbarrett said:
Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a great message becomes a symphony of a poem
October 17th, 2024 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a great message becomes a symphony of a poem
October 17th, 2024 06:37
\"U\" AND \"I\"
sorenbarrett said:
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
October 17th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
October 17th, 2024 06:15
Twain will meet..
sorenbarrett said:
Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a disasterous fall. So well personified and a good metaphor.
October 4th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a disasterous fall. So well personified and a good metaphor.
October 4th, 2024 05:14
Twain will meet..
Neville said:
Q) who could possibly arrive here and leave again without
1) being impressed
2) hitting the heart shaped icon
3) leaving their kindest regards
A) I doubt if anybody could ..
Kindest Regards, Neville
October 4th, 2024 01:58
Neville said:
Q) who could possibly arrive here and leave again without
1) being impressed
2) hitting the heart shaped icon
3) leaving their kindest regards
A) I doubt if anybody could ..
Kindest Regards, Neville
October 4th, 2024 01:58
Fascinating colors
Cassie58 said:
A shade palette. I love all those names when I am searching for colours to paint my walls. They all sound so poetic. Frost white is poetry lol. I mean plain white is positively dull and boring. A beautiful poem Safina. Much enjoyed. Hope all is well with you.
September 26th, 2024 08:43
Cassie58 said:
A shade palette. I love all those names when I am searching for colours to paint my walls. They all sound so poetic. Frost white is poetry lol. I mean plain white is positively dull and boring. A beautiful poem Safina. Much enjoyed. Hope all is well with you.
September 26th, 2024 08:43
Fascinating colors
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have just cracked it immediately above here: (Become a big company\'s marketing manager). Rename at least some of them \"Subtle Blue\", \"Subtle Green\", etc....
Thanks for a fun write.
September 25th, 2024 09:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have just cracked it immediately above here: (Become a big company\'s marketing manager). Rename at least some of them \"Subtle Blue\", \"Subtle Green\", etc....
Thanks for a fun write.
September 25th, 2024 09:35
\'Eyes\'
Thad Wilk said:
A delightful poem
great brevity!! 👍
A treat to read;
love it, 😍
penned superbly!✌️
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
September 17th, 2024 08:48
Thad Wilk said:
A delightful poem
great brevity!! 👍
A treat to read;
love it, 😍
penned superbly!✌️
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
September 17th, 2024 08:48
On war..
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
September 17th, 2024 03:08
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
September 17th, 2024 03:08
\'Eyes\'
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.
September 17th, 2024 03:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.
September 17th, 2024 03:05
\'Eyes\'
Cassie58 said:
I do believe that poets need to have great observational skills, so I agree very much with this fine piece of brevity Safina. Eyes are also the mirrors to the soul. Wishing you a great day dear poet. 🌹
September 15th, 2024 09:25
Cassie58 said:
I do believe that poets need to have great observational skills, so I agree very much with this fine piece of brevity Safina. Eyes are also the mirrors to the soul. Wishing you a great day dear poet. 🌹
September 15th, 2024 09:25
Water
adnan it is said:
\"A trickle of water
That leaks from a tap
Can in the future
Change the shape of your map\"
This can be interpreted in many ways that\'s the beauty!!! Keep writing
September 15th, 2024 03:05
adnan it is said:
\"A trickle of water
That leaks from a tap
Can in the future
Change the shape of your map\"
This can be interpreted in many ways that\'s the beauty!!! Keep writing
September 15th, 2024 03:05
On war..
Dan Williams said:
It pains me to mention that there have been wars as long as there have been humans, and likely will continue.
Territory, power, gold, and the worst; religion. We never learn.
September 15th, 2024 00:34
Dan Williams said:
It pains me to mention that there have been wars as long as there have been humans, and likely will continue.
Territory, power, gold, and the worst; religion. We never learn.
September 15th, 2024 00:34
On war..
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, such a strong write. No one wins in war. Everyone loses. Words wisely chosen. Have a happy Saturday dear poet 🌹
September 14th, 2024 12:38
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, such a strong write. No one wins in war. Everyone loses. Words wisely chosen. Have a happy Saturday dear poet 🌹
September 14th, 2024 12:38
On war..
Doggerel Dave said:
;You shouldn\'t start me off again - I\'ve only just calmed down!😂
Strong write, safina.
September 14th, 2024 01:55
Doggerel Dave said:
;You shouldn\'t start me off again - I\'ve only just calmed down!😂
Strong write, safina.
September 14th, 2024 01:55
Diplomacy
Doggerel Dave said:
A very ambivalent attitude to a Diplomat, If I may say so….
I confess that at times I wasn’t absolutely certain if you were focusing on the professional Diplomat or a quality in an otherwise ordinary individual….
If the professional, I would say that they might achieve more than your average politician who goes in with his boots on.
If however the individual is in focus, then I tend to see such a person as potentially a hypocrite…..
A thoughtful write, Safina.
September 13th, 2024 06:24
Doggerel Dave said:
A very ambivalent attitude to a Diplomat, If I may say so….
I confess that at times I wasn’t absolutely certain if you were focusing on the professional Diplomat or a quality in an otherwise ordinary individual….
If the professional, I would say that they might achieve more than your average politician who goes in with his boots on.
If however the individual is in focus, then I tend to see such a person as potentially a hypocrite…..
A thoughtful write, Safina.
September 13th, 2024 06:24
A complaint
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35
forever fighting
Cassie58 said:
A fine tribute Nafisa , to those doctors who worked tirelessly through COVID to save lives and keep us safe, while they themselves were also at risk. Not only them, but nurses too who also played their part. Penned with gratitude and read in total agreement. Have a beautiful day dear poet.
September 8th, 2024 03:43
Cassie58 said:
A fine tribute Nafisa , to those doctors who worked tirelessly through COVID to save lives and keep us safe, while they themselves were also at risk. Not only them, but nurses too who also played their part. Penned with gratitude and read in total agreement. Have a beautiful day dear poet.
September 8th, 2024 03:43
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