Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Innocent victims
Poetic Licence said:
We can hope that somewhere in all the darkness there is still some light for them, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:25
Poetic Licence said:
We can hope that somewhere in all the darkness there is still some light for them, nicely expressed and written
August 1st, 2025 05:25
Innocent victims
sorenbarrett said:
The world seems to have a shortage on compassion. Nicely worded this poem calls this point out.
August 1st, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
The world seems to have a shortage on compassion. Nicely worded this poem calls this point out.
August 1st, 2025 04:31
The bubble has burst..
Neville said:
This happens so often .. Oh\' how the mighty fall .. It\'s just a shame its not that Orange one .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 01:37
Neville said:
This happens so often .. Oh\' how the mighty fall .. It\'s just a shame its not that Orange one .. Neville
July 29th, 2025 01:37
The bubble has burst..
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
How the great orators and the weight of advertising can fool the masses to elect and then regret succumbing to the big lie and the litany of broken promises. An exposition of heartless leaders and their effects on the common folk in a down to earth narrative makes this poem compulsory reading for those of us seeking change and a better way of life. Excellent, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 04:29
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
How the great orators and the weight of advertising can fool the masses to elect and then regret succumbing to the big lie and the litany of broken promises. An exposition of heartless leaders and their effects on the common folk in a down to earth narrative makes this poem compulsory reading for those of us seeking change and a better way of life. Excellent, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 04:29
The bubble has burst..
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a sobering and sharply delivered poem. The rhythm fits the disillusionment well, and that final line really drove it home for me. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a sobering and sharply delivered poem. The rhythm fits the disillusionment well, and that final line really drove it home for me. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:47
The bubble has burst..
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for putting into words the great deception that has been perpetrated on so many, who knew so little. Buyers remorse is a terrible thing. How we will recover is anybody\'s guess. Thank you for speaking out!
July 25th, 2025 09:12
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for putting into words the great deception that has been perpetrated on so many, who knew so little. Buyers remorse is a terrible thing. How we will recover is anybody\'s guess. Thank you for speaking out!
July 25th, 2025 09:12
The bubble has burst..
arqios said:
The rhymes are so delightful. What an enjoyable read. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 25th, 2025 07:13
arqios said:
The rhymes are so delightful. What an enjoyable read. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 25th, 2025 07:13
The bubble has burst..
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem you have expressed the sentiments of many. Does one have to amputate the leg to save the life or will the person die of shock and hemorrhage? Time will tell but for present there is certainly much pain and a lot of morphine may be needed.
July 25th, 2025 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
In this poem you have expressed the sentiments of many. Does one have to amputate the leg to save the life or will the person die of shock and hemorrhage? Time will tell but for present there is certainly much pain and a lot of morphine may be needed.
July 25th, 2025 04:34
The bubble has burst..
Poetic Licence said:
The realization they made a mistake, the hen has come home to roost, as they say , enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 03:04
Poetic Licence said:
The realization they made a mistake, the hen has come home to roost, as they say , enjoyed the read
July 25th, 2025 03:04
Impact
Damaso said:
And now watch the flowers grow from below. Wow, how profound! What a question you\'re asking, but I think by asking it, you\'re taking on the voice of the whole world. This text shows the courage to know oneself so fragile and yet reach out to reach for the eternal. Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 08:46
Damaso said:
And now watch the flowers grow from below. Wow, how profound! What a question you\'re asking, but I think by asking it, you\'re taking on the voice of the whole world. This text shows the courage to know oneself so fragile and yet reach out to reach for the eternal. Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 08:46
Impact
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A soulful poem so appealing and impressive, your poetry will be remembered as so great. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:46
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A soulful poem so appealing and impressive, your poetry will be remembered as so great. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
July 22nd, 2025 08:46
Impact
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, safina,
A beautiful poem of wonder as the author ponders her legacy after the inevitable. Perhaps to be remembered as one remembers the loved ones they have lost. In a way the question also asks, how do people see me now, those nearest and dearest to me, colleagues, fellow poets etc. You have treated the subject admirably, delicately without being morbid. I like this poem, very much so and I am sure your poetry will live on and be loved long after you have flown. Much praise for this one.
Hope you have a lovely week ahead,
Tony.
July 21st, 2025 09:09
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, safina,
A beautiful poem of wonder as the author ponders her legacy after the inevitable. Perhaps to be remembered as one remembers the loved ones they have lost. In a way the question also asks, how do people see me now, those nearest and dearest to me, colleagues, fellow poets etc. You have treated the subject admirably, delicately without being morbid. I like this poem, very much so and I am sure your poetry will live on and be loved long after you have flown. Much praise for this one.
Hope you have a lovely week ahead,
Tony.
July 21st, 2025 09:09
Impact
Poetic Licence said:
If it least we are remembered for a good thing, thats all we can ask, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
If it least we are remembered for a good thing, thats all we can ask, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:29
Impact
sorenbarrett said:
Well written reflection upon the impact that one life may have in the ripples that follow it into the lives of others. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Well written reflection upon the impact that one life may have in the ripples that follow it into the lives of others. Nicely done
July 21st, 2025 04:01
The storm
Cheeky Missy said:
Rather vivid despite the disarming simplicity unveiling scenes of destruction gradually unfolding to a devastating conclusion. And yet, the winds and waves obey the LORD, to Whom we cry for mercy and deliverance, as the Scriptures declare. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 23:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Rather vivid despite the disarming simplicity unveiling scenes of destruction gradually unfolding to a devastating conclusion. And yet, the winds and waves obey the LORD, to Whom we cry for mercy and deliverance, as the Scriptures declare. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 16th, 2025 23:16
Be the first
Priya Tomar said:
Lessons to live in the world lovingly.....
Magnum opus....
July 16th, 2025 09:15
Priya Tomar said:
Lessons to live in the world lovingly.....
Magnum opus....
July 16th, 2025 09:15
The storm
Neville said:
I have lived through such storms and know for sure there are more on the horizon .. an impressive poem that I enjoyed very much my friend .. Neville
July 16th, 2025 06:35
Neville said:
I have lived through such storms and know for sure there are more on the horizon .. an impressive poem that I enjoyed very much my friend .. Neville
July 16th, 2025 06:35
The storm
Damaso said:
Terrible fate. I thoroughly enjoyed it. A superb, unparalleled story. Gripping and heartbreaking. Thank you for this; you truly leave me reeling. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 09:41
Damaso said:
Terrible fate. I thoroughly enjoyed it. A superb, unparalleled story. Gripping and heartbreaking. Thank you for this; you truly leave me reeling. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 09:41
\'C\'
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
What a wonderful creation in poetic litreture. Beautifully clever and oozing with charm and wisdom. This was an absolute joy to read - truly. Accolades galore for this one.
You are in fine health and happy, I trust,
Tony.
July 14th, 2025 07:25
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Safina,
What a wonderful creation in poetic litreture. Beautifully clever and oozing with charm and wisdom. This was an absolute joy to read - truly. Accolades galore for this one.
You are in fine health and happy, I trust,
Tony.
July 14th, 2025 07:25
The storm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless, vivid ride, my dear friend! I love how you give the storm a full arc...a furious beginning, vengeful peak, and even a worn-out exit. That personification is strong throughout, especially the final stanzas. “Laughs till they do split” is a chilling, poetic image. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a relentless, vivid ride, my dear friend! I love how you give the storm a full arc...a furious beginning, vengeful peak, and even a worn-out exit. That personification is strong throughout, especially the final stanzas. “Laughs till they do split” is a chilling, poetic image. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 13th, 2025 08:05
The storm
sorenbarrett said:
Well written it took me by storm. I have been in such storms and it took me back to them. A fave
July 13th, 2025 04:57
sorenbarrett said:
Well written it took me by storm. I have been in such storms and it took me back to them. A fave
July 13th, 2025 04:57
The storm
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich descriptive piece, timely inasmuch as I believe events such as that are going to become very much more common as the climate changes.
A prophetic write that I could feel....
July 13th, 2025 02:14
Doggerel Dave said:
A rich descriptive piece, timely inasmuch as I believe events such as that are going to become very much more common as the climate changes.
A prophetic write that I could feel....
July 13th, 2025 02:14
A time for everything
Damaso said:
Thank you so much for your kind words. Sometimes you don\'t know how they fit perfectly into someone else\'s puzzle. It\'s a pleasure to read. As always, I look forward to reading more. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:44
Damaso said:
Thank you so much for your kind words. Sometimes you don\'t know how they fit perfectly into someone else\'s puzzle. It\'s a pleasure to read. As always, I look forward to reading more. Best regards.
July 10th, 2025 12:44
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