Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
The country child
Mase ♪ said:
I must be rare in that case. Found one... Myself, lol. Good write!
July 7th, 2024 01:03
Mase ♪ said:
I must be rare in that case. Found one... Myself, lol. Good write!
July 7th, 2024 01:03
The Lake
MendedFences27 said:
Wonderful descriptions and imagery.
It seemed a peaceful lake, yet one must be wary where one walks. Was this reflective of something you saw, or something created from your imagination? - Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
Wonderful descriptions and imagery.
It seemed a peaceful lake, yet one must be wary where one walks. Was this reflective of something you saw, or something created from your imagination? - Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:14
What is love
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to build and mature; they are not ephemeral.
July 2nd, 2024 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to build and mature; they are not ephemeral.
July 2nd, 2024 01:54
the cycle ride
Doggerel Dave said:
No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a revelation. Good memory invoked. Many thanks.
July 1st, 2024 18:51
Doggerel Dave said:
No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a revelation. Good memory invoked. Many thanks.
July 1st, 2024 18:51
the cycle ride
sorenbarrett said:
An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
July 1st, 2024 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
July 1st, 2024 08:09
The beauty of Ooty
Cassie58 said:
You took me there with your beautiful poetry. I enjoyed the visit very much. Such beauty in your mountains and valleys. A lovely write. Thank you dear poet.
June 30th, 2024 02:52
Cassie58 said:
You took me there with your beautiful poetry. I enjoyed the visit very much. Such beauty in your mountains and valleys. A lovely write. Thank you dear poet.
June 30th, 2024 02:52
Sailing on the sea
Cassie58 said:
The ocean holds many moods and many adventures. I like where you took me here. Nicely penned dear poet.
June 29th, 2024 05:41
Cassie58 said:
The ocean holds many moods and many adventures. I like where you took me here. Nicely penned dear poet.
June 29th, 2024 05:41
Rural life
NafisaSB said:
Thank you. One item on my bucket list was a small bungalow in the countryside. Now that we have shifted to a high rise tower in a bustling city like Mumbai I think it will remain a pipe dream , though am happy where life has brought me
June 25th, 2024 09:46
NafisaSB said:
Thank you. One item on my bucket list was a small bungalow in the countryside. Now that we have shifted to a high rise tower in a bustling city like Mumbai I think it will remain a pipe dream , though am happy where life has brought me
June 25th, 2024 09:46
Rural life
sorenbarrett said:
The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I have washed my cloths on a board in a hollow log and identify with a rustic life. I identify with the gong from the church having heard the church bell from a distant small country church. Happiness and less strife for sure. So nicely written it brings happiness to the soul.
June 25th, 2024 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I have washed my cloths on a board in a hollow log and identify with a rustic life. I identify with the gong from the church having heard the church bell from a distant small country church. Happiness and less strife for sure. So nicely written it brings happiness to the soul.
June 25th, 2024 09:04
Rural life
Neilton said:
ah simple life without technology .perfect discription!
June 25th, 2024 08:15
Neilton said:
ah simple life without technology .perfect discription!
June 25th, 2024 08:15
Puddles
Cassie58 said:
Rain when there has been drought, such a blessing. Even those muddy puddles look good. Beautiful description here in your lines. All good wishes.
June 21st, 2024 02:42
Cassie58 said:
Rain when there has been drought, such a blessing. Even those muddy puddles look good. Beautiful description here in your lines. All good wishes.
June 21st, 2024 02:42
Rain,rain,rain
Cassie58 said:
I’ve heard the monsoon season is a blessing for scorched earth. I can imagine everything bursting into life after the downpours. A visually pleasing poem. Lovely work.
June 20th, 2024 00:07
Cassie58 said:
I’ve heard the monsoon season is a blessing for scorched earth. I can imagine everything bursting into life after the downpours. A visually pleasing poem. Lovely work.
June 20th, 2024 00:07
Rain,rain,rain
Doggerel Dave said:
If rain is what you want and need, I\'m happy for you.... sometimes though know it is quite possible to have too much of a good thing.....LOL
June 19th, 2024 07:56
Doggerel Dave said:
If rain is what you want and need, I\'m happy for you.... sometimes though know it is quite possible to have too much of a good thing.....LOL
June 19th, 2024 07:56
My treasure trove
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery and meaning. Money isn’t everything. Much enjoyed NafisaSB. Have a beautiful day.
June 18th, 2024 07:32
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery and meaning. Money isn’t everything. Much enjoyed NafisaSB. Have a beautiful day.
June 18th, 2024 07:32
Give me my due
NafisaSB said:
yes - one can pour out what\'s in one heat, and then either store it or publish it
thanks for the comments - have a lovely weekend
June 15th, 2024 01:01
NafisaSB said:
yes - one can pour out what\'s in one heat, and then either store it or publish it
thanks for the comments - have a lovely weekend
June 15th, 2024 01:01
Give me my due
Cassie58 said:
A call out that you wish to be noticed, appreciated and heard. You pen your stanzas well and with conviction. Nicely done NafisaSB.
June 14th, 2024 00:21
Cassie58 said:
A call out that you wish to be noticed, appreciated and heard. You pen your stanzas well and with conviction. Nicely done NafisaSB.
June 14th, 2024 00:21
Flowers
Cassie58 said:
I love fresh flowers. Lovely to have the colour and fragrance in the home. Although I buy them, I don’t like picking them, preferring them to stay in their natural setting. A bit of a contradiction I know. I love your floral bouquet here. Have a happy Wednesday.
June 12th, 2024 02:52
Cassie58 said:
I love fresh flowers. Lovely to have the colour and fragrance in the home. Although I buy them, I don’t like picking them, preferring them to stay in their natural setting. A bit of a contradiction I know. I love your floral bouquet here. Have a happy Wednesday.
June 12th, 2024 02:52
Struggle
Cassie58 said:
I felt your struggle here with negativity. I think most people have suffered similar periodically. Nicely composed lines here. I enjoyed your post dear poet.
June 11th, 2024 13:56
Cassie58 said:
I felt your struggle here with negativity. I think most people have suffered similar periodically. Nicely composed lines here. I enjoyed your post dear poet.
June 11th, 2024 13:56
Flame of desire
Cassie58 said:
So very nicely conveyed. Beautiful poetry NafisaSB. All good wishes.
June 9th, 2024 10:14
Cassie58 said:
So very nicely conveyed. Beautiful poetry NafisaSB. All good wishes.
June 9th, 2024 10:14
Flame of desire
sorenbarrett said:
Such a descriptive image of desire it is well displayed in this poem. Nicely done
June 9th, 2024 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
Such a descriptive image of desire it is well displayed in this poem. Nicely done
June 9th, 2024 08:59
Gaiety & Content
Cassie58 said:
The cat, warm by the fire, is always such a picture of contentment. Our cat always searches for the warmest place in the house. Sometimes on my bed, sleeping in sunlight. Plenty of action,, movement and imagery packed into your lines. A most enjoyable read.
June 6th, 2024 00:43
Cassie58 said:
The cat, warm by the fire, is always such a picture of contentment. Our cat always searches for the warmest place in the house. Sometimes on my bed, sleeping in sunlight. Plenty of action,, movement and imagery packed into your lines. A most enjoyable read.
June 6th, 2024 00:43
Covid in 2020
Cassie58 said:
An epic narrative here of the COVID story. It all seems along time ago now, but it certainly caused havoc. You have covered many aspects of the pandemic. Well done. So much suffering.
June 5th, 2024 11:30
Cassie58 said:
An epic narrative here of the COVID story. It all seems along time ago now, but it certainly caused havoc. You have covered many aspects of the pandemic. Well done. So much suffering.
June 5th, 2024 11:30
Covid in 2020
sorenbarrett said:
Many facts are now leaking out about mismanagement, over reactions and under reactions, greed, ignorance, fear as a tool, cover ups, shifting blame, effects of vaccines, and man\'s attempt to alter nature. More to come out still.
June 4th, 2024 13:05
sorenbarrett said:
Many facts are now leaking out about mismanagement, over reactions and under reactions, greed, ignorance, fear as a tool, cover ups, shifting blame, effects of vaccines, and man\'s attempt to alter nature. More to come out still.
June 4th, 2024 13:05
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