Premonition
sorenbarrett said:

Call it premonition or panic attack what ever it is a very unpleasant situation. Very nicely written with images enhancing its description.

August 26th, 2024 05:10

Premonition
Doggerel Dave said:

I know a competent tradesman who fixes roofs. Says he would be prepared to fix yours for a modest fee plus an expenses paid trip to India and return.... From your last neat stanza it feels like you have everything under control really..... 👍

August 26th, 2024 00:54

their 1000 watt smile
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 25th, 2024 15:52

their 1000 watt smile
Cassie58 said:

Dear Safina, your words flooded me with wonderful memories of my own grandchildren. I am lucky enough to have two them living with me still. A lovely tribute to the younger generation. May they always make you smile poet. 🌹 Nothing like the smile of a child to warm your heart.

August 25th, 2024 01:21

My fitbit
sorenbarrett said:

Sounds like another word for conscience. A most fun write

August 24th, 2024 09:07

Senior\'s day
Doggerel Dave said:

You can afford to be a day late when a Senior.... no more schedules , deadlines...Oh sorry, you haven\'t still got your nose to the grindstone, have you?
As a poetic celebration, you have cracked it!

August 22nd, 2024 07:55

Water
Thoughtless said:

Here in the United States, we seem to always be in a perpetual state of drought. It\'s especially that way here in Kansas which has always been dry. The first settlers here did so because of heavy rainfall. They soon found out that Kansas never gets that much rain. Now we get it in bursts with heavy flooding followed by long dry spells. People often do not understand climate change because the climate itself is not local. If we get a hard winter, somebody will have sign in their car window on which is written like this, Damn this global warming. They don\'t understand. I never finished university, yet some of the grads that I have known are less educated than I am. I could not have said that a few years ago. They pick one subject and only get a dilettante\'s view of math or earth sciences. They are sadly lacking in logical reasoning as well. That being written, some kids are beginning to study more subjects in depth. So, there is hope.

August 21st, 2024 22:20

Water
Cassie58 said:

So eloquently written. Water is so precious. We have a great deal of rainfall, but not enough reservoirs to catch it when it falls. Instead, the rivers get overburdened and are prone to flooding. Not only that to the shame of our water companies, sewage pollutes our rivers. This is a huge subject to tackle and you dear poet have given us much to contemplate. A world wide problem, not just local. 🌹

August 21st, 2024 08:50

Water
sorenbarrett said:

The more people the more our need for water. Conserve water and stop population increase.

August 21st, 2024 04:53

Water
NafisaSB said:

yes - sad but true that areas needing rain are being deprived, while others being inundated
someone surely laughing up there - bcos evaporation should cause rain, but there is more drought all around..

August 20th, 2024 23:57

i will dance..
sorenbarrett said:

A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.

August 18th, 2024 06:41

White hair
Cassie58 said:

I don’t dye mine either Safina. Happy to let nature take its course. I like my grey. Good health is far more important than hair colour. Enjoy yourself, come what may, is sage advice in this finely penned poem. Happy Sunday.

August 11th, 2024 01:53

A hug
sorenbarrett said:

True statements here holding someone close promotes union and a sense of security. Nicely said.

August 4th, 2024 05:35

The leaves
Doggerel Dave said:

Where I live too many people want to sweep them up into a bin. The trees they come from are older than the concrete paths which are swept.
I enjoy the multicolours of autumn.
Well painted picture you\'ve written.

July 10th, 2024 23:39

The country child
Mase ♪ said:

Yep, there\'s always room to be a leader, though. Thanks Nafisa.

July 7th, 2024 09:57