Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Earth Angels
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written, yes if you have real friends cherish them but even some can like flowers die away, Really enjoyable read, and i am going to Fav it.
December 13th, 2024 03:27
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written, yes if you have real friends cherish them but even some can like flowers die away, Really enjoyable read, and i am going to Fav it.
December 13th, 2024 03:27
Earth Angels
sorenbarrett said:
There are too few of these earth angles and it would be nice if each of us became one. Nicely written
December 13th, 2024 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
There are too few of these earth angles and it would be nice if each of us became one. Nicely written
December 13th, 2024 03:27
Steps
Doggerel Dave said:
I missed your survivour dance - I\'ll catch up when I get the steps right.....👍😊
Neat wise write, Nafisa
December 12th, 2024 19:58
Doggerel Dave said:
I missed your survivour dance - I\'ll catch up when I get the steps right.....👍😊
Neat wise write, Nafisa
December 12th, 2024 19:58
Steps
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the juxtaposition and the wise words. Flows beautifully! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 06:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love the juxtaposition and the wise words. Flows beautifully! Wonderful job! 🌹👏
December 12th, 2024 06:41
Steps
Neville said:
Its not always easy, is it but the advice, the principle and the undertaking are all achievable if once can remain focussed and motivated .. a real treat of a poem NAFISASB .. 😎💛👍
December 11th, 2024 09:27
Neville said:
Its not always easy, is it but the advice, the principle and the undertaking are all achievable if once can remain focussed and motivated .. a real treat of a poem NAFISASB .. 😎💛👍
December 11th, 2024 09:27
Steps
arqios said:
Love the rhythmic forward positive validation and the one step back in repetition, in both movements gaining the strength resulting in a perfectly balanced sort of mantra or parasympathetic advances as we inhale and exhale…. Would be quite life altering I imagine.
December 6th, 2024 14:37
arqios said:
Love the rhythmic forward positive validation and the one step back in repetition, in both movements gaining the strength resulting in a perfectly balanced sort of mantra or parasympathetic advances as we inhale and exhale…. Would be quite life altering I imagine.
December 6th, 2024 14:37
Steps
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully penned dear poet and wise counsel indeed. Thank you for sharing your wisdom with us all.
December 6th, 2024 00:10
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully penned dear poet and wise counsel indeed. Thank you for sharing your wisdom with us all.
December 6th, 2024 00:10
Gossip
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. \"...the walls have ears.\" Should have kept our secrets hidden, but it\'s far too tempting to spill the same, to more than our close friends, and oh! the ensuing effects reverberating through the very centuries! Excellently rendered with charming winsomness and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 5th, 2024 02:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. \"...the walls have ears.\" Should have kept our secrets hidden, but it\'s far too tempting to spill the same, to more than our close friends, and oh! the ensuing effects reverberating through the very centuries! Excellently rendered with charming winsomness and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 5th, 2024 02:00
Gossip
Poetic Licence said:
Advice there many who should take on board, enjoyable read
December 3rd, 2024 23:46
Poetic Licence said:
Advice there many who should take on board, enjoyable read
December 3rd, 2024 23:46
Things I love
Cassie58 said:
So very well expressed safina. Life can be scary at times. Beautifully penned.
December 3rd, 2024 05:29
Cassie58 said:
So very well expressed safina. Life can be scary at times. Beautifully penned.
December 3rd, 2024 05:29
Gossip
Neville said:
there are those who say the pen is mightier than the sword & whilst by and large I agree, sometimes I find it pays to keep the cap screwed on tight .. I like what I found here my friend .. sage advice and intelligent ink all round .. Neville
December 3rd, 2024 01:15
Neville said:
there are those who say the pen is mightier than the sword & whilst by and large I agree, sometimes I find it pays to keep the cap screwed on tight .. I like what I found here my friend .. sage advice and intelligent ink all round .. Neville
December 3rd, 2024 01:15
Gossip
Doggerel Dave said:
Having a wee bit of trouble with minions...but never mind, an old saw \"What goes around comes around\" covers it too, I think, I hope....
Well put Nafisa. Serious advice.
November 29th, 2024 21:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Having a wee bit of trouble with minions...but never mind, an old saw \"What goes around comes around\" covers it too, I think, I hope....
Well put Nafisa. Serious advice.
November 29th, 2024 21:43
Gossip
arqios said:
And a ‘running mouth’ is a well of trouble that never runs dry! Good stuff safina. Thanks for sharing.
November 29th, 2024 06:18
arqios said:
And a ‘running mouth’ is a well of trouble that never runs dry! Good stuff safina. Thanks for sharing.
November 29th, 2024 06:18
Gossip
sorenbarrett said:
Very good advice to all. Once you open your mouth, you open it to all the flies and vermin of lies. Nicely stated.
November 29th, 2024 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Very good advice to all. Once you open your mouth, you open it to all the flies and vermin of lies. Nicely stated.
November 29th, 2024 04:28
Whenever
Teddy.15 said:
As a woman is so appreciate this, it\'s a lonely life without even just one friend you can trust with your life. Having them makes every day easier and when we do have those darker moments just a cup of tea or wine can make it all so much better. Love this. 🌹
November 26th, 2024 05:30
Teddy.15 said:
As a woman is so appreciate this, it\'s a lonely life without even just one friend you can trust with your life. Having them makes every day easier and when we do have those darker moments just a cup of tea or wine can make it all so much better. Love this. 🌹
November 26th, 2024 05:30
Secrets
Neville said:
There is so much truth herein .. to break a sacred promise is such a major crime .. I could have said sin but it would have rhymed and felt the seriousness of the topic would have declined .. Hope you get my drift anyway .. well penned my literary friend .. Neville
November 26th, 2024 01:30
Neville said:
There is so much truth herein .. to break a sacred promise is such a major crime .. I could have said sin but it would have rhymed and felt the seriousness of the topic would have declined .. Hope you get my drift anyway .. well penned my literary friend .. Neville
November 26th, 2024 01:30
Secrets
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, you offer sage advice here. A strong composition. Well done. All good wishes.
November 22nd, 2024 15:25
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, you offer sage advice here. A strong composition. Well done. All good wishes.
November 22nd, 2024 15:25
Secrets
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of good advice, integrity, and fidelity. Very nicely stated in poetic form.
November 22nd, 2024 05:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of good advice, integrity, and fidelity. Very nicely stated in poetic form.
November 22nd, 2024 05:50
My fitbit
Neville said:
I had one of the earliest models .. she kept nagging me to do this, more of that and less of the other .. in the end, we got divorced .. great little fun poem my friend ..
November 21st, 2024 02:42
Neville said:
I had one of the earliest models .. she kept nagging me to do this, more of that and less of the other .. in the end, we got divorced .. great little fun poem my friend ..
November 21st, 2024 02:42
Whenever
Neville said:
We all need them, don\'t we .. We rely on them variously, not just now and then, but as you quite writely say .. whenever
November 21st, 2024 02:32
Neville said:
We all need them, don\'t we .. We rely on them variously, not just now and then, but as you quite writely say .. whenever
November 21st, 2024 02:32
Things I love
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming in a disarming seeming sincerity, while also invoking that familiar song from Sound of Music, with a pretty twist of your own to add particular flavor. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Charming in a disarming seeming sincerity, while also invoking that familiar song from Sound of Music, with a pretty twist of your own to add particular flavor. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a subtly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 21st, 2024 02:05
Whenever
Doggerel Dave said:
You have it made if you have mutually reliable relationships of what sound like long standing.
Keep them going, and take care of yourself.
November 20th, 2024 23:58
Doggerel Dave said:
You have it made if you have mutually reliable relationships of what sound like long standing.
Keep them going, and take care of yourself.
November 20th, 2024 23:58
Things I love
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem on
things you love and hate!! 👍
Powerful penning,
the rhyme scheme is great!!🤩
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad
November 18th, 2024 11:14
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific poem on
things you love and hate!! 👍
Powerful penning,
the rhyme scheme is great!!🤩
Thanks for sharing poetess!!
Best wishes 🍀🤗🌹 Thad
November 18th, 2024 11:14
Things I love
Neville said:
The world is full of opposites .. and as extreme as some of them may be .. I am a great believer in the unity of them that is necessary for balance to be established or maintained .. such a delightful and well penned offering you have gifted us here today young lady .. many thanks .. Neville
November 18th, 2024 02:28
Neville said:
The world is full of opposites .. and as extreme as some of them may be .. I am a great believer in the unity of them that is necessary for balance to be established or maintained .. such a delightful and well penned offering you have gifted us here today young lady .. many thanks .. Neville
November 18th, 2024 02:28
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