Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
two faces of married life
Doggerel Dave said:
I definitely understand VP 1 - I never married because I did not want to make any woman miserable for the whole of her life....
August 5th, 2023 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I definitely understand VP 1 - I never married because I did not want to make any woman miserable for the whole of her life....
August 5th, 2023 19:09
two faces of married life
-Iris- said:
I absolutely adored this read!! Gave me a good chuckle here and there as well. Definitely worth the long read, well done!
July 9th, 2023 09:28
-Iris- said:
I absolutely adored this read!! Gave me a good chuckle here and there as well. Definitely worth the long read, well done!
July 9th, 2023 09:28
two faces of married life
mvvenkataraman said:
Just because the poem is very long,
Not reading it is absolutely wrong,
I think this is an educating song,
If read, benefits to all will belong!
July 9th, 2023 03:07
mvvenkataraman said:
Just because the poem is very long,
Not reading it is absolutely wrong,
I think this is an educating song,
If read, benefits to all will belong!
July 9th, 2023 03:07
Words of wisdom
L. B. Mek said:
well then, good thing
girls can set us feeble men straight
and rid the world of all evil, overnight
since, all blame is pre-assigned
to \'man\'
lol
yeah, ok
forgive me if i choose to believe
the warrior queen\'s in my life
and heroin\'s of history, who chose
to not hide behind that
oh so convenient victimhood
status
as their crutch, in life....
June 30th, 2023 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
well then, good thing
girls can set us feeble men straight
and rid the world of all evil, overnight
since, all blame is pre-assigned
to \'man\'
lol
yeah, ok
forgive me if i choose to believe
the warrior queen\'s in my life
and heroin\'s of history, who chose
to not hide behind that
oh so convenient victimhood
status
as their crutch, in life....
June 30th, 2023 06:29
stars
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely and interesting writing nicely expressed )) liked the read
June 28th, 2023 01:19
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely and interesting writing nicely expressed )) liked the read
June 28th, 2023 01:19
The wind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing ! Nicely expressed poem ..
And yes the wind can be annoying sometimes .. but maybe it knows no other way .. just like some of us don’t know how to be any different
June 28th, 2023 01:02
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing ! Nicely expressed poem ..
And yes the wind can be annoying sometimes .. but maybe it knows no other way .. just like some of us don’t know how to be any different
June 28th, 2023 01:02
Improving self
2781 said:
Better to do something and expect nothing.
Than to do nothing and expect something.
That was my thought of the day!
June 27th, 2023 06:31
2781 said:
Better to do something and expect nothing.
Than to do nothing and expect something.
That was my thought of the day!
June 27th, 2023 06:31
Improving self
Ok Waleed said:
I like to think of it as a monkey race and I need the best banana
June 27th, 2023 01:34
Ok Waleed said:
I like to think of it as a monkey race and I need the best banana
June 27th, 2023 01:34
Upwards and onwards
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 04:28
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words especially like the last few lines
June 26th, 2023 04:28
Self respect
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing I like this 🙂
June 26th, 2023 04:28
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing I like this 🙂
June 26th, 2023 04:28
on clouds
L. B. Mek said:
so beautiful
this, that kaleidoscopic view of life
where wisdom
grants a glimpse of life\'s gray feats
and rainfall\'s
cooling refrain of melodic, healing
..
such a soothing read, dear Poet
thank you!
June 5th, 2023 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
so beautiful
this, that kaleidoscopic view of life
where wisdom
grants a glimpse of life\'s gray feats
and rainfall\'s
cooling refrain of melodic, healing
..
such a soothing read, dear Poet
thank you!
June 5th, 2023 03:27
cascading water falls..
Soman Ragavan said:
NafisaSB
cascading water fall
My comments on the poem \"Cascading water fall” by NafisaSB
Your poetic eye has caught things happening in the waterfall :
--the water falls gently at first; --the droplets pause; --they drop madly, making noise; --the river foams and roars; --the waves rise with power; --the birds take flight; --the fishes scamper away from the pressure caused by the falling water.
We should point out that the falling water helps the water to oxygenate, which is good for the fish.
Regarding rivers, we can note the following :
The river flows on, going downhill, gathering speed and power; it can move rocks, break its banks, pull along nearby trees; it makes noise; it is mostly unsalty, but turns salty when it reaches the sea; when the river reaches the sea, it becomes the sea. All the noises and ravages it makes along the way end when it enters the sea. It enters the sea quietly. Its reign ends when it meets the sea.
The sun turns some sea water to moisture, that rise to form clouds; the clouds give place to rain at some places and snow at other places. Rain water turns into rivers; snow melts and flows downhill too. Rivers run downhill (through gravity) to reach the ocean. When river water reaches the sea, the wheel has turned full circle : the water returns to where it started…
Still, poets can write much about the beauty and workings of the river. Soman Ragavan. 4 June, 2023. //
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June 4th, 2023 01:32
Soman Ragavan said:
NafisaSB
cascading water fall
My comments on the poem \"Cascading water fall” by NafisaSB
Your poetic eye has caught things happening in the waterfall :
--the water falls gently at first; --the droplets pause; --they drop madly, making noise; --the river foams and roars; --the waves rise with power; --the birds take flight; --the fishes scamper away from the pressure caused by the falling water.
We should point out that the falling water helps the water to oxygenate, which is good for the fish.
Regarding rivers, we can note the following :
The river flows on, going downhill, gathering speed and power; it can move rocks, break its banks, pull along nearby trees; it makes noise; it is mostly unsalty, but turns salty when it reaches the sea; when the river reaches the sea, it becomes the sea. All the noises and ravages it makes along the way end when it enters the sea. It enters the sea quietly. Its reign ends when it meets the sea.
The sun turns some sea water to moisture, that rise to form clouds; the clouds give place to rain at some places and snow at other places. Rain water turns into rivers; snow melts and flows downhill too. Rivers run downhill (through gravity) to reach the ocean. When river water reaches the sea, the wheel has turned full circle : the water returns to where it started…
Still, poets can write much about the beauty and workings of the river. Soman Ragavan. 4 June, 2023. //
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June 4th, 2023 01:32
Compete with self..
David Wakeling said:
This is probably good advice I just never take advice.
June 2nd, 2023 00:23
David Wakeling said:
This is probably good advice I just never take advice.
June 2nd, 2023 00:23
enjoy
mvvenkataraman said:
Have Henry Wadsworth Longfellow and William Blake together joined to write this poem???
June 1st, 2023 10:40
mvvenkataraman said:
Have Henry Wadsworth Longfellow and William Blake together joined to write this poem???
June 1st, 2023 10:40
enjoy
Doggerel Dave said:
Couldn\'t agree more, N. But don\'t outside forces limit your options?
June 1st, 2023 06:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Couldn\'t agree more, N. But don\'t outside forces limit your options?
June 1st, 2023 06:42
stars
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Stars” by NafisaSB
Poets are fascinated by sunrise, sunset, the moon, the waves, mountains and the stars. The special thing about stars is that they appear to twinkle. This adds to their mystery and their appeal.
You say “The star you choose for yourself” Thus, it is possible for us to choose one star. That star does not mind. It continues to look at us and to shine for us. We are not the only one to look at it. It still shines towards anyone looking at it. This poem is typical of how poets feels towards the mysteries and wonders of the earth and the sky. Your writings are certainly poetic. Soman Ragavan. 29 May, 2023. // https://allpoetry.com/Soman_Ragavan
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May 29th, 2023 08:58
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem \"Stars” by NafisaSB
Poets are fascinated by sunrise, sunset, the moon, the waves, mountains and the stars. The special thing about stars is that they appear to twinkle. This adds to their mystery and their appeal.
You say “The star you choose for yourself” Thus, it is possible for us to choose one star. That star does not mind. It continues to look at us and to shine for us. We are not the only one to look at it. It still shines towards anyone looking at it. This poem is typical of how poets feels towards the mysteries and wonders of the earth and the sky. Your writings are certainly poetic. Soman Ragavan. 29 May, 2023. // https://allpoetry.com/Soman_Ragavan
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May 29th, 2023 08:58
hang on
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll have a cup of your poetic hope
dear Poet
better than any coffee! lol
thank you
May 22nd, 2023 04:36
L. B. Mek said:
I\'ll have a cup of your poetic hope
dear Poet
better than any coffee! lol
thank you
May 22nd, 2023 04:36
Surround yourself
2781 said:
What\'s that line: a good heart these days is hard to find..goes with friends also, I am grateful for the few I have.
I\'ve learnt to expect nothing nothing and ask little, after that is only joy.
And if I may ramble a bit longer- everyone will be judged by their actions, and God is the rewarder.
Love to you and all.
May 16th, 2023 02:37
2781 said:
What\'s that line: a good heart these days is hard to find..goes with friends also, I am grateful for the few I have.
I\'ve learnt to expect nothing nothing and ask little, after that is only joy.
And if I may ramble a bit longer- everyone will be judged by their actions, and God is the rewarder.
Love to you and all.
May 16th, 2023 02:37
Surround yourself
Bobby O said:
It is Di important to connect w the right people.
May 16th, 2023 02:26
Bobby O said:
It is Di important to connect w the right people.
May 16th, 2023 02:26
Paradise @ mom\'s feet
2781 said:
;never forget what you learned at your mothers knee. Wear their council like a winning crown, like rings on your fingers.
May 14th, 2023 02:20
2781 said:
;never forget what you learned at your mothers knee. Wear their council like a winning crown, like rings on your fingers.
May 14th, 2023 02:20
too busy
L. B. Mek said:
great message!
wish I had realised these facts
earlier in life
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 12th, 2023 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
great message!
wish I had realised these facts
earlier in life
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 12th, 2023 04:37
Loyalty and honesty
David Wakeling said:
You might be waiting a long time. Most people live in a world of lies
May 11th, 2023 01:14
David Wakeling said:
You might be waiting a long time. Most people live in a world of lies
May 11th, 2023 01:14
Let it out
Bobby O said:
When I do follow this true advice I do indeed feel that cathartic release.
May 10th, 2023 01:22
Bobby O said:
When I do follow this true advice I do indeed feel that cathartic release.
May 10th, 2023 01:22
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