Comments received on poems by NafisaSB



What is love
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to build and mature; they are not ephemeral.

July 2nd, 2024 01:54

the cycle ride
Doggerel Dave said:

No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a revelation. Good memory invoked. Many thanks.

July 1st, 2024 18:51

the cycle ride
sorenbarrett said:

An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.

July 1st, 2024 08:09

The beauty of Ooty
Cassie58 said:

You took me there with your beautiful poetry. I enjoyed the visit very much. Such beauty in your mountains and valleys. A lovely write. Thank you dear poet.

June 30th, 2024 02:52

Sailing on the sea
Cassie58 said:

The ocean holds many moods and many adventures. I like where you took me here. Nicely penned dear poet.

June 29th, 2024 05:41

Rural life
Thomas W Case said:

Great work.

June 25th, 2024 19:14

Rural life
NafisaSB said:

Thank you. One item on my bucket list was a small bungalow in the countryside. Now that we have shifted to a high rise tower in a bustling city like Mumbai I think it will remain a pipe dream , though am happy where life has brought me

June 25th, 2024 09:46

Rural life
sorenbarrett said:

The imagery is such that I feel that I am there. Peaceful and beautiful. I have washed my cloths on a board in a hollow log and identify with a rustic life. I identify with the gong from the church having heard the church bell from a distant small country church. Happiness and less strife for sure. So nicely written it brings happiness to the soul.

June 25th, 2024 09:04

Rural life
Neilton said:

ah simple life without technology .perfect discription!

June 25th, 2024 08:15

Rural life
2781 said:

Subsistence living, sounds great.

June 25th, 2024 05:49

Puddles
Cassie58 said:

Rain when there has been drought, such a blessing. Even those muddy puddles look good. Beautiful description here in your lines. All good wishes.

June 21st, 2024 02:42

Puddles
2781 said:

Beauty in the eye of the beholder.

June 20th, 2024 09:52

Rain,rain,rain
Cassie58 said:

I’ve heard the monsoon season is a blessing for scorched earth. I can imagine everything bursting into life after the downpours. A visually pleasing poem. Lovely work.

June 20th, 2024 00:07

Rain,rain,rain
Doggerel Dave said:

If rain is what you want and need, I\'m happy for you.... sometimes though know it is quite possible to have too much of a good thing.....LOL

June 19th, 2024 07:56

Rain,rain,rain
2781 said:

Stay dry, and may your garden bloom.

June 19th, 2024 03:52

My treasure trove
2781 said:

Amen.

June 18th, 2024 09:41

My treasure trove
Cassie58 said:

Rich in imagery and meaning. Money isn’t everything. Much enjoyed NafisaSB. Have a beautiful day.

June 18th, 2024 07:32

Give me my due
NafisaSB said:

yes - one can pour out what\'s in one heat, and then either store it or publish it
thanks for the comments - have a lovely weekend

June 15th, 2024 01:01

Give me my due
Cassie58 said:

A call out that you wish to be noticed, appreciated and heard. You pen your stanzas well and with conviction. Nicely done NafisaSB.

June 14th, 2024 00:21

Flowers
Cassie58 said:

I love fresh flowers. Lovely to have the colour and fragrance in the home. Although I buy them, I don’t like picking them, preferring them to stay in their natural setting. A bit of a contradiction I know. I love your floral bouquet here. Have a happy Wednesday.

June 12th, 2024 02:52

Struggle
Cassie58 said:

I felt your struggle here with negativity. I think most people have suffered similar periodically. Nicely composed lines here. I enjoyed your post dear poet.

June 11th, 2024 13:56

Flame of desire
Cassie58 said:

So very nicely conveyed. Beautiful poetry NafisaSB. All good wishes.

June 9th, 2024 10:14

Flame of desire
Tony36 said:

Amazing and captivating write

June 9th, 2024 09:47

Flame of desire
sorenbarrett said:

Such a descriptive image of desire it is well displayed in this poem. Nicely done

June 9th, 2024 08:59

Gaiety & Content
Cassie58 said:

The cat, warm by the fire, is always such a picture of contentment. Our cat always searches for the warmest place in the house. Sometimes on my bed, sleeping in sunlight. Plenty of action,, movement and imagery packed into your lines. A most enjoyable read.

June 6th, 2024 00:43

Covid in 2020
Cassie58 said:

An epic narrative here of the COVID story. It all seems along time ago now, but it certainly caused havoc. You have covered many aspects of the pandemic. Well done. So much suffering.

June 5th, 2024 11:30

Covid in 2020
sorenbarrett said:

Many facts are now leaking out about mismanagement, over reactions and under reactions, greed, ignorance, fear as a tool, cover ups, shifting blame, effects of vaccines, and man\'s attempt to alter nature. More to come out still.

June 4th, 2024 13:05

Covid in 2020
2781 said:

Follow the money.

June 4th, 2024 09:25

Covid in 2020
NafisaSB said:

yes, but now the flu has come back with a vengeance, at least in our country - the anti-flu vaccines are in great demand as people prefer to be safe than sorry

June 4th, 2024 02:33

Covid in 2020
Mutley Ravishes said:

And the regular flu just seemed to disappear at that time. Perhaps it went on vacation, or ran away because it was scared of \"covid\"?

June 4th, 2024 01:56

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