Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
musings-2
jarcher54 said:
The long tradition of poetry to pass on advice and wisdom continues! Sweet little piece.
January 28th, 2023 01:37
jarcher54 said:
The long tradition of poetry to pass on advice and wisdom continues! Sweet little piece.
January 28th, 2023 01:37
Peace of mind
mvvenkataraman said:
Outstanding poem indeed,
Thanks for this real beauty,
Perfect in every aspect,
Carry on to inspire all!
January 19th, 2023 01:50
mvvenkataraman said:
Outstanding poem indeed,
Thanks for this real beauty,
Perfect in every aspect,
Carry on to inspire all!
January 19th, 2023 01:50
Art of living
jarcher54 said:
A nice little throwback to those medieval didactic poems teaching people how to live well. Sometimes a break from modern style is interesting! Thanks.
January 14th, 2023 13:02
jarcher54 said:
A nice little throwback to those medieval didactic poems teaching people how to live well. Sometimes a break from modern style is interesting! Thanks.
January 14th, 2023 13:02
Seventy
jarcher54 said:
I\'m just a couple years behind you... thanks for leading the way with humility and grace!
January 14th, 2023 13:01
jarcher54 said:
I\'m just a couple years behind you... thanks for leading the way with humility and grace!
January 14th, 2023 13:01
who are friends
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, thanks for sharing
Happy New Year to you, too
January 13th, 2023 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, thanks for sharing
Happy New Year to you, too
January 13th, 2023 05:51
in appreciation
mvvenkataraman said:
Thank you for the poem as it has a positive note,
Being positive always shows us the right route!
January 10th, 2023 02:35
mvvenkataraman said:
Thank you for the poem as it has a positive note,
Being positive always shows us the right route!
January 10th, 2023 02:35
Old year vs new
mvvenkataraman said:
I like this reasonable comparison,
You have perfectly analyzed indeed,
A homage to the Old Year kindly
And a well-wish for the New Year!
January 1st, 2023 01:28
mvvenkataraman said:
I like this reasonable comparison,
You have perfectly analyzed indeed,
A homage to the Old Year kindly
And a well-wish for the New Year!
January 1st, 2023 01:28
things i love..
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah i too love doves, grass, flowers, and i esp hate conmen, rats, but i dont hate dogs, i just fear them lots, i dont hate or fear bats though. You expressed in a fab way. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah i too love doves, grass, flowers, and i esp hate conmen, rats, but i dont hate dogs, i just fear them lots, i dont hate or fear bats though. You expressed in a fab way. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wishing u a happy new year.
December 29th, 2022 12:03
things i love..
L. B. Mek said:
this definitely resonates with me, dear poet
welcome back! thanks for sharing
December 12th, 2022 02:27
L. B. Mek said:
this definitely resonates with me, dear poet
welcome back! thanks for sharing
December 12th, 2022 02:27
A teacher
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56
mvvenkataraman said:
Lovely poem,
A true gem,
Words sparkle
Like stars twinkle!
September 10th, 2022 10:56
a song
jarcher54 said:
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
September 9th, 2022 02:21
jarcher54 said:
PS Your title is a double entendre, because \"song\" is both your subject and your medium. Its a song about song. Good on you!
September 9th, 2022 02:21
a song
jarcher54 said:
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
September 9th, 2022 02:20
jarcher54 said:
I am dubious of your final couplet, but I do appreciate your rendition of the doubt of the everyday writer of his or her competence or genius. Trying to express what a poem, or song, is is always a challenge. Thanks for sharing your unvarnished thoughts on the matter, with sincerity and wit.
September 9th, 2022 02:20
a song
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God\'s art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A beautiful poem of nature, poetry and God\'s art acknowledged. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
September 9th, 2022 01:13
My shadow
Aradhya said:
i loved how you breathed life in the shadow and made me remember to appreciate everything in life, even the seemingly most unimportant ones just like a shadow. it accompanies us for life. beautifully done dear poetess!
August 24th, 2022 08:58
Aradhya said:
i loved how you breathed life in the shadow and made me remember to appreciate everything in life, even the seemingly most unimportant ones just like a shadow. it accompanies us for life. beautifully done dear poetess!
August 24th, 2022 08:58
Submit
dusk arising said:
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in the way.
But \'he\' is a very outdated word along with silly ones like lord and saviour which are just man made affectations.
August 14th, 2022 01:15
dusk arising said:
Very true so long as you dont let the man made organised religion get in the way.
But \'he\' is a very outdated word along with silly ones like lord and saviour which are just man made affectations.
August 14th, 2022 01:15
Dear Editor
L. B. Mek said:
personally, i think you\'re Awesome!
(keep that mighty pen, busy
write mainly for yourself and enjoy
the journey...)
August 12th, 2022 04:16
L. B. Mek said:
personally, i think you\'re Awesome!
(keep that mighty pen, busy
write mainly for yourself and enjoy
the journey...)
August 12th, 2022 04:16
Cord
Ryan Robson-Bluer said:
my mum and i have been discussing this over coffee in the kitchen this morning - thank you for something so brief yet so perfectly sweet!
August 9th, 2022 03:55
Ryan Robson-Bluer said:
my mum and i have been discussing this over coffee in the kitchen this morning - thank you for something so brief yet so perfectly sweet!
August 9th, 2022 03:55
Cord
L. B. Mek said:
(even devoid of theological alignment
there is something very human
you\'ve depicted
within words of such brevity;
that aspect of internal struggle
between, that
we choose to place our faith in
and that, belated realisation
that we are never guaranteed
anything back, in return or reply
we
merely hope and pray
choosing to believe
this time, our despair
will be answered...)
this is so well written
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 9th, 2022 03:06
L. B. Mek said:
(even devoid of theological alignment
there is something very human
you\'ve depicted
within words of such brevity;
that aspect of internal struggle
between, that
we choose to place our faith in
and that, belated realisation
that we are never guaranteed
anything back, in return or reply
we
merely hope and pray
choosing to believe
this time, our despair
will be answered...)
this is so well written
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
August 9th, 2022 03:06
poetry
NafisaSB said:
made a major typo when posting my poem today. have edited it now to convey my true message
July 29th, 2022 08:03
NafisaSB said:
made a major typo when posting my poem today. have edited it now to convey my true message
July 29th, 2022 08:03
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