Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
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sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in a poem that has wonderful flow from good meter and rhyme. A very lovely read.
April 20th, 2025 04:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in a poem that has wonderful flow from good meter and rhyme. A very lovely read.
April 20th, 2025 04:38
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Teddy.15 said:
I have the gift that I simply don\'t worry about the small stuff, it\'s not the case for all, I love your message it reminds us all that not only are we human we all go through things that make us unhappy, insecure and restless. Not everyone knows we all have a fabulous mechanism called courage, some like myself have to be pushed to the edge to find it. Beautiful rhyme beautiful wisdom. 🌹
April 20th, 2025 02:16
Teddy.15 said:
I have the gift that I simply don\'t worry about the small stuff, it\'s not the case for all, I love your message it reminds us all that not only are we human we all go through things that make us unhappy, insecure and restless. Not everyone knows we all have a fabulous mechanism called courage, some like myself have to be pushed to the edge to find it. Beautiful rhyme beautiful wisdom. 🌹
April 20th, 2025 02:16
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teardrop said:
Have no choice but to accept lifes fate. Can either be postitive and enjoy life or be miserable. Very thought provoking write which in my opinion makes this an excellent read. Thank you.
April 18th, 2025 05:45
teardrop said:
Have no choice but to accept lifes fate. Can either be postitive and enjoy life or be miserable. Very thought provoking write which in my opinion makes this an excellent read. Thank you.
April 18th, 2025 05:45
be brave...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And we all really do need those notes to ourselves. Wonderful job, my friend. A fave from me. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 08:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
And we all really do need those notes to ourselves. Wonderful job, my friend. A fave from me. 🌹👏
April 15th, 2025 08:11
be brave...
arqios said:
Ah, it’s a rare occasion when rain is not happy or filled with excitement and dance but it can mute the mood as well. An excellent note to remind whenever it becomes necessary. 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:29
arqios said:
Ah, it’s a rare occasion when rain is not happy or filled with excitement and dance but it can mute the mood as well. An excellent note to remind whenever it becomes necessary. 🙏🏻🕊
April 11th, 2025 05:29
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Poetic Licence said:
Now that is a uplifting and very positive write, and there is a kind of magical freedom that comes with dancing in the rain, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 05:09
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is a uplifting and very positive write, and there is a kind of magical freedom that comes with dancing in the rain, enjoyed the read
April 11th, 2025 05:09
be brave...
sorenbarrett said:
I remember dancing in the rain when I was younger now I just walk quickly so as not to get as wet. When the temperature is good dancing in the rain is joyous. A lovely write.
April 11th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
I remember dancing in the rain when I was younger now I just walk quickly so as not to get as wet. When the temperature is good dancing in the rain is joyous. A lovely write.
April 11th, 2025 04:20
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Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely. The sage perspective of maturity gently instructs youthful folly with what may, forsooth, help soften the path oft fraught with stones. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 19:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely. The sage perspective of maturity gently instructs youthful folly with what may, forsooth, help soften the path oft fraught with stones. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 19:42
ROAD
sorenbarrett said:
Here you use anthropomorphism to its best in the road telling its story. And by the end of the poem I feel that I have known that road and seen it in the past. Well done
April 6th, 2025 05:15
sorenbarrett said:
Here you use anthropomorphism to its best in the road telling its story. And by the end of the poem I feel that I have known that road and seen it in the past. Well done
April 6th, 2025 05:15
Water
sorenbarrett said:
I love nature and its conservation. Where I live I drink from a natural spring and also a well that have no additives and are clean and pure, no taste of chlorine. I can now taste it even in bottled water. There are trees and wild birds and animals all over this land and it is nature\'s gift to my eyes and ears. Love and protect what we have been given.
April 6th, 2025 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
I love nature and its conservation. Where I live I drink from a natural spring and also a well that have no additives and are clean and pure, no taste of chlorine. I can now taste it even in bottled water. There are trees and wild birds and animals all over this land and it is nature\'s gift to my eyes and ears. Love and protect what we have been given.
April 6th, 2025 05:11
White hair
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this poem. For me it was not the color but the falling out of hair that was the issue so I embraced it an shaved my hair short. Be what one is and do not deny oneself. Lovely poem
April 6th, 2025 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A great message contained in this poem. For me it was not the color but the falling out of hair that was the issue so I embraced it an shaved my hair short. Be what one is and do not deny oneself. Lovely poem
April 6th, 2025 05:05
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Damaso said:
How beautiful, very encouraging and optimistic. Thank you. Best regards.
March 29th, 2025 08:48
Damaso said:
How beautiful, very encouraging and optimistic. Thank you. Best regards.
March 29th, 2025 08:48
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sorenbarrett said:
Take the cards you are dealt and make the best of them I get from this poem. A good message nicely said
March 29th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Take the cards you are dealt and make the best of them I get from this poem. A good message nicely said
March 29th, 2025 04:40
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Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very positive write with sound advice, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a very positive write with sound advice, enjoyed the read
March 29th, 2025 04:33
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Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely. Charmingly disarming and rendered in seeming simplicity with fitting imagery and a lingering poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 13:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely. Charmingly disarming and rendered in seeming simplicity with fitting imagery and a lingering poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 13:36
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Neville said:
this is absolutely delightful & also, absolutely the truth .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 04:16
Neville said:
this is absolutely delightful & also, absolutely the truth .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 04:16
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Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Ma\'am - I shall go forth and do it!
Good luck - Stay safe.
March 8th, 2025 22:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Ma\'am - I shall go forth and do it!
Good luck - Stay safe.
March 8th, 2025 22:17
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Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, so much wisdom in your brevity dear poet. Yes, share the positivity in these troubling times. We all need some joy in the world.
March 8th, 2025 15:23
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, so much wisdom in your brevity dear poet. Yes, share the positivity in these troubling times. We all need some joy in the world.
March 8th, 2025 15:23
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sorenbarrett said:
Well spoken words in very short poetic statements. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Well spoken words in very short poetic statements. Nicely done
March 7th, 2025 04:14
Why insult others ?
Neville said:
Unfortunately it seems not everyone shares or practices the distinctly kindly & exclusively human principles you have referenced and woven throughout this fine poem .. it would pay them well to take a leaf out of your good book .. and the world would be a distinctly safer and better place .. Neville
March 4th, 2025 04:19
Neville said:
Unfortunately it seems not everyone shares or practices the distinctly kindly & exclusively human principles you have referenced and woven throughout this fine poem .. it would pay them well to take a leaf out of your good book .. and the world would be a distinctly safer and better place .. Neville
March 4th, 2025 04:19
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