Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
their 1000 watt smile
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the bubbling enthusiasm of children in this poem so nicely rhymed well done
August 25th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel the bubbling enthusiasm of children in this poem so nicely rhymed well done
August 25th, 2024 05:41
their 1000 watt smile
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, your words flooded me with wonderful memories of my own grandchildren. I am lucky enough to have two them living with me still. A lovely tribute to the younger generation. May they always make you smile poet. ๐น Nothing like the smile of a child to warm your heart.
August 25th, 2024 01:21
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, your words flooded me with wonderful memories of my own grandchildren. I am lucky enough to have two them living with me still. A lovely tribute to the younger generation. May they always make you smile poet. ๐น Nothing like the smile of a child to warm your heart.
August 25th, 2024 01:21
My fitbit
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like another word for conscience. A most fun write
August 24th, 2024 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like another word for conscience. A most fun write
August 24th, 2024 09:07
My fitbit
Doggerel Dave said:
Each to their own, Safina. Your poem is so clear, so descriptive that it has scared me from all the way over here...๐
And do I indeed detect some ambivalence there??
August 24th, 2024 01:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Each to their own, Safina. Your poem is so clear, so descriptive that it has scared me from all the way over here...๐
And do I indeed detect some ambivalence there??
August 24th, 2024 01:07
Senior\'s day
Doggerel Dave said:
You can afford to be a day late when a Senior.... no more schedules , deadlines...Oh sorry, you haven\'t still got your nose to the grindstone, have you?
As a poetic celebration, you have cracked it!
August 22nd, 2024 07:55
Doggerel Dave said:
You can afford to be a day late when a Senior.... no more schedules , deadlines...Oh sorry, you haven\'t still got your nose to the grindstone, have you?
As a poetic celebration, you have cracked it!
August 22nd, 2024 07:55
Senior\'s day
sorenbarrett said:
Well stated a great message with good form and rhyme. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Well stated a great message with good form and rhyme. Lovely
August 22nd, 2024 04:31
Water
Thoughtless said:
Here in the United States, we seem to always be in a perpetual state of drought. It\'s especially that way here in Kansas which has always been dry. The first settlers here did so because of heavy rainfall. They soon found out that Kansas never gets that much rain. Now we get it in bursts with heavy flooding followed by long dry spells. People often do not understand climate change because the climate itself is not local. If we get a hard winter, somebody will have sign in their car window on which is written like this, Damn this global warming. They don\'t understand. I never finished university, yet some of the grads that I have known are less educated than I am. I could not have said that a few years ago. They pick one subject and only get a dilettante\'s view of math or earth sciences. They are sadly lacking in logical reasoning as well. That being written, some kids are beginning to study more subjects in depth. So, there is hope.
August 21st, 2024 22:20
Thoughtless said:
Here in the United States, we seem to always be in a perpetual state of drought. It\'s especially that way here in Kansas which has always been dry. The first settlers here did so because of heavy rainfall. They soon found out that Kansas never gets that much rain. Now we get it in bursts with heavy flooding followed by long dry spells. People often do not understand climate change because the climate itself is not local. If we get a hard winter, somebody will have sign in their car window on which is written like this, Damn this global warming. They don\'t understand. I never finished university, yet some of the grads that I have known are less educated than I am. I could not have said that a few years ago. They pick one subject and only get a dilettante\'s view of math or earth sciences. They are sadly lacking in logical reasoning as well. That being written, some kids are beginning to study more subjects in depth. So, there is hope.
August 21st, 2024 22:20
Water
Cassie58 said:
So eloquently written. Water is so precious. We have a great deal of rainfall, but not enough reservoirs to catch it when it falls. Instead, the rivers get overburdened and are prone to flooding. Not only that to the shame of our water companies, sewage pollutes our rivers. This is a huge subject to tackle and you dear poet have given us much to contemplate. A world wide problem, not just local. ๐น
August 21st, 2024 08:50
Cassie58 said:
So eloquently written. Water is so precious. We have a great deal of rainfall, but not enough reservoirs to catch it when it falls. Instead, the rivers get overburdened and are prone to flooding. Not only that to the shame of our water companies, sewage pollutes our rivers. This is a huge subject to tackle and you dear poet have given us much to contemplate. A world wide problem, not just local. ๐น
August 21st, 2024 08:50
Water
Neville said:
This little poem was crying out to be writ and screams out an important message to us all .. I am glad I came by this way today .. Kindest Regards, Neville
August 21st, 2024 04:59
Neville said:
This little poem was crying out to be writ and screams out an important message to us all .. I am glad I came by this way today .. Kindest Regards, Neville
August 21st, 2024 04:59
Water
sorenbarrett said:
The more people the more our need for water. Conserve water and stop population increase.
August 21st, 2024 04:53
sorenbarrett said:
The more people the more our need for water. Conserve water and stop population increase.
August 21st, 2024 04:53
Water
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, I live in Italy, and it\'s more tropical these days, crazy weather, we recycle everything here in this country, the boats leave their trash in the sea though. A wonderful discussion. ๐น
August 21st, 2024 00:33
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful, I live in Italy, and it\'s more tropical these days, crazy weather, we recycle everything here in this country, the boats leave their trash in the sea though. A wonderful discussion. ๐น
August 21st, 2024 00:33
Water
NafisaSB said:
yes - sad but true that areas needing rain are being deprived, while others being inundated
someone surely laughing up there - bcos evaporation should cause rain, but there is more drought all around..
August 20th, 2024 23:57
NafisaSB said:
yes - sad but true that areas needing rain are being deprived, while others being inundated
someone surely laughing up there - bcos evaporation should cause rain, but there is more drought all around..
August 20th, 2024 23:57
Water
Doggerel Dave said:
The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and hence increased rain. And in Sydney it is quite possible to believe that, as for the past several months more rain has poured down than we can possibly need. However, it appears that this effect is not evenly distributed....
Your poem has more content though, as you point to the general disregard of the environment which for the moment seems universal except for small scattered efforts. Thanks for that.
August 20th, 2024 23:49
Doggerel Dave said:
The promise, apparently is that as the world heats more evaporation and hence increased rain. And in Sydney it is quite possible to believe that, as for the past several months more rain has poured down than we can possibly need. However, it appears that this effect is not evenly distributed....
Your poem has more content though, as you point to the general disregard of the environment which for the moment seems universal except for small scattered efforts. Thanks for that.
August 20th, 2024 23:49
i will dance..
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
August 18th, 2024 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
August 18th, 2024 06:41
White hair
Doggerel Dave said:
You stay with it Girl - I\'m sure your hair has texture and grace.
August 11th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
You stay with it Girl - I\'m sure your hair has texture and grace.
August 11th, 2024 08:13
White hair
Cassie58 said:
I donโt dye mine either Safina. Happy to let nature take its course. I like my grey. Good health is far more important than hair colour. Enjoy yourself, come what may, is sage advice in this finely penned poem. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 01:53
Cassie58 said:
I donโt dye mine either Safina. Happy to let nature take its course. I like my grey. Good health is far more important than hair colour. Enjoy yourself, come what may, is sage advice in this finely penned poem. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 01:53
A hug
sorenbarrett said:
True statements here holding someone close promotes union and a sense of security. Nicely said.
August 4th, 2024 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
True statements here holding someone close promotes union and a sense of security. Nicely said.
August 4th, 2024 05:35
A hug
Cassie58 said:
Really nice sentiment to share here for friendship day. A hug is so warming. Sending a virtual one to you dear poet and flowers too.
((. )) ๐
August 4th, 2024 01:15
Cassie58 said:
Really nice sentiment to share here for friendship day. A hug is so warming. Sending a virtual one to you dear poet and flowers too.
((. )) ๐
August 4th, 2024 01:15
The leaves
Doggerel Dave said:
Where I live too many people want to sweep them up into a bin. The trees they come from are older than the concrete paths which are swept.
I enjoy the multicolours of autumn.
Well painted picture you\'ve written.
July 10th, 2024 23:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Where I live too many people want to sweep them up into a bin. The trees they come from are older than the concrete paths which are swept.
I enjoy the multicolours of autumn.
Well painted picture you\'ve written.
July 10th, 2024 23:39
The country child
sheta said:
its amazing safina!!!!
i hope to see another poem soon!!!!!
July 7th, 2024 22:47
sheta said:
its amazing safina!!!!
i hope to see another poem soon!!!!!
July 7th, 2024 22:47
The country child
๐ฉMase๐ช said:
Yep, there\'s always room to be a leader, though. Thanks Nafisa.
July 7th, 2024 09:57
๐ฉMase๐ช said:
Yep, there\'s always room to be a leader, though. Thanks Nafisa.
July 7th, 2024 09:57
The country child
๐ฉMase๐ช said:
I must be rare in that case. Found one... Myself, lol. Good write!
July 7th, 2024 01:03
๐ฉMase๐ช said:
I must be rare in that case. Found one... Myself, lol. Good write!
July 7th, 2024 01:03
The Lake
MendedFences27 said:
Wonderful descriptions and imagery.
It seemed a peaceful lake, yet one must be wary where one walks. Was this reflective of something you saw, or something created from your imagination? - Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:14
MendedFences27 said:
Wonderful descriptions and imagery.
It seemed a peaceful lake, yet one must be wary where one walks. Was this reflective of something you saw, or something created from your imagination? - Phil A.
July 5th, 2024 15:14
What is love
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to build and mature; they are not ephemeral.
July 2nd, 2024 01:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes, most of those would be love and not infatuation. Most take time to build and mature; they are not ephemeral.
July 2nd, 2024 01:54
the cycle ride
Doggerel Dave said:
No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a revelation. Good memory invoked. Many thanks.
July 1st, 2024 18:51
Doggerel Dave said:
No broken bones? The very first time I mastered the bicycle was a revelation. Good memory invoked. Many thanks.
July 1st, 2024 18:51
the cycle ride
sorenbarrett said:
An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
July 1st, 2024 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
An exuberant and joyful read and ride. Very nice and light hearted.
July 1st, 2024 08:09
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