Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Be happy
NafisaSB said:
you are mistaken my friend. on the contrary i look forward to reading your in-depth analysis : it is refreshing to hear what you have to say.. i don\'t find it over zealous, and am not annoyed. glad to have your frank reviews in fact, so please don\'t tone it down - i welcome whatever thoughts and ideas the readers have to share. good day
July 23rd, 2022 00:57
NafisaSB said:
you are mistaken my friend. on the contrary i look forward to reading your in-depth analysis : it is refreshing to hear what you have to say.. i don\'t find it over zealous, and am not annoyed. glad to have your frank reviews in fact, so please don\'t tone it down - i welcome whatever thoughts and ideas the readers have to share. good day
July 23rd, 2022 00:57
Count on me
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing your wide shoulders
and your poetry\'s, empathetic
depths..
a lovely read, thank you!
July 22nd, 2022 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing your wide shoulders
and your poetry\'s, empathetic
depths..
a lovely read, thank you!
July 22nd, 2022 04:53
Be happy
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, happiness should be spread all around.
Andy
https://youtu.be/-4fIVD06lRQ
July 21st, 2022 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
So true, happiness should be spread all around.
Andy
https://youtu.be/-4fIVD06lRQ
July 21st, 2022 01:13
white hair
AlitaOpal said:
Aging gracefully is the true beauty of our journey. My mother calls it wisdom hair 🌹
July 20th, 2022 08:45
AlitaOpal said:
Aging gracefully is the true beauty of our journey. My mother calls it wisdom hair 🌹
July 20th, 2022 08:45
white hair
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Nafisa, strangely my partner and I were talking about this last night after seeing something on the television about changing the way you look.
I have a philosophy in life:
\"This is me if you do not like what you see that is your problem, not mine\"
My partner feels the same and to me she is beautiful all the time.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Nafisa, strangely my partner and I were talking about this last night after seeing something on the television about changing the way you look.
I have a philosophy in life:
\"This is me if you do not like what you see that is your problem, not mine\"
My partner feels the same and to me she is beautiful all the time.
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:19
clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Clouds are wonderful things to look at and every one of them is unique.
Andy
July 19th, 2022 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Clouds are wonderful things to look at and every one of them is unique.
Andy
July 19th, 2022 01:10
the betrayal
L. B. Mek said:
PoeticDan
a fellow poet like you
here on MPS
shared with me a quote, i feel
relevant to your write
so i\'ll pass it on:
\'\"Those who matter
don\'t mind
and those that mind
don\'t matter\"
(sometimes, we fallible humans
can\'t see the gifts before us)
thanks for sharing
I too have experienced a similar
conundrum, in the past
where the more I made myself
available
and yearned, to help
I cheapened, my worth
in the eyes of that person
and they simply assumed
i would always be there..
sadly
life\'s not so easy, so in our
time of sweet parting
i consoled myself, with the thought
that I had, given it my all
and found acceptance
and a path to move on
anchoring, that memory
to that mindset..
(if it helps
fee; free to try it yourself
\'his/her loss
so, on
to the next
knowing
no one guaranteed me
do-over, tomorrow\'s
to waste, on a past
that i can\'t change\')
July 15th, 2022 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
PoeticDan
a fellow poet like you
here on MPS
shared with me a quote, i feel
relevant to your write
so i\'ll pass it on:
\'\"Those who matter
don\'t mind
and those that mind
don\'t matter\"
(sometimes, we fallible humans
can\'t see the gifts before us)
thanks for sharing
I too have experienced a similar
conundrum, in the past
where the more I made myself
available
and yearned, to help
I cheapened, my worth
in the eyes of that person
and they simply assumed
i would always be there..
sadly
life\'s not so easy, so in our
time of sweet parting
i consoled myself, with the thought
that I had, given it my all
and found acceptance
and a path to move on
anchoring, that memory
to that mindset..
(if it helps
fee; free to try it yourself
\'his/her loss
so, on
to the next
knowing
no one guaranteed me
do-over, tomorrow\'s
to waste, on a past
that i can\'t change\')
July 15th, 2022 03:23
Suspense
maybeiwriteabit said:
beautifully written! you\'ve captured a way to read in between the lines of a moment perfectly! :)
July 9th, 2022 01:41
maybeiwriteabit said:
beautifully written! you\'ve captured a way to read in between the lines of a moment perfectly! :)
July 9th, 2022 01:41
Why insult others?
L. B. Mek said:
forgive me, dear Poet
(while I empathise
and absolutely, understand
your Poetry\'s, perspective..
I still feel, that
more harsh truth\'s, have saved
and affected a positive change
in people, than mere words
of soothing, kindness..
so i am torn and left grappling
with yet more duality, in existence
see
in some way\'s, being blunt
and harsh, can become
the kindest interference
we affect, in the life\'s
of those we care, for
the most..
just as, there are people
in general
who will purposefully use
this fact
as an excuse, to be brutally
truthful
and cause others, undue suffering..
sadly
that\'s why, we need to cultivate
a calm, centred
part of ourselves, removed
from other\'s, opinions
a space
where we can anchor our
values and beliefs, in life
so that in such complex
matters, we revert back
to that which we feel
to hold more truth
on a case by case basis..)
July 8th, 2022 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
forgive me, dear Poet
(while I empathise
and absolutely, understand
your Poetry\'s, perspective..
I still feel, that
more harsh truth\'s, have saved
and affected a positive change
in people, than mere words
of soothing, kindness..
so i am torn and left grappling
with yet more duality, in existence
see
in some way\'s, being blunt
and harsh, can become
the kindest interference
we affect, in the life\'s
of those we care, for
the most..
just as, there are people
in general
who will purposefully use
this fact
as an excuse, to be brutally
truthful
and cause others, undue suffering..
sadly
that\'s why, we need to cultivate
a calm, centred
part of ourselves, removed
from other\'s, opinions
a space
where we can anchor our
values and beliefs, in life
so that in such complex
matters, we revert back
to that which we feel
to hold more truth
on a case by case basis..)
July 8th, 2022 04:51
One crowded hour..
L. B. Mek said:
empowering message! dear Poet
even for those not aligned
to your path of faith, in life
for
we can all, take inspiration
and simply apply it
to our chosen, way of life:
\'Let helping others be your aim
Let fairness help you win the game
Let not your life be one of shame..\'
Amen!
July 7th, 2022 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
empowering message! dear Poet
even for those not aligned
to your path of faith, in life
for
we can all, take inspiration
and simply apply it
to our chosen, way of life:
\'Let helping others be your aim
Let fairness help you win the game
Let not your life be one of shame..\'
Amen!
July 7th, 2022 04:14
puddles
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of theological alignment
i can\'t deny the brilliance of this write
thank you! for choosing to share
dear poet
July 5th, 2022 04:30
L. B. Mek said:
even devoid of theological alignment
i can\'t deny the brilliance of this write
thank you! for choosing to share
dear poet
July 5th, 2022 04:30
why does the moon..?
L. B. Mek said:
\'She looks like a lonely waif, a reflector poised in space
And sometimes to enliven herself, with the clouds, does have a race
And sometimes she hides behind the clouds
As if to hide her face
While sometimes, she races ahead of it
Laughing at it its slow pace.\'
(what a fabulous verse
a wonderful showcasing
of your poetic talents
genuine originality and creativity..
a lovely read..
i bet you made the moon blush)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 1st, 2022 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'She looks like a lonely waif, a reflector poised in space
And sometimes to enliven herself, with the clouds, does have a race
And sometimes she hides behind the clouds
As if to hide her face
While sometimes, she races ahead of it
Laughing at it its slow pace.\'
(what a fabulous verse
a wonderful showcasing
of your poetic talents
genuine originality and creativity..
a lovely read..
i bet you made the moon blush)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
July 1st, 2022 03:38
SNOW WHITE CLOUDS
NafisaSB said:
gray clouds i wonder
why you always thunder
the white are so serene
and beautify the scene
and to appreciate their beauty
is now a daily duty
June 29th, 2022 01:12
NafisaSB said:
gray clouds i wonder
why you always thunder
the white are so serene
and beautify the scene
and to appreciate their beauty
is now a daily duty
June 29th, 2022 01:12
the lake
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Nafisa, lakes can be so calming when sitting by them.
Andy
June 29th, 2022 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Nafisa, lakes can be so calming when sitting by them.
Andy
June 29th, 2022 01:09
SNOW WHITE CLOUDS
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
forgive me, dear Poet
I read your words and couldn\'t help
but be inspired to scribble
my own, little poetic reply:
(\'Puffed white cotton, glides\'
to serenade our eyes
with Nature\'s, guile
majestic, in its simplicity
effortless in its, complexity
these clouds
that look down
without ever, making us feel
marginalised or small,
these clouds
that sway our heart\'s
with a glimpse of the wonder
in existence\'s duality,
these clouds
now kind, subtle and beautiful
then monstrously thundersome
and just as quickly, revert back
to glistening beacons, championing
Sunshine\'s, soothing rays...
these clouds, we
far, too often fail
to appreciate!)
June 28th, 2022 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
forgive me, dear Poet
I read your words and couldn\'t help
but be inspired to scribble
my own, little poetic reply:
(\'Puffed white cotton, glides\'
to serenade our eyes
with Nature\'s, guile
majestic, in its simplicity
effortless in its, complexity
these clouds
that look down
without ever, making us feel
marginalised or small,
these clouds
that sway our heart\'s
with a glimpse of the wonder
in existence\'s duality,
these clouds
now kind, subtle and beautiful
then monstrously thundersome
and just as quickly, revert back
to glistening beacons, championing
Sunshine\'s, soothing rays...
these clouds, we
far, too often fail
to appreciate!)
June 28th, 2022 03:31
it is spring
L. B. Mek said:
Spring! Spring! Spring!
thank you! dear Poet
(this senior is going
for a fun, run
erm
to go grab some
...
Rum
...)
\'don\'t hate me\'.. lol
June 24th, 2022 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
Spring! Spring! Spring!
thank you! dear Poet
(this senior is going
for a fun, run
erm
to go grab some
...
Rum
...)
\'don\'t hate me\'.. lol
June 24th, 2022 04:03
flowers
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah its good and refreshing to have fresh flowers and this poem is lovely to read. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
June 23rd, 2022 07:37
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah its good and refreshing to have fresh flowers and this poem is lovely to read. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
June 23rd, 2022 07:37
flowers
L. B. Mek said:
\'We find them in the bowers\'
(what a poignant write, dear Poet
couldn\'t help but try and poetically reply
thank you for sharing and inspiring my little scribble)
\'born into a Time
that\'s stopped, smelling
nature\'s Flowers..\'
instead we\'re sold
synthetic petals, in plastic bags
to adorn our floors
and colour our manmade mirage, occasions
then we wipe them away, free
of dirt or earth
marketed to be used and thrown away...
later
we drink our wines alone
look upon our dead gardens
\'this Spring\' we promise ourselves
\'I\'ll definitely get started this Year\'
we whisper, to that forgiving air
...
June 23rd, 2022 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
\'We find them in the bowers\'
(what a poignant write, dear Poet
couldn\'t help but try and poetically reply
thank you for sharing and inspiring my little scribble)
\'born into a Time
that\'s stopped, smelling
nature\'s Flowers..\'
instead we\'re sold
synthetic petals, in plastic bags
to adorn our floors
and colour our manmade mirage, occasions
then we wipe them away, free
of dirt or earth
marketed to be used and thrown away...
later
we drink our wines alone
look upon our dead gardens
\'this Spring\' we promise ourselves
\'I\'ll definitely get started this Year\'
we whisper, to that forgiving air
...
June 23rd, 2022 05:06
One
L. B. Mek said:
\'One doctor can cure lots of men\'
what about the lovely ladies?
lol
thanks for sharing
(a person I admire greatly
introduced me to a film, titled
\'the power of one\'
which relates so well
to your poetry\'s themes)
June 20th, 2022 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'One doctor can cure lots of men\'
what about the lovely ladies?
lol
thanks for sharing
(a person I admire greatly
introduced me to a film, titled
\'the power of one\'
which relates so well
to your poetry\'s themes)
June 20th, 2022 05:01
Never befriend a mermaid
L. B. Mek said:
for me, personally
it all smells a little
fishy..
so yeah, i stick
to land dweller\'s
love\'s me
me chicks...
lmao
(it\'s Friday, a heatwave
and I\'m in a silly mood
forgive me, dear poet)
June 17th, 2022 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
for me, personally
it all smells a little
fishy..
so yeah, i stick
to land dweller\'s
love\'s me
me chicks...
lmao
(it\'s Friday, a heatwave
and I\'m in a silly mood
forgive me, dear poet)
June 17th, 2022 04:32
Never befriend a mermaid
tallisman said:
Made me laugh, so random i guess! Thanks!
June 17th, 2022 00:58
tallisman said:
Made me laugh, so random i guess! Thanks!
June 17th, 2022 00:58
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