Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Emancipation
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of optimism all should encompass despite the dark times present right now..
Thanks for the read.
October 17th, 2024 08:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I understand and acknowledge the rich scene you hint at. It is a note of optimism all should encompass despite the dark times present right now..
Thanks for the read.
October 17th, 2024 08:19
Fascinating colors
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and the messages are well thought out
October 17th, 2024 06:48
sorenbarrett said:
Your poems deserve more reads they are really well metered and rhymed and the messages are well thought out
October 17th, 2024 06:48
Emancipation
sorenbarrett said:
Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a great message becomes a symphony of a poem
October 17th, 2024 06:37
sorenbarrett said:
Such a smooth flow of words with rhyme to accompany the meter. All with a great message becomes a symphony of a poem
October 17th, 2024 06:37
\"U\" AND \"I\"
sorenbarrett said:
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
October 17th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Creative the use of letters to represent words and a sweet message of unity in this similarity.
October 17th, 2024 06:15
Twain will meet..
sorenbarrett said:
Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a disasterous fall. So well personified and a good metaphor.
October 4th, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a disasterous fall. So well personified and a good metaphor.
October 4th, 2024 05:14
Twain will meet..
Neville said:
Q) who could possibly arrive here and leave again without
1) being impressed
2) hitting the heart shaped icon
3) leaving their kindest regards
A) I doubt if anybody could ..
Kindest Regards, Neville
October 4th, 2024 01:58
Neville said:
Q) who could possibly arrive here and leave again without
1) being impressed
2) hitting the heart shaped icon
3) leaving their kindest regards
A) I doubt if anybody could ..
Kindest Regards, Neville
October 4th, 2024 01:58
Fascinating colors
Cassie58 said:
A shade palette. I love all those names when I am searching for colours to paint my walls. They all sound so poetic. Frost white is poetry lol. I mean plain white is positively dull and boring. A beautiful poem Safina. Much enjoyed. Hope all is well with you.
September 26th, 2024 08:43
Cassie58 said:
A shade palette. I love all those names when I am searching for colours to paint my walls. They all sound so poetic. Frost white is poetry lol. I mean plain white is positively dull and boring. A beautiful poem Safina. Much enjoyed. Hope all is well with you.
September 26th, 2024 08:43
Fascinating colors
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have just cracked it immediately above here: (Become a big company\'s marketing manager). Rename at least some of them \"Subtle Blue\", \"Subtle Green\", etc....
Thanks for a fun write.
September 25th, 2024 09:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have just cracked it immediately above here: (Become a big company\'s marketing manager). Rename at least some of them \"Subtle Blue\", \"Subtle Green\", etc....
Thanks for a fun write.
September 25th, 2024 09:35
\'Eyes\'
Thad Wilk said:
A delightful poem
great brevity!! 👍
A treat to read;
love it, 😍
penned superbly!✌️
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
September 17th, 2024 08:48
Thad Wilk said:
A delightful poem
great brevity!! 👍
A treat to read;
love it, 😍
penned superbly!✌️
Best wishes 🍀 🤗 🌹 Thad
September 17th, 2024 08:48
On war..
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
September 17th, 2024 03:08
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
September 17th, 2024 03:08
\'Eyes\'
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.
September 17th, 2024 03:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.
September 17th, 2024 03:05
\'Eyes\'
Cassie58 said:
I do believe that poets need to have great observational skills, so I agree very much with this fine piece of brevity Safina. Eyes are also the mirrors to the soul. Wishing you a great day dear poet. 🌹
September 15th, 2024 09:25
Cassie58 said:
I do believe that poets need to have great observational skills, so I agree very much with this fine piece of brevity Safina. Eyes are also the mirrors to the soul. Wishing you a great day dear poet. 🌹
September 15th, 2024 09:25
Water
adnan it is said:
\"A trickle of water
That leaks from a tap
Can in the future
Change the shape of your map\"
This can be interpreted in many ways that\'s the beauty!!! Keep writing
September 15th, 2024 03:05
adnan it is said:
\"A trickle of water
That leaks from a tap
Can in the future
Change the shape of your map\"
This can be interpreted in many ways that\'s the beauty!!! Keep writing
September 15th, 2024 03:05
On war..
Dan Williams said:
It pains me to mention that there have been wars as long as there have been humans, and likely will continue.
Territory, power, gold, and the worst; religion. We never learn.
September 15th, 2024 00:34
Dan Williams said:
It pains me to mention that there have been wars as long as there have been humans, and likely will continue.
Territory, power, gold, and the worst; religion. We never learn.
September 15th, 2024 00:34
On war..
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, such a strong write. No one wins in war. Everyone loses. Words wisely chosen. Have a happy Saturday dear poet 🌹
September 14th, 2024 12:38
Cassie58 said:
Dear Safina, such a strong write. No one wins in war. Everyone loses. Words wisely chosen. Have a happy Saturday dear poet 🌹
September 14th, 2024 12:38
On war..
Doggerel Dave said:
;You shouldn\'t start me off again - I\'ve only just calmed down!😂
Strong write, safina.
September 14th, 2024 01:55
Doggerel Dave said:
;You shouldn\'t start me off again - I\'ve only just calmed down!😂
Strong write, safina.
September 14th, 2024 01:55
Diplomacy
Doggerel Dave said:
A very ambivalent attitude to a Diplomat, If I may say so….
I confess that at times I wasn’t absolutely certain if you were focusing on the professional Diplomat or a quality in an otherwise ordinary individual….
If the professional, I would say that they might achieve more than your average politician who goes in with his boots on.
If however the individual is in focus, then I tend to see such a person as potentially a hypocrite…..
A thoughtful write, Safina.
September 13th, 2024 06:24
Doggerel Dave said:
A very ambivalent attitude to a Diplomat, If I may say so….
I confess that at times I wasn’t absolutely certain if you were focusing on the professional Diplomat or a quality in an otherwise ordinary individual….
If the professional, I would say that they might achieve more than your average politician who goes in with his boots on.
If however the individual is in focus, then I tend to see such a person as potentially a hypocrite…..
A thoughtful write, Safina.
September 13th, 2024 06:24
A complaint
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35
Doggerel Dave said:
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35
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