Comments received on poems by NafisaSB



I am human
jarcher54 said:

Just when you think everything that can be said has been said! I suspect you are a very passionate person, and while I\'ll be careful I also like the idea of some unbridled emotion! Yes, it is a mysterious world... no better way to explain it!

September 16th, 2023 01:30

Living the way i want..
Introverted Sage said:

This is great!
Second stanza is powerful!
Nice write!

September 10th, 2023 12:24

Living the way i want..
Doggerel Dave said:

You are in the right position, Nafisa. Go lady, go.

September 10th, 2023 06:40

Living the way i want..
LIZ said:

Hell yeah!!! This is powerful!! RESPECT!!

September 10th, 2023 01:11

Keep moving
Pop64 said:

This speaks well of the need, not for speed, but for momentum, advancement and growing. We all travel at different speeds, but we all can get to the same destination so long as we move.

September 8th, 2023 07:52

Keep moving
LIZ said:

Nice!!!!! Let people be! We all process things at different speeds! ๐Ÿ™

September 8th, 2023 04:46

Do what is right
LIZ said:

Yes, because consequences will come. Good or bad! Might as well choose right! Very nice!!!

September 4th, 2023 02:27

Beware
Doggerel Dave said:

Well you\'ve not left me with much room for manoeuvre, have you?..........๐Ÿ˜œ

August 30th, 2023 06:29

Breathes there a flower...
Doggerel Dave said:

Apologise to whomever you like - I had a good laugh!

August 29th, 2023 08:20

International Senior\'s Day
Doggerel Dave said:

I get your message and, to a certain extent applaud its intent.
However, Nafisa I\'d just like to point out that seniors aren\'t a special class and as a group should not be accorded special reverence. They are just the usual mix of humanity - good bad and indifferent, who have been around polluting the earth for longer than their unfortunately shorter lived co conspirators.........

August 22nd, 2023 18:54

I am strong
Nicole Kay said:

Very well written and moving, Thank you for sharing!

August 12th, 2023 12:36

I am strong
Parisab said:

Now everyone knows! My tolerance is my strength and My patience is my key-Your strength comes through your wordsโ€ฆ

August 11th, 2023 15:37

I am strong
Caring dove said:

A strong and nicely expressed writing .. I especially like this line

I build castles from the bricks

Yes sometimes people hurt us but sometimes we have to find strength

August 11th, 2023 01:43

Autumn leaves
2781 said:

He has made everything beautiful in its time.

August 10th, 2023 01:05

Last September
peto said:

Great rhyme and flow
Does leave me wondering what did compel you to stay
Pleasure to read

August 9th, 2023 10:42

two faces of married life
Doggerel Dave said:

I definitely understand VP 1 - I never married because I did not want to make any woman miserable for the whole of her life....

August 5th, 2023 19:09

Cupid rides pillion
Doggerel Dave said:

Feels like a song - keep singing...

August 5th, 2023 19:00

Death
Beth K said:

Beautifully written! Thank you ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ

July 29th, 2023 19:49

Secret of success
2781 said:

Did the dog have a howl?

July 15th, 2023 01:11

two faces of married life
-Iris- said:

I absolutely adored this read!! Gave me a good chuckle here and there as well. Definitely worth the long read, well done!

July 9th, 2023 09:28

two faces of married life
mvvenkataraman said:

Just because the poem is very long,
Not reading it is absolutely wrong,
I think this is an educating song,
If read, benefits to all will belong!

July 9th, 2023 03:07

Words of wisdom
L. B. Mek said:

well then, good thing
girls can set us feeble men straight
and rid the world of all evil, overnight
since, all blame is pre-assigned
to \'man\'
lol
yeah, ok
forgive me if i choose to believe
the warrior queen\'s in my life
and heroin\'s of history, who chose
to not hide behind that
oh so convenient victimhood
status
as their crutch, in life....

June 30th, 2023 06:29

Words of wisdom
2781 said:

Who\'s wisdom?

June 30th, 2023 05:13

stars
Caring dove said:

A lovely and interesting writing nicely expressed )) liked the read

June 28th, 2023 01:19

The wind
Caring dove said:

Great writing ! Nicely expressed poem ..

And yes the wind can be annoying sometimes .. but maybe it knows no other way .. just like some of us donโ€™t know how to be any different

June 28th, 2023 01:02

Improving self
2781 said:

Better to do something and expect nothing.
Than to do nothing and expect something.
That was my thought of the day!

June 27th, 2023 06:31

Improving self
Ok Waleed said:

I like to think of it as a monkey race and I need the best banana

June 27th, 2023 01:34

Upwards and onwards
Caring dove said:

Lovely words especially like the last few lines

June 26th, 2023 04:28

Self respect
Caring dove said:

Great writing I like this ๐Ÿ™‚

June 26th, 2023 04:28

Self respect
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
(I read and will strive to heed)

June 26th, 2023 04:23



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