Comments received on poems by NafisaSB
Never befriend a mermaid
tallisman said:
Made me laugh, so random i guess! Thanks!
June 17th, 2022 00:58
tallisman said:
Made me laugh, so random i guess! Thanks!
June 17th, 2022 00:58
caring mode
L. B. Mek said:
\'Riding a high horse
Intolerant of jest
These are the people
Who consider they’re best\'..
wonderfully, idyllic
message, dear poet
and yet, so realisable
with little
effort and a pinch of humility..
still
inevitably, we watch
as unseen it passes, most
like
the clouds they forget
to heed...
June 16th, 2022 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'Riding a high horse
Intolerant of jest
These are the people
Who consider they’re best\'..
wonderfully, idyllic
message, dear poet
and yet, so realisable
with little
effort and a pinch of humility..
still
inevitably, we watch
as unseen it passes, most
like
the clouds they forget
to heed...
June 16th, 2022 04:57
Gaiety & Contentment
L. B. Mek said:
a fantastic read, dear Poet
this is the \'Animal Farm\', theme
I wish Orwell would have, gifted
the world
rather than, adding more fuel
material
for our
evermore segregated, existence..
in the words of a True, genius
Will Durant:
\'gaiety, is wiser than wisdom\'
lol
\'Live\' my poetic kin
dream, cry, laugh, love
Live, Live, Live!
for our gifted Tomorrow\'s
will soon
be those \'good old days\'
Live
June 10th, 2022 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
a fantastic read, dear Poet
this is the \'Animal Farm\', theme
I wish Orwell would have, gifted
the world
rather than, adding more fuel
material
for our
evermore segregated, existence..
in the words of a True, genius
Will Durant:
\'gaiety, is wiser than wisdom\'
lol
\'Live\' my poetic kin
dream, cry, laugh, love
Live, Live, Live!
for our gifted Tomorrow\'s
will soon
be those \'good old days\'
Live
June 10th, 2022 05:36
DO NOT BE DISCOURAGED
L. B. Mek said:
a great message, dear Poet
I read and learn
and take comfort from, heeding
your wisdom
June 9th, 2022 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
a great message, dear Poet
I read and learn
and take comfort from, heeding
your wisdom
June 9th, 2022 05:32
Break up
L. B. Mek said:
\'The eyes still kept seeking
Though the torrents had dried\'..
ain\'t it always the case, dear poet
(bright green fields, ahead
a horizons sea, full of fish
and yet
we drag our feet, look back
at that barren land, we just
can\'t
let go - of, without taring
away
a part of ourselves, this
our burden for loving, with all
we\'ve got to give, every time...)
June 3rd, 2022 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'The eyes still kept seeking
Though the torrents had dried\'..
ain\'t it always the case, dear poet
(bright green fields, ahead
a horizons sea, full of fish
and yet
we drag our feet, look back
at that barren land, we just
can\'t
let go - of, without taring
away
a part of ourselves, this
our burden for loving, with all
we\'ve got to give, every time...)
June 3rd, 2022 03:55
I am a stream
L. B. Mek said:
may you Ever, shine Bright
form Inside - out...!
dear Poet
May 31st, 2022 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
may you Ever, shine Bright
form Inside - out...!
dear Poet
May 31st, 2022 05:40
The brave soldier
L. B. Mek said:
(there may be glory
in the deed
but Never
in the need
for this to be a reality
replicated, daily, generationally
all over the world..
indeed, we salute the bravery
and mourn
that such brave souls
never strived
to make art and beauty
their purpose in life..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'salute their sacrifices
never
celebrate its necessity!\'
May 27th, 2022 05:12
L. B. Mek said:
(there may be glory
in the deed
but Never
in the need
for this to be a reality
replicated, daily, generationally
all over the world..
indeed, we salute the bravery
and mourn
that such brave souls
never strived
to make art and beauty
their purpose in life..)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
\'salute their sacrifices
never
celebrate its necessity!\'
May 27th, 2022 05:12
Ooty
L. B. Mek said:
\'The panorama was magnificent – it was truly a work of art\'..
like your words..
(I read and simply close my eyes and drift
and drift
between your syllables, feel
life\'s breeze
in a room with closed windows
delighting, once more
in Nature\'s gifts..)
thank you! dear Poet
so well written
May 26th, 2022 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'The panorama was magnificent – it was truly a work of art\'..
like your words..
(I read and simply close my eyes and drift
and drift
between your syllables, feel
life\'s breeze
in a room with closed windows
delighting, once more
in Nature\'s gifts..)
thank you! dear Poet
so well written
May 26th, 2022 05:34
Blessings
L. B. Mek said:
Love, in its Purest form
will avenge, all
those discrepancies
in our life\'s, ill-fate..
see, maybe
that absent father, made way
for the Greatest mother, figure
to shine
and imbue a Hue, of beloved-ness
on a soul
that deserved, nothing less!
so yes, it would be nice
if all our stories
came pre prepared, like modernity\'s
ready to go, meal\'s
but you see, dear insightful Poet
some of the best, dishes
we make
from life\'s chaotic ingredients
taste, that much better
for those mistaken, dashes
of flavourful vinegar, we add
whose, bitterness
awakens the sweetness
imbued
in those ingredients, waiting
for an opportunity
to Glow
with luminous, uncontainable: Pride...
(I\'m so happy
that the one you care for so much
had her special day!
cheers, to you witnessing
the fruition of your selfless
care and support, dear Poet
🥂🍾🥂)
thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2022 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
Love, in its Purest form
will avenge, all
those discrepancies
in our life\'s, ill-fate..
see, maybe
that absent father, made way
for the Greatest mother, figure
to shine
and imbue a Hue, of beloved-ness
on a soul
that deserved, nothing less!
so yes, it would be nice
if all our stories
came pre prepared, like modernity\'s
ready to go, meal\'s
but you see, dear insightful Poet
some of the best, dishes
we make
from life\'s chaotic ingredients
taste, that much better
for those mistaken, dashes
of flavourful vinegar, we add
whose, bitterness
awakens the sweetness
imbued
in those ingredients, waiting
for an opportunity
to Glow
with luminous, uncontainable: Pride...
(I\'m so happy
that the one you care for so much
had her special day!
cheers, to you witnessing
the fruition of your selfless
care and support, dear Poet
🥂🍾🥂)
thanks for sharing
May 24th, 2022 05:44
Success shall be mine
tallisman said:
And a successful poem! Enjoyed it. All the best!
May 21st, 2022 01:41
tallisman said:
And a successful poem! Enjoyed it. All the best!
May 21st, 2022 01:41
be careful
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Nafisa, to see the true beauty of a person you must look into their eyes and see their heart.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Nafisa, to see the true beauty of a person you must look into their eyes and see their heart.
Andy
May 19th, 2022 02:05
A broken heart
L. B. Mek said:
really clever!
thank you, dear Poet
\'brought a ring – a cute little thing
But you back at me, my present did fling\'..
\'Boy buys ring, girl throws it away
The same old story repeated everyday\'..
May 17th, 2022 05:35
L. B. Mek said:
really clever!
thank you, dear Poet
\'brought a ring – a cute little thing
But you back at me, my present did fling\'..
\'Boy buys ring, girl throws it away
The same old story repeated everyday\'..
May 17th, 2022 05:35
Daily walk
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy, immersive reads
like this, dear poet
wonderful imagery and insightful, commentary
gift wrapped in such a positive message..
thank you!
May 16th, 2022 06:26
L. B. Mek said:
I really enjoy, immersive reads
like this, dear poet
wonderful imagery and insightful, commentary
gift wrapped in such a positive message..
thank you!
May 16th, 2022 06:26
Last September
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
\'Its frosty stare
Its knowing look
Searched my heart-
An open book
Its pretty wings
Flashed in the sun
Its haughty gaze
Deceived no one\'
May 9th, 2022 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully vivid, a great read
thank you! dear Poet
\'Its frosty stare
Its knowing look
Searched my heart-
An open book
Its pretty wings
Flashed in the sun
Its haughty gaze
Deceived no one\'
May 9th, 2022 05:54
Mother of Mine
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Happy Mother’s Day to all the strong mothers out there. Beautiful poem dedicated to your mom nafisa 🌟
May 8th, 2022 12:14
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Happy Mother’s Day to all the strong mothers out there. Beautiful poem dedicated to your mom nafisa 🌟
May 8th, 2022 12:14
Reminiscences
Paul Bell said:
Innocence disappears when the devil introduces you to your teenage days.
That\'s what I told the judge anyway, and he concurred.
May 7th, 2022 05:23
Paul Bell said:
Innocence disappears when the devil introduces you to your teenage days.
That\'s what I told the judge anyway, and he concurred.
May 7th, 2022 05:23
Reminiscences
Nicholas Browning said:
+10 points for using the word \"uncouth\". A very descriptive write about remembrance and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
May 7th, 2022 03:21
Nicholas Browning said:
+10 points for using the word \"uncouth\". A very descriptive write about remembrance and I enjoyed it thoroughly.
May 7th, 2022 03:21
Unity
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your message!
Unity, anchored by Empathy
and a willingness
to Empower, merited Equality
that\'s the dream...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 6th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
I laud your message!
Unity, anchored by Empathy
and a willingness
to Empower, merited Equality
that\'s the dream...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
May 6th, 2022 04:59
Train trip
Rozina said:
This is a lovely read. I\'m inspired to write about a train ride too.
May 3rd, 2022 02:41
Rozina said:
This is a lovely read. I\'m inspired to write about a train ride too.
May 3rd, 2022 02:41
to strive..
L. B. Mek said:
that Great! Tennyson, himself
would so
appreciate these words, dear poet..
and \'Ulysses\' by Tennyson
is one of my absolute, favourite\'s:
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30658
)
May 2nd, 2022 05:51
L. B. Mek said:
that Great! Tennyson, himself
would so
appreciate these words, dear poet..
and \'Ulysses\' by Tennyson
is one of my absolute, favourite\'s:
(
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-30658
)
May 2nd, 2022 05:51
Riddles
Nicholas Browning said:
Yeah, me too. I feel like it will take a while. I loved reading this. It\'s quite clever.
May 1st, 2022 03:23
Nicholas Browning said:
Yeah, me too. I feel like it will take a while. I loved reading this. It\'s quite clever.
May 1st, 2022 03:23
Riddles
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Life is a question marks and it’s twisted .. great poem ✨
May 1st, 2022 02:53
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
Life is a question marks and it’s twisted .. great poem ✨
May 1st, 2022 02:53
The \'Best\'
L. B. Mek said:
ChrisyLyn, already worded it
Best !
(a lovely read, so many great lines
thank you! dear Poet
your poetry
is like an oasis, to those thirsting
for some genuine poetry)
April 28th, 2022 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
ChrisyLyn, already worded it
Best !
(a lovely read, so many great lines
thank you! dear Poet
your poetry
is like an oasis, to those thirsting
for some genuine poetry)
April 28th, 2022 04:04
Teenager\'s ABC
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This speaks about our present generation.. and it speaks the truth. Nice work🧡
April 27th, 2022 04:03
ChrisLyn🕊 said:
This speaks about our present generation.. and it speaks the truth. Nice work🧡
April 27th, 2022 04:03
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