Comments received on poems by HannahElisabeth
Dancing in the snow
L. B. Mek said:
its important, that we share
to gift others an opportunity, to learn
without having to fall to the depths
we personally experienced,
however unlikely, if it connects and helps
just, one
that\'s enough to pay for the vulnerability
you bravely choose, to showcase...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(happy you\'ve found your \'better\'
hope it evolves, eventually
into something: \'even Better\'!)
August 30th, 2021 07:25
L. B. Mek said:
its important, that we share
to gift others an opportunity, to learn
without having to fall to the depths
we personally experienced,
however unlikely, if it connects and helps
just, one
that\'s enough to pay for the vulnerability
you bravely choose, to showcase...
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
(happy you\'ve found your \'better\'
hope it evolves, eventually
into something: \'even Better\'!)
August 30th, 2021 07:25
Dancing in the snow
Classicmister said:
What powerful and poignant words ... So glad that \"better answers were found\"
Go well
John
August 30th, 2021 07:23
Classicmister said:
What powerful and poignant words ... So glad that \"better answers were found\"
Go well
John
August 30th, 2021 07:23
But did he hit you...
matthew jay said:
I am thankful you wrote about this. I dated a woman years ago who went through an attack before I met her. Yes, never forget their are people in your life who love and want to help you through the pain.
August 29th, 2021 21:02
matthew jay said:
I am thankful you wrote about this. I dated a woman years ago who went through an attack before I met her. Yes, never forget their are people in your life who love and want to help you through the pain.
August 29th, 2021 21:02
Summer heat
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last two lines say it all Hannah. Great words.
Andy
August 29th, 2021 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last two lines say it all Hannah. Great words.
Andy
August 29th, 2021 01:13
Summer heat
dusk arising said:
LOL at sin and repent. Man made concepts. Those sinning motivators of love are the strongest most glorious emotions the human body and mind can experience.
Lovely poem
August 28th, 2021 08:32
dusk arising said:
LOL at sin and repent. Man made concepts. Those sinning motivators of love are the strongest most glorious emotions the human body and mind can experience.
Lovely poem
August 28th, 2021 08:32
What you had
Coyote said:
Ah, wonderful. Remember, sometimes a burning bridge lights the way through the darkness. Great write Hannah🙂
August 27th, 2021 16:12
Coyote said:
Ah, wonderful. Remember, sometimes a burning bridge lights the way through the darkness. Great write Hannah🙂
August 27th, 2021 16:12
What you had
myself and me said:
Be careful with what you have, and be sure to keep it in a safe place. Other than that, everything is pretty good.
August 27th, 2021 15:26
myself and me said:
Be careful with what you have, and be sure to keep it in a safe place. Other than that, everything is pretty good.
August 27th, 2021 15:26
Lucky Coin
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Creative and well expressed ... like how it flows ! 🙂
August 27th, 2021 11:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Creative and well expressed ... like how it flows ! 🙂
August 27th, 2021 11:59
Insanity
Jay-Lee Jane said:
I adore this poem and can really feel what your saying. My childhood friend passed away quite recently (so i see this from a different lens then the one you wrote it in) but it left me quite heartbroken for a long time - still does. often my thoughts go back to him, more often at night....thank you for your beautiful, heartfelt words. they echo in my soul.
August 25th, 2021 18:51
Jay-Lee Jane said:
I adore this poem and can really feel what your saying. My childhood friend passed away quite recently (so i see this from a different lens then the one you wrote it in) but it left me quite heartbroken for a long time - still does. often my thoughts go back to him, more often at night....thank you for your beautiful, heartfelt words. they echo in my soul.
August 25th, 2021 18:51
Insanity
myself and me said:
An exquisite expression of love. Beautiful writing.
August 25th, 2021 14:06
myself and me said:
An exquisite expression of love. Beautiful writing.
August 25th, 2021 14:06
Insanity
Coyote said:
I guess love really is a form of insanity...lol
Brilliant write Hannah. Going into my favs🙂
August 25th, 2021 11:55
Coyote said:
I guess love really is a form of insanity...lol
Brilliant write Hannah. Going into my favs🙂
August 25th, 2021 11:55
Insanity
Fay Slimm. said:
You define love so well in this rant against insomnia Hannah - I like the flow of the piece and the space you give to your wording.
August 25th, 2021 02:22
Fay Slimm. said:
You define love so well in this rant against insomnia Hannah - I like the flow of the piece and the space you give to your wording.
August 25th, 2021 02:22
Insanity
orchidee said:
Aww, why your mind keep running back to me?! heehee.
I wish I would shut up! You probably don\'t mean me. lol.
August 25th, 2021 01:40
orchidee said:
Aww, why your mind keep running back to me?! heehee.
I wish I would shut up! You probably don\'t mean me. lol.
August 25th, 2021 01:40
Aqua Regia
L. B. Mek said:
some choose to dissolve gold
some choose to disown their pain...
your words and poetry, the water
your regret and pain, soon to be
dissolved, matter in your poetic ether
of belief: in A \'better\'
that must surely, exist...
Aquaregia, royal water of purification: indeed!
(thank you for allowing me to witness
the brilliance of your poetic mind
I look forward to reading and learning
from your unquestionable talent, dear Poet)
August 24th, 2021 05:36
L. B. Mek said:
some choose to dissolve gold
some choose to disown their pain...
your words and poetry, the water
your regret and pain, soon to be
dissolved, matter in your poetic ether
of belief: in A \'better\'
that must surely, exist...
Aquaregia, royal water of purification: indeed!
(thank you for allowing me to witness
the brilliance of your poetic mind
I look forward to reading and learning
from your unquestionable talent, dear Poet)
August 24th, 2021 05:36
Aqua Regia
orchidee said:
A fine write H.
I\'m not into Leo, Pisces, etc though!
I am Aquarius the water-bearer. I bear the water when folk chuck buckets of it over me, for hearing me sing! lol.
August 24th, 2021 01:44
orchidee said:
A fine write H.
I\'m not into Leo, Pisces, etc though!
I am Aquarius the water-bearer. I bear the water when folk chuck buckets of it over me, for hearing me sing! lol.
August 24th, 2021 01:44
Aqua Regia
Doggerel Dave said:
Another one down done and dusted. As a bloke (guy) should I start to feel slightly…. Nah I don’t think so – the process as described here is too entertaining.
An adherent of science and an astrology believer? I know – folks are capable of holding completely contradictory ideas simultaneously……… 😊
August 24th, 2021 01:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Another one down done and dusted. As a bloke (guy) should I start to feel slightly…. Nah I don’t think so – the process as described here is too entertaining.
An adherent of science and an astrology believer? I know – folks are capable of holding completely contradictory ideas simultaneously……… 😊
August 24th, 2021 01:18
You
Neville said:
Ouch, this hurt and beautifully so .. & thank you for considering my recent scribble ma\'am ................. N :)
August 21st, 2021 04:13
Neville said:
Ouch, this hurt and beautifully so .. & thank you for considering my recent scribble ma\'am ................. N :)
August 21st, 2021 04:13
You
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotcha - hung and framed, but especially hung; perfect material just waiting to be exploited......
And you did that Hannah, so neatly but comprehensively. Shouldn\'t class that as a fun read, but it was.....
August 20th, 2021 21:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Gotcha - hung and framed, but especially hung; perfect material just waiting to be exploited......
And you did that Hannah, so neatly but comprehensively. Shouldn\'t class that as a fun read, but it was.....
August 20th, 2021 21:59
It\'s Just Physics
Doggerel Dave said:
Not good in this area at all now Hannah: Would you term that a quickie?
It is growing in my imagination...
August 18th, 2021 01:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Not good in this area at all now Hannah: Would you term that a quickie?
It is growing in my imagination...
August 18th, 2021 01:21
Sleepwalking
Doggerel Dave said:
The feeling of unreality I\'ll never forget, but it was relatively brief and a long time ago. The world was there through the bubble which enclosed me.
Neat little piece, Hannah.
August 15th, 2021 01:03
Doggerel Dave said:
The feeling of unreality I\'ll never forget, but it was relatively brief and a long time ago. The world was there through the bubble which enclosed me.
Neat little piece, Hannah.
August 15th, 2021 01:03
Sleepwalking
Coyote said:
Very well done, and thank you for bringing attention to this little known disorder Hannah.
August 14th, 2021 15:15
Coyote said:
Very well done, and thank you for bringing attention to this little known disorder Hannah.
August 14th, 2021 15:15
A Line Storm Melody
SureshG said:
I thus thank Frost for giving you the final inspiration for putting together a romantically soaked poetic piece to enrich our memories
August 13th, 2021 10:20
SureshG said:
I thus thank Frost for giving you the final inspiration for putting together a romantically soaked poetic piece to enrich our memories
August 13th, 2021 10:20
A Line Storm Melody
L. B. Mek said:
poetic sincerity flowing freely
with practised ease
this is such an intriguing read,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 13th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
poetic sincerity flowing freely
with practised ease
this is such an intriguing read,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 13th, 2021 04:37
A Line Storm Melody
Saxon Crow said:
Wow Hannah. Pure poetry in practice. I love this.
August 13th, 2021 01:21
Saxon Crow said:
Wow Hannah. Pure poetry in practice. I love this.
August 13th, 2021 01:21
A Line Storm Melody
Doggerel Dave said:
Like this. Imbues a feeling of peaceful hope, free of controversy….
Enjoy Robert Frost very much, although I incline to his narrative works slightly more I think.
August 12th, 2021 22:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Like this. Imbues a feeling of peaceful hope, free of controversy….
Enjoy Robert Frost very much, although I incline to his narrative works slightly more I think.
August 12th, 2021 22:05
A Line Storm Melody
Heart of Babel said:
This one is very beautiful to me, it actually plucked at those heavy strings of my heart a bit. A splendid write, well done!
August 12th, 2021 21:20
Heart of Babel said:
This one is very beautiful to me, it actually plucked at those heavy strings of my heart a bit. A splendid write, well done!
August 12th, 2021 21:20
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