Comments received on poems by Draven
Wax
Neville said:
sh ... it happens to the best of us ... enjoyed by me ...
December 23rd, 2021 14:03
Neville said:
sh ... it happens to the best of us ... enjoyed by me ...
December 23rd, 2021 14:03
Flames
Neville said:
Fire is a good friend .. but an absolute bugger of a foe ............................. they say keep your friends close, dont they .. flaming good post today Draven .. N
December 23rd, 2021 14:00
Neville said:
Fire is a good friend .. but an absolute bugger of a foe ............................. they say keep your friends close, dont they .. flaming good post today Draven .. N
December 23rd, 2021 14:00
Flames
woundedheart said:
Wildfires and forest fires not even a spark required simply a piece of broken glass and sunlight, but you capture the imagery of the destruction that can be caused.👌
December 23rd, 2021 07:40
woundedheart said:
Wildfires and forest fires not even a spark required simply a piece of broken glass and sunlight, but you capture the imagery of the destruction that can be caused.👌
December 23rd, 2021 07:40
Midwinter
Rozina said:
Beautiful description. Would love to go to Germany, in spring or summer or autumn - I fear the icy wind.
December 22nd, 2021 00:25
Rozina said:
Beautiful description. Would love to go to Germany, in spring or summer or autumn - I fear the icy wind.
December 22nd, 2021 00:25
Midwinter
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A vivid portrait of nature\'s very own art, snapped in high literal definition. You write very well gifted one. An attractive piece this is!
December 21st, 2021 16:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A vivid portrait of nature\'s very own art, snapped in high literal definition. You write very well gifted one. An attractive piece this is!
December 21st, 2021 16:07
Midwinter
Paul Bell said:
Minus 3, that\'s like summer in Britain.
You would think, birds being sensible creatures, they\'d bugger off to warmer climates.
December 21st, 2021 15:58
Paul Bell said:
Minus 3, that\'s like summer in Britain.
You would think, birds being sensible creatures, they\'d bugger off to warmer climates.
December 21st, 2021 15:58
Midwinter
Coyote said:
Keep warm my friend and keep penning these masterpieces. Another fantastic write🙂
December 21st, 2021 15:44
Coyote said:
Keep warm my friend and keep penning these masterpieces. Another fantastic write🙂
December 21st, 2021 15:44
Midwinter
Fay Slimm. said:
Can feel for you in that low temp. dear Draven - your words paint so well nature\'s struggles when it is cold -
December 21st, 2021 13:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Can feel for you in that low temp. dear Draven - your words paint so well nature\'s struggles when it is cold -
December 21st, 2021 13:19
Midwinter
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ! I love blackbirds … just saw one outside … pretty birds
December 21st, 2021 11:45
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ! I love blackbirds … just saw one outside … pretty birds
December 21st, 2021 11:45
Midwinter
woundedheart said:
Gorgeous imagery but then the scenery throughout Germany is beautiful. You capture the scene so gently with your words, so wanna walk through the black forest.
December 21st, 2021 11:38
woundedheart said:
Gorgeous imagery but then the scenery throughout Germany is beautiful. You capture the scene so gently with your words, so wanna walk through the black forest.
December 21st, 2021 11:38
Midwinter
Neville said:
Delightful Draven .. your poem that is .. you are too of course, but that\'s a different story ..........Very timely too, I might add, it being the Winter Solstice today ... x
December 21st, 2021 11:37
Neville said:
Delightful Draven .. your poem that is .. you are too of course, but that\'s a different story ..........Very timely too, I might add, it being the Winter Solstice today ... x
December 21st, 2021 11:37
Wax
Rozina said:
A scene so clear in my mind from just a few lines. Wonderful poem.
December 20th, 2021 21:47
Rozina said:
A scene so clear in my mind from just a few lines. Wonderful poem.
December 20th, 2021 21:47
Wax
Paul Bell said:
Poor Medusa, on our third date as well. Love the rhythm.
December 20th, 2021 12:16
Paul Bell said:
Poor Medusa, on our third date as well. Love the rhythm.
December 20th, 2021 12:16
Wax
woundedheart said:
Poor Medusa damned by her own beauty. Painful to watch but worse to repair, love those lines, beauty in brevity.
December 20th, 2021 07:21
woundedheart said:
Poor Medusa damned by her own beauty. Painful to watch but worse to repair, love those lines, beauty in brevity.
December 20th, 2021 07:21
Brume
A.H. Browning said:
“ late o\'Clock, in the still of the night.”
Powerful writing.
Kindest Regards.
December 19th, 2021 20:47
A.H. Browning said:
“ late o\'Clock, in the still of the night.”
Powerful writing.
Kindest Regards.
December 19th, 2021 20:47
Tidings
Coyote said:
Had a friend who used to respond to \'good morning\' with: \'yeah, but some SOB is going to come along and screw it up\'. Your piece reminded me of him only with a more positive spin. Another great write Draven🙂
December 16th, 2021 13:23
Coyote said:
Had a friend who used to respond to \'good morning\' with: \'yeah, but some SOB is going to come along and screw it up\'. Your piece reminded me of him only with a more positive spin. Another great write Draven🙂
December 16th, 2021 13:23
Tidings
woundedheart said:
So still challenging yourself as past life challenged you, this is a wonderful penning of personal feelings, keep your chin up almost there now ☺
December 16th, 2021 11:04
woundedheart said:
So still challenging yourself as past life challenged you, this is a wonderful penning of personal feelings, keep your chin up almost there now ☺
December 16th, 2021 11:04
Tidings
orchidee said:
It\'s seasonally \'good tidings\' now, isn\'t it?!
Meanwhile - tidings were good for me, until a tide came in and sunk me sand-castle! lol.
December 16th, 2021 09:41
orchidee said:
It\'s seasonally \'good tidings\' now, isn\'t it?!
Meanwhile - tidings were good for me, until a tide came in and sunk me sand-castle! lol.
December 16th, 2021 09:41
Tidings
L. B. Mek said:
my motto is
\'no news, is good news\'
that way, even if the distance
or the unknowing, makes me worry
I can imagine, more positive hypotheticals..
(an intriguing subject and well written, thanks for sharing)
past half way in your challenge, only fifteen days left now
hope you\'re having fun
December 16th, 2021 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
my motto is
\'no news, is good news\'
that way, even if the distance
or the unknowing, makes me worry
I can imagine, more positive hypotheticals..
(an intriguing subject and well written, thanks for sharing)
past half way in your challenge, only fifteen days left now
hope you\'re having fun
December 16th, 2021 07:01
Tidings
dusk arising said:
I dunno where I get my positive outlook from. My mum was a great worrier and used to drive me nuts with her worries about what was going to go wrong.
People have told me that i have a great ability to forsee snags ahead but always with a \'work-around\' or solution. Now i could call that being negative, thats ok. But i prefer to call myself positive. Have you ever considered calling yourself positive minded, give it a try, it just might work for you.
December 16th, 2021 05:20
dusk arising said:
I dunno where I get my positive outlook from. My mum was a great worrier and used to drive me nuts with her worries about what was going to go wrong.
People have told me that i have a great ability to forsee snags ahead but always with a \'work-around\' or solution. Now i could call that being negative, thats ok. But i prefer to call myself positive. Have you ever considered calling yourself positive minded, give it a try, it just might work for you.
December 16th, 2021 05:20
Subnivean
Paul Bell said:
I think we all camouflage ourselves at some point in our lives, keeps us alive.
December 15th, 2021 11:38
Paul Bell said:
I think we all camouflage ourselves at some point in our lives, keeps us alive.
December 15th, 2021 11:38
Subnivean
woundedheart said:
To hide within one\'s self is often our only safe retreat. Challenge poetry sounds interesting good luck.
December 15th, 2021 10:41
woundedheart said:
To hide within one\'s self is often our only safe retreat. Challenge poetry sounds interesting good luck.
December 15th, 2021 10:41
Subnivean
woundedheart said:
To hide within one\'s self is often our only safe retreat. Challenge poetry sounds interesting good luck.
December 15th, 2021 10:41
woundedheart said:
To hide within one\'s self is often our only safe retreat. Challenge poetry sounds interesting good luck.
December 15th, 2021 10:41
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