Comments received on poems by Draven
You Crossed My Mind
Fay Slimm. said:
A message of sadness but of remembering the positive times spent together - a most moving write and thank you for sharing your grievous news with us dear Draven. Hugs galore.
February 1st, 2022 14:11
Fay Slimm. said:
A message of sadness but of remembering the positive times spent together - a most moving write and thank you for sharing your grievous news with us dear Draven. Hugs galore.
February 1st, 2022 14:11
You Crossed My Mind
orchidee said:
A poignant write D.
I knew someone in a group. A year after it finished, I was sadly going to their funeral.
I read the news of a gas explosion in the area, and it was........ you know who.
February 1st, 2022 11:51
orchidee said:
A poignant write D.
I knew someone in a group. A year after it finished, I was sadly going to their funeral.
I read the news of a gas explosion in the area, and it was........ you know who.
February 1st, 2022 11:51
Songs
Neville said:
I simply love your authors note ... and your post today is the cherry on the cake ... awesome ink my dear Draven .. N
January 31st, 2022 17:20
Neville said:
I simply love your authors note ... and your post today is the cherry on the cake ... awesome ink my dear Draven .. N
January 31st, 2022 17:20
Songs
Paul Bell said:
Spot on, life is short enough, get out there and scream at the world.
January 31st, 2022 14:19
Paul Bell said:
Spot on, life is short enough, get out there and scream at the world.
January 31st, 2022 14:19
Songs
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound and well written piece of advice to end your two stanza posting today dear Draven - - I am now singing my moments with fresh vigour and thank you for this caring reminder.
January 31st, 2022 11:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A sound and well written piece of advice to end your two stanza posting today dear Draven - - I am now singing my moments with fresh vigour and thank you for this caring reminder.
January 31st, 2022 11:28
Cling
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written poetic warning here Draven, as you\'ve said, it\'s really important to realise when to start a new phase in one\'s life.
Our pasts will always be part of us, but it shouldn\'t define us, as a glittering future is to come.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 31st, 2022 10:05
AuburnScribbler said:
A brilliantly written poetic warning here Draven, as you\'ve said, it\'s really important to realise when to start a new phase in one\'s life.
Our pasts will always be part of us, but it shouldn\'t define us, as a glittering future is to come.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well!
January 31st, 2022 10:05
Songs
L. B. Mek said:
I agree with every syllable, of your write and even more-so with your author\'s comment..
never be scared to share, at least with me, dear Poet
Sing your Truth: Loud n Proud!
else they choke you, drowning
under all those
unshed, frustrations and regrets..
ink them loose
and walk a little lighter, in life
January 31st, 2022 08:13
L. B. Mek said:
I agree with every syllable, of your write and even more-so with your author\'s comment..
never be scared to share, at least with me, dear Poet
Sing your Truth: Loud n Proud!
else they choke you, drowning
under all those
unshed, frustrations and regrets..
ink them loose
and walk a little lighter, in life
January 31st, 2022 08:13
Cling
Paul Bell said:
It\'s a thing we all should do, dump the baggage. And even though she married that right boring guy, at some point you know she\'s coming back.
January 29th, 2022 17:02
Paul Bell said:
It\'s a thing we all should do, dump the baggage. And even though she married that right boring guy, at some point you know she\'s coming back.
January 29th, 2022 17:02
Behold
Neville said:
I reckon this is among the very best that you have yet posted .. 10/10 .. and good old Douglas Harding is what I say .... Neville
January 29th, 2022 05:49
Neville said:
I reckon this is among the very best that you have yet posted .. 10/10 .. and good old Douglas Harding is what I say .... Neville
January 29th, 2022 05:49
Cling
Neville said:
Enjoyed by me my friend ... its great to see what spills from thy pen without the constraints previously imposed ................. :)
keep em coming .. Neville
January 29th, 2022 05:46
Neville said:
Enjoyed by me my friend ... its great to see what spills from thy pen without the constraints previously imposed ................. :)
keep em coming .. Neville
January 29th, 2022 05:46
Cling
Rozina said:
You are absolutely right. Although that one step is the hardest one, once it\'s taken the rest is easier.
January 28th, 2022 22:34
Rozina said:
You are absolutely right. Although that one step is the hardest one, once it\'s taken the rest is easier.
January 28th, 2022 22:34
Behold
dusk arising said:
A reakisation of who you are and that the world is your oyster.
January 20th, 2022 08:18
dusk arising said:
A reakisation of who you are and that the world is your oyster.
January 20th, 2022 08:18
Behold
L. B. Mek said:
such a great demonstration
of the power
in succinctly wording our poetry,
that sense of
self-empowered, liberation!
just jumps-off your page..
thanks for sharing
January 20th, 2022 08:04
L. B. Mek said:
such a great demonstration
of the power
in succinctly wording our poetry,
that sense of
self-empowered, liberation!
just jumps-off your page..
thanks for sharing
January 20th, 2022 08:04
Blithe
Fay Slimm. said:
A stunningly good end to your poetry challenge Draven - - how true that despite effort we often have to go downwards again for a while.
January 19th, 2022 12:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A stunningly good end to your poetry challenge Draven - - how true that despite effort we often have to go downwards again for a while.
January 19th, 2022 12:30
Blithe
dusk arising said:
mmmm basic instincts win the day yet again..... life goes on.... to what?
Enjoyed your piece, it made me think about self imposed disciplines.
January 19th, 2022 11:54
dusk arising said:
mmmm basic instincts win the day yet again..... life goes on.... to what?
Enjoyed your piece, it made me think about self imposed disciplines.
January 19th, 2022 11:54
Blithe
Neville said:
if you dont win gold for this here poetry challenge, then let me know & I\'ll send you the number of a hit man who owes me a few favours ......... N :)
January 19th, 2022 08:35
Neville said:
if you dont win gold for this here poetry challenge, then let me know & I\'ll send you the number of a hit man who owes me a few favours ......... N :)
January 19th, 2022 08:35
Illude
L. B. Mek said:
they often say, there is no \'good\'
in goodbye, I disagree
there is, undoubtedly!
its just a hollow, \'good\'
till someone, comes
to fill: the void
and remind us, yes
maybe we too, can find
that lasting something, all this
music and poetry
talk about, relentlessly..
(a great showcasing
of Poetry\'s capacity for self expression
as a bridge
to shedding, those dead skins of regret
and make room
for the nurturing sunrays, in our hopeful Tomorrow\'s)
if it hurts, because your love was real
that\'s a virtue, not a weakness!
January 18th, 2022 07:58
L. B. Mek said:
they often say, there is no \'good\'
in goodbye, I disagree
there is, undoubtedly!
its just a hollow, \'good\'
till someone, comes
to fill: the void
and remind us, yes
maybe we too, can find
that lasting something, all this
music and poetry
talk about, relentlessly..
(a great showcasing
of Poetry\'s capacity for self expression
as a bridge
to shedding, those dead skins of regret
and make room
for the nurturing sunrays, in our hopeful Tomorrow\'s)
if it hurts, because your love was real
that\'s a virtue, not a weakness!
January 18th, 2022 07:58
Illude
orchidee said:
I never realised it was over (lol). I kept on - like flogging a dead horse! lol.
Do shut up sometimes, Orchi. :)
January 18th, 2022 07:35
orchidee said:
I never realised it was over (lol). I kept on - like flogging a dead horse! lol.
Do shut up sometimes, Orchi. :)
January 18th, 2022 07:35
Illude
Paul Bell said:
2022. New horizons.
If the friendship still remains, that\'s no bad thing. Always someone to phone for a gab and a drink after work.
January 18th, 2022 07:24
Paul Bell said:
2022. New horizons.
If the friendship still remains, that\'s no bad thing. Always someone to phone for a gab and a drink after work.
January 18th, 2022 07:24
Afar
Crystal Hope said:
this is very deep. i can tell you were deep in thought on this one.
January 17th, 2022 18:02
Crystal Hope said:
this is very deep. i can tell you were deep in thought on this one.
January 17th, 2022 18:02
Afar
Caring dove said:
Nice writing . I used to do yoga more , not as much these days although I am on a yoga site so maybe should use it more . Meditating is something I think I should do a little more , I am going through spiritual awakening ,
January 17th, 2022 16:43
Caring dove said:
Nice writing . I used to do yoga more , not as much these days although I am on a yoga site so maybe should use it more . Meditating is something I think I should do a little more , I am going through spiritual awakening ,
January 17th, 2022 16:43
Betide
Neville said:
I like your style & curious form .. exceptional word choice I learn something new every day .. thank you for teaching me this very mane ...... :)
January 17th, 2022 03:41
Neville said:
I like your style & curious form .. exceptional word choice I learn something new every day .. thank you for teaching me this very mane ...... :)
January 17th, 2022 03:41
Betide
Buzz Bray said:
German is my language. Kopfkino can also be a positive term. Your strength and power are clear in this poem. Nicely Done.
January 16th, 2022 17:02
Buzz Bray said:
German is my language. Kopfkino can also be a positive term. Your strength and power are clear in this poem. Nicely Done.
January 16th, 2022 17:02
Yore
A.H. Browning said:
I love this.
May this “new year” bring you only good things.
Thanks for reminding me that I can do this any old day.
Cheers.
January 8th, 2022 23:10
A.H. Browning said:
I love this.
May this “new year” bring you only good things.
Thanks for reminding me that I can do this any old day.
Cheers.
January 8th, 2022 23:10
Hark
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully woven
interplaying rhyme and flow
to affect and denote, changes
to your tonality and mood,
really clever
and what a great, universal
message!
(thanks for sharing
and Happy New Year!)
January 4th, 2022 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully woven
interplaying rhyme and flow
to affect and denote, changes
to your tonality and mood,
really clever
and what a great, universal
message!
(thanks for sharing
and Happy New Year!)
January 4th, 2022 04:53
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