Comments received on poems by Draven
Subnivean
orchidee said:
You buried/gone into hibernation under the snow? Onwards to Day 15?!
It\'s not cheating if you write out more than one per day, and none some days. Then you could post your one per day on here!
December 15th, 2021 10:23
orchidee said:
You buried/gone into hibernation under the snow? Onwards to Day 15?!
It\'s not cheating if you write out more than one per day, and none some days. Then you could post your one per day on here!
December 15th, 2021 10:23
Apricity
Rozina said:
I really enjoy learning new words and your nice poem. I\'m again reminded there\'s so much more to learn from other poets, feelings, genres of poetry, words... Limitless! Thank you.
December 14th, 2021 21:06
Rozina said:
I really enjoy learning new words and your nice poem. I\'m again reminded there\'s so much more to learn from other poets, feelings, genres of poetry, words... Limitless! Thank you.
December 14th, 2021 21:06
Apricity
parker said:
Hey apricity is generally thought to be a noun, which makes the use grammatically incorrect.
Loved the poem, but just wanted to be accurate.
December 14th, 2021 15:34
parker said:
Hey apricity is generally thought to be a noun, which makes the use grammatically incorrect.
Loved the poem, but just wanted to be accurate.
December 14th, 2021 15:34
Apricity
Coyote said:
Had to go to the dictionary for this one. Very nice seasonal write Draven🙂
December 14th, 2021 15:20
Coyote said:
Had to go to the dictionary for this one. Very nice seasonal write Draven🙂
December 14th, 2021 15:20
Apricity
woundedheart said:
Winter is one of our best features in Europe as it paints the world virgin white and offers so much free entertainment to children from sleds to snowball\'s. So glad you can now share both its beauty and its chill .
December 14th, 2021 15:15
woundedheart said:
Winter is one of our best features in Europe as it paints the world virgin white and offers so much free entertainment to children from sleds to snowball\'s. So glad you can now share both its beauty and its chill .
December 14th, 2021 15:15
Apricity
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the idea of the air being full of hope . Nice writing 🙂 apricity is not a word I know of ,
December 14th, 2021 13:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like the idea of the air being full of hope . Nice writing 🙂 apricity is not a word I know of ,
December 14th, 2021 13:53
Inhume
Lorna said:
Sweet resignation to what is..... stop the struggle. Wise words j- it takes a while to get to this point and you say it so well. (And inhume as opposite of exhume brought another word to play!)
December 14th, 2021 06:30
Lorna said:
Sweet resignation to what is..... stop the struggle. Wise words j- it takes a while to get to this point and you say it so well. (And inhume as opposite of exhume brought another word to play!)
December 14th, 2021 06:30
Inhume
Rozina said:
Life with its ups and downs. Sometimes the scales fall more to 1 side. Thank you for this powerful poem and wishing you good health and happiness.
December 13th, 2021 23:32
Rozina said:
Life with its ups and downs. Sometimes the scales fall more to 1 side. Thank you for this powerful poem and wishing you good health and happiness.
December 13th, 2021 23:32
Inhume
Coyote said:
Yin and yang described in poetically beautiful language. Excellent write🙂
December 13th, 2021 18:14
Coyote said:
Yin and yang described in poetically beautiful language. Excellent write🙂
December 13th, 2021 18:14
Inhume
woundedheart said:
Is it not our imperfections and flaws that define us our mistakes that mould us fears that form us and dreams give us our own individuality embrace them to you stare them square in the eye and say I\'m unique I\'m special I\'m me. Powerful piece very honest.
December 13th, 2021 08:37
woundedheart said:
Is it not our imperfections and flaws that define us our mistakes that mould us fears that form us and dreams give us our own individuality embrace them to you stare them square in the eye and say I\'m unique I\'m special I\'m me. Powerful piece very honest.
December 13th, 2021 08:37
Inhume
orchidee said:
I\'m not knowing Yin and Yang. Who are they? And what are their surnames?! lol.
Do shut up Orchi. lol.
It\'s not an \'inhuman\' poem!
December 13th, 2021 07:40
orchidee said:
I\'m not knowing Yin and Yang. Who are they? And what are their surnames?! lol.
Do shut up Orchi. lol.
It\'s not an \'inhuman\' poem!
December 13th, 2021 07:40
Inhume
L. B. Mek said:
that poetry inspired by the perfect word, you come across
and it just takes your mind
to a place, where
things you\'ve been wordlessly accumulating
in your mind, get a chance to be expelled..
(or I\'m way off the mark
and you just thought the word
fit well as a title, lol)
either way, thanks for sharing
December 13th, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
that poetry inspired by the perfect word, you come across
and it just takes your mind
to a place, where
things you\'ve been wordlessly accumulating
in your mind, get a chance to be expelled..
(or I\'m way off the mark
and you just thought the word
fit well as a title, lol)
either way, thanks for sharing
December 13th, 2021 05:29
Inhume
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like the girl is at peace with herself. If it\'s going to happen, it\'s going to happen.
December 13th, 2021 05:01
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like the girl is at peace with herself. If it\'s going to happen, it\'s going to happen.
December 13th, 2021 05:01
Inhume
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
They both have their place . Yes . Sometimes pushing feelings away can make the feelings worse , somehow , they say to accept it … but I know how difficult that can be . I get really frustrated when I feel certain ways
December 13th, 2021 04:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
They both have their place . Yes . Sometimes pushing feelings away can make the feelings worse , somehow , they say to accept it … but I know how difficult that can be . I get really frustrated when I feel certain ways
December 13th, 2021 04:53
Obscurity
Coyote said:
Your poems are dark yet somehow positive. Excellent work🙂
December 12th, 2021 21:44
Coyote said:
Your poems are dark yet somehow positive. Excellent work🙂
December 12th, 2021 21:44
Travail
Coyote said:
Your poems read like a roadmap through the darkness of a soul. Beautiful write🙂
December 12th, 2021 19:41
Coyote said:
Your poems read like a roadmap through the darkness of a soul. Beautiful write🙂
December 12th, 2021 19:41
Frigorific
Coyote said:
Wow! The imagery moves from the real to the surreal so expertly here Draven. You say much in this short verse🙂
December 12th, 2021 19:35
Coyote said:
Wow! The imagery moves from the real to the surreal so expertly here Draven. You say much in this short verse🙂
December 12th, 2021 19:35
Skeletal
Coyote said:
Stark and vivid imagery in this one. Very nicely done🙂
December 12th, 2021 19:32
Coyote said:
Stark and vivid imagery in this one. Very nicely done🙂
December 12th, 2021 19:32
Culling
Coyote said:
A beautiful message about living in the very moment one is experiencing. A lesson here for all of us. Wise words🙂
December 12th, 2021 19:30
Coyote said:
A beautiful message about living in the very moment one is experiencing. A lesson here for all of us. Wise words🙂
December 12th, 2021 19:30
Bleak
Raphael Shonibare said:
I couldn\'t have read this at a better time. The first line says it all.
Wisdom surely spoke in this one, Draven.
A splendid poem!
December 12th, 2021 14:41
Raphael Shonibare said:
I couldn\'t have read this at a better time. The first line says it all.
Wisdom surely spoke in this one, Draven.
A splendid poem!
December 12th, 2021 14:41
Dolour
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love the expressed intrigue and tug of emotion clearly articulated here. It\'s a beautifully carved piece indeed gifted one, kudos to you!
December 12th, 2021 13:06
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love the expressed intrigue and tug of emotion clearly articulated here. It\'s a beautifully carved piece indeed gifted one, kudos to you!
December 12th, 2021 13:06
Gale
spilleronsheet said:
A perfect imagery
And the most needed advice
To have awareness in life
To be mindful of the present
Excellent job dear poet
December 12th, 2021 12:47
spilleronsheet said:
A perfect imagery
And the most needed advice
To have awareness in life
To be mindful of the present
Excellent job dear poet
December 12th, 2021 12:47
Gale
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow... This piece is very alive, with very strong vibrations and a lasting ripple! ... I felt it and somehow also felt some dark color to it, in a very character-revealing, honest way... Musically bare... I love it!
December 12th, 2021 12:33
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wow... This piece is very alive, with very strong vibrations and a lasting ripple! ... I felt it and somehow also felt some dark color to it, in a very character-revealing, honest way... Musically bare... I love it!
December 12th, 2021 12:33
Gale
Paul Bell said:
Breathe, deep breath, let it all go, you are now in the moment, where you need to be.
December 12th, 2021 08:02
Paul Bell said:
Breathe, deep breath, let it all go, you are now in the moment, where you need to be.
December 12th, 2021 08:02
Dolour
Paul Bell said:
You never lose the past, it just defines you. Probably why it drives us nuts.
December 12th, 2021 07:59
Paul Bell said:
You never lose the past, it just defines you. Probably why it drives us nuts.
December 12th, 2021 07:59
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