Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Between heartbeats
Neville said:



I feel both set and primed and able to take almost anything on .. but then I\'ve got the day off .. not that I\'m clock watching .. still I feel more aligned and that stems write from the heart .. excellent ink as ever .. Neville

January 23rd, 2025 05:36

Wake of a muse
arqios said:

That’s a hard striking poem, there, Soren. What’s left in the wake isn’t always what the final product embodies, other elements have been forged in their formation. On a side note, I wonder what the snow looked like in Pensacola. And although snow is what it is… its timing and circumstance brings nuances worth noting.πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 23rd, 2025 04:09

Between heartbeats
Goldfinch60 said:

Time is such an unknown and unnerving thing soren.

Andy

January 23rd, 2025 02:23

Between heartbeats
Thad Wilk said:

Beautiful poem
wonderfully expressed!! πŸ‘
Imagery and metaphor
at its very best!!! πŸ†
My pleasure to read indeed!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 22nd, 2025 22:58

The muse\'s dirge
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Perhaps it\'s one of the best poems I have come across. Deeply moving portrayal in the colour of melancholy

January 22nd, 2025 22:50

Between heartbeats
David Wakeling said:

Time sure is a mystery.Some ask if it is real.This poem made me think.Excellent

January 22nd, 2025 19:33

Between heartbeats
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous. Powerful work.

January 22nd, 2025 12:54

Between heartbeats
NinjaGirl said:

Beautiful

January 22nd, 2025 12:50

Between heartbeats
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

January 22nd, 2025 09:54

Between heartbeats
Tristan Robert Lange said:

The very title is brilliant, let alone the poem. The idea of fleeting moments...and how many of those fill our lives. How many \"between heartbeat\" moments do we experience in a lifetime? In this poem, I could almost hear the hush between the ticks of a clock, much like the space between the beats of a heart. This is a very effective poem, my friend. And very thought-provoking! ❀️

January 22nd, 2025 09:17

Between heartbeats
Poetic Licence said:

Paints a picture to me of how time traps everything in some way however small that maybe, i sense a urge to forget the darker bits and regale more in the positive memories, Really enjoyed the read

January 22nd, 2025 07:40

Between heartbeats
Teddy.15 said:

I see a hospital bed and a ticking time bomb that is a heart , I see past present and future wow sorrenbarret this is outstanding. Wonderful wonderful. 🌹

January 22nd, 2025 05:12

Between heartbeats
arqios said:

Such a glorious tension between the transient and the eternal, the ever-present desire to capture and preserve the fleeting moments that define our lives.πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 22nd, 2025 04:06

Nature\'s poem
Goldfinch60 said:

Nature\'s symphonies, ballets are artworks are so wonderful to hear and see soren.

Andy

January 22nd, 2025 02:43

Nature\'s poem
Thad Wilk said:

A stunning poem
and painting 🎨 πŸ–ŒοΈ
of natures fine art!! πŸ‘
Just resonates
with greatness
right from the start!! πŸ†
My pleasure to read!!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

January 21st, 2025 22:32

Nature\'s poem
Salvia.S said:

Nature is the art of God, and this poem is truly a masterpiece!

January 21st, 2025 20:25

Nature\'s poem
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:

Nature is peaceful as is this write

January 21st, 2025 19:33

Nature\'s poem
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 21st, 2025 12:50

Nature\'s poem
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Nature is the greatest work of art and the of artists greatest muses. A wonderful poem that captures the allure and awe of nature. Well done, my friend. As a lover of nature, I am a lover of this poem. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

January 21st, 2025 08:28

Nature\'s poem
arqios said:

This is such a symphonic depiction of the profound harmony found in nature\'s elements, each contributing to an eternal dance of life and art. πŸ™πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ•Š

January 21st, 2025 06:54

Nature\'s poem
Teddy.15 said:

Our lives are certainly a poem, and your imagery is extraordinary in beauty love it all but your last stanza is a wow 🌹

January 21st, 2025 05:55

Nature\'s poem
orchidee said:

I never knew there was so much in Nature. Well, I know now! lol.

January 21st, 2025 03:51

Homographs
Goldfinch60 said:

Intriguing words soren giving a great deal to think about.

Andy

January 21st, 2025 02:51

Homographs
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

January 20th, 2025 22:53

Homographs
David Wakeling said:

This is very clever and fun to read. Gotta love those homographs,

January 20th, 2025 19:25

Homographs
Thad Wilk said:

Brilliantly penned, πŸ–ŠοΈ
very witty indeed!! πŸ‘
Wonderful brevity,
Really enjoyed the read!πŸ₯‡
Thanks for sharing my friend! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad


January 20th, 2025 18:39

Homographs
Cassie58 said:

I had to look up homographs - a new word for me

Intriguing, but I did find alliteration and rhyme and also groupings of words. There is probably much I have missed sorenbarrett. I am hopeless at cryptic stuff:)

January 20th, 2025 17:04

Homographs
NinjaGirl said:

Reading this took a minute, and that\'s what makes it so awesome!

January 20th, 2025 10:27

Homographs
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

January 20th, 2025 10:15

Homographs
Tristan Robert Lange said:

This, my friend, is the challenge with homographs, brilliantly put into poetic form. Well done! πŸŒΉπŸ‘ Absolutely loved this! So unique and original, Soren!

January 20th, 2025 10:03



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