Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett
Amateur
Bella Shepard said:
The whittler of words has created a piece that comes from the heart, the very root of the amateur. Beautiful in soul, as is this poem dear friend.
February 12th, 2023 15:26
Bella Shepard said:
The whittler of words has created a piece that comes from the heart, the very root of the amateur. Beautiful in soul, as is this poem dear friend.
February 12th, 2023 15:26
Amateur
Doggerel Dave said:
What more is there to do other than try, Soren? Neatly summarised.
So, O Whittler of Words, on to the next one... it\'s all I try to do and hope.
February 12th, 2023 07:39
Doggerel Dave said:
What more is there to do other than try, Soren? Neatly summarised.
So, O Whittler of Words, on to the next one... it\'s all I try to do and hope.
February 12th, 2023 07:39
Nature\'s sign
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorely tempted to leave this one completely alone Soren, as it covered so adequately the urge by men to build giant erections.....
BTW: Found my school ruler, looked at it and put it at the bottom of my bottom desk drawer.... A well writ piece of fun.
February 10th, 2023 19:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorely tempted to leave this one completely alone Soren, as it covered so adequately the urge by men to build giant erections.....
BTW: Found my school ruler, looked at it and put it at the bottom of my bottom desk drawer.... A well writ piece of fun.
February 10th, 2023 19:58
Nature\'s sign
Ok Waleed said:
I need a visit to that beach house with Brazilian women all around me
February 10th, 2023 15:57
Ok Waleed said:
I need a visit to that beach house with Brazilian women all around me
February 10th, 2023 15:57
To beat the band (Ode to Lewis Carroll)
L. B. Mek said:
i can\'t even begin.. lol
but i do love the fact that you ended it with earth, wind and fire
such a fun read, thank you!
February 10th, 2023 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
i can\'t even begin.. lol
but i do love the fact that you ended it with earth, wind and fire
such a fun read, thank you!
February 10th, 2023 05:17
Earthquake
L. B. Mek said:
the s sounds to your rhyme
mimic the crawl of a snake
if you read this out loud
which seamlessly highlights
impact of your very last words
\'...a living thing\'
(a subtle touch, really well thought-out
a great read, dear Poet)
February 10th, 2023 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
the s sounds to your rhyme
mimic the crawl of a snake
if you read this out loud
which seamlessly highlights
impact of your very last words
\'...a living thing\'
(a subtle touch, really well thought-out
a great read, dear Poet)
February 10th, 2023 05:13
To beat the band (Ode to Lewis Carroll)
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliantly written soren.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliantly written soren.
Andy
February 9th, 2023 02:44
To beat the band (Ode to Lewis Carroll)
Doggerel Dave said:
About two thirds, I think.
You are a serial lister aren\'t you? (Killer \'About Me\', BTW) and, I have to say, none the worse for that . Densely packed with memories, thoughts and questions for me. And a tribute too the amount of work which goes into your pieces.
Many thanks Soren.
February 9th, 2023 01:23
Doggerel Dave said:
About two thirds, I think.
You are a serial lister aren\'t you? (Killer \'About Me\', BTW) and, I have to say, none the worse for that . Densely packed with memories, thoughts and questions for me. And a tribute too the amount of work which goes into your pieces.
Many thanks Soren.
February 9th, 2023 01:23
Sirens
jarcher54 said:
LOL! Even gods don\'t stand a chance! A sweet subtle reference to Odysseus\' gods... as if they were as doomed as his men lured by the sirens!
February 8th, 2023 21:59
jarcher54 said:
LOL! Even gods don\'t stand a chance! A sweet subtle reference to Odysseus\' gods... as if they were as doomed as his men lured by the sirens!
February 8th, 2023 21:59
To beat the band (Ode to Lewis Carroll)
jarcher54 said:
OK, at first I was meh... but as I reread it, I decided it\'s damn clever!
February 8th, 2023 21:56
jarcher54 said:
OK, at first I was meh... but as I reread it, I decided it\'s damn clever!
February 8th, 2023 21:56
To beat the band (Ode to Lewis Carroll)
2781 said:
Your go\'na have to serve somebody, the lion sleeps tonight get ready. Good fun, thank you.
February 8th, 2023 21:48
2781 said:
Your go\'na have to serve somebody, the lion sleeps tonight get ready. Good fun, thank you.
February 8th, 2023 21:48
Earthquake
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren. Such power in our world.
Andy
February 7th, 2023 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words soren. Such power in our world.
Andy
February 7th, 2023 02:31
Earthquake
Ok Waleed said:
Earth quakes are scary… but you make it sound like a natural calm process. Great poem
February 6th, 2023 22:59
Ok Waleed said:
Earth quakes are scary… but you make it sound like a natural calm process. Great poem
February 6th, 2023 22:59
Earthquake
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you\'ve got that, Soren - an earthquake must be must be one of the most discombobulating of experiences - might even be the origin of that slightly overblown word......
February 6th, 2023 20:28
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you\'ve got that, Soren - an earthquake must be must be one of the most discombobulating of experiences - might even be the origin of that slightly overblown word......
February 6th, 2023 20:28
What I\'m not
L. B. Mek said:
I really like distilled realism
delivered with a spoonful of brevity
refreshing to read nuanced veracity
that hasn\'t been muddied..
reads like a drop of freshwater
clear, emotions
perceived/contemplated
through that microscope of Time..
A great shorty dear Poet
(so many relationships begin
with assumptions
of how the other person can
in time, become
the person we\'re actually looking for
when, its more likely
in waiting/manipulating
for that person to change
we\'re adding a toxic element
to both our lives and forsaking
what chance the relationship
ever had to succeed...)
February 6th, 2023 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
I really like distilled realism
delivered with a spoonful of brevity
refreshing to read nuanced veracity
that hasn\'t been muddied..
reads like a drop of freshwater
clear, emotions
perceived/contemplated
through that microscope of Time..
A great shorty dear Poet
(so many relationships begin
with assumptions
of how the other person can
in time, become
the person we\'re actually looking for
when, its more likely
in waiting/manipulating
for that person to change
we\'re adding a toxic element
to both our lives and forsaking
what chance the relationship
ever had to succeed...)
February 6th, 2023 04:10
What I\'m not
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure \'you are\' soren and will always be there to give happiness to all.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 03:16
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure \'you are\' soren and will always be there to give happiness to all.
Andy
February 6th, 2023 03:16
Prints
L. B. Mek said:
When reading your brilliant words
I couldn\'t help but be reminded
of Walt Whitman\'s poignant words:
\'I depart as air, I shake my white locks at the runaway sun,
I effuse my flesh in eddies, and drift it in lacy jags.
I bequeath myself to the dirt to grow from the grass I love,
If you want me again look for me under your boot-soles.\'
(from Song of myself, 52
https://poets.org/poem/song-myself-52
)
Just amazing
how favourably, your poetry
compares
to the work
of one of the greatest Poet\'s
dear Poet
just a privilege to read, thank you!
February 3rd, 2023 03:30
L. B. Mek said:
When reading your brilliant words
I couldn\'t help but be reminded
of Walt Whitman\'s poignant words:
\'I depart as air, I shake my white locks at the runaway sun,
I effuse my flesh in eddies, and drift it in lacy jags.
I bequeath myself to the dirt to grow from the grass I love,
If you want me again look for me under your boot-soles.\'
(from Song of myself, 52
https://poets.org/poem/song-myself-52
)
Just amazing
how favourably, your poetry
compares
to the work
of one of the greatest Poet\'s
dear Poet
just a privilege to read, thank you!
February 3rd, 2023 03:30
Prints
thinkerbell said:
Beautifully worded...you\'ve cemented your ideas very well 🥰
February 1st, 2023 09:06
thinkerbell said:
Beautifully worded...you\'ve cemented your ideas very well 🥰
February 1st, 2023 09:06
Prints
Doggerel Dave said:
To remind me of my DNA spread everywhere is salutary, Soren - I AM part of the universe. A piece which provoked thought in me.....
February 1st, 2023 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
To remind me of my DNA spread everywhere is salutary, Soren - I AM part of the universe. A piece which provoked thought in me.....
February 1st, 2023 07:06
Prints
arqios said:
Beautiful both in sentiment and articulation! Good one Soren!
February 1st, 2023 05:54
arqios said:
Beautiful both in sentiment and articulation! Good one Soren!
February 1st, 2023 05:54
Cat as trophy
sorenbarrett said:
Bella so glad you enjoyed it. It was more fun to write about years later than it was to go through at the time. Thanks again so much for the read.
January 31st, 2023 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
Bella so glad you enjoyed it. It was more fun to write about years later than it was to go through at the time. Thanks again so much for the read.
January 31st, 2023 17:07
Circular journey
sorenbarrett said:
Dear Bella you humble me with your more than gracious comments. My mind wonders onto these things at times and I have to put them to verse. I feel somewhat guilty in that I would like to read more of your poetry that I find so entertaining but I think I have read them all or at least the ones that are listed. If you have others please let me know where to find them they are so rich with life.
January 31st, 2023 15:57
sorenbarrett said:
Dear Bella you humble me with your more than gracious comments. My mind wonders onto these things at times and I have to put them to verse. I feel somewhat guilty in that I would like to read more of your poetry that I find so entertaining but I think I have read them all or at least the ones that are listed. If you have others please let me know where to find them they are so rich with life.
January 31st, 2023 15:57
Circular journey
Bella Shepard said:
This one takes my breath away. Who knew that physics could be poetry. Perhaps if physics were taught this way everyone would love it. You are a true wonder in all that you write, and I love working my way through all of it.
January 31st, 2023 14:56
Bella Shepard said:
This one takes my breath away. Who knew that physics could be poetry. Perhaps if physics were taught this way everyone would love it. You are a true wonder in all that you write, and I love working my way through all of it.
January 31st, 2023 14:56
Cat as trophy
Bella Shepard said:
This is a wonderful, engaging story with a punch line that is priceless. I always love a burst out loud at the end. And I love your rhyming patterns, each line flows so beautifully to the next. This is a fav!
January 31st, 2023 14:51
Bella Shepard said:
This is a wonderful, engaging story with a punch line that is priceless. I always love a burst out loud at the end. And I love your rhyming patterns, each line flows so beautifully to the next. This is a fav!
January 31st, 2023 14:51
Miss. Understanding/mind and soul agape
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this poem is such fun as you play with our extraordinary English language, I loved interpreting each line. This is homonym heaven!
January 31st, 2023 14:43
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet this poem is such fun as you play with our extraordinary English language, I loved interpreting each line. This is homonym heaven!
January 31st, 2023 14:43
Sirens
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is my life and always will be soren. Good words.
Andy
January 31st, 2023 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Music is my life and always will be soren. Good words.
Andy
January 31st, 2023 02:54
Sirens
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s not only the Devil who dances here, Soren - the whole piece dances along with pace and energy out of control, yet contained in disciplined lines Thoroughly enjoyed.
January 30th, 2023 07:32
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s not only the Devil who dances here, Soren - the whole piece dances along with pace and energy out of control, yet contained in disciplined lines Thoroughly enjoyed.
January 30th, 2023 07:32
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