Comments received on poems by sorenbarrett



Night\'s soliloquy
Thad Wilk said:

👏👏 clapping!
A wonderful treat to
read my friend!! 👍💯
Lovely rhyme, flow
and blend!! 👌
Great word choices
I must say!
Thanks for sharing
with us today!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 25th, 2024 21:55

Night\'s soliloquy
David Wakeling said:

This is brilliant. Night is a double-edged sword. It is a safe refuge but we have to wake soon.I love the ancient references. I like the rhyme.Well done

October 25th, 2024 19:44

Don\'t
RSM0812 said:

Some decent advice.

October 25th, 2024 10:42

Night\'s soliloquy
orchidee said:

Good write SB.

October 25th, 2024 10:16

Night\'s soliloquy
Tony36 said:

Excellent

October 25th, 2024 09:46

Night\'s soliloquy
Neville said:



Incredibly intoxicating sir sorenbarrett .. like sipping from a soporific chalice through a straw .. but even more dreamy .. Neville

October 25th, 2024 05:56

Church, through the eyes of a child
Tom Dylan said:

Very good, Soren. A fine write.

October 25th, 2024 04:49

Night\'s soliloquy
Teddy.15 said:

I could feel a bit of shakespeare in this and what with your wonderful imagery well, you brought it all to life. Going back in dreams must be a real treat. 🌹

October 25th, 2024 04:31

Church, through the eyes of a child
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write soren.

Andy

October 25th, 2024 01:09

Running late
Thad Wilk said:

😆 Haaahahahaaa!
A lucky day for you indeed! 😊
A real hoot, thanks for the read!!! 🤣
Best regards ✌️ Thad

October 24th, 2024 19:14

Time flows backward
River123 said:

A superb use of science and emotion perfectly expressed. Thanks for writing it 👍👍

October 24th, 2024 15:40

Church, through the eyes of a child
Thomas W Case said:

Superb. Excellent work.

October 24th, 2024 14:53

Church, through the eyes of a child
Neville said:


I imagine this is pretty much exactly as it is and was and will be for so many children .. I know it was for me .. although the old lady was called Mrs. Bull .. Neville

October 24th, 2024 12:41

Trick or treat
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Human cruelty on display. Disgusting every time. Thank you so much for writing this! It needs to be heard! Tragic this happened, but beautiful you were there to witness it and raise awareness through art. I often say, beware what you say or how you act, because you never know when you\'ll show up in a poem! LOL! A most excellent, heart-crushing, write. Thank you for sharing!

October 24th, 2024 12:39

Church, through the eyes of a child
Teddy.15 said:

LOL oh yes 🤣💞

October 24th, 2024 12:12

Cycles
RSM0812 said:

\"Leaving life behind its tide\". Mesmerizing.

October 24th, 2024 09:57

Church, through the eyes of a child
Doggerel Dave said:

Sunday School gone rong, I kid you not - good laugh which did bring back a memory. Many thanks, Soren.

October 24th, 2024 08:32

Bricks of hope
Demar Desu said:

What is the end of the rope

October 24th, 2024 08:11

Church, through the eyes of a child
Tony36 said:

Great write, made me chuckle

October 24th, 2024 07:50

Church, through the eyes of a child
Neilton said:

When I was younger I always thought church was so boring and I wanted to go home and sleep but after a few years I realized the true benefits! Beautiful work!!

October 24th, 2024 07:35

Church, through the eyes of a child
orchidee said:



October 24th, 2024 07:26

Church, through the eyes of a child
orchidee said:

Oh lol, fun write SB.

October 24th, 2024 07:26

Trick or treat
Tom Dylan said:

A fine write, Soren. Thanks for sharing.

October 24th, 2024 04:16

Trick or treat
Teddy.15 said:

Incredibly sad and powerful, having worked with children my whole life I always teach them it\'s ok to be different, but it\'s only normal that sometimes it\'s quite scary too, I felt this one deeply, a wonderful lesson in here for all. 🌹

October 24th, 2024 02:55

Trick or treat
Goldfinch60 said:

We all wear different masks depending on what we are doing in our lives soren.

Andy

October 24th, 2024 01:20

Trick or treat
NafisaSB said:

wow - a beautiful though heart rending poem. great work

October 23rd, 2024 23:56

Condensed hope
NafisaSB said:

powerful words conveying an intriguing message..
keep it coming

October 23rd, 2024 23:46

Nursery rhyme just horsing around
Thad Wilk said:

👏👏 clapping!
A really wacky and witty ditty
I gotta say!! 😳
I pray the funny farm
don\'t take you away!! 🙏
Thanks for the laughs today! 🤣
Best regards ✌️ Thad


October 23rd, 2024 15:53

Trick or treat
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful work. Felt this.

October 23rd, 2024 14:38

Condensed hope
Tom Dylan said:

A cracking write, Soren. Really enjoyed this.

October 23rd, 2024 09:42



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